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Blix
09-04-2006, 10:04 PM
any tips on what to change on the jinn? I like the j but the i is just like a line and the n's are really simple to idk def needs more flow and developing

Kept1
09-04-2006, 10:10 PM
well for starters having two of any letter to me is gonna make sumthin ugly, but the way its 2 Ns on yer shit, youre definatley gonna hafta work hard to get it lookin nice.
How bout try a diff name?
Isnt Jinn a rapper anyway? or wanna be rapper or sumthin?
I dunno bro
try to keep with an uppercae j and lower i or vice versa cause ji or JI isnt gonna be as easy as Ji or jI , kna mean?

Blix
09-04-2006, 11:15 PM
the rapper is Jin yeah hes some asian rapper, but anywas Jinn is an arabic term its like a spirit or somethin that comes out at night idk maybe i should change my name but i already changed it from zuse im thinkin about royal but its kinda long with difficult letters and that means startin a new handstyle I know i could use the the practice but idk any suggestions I think i might go with royal royalz or royal z

NICCSACC
09-05-2006, 12:23 AM
just my take on writing "JINN" take it however ya want to...
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1049.jpg

nerdx
09-05-2006, 12:25 AM
Originally posted by Blix@Sep 4 2006, 10:15 PM
the rapper is Jin yeah hes some asian rapper, but anywas Jinn is an arabic term its like a spirit or somethin that comes out at night idk maybe i should change my name but i already changed it from zuse im thinkin about royal but its kinda long with difficult letters and that means startin a new handstyle I know i could use the the practice but idk any suggestions I think i might go with royal royalz or royal z
i would suggest working with all letters hten using what your best at and making something out of it.
this is the best way, i feel, to do it.

NOMX
09-05-2006, 12:45 AM
ive never posted any of my tags so theres a first time for everything ;)
my logo thingy's:
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/580/200609040002lz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my logo and handie
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/3733/200609040007uq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9100/200609040006ghph5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^first roof spot! wooooo, sorry for the distance but i was too lazy to walk across the street

in_the_red
09-05-2006, 01:55 AM
Originally posted by SaBz@Sep 4 2006, 07:07 AM
that eska 1 is pretty good for a 1st attempt but it looks like u screwed up the k and i think u shud make the s more curvy thats just what i think i suck anyway so dont listen 2 me......


Thanks :) Any criticism is good. Yeah I've been doing the tail of the K longer now so that it sits under the A. Makes it more interesting I think. I've also been doing a heart at the end, the same size as the letters, which I think makes it look more feminine. I'll have to post another pic sometime.

Anyone else wanna crit my first attempt? It's eska, a couple of pages back.

NOMX
09-05-2006, 02:52 AM
its nice, clean, and simple. i would like to see it with the heart though. good to see some more girl writers, unless ur a guy who is trying to be a girl which i guess is cool too...

d_g
09-05-2006, 04:26 AM
Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 5 2006, 06:52 PM
...unless ur a guy who is trying to be a girl which i guess is cool too...
Haha cracked.

Yeah in_the_red is a girl, my girlfriend that I mentioned a bit back.

doomsayer
09-05-2006, 04:32 AM
really? ur gf's got a nice tag for a first go man props to her haha

hmmm, i was wondering why you randomly bumped her tag a while back, that expalins it, i thought u were just umpin it cause it was good

in_the_red
09-05-2006, 04:33 AM
Originally posted by d_g+Sep 5 2006, 03:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Sep 5 2006, 03:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NOMX@Sep 5 2006, 06:52 PM
...unless ur a guy who is trying to be a girl which i guess is cool too...
Haha cracked.

Yeah in_the_red is a girl, my girlfriend that I mentioned a bit back. [/b][/quote]
Yeeeeeeeep. Yeah it&#39;s cool to see girl writers, which is why I want my stuff to be more feminine... Gonna use pink markers and stuff haha :)

in_the_red
09-05-2006, 04:35 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 5 2006, 03:32 AM
really? ur gf&#39;s got a nice tag for a first go man props to her haha
Thanks&#33; Glad you like it.

alive
09-05-2006, 11:27 AM
yo

so this is directed to everyone just starting out with their tag.


flow is the way your letters
1.) work together (to create emotion and movement) (AKA style)
2.) look aestetically (also style)
3.) fit together (to block out white space)

as stupid as it might sound to you, graffiti is about bringing life to the letters. i can almost garuntee that if you ask a good writer what their or someone elses letters are doing, they can tell you. as a writer you bring the plain letter of your keyboard, to emotion, and movement.

ex. who here has seen State Your Name? skuff talks about his throw and comments how his "S" is "leaning back and kicking."

every begining writer (myself included when i started&#33;) doesnt yet know how to add feeling, motion or emotion (the first part of flow.) but he (or she) feels the need to make the letters signifigantly different from normal letters, so he elliminates all curves at angles and uses hard angles. this is counterproductive, and its amazing how EVERYONE does this at first. u want curves, without out them, it looks harsh to the eye.



i hope that helped someone
peace.

NICCSACC
09-05-2006, 02:54 PM
that skuf kid said the same thing inthe getting up dvd. he must love that story&#33;&#33;

clevername
09-05-2006, 05:18 PM
Originally posted by clevername+Sep 3 2006, 10:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (clevername @ Sep 3 2006, 10:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-clevername@Sep 2 2006, 06:47 PM
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/1800/tagbj6.png A collab of my crappy tags. Says Rasi.
[/b][/quote]
bump.

most_wanted
09-05-2006, 07:35 PM
Hey everyone what name sounds better ION or STUN??????????????????
ive been hitting up both at one time
ive stop hitting up for like a week trying to decide now. didnt think it was going to be this hard..

shifty!
09-05-2006, 07:53 PM
your own choice, wich name do you like writing more?

Fosale!
09-05-2006, 07:54 PM
dont write ion, ioni will crush you.

NOMX
09-06-2006, 02:49 AM
stun is the gayest name next to craze

beefgerky
09-06-2006, 03:30 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 5 2006, 06:54 PM
dont write ion, ioni will crush you.
wordddddddddddddddddddddd.

d_g
09-06-2006, 07:08 AM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2553/560a0411sf6.jpg

Meh.

cord
09-06-2006, 07:27 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 5 2006, 11:54 PM
dont write ion, ioni will crush you.
yeah watch out he will &#39;&#39;crush&#39;&#39; you with his magic powers through the internet&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

:ph34r:

nice tag d g

yesrejwen
09-06-2006, 12:41 PM
is it supposed to say drest?

whoarethereal evil
09-06-2006, 01:07 PM
round of applause 4 the guy tht can read <_<


bt yeah thts pretty tasty dg

yesrejwen
09-06-2006, 03:10 PM
nah cause like the t could be mistaken a j..i was just gonna suggest not makin it go around from the bottom but whatever haha

other than that, i like it

war terror
09-06-2006, 03:29 PM
d_G nice work so far... it loosks decent

FEN the HEN
09-06-2006, 03:57 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture072.jpg

i just went out and busted this one randomly for some reason, i dont know, i was pretty high.....

NICCSACC
09-06-2006, 04:13 PM
that hoe aint even busting grapes haha

Sluts_r_us
09-06-2006, 04:14 PM
the crown has to go...work on the n, doesnt look like it flows wit the other letters...

cord
09-06-2006, 04:26 PM
ditch the crown and the number one

FEN the HEN
09-06-2006, 05:04 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture074.jpg

just did these ones, just using up mostly empty cans

Fosale!
09-06-2006, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky+Sep 6 2006, 02:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ Sep 6 2006, 02:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Sep 5 2006, 06:54 PM
dont write ion, ioni will crush you.
wordddddddddddddddddddddd. [/b][/quote]
heh, had to stick up for my favorite peoples on this crappy forum

Feliks
09-06-2006, 06:06 PM
Eska is a fem graffer?

Fosale!
09-06-2006, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Sep 4 2006, 03:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Sep 4 2006, 03:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 4 2006, 12:32 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Sep 1 2006, 01:06 PM
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/8145/aee40fa3xh4.jpg
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/790/sesw1.jpg
bumpskies for critsadoodles.
bumpppp critsss [/b][/quote]
May I please have a little feedback, for once.

Sorry to annoy for anyone that gets pissed at this.

fitzy5814
09-06-2006, 06:58 PM
why? I just changed my name because someone ratted me out and im not gunna change it again

d_g
09-06-2006, 07:02 PM
Originally posted by Feliks@Sep 7 2006, 10:06 AM
Eska is a fem graffer?
Yup, she&#39;s my girlfriend.

Thanks for the crits everyone.

clevername
09-06-2006, 07:52 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8987/therefg1.png
Am I going in the right direction?

Flash_One
09-06-2006, 08:12 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8702/1001511wy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Thats my current tag but i gotta work on it badly.

Flash_One
09-06-2006, 08:15 PM
And can some of u give me some feed back please thx.

graffer that tags
09-06-2006, 08:32 PM
looks like it would take a long time to do, you should simplify it, do that until you can do it fast and good, then add more things (if it makes it look better) because you dont have to have a super complicated tag. A lot of the time the most simple tags look the best.

FEN the HEN
09-06-2006, 08:41 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Sep 6 2006, 04:04 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture074.jpg

just did these ones, just using up mostly empty cans
feedback?

561nightartist
09-06-2006, 08:51 PM
hey fitzy5814, no affense bro but that hurts my eyes..lol.... dude u need so much practice its not even funny... lose the squiggley shit in the S, your trying to be way to complicated... if thats a u thats fine... but try and make it all even.. i dont know what the third letter is... but take the letters on your keyboard..SUKE.. and pratice trying to make them bubble letters, or straight letter and im only gessing thats what it says ,, start of easy and u will come up with your own style.. good luck, stay safe, and practice befor u pick up a can otherwise u will be hated... peace

Flash_One
09-06-2006, 09:10 PM
Originally posted by graffer that tags@Sep 6 2006, 07:32 PM
looks like it would take a long time to do, you should simplify it, do that until you can do it fast and good, then add more things (if it makes it look better) because you dont have to have a super complicated tag. A lot of the time the most simple tags look the best.
That tag took 10 seconds.

Flash_One
09-06-2006, 09:12 PM
Originally posted by graffer that tags@Sep 6 2006, 07:32 PM
looks like it would take a long time to do, you should simplify it, do that until you can do it fast and good, then add more things (if it makes it look better) because you dont have to have a super complicated tag. A lot of the time the most simple tags look the best.
Thx for the feedback man.

gotmiak
09-07-2006, 12:10 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4664/iwishihadflow1hh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

went simple, switched up the i with an e, crits anyone?

NICCSACC
09-07-2006, 12:13 AM
exagerate something in it because it seriously dosent even look remotely like any sort of tag.
it looks like a handwriting hybrid.

gotmiak
09-07-2006, 12:50 AM
yea im starting from nothing since apperantly i pretty much suck

edit** I did one with this simple structure but with my more exaggerated handstyle, i was afraid to post that one first but ill do it tommorow.

seazr
09-07-2006, 07:25 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5076/imga0757lf6.jpg
(SEaZR)

Feedback?

ados
09-07-2006, 10:15 AM
Originally posted by ados+Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ados@Sep 2 2006, 03:17 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/3236/dsc05451cb4.jpg
tcK... [/b][/quote]
TCKBANDITS

beefgerky
09-07-2006, 10:39 AM
that better not say REYES...

Originally posted by beefgerky@Sep 1 2006, 03:13 PM
last night bombing run got sand blasted so fast, these are all i could scrounge..with some random stickers and streakers mixed in.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap265.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap263.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap262.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap261.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap260.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap258.jpg
---
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap255.jpg
can u see it? haha
bwompz

FEN the HEN
09-07-2006, 10:55 AM
no it says KEYES, why you keep putting that int the toy forums when you didnt even do it?

beefgerky
09-07-2006, 01:00 PM
his crew i guess...i tihnk hes pointing out the TCK fliar on top, but its hardly toy..

trashhh
09-07-2006, 02:31 PM
Originally posted by Flash_One+Sep 6 2006, 08:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Flash_One @ Sep 6 2006, 08:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-graffer that tags@Sep 6 2006, 07:32 PM
looks like it would take a long time to do, you should simplify it, do that until you can do it fast and good, then add more things (if it makes it look better) because you dont have to have a super complicated tag. A lot of the time the most simple tags look the best.
That tag took 10 seconds. [/b][/quote]
10 secs is a long time for a tag.. mine takes about 3 - 4

Fosale!
09-07-2006, 04:22 PM
old.drunk stuffs, I had like 4 others but they were too drippy and couldnt read em so i didnt feel like wasting &#036;1 on pix messaging.
w.e
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/762/dizzunkbp3.jpg

T_R_O_N
09-07-2006, 06:26 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/1144100275_ORIG.jpg

yeah i know there are a couple sames and such but it was just for practice.

most_wanted
09-07-2006, 06:36 PM
i think theres a whole bunch of people that hit up SAME 1 :blink:

C3ZR ONE
09-07-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by seazr@Sep 7 2006, 06:25 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5076/imga0757lf6.jpg
(SEaZR)

Feedback?
hehe.. Cute.. Another little (caesar) hybrid. "Hey little fella." *pats head*

The E&#39;s no good, the A&#39;s no good, and the R isn&#39;t really connected to the rest of the tag. The Z is very nice tho. Keep workin at it. ;)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/346/im000231ky0.jpg

most_wanted
09-07-2006, 06:41 PM
i dont think this is important to anybody but when i went to my cousins house in L.A. there was like a graffiti explosion in their town or something. i seen all these toy bombs up on billboards and pretty much everywhere and they all sucked like crazy except like 1 guy named freez

C3ZR ONE
09-07-2006, 06:46 PM
Conversation goes in toy story or toy chat. Not toy tags thread... Thanks.

T_R_O_N
09-07-2006, 06:57 PM
im going to guess most that you did not read what i said, anyway....

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/1232751584_ORIG.jpg

trying our a new marker

clevername
09-07-2006, 07:43 PM
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/8709/tagji3.png Help. I don&#39;t know how to make it better. Underline it? Arrows? Just tell me what you think would go good with it.

RollTRS
09-07-2006, 08:38 PM
Just did this with the fat end of a prisma, and outlined it.

Crits?

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9493/picture21tv0.png

d_g
09-07-2006, 08:49 PM
Code right?

I think you need to define your letters just a little a more.

RollTRS
09-07-2006, 08:51 PM
I&#39;d agree with that. I think the "D" looks too much like an "A" often.

bleck
09-07-2006, 09:53 PM
Code? It looked like "Colr" too me.
I&#39;d agree with defining your letters more. Make the o and d there own letters. As far as your style, I think it&#39;s pretty good. Just try a separate d. Make it capital if you have to, just experiment with writing it different ways, to get all your letters in.
Oh, and that&#39;s supposed to be an e on the end? Looks like an r to me. You do know what an e looks like right? And yes, I know the swoop is supposed to be the bottom of the e, but it&#39;s way to far out. If you want to keep that, bring it up more, becuase It looks like an attempted underline.

C3ZR ONE
09-07-2006, 09:59 PM
I&#39;m starting to think twice about "defining letters". I was benching frieghts today, and do you know how many fresh ass tags are out there that are almost comepletely illegible? I think it&#39;s good to have definition, but BETTER to have flow, and that Code tag has nice flow. I might even add a bit to it.. a doo dad or add on. Just a suggestion. Mybe an exclamation point.

bleck
09-07-2006, 10:02 PM
I have to disagree there. Flow is a huge part of being a good writer, but the challenge is to make it flow, spelling out thre tag completely. Taking short cuts to improve your flow isn&#39;t what being a good writer is. A good writer makes there tag, with all of the letters, flow.

C3ZR ONE
09-07-2006, 10:10 PM
Originally posted by bleck@Sep 7 2006, 09:02 PM
I have to disagree there. Flow is a huge part of being a good writer, but the challenge is to make it flow, spelling out thre tag completely. Taking short cuts to improve your flow isn&#39;t what being a good writer is. A good writer makes there tag, with all of the letters, flow.
I don&#39;t get it. Where did I say to short cut particular letters? His overall tag flows. And I don&#39;t think undefined letters are nessecarilly shortcutting.

d_g
09-07-2006, 10:20 PM
To me when the letters aren&#39;t definable it becomes more of a symbol than a word. Like someone on here said before using a symbol stops people talking about you.

I&#39;m not saying I don&#39;t like tags that are hard to read just personally I prefer ones that are readable.

Blix
09-07-2006, 10:37 PM
yeah but a tag its ur symbol&#33; crazy ass wildstyles arent always easy to read either

nerdx
09-07-2006, 11:38 PM
cezar is right, you looks at really nice hadsyles and they are legible but not at quick glance.
but a tag is ment for ups if someone sees the same weird ass writing (symbols to some)
over and over again, obviously they are from the same person.

Ume
09-08-2006, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Sep 6 2006, 08:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN &#064; Sep 6 2006, 08:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-FEN the HEN@Sep 6 2006, 04:04 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture074.jpg

just did these ones, just using up mostly empty cans
feedback?[/b][/quote]
i actually really like the big black one, it&#39;s easy to read, yet has some style, keep doing that one.

NICCSACC
09-08-2006, 12:54 AM
yeah the big one is fuckin dope.

cHRoniC
09-08-2006, 01:03 AM
the big one is so shitty




in opposite land

RollTRS
09-08-2006, 03:48 AM
I&#39;m just gonna keep movin&#39; forward, changing as I go, as always.

ARMAwonR
09-08-2006, 04:11 AM
Originally posted by bleck@Sep 7 2006, 08:53 PM
Code? It looked like "Colr" too me.

Just try a separate d. Make it capital if you have to
... i dont see an &#39;r&#39; in that &#39;e&#39; at all [unless you are speaking lowercase]

and that is a capital &#39;d&#39; ...
the &#39;o&#39;s completely separate if you look

[no beef tho]

but jeah ... i like that tag ...
its nice and balanced

doomsayer
09-08-2006, 05:59 AM
went bombing tonight, strange how when im doin this im kinda nervous, it makes me write it out faster and screw up the letters. anyways here:

Paint was runnin out in this can
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/6a8605de.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/73ca141f.jpg

this cement was so hard to write on with a marker, i would of dun it i9n paint but the can was empty by this time:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/d7450edb.jpg

RollTRS
09-08-2006, 06:47 AM
Originally posted by ARMAwonR+Sep 8 2006, 03:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ARMAwonR &#064; Sep 8 2006, 03:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bleck@Sep 7 2006, 08:53 PM
Code? It looked like "Colr" too me.

Just try a separate d. Make it capital if you have to
... i dont see an &#39;r&#39; in that &#39;e&#39; at all [unless you are speaking lowercase]

and that is a capital &#39;d&#39; ...
the &#39;o&#39;s completely separate if you look

[no beef tho]

but jeah ... i like that tag ...
its nice and balanced [/b][/quote]
Thanks, man&#33;

And Doomsayer, I like the 2nd one the best, but still lookin&#39; fresh.

doomsayer
09-08-2006, 06:51 AM
yah, the second one was done on metal, the others were crap cause 1. they were on cement and the marker didnt move to well and 2. the paint was runnin out in the can. but the 2nd one, the only trouble i had was that i was rushing ans sort of hurried it.

Flash_One
09-08-2006, 07:13 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 7 2006, 11:54 PM
yeah the big one is fuckin dope.
Are you kidding me? :huh:

cord
09-08-2006, 09:27 PM
hey truth those black tags are lookin pretty decent ;)

ARMAwonR
09-08-2006, 09:32 PM
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid214/p27891aa50421479dd0273f820d15d855/ed121eae.jpg

cord
09-08-2006, 09:39 PM
lose the big unneccessary circle in the middle and the extension on the bottom left of the R.

in fact lose all the circles

shifty!
09-08-2006, 10:02 PM
yeh doomsayer your tags on paper are deffintitly better, but i know what you mean, it never happens to me when i do a tag, but wait until you do a fill-in in a heaty spot, but you just need to chill out and dont worry about anything, then it will turn out better, like when i rack i get wicked butterflys in my stomach, but then the more you do it less nervous you are so just keep doin it, and i wouldnt try useing markers on concrete, thats what streakers are for...but your tag is good overall...

ARMAwonR
09-08-2006, 10:05 PM
thank you sir for your critiques ... i shall take them to heart [nh]

most_wanted
09-08-2006, 11:50 PM
i know i should try to make this more complicated but i dont know where to start.
its just regular writing

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n11/most_wanted_01/minus.jpg

doomsayer
09-09-2006, 12:41 AM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Sep 8 2006, 09:02 PM
yeh doomsayer your tags on paper are deffintitly better, but i know what you mean, it never happens to me when i do a tag, but wait until you do a fill-in in a heaty spot, but you just need to chill out and dont worry about anything, then it will turn out better, like when i rack i get wicked butterflys in my stomach, but then the more you do it less nervous you are so just keep doin it, and i wouldnt try useing markers on concrete, thats what streakers are for...but your tag is good overall...
yeah i was gunna use paint for that but it ran out :lol: i think i could chill when doin it but there was all these random little kids near me and i was trying to do it quick so they didnt see me, i seriously dont no what these kids where doin out at that time of night, they were like 10,11 yeah it made me kinda rush everything, next time ill try to chill more...

Stevie
09-09-2006, 01:04 AM
doomsayer do you go on skateperception.. ? cause i&#39;ve seen a guy on the site that writes under the name truth

doomsayer
09-09-2006, 01:06 AM
skateperception.... nah never been on there, lemme check it out though. whats his username?

2KoS
09-09-2006, 06:38 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Sep 7 2006, 09:20 PM
To me when the letters aren&#39;t definable it becomes more of a symbol than a word. Like someone on here said before using a symbol stops people talking about you.
Well, people can start talking about you when they find your throws or pieces with a handy next to it or something.

d_g
09-09-2006, 07:40 AM
I guess it depends who you&#39;re trying to appeal to - the general public or just taggers.

alive
09-09-2006, 12:25 PM
dont ever fuckin say the word "taggers" again. its writers, or artists

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02672.jpg
fuckin around in my blackbook with a marker i made


suggestions?
peace

+HyBriD+
09-09-2006, 12:32 PM
nice, looks like a decent marker man..

cap j
09-09-2006, 01:07 PM
heyy im pretty new 2 this only been doin it 4 like a week or 2
but here ya go tell me wat u think
http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/7475/capwc1.jpg

alive
09-09-2006, 01:21 PM
wrong thread go to the blackbook thread for that.
then ill help u out

NICCSACC
09-09-2006, 01:31 PM
i think dude kinda fucked up his book with all that airbrush splatter shit and weak designs. save your expensive good book and use a 10cent notebook like i do. itll save you money in the long run cuz youll prolly want to run out and cop a new book soon after you destroy this one. just my thoughts, but what do i know...

aces
09-09-2006, 01:37 PM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/2473/picture008oa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MAC
I know I suck at handy&#39;s but can I get some crits?

nerdx
09-09-2006, 01:39 PM
your m looks like a n, keep workin on it.

alive
09-09-2006, 01:41 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 9 2006, 12:31 PM
i think dude kinda fucked up his book with all that airbrush splatter shit and weak designs. save your expensive good book and use a 10cent notebook like i do. itll save you money in the long run cuz youll prolly want to run out and cop a new book soon after you destroy this one. just my thoughts, but what do i know...
haha. ive had this book for a year afraid to do what you just said i did. finally yesterday morning i decided fuck it i dont care anymore and i started in. i can pick em up for 5 bucks a piece, which isnt so bad, as long as i dont use it wastefully, fill up all the space.

id appriciate some advice though.


peace.

NICCSACC
09-09-2006, 02:05 PM
as long as you like it fuck the world.

Detoxication
09-09-2006, 03:22 PM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8313/resonrealka6.jpg
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5953/resonreal2vy2.jpg

trashhh
09-09-2006, 04:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/tags/STA40531.jpg

DRIIIIIPPSSTTEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ

NICCSACC
09-09-2006, 04:29 PM
haha those are some nasty lookin drips, broham.

wish we had those sign things round here...

Blix
09-09-2006, 06:15 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 9 2006, 12:37 PM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/2473/picture008oa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MAC
I know I suck at handy&#39;s but can I get some crits?
there pretty famous graffiti artist named mac just thought id let ya know

SaneKid
09-09-2006, 06:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v60/JoeyAdamo/SameKid.jpg

Looking for something new, fucked up the M look like an N so it reads Sane.

Crits?

d_g
09-09-2006, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by alive@Sep 10 2006, 04:25 AM
dont ever fuckin say the word "taggers" again.

Or?

doomsayer
09-09-2006, 06:58 PM
i can get blackbooks fro 2 bucks from this asian shop, i just found one yesterday cause lately ive just been usin paper from the rpinter but i sort of wanted to document my stuff.

in_the_red
09-09-2006, 07:25 PM
Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 5 2006, 01:52 AM
its nice, clean, and simple. i would like to see it with the heart though.
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4890/560a0407kz1.jpg

Yeah, the e isn&#39;t very good on that one.

doomsayer
09-09-2006, 08:11 PM
i like the K on that one, try making the top bit of the K more defined so it sort of goes to the right more. the little pointy outy bit on the side of the K make it stick out more, ahhhh i suck at explaining things...

RepUrSet
09-09-2006, 10:39 PM
^^
lol


i THINK what he means, if not then fuk em :P cuz this is waht i think u shud change, warp the top line of the k a bit, so that its not SO basic, but dont over do it

NOA3p
09-09-2006, 10:39 PM
to who was writing mac,

get a more suitable name.

and keep writing on it...

alive
09-10-2006, 11:40 AM
Originally posted by alive@Sep 9 2006, 11:25 AM
dont ever fuckin say the word "taggers" again. its writers, or artists

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02672.jpg
fuckin around in my blackbook with a marker i made


suggestions?
peace
bump
any advice?

myl
09-10-2006, 11:45 AM
i like that...looks like a nice marker too

aces
09-10-2006, 12:11 PM
Originally posted by NOA3p@Sep 9 2006, 10:39 PM
to who was writing mac,

get a more suitable name.

and keep writing on it...
What do you mean get a more suitable name?

alive
09-10-2006, 12:38 PM
he means, like i said in the other thread. its played played played.
sounds dumb

sorry

Detoxication
09-10-2006, 12:50 PM
Originally posted by Detoxication@Sep 9 2006, 02:22 PM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8313/resonrealka6.jpg
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5953/resonreal2vy2.jpg
crits

SaneKid
09-10-2006, 01:16 PM
Get rid of the random arrows and the halo thingy, try to make it look not so basic.

nerdx
09-10-2006, 02:01 PM
reason are you from philly?
if not then loose the top one.
keep skething before you put that stuff on walls

alive
09-10-2006, 02:33 PM
why cant he have a philly hand? i like it

nerdx
09-10-2006, 02:36 PM
cause i have never seen a philly style played off by someone who isnt from philly
that shit is wack.

aces
09-10-2006, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by alive@Sep 10 2006, 12:38 PM
he means, like i said in the other thread. its played played played.
sounds dumb

sorry
Alright I&#39;ll work something else out.

myl
09-10-2006, 03:13 PM
most philly handies are ugly as hell

trac
09-10-2006, 04:42 PM
ther it ishttp://img69.imageshack.us/img69/18/dwnarrowan7.gifany crits

aces
09-10-2006, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 10 2006, 03:13 PM
most philly handies are ugly as hell
If they&#39;re done right they look sick though.

whoarethereal evil
09-10-2006, 05:00 PM
fuckin hell sum philly handies are fire

an trac needs work

nerdx
09-10-2006, 05:46 PM
philly style is its own.
someone from the outside just fucks it up

myl
09-10-2006, 06:03 PM
true

Venom.
09-10-2006, 08:53 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1656/draintag1oc4.jpg
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3325/draintag2ca0.jpg
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7475/draintag3ll5.jpg

Crits?

nerdx
09-10-2006, 09:05 PM
train brain or pain

Venom.
09-10-2006, 09:08 PM
Drain :P

Nosypainter
09-10-2006, 09:13 PM
Originally posted by Venom.@Sep 10 2006, 08:08 PM
Drain :P
if you would of usd trane i would of shott you but its not ot bad

Venom.
09-10-2006, 09:22 PM
If I used trane I would have shot myself.

Nosypainter
09-10-2006, 09:26 PM
indeed lol

SaneKid
09-10-2006, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by Venom.@Sep 10 2006, 07:53 PM

Crits?
Your tag isn&#39;t very consistant, not really my style either, but keep working on it.

C3ZR ONE
09-11-2006, 12:48 AM
Originally posted by Venom.@Sep 10 2006, 07:53 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1656/draintag1oc4.jpg
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3325/draintag2ca0.jpg
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7475/draintag3ll5.jpg

Crits?
No beef intended homie, but that is a REALLY bad handstyle...
Go simple for a while, write it as basic as you can just to practice what the general flow of the letters are and space the shit out... It&#39;s all piled up into a mess of lines.
And don&#39;t write in public till you can actually write. That will embarrass you in a couple months... ;)

in_the_red
09-11-2006, 01:02 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 9 2006, 07:11 PM
i like the K on that one, try making the top bit of the K more defined so it sort of goes to the right more. the little pointy outy bit on the side of the K make it stick out more, ahhhh i suck at explaining things...
Cheers, point taken. Yeah I think I might change my name slightly, add a T, &#39;cause I like them and it gives me more to work with. I&#39;ll post another photo in a few days.

Venom.
09-11-2006, 01:06 AM
@c3zr: I&#39;ve tried spacing them out more and it just looks even worse... so I don&#39;t know what to do really.. I guess I&#39;ll just drop that handie completely

C3ZR ONE
09-11-2006, 01:24 AM
It&#39;s really not a matter of the letters you&#39;re using. It&#39;s just a matter of inexperience with handys. Practice alot, and eventually, you can rock nearly any word. Just keep practicing, and get some chisel tips. ;) You&#39;ll get it.

mine
09-11-2006, 02:27 AM
hey guys i iz new to this graff business so i was wondering is uz could give me some pointers i made myself a tag not sure if its any good or not so it would b mad if u could tel me wat u think bout my style n word n anythn else thx
mine*
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j161/jasonmerten/Picture019.jpg

d_g
09-11-2006, 02:39 AM
It&#39;s pretty good considering you&#39;re new.

The &#39;E&#39; doesn&#39;t really seem to fit with the rest of the letters though.

mine
09-11-2006, 03:39 AM
yeh i was thinkin the same thing i mucked round wid it about n got a real rough dodgy ides whats u think of it
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j161/jasonmerten/Picture.jpg

d_g
09-11-2006, 05:03 AM
Not too bad.

Try writing it a bit faster and try adding a little flow to it. Also move your arm when you write it not just your wrist.

beefgerky
09-11-2006, 06:56 AM
mine, i see alot of potential, stay simple, make a throwup, and just to let u know, mine is a very common name, but do your thangg.

Venom.
09-11-2006, 09:50 AM
Hey c3zr.. can you write a drain tag? Because I have no idea how to make a D without it extending outward like it did in my handy.

SaneKid
09-11-2006, 09:52 AM
Mine, alot of potential with that tag but needs more flow and forget the quotation marks.

whoarethereal evil
09-11-2006, 04:14 PM
mine man i like the first e its hot

whoarethereal evil
09-11-2006, 04:22 PM
an the geez hu writes drain


i had a go an my main ability it seems is 2 make tags flow which is a key element i rnt tht fanc with addons n shit bt i cn make em flow an drain has noooo flow tht i cn find worth posting i was gona post 1 i did bt i mean its not alot better than urs tbh different name?

doomsayer
09-11-2006, 05:51 PM
yo practicin my handsty;e, any crits???

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/handstylesep12.jpg

FEN the HEN
09-11-2006, 06:53 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture075.jpg

ps. doomsayer that top one is looking sick

NICCSACC
09-11-2006, 06:55 PM
fen, you got a dope fuckin tag. keep that shit up.

Venom.
09-11-2006, 08:46 PM
I think I cleaned up my tag a bit. Yes, I know it&#39;s not chisel tip and yes, I know it&#39;s running out of ink.

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/468/draintagbb1mx3.jpg

dibz
09-11-2006, 08:54 PM
crits
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_2880.jpg
drain that one looks def. better then the first one. more legible

riddleboxxmcl
09-11-2006, 08:55 PM
take away the bottum line that is cunnected to the N

clockworkfuse
09-11-2006, 09:02 PM
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/clockworkfuse123/Picture004.jpg

crits?

krysnum1
09-11-2006, 09:07 PM
JK. First time I seen gang graffiti on this site.

beke
09-11-2006, 10:40 PM
unless he isnt writin folk as in the gang style.... and that f is wack take out the like spinal bump think and the rest of the letters just look like regular letter. oh yea, dont put your L on an angle like that

Venom.
09-11-2006, 10:54 PM
Originally posted by Venom.@Sep 11 2006, 07:46 PM
I think I cleaned up my tag a bit. Yes, I know it&#39;s not chisel tip and yes, I know it&#39;s running out of ink.

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/468/draintagbb1mx3.jpg
any more crits?

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 12:22 AM
do it in a chisel tip it may look alright...

tags: some old, some recent, the last one is old, i thinked it got buffed or sumthing cause it was puprple b4...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/tagstagstags.jpg

sorry about the craapy pic for the second, some randomds wehere staring at me it was intimidatiing.

HEIST
09-12-2006, 02:18 AM
Ok so im tryin to get this shit to flow but all my tags are just lookin like shit i really like the name KOZE but again i cant get it to flow is it called a handstyle exchange??? ne ways if someone can help me out thatd be cool

SeKz
09-12-2006, 02:39 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 11 2006, 11:22 PM
do it in a chisel tip it may look alright...

tags: some old, some recent, the last one is old, i thinked it got buffed or sumthing cause it was puprple b4...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/tagstagstags.jpg

sorry about the craapy pic for the second, some randomds wehere staring at me it was intimidatiing.
holy shit that blue one says boo2

http://www.vandalsquad.com/artistView.php?...20&view=profile (http://www.vandalsquad.com/artistView.php?artist_id=320&view=profile)

he is like king on this online shit

maybe im right maybe its not him.

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 02:48 AM
I think boo2 and the guy that writes at my area are different people. First I think the guy in my area is Booz cause he writes it Bewz sometimes too. He has done it EVERYWHERE in so many places around here. I&#39;m in Australia. I highly doubt it&#39;s him because the booz that writes here is nowhere near as good as boo2 on that online thing.

SeKz
09-12-2006, 03:04 AM
true, its clear it says booz to me now, that z looks like a 2 though where in australia are ya bro?

d_g
09-12-2006, 03:13 AM
Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 12 2006, 07:04 PM
true, its clear it says booz to me now, that z looks like a 2 though where is australia bro?
Stay in school brova :P

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/c/cd/AustraliaWorldMap.png/800px-AustraliaWorldMap.png

SeKz
09-12-2006, 03:31 AM
Originally posted by d_g+Sep 12 2006, 02:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Sep 12 2006, 02:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SeKz@Sep 12 2006, 07:04 PM
true, its clear it says booz to me now, that z looks like a 2 though where is australia bro?
Stay in school brova :P

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/c/cd/AustraliaWorldMap.png/800px-AustraliaWorldMap.png [/b][/quote]
HAHAH typo sorry&#33; i should know where it is, i kinda live there. :P

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 03:33 AM
Haha, what a funny typo. NSW, where you from?

SeKz
09-12-2006, 03:36 AM
Brissy mate some sick shit up here

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 03:48 AM
No Kidding&#33; Melbs is pretty awesome too. That&#39;s pretty cool, I didn&#39;t know of many Aussie members here. I&#39;m from the Central Coast.

mine
09-12-2006, 04:10 AM
i an aussie
comments plz
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j161/jasonmerten/Picture5.jpg

d_g
09-12-2006, 04:14 AM
Fuck all you Australian bastards, I&#39;m from New Zealand :P

Haha, nah, all good boys.

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 04:16 AM
mine that is looking pretty nice lose the V or w/e at the end, where bouts from AUS u from?

mine
09-12-2006, 04:27 AM
in qld a shitty lil place calld toowoomba

d_g
09-12-2006, 04:32 AM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2333/handy1yy5.jpg

Letters don&#39;t go all that well together and the &#39;T&#39; is too far from the rest of the tag.

Any crits?

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 05:01 AM
hell yea that looks sick man nice job&#33;&#33;&#33; the DRE go together really well, then the s T and sorta dont fit it... but man its lookin really good&#33;

in_the_red
09-12-2006, 05:26 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Sep 12 2006, 03:32 AM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2333/handy1yy5.jpg

Letters don&#39;t go all that well together and the &#39;T&#39; is too far from the rest of the tag.

Any crits?
The space below the S looks a bit strange. It&#39;s like a big gap in the tag. But the whole thing looks mean.

P.S. I love you.

SeKz
09-12-2006, 07:25 AM
nah fuck the gap or whatever that shit is dope as. maybe forget the extension on the s to the t though, that might just neaten it up. flows well

d_g
09-12-2006, 07:28 AM
Cheers.

I&#39;m getting low as fuck on ink. But I&#39;ll practice some more tomorrow.

doomsayer
09-12-2006, 07:29 AM
i really like the circle around the words tho, yeah just work on it but the DRE looks sick i like the circle, but idno, keep workin on it

SeKz
09-12-2006, 07:47 AM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/3382/image001kn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my handstyle pretty simple

d_g
09-12-2006, 07:49 AM
Nice, I think the &#39;K&#39; needs to have a little more curve in it somewhere to match the rest of the letters.

nerdx
09-12-2006, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Sep 12 2006, 03:32 AM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2333/handy1yy5.jpg

Letters don&#39;t go all that well together and the &#39;T&#39; is too far from the rest of the tag.

Any crits?
make the E have a point at the top just like the d

Nosypainter
09-12-2006, 02:08 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Sep 10 2006, 11:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Sep 10 2006, 11:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Venom.@Sep 10 2006, 07:53 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1656/draintag1oc4.jpg
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3325/draintag2ca0.jpg
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7475/draintag3ll5.jpg

Crits?
No beef intended homie, but that is a REALLY bad handstyle...
Go simple for a while, write it as basic as you can just to practice what the general flow of the letters are and space the shit out... It&#39;s all piled up into a mess of lines.
And don&#39;t write in public till you can actually write. That will embarrass you in a couple months... ;) [/b][/quote]
yeah keep it simple its not to bad but it really looks like tibberish

in_the_red
09-12-2006, 03:20 PM
Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 12 2006, 06:47 AM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/3382/image001kn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my handstyle pretty simple
I like how the two outer letters kind of mirror each other, looks a little symmetrical. But the K looks like an R.

wordzcantexpress
09-12-2006, 05:06 PM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/3637/blackbook007yh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any crits?

Nosypainter
09-12-2006, 06:00 PM
Originally posted by wordzcantexpress@Sep 12 2006, 04:06 PM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/3637/blackbook007yh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any crits?
o.0.... i dont like it at all sorry its to toyish

wordzcantexpress
09-12-2006, 06:40 PM
ok but what kind of stuff should I do to make it better?

SaneKid
09-12-2006, 06:41 PM
Don&#39;t make the letters so basic, add some flow.

Also get rid of the X&#39;s

magic nyc
09-12-2006, 07:17 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Sep 12 2006, 06:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Sep 12 2006, 06:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-wordzcantexpress@Sep 12 2006, 04:06 PM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/3637/blackbook007yh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any crits?
o.0.... i dont like it at all sorry its to toyish [/b][/quote]
humm,...I like it kinda It sets you apart from the common handys just make it more fluid remove the arrow and use a better bullet marker thats juicy for drips cause the lines look shakey

d_g
09-12-2006, 08:27 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7647/handy2zz8.jpg

Don&#39;t think I&#39;ll do the circle thing anymore.

alive
09-12-2006, 08:28 PM
dayum. that is fire.

nerdx
09-12-2006, 08:43 PM
Originally posted by d_g@Sep 12 2006, 07:27 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7647/handy2zz8.jpg

Don&#39;t think I&#39;ll do the circle thing anymore.
give the E the point just like the D and R have at the top

SaneKid
09-12-2006, 09:24 PM
D_G- I say keep the circle thingy only start it off the D and end it with an arrow.

d_g
09-12-2006, 10:27 PM
Cheers everyone.


I &#39;acquired&#39; some more markers today so I&#39;ll keep messing with it.

myl
09-12-2006, 11:09 PM
yay for racking

AteskOne
09-12-2006, 11:17 PM
Originally posted by d_g@Sep 12 2006, 07:27 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7647/handy2zz8.jpg

Don&#39;t think I&#39;ll do the circle thing anymore.
lol wat the hell kinda article were you reading that you wrote on...lol something about smiling at a woman?...am i the only 1 who notcied that lol. anyways i like your flow very much n im definitly feeling that e...i agree dont do the circle with the t it ruins the flow of the tag. i dont really have much advice for you other than just keep practicing and changing things until your tag is perfect.

d_g
09-12-2006, 11:26 PM
Hahaha.

I grabbed a cosmopoliton mag from the rubbish. Free paper y0&#33; And my shitty markers write nicely on the glossy paper.

AteskOne
09-12-2006, 11:29 PM
lol hell yeah...cant argue with free paper. lol i&#39;v come to find that i&#39;ll write on anything practicing my skills when im bored...soon looking through porn is gunna b hard with all the tags n throwies lol jp....or am i :ph34r:

fost
09-12-2006, 11:37 PM
d_g that tag is looking fresh

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/4500/newstuff037kz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kiwi mop on a sign in my garage, crits?

doomsayer
09-13-2006, 02:28 AM
wow, nice mop, lookin fresh

ARMAwonR
09-13-2006, 02:30 AM
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid214/p5bb76c4e4ae8c5f8840a02c994824657/ecffa3d0.jpg

doomsayer
09-13-2006, 02:33 AM
i dont like the extension the the bottom of the M, maybe try it withouth the extension and just an underline now connected to any letters i think itd look nice.

d_g
09-13-2006, 02:42 AM
And maybe move your letters a tiny bit apart or angle them all little so they&#39;re a little more definable.

ARMAwonR
09-13-2006, 02:42 AM
I ran out of paper ... so i resorted to photoshop for the night ...

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid214/p7eb208a86c1bb7f76c2ff80b5af690b2/ecff9863.jpg

doomsayer
09-13-2006, 02:59 AM
yeah i like that one alot better

cord
09-13-2006, 08:16 AM
fost i would dig that if it wasnt in your garage :/

the f looks like a p and i dont think you should curl the t like that

fost
09-13-2006, 11:41 AM
yeah i was just testing out the mop so thats why its in my garage

and normally the f is more defined, the drips kinda made it look like a p, but whatever no excuses

thanks cord :)

nerdx
09-13-2006, 12:49 PM
yeah looks too much like post, change the F and make it straighter so it wont be confused.

some_one
09-13-2006, 03:25 PM
On a train inside with a pental white....
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060913/12/7/c/9/7c93a7d37a9e21055c4a6d19beae6deb200609130_full.jpg
SGER-JFK....
crits please....

FEN the HEN
09-13-2006, 08:31 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture083.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture075.jpg

Stevie
09-13-2006, 09:22 PM
Originally posted by 2KoS+Sep 9 2006, 05:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (2KoS @ Sep 9 2006, 05:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Sep 7 2006, 09:20 PM
To me when the letters aren&#39;t definable it becomes more of a symbol than a word. Like someone on here said before using a symbol stops people talking about you.
Well, people can start talking about you when they find your throws or pieces with a handy next to it or something. [/b][/quote]
http://forums.skateperception.com/index.ph...7&#entry1293857 (http://forums.skateperception.com/index.php?showtopic=59712&st=980&gopid=1293857&#entry1293857)

here&#39;s one, he&#39;s closer to the bottom.. teets is his username

Venom.
09-13-2006, 10:07 PM
God Fen that is so fucking hot.

shy
09-14-2006, 02:58 AM
im a girl trying to get into graff...crits please :) says SHY ONER
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9456/picture048333333333bs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

d_g
09-14-2006, 03:43 AM
It&#39;s a bit hard to see because of the quality of the pic but it doesn&#39;t look too bad.

Meetermaid on here is a girl and so is my girlfriend in_the_red.

.D.H.
09-14-2006, 09:05 AM
arma: in that throwie i gave you a while back, i put some handsteezys around it. dont you be jackin my style. thats lookin sorta close.

E-D-D-Y
09-14-2006, 11:04 AM
Mesk

Black with green drips on papaer

fucked the &#39;s&#39; up a bit

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4509/meskiv1.png (http://e-d-d-y-g-u-a-r-d.piczo.com)

Slushi
09-14-2006, 03:18 PM
make your letters all the same size

C3ZR ONE
09-14-2006, 05:19 PM
More old shit...

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/3403/im000239mk4.jpg
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/7973/im000238sa6.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6066/im000237wl3.jpg
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/872/im000236ug9.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5421/im000233fk8.jpg
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/346/im000231ky0.jpg
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3812/im000229vj5.jpg
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1683/im000243ve6.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4614/im000241rc5.jpg

doomsayer
09-14-2006, 05:28 PM
wow those handstyles are amazing czar... they look so good&#33;

aces
09-14-2006, 05:32 PM
Man cezr those are sick as always.

C3ZR ONE
09-14-2006, 05:34 PM
Thanks guys. ;)

Sluts_r_us
09-14-2006, 06:52 PM
damn ceeez ur handies have advanced even more since you did my name last time...mind doin one for me?

ARMAwonR
09-14-2006, 11:38 PM
Originally posted by .D.H.@Sep 14 2006, 08:05 AM
arma: in that throwie i gave you a while back, i put some handsteezys around it. dont you be jackin my style. thats lookin sorta close.
show me what you did for me and show me what i&#39;m bitin ... <_<

ARMAwonR
09-14-2006, 11:41 PM
actually ... i just looked up what you did for me ...

1. what i&#39;m putting up right now ... doesnt look like yours other than MAYBE the extenstion off the beginning A ...

2. I was doing handstyles like that for ARMA when I first started writing it

3. I&#39;m not biting your shit ... I can promise you that

Venom.
09-15-2006, 12:31 AM
c3zr what kind of pen do you use for paper tags like that?

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 01:28 AM
looks like a sharpie chisel tip to me, cause i have one it does the same job

in_the_red
09-15-2006, 01:33 AM
I changed my tag to &#39;kaste&#39;. d_g says to lose the heart but I like it. It&#39;s got lots more flow than my last one. Crits please? :)

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5884/kastepc0.jpg

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 01:44 AM
i like that one on the right hand side, second from the bottom, it looks good, i really like how the ASTE each letter gets smaller, the heart doesnt fit in to well tho. looking at the one i like i think u shud bring the line up thru the middle of the A more and work on the K a bit more to make it flow. and i keep it that way how the K is a lil bit smaller than the A then the STE is smaller than the A and keeps on getting smaller u know what i mean? looks nice

in_the_red
09-15-2006, 01:46 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 15 2006, 12:44 AM
i like that one on the right hand side, second from the bottom, it looks good, i really like how the ASTE each letter gets smaller, the heart doesnt fit in to well tho. looking at the one i like i think u shud bring the line up thru the middle of the A more and work on the K a bit more to make it flow. and i keep it that way how the K is a lil bit smaller than the A then the STE is smaller than the A and keeps on getting smaller u know what i mean? looks nice
Thanks, that&#39;s real helpful&#33;

d_g
09-15-2006, 01:48 AM
Lose the heart, looks like it shouldn&#39;t be there.

I don&#39;t like the big loopy thing in the &#39;k&#39;.

The &#39;A&#39; doesn&#39;t really fit with the other letters, your handy should be kinda like a font on the computer.

The &#39;s&#39; will probably tidy itself up after a while.

The &#39;T&#39; needs some work too.

The &#39;e&#39; isn&#39;t all that flash.

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 08:03 AM
i just had an idea. one time when i was doing a tag i was rushing it cause i was like all shaky cause it was my first time doing it so i sorta screwed up the letters and stuff, but i accidentyl did this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/73ca141f.jpg

sort of made a love heart at the end, if you could work at extending something like that off your E, it may look real nice. just play with it and try to get a better looking love heart than i did, hahaha

Blix
09-15-2006, 02:01 PM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/6539/yeltagmd4.th.jpg (http://img124.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yeltagmd4.jpg)
my new name says yel crits? god I suck at handstyles

si0n
09-15-2006, 07:10 PM
how many times have you changed your name, and for the tag work with letters that flow with your handstyle.

Blix
09-15-2006, 07:42 PM
this is only my third name but I like it both of the other ones i Just kinda picked cuz I couldnt think of anythin else but yeah I&#39;m stickin with this one

C3ZR ONE
09-16-2006, 02:38 AM
Yall thought I was slippin... ;)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5117/im000254if8.jpg

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3544/im000255hv9.jpg

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/430/im000260vu0.jpg

Go to the dollar store. That&#39;ll save you money...

E-D-D-Y
09-16-2006, 07:42 AM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/3594/mesk2kt6.th.png (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mesk2kt6.png)

RKT47
09-16-2006, 08:31 AM
Originally posted by E&#045;D&#045;D&#045;Y@Sep 16 2006, 06:42 AM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/3594/mesk2kt6.th.png (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mesk2kt6.png)
are you fucking kidding me?

aces
09-16-2006, 09:01 AM
I doubt it.

minesweep
09-16-2006, 01:26 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Sep 16 2006, 01:38 AM
Yall thought I was slippin... ;)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5117/im000254if8.jpg

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3544/im000255hv9.jpg

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/430/im000260vu0.jpg

Go to the dollar store. That&#39;ll save you money...
is that ghetto krink? nice handy as usual cezr

Slushi
09-16-2006, 02:55 PM
Originally posted by RKT47+Sep 16 2006, 07:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RKT47 @ Sep 16 2006, 07:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-E&#045;D&#045;D&#045;Y@Sep 16 2006, 06:42 AM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/3594/mesk2kt6.th.png (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mesk2kt6.png)
are you fucking kidding me?
[/b][/quote]
There&#39;s nothing wrong with a little effort...

nerdx
09-16-2006, 06:38 PM
word cezr. i gatta find the picture i took whit the drippiest marker.

MEBone
09-17-2006, 05:32 AM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/6823/1063247503404274870id0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

its aight i guess, i hope u like it

C3ZR ONE
09-17-2006, 05:39 AM
Originally posted by MEBone@Sep 17 2006, 04:32 AM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/6823/1063247503404274870id0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

its aight i guess, i hope u like it
aww man. It&#39;s fresh homie. Simple and clean. Thanks yo. I&#39;ve done a million names, but noone hardly ever does one back for me. My cam is i the trunk right now, but I&#39;ll get one at you asap. I know I&#39;ve owed you one for a while now actually.

Thanks man.

Ginsu
09-17-2006, 10:02 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/Rancid.jpg

RANCID, im lookin to improve but im still or change it soon but im still tryin.

Save
09-17-2006, 10:42 AM
2 more weeks and i get to come home and paint&#33;

my ish before i left for boot camp... same style im gonna use when i get home... any crits?

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1057/set1ry8.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=set1ry8.jpg)

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/8105/set2kl9.th.jpg (http://img127.imageshack.us/my.php?image=set2kl9.jpg)

RemoZ
09-17-2006, 01:46 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/922/handstylelo1.jpg



WHOSTA, any comments or tips?

FEN the HEN
09-17-2006, 01:49 PM
RANCID that tag is looking hot

Simimi
09-17-2006, 02:06 PM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04924.jpg

"Mimi"

Hit me with your mad crits&#33;

FEN the HEN
09-17-2006, 02:08 PM
thats garbage, no style, cant read the thing, and its probably in a bathroom at your school

stick to paper for a long time

Simimi
09-17-2006, 02:15 PM
Yea... and.. umm Yea...
Wow&#33; Your Good&#33;

FEN the HEN
09-17-2006, 02:17 PM
im just telling the truth, dont get all snively at me cause your shits wack

nerdx
09-17-2006, 02:19 PM
Originally posted by RemoZ@Sep 17 2006, 12:46 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/922/handstylelo1.jpg



WHOSTA, any comments or tips?
spread your letters out more, or use a thinner marker.
then post it up again.