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riddleboxxmcl
10-04-2006, 07:41 PM
i dont like that one
try what i said though

doomsayer
10-04-2006, 07:45 PM
i dont understand what u said

slEEt
10-04-2006, 07:48 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Oct 4 2006, 07:40 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/handybattlekrink-2.jpg
I'd change the extension off that last K, almost looks like another letter, like an N. Try just making it curve out and up.

-testify-
10-04-2006, 07:59 PM
what about mine

doomsayer
10-04-2006, 08:01 PM
i may just bar it, i suck with these letters, gah

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/untitled-1.jpg

slEEt
10-04-2006, 08:05 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Oct 4 2006, 08:01 PM
i may just bar it, i suck with these letters, gah

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/untitled-1.jpg
That extension is much better but the other letters are sloppy, now just combine them :)

-testify-
10-04-2006, 08:23 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;+Oct 4 2006, 03:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-testify- @ Oct 4 2006, 03:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> i used the thin part of the tip on this sweet highlighter i got from school and i cant get a better picture cause the only cam i have is my brothers phone and i probably wont submit it i dont think its that good

<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;testify&#045;@Oct 3 2006, 03:13 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/415/stanstehpr2.png

is this any better i tried to make it simpler
everyone ignored this so someone crit it please

bump [/b][/quote]
is this good enough to start painting

riddleboxxmcl
10-04-2006, 08:27 PM
sorry but




























































no

-testify-
10-04-2006, 08:33 PM
whats bad about it

riddleboxxmcl
10-04-2006, 08:40 PM
well
it dosent flow to well
does it say Nai?
try to make the letters stay on one line not going up
if it does say nai
make the "a" touch the bottum the same part the n touches and fix up the i
i dont really like the circle at the top of it

if u just start over write it in your normal hand writing write out the word then slowly tweak it

-testify-
10-04-2006, 08:44 PM
yea it says nai thanks

lolbust
10-04-2006, 09:44 PM
What do you guys think?... just started out maybe 3-4 weeks ago. Any comments on what i should do?

posted wrong thing sorry here it is.


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1923/lolmbw2.png (http://imageshack.us)


never got any crits... could someone help me out.

AT AT
10-04-2006, 10:10 PM
what was i thinking ? this is really gay http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2713/img0772ke9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

myl
10-04-2006, 10:15 PM
yeah what were you thinking?

tint1
10-04-2006, 10:18 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f84/CPG697/tint1aor.jpg

tint1
10-04-2006, 10:19 PM
Tint/AOR...i know my R looks kinda like a B...

lolbust
10-04-2006, 10:23 PM
Originally posted by lolbust@Oct 4 2006, 09:44 PM
What do you guys think?... just started out maybe 3-4 weeks ago. Any comments on what i should do?

posted wrong thing sorry here it is.


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1923/lolmbw2.png (http://imageshack.us)
crits on these tell me wut i sohuld fix

elcs
10-04-2006, 11:07 PM
Originally posted by AT AT@Oct 4 2006, 10:10 PM
what was i thinking ? this is really gay http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2713/img0772ke9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
what were you thinking posting that if you dont like it. youre wasting everybodys time. post something that you are proud of. not something you dont even like yourself.

d_g
10-04-2006, 11:24 PM
Originally posted by lolbust+Oct 5 2006, 03:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (lolbust @ Oct 5 2006, 03:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lolbust@Oct 4 2006, 09:44 PM
What do you guys think?... just started out maybe 3-4 weeks ago. Any comments on what i should do?

posted wrong thing sorry here it is.


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1923/lolmbw2.png (http://imageshack.us)
crits on these tell me wut i sohuld fix [/b][/quote]
Bottom &#39;gone&#39; is hot. Nice and simple with a little flair. Could do with a little tidying up, nice though.

doomsayer
10-04-2006, 11:32 PM
ok what do ya think

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/untitled-2.jpg

FEN the HEN
10-04-2006, 11:36 PM
you tag krink, but write truth?

doomsayer
10-04-2006, 11:38 PM
nah its for the battle

HazeCrown
10-05-2006, 02:11 AM
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d134/GothicInk/Trystans/hazeacidetch.jpg

yeah that would be it <_<

---CRoR---
10-05-2006, 02:17 AM
is that real in ur sig?^

kinda a cezr bite in a way... noo beef tho

Slushi
10-05-2006, 06:45 AM
Originally posted by &#045;&#045;&#045;CRoR&#045;&#045;&#045;@Oct 5 2006, 02:17 AM
is that real in ur sig?^

kinda a cezr bite in a way... noo beef tho
Not really, the two styles are waaay different.

fross
10-05-2006, 08:00 AM
Originally posted by fross@Oct 4 2006, 08:52 AM
trying to get some crit/advise on this. iv been stenciling and wheat pasting for a quite a long time but i thought it was time i get a tag. this is my 1st try, i know its shit but im at a loss at where to go from here..
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5594/dsc00237ak7.jpg
anyone....?

jonowev
10-05-2006, 09:43 AM
Originally posted by Serb@Oct 4 2006, 11:48 PM
No arrow? Too toy...I want something to spice it up...:S
get rid of the arrow goddamn it&#33; its sucks

revolt92
10-05-2006, 12:59 PM
fross to me i cant make the letters out but hey, thats just me :blink:

-eror-
10-05-2006, 01:42 PM
Here&#39;s a quick sketch of a throw and a tag. They&#39;re pretty sloppy, but whatever. critz.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2274/throwandtagxd8.th.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwandtagxd8.jpg)

Ginsu
10-05-2006, 02:36 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/thosah.jpg

it be OSAH. changed from RANCID.

Slushi
10-05-2006, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by fross+Oct 5 2006, 08:00 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fross @ Oct 5 2006, 08:00 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fross@Oct 4 2006, 08:52 AM
trying to get some crit/advise on this. iv been stenciling and wheat pasting for a quite a long time but i thought it was time i get a tag. this is my 1st try, i know its shit but im at a loss at where to go from here..
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5594/dsc00237ak7.jpg
anyone....? [/b][/quote]
Dont connect your letters, make them all the same size, and make it legible.

Serb
10-05-2006, 02:50 PM
Redid the B a bit, and the K a little too.

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i1/neilknapman/Picture30.jpg

jonowev
10-05-2006, 02:54 PM
im feeling the R and the B
i dont like the top of the A coming down onto itself
the K looks more like a lower case H with another line added on

-testify-
10-05-2006, 02:55 PM
your stuff does look like mine kinda..but better, the only thing i dont like is the a the rest is good

revolt92
10-05-2006, 04:27 PM
Ive bin designing my tag for ages and i reckon im ready to start sprayin walls,can you suggest where i should start

phish
10-05-2006, 05:37 PM
start by posting a pic of it

-eror-
10-05-2006, 06:08 PM
Originally posted by &#045;eror&#045;@Oct 5 2006, 01:42 PM
Here&#39;s a quick sketch of a throw and a tag. They&#39;re pretty sloppy, but whatever. critz.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2274/throwandtagxd8.th.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwandtagxd8.jpg)

phish
10-05-2006, 06:27 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/handstyle.jpg

crits?

-eror-
10-05-2006, 06:50 PM
The P looks too much like a D. Either tilt it back a bit or make the loop smaller.

Hot_Pocket
10-05-2006, 07:14 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/tag.jpg

Uhh, crits, it says Meso, but the O looks like a "D"

phish
10-05-2006, 07:21 PM
Originally posted by phish@Oct 5 2006, 06:27 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/handstyle.jpg

crits?
put your letter on the same level

Hot_Pocket
10-05-2006, 07:29 PM
Yeah, I was in a rush, my tags don&#39;t flow as well if I slow down and make sure its on the same line. But no excuses, thanks.

craftedmydemise
10-05-2006, 08:02 PM
http://thumb19.webshots.net/t/57/757/0/46/22/2210046220094081959NtrSZc_th.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2210046220094081959NtrSZc)
if you guys could give me some more pointers and ratings and whatnot it would be appriciated

alera
10-05-2006, 08:06 PM
dont
paint
yet

not beefin but if your going to paint know stick to tags and throwes
so you can get some paint handle

Fiilth
10-05-2006, 08:43 PM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4946/picturend1.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picturend1.jpg)

Any suggestions? I dont really like my "y" i cant seem to find something to go with the rest of the tag.

Hot_Pocket
10-05-2006, 08:56 PM
Make your lines more fluid, not just straight edges like you have already. It has to flow more.

cHRoniC
10-05-2006, 08:57 PM
Originally posted by craftedmydemise@Oct 5 2006, 08:02 PM
http://thumb19.webshots.net/t/57/757/0/46/22/2210046220094081959NtrSZc_th.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2210046220094081959NtrSZc)
if you guys could give me some more pointers and ratings and whatnot it would be appriciated
are you serious



dont paint, practice throws and tags and once your good enough...................






paint

slEEt
10-05-2006, 09:07 PM
Originally posted by phish+Oct 5 2006, 07:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (phish @ Oct 5 2006, 07:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-phish@Oct 5 2006, 06:27 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/handstyle.jpg

crits?
put your letter on the same level [/b][/quote]
I like it but the P looks like a D.

tint1
10-05-2006, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by craftedmydemise@Oct 5 2006, 08:02 PM
http://thumb19.webshots.net/t/57/757/0/46/22/2210046220094081959NtrSZc_th.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2210046220094081959NtrSZc)
if you guys could give me some more pointers and ratings and whatnot it would be appriciated
dude are you familiar with the alphebet...and spraypaint
no offense but that shits horrible, btw im toy as fuck but come on

gcrolla
10-05-2006, 11:34 PM
i changed my tag since my last tag was "uneligible"
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/1971/003324vq2.th.jpg (http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=003324vq2.jpg)


crits?

d_g
10-06-2006, 01:53 AM
Still not ledgible.

Looks like &#39;S&#39;, &#39;Picture of gravestone&#39;, &#39;Picture of gravestone&#39;, &#39;Picture of gravestone&#39;.

Not hating but go simplier bro.

Fube
10-06-2006, 02:32 AM
Originally posted by craftedmydemise@Oct 5 2006, 08:02 PM
http://thumb19.webshots.net/t/57/757/0/46/22/2210046220094081959NtrSZc_th.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2210046220094081959NtrSZc)
if you guys could give me some more pointers and ratings and whatnot it would be appriciated
come on man, this is the "tag" thread. wrong place. :rolleyes:
normaly i would not give any crit. but due to the fact that this is so bad im going to tell u what u need to do to fix this shit. btw this is the toy forum, hence i am a toy. but it dont take rocket science for this. anyone that knows a little bit about writing will tell u the same thing if not worse. so here gos. for the love of GOD please just practice in your backyard or something, dont put anymore of that in the street. i understand u want to paint. eveyone is gunna tell u not to paint and stick to your book but u cant stop the urge to paint. but when random people see that shit its when they say, "thats ulgy, i hate graffiti". thats not what we want.
http://thumb19.webshots.net/t/57/757/8/31/87/2299831870094081959SEHfNN_th.jpg (http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2299831870094081959SEHfNN)
out of all of what i saw on your fliks, this is the only one with any type of letter structure. in dipshit terms its your "best one". dont get me wrong man, its still bad. partly becuase u dont know what your doing yet.(if u just started tight rope walking are u gunna do it with out a safety line your first time? fuck no, same gos with graff.) and also because u have not scetched enough to get some kind of balence with your letters. im not trying to break u down here man but if u keep posting shit like this all your going to get is hate, just like your getting now. sketch a LOT paint a LITTLE. and dont paint on the streets yet. this shit takes a lot of time, and skill, and practice to make look decent. dont give up. keep at it.

ksd
10-06-2006, 05:10 AM
Hey, my first shown attempts. Pen only, sorry. Give me some feedback please, thanks.
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4184/img0247ww5.jpg
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/7326/img0248dk2.jpg

NiL
10-06-2006, 06:00 AM
Pretty decent if it&#39;s your first attempt.

revolt92
10-06-2006, 10:23 AM
how long have you lot bin bombing

ksd
10-06-2006, 11:09 AM
I&#39;ve only been working on tags for a couple days. I&#39;m trying to learn the basics of letters and getting my hand used to writing them before i start anything with color or something like block letters. More feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

terower
10-06-2006, 11:12 AM
This is from my myspace add-thanking file. I like how my tag came out in this one.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo63.jpg

nerdx
10-06-2006, 12:56 PM
some shit.
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1872/img2568yz0.jpg

not quite sure if im liking it.

gcrolla
10-06-2006, 01:02 PM
i tried some fixing my letters a little bit.
http://i12.tinypic.com/47imsk3.jpg

phish
10-06-2006, 01:21 PM
sata, lose the extentions on the S

nerdx, can&#39;t see it all that well, although i think you should try something a little simpler, but i may just be that you didn&#39;t paint it that well, no offence

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/phishhand.jpg

crits?

ksd
10-06-2006, 01:44 PM
I think your &#39;P&#39; is a lot better. I see it having a lot more style and also looks like a &#39;P&#39;.

revolt92
10-06-2006, 01:48 PM
http://http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2470/graffiti001iy3.jpg



any advice/crits on this

slEEt
10-06-2006, 01:54 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Oct 6 2006, 12:56 PM
some shit.
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1872/img2568yz0.jpg

not quite sure if im liking it.
I&#39;d go back to your older style.

slEEt
10-06-2006, 01:56 PM
Originally posted by phish@Oct 6 2006, 01:21 PM
sata, lose the extentions on the S

nerdx, can&#39;t see it all that well, although i think you should try something a little simpler, but i may just be that you didn&#39;t paint it that well, no offence

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/phishhand.jpg

crits?
Looks good to me, now start fucking shit up :)

revolt92
10-06-2006, 02:19 PM
http://http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/9617/graffitiqt7.jpg


sorry its in pen, what do you think?

b0mbingmybitches
10-06-2006, 02:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v462/shorty_bang_bang/graffiti/EZtag.jpg
a lil sloppy but what do you think?

-testify-
10-06-2006, 02:57 PM
http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/5839/otherev1.png

its says testify might actually start using it

myl
10-06-2006, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by slEEt+Oct 6 2006, 01:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (slEEt @ Oct 6 2006, 01:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nerdx@Oct 6 2006, 12:56 PM
some shit.
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1872/img2568yz0.jpg

not quite sure if im liking it.
I&#39;d go back to your older style. [/b][/quote]
kind of reminds me of philly handstyles...kind of

-testify-
10-06-2006, 03:01 PM
http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/5839/otherev1.png

its says testify might actually start using it

shit sorry for double post

nerdx
10-06-2006, 03:12 PM
myl wahts your takes on it besides philly steeze?

-testify-
10-06-2006, 03:25 PM
can someone crit mine

b0mbingmybitches
10-06-2006, 03:30 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Oct 6 2006, 02:57 PM
http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/5839/otherev1.png

its says testify might actually start using it
try to make your letters flow together better and work on style before speed....it looks like you skribbled it down kinda fast

-testify-
10-06-2006, 03:32 PM
yea i have this bad habit of writting really fast and dont even notice im going fast but im wondering which letters need work and how i know the ys pretty bad but what else

Sez-MBS
10-06-2006, 03:52 PM
Im new here and this is ma new tag :D

comments much appreciated&#33;

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8756/image2351qv7.png (http://imageshack.us)

soz bout how small it is... dunno how to make it any bigger... Will soon post up some pics of it sprayed up :)

b0mbingmybitches
10-06-2006, 03:53 PM
just look at other peoples letters and notice how they construct them and use your imagination to make your own....anytime you see a letter in your head that looks tight write it down

-testify-
10-06-2006, 03:55 PM
http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/6074/alaladl1.png

ok made it REALLY simple it says nai

b0mbingmybitches
10-06-2006, 03:55 PM
Originally posted by Sez&#045;MBS@Oct 6 2006, 03:52 PM
Im new here and this is ma new tag :D

comments much appreciated&#33;

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8756/image2351qv7.png (http://imageshack.us)

soz bout how small it is... dunno how to make it any bigger... Will soon post up some pics of it sprayed up :)
looks pretty good....now jus get your markers and stickers and tear shit up

b0mbingmybitches
10-06-2006, 03:57 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v462/shorty_bang_bang/graffiti/EZtag2.jpg

another i jus made up

-testify-
10-06-2006, 04:02 PM
make the circle on the e lower and more wider make the z? more like a z and make the dot on the i lower and the l curved or something

some guy from NCI...
10-06-2006, 04:03 PM
TESTIFY:

Write slower. All the letters need work. Lose the circle and the arrow on the I. Take your letters back to complete basics. Take all the time you need, noone&#39;s rushing you. Once you slow down, your handy should remain consistent (you should see what i mean)

revolt92
10-06-2006, 04:06 PM
ive been perfecting my tag for a while now and i wanted to know how long was it before you went out an bombed

-testify-
10-06-2006, 04:07 PM
haha wow it must REALLY suck cause...theres no arrow and ill try to write slower thanks and to the guy above me it doesnt matter how long it matters how good your tag is but post that in toy story next time

jonowev
10-06-2006, 04:11 PM
revolt - just go out and tag now&#33; who the hell waits untill their tag is perfect before bombing? you will improve by writing your tag, learning from mistakes, and gaining experience
some people will disagree, but it makes perfect sense

fost
10-06-2006, 04:16 PM
yeah just wait until 6 months later and you will see all of your old shitty tags everywhere and you&#39;ll want to change your name

just wait, its completely worth it, but whatever i guess some people have to figure that out the hard way

oh and jonowev you should really not be giving people crits or advice

-eror-
10-06-2006, 04:16 PM
Messing with my tag. Knocking the arrow around a bit. Crit?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7097/tagyq6.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagyq6.jpg)

jonowev
10-06-2006, 04:18 PM
6 months? tagging is the basis of all graffiti. if you dont get out there tagging, youre not a graffiti writer, youre just a kid that sits indoors sketching all day long

dont tell me what to do fost. i know what looks good , and i crit people. i give crits, and i get them back. thats the whole point of the blackbook forum. help each other to improve

fost
10-06-2006, 04:26 PM
yeah helping people improve doesnt mean telling people to go wreck shit with a tag that doesnt look good

i wasnt trying to start beef with you, i was just trying to stop people from doing shit that they will regret

and sitting indoors sketching all day long is a hell of a lot better than sitting indoors on an internet forum all day long

jonowev
10-06-2006, 04:27 PM
yeah.... but its evening here, and ive sketched loads already today. actually its gettin late. gonna crash - bye bye :)

757
10-06-2006, 04:28 PM
lol.......

phish
10-06-2006, 04:30 PM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 6 2006, 04:18 PM
6 months? tagging is the basis of all graffiti. if you dont get out there tagging, youre not a graffiti writer, youre just a kid that sits indoors sketching all day long

dont tell me what to do fost. i know what looks good , and i crit people. i give crits, and i get them back. thats the whole point of the blackbook forum. help each other to improve
yeah, and going out putting up shitty tags everywhere does not make you a graffiti writer, it just makes you a dumb kid with marker

revolt92
10-06-2006, 04:31 PM
Cheerz for the advice guys ill go out tomorrow and write the hell out of my town :)

-eror-
10-06-2006, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by &#045;eror&#045;@Oct 6 2006, 04:16 PM
Messing with my tag. Knocking the arrow around a bit. Crit?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7097/tagyq6.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagyq6.jpg)

some guy from NCI...
10-06-2006, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 6 2006, 04:27 PM
yeah.... but its evening here, and ive sketched loads already today. actually its gettin late. gonna crash - bye bye :)
Its 10:30 on a friday night...

Bastardo
10-06-2006, 04:39 PM
haha shh nci its his bedtime. seeing he must be like 9

Fube
10-06-2006, 04:41 PM
Originally posted by &#045;eror&#045;+Oct 6 2006, 04:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-eror- @ Oct 6 2006, 04:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;eror&#045;@Oct 6 2006, 04:16 PM
Messing with my tag. Knocking the arrow around a bit. Crit?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7097/tagyq6.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagyq6.jpg) [/b][/quote]
id say get rid of the arrow all together. just me. :D

Punny
10-06-2006, 04:43 PM
My latest tag.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Joek.jpg
Whatcha think?

some guy from NCI...
10-06-2006, 04:50 PM
eh... its not that nice.
Dont connect the e and the k.
I dunno what it says... pek? joek?
Lose the arrows
Dont waste time outlining it... get a decent handy down.

Punny
10-06-2006, 05:07 PM
Its says Joek. And thanks for the crits, I only outlined it because i was at school, and nothing better to do.

Wow. I just realised that it looks like pek. Lol

-eror-
10-06-2006, 05:20 PM
Originally posted by Fube+Oct 6 2006, 04:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Oct 6 2006, 04:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;eror&#045;@Oct 6 2006, 04:35 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;eror&#045;@Oct 6 2006, 04:16 PM
Messing with my tag. Knocking the arrow around a bit. Crit?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7097/tagyq6.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagyq6.jpg)
id say get rid of the arrow all together. just me. :D [/b][/quote]
Well, aside from the arrow, do the tag letters themselves look good?

phish
10-06-2006, 06:37 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/handstyle-1.jpg

crits?

-testify-
10-06-2006, 06:58 PM
awesome i like the s and p alot

OliveOil
10-06-2006, 07:58 PM
YECK

-testify-
10-06-2006, 08:06 PM
what?

doomsayer
10-06-2006, 08:09 PM
that phish one looks nice, its on its way&#33;

-testify-
10-06-2006, 10:54 PM
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4139/newtagzh5.png

new name and new tag it says pask

ARMAwonR
10-06-2006, 11:12 PM
where you from buddy?

-testify-
10-06-2006, 11:13 PM
why? i havent put it up yet so you couldnt have seen it

ARMAwonR
10-06-2006, 11:16 PM
nah i just know a really raw pask from around here ... city/freight killer ... just wondering if you were close to here

-testify-
10-06-2006, 11:23 PM
cincy?

ARMAwonR
10-06-2006, 11:33 PM
ahh you&#39;re from cincy ... he&#39;s a dayton cat

you kno of him?

-testify-
10-07-2006, 12:43 AM
is he the kind of dude whod get pisted..no ive never heard of him

ARMAwonR
10-07-2006, 02:02 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b155/xmyrtlex/Picture108.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/davisfase1/108_2283.jpg

iono ... write it I guess ... but I mean ... if you start getting some heat ... I warned you mang

jonowev
10-07-2006, 05:21 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/tag.jpg
still working on it, but its improving
crits?

d_g
10-07-2006, 05:36 AM
Looks far too basic.

I think you need to spend a bit more time looking at other peoples work, dunno, I just get that feeling.

jonowev
10-07-2006, 05:38 AM
well yeh, its deliberately basic. people have told me that i dont want to run before i can walk, so im listenting to them and starting simple

d_g
10-07-2006, 05:46 AM
If I was you I would think about changing your name.

&#39;j&#39; and &#39;y&#39; have pretty similar shapes and that close together they don&#39;t sit too well. A lot of people will think that you&#39;re writing your name, which is kinda toyish, you&#39;d habe to have a lot of style to make up for it. And to me there&#39;s just not much to work with. I think you said before it has &#39;sentimental&#39; value or something but what ever dude, it&#39;s up to you.

jonowev
10-07-2006, 05:49 AM
nah i dont wana change my name. i just wana keep trying to improve it
i will look at that Y, and keep working on it
who the hell would write their own name?&#33;?&#33;
god, some people must be retarded

d_g
10-07-2006, 05:54 AM
Well if someone saw that tag on the wall (and no beef, I know you&#39;re still working on it) they&#39;d probably think &#39;Hey 10 year old Jay was here and wrote his name&#39;.

But whatever dude, it&#39;s your tag not mine, just trying to give some advice.

EDIT:

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/554/handy3lk2.jpg

jonowev
10-07-2006, 06:07 AM
well its better than mine&#33;
the DR looks a bit like an M in the second one, but its quite slick
howd you think i can improve mine? (without changing my name)

d_g
10-07-2006, 06:10 AM
Cheers bro, I see what you mean about the &#39;M&#39;, I find it good to get other peoples opinions, I tend to miss things like that.

Fuck it&#39;s boring, only 12 saturday night here, nothing to do, drinking homebrew beer.

aces
10-07-2006, 07:00 AM
That&#39;s some good shit there. The DR might look like an M but most any writer would be able to know it was DRAST cause the lines are there at the bottom. I reckon it would be a sick M if you made those into lines that don&#39;t connect.

aces
10-07-2006, 07:02 AM
Originally posted by ARMAwonR@Oct 7 2006, 03:02 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b155/xmyrtlex/Picture108.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/davisfase1/108_2283.jpg

iono ... write it I guess ... but I mean ... if you start getting some heat ... I warned you mang
Sick shit there. His handy kinda looks a little like kayones but not really now that I think about it.

jonowev
10-07-2006, 07:34 AM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 7 2006, 10:21 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/tag.jpg

bump
this is too damn basic. anyone got ideas on how i can add to it/change it to make more interesting?

Skesh
10-07-2006, 07:58 AM
Maybe something like this

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/1ajay.jpg

whoarethereal evil
10-07-2006, 08:46 AM
nah dnt do it like that

and y not cyhange your name

barely ne 1 has the same name from when the started till present

you cant improve with out trying new letters

and jay is much more of a throwup name it has limited ability 2 b tagged

so either work day and night on your throwup get a dope 1 and kill shit with it (when its good)

or consider a na,e change

jonowev
10-07-2006, 08:57 AM
thanks skesh bro - thats helpful
evil dude - yes you can improve it without changing the lttters, and pretty much every name has tagging potential. some people dont even use letters, but have a simple logo that they tag with.

whoarethereal evil
10-07-2006, 09:05 AM
<_<

i know

but seriously

just try different name and see what happens

i was very reluctant 2 change my name bt loooads of ppl found out it was me so i had 2 now im proper pleased i have coz i think its better

jonowev
10-07-2006, 09:06 AM
okies. maybe i sould try a few of the words that come up in the handstyle battle, and see what letters im good at. why you tell people who you were man&#33; the only people that know who i am are my two homeboys, who are fellow writers

Toyminater
10-07-2006, 09:24 AM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/toyminater/000_0015.jpg
The first one.
One of my first handstyles. Critiques?
It says "Cyph"

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 01:40 PM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2513/rastatagda4.png

it says rasta its my first tag..crits anyone

Karma
10-07-2006, 01:57 PM
It just doesn&#39;t flow..

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 02:03 PM
other than that is it good though?

moss1
10-07-2006, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by ~raging babies~@Oct 7 2006, 01:40 PM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2513/rastatagda4.png

it says rasta its my first tag..crits anyone
really try to work on more on all the letters and never do that a or t work on the r too and work on ur style its like to apart from each other, try to bring them together&#33;

jonowev
10-07-2006, 03:01 PM
bring them together, and ged rid of that retarded anarchy symbol. just have a straightforward A

revolt92
10-07-2006, 03:04 PM
I dont really get the circle on the A an the R could do whith a bit of work, but not to bad

revolt92
10-07-2006, 03:07 PM
hey i was wondering how long you guys hav bin bombing for :) :)

phish
10-07-2006, 03:10 PM
i haven&#39;t been out bombing, getting some paint monday though

jonowev
10-07-2006, 03:14 PM
ive been bombing serisously for about 2 months, but i first picked up a can and invented a tag when i was about 12&#33; ive changed my name since then tho...
yer phish, go for it&#33; ur tag is lookin good

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 04:08 PM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 7 2006, 03:01 PM
bring them together, and ged rid of that retarded anarchy symbol. just have a straightforward A
ok thanks its my first tag so i was just tryin it out

revolt92
10-07-2006, 04:18 PM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6585/graffiti002lx9.jpg

Any advise/crits

jonowev
10-07-2006, 04:41 PM
get rid of the crown, the bit in the middle of the O, the quote marks, the underlines, and make the leers more rounded

there

-testify-
10-07-2006, 04:43 PM
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4139/newtagzh5.png

ok... everyone ignored it so crits(ignore the a i messed up)

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 04:56 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4660/rastataghl0.png

fixed my tag a lil crits?

revolt92
10-07-2006, 04:58 PM
Cheerz for the advice no crown,no quotation marks,no underlines all gone

OliveOil
10-07-2006, 04:59 PM
holy shit scanning these pages made me throw up in my mouth a little.

you kids need to work on keeping it simple, focus on the handstyle itself rather than each letter, that just makes it cluttered, make it flow together as one word, after that get it up more and more and itl develope with more style.

btw that pask is a good start at what im talking about.

-testify-
10-07-2006, 05:02 PM
are you actually saying mine isnt completely horrible? :o :blink:

dajam410
10-07-2006, 05:02 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/tag.jpg

Any advice, critiques, etc? I mainly want feedback because i plan on sticking with this for a while.

-testify-
10-07-2006, 05:06 PM
make it not so cluttered and make it readable and the drips are stupid way too many(did you do the drips on ms paint? )i like the second a though and dont do qoutes

dajam410
10-07-2006, 05:11 PM
Thanks for the advice bro

-testify-
10-07-2006, 05:14 PM
did you do the drips on ms paint?

revolt92
10-07-2006, 05:17 PM
http://http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2894/graffitivs1.jpg

I was thinking of starting to spray this tag,what do you think

SMOG_514
10-07-2006, 05:18 PM
quit graff guys u are hopeless

-testify-
10-07-2006, 05:19 PM
^can you tell me whats wrong with mine then

SMOG_514
10-07-2006, 05:28 PM
1st- ure a complete post whore and i hate ur enormous sig
2nd- ur tag haz no style simply some poeple has it and some others dont... take a look around you man compare ur "handstyle" to the others... it is simple writing man and you guys always put arows and useless stuff with no flow... -testify- your letters are so toyish id dont even think it would evolve... i aint a hater but im just telling what i think
Peace

Fube
10-07-2006, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by SMOG_514@Oct 7 2006, 05:18 PM
quit graff guys u are hopeless
heh, yes, theres some shitty ones on here but i think jam&#39;s is fine. dips look shittiy because its pixelated. if u havent noticed "SMOG" u are in the toy forum. called toy for a reason. lets see your perfect handstyle? btw no beef, i just found that post annoying. because i have seen some decent ones. to tell someone to just give up graff because there handstyle has not developed yet is stupid to me.

SMOG_514
10-07-2006, 05:36 PM
i was talking about those that ive seen in the last 3 pages... i think i saw 1 or 2 tags that shouldnt be here but still i dont even know why im on the toy section... actually a missed a link and ended up here and couldnt leave without leaving a comment... kuz ive seen toys with the same handstylle than you guys and they were practicing it for month and some for years and never ended up eith some decent shit

dajam410
10-07-2006, 05:38 PM
Thanks Fube. And as far as the drips, I did my tag on a piece of paper, scanned it, and did the drips with Photoshop CS2, the only reason they look so shitty on the post is because I had to resize it some.

Karma
10-07-2006, 06:09 PM
Originally posted by dajam410@Oct 7 2006, 05:02 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/tag.jpg

Any advice, critiques, etc? I mainly want feedback because i plan on sticking with this for a while.
why is it wet? I mean i looks cool but drop the drip. Nice

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 06:26 PM
yeah im with smog, why do you guys add al crazy arrows and commas and underlines everywhere when its obviuos all the good handstyle are just simple letters, arrows and all those addons arent gunna make ur handstyle any better unless u know what ur doing, so if uve just started, lay off the add ones, just write simple letters

dajam410
10-07-2006, 06:29 PM
Thanks man. I guess i did over-do the drips. Haha. Not even the thinnest ink or paint will probably drip that bad, but I love how they look.

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 06:37 PM
any crits? i still feel theres alot of room for improvement:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct8.jpg

dajam410
10-07-2006, 06:48 PM
I really like it, but in my opinion (correct me if i&#39;m wrong) the bottom left corner looks empty, or like its missing something

Fube
10-07-2006, 06:54 PM
Originally posted by SMOG_514@Oct 7 2006, 05:36 PM
i was talking about those that ive seen in the last 3 pages... i think i saw 1 or 2 tags that shouldnt be here but still i dont even know why im on the toy section... actually a missed a link and ended up here and couldnt leave without leaving a comment... kuz ive seen toys with the same handstylle than you guys and they were practicing it for month and some for years and never ended up eith some decent shit
well i actually i did look through some of the pages your talking about and your right. my problem was instaid of useing the knowledge u have to crit someone u said "just give up". i have heard that all my life. not just with graff. and it just strikes a nerve with me. the second post u actually helped the kid out, pointed him in the right direction. thats how it needs to be.i have no beef with ya. as for handstyles guys u know what looks shitty and what looks good. as far as suckyness gos a lot of the stuff posted is very bad. go google "handstyles" and take a look at a style u think u like. try to emulate it. once u got it down then elaborate on it. make it better, make it yours. dont just go cop someones style and call it your own, but make it your style. odds are if u think it sucks then your probably right. dont even bother posting it if u think it needs improvement. unless u dont know how to improve it.


doom: i like that truth but i would get rid of that strange random dot/mark on the top right. and your extention coming off the H make it underline the T and the R instaid of going through it.

tmcod
10-07-2006, 08:14 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4043/crsdv0.png

this is my first tag and it says crs any crits?

contraband
10-07-2006, 08:53 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Oct 7 2006, 06:26 PM
yeah im with smog, why do you guys add al crazy arrows and commas and underlines everywhere when its obviuos all the good handstyle are just simple letters, arrows and all those addons arent gunna make ur handstyle any better unless u know what ur doing, so if uve just started, lay off the add ones, just write simple letters
word, most of my favorite tags are simple and clean. complicated tags can look good if the writer knows what he/she are doing with the letters, and not just wack ass skribbles or crazy add ons.

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 10:58 PM
yeah man thats exactly what im talking about, all writers need to start off simple if they wanna get a good looking tag cause ur not gunna now what ur doing with tech addons etc when ur just starting off, thanks for the crits fube and dajam, ill see what i can do

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by tmcod@Oct 7 2006, 08:14 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4043/crsdv0.png

this is my first tag and it says crs any crits?
ok the letters are on a slant, that looks kinda weird, steiahgen them up and for the moment lose the underline, little corner bits above the tag and squiggly buit off the R, so yeah, straighten the letters up and lose all that stuff then repost.

tmcod
10-07-2006, 11:11 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5504/chrisgr5.png

there is this better?

-testify-
10-07-2006, 11:19 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7117/tagar2.png

any better at all

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:20 PM
yes much better CRS, now make the C the same size as the R and the S then try to slowly tweak the letters a bit more, while keeping them all the same size

Pask - keep ur letters the same size and width, do it with a chisel tip marker itd look alot better, just get the letters same width.size

seazr
10-07-2006, 11:32 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9246/imga0767sc1.jpg

Says "kiNG" i know it sucks so how can i improve?

-testify-
10-07-2006, 11:32 PM
are the actual letters shit or okay

Hot_Pocket
10-07-2006, 11:35 PM
Your actual letters are pretty basic right now, but more style will come in time young padawon.....

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:41 PM
dont write king&#33;

doan
10-07-2006, 11:44 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v43/modestlyemo/bmx%20and%20shit/100_0098.jpg

ive just been tryin to keep it simple, any advice?

Hot_Pocket
10-07-2006, 11:48 PM
It looks a lot like you&#39;re taking a lot of time on a line, speed up your strokes, because you can see that they&#39;re all crooked in some spots.

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:48 PM
The A doesn&#39;t fit in cause it&#39;s like square and the other letters are curved. Make the P the same size as the rest and make the A curvy it should look better.

d_g
10-07-2006, 11:49 PM
Your &#39;D&#39; looks like a &#39;P&#39; and your &#39;a&#39; looks like a backwards &#39;E&#39;.

doan
10-07-2006, 11:51 PM
true. ill try to curve the A alittle bit and ill make the D look like a D.

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:53 PM
haha i thought ur D was a P

doan
10-07-2006, 11:56 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v43/modestlyemo/100_0099.jpg

does that look any better?

Hot_Pocket
10-07-2006, 11:57 PM
So much better, now make &#39;em same size.

doomsayer
10-08-2006, 12:03 AM
yeah, make the letters the same size, itll look much better

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct8handyyyyy.jpg
?

Hot_Pocket
10-08-2006, 12:40 AM
I don&#39;t really like that extra squiggle over the "U" and "H". And your H looks almost like a "P" or if a passerbyer is stupid, they even may think it&#39;s a "B".

doan
10-08-2006, 12:58 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v43/modestlyemo/bmx%20and%20shit/100_0104.jpg

hows that?

i took your advice on the letter sizes, and i actually used the whole pen (sharpie magnum) instead of just the corner haha.

ps. this is my last one for awhile. i dont wanna become a post-whore

doomsayer
10-08-2006, 01:06 AM
yeah man&#33; that nice huge improvement from before, see simple looks alot better, nice job, now u just gotta oput some of ur own style into it, try a few things, dont be afaraid to fail, but man thats looking so much better

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 02:04 AM
Originally posted by b0mbingmybitches@Oct 6 2006, 02:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v462/shorty_bang_bang/graffiti/EZtag.jpg
a lil sloppy but what do you think?
that is all over the place i would keep it simpler but thats just me im a old school freak

jonowev
10-08-2006, 04:36 AM
everyone was dissing all that toy shit on the last couple of pages, but to be fair this is the toy forum - if you wana see mint handstyles go check out the gallery or battle forums

nosypainter - i agree. he should tidy it up, lose the squiggle and the quote marks, and learn how to do an A

jonowev
10-08-2006, 04:39 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/tag.jpg

im trying to go simple. you think i should add or change anyhing? and dont tell me to change my name, damn it&#33;

Truth.
10-08-2006, 05:09 AM
hmm i think u shud get the letters all the same size/width and it wud be looking better, u cud put a nice extension on the top of that J too

jonowev
10-08-2006, 05:11 AM
yeah, sure thing. also, what you think i should do about the bottom of the Y?

Truth.
10-08-2006, 05:14 AM
um well u cud either curve it round like this, or this, make sure the curve is the same size as the letter itself

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/YFORHELPAGE.jpg

sorry my mouse control is shotty, but yeah try to keep the curve the same size as the rest of the letter

jonowev
10-08-2006, 05:18 AM
im loving that first one&#33;
thanks alot man :D

jonowev
10-08-2006, 05:29 AM
sorry to double post
this is small and quick truth
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/pentag.jpg
ive made your changes. better?

Toyminater
10-08-2006, 06:27 AM
Originally posted by Toyminater@Oct 7 2006, 09:24 AM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/toyminater/000_0015.jpg
The first one.
One of my first handstyles.
It says "Cyph"
Crits?

craftedmydemise
10-08-2006, 07:56 AM
im thinkin about thrownin iin the towel because i practice every day with my book and i dont seem to be gettin any better. plus ive been practicing for 3 months, and when somebody looked through my pictures they liked my friends, who this was his first time doing this, work better. so i dont know what im going to do

revolt92
10-08-2006, 08:36 AM
What do you write?

revolt92
10-08-2006, 08:46 AM
Jonowev:Big improvement looks pretty cool

doan
10-08-2006, 08:51 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Oct 8 2006, 01:06 AM
yeah man&#33; that nice huge improvement from before, see simple looks alot better, nice job, now u just gotta oput some of ur own style into it, try a few things, dont be afaraid to fail, but man thats looking so much better
thanks dood.

jonowev
10-08-2006, 10:59 AM
Originally posted by revolt92@Oct 8 2006, 01:46 PM
Jonowev:Big improvement looks pretty cool
thanks man. ive tried it in marker, and it looks even better :D

WolfBurrns
10-08-2006, 11:53 AM
New tags. First one is pretty simple and I lifted the prisma for each letter. Second tag is one motion. Crits?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture26.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture25.jpg

jonowev
10-08-2006, 12:28 PM
on the first, the E looks like an A. make it more rounded. other than that, the top one rocks
the second is ok
use the top one :)

-testify-
10-08-2006, 01:02 PM
Originally posted by craftedmydemise@Oct 8 2006, 07:56 AM
im thinkin about thrownin iin the towel because i practice every day with my book and i dont seem to be gettin any better. plus ive been practicing for 3 months, and when somebody looked through my pictures they liked my friends, who this was his first time doing this, work better. so i dont know what im going to do
whats that have to do with anything? and yea the top sole one is better but if you took away the stars in the second itd look better

some guy from NCI...
10-08-2006, 01:45 PM
Originally posted by craftedmydemise@Oct 8 2006, 07:56 AM
im thinkin about thrownin iin the towel because i practice every day with my book and i dont seem to be gettin any better. plus ive been practicing for 3 months, and when somebody looked through my pictures they liked my friends, who this was his first time doing this, work better. so i dont know what im going to do
Good... People like you shouldnt bother with graffiti if you&#39;re gonna quit because of that. You act like sketching is a chore, if that&#39;s how it feels to you then dont bother with it...

3 Months aint long... you can&#39;t expect to be pullin wildstyles out your ass instantly.

Fube
10-08-2006, 01:54 PM
^^^i was thinkin the exact same thing. you just beat me to it.

skandal101
10-08-2006, 07:18 PM
crits :lol: http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/2970/1000939gw5.jpg

Parkrider
10-08-2006, 09:38 PM
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4065/parktaggl9.png

any good? This is a mad old one, I havent tagged much recently. Getting back into it now...

gcrolla
10-08-2006, 10:40 PM
skan, i like it but try to make it more readable.
park rider, im not feelin the underline.

and today i did like 50 tags in this bathroom no pic at the moment though. might get a pic soon though.

NOMX
10-08-2006, 11:10 PM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/8288/200609300003gw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
drippy logo&#33;&#33; AHHHHHHHHHH

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 11:15 PM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 8 2006, 04:39 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/tag.jpg

im trying to go simple. you think i should add or change anyhing? and dont tell me to change my name, damn it&#33;
i like the j the a try doing on capital, and the y is allright but bring the ail of it across to go under your j as well it would pul it together and give it that extra simple kick of style try it out and just work on that part...

ion-i
10-08-2006, 11:46 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ionibusstop.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ionitag.jpg
fuck. thats all i got. i thought i had more flicks.. guess not hahaha

NOMX
10-08-2006, 11:52 PM
why didnt u take pictures of my tags beech? or did those mexicans even go over our tags?

ion-i
10-09-2006, 12:22 AM
they did. i fucking hate canals.
the only reason those kids spammed their crossing and IEK everywhere is because they felt safe in a canal and their to pussy to get up on a street.
el o el.

ion-i
10-09-2006, 01:09 AM
where? no. east bay.

FEN the HEN
10-09-2006, 01:48 AM
Originally posted by Bomb the city@Oct 9 2006, 12:46 AM
are we talkin&#39; IEK in Nanaimo? If not my bad :blink:
where you been?&#33;?&#33; :lol:

NOMX
10-09-2006, 01:58 AM
would u really call concord eastbay? thats pretty far :blink:

mr wiggles is kool
10-09-2006, 06:09 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d80/popwar_guy/DSCN6918.jpg

can i get some crits on this please

poepomhoog1
10-09-2006, 07:17 AM
I like the letters except the c....dunno maby place them a bit more together....in general letters look ok but it needs some more flow in my opinion

peace

aha
10-09-2006, 07:37 AM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

T_R_O_N
10-09-2006, 08:36 AM
what does that say? it looks like a bunch of different styles combined, also too much going on in the handstyle dude.

aha
10-09-2006, 08:51 AM
.

AteskOne
10-09-2006, 08:55 AM
ummm....everything. its way to complicated and sloppy. start off with something way more simple that looks as close to generic letters as possible and work from their. in case you didnt understand what im saying i meant it should look like this JUST...more or less

aha
10-09-2006, 09:47 AM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

jonowev
10-09-2006, 09:47 AM
Originally posted by aha@Oct 9 2006, 12:37 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9059/ssa52934pj9.jpg

please crits...

yes...C looks diffrent....I think you better change it... but other letters looks ok..
keep it simple - lose the dots, the star...

EDIT - you beat me to it

aha
10-09-2006, 09:53 AM
.

jonowev
10-09-2006, 09:55 AM
oh god, can I be assed to explain?
i meant that, i posted it, then realised that you had already posted another pic, so edited the post

aha
10-09-2006, 09:58 AM
.

freakshow
10-09-2006, 10:26 AM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9061/tagtagda5.th.jpg (http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagtagda5.jpg)

this is my first tag for this name. i thought it was pretty good but id like someone elses opinion

emokid
10-09-2006, 10:45 AM
im not even going to bother trying to help other people, thats like the blind leading the blind..

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/5/dscn5861rk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

one point i would like to emphasize
i cannot do tags, this is my 3rd one and its horrible.

Hilo
10-09-2006, 10:50 AM
UGLY

phish
10-09-2006, 11:03 AM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/graff007.jpg

this was my first attempt at painting

crits?

emokid
10-09-2006, 11:06 AM
thaaaanks hilo, much appreciated advice :D

WolfBurrns
10-09-2006, 12:18 PM
Phish, that&#39;s actually pretty good. Real clean and simple.

jonowev
10-09-2006, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by phish@Oct 9 2006, 04:03 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/graff007.jpg

this was my first attempt at painting

crits?
nice one phish - what paint you using?
next time, be careful not to make the P look like a D

FEN the HEN
10-09-2006, 01:01 PM
looks like a P to me, its fine

alive
10-09-2006, 01:19 PM
im baaaaaaaaaaack.
from my weekend trip to ohio.
arent u thrilled?


PHISH, it looks good. pull ur letters in together closer, and make em all the same height. and ignore jonowev.


JONOWEV, u talk way too fucking much for your skill level man, sry, but thats the truth. the fuck diff does it make what paint is he using? all the toys here put way to much fucking stress on their paint and their caps. does not make that big of a difference. caps just make fills faster, and expensive paint just speeds or slows things up with pressure, and is better for crossouts n shit b/c it covers other paint more easily.

stop using paint brands and caps as crutches
u know the 12 steps? step #1- admit u have a problem, say it with me

I, jonowev, and other toys of BS, need to admit i am wack, and am solely responsible for the utter shit i put on walls.





sorry for the rant all
peace.

phish
10-09-2006, 01:19 PM
i was using a can of belton

Fube
10-09-2006, 01:25 PM
^^^for tags? id go with the cheap stuff. but to each his own.

WolfBurrns
10-09-2006, 03:47 PM
Still workin on the tag..

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture28.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture27.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture30.jpg

Let me know what ya think..

ToXiK
10-09-2006, 05:31 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/De2rtag.jpg

was going for something just simple.

AteskOne
10-09-2006, 05:44 PM
Originally posted by aha@Oct 9 2006, 09:47 AM
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/7716/ssa52937rx9.jpg

this is better?
muuuuuuch....just keep doing simples like that and you will progress. everyone needs to remember that graffiti takes time. as you improve you will start to move letters in closer, get comfortable with add-ons, and improve the look of your letters. just keep practicing.

-testify-
10-09-2006, 06:36 PM
just ake away the qoutes "just" and fix the s

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3557/rastatagwd5.png

it says pask

T_R_O_N
10-09-2006, 07:42 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1406/1289286936origkm0.jpg
did this in a bathroom stall, got buffed 4 days later =/.

-testify-
10-09-2006, 08:01 PM
ok new rule crit the picture above you before you post a picture

Truth.
10-09-2006, 08:12 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Oct 9 2006, 06:36 PM
just ake away the qoutes "just" and fix the s

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3557/rastatagwd5.png

it says pask
yeah man that is looking so much better, just get the K the same width as the rest of the letters and then u can start playing with addons if u want to

T_R_O_N
10-09-2006, 08:21 PM
oh shit, i forgot to crit =p, pask my bad man, i like it very simple

aces
10-09-2006, 08:25 PM
Pask don&#39;t connect the diagonal part of the A to the circular part of the A but do connect it to the vertical part of the A

-testify-
10-09-2006, 08:59 PM
Originally posted by T_R_O_N@Oct 9 2006, 08:21 PM
oh shit, i forgot to crit =p, pask my bad man, i like it very simple
hey its cool B) i just hate when people skip over mine and trons your is good except how the g goes into the a it just makes it a lil hard to read but the underline thing is cool

T_R_O_N
10-09-2006, 09:07 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;+Oct 9 2006, 08:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-testify- @ Oct 9 2006, 08:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-T_R_O_N@Oct 9 2006, 08:21 PM
oh shit, i forgot to crit =p, pask my bad man, i like it very simple
hey its cool B) i just hate when people skip over mine and trons your is good except how the g goes into the a it just makes it a lil hard to read but the underline thing is cool [/b][/quote]
thanks for the advice, that was a total heated spot lol, saturday night in a movie theater, not to mention like 3 security guards chilling arround the bathroom.

alive
10-09-2006, 09:15 PM
first of all, haha how many times have i tried to make that rule i dont know. no one ever listens. lol

but really, now this is important,

TRON
and
EVERYONE HERE: guys i think were all guilty of this, and its gotta stop. i mean, i do it too. but listen to yourself

"thanks for the advice, that was a total heated spot lol, saturday night in a movie theater, not to mention like 3 security guards chilling arround the bathroom. "

comon man, i dont give a shit where it is, how many security gaurds are taking a piss in the urinal a foot away from you, a bathroom stall is not a fucking heat spot. we gotta get past this mentality, do this shit real.

this game is about taking space guys. when you do ur throws, no matter what, do it BIG. take up the whole fucking wall. thats what this shit is about&#33; dont just do it once. throw your name up 10 times. the fuck is this bathroom stall shit. itl get buffed the next day. its only a tag neway. u know theres no cameras, no ones gonna match you up with the fucking stall ur in. ur surronded by fucking walls. christ

ive done it too. but its gotta stop for all of us.



this shit aint no joke, no game.
if graffiti is gonna be anything less then a way of life for you, theres no point.


peace.