Toy Tagz..only

[glass]

still working on my simples as a whole but i just thought this looked interesting

tell me what you think (i know you guys say don't connect them but it was just something i did by mistake)

http://i14.tinypic.com/33wp8ad.jpg

[G - Wahl]

The L is looking like an H
Get rid of that curve, or dont make it as big

[sheist]

http://i12.tinypic.com/434lthl.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Some quickies
Crits?
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/2420/picture001os7.th.jpg (http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001os7.jpg)

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by glass@Nov 27 2006, 06:19 PM
still working on my simples as a whole but i just thought this looked interesting

tell me what you think (i know you guys say don't connect them but it was just something i did by mistake)

http://i14.tinypic.com/33wp8ad.jpg
i'm not gunna lie man..that things hella ill. im really loving the style and its so unique. the "g" and the "l" could use some work but i'm loving the other letters. try and work on your simples and develope them into that style.

edit* what kinda marker did you use to get that overlap look.

[G - Wahl]

Atesk - It looks like he is writing on one of those Expo boards, those thing are mad ill for practicing your tags. I need to get me one <_<

[glass]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 27 2006, 10:48 PM
Atesk - It looks like he is writing on one of those Expo boards, those thing are mad ill for practicing your tags. I need to get me one <_<
:D yup i am using an expo board, the thing is crazy good for practice. i just noticed the overlap look, heh. thanks for the input, oh yeah and it&#39;s supposed to be an &#39;L&#39; instead of an &#39;i&#39; which i need to work on too.

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Nov 26 2006, 11:25 PM
fuckin round with the name...crits?
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2050/scan0013be4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
edit* forgot to rotate it but imageshack is taking forever so im not even gunna bother fixing it...
crits seeing as people like to post their work without commenting the pic above&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :angry:

[glass]

Originally posted by AteskOne+Nov 27 2006, 10:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ Nov 27 2006, 10:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AteskOne@Nov 26 2006, 11:25 PM
fuckin round with the name...crits?
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2050/scan0013be4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
edit* forgot to rotate it but imageshack is taking forever so im not even gunna bother fixing it...
crits seeing as people like to post their work without commenting the pic above&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :angry: [/b][/quote]
i&#39;m liking the flow of that, it all seems to fit together and not forced like some other stuff i&#39;ve seen. nice.

[sheist]

Originally posted by sheist@Nov 27 2006, 06:58 PM
http://i12.tinypic.com/434lthl.jpg
sorry just trying to get some critisism

[G - Wahl]

Atesk - I would like to see that done with a mop, it would look sick.
Im not really feeling the S though, it seems like its to generic i suppose.

[reivax]

Well, here&#39;s mine...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/extreme%20things/shoop.jpg

Yeah, I&#39;m playing around with it.

[sheist]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 27 2006, 07:30 PM
Some quickies
Crits?
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/2420/picture001os7.th.jpg (http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001os7.jpg)
i&#39;d say try to incorporate something more interesting if you&#39;re gonna go with the arrow. maybe scrunch it some more and bring in some more lines?

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 27 2006, 11:04 PM
Atesk - I would like to see that done with a mop, it would look sick.
Im not really feeling the S though, it seems like its to generic i suppose.
thanks man...i gotta go buy a new kiwi cause the nib on mine is all fucked up. but once i do i&#39;ll be sure to post some pics of it up. ya i&#39;ve kinda been doin the same "s" for a while so i&#39;ve gotten pretty used to it. i can try playing around with it a little tho. thanks for the crits.

[sheist]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/waterwingsend/11-27-06_2208.jpg

just wrote this one up

[Tagger101]

^^^ not bad unless you copy pasted from google
I dont have pics of mine but its my name ( "STYLZ" ) with spray fog in the backround with a dropped can on the bottom

thats my peice work one

[westce]

^^^Lemme guess, your super duper tagger crews called AllCityKings too huh&#33;?

[Once!]

Originally posted by reivax@Nov 27 2006, 11:05 PM
Well, here&#39;s mine...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/extreme%20things/shoop.jpg

Yeah, I&#39;m playing around with it.
Damn dude, no offense but you need a lot more practice. Just practice a lot and look around for ideas to add to your own style.

[etch a sketch]

Tagger why dont u get pics of your tag so you prove your not all talk

[glass]

Originally posted by glass@Nov 27 2006, 06:19 PM
still working on my simples as a whole but i just thought this looked interesting

tell me what you think (i know you guys say don&#39;t connect them but it was just something i did by mistake)

http://i14.tinypic.com/33wp8ad.jpg
bump

any more crit?

[fitzy5814]

Originally posted by Once&#33;+Nov 28 2006, 05:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Once&#33; @ Nov 28 2006, 05:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-reivax@Nov 27 2006, 11:05 PM
Well, here&#39;s mine...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/extreme%20things/shoop.jpg

Yeah, I&#39;m playing around with it.
Damn dude, no offense but you need a lot more practice. Just practice a lot and look around for ideas to add to your own style. [/b][/quote]
oh my lord.
its a monstrosity lol
anyways thatsnot really a tag either.

[revolt92]

Reivax: Oh my days i thought mine was bad but thats a whole new level, im honestly not trying to be mean but danm you need more practice.

Look at other peoples then you will realise what im talking about.

[Myth]

Here&#39;s my tag, Im a toy only been taging 2 month. Comments... :unsure: My Tag (http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p206/myth1111/4.jpg)

[fitzy5814]

Originally posted by Myth@Nov 28 2006, 03:42 PM
Here&#39;s my tag, Im a toy only been taging 2 month. Comments... :unsure: My Tag (http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p206/myth1111/4.jpg)
it looks like metaw?
what does it say then i can give crits.
its either metaw or myth?

[Myth]

Its metaw. It started as meter... Then it eventually changed to metaw. What do you think? :unsure:

[fitzy5814]

I actualy like it,
the only problem i see is the extension on the T
can throw off some people

[Myth]

Thanks. :)

[Soze One.]

Originally posted by Soze One.@Nov 26 2006, 05:22 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/2a9a4b47fb74.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/0755ac8322bd-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/964b65ba6160.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/6e58febfda7d.jpg
crits?

[illin]

Originally posted by Once&#33;+Nov 28 2006, 05:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Once&#33; @ Nov 28 2006, 05:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-reivax@Nov 27 2006, 11:05 PM
Well, here&#39;s mine...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/extreme%20things/shoop.jpg

Yeah, I&#39;m playing around with it.
Damn dude, no offense but you need a lot more practice. Just practice a lot and look around for ideas to add to your own style. [/b][/quote]
it almost looks like you have enough trouble printing clearly. were you drunk or something when you wrote that? and... not to diss your tag... well... okay shoop is one of the wackest tags i&#39;ve ever heard of.

[glass]

Originally posted by illin+Nov 28 2006, 06:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (illin @ Nov 28 2006, 06:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Once&#33;@Nov 28 2006, 05:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-reivax@Nov 27 2006, 11:05 PM
Well, here&#39;s mine...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/extreme%20things/shoop.jpg

Yeah, I&#39;m playing around with it.
Damn dude, no offense but you need a lot more practice. Just practice a lot and look around for ideas to add to your own style.
it almost looks like you have enough trouble printing clearly. were you drunk or something when you wrote that? and... not to diss your tag... well... okay shoop is one of the wackest tags i&#39;ve ever heard of. [/b][/quote]
just curious but how old are you shoop?

[Once!]

Hopefully shoop is young so he still has a lot of time to get better.

[Haz-E]

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/498/dropgd6.png
BUMP FOR CRITZ PLZ :P

[5yn]

Originally posted by 5yn@Nov 27 2006, 04:32 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2071.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2076.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2077.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2080.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2081.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2082.jpg
bump for crits please

[glass]

5yn: i&#39;m liking the flow of the piece, nice and fluid throughout

[5yn]

thanks man but i think i need work on my o haha i looks like an e anyone have tips how to do a one liner o?

[ARMAwonR]

Originally posted by glass@Nov 28 2006, 09:50 PM
5yn: i&#39;m liking the flow of the piece, nice and fluid throughout
... what piece? :huh:

[Feliks]

why is si suppsoed to say tome? or Tomo? Or what? I saw a sick tome in europe when I visited.
PS: Help? My handy needs work...
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9139/img0008ms1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Feliks]

augh.

[Feliks]

Fuck triple posts.

[reivax]

Originally posted by glass
just curious but how old are you shoop?
I&#39;m only 16.

[Haz-E]

16 boss ur late im 15 and i suck but yo

REVAX u first gotta LOOK AT GRAFFITI
STUDY GRAFFITI
PRACTICE GRAFFITI < mAIN PART OF GETTING BETTER
DO GRAFFITI :D

AND U NEVER GET WORSE

JUST PRACTICE DUDEY
---------------------------------------

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9139/img0008ms1.jpg
YO JADE WHAT I LIKE UR "A" MAN DAT TING LOOKING NICE JUST ATACH IT AND MAKE IT FLOW

[coke831]

i know a kid my age and tags just like "shoop", but his stuff is everywhere everone just thinks its original, there is also a guy who writes yes in cersive(sp?). but ya just practice

[RoEbot]

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3780/dsc00909jl3.jpg
says havok
crits?

[.KROWN.]

ay i need some tips homies...I did this the computer, but this is basically what mine looks like.

http://file024.bebo.com/11/drawinglarge/2006/11/29/11/266087286a2684848907b116270348l.gif


I just started while back, and I need some pointers...what not to do, what looks wack, what Ive got too much of, what I&#39;m missing....any feedback is welcome =).


Ima just keep practising till it looks dope.

[Haz-E]

YO KROWN DUDEY LOOK AT OTHER TAGS AND LOOK AT OTHER PEOPLES LETTERS AND TRY AND MIMICK THERE LETTERS GET THE FLOW GOING AND BAM U GOTTA TAG

[DJLotus]

Originally posted by RoEbot@Nov 29 2006, 12:33 AM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3780/dsc00909jl3.jpg
says havok
crits?
No offense... but you want a tip? Make it readable. The letters are so smushed together I honestly couldn&#39;t tell what the hell it said until you told me.... Change the H (it looks like an N), plus the H and the A together make it look like an M, and if you&#39;re trying to make it so it flows down like stairs, then try to atleast do it somewhat proportional. the HAV are almost directly straight up, and then for no reason once you get to the OK they are on their side... hope that helps a little?

[KrucialSkills]

Jade http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9139/img0008ms1.jpg

On your hand, you gotta pick a way of doing it with a consistent style in all the letters and then practice and practice and practice until it becomes a motion and has nothing to do with letters. Your first tag flows better than the rest but simple stuff like completing the circle above the J will make your shitl look nicer/less toy. On some other shit to step your game up, whatever marker you&#39;re using...a broad tipped pilot or OTR, you need to unscrew the cap and put some rubbing alcohol in that bitch cause I can see it&#39;s drying out. Let it sit nib side down for a while and cap your marker tight after you use it...goodluck. If I were you I&#39;d work on that D and E, J is pretty original and that A has some style so try and give the D and the E the same look.

[Once!]

Originally posted by reivax+Nov 28 2006, 10:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (reivax &#064; Nov 28 2006, 10:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-glass
just curious but how old are you shoop?
I&#39;m only 16. [/b][/quote]
Thats not too old, I sucked when I started(still suck) when I was around 19 or 20, now that is probably too old.

[glass]

Originally posted by ARMAwonR+Nov 28 2006, 10:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ARMAwonR @ Nov 28 2006, 10:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-glass@Nov 28 2006, 09:50 PM
5yn: i&#39;m liking the flow of the piece, nice and fluid throughout
... what piece? :huh: [/b][/quote]
his tag obviously

[c0ld]

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/6213/imag0009ok8.th.jpg

srry bout the lighting. this is kinda my first real effort.

says ohm.

[ghozt]

im not good at givin critz but y dont u make the o an o and the h an h and so on... dont connect ur letters but thts just me :D

[glass]

Originally posted by c0ld@Nov 29 2006, 09:18 PM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/6213/imag0009ok8.th.jpg

srry bout the lighting. this is kinda my first real effort.

says ohm.
sorry i&#39;d give my two cents but i can&#39;t see the picture clearly. just looks red with a little outline of the letters that i can&#39;t make out.

[c0ld]

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1973/imag0010nq7.jpg

there.

[.KROWN.]

Originally posted by .KROWN.@Nov 29 2006, 06:10 AM
ay i need some tips homies...I did this the computer, but this is basically what mine looks like.

http://file024.bebo.com/11/drawinglarge/2006/11/29/11/266087286a2684848907b116270348l.gif


I just started while back, and I need some pointers...what not to do, what looks wack, what Ive got too much of, what I&#39;m missing....any feedback is welcome =).


Ima just keep practising till it looks dope.
BUMP&#33;

[Tonk]

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5223/5bv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5433/3ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4552/4os6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dont know made it like 40 mins ago i wanted a k but i suck at k&#39;s in this style so any help with a k would be coo



i like the r on the second the most ok ocd sorry crits?

[Oink.]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 24 2006, 07:18 PM
I don&#39;t really know how long it took me to develop that... I guess a year, since that&#39;s how long I&#39;ve been writing?

And ****, shaddup, my shit is consistent and I think my letters and size are decent... Well my size may not be equal on each letter but once you get better you can start breaking rules and it looks better starting off short, peaking then going back down again... Guess and check for a LOOOONG time led to that... Just write your name over and over again and you&#39;ll get it eventually.
dont ask for crits if your going to tell me to shut up nd bitch about honesty.

[Oink.]

Originally posted by Tonk@Nov 30 2006, 04:35 AM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5223/5bv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5433/3ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4552/4os6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dont know made it like 40 mins ago i wanted a k but i suck at k&#39;s in this style so any help with a k would be coo



i like the r on the second the most ok ocd sorry crits?
honestly man, work on your letters like mad.

[Tonk]

ha, really i thought it was ok but if you say ight

[in_the_red]

Tonk, I can read the B and the R but nothing else... Maybe you should try and make your letters the same size to begin with, so the emphasis is not just on a couple of letters, but all of them. I really like the B though.


Crits on my new one please?
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2959/sketchamy01py9.jpg

[RoEbot]

Originally posted by DJLotus+Nov 29 2006, 08:25 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DJLotus @ Nov 29 2006, 08:25 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-RoEbot@Nov 29 2006, 12:33 AM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3780/dsc00909jl3.jpg
says havok
crits?
No offense... but you want a tip? Make it readable. The letters are so smushed together I honestly couldn&#39;t tell what the hell it said until you told me.... Change the H (it looks like an N), plus the H and the A together make it look like an M, and if you&#39;re trying to make it so it flows down like stairs, then try to atleast do it somewhat proportional. the HAV are almost directly straight up, and then for no reason once you get to the OK they are on their side... hope that helps a little? [/b][/quote]
yeah man word, people been tellin me for a long time that i need to fix that H, but the shit is, i can&#39;t seem to find a way to make a tag i do as fast as that, i can scibble that accross some delivery(sp?) truck in under 2 seconds, but whereas all the other tags ive tried take alot longer
suggestions?

[c0ld]

Originally posted by c0ld@Nov 29 2006, 10:04 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1973/imag0010nq7.jpg

there.
bump

crits? :)

[Oink.]

Originally posted by Tonk@Nov 30 2006, 04:56 AM
ha, really i thought it was ok but if you say ight
naw man, needs work keep sketchin&#39; ya will get it down.

[enMy]

aight heres my tag. im still debatin my name to be enMy or enemy idk tell me what u think.


http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/196/enmyxm7.th.png (http://img107.imageshack.us/my.php?image=enmyxm7.png)

[glass]

Originally posted by enMy@Nov 30 2006, 03:08 PM
aight heres my tag. im still debatin my name to be enMy or enemy idk tell me what u think.


http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/196/enmyxm7.th.png (http://img107.imageshack.us/my.php?image=enmyxm7.png)
too much weird stuff going on ie. extensions and arrows. work more on the letters and then once you have that down try again. exactly the same thing i did, my first tag looked like that. i thought it was good then but even after a few weeks i see how crappy it was.

[Tonk]

Originally posted by ****.+Nov 30 2006, 02:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (****. @ Nov 30 2006, 02:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Tonk@Nov 30 2006, 04:56 AM
ha, really i thought it was ok but if you say ight
naw man, needs work keep sketchin&#39; ya will get it down. [/b][/quote]
yeah its just a new thing but yeah im not new at this but what can i do to make this one better i know the I is all fucked up and i like the b a lot but what eves what can i do

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by in_the_red@Nov 30 2006, 05:19 AM
Tonk, I can read the B and the R but nothing else... Maybe you should try and make your letters the same size to begin with, so the emphasis is not just on a couple of letters, but all of them. I really like the B though.


Crits on my new one please?
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2959/sketchamy01py9.jpg
Bump for crits.

[Tonk]

what the fuck is bump?


http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4901/5rn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[d_g]

Bump is used to &#39;bump&#39; your picture so that it will be seen and given crits, something you obviously don&#39;t know how to do.

It&#39;s etiquette around here to crit the person above you before posting your own shit, especially since in_the_red gave you advice before.

[Tonk]

ok, and i know he gave me advice and thank you for that but any more advice?

[Truth.]

doin a mates name + practicing handies crits

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/same-1.jpg

[beone]

crits please on the handstyles not the throw up that is quickly and shitty done

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/258795.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/260105.jpg

[Fosale!]

shaky lines are ugly.

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by Tonk@Nov 30 2006, 06:19 PM
ok, and i know he gave me advice and thank you for that but any more advice?
I have a vagina. But you&#39;re welcome anyway.

[steez_b]

still tryin to decide a name n improve my handstyle
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/sheka_sketch.jpg
critisism please

[in_the_red]

You&#39;re supposed to crit someone else&#39;s before you put your own up for critiques...

[DJLotus]

Originally posted by steez_b@Nov 30 2006, 09:03 PM
still tryin to decide a name n improve my handstyle
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/sheka_sketch.jpg
critisism please
take off the star and quotes crap... you don&#39;t need that shit. i like it, but the first letter needs to be a little more defined.... its an s though, right? other than the S and the e which looks like a tiny squished letter... i like it, nice flow, readable....

[steez_b]

Originally posted by in_the_red@Nov 30 2006, 09:15 PM
You&#39;re supposed to crit someone else&#39;s before you put your own up for critiques...
huh? why would that matter at all man, im just gettin into taggin n shit n wanted some criticism, chill

[DJLotus]

well then you got some crits?

[Tonk]

Originally posted by in_the_red+Nov 30 2006, 08:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (in_the_red @ Nov 30 2006, 08:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Tonk@Nov 30 2006, 06:19 PM
ok, and i know he gave me advice and thank you for that but any more advice?
I have a vagina. But you&#39;re welcome anyway. [/b][/quote]
ha sorry, didnt know but any more help?

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by steez_b+Nov 30 2006, 10:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (steez_b @ Nov 30 2006, 10:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-in_the_red@Nov 30 2006, 09:15 PM
You&#39;re supposed to crit someone else&#39;s before you put your own up for critiques...
huh? why would that matter at all man, im just gettin into taggin n shit n wanted some criticism, chill [/b][/quote]
It&#39;s just ettiquite. Heaps of people post their pics up and not enough people give crits, that&#39;s all. I&#39;m not having a go at you or anything haha.

[steez_b]

yeah my mistake i forgot to say thanks lotus, and i can see where youre comin from in_the_red, ill know for next time now i just dont feel im good enough to be critisizing other peoples work yet is all

[210]

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9241/stickerkv5.jpg
crits please

[Billburg]

Steez_b- i cant realy read it but i got Shoeka out of it?



Crits, on tag worked it out a lilttle bit better (i think)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep008.jpg

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by Tonk+Nov 30 2006, 10:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Tonk @ Nov 30 2006, 10:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by in_the_red@Nov 30 2006, 08:48 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Tonk@Nov 30 2006, 06:19 PM
ok, and i know he gave me advice and thank you for that but any more advice?
I have a vagina. But you&#39;re welcome anyway.
ha sorry, didnt know but any more help? [/b][/quote]
Haha it&#39;s all good. Nah I dunno if I can help you any more unless you put a new pic up.

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by Billburg@Nov 30 2006, 10:52 PM
Crits, on tag worked it out a lilttle bit better (i think)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep008.jpg
Maybe try and write it faster... It looks like your hand was shaking. Also, I&#39;d make the letters the same size for now.

[Hot_Pocket]

Originally posted by Billburg@Nov 30 2006, 10:52 PM
Steez_b- i cant realy read it but i got Shoeka out of it?



Crits, on tag worked it out a lilttle bit better (i think)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep008.jpg
Snap, right? First get rid of that arrow on your P. And I find a tag looks better without jagged lines unless you know how to work &#39;em right. Just try to smooth them out and your golden.

[Billburg]

yeah dude i know there really shakey and i&#39;ll try it with out the arrow on the P

[-testify-]

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3057/guyff4.png
ignore the shit on the sides

[AteskOne]

sorry i couldnt ignore the shit on the sides...is that a boob in the right corner??? anways i like the tag alot. way to keep it simple. jus keep practicing/ that&#39;s all the advice i can give seeing as your already headed in the right direction.

[-testify-]

haha no it&#39;s part of a s that i accidently took a pic of

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by in_the_red@Nov 30 2006, 05:19 AM

Crits on my new one please?
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2959/sketchamy01py9.jpg
Bumping for crits.

[210]

can some 1 plz crit on my tag(dos one)

[nemzone]

its not a tag m8, its about as simple handwriting as there is :blink:

[G - Wahl]

Skye - I actully like that alot. That flow is so nice, you should try to connect the bottom tail of the S into the K.

DosOne - Not bad, very clean and simple. Keep it up, try to tweak it more ;)

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 30 2006, 11:36 PM
Skye - I actully like that alot. That flow is so nice, you should try to connect the bottom tail of the S into the K.

Cheers.... Anyone else? :)

[nemzone]

im feelin the top un

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by 210@Nov 30 2006, 10:50 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9241/stickerkv5.jpg
crits please
It&#39;s good that you&#39;re keeping it nice and simple and not adding heaps of crap like arrows haha. I can&#39;t say I really have any suggestions... Just keep practising.

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 30 2006, 11:46 PM
im feelin the top un
Thank you.

[-testify-]

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/347/badlt8.png
fucked up the s

[Billburg]

Testify- Def like the second one looks like it flows good...

[-testify-]

yea i fucked up on both ill have betters ones later

[Truth.]

Originally posted by Truth.@Nov 30 2006, 06:58 PM
doin a mates name (hestolemyoldname) + practicing handies crits

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/same-1.jpg
b?

[d_g]

Dos One, I like that. The &#39;Dos&#39; part is nice and simple, the &#39;n&#39; is a little too sharp to fit with the rest of the letters.

Truth, it&#39;s nice, maybe make the &#39;S&#39; and the &#39;E&#39; kinda symmetrical, I&#39;m a whore for symmetry. The top of the &#39;A&#39; needs to be rounded off IMO.

[lead(followmy)]

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o43/baba_039/01122006.jpg

need some help lol as can b ceen london born and bread

[playdo]

bump

[lead(followmy)]

word "bump"

[aeon]

skye yrs is nice
like the link from the y to the e
reckon ou could start addin a bit more decoration to it, you seem to have a flow down...

anyways what ya thinkin of these people? URK...

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/3053/dsc00142bn0.jpg
this ones kinda old...

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/3540/dsc00282wo9.jpg
mi current style...

[lead(followmy)]

Originally posted by lead(followmy)@Dec 1 2006, 05:30 AM
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o43/baba_039/01122006.jpg

need some help lol as can b ceen london born and bread
nice style...reminds me of japaneese writin but ure letters r startin 2 dispapear lol...yes i am bumpin maself got ne pointers??

[aeon]

id say lose the extensions on the r n n and space yr letter a little closer...
also if yr gonna andgle letters i reckon its better to start with them slanting the asme way...

[Billburg]

Aeon- a lil hard to read but i like it exspecily the second one.

worked on it a lilttle..... Critz

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep009.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Snap, get rid of that curve at the top of the A. And get rid of that little extention on the end of the N.

[-testify-]

Originally posted by aeon@Dec 1 2006, 12:07 PM
skye yrs is nice
like the link from the y to the e
reckon ou could start addin a bit more decoration to it, you seem to have a flow down...

anyways what ya thinkin of these people? URK...

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/3053/dsc00142bn0.jpg
this ones kinda old...

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/3540/dsc00282wo9.jpg
mi current style...
LOVE these

[glass]

Originally posted by Billburg@Dec 1 2006, 12:47 PM
Aeon- a lil hard to read but i like it exspecily the second one.

worked on it a lilttle..... Critz

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep009.jpg
try writing you name wicked fast a few times, don&#39;t hesitate on letters. at first things can get a little weird doing this, but just try it for an experiment. see what you end up with doing it that way then go back over and look at them. see what you can do to make the letters flow a little better and be more clear or clean.

[Eskimo33]

I agree with Glass. Get a piece of lined looseleaf paper. Write you name as fast as you can as many times as possible until you find something you like. And then tweak that into perfection. Take your time and have patience.

[-testify-]

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/4315/tag3zy0.png
snap make ALL the letters the same size

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by aeon@Dec 1 2006, 12:07 PM
skye yrs is nice
like the link from the y to the e
reckon ou could start addin a bit more decoration to it, you seem to have a flow down...

anyways what ya thinkin of these people? URK...

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/3053/dsc00142bn0.jpg
this ones kinda old...

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/3540/dsc00282wo9.jpg
mi current style...
Cheers. I kinda like the one without the link from the y to e but yeah, I dunno...

Yours look good but the S in the top one doesn&#39;t fit with the rest of the letters. I really like the style of them though.

[-testify-]

urk make your lowercase r look not so much like an n and make the top one&#39;s s fit the style
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6088/tag4mi7.png

[shamee1991]

yh that style has potentual&#33;

[SCOPE2]

eihh, im a toy and ive started to write abaut 2-3 years ago, and ive always had the tag SCOPE,but theres another scope, waht do i do to get his aproval to keep my tag?
il post some shit i did right now
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/scan.jpg (http://photobucket.com/)

[SCOPE2]

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/scan.jpg

[-testify-]

Originally posted by shamee1991@Dec 1 2006, 07:48 PM
yh that style has potentual&#33;
mine or urks

[Truth.]

what a waste of good stickers&#33; make letters same width/height and draw on paper.&#33;

[Stevie]

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9445/freevx0.jpg

[d_g]

The &#39;F&#39; and first &#39;e&#39; are nice, the other letters need a little work.

[trashhh]

Originally posted by SCOPE2@Dec 1 2006, 08:49 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/scan.jpg
REALLY dont start doin a lot of stickers until you hav a good bomb. and dont color in the &#39;hello&#39; thing it looks so stupid

[ras]

S&#39;cope 2 .. haha ;) anyways...

lose the drips..work on the S...mek the letters the same size...

[shamee1991]

scope u need to start wid block letters and learn the letter stucture

[emokid]

http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/6080/dscn6066wo2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
do i need help or not with this, it says pear, do any of them have potential?
free, if you fix the r (dont know how) it would look better not that it doesnt look good now...

[Stevie]

yeah i&#39;m working on it, thanks

[aeon]

llokin good pear. watch the stays readable though...
like the middle letters the best....

[bouncingsoul]

emokid that looks great but work on that R a little and it&#39;d be sick... It&#39;s readable just fine to me...?

[-testify-]

Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Dec 1 2006, 06:49 PM
urk make your lowercase r look not so much like an n and make the top one&#39;s s fit the style
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6088/tag4mi7.png
crits?...

[Torrent]

Originally posted by SCOPE2@Dec 1 2006, 08:49 PM
eihh, im a toy and ive started to write abaut 2-3 years ago, and ive always had the tag SCOPE,but theres another scope, waht do i do to get his aproval to keep my tag?
il post some shit i did right now
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/scan.jpg (http://photobucket.com/)
You started to write two years ago? Damn man. You sure? You should have gotton much better then where youre at. Just keep doing simples and block letters.

[-testify-]

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/4315/tag3zy0.png

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/tags/STA40667.jpg

[revolt92]

testify:looks cool mabey take off the thing coming off the s , thats all i can think of right now.
trash: mabey its the lighting but its quite hard to make out the a and the s, i kinda had to stare for a bit before i saw it but mabey thats just my eyesight.

[SCOPE2]

how do u do block letters?

[Truth.]

Trash, what were you using to do that tag? It looks like you put some paint on a rag and tried to wipe it on....

Crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/BENCHBATTLE.jpg

[kemzone]

me and a few friends, i changed my name to SEAO
http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/5008/nycgraffiti317xd5.jpg
http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/9026/nycgraffiti320od2.jpg
http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/78/nycgraffiti304wb0.jpg
yeah i scribbled my old one out in this haha
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/9015/nycgraffiti305lh0.jpg
http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/6264/nycgraffiti306cv9.jpg

[kemzone]

Truth, you should connect the end of the H in the first one to the arrow, and work on the flow of your letters.

[Prism]

kemzone, I like the all of them except the 4th one, I dunno if it&#39;s just me but I hate how the double lines in each letter looks

Ok I&#39;m testing out ideas, this is simply pen and paper, just tell me what&#39;s wrong with it.

[NjZ]

CRITS PLEASE? :D

http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/5274/image00004wc8.th.jpg (http://img342.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image00004wc8.jpg)

[DJLotus]

the quotes, line under it, and arrow under it, are not needed at all. as far as the actual tag goes, its not bad or anything, kinda simple though. looks pretty good keep at it. do it another 200 times and take a picture and post it up here =)

[NjZ]

should be fixed thanks bro

[NjZ]

Originally posted by DJLotus@Dec 2 2006, 07:20 PM
the quotes, line under it, and arrow under it, are not needed at all. as far as the actual tag goes, its not bad or anything, kinda simple though. looks pretty good keep at it. do it another 200 times and take a picture and post it up here =)
thanks alot yo i appreciate it

[glass]

i&#39;m liking that &#39;n&#39; Njz, but try making that &#39;z&#39; flow a little more.

alright i just did some tell me what you guys think, i like the one on the top left the most.

http://i16.tinypic.com/29dehy1.jpg

[kemzone]

Originally posted by Prism@Dec 2 2006, 06:20 PM
kemzone, I like the all of them except the 4th one, I dunno if it&#39;s just me but I hate how the double lines in each letter looks


thanks, the one with the double lines in each letter is my friend DOOS, and he usually doesn&#39;t do that, it was a last minute thing, but i&#39;ll tell him =]

[kemzone]

oh shit i forgot one
me and ARIES incase you couldn&#39;t read, he&#39;s a sloppy ass motherfucker haha
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3528/nycgraffiti319ox1.jpg

[NjZ]

thanks glass.. keep ur work up man shits hot

[emokid]

Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 2 2006, 05:59 PM
Trash, what were you using to do that tag? It looks like you put some paint on a rag and tried to wipe it on....

Crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/BENCHBATTLE.jpg
truth i think the bottom h would look better on the top one, just my opinion, looks really nice though.

[kemzone]

glass-the one on the top right is the best

[Prism]

http://hosted.picturehost.co.uk/prism%20002.jpg

Now I need crits, dunno what happened with the weird fading on the "i" "s" and "m", sharpie chisel fucked up i guess :P

[kemzone]

hmm...make the P as big as the other letters, if anything you don&#39;t want the first letter to be bigger than the others. i don&#39;t really like the I and M, you should change those up a little; don&#39;t curve the I and take the last extention off the M.

[Prism]

Alright thanks man. I tried 3 different styles with even letters this time. I think I like the 3rd one best.

http://hosted.picturehost.co.uk/prism%20003.jpg

[DJLotus]

the third one is the best but keep all the letters the same size, and do something with that m, it doesn&#39;t flow at all. Put the R from the second one on it, and make the S top half a little bigger with the bottom half a little smaller. if any of that makes sense, do it. if it doesn&#39;t then just ignore this post =)

[-testify-]

turth bottom h is better
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6088/tag4mi7.png

[Prism]

Originally posted by DJLotus@Dec 2 2006, 08:27 PM
the third one is the best but keep all the letters the same size, and do something with that m, it doesn&#39;t flow at all. Put the R from the second one on it, and make the S top half a little bigger with the bottom half a little smaller. if any of that makes sense, do it. if it doesn&#39;t then just ignore this post =)
Thanks for the crits man, I&#39;m gonna probably change the whole thing except the word :P. But yeah I agree that the m doesnt flow, I have no idea how to add it in well.

[SCOPE2]

what are block letters

[aces]

You fuckin serious?

Make the letters look like a block.

It&#39;s better to do it like keyboard letters. Say you write "video", Sketch like this.

VIDEO

but widen the letters a lot.

[kemzone]

looking better prism, keep workin with it

[glass]

Originally posted by SCOPE2@Dec 2 2006, 08:42 PM
what are block letters
go type something in microsoft word and then change the font to &#39;impact&#39; and then sketch that many, many times and you&#39;ll get it.

[reivax]

I&#39;m experimenting with block letters currently.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/shoop2.jpg

What do y&#39;all think?

[DJLotus]

Originally posted by reivax@Dec 2 2006, 09:40 PM
I&#39;m experimenting with block letters currently.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/shoop2.jpg

What do y&#39;all think?
use a ruler until you can get a smoother hand. Also, if you make a bottom line and a top line, you will actually develop some proportion.

[glass]

Originally posted by reivax@Dec 2 2006, 09:40 PM
I&#39;m experimenting with block letters currently.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/shoop2.jpg

What do y&#39;all think?
forget those, do simples. lots, and lots of simples. then you should start looking more at other styles.

[SCOPE2]

thats block letters are you kidding me, im far ahead of that kind of letters, i just need to learn the bubily and i need to make a new &#39;s&#39; because i cant write scope al the same size

[glass]

Originally posted by SCOPE2@Dec 2 2006, 10:06 PM
thats block letters are you kidding me, im far ahead of that kind of letters, i just need to learn the bubily and i need to make a new &#39;s&#39; because i cant write scope al the same size
uh... good for you...

you sould try constructive crits more then just talking about yourself, no offense meant though dude.

[SCOPE2]

yeah i posted a piece, the comments were pritty harsh and so i decided to change the whole style up

[glass]

Originally posted by glass@Dec 2 2006, 07:28 PM
i&#39;m liking that &#39;n&#39; Njz, but try making that &#39;z&#39; flow a little more.

alright i just did some tell me what you guys think, i like the one on the top left the most.

http://i16.tinypic.com/29dehy1.jpg
bump

[Cy-anide]

my tags arent fancy and i do them the way i do on purpose until i learn to develope my own handstyle

im open to constructive critiism

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/IMG00386.jpg

[Natural Mystic]

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture258.jpg


http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/pic3.jpg

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/pic1.jpg

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/boobs.jpg
HAHHAHAHA TITS&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
comments, critcisms, suggestions?

[Natural Mystic]

Originally posted by Cy&#045;anide@Dec 2 2006, 10:47 PM
my tags arent fancy and i do them the way i do on purpose until i learn to develope my own handstyle

im open to constructive critiism

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/IMG00386.jpg
just put ur letters together more, most hitups are done in one sipple one stroke meaning ur marker or can or whatever never is off the object till ur done writing on it like cursive kinda i dunno, its mad smart of u to start out basic so people get the name then watch it get more detailed from there
keep it up chief

[gcrolla]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4818/trirailtag1wb8.th.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=trirailtag1wb8.jpg)

i messed up on it cause i was really rushed so dont critique the size of letters, click it to see it bigger.

[Cy-anide]

Originally posted by Natural Mystic+Dec 2 2006, 11:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Natural Mystic @ Dec 2 2006, 11:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Cy&#045;anide@Dec 2 2006, 10:47 PM
my tags arent fancy and i do them the way i do on purpose until i learn to develope my own handstyle

im open to constructive critiism

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/IMG00386.jpg
just put ur letters together more, most hitups are done in one sipple one stroke meaning ur marker or can or whatever never is off the object till ur done writing on it like cursive kinda i dunno, its mad smart of u to start out basic so people get the name then watch it get more detailed from there
keep it up chief [/b][/quote]
k thanks i already thought about putting them like that but im afraid the letters im using arent gonna look good connected :unsure:

[DJLotus]

thats what paper is for =)

[Sluts_r_us]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/120206_2202.jpg

jus some shit from 2nites bombing section...hit a couple roofs n shit...no cameraother then my fone or i would have mad flicks...open to your opinions

[aces]

I&#39;m likin it but what&#39;s happening on the top of the S and the K

[aces]

Originally posted by reivax@Dec 2 2006, 10:40 PM
I&#39;m experimenting with block letters currently.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/shoop2.jpg

What do y&#39;all think?
Are you smokin a shit load or can you just not keep your hand still?

[Sluts_r_us]

top of the s...idk....but the like on the k is a 1...i was standin on some handrail leading to a basement to some building...

[aces]

Got it. Still nice though. Real simple and really stylie.

[Sluts_r_us]

i like my other handy better but didnt feel like takin a bunch of flix on my fone so ill go back n get em...

[aces]

sweet. ill post some tomorrow

[Sluts_r_us]

ill probly get mine next weekend if i go back but w.e. ill have mad pics of throws..

[steez_b]

Originally posted by aces+Dec 2 2006, 11:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Dec 2 2006, 11:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-reivax@Dec 2 2006, 10:40 PM
I&#39;m experimenting with block letters currently.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v719/TMNTguy/shoop2.jpg

What do y&#39;all think?
Are you smokin a shit load or can you just not keep your hand still? [/b][/quote]
man how old are you? cause I definitely had better block letters than that in grade 2 :| dead serious man

[isurvivedabortion]

I ATE YOUR GRANDPARENTS WITH MUSTARD

[steez_b]

another tag i tried out

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/Meka_tag_curve1.jpg

edit: i realize i shoiuldnt have made the top left extension an arrow btw

[inkbits]

steez_b: When using a chisel it&#39;s usually best to keep lines running wide vertically. Cross of the A and slash underneath should be thin really to maintain flow. On a good track though.

isurvivedabortion: stick to masturbation.

[steez_b]

yeah you&#39;re right thanks man

[in_the_red]

Originally posted by Prism@Dec 2 2006, 07:50 PM
http://hosted.picturehost.co.uk/prism%20002.jpg

Now I need crits, dunno what happened with the weird fading on the "i" "s" and "m", sharpie chisel fucked up i guess :P
Hey Prism, I have this book called Graffiti World and in it there&#39;s this guy who writes Prism, he&#39;s pretty good... Maybe you should check that out before you keep writing Prism? Just a thought.

[shamee1991]

maybe it is him&#33;&#33;&#33;

[glass]

Originally posted by glass@Dec 2 2006, 07:28 PM
i&#39;m liking that &#39;n&#39; Njz, but try making that &#39;z&#39; flow a little more.

alright i just did some tell me what you guys think, i like the one on the top left the most.

http://i16.tinypic.com/29dehy1.jpg
bump

[kemzone]

Originally posted by kemzone@Dec 2 2006, 07:41 PM

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3528/nycgraffiti319ox1.jpg
any more criiiiticism on this one? i am SEAO

[kemzone]

Originally posted by steez_b@Dec 3 2006, 12:35 AM
another tag i tried out

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/Meka_tag_curve1.jpg

edit: i realize i shoiuldnt have made the top left extension an arrow btw
i reallly like this one

[-testify-]

Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Dec 2 2006, 08:29 PM
turth bottom h is better
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6088/tag4mi7.png
good enough to paint? :blink:

[shamee1991]

any tagg is good enough to paint. it just to show everyone ur name and who u are,

[Red3]

Crits svp.

http://www.terminus1525.ca/files/artwork/art-41879.jpg <_<

[Billburg]

Red3- dosen&#39;t look like it flows to well.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/Untitled_0028_0001.jpg


Crits.

[glass]

Originally posted by Billburg@Dec 3 2006, 05:53 PM
Red3- dosen&#39;t look like it flows to well.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/Untitled_0028_0001.jpg


Crits.
flow looks a little &#39;forced&#39; if you get what i mean. try playing around with capitals and lower case letters and see if anything happens. just my opinion though you could leave it the way it is.

[Red3]

I&#39;d lose the four corners thing, my main problem for mine was the m.

[NjZ]

Originally posted by Red3@Dec 3 2006, 06:06 PM
I&#39;d lose the four corners thing, my main problem for mine was the m.
yeah i was gunna say that,, start off with changing the whole style of the "M" it looks really shaky and kinda ugly..keep it up tho

[AiR]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b191/waltermcgrub/000_0775.jpg
I&#39;m really trying to develop a tag style but I suck at writing (as you can see) and I&#39;m just trying to keep it basic for now. I&#39;d like some crits on these...

[reivax]

Originally posted by aces@Dec 2 2006, 08:44 PM

Are you smokin a shit load or can you just not keep your hand still?


Havin&#39; troubles keepin&#39; my hand steady.

[G - Wahl]

Air - 1 + 4 are pretty nice.

For #1, try to make it squshed more, give it some flava..
#4, try to make it as symetrical as you can get it.

[AiR]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b191/waltermcgrub/000_0779.jpg
Any better?

[whynot?]

i like that one alot better than those tops one

[gcrolla]

i like number 2 air

[whynot?]

i know i suck at handstyles but any body have advise?

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8616/handstyleez0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Stevie]

air, the last one you posted is dope

[enuf.]

somewhat old.
http://i11.tinypic.com/32zuvlt.jpg

[DJLotus]

Originally posted by AiR@Dec 3 2006, 07:26 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b191/waltermcgrub/000_0775.jpg
I&#39;m really trying to develop a tag style but I suck at writing (as you can see) and I&#39;m just trying to keep it basic for now. I&#39;d like some crits on these...
fix the a on number 7 and it will be the best out of all of em ( just make it a bit smaller )

[bouncingsoul]

Nonononononononono, that 7th one is shit

#1 is the best by faaaar

[AiR]

Alright, it seems like number one is the way to go. Thanks for all the crit guys.

[MAERone]

Originally posted by DJLotus+Dec 3 2006, 10:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DJLotus @ Dec 3 2006, 10:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AiR@Dec 3 2006, 07:26 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b191/waltermcgrub/000_0775.jpg
I&#39;m really trying to develop a tag style but I suck at writing (as you can see) and I&#39;m just trying to keep it basic for now. I&#39;d like some crits on these...
fix the a on number 7 and it will be the best out of all of em ( just make it a bit smaller ) [/b][/quote]
i agree with number seven but even out each letter to around the same height and look at cursive letters and kind of bite off of that just keep it flowey just write it fast and make it cleaner. but number one is good too try that just write it faster

[steez_b]

yeah walter, the second version of # 1 looks really good, real clean

[Red3]

Whatever, My M writes fast, I am gonna go plaster it around.

[AiR]

I&#39;m going with the second version of number one. Thanks again.

Edit: Working on my hand a little more... Here&#39;s some slaps I whipped up:
http://static.flickr.com/112/313692543_e79663a0c3.jpg

[Church]

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/51/mobious1tagxd6.th.jpg (http://img260.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mobious1tagxd6.jpg)

ill get a better picture of it up later. says "Mobious 1". the m is kinda blocked out, and that lame S was already written there b4 I tagged the door.

[revolt92]

Try get a better pic cause its to hard to see to crit on.

[shamee1991]

er u click on it dont u?

[ARMAwonR]

heh heh ... mobious 1 ... like from Ace Combat 4

good game

[DJLotus]

mobious... the M, looks like an R because its so bunched up. You should really think about taking the Cross out of the O too, because when you did it, it just looked like you were pilling letters ontop of each other.Also, the tail from the M is totally from out of no where, and doesn&#39;t flow with it once it gets to the B, it just makes it look like a squiggly. The way you bent the I seems to form a U with the cross inside the second O, plus, its just a bunch of bent lines with no real shape.

Last off, the U forms together at the top to make it shaped like a turnup, or a triangular O. And this S is fine, just a little bit too big.

Hope that helps, just trying to give you a couple pointers.

[Red3]

crazy, looks like my friends style till he got crossed out all over town.

[SameName]

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/handstylesketch.jpg

A few handstyles I have been playing with.

[UnWrapped]

what you guys think about this sketch? just tryin some simple styles out..

[Red3]

Originally posted by SameName@Dec 4 2006, 08:06 PM
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/handstylesketch.jpg

A few handstyles I have been playing with.
Bottom left looks best, looks shaky though.

[Church]

ya thanks for the crits keep em coming. ill work on it more and get a better pic up l8r.

and i didnt come up with the name, a friend told me it and i thought it sounded fly. wtf is ace combat? this shit better not be some nerdy dungeons and dragons shit or im gonna kick his ass

[AiR]

Originally posted by AiR@Dec 3 2006, 11:47 PM
I&#39;m going with the second version of number one. Thanks again.

Edit: Working on my hand a little more... Here&#39;s some slaps I whipped up:
http://static.flickr.com/112/313692543_e79663a0c3.jpg
Anyone?

[SameName]

Originally posted by Red3+Dec 4 2006, 08:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Red3 @ Dec 4 2006, 08:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SameName@Dec 4 2006, 08:06 PM
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/handstylesketch.jpg

A few handstyles I have been playing with.
Bottom left looks best, looks shaky though.
[/b][/quote]

Thanks. Yeah I was shaky doing it haha. Wasn&#39;t too worried about it, I was just trying to get some ideas down.

[UnWrapped]

I dont have a word right now but I&#39;ve been practicin some handstyles.
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g42/SeththeRoma/handstyles001.jpg

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by AiR+Dec 4 2006, 08:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AiR @ Dec 4 2006, 08:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AiR@Dec 3 2006, 11:47 PM
I&#39;m going with the second version of number one. Thanks again.

Edit: Working on my hand a little more... Here&#39;s some slaps I whipped up:
http://static.flickr.com/112/313692543_e79663a0c3.jpg
Anyone? [/b][/quote]
i dont like the lowercases...i think you should mix up your letters a bit more if your gonna do both caps and lower case

[glass]

Originally posted by UnWrapped@Dec 4 2006, 10:04 PM
I dont have a word right now but I&#39;ve been practicin some handstyles.
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g42/SeththeRoma/handstyles001.jpg
wow... what are you... 10?

nice words...

[AteskOne]

vulgar little kids <_<

edit*
workin on changing the "e" and the underline in my tag. here&#39;s a pic.
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/2561/scan0004dg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ignore the whack flow of the letters and anything else...im still perfecting it and this was just done quick. crits on the underline on the upper one.

[d_g]

UnWrapped, you have a nice handstyle, i like it. The &#39;Same&#39; tag looks really fucking good IMO.

[nemzone]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1314/imag0002gn9.jpg

[UnWrapped]

Nah, i aint ten years old, I just dont have a word Lol and I like to practice letter combos by using different words. Those arent words i&#39;d go out and paint, its on paper so chill out. I knew you cats would like the word choices tho.. :P

[whoarethereal evil]

Originally posted by glass+Dec 4 2006, 10:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (glass @ Dec 4 2006, 10:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-UnWrapped@Dec 4 2006, 10:04 PM
I dont have a word right now but I&#39;ve been practicin some handstyles.
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g42/SeththeRoma/handstyles001.jpg
wow... what are you... 10?

nice words... [/b][/quote]
some one needs a shag

[Hot_Pocket]

Man, I&#39;d love to see a slimy cunt tag up in my neighborhood though..... Someone writes cunt here though.... :/

[revolt92]

Ive got the same problemo this dude is writing cunt everywhere and its not even good.Damn

[Hot_Pocket]

Cross it out, maybe?

[revolt92]

nah, waste of paint it&#39;ll jut get buffed anyways like mot of my pieces.


sigh...

[nemzone]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1314/imag0002gn9.jpg
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/6383/imag0003lw1.jpg
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9278/imag000141ib9.jpg
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1936/imag00014ep0.jpg

this is all i got today :( i went wiv intentions of bombin the shit out of this old mill, near where i painted yesterday. but there was workers there :-&#092; so much for being abandoned. so i went on the hunt down in the abandoned land , and found a fairly small buildng but bigger than a house, rite by the river. but the river is flooded rite now so the place was shut. ( so i thought) i broke in thr the window cuz wanted to paint a rooftop for once and inside there was a SHOEZ throw. bout 6ftx10ft, from 2001&#33; any1 herd of this writer?? so i went upstairs n start to get my paint out, and fuckin machines go on&#33;&#33;&#33; broke thru the top window n jampp down LEAVIN 800ML OF PAINT BEHIND I MITE ADD&#33;&#33;&#33; cut my fuckin jacket and got on my bike. so it kinda put the shits up me for the day lol

[Bowser]

shitty story but you might just go back in the evenig then it should be pretty well empty and shit just take a flash light, in my case i have on that strapps to your head.....it works great

[enMy]

damn that sucks pretty bad... aight well im pretty new to graff and ive been workin on a tag for alil while.

crits

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/Deadinc91/NME.jpg

[Rastamar]

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6681/tagmarflogly4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Dec 4 2006, 10:38 PM
vulgar little kids <_<

edit*
workin on changing the "e" and the underline in my tag. here&#39;s a pic.
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/2561/scan0004dg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ignore the whack flow of the letters and anything else...im still perfecting it and this was just done quick. crits on the underline on the upper one.
bump...crits this time mayb?

[Hot_Pocket]

Amens- It&#39;s tight, but try and find a way that you can link your S up to it, &#39;cuz it&#39;s kinda floating there, or just move it a bit close and see if that works.

Rastamar- Hella long name, and your letters are tight, but the first A and third A are hiding from me....

Enemy(right?)- I&#39;m not a fan of tags that are made up of letters that do that. Try and bring it down a notch and start working it.

[hardkore toy]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8454/imga0018uv5.jpg

[Fube]

^^^ da one? is that what it says? i think scoot it together a bit. if it does say one then your n looks like a H and your e dont match the rest of your tag. keep at it.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Hub.jpg

[Fluffy Bunnies]

^^
:) Lookin&#39; good&#33;

I just can&#39;t make out some of the letters.

but other than that, 9/10&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Rastamar]

Originally posted by Hot_Pocket@Dec 5 2006, 11:53 PM
Rastamar- Hella long name, and your letters are tight, but the first A and third A are hiding from me....

yes
that was the first
the nexts were good


0 english

[Fube]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Dec 6 2006, 10:02 AM
^^
:) Lookin&#39; good&#33;

I just can&#39;t make out some of the letters.

but other than that, 9/10&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
says "hub one"