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Grape1
01-08-2007, 05:11 PM
Thanks for your advice! I did a few different ones, tell me which one(s) you think might work. I tried to make the "G" better and no stars. Any Crit is welcome.


http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/9917/pagert5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Kuato - I'm diggin' the tag! Love the question mark and the spin of the "K". Maybe just make the "A" more visible. Everything else is awesome.

Caset - I really like it, simple letters! All I would change is maybe move the underline a bit more under the letters and try and take the "S" from going over the side of the "E". Its really solid though.

Air - Really good tag, maybe make the "I" more visible, or not even, its good already.

Nyda - I really like the simplicity of it. The "Y" is really good! Maybe do a cool whiplash with the line in the "A"? Make a little twist at the end or somethin.

Cana - Needs a bit of work. Maybe make the end of the "A" seperate from the side of your "N". Get rid of the slide off on the "A". It can be really good!

Thanks,

DocterX
01-08-2007, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by Grape1@Jan 8 2007, 02:11 PM


Cana - Needs a bit of work. Maybe make the end of the "A" seperate from the side of your "N". Get rid of the slide off on the "A". It can be really good!


its suposed to be cona i guess i need to work on making the o work.

Grape1
01-08-2007, 06:44 PM
lol, sry about that.

''HAZE'' *88*
01-08-2007, 07:01 PM
The grape stuff is good,its simple but good.. its good to start out with simple stuff then you can slowly give it some style.. if you are just starting out and you try and give it too much style its just gunna come out looking wack..

any ideas, thoughts, and,or comments??
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC01998.jpg

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC01995.jpg
this one is just random stuff im tring out anything desent?

Grape1
01-08-2007, 07:10 PM
Thanks for the crit. I rely like the one on the top right of the page, it could go cool a halo over the whole thing. Good tag!

near
01-08-2007, 07:17 PM
yo grape i definitely seen that tag around my area lol

Grape1
01-08-2007, 07:22 PM
Yo Near! I seen u too! Parkdale and roncesvalles! Ur shit is dope!

''HAZE'' *88*
01-08-2007, 07:31 PM
Originally posted by Grape1@Jan 8 2007, 07:10 PM
Thanks for the crit. I rely like the one on the top right of the page, it could go cool a halo over the whole thing. Good tag!
yea, the only thing i don't like about that one is how the top of the F attaches with the top of the A it looks ...strange... at least i thought

>>Joker<<
01-08-2007, 08:37 PM
new around bombingscience

still suck at this but here it goes

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/4085/p2020001ep3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the marker kind of sucked but i have some good ones being mailed in this week

Hilo
01-08-2007, 08:46 PM
dont wrry about the marker, thts wack to fucking crazy.. i hate it jkr

>>Joker<<
01-08-2007, 09:13 PM
yeah i know my tagz suck shit

Hilo
01-08-2007, 09:15 PM
ill help u out aiight? what do you write?

>>Joker<<
01-08-2007, 09:18 PM
joker + kreyz
i apppreciate the help

''HAZE'' *88*
01-08-2007, 09:24 PM
I thought the JOKER one in the upper left corner was pretty good, the J would look better if it was higher instead of being U ish, the quotes look really fucked but you said the marker was fucked so maybe thats why :rolleyes: but yea i like that one the best..

anything on this?
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02002.jpg

Hilo
01-08-2007, 09:28 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5264/picture198jc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for you. joker.



anyone else who needs help holler at me. or if you got msn add me,.

patrick_1823@hotmail.com

TricksForKids
01-08-2007, 09:51 PM
toronto styles right there^....i cant decide if you bite yet or not...but whatever, at least it looks good

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1891/thisismedl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Grape1
01-08-2007, 09:51 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/6528/pageeq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hilo, anything you can do with these? Having problems finding a nice style. Other crid is welcome from anybody.

Hilo
01-08-2007, 09:56 PM
il do somehtign up
, and bawk please man. im from toronto you are too atleast show respect man. alot of people mgith have that style. its T.o.


im repredentin T.o you should to. stop calling out bites man.


im tryign to help people.

TricksForKids
01-08-2007, 09:58 PM
whatever, i guess you dont full on bite, but your shit is HEAVILY influenced, im from toronto but you dont look at my tag and say hey thats "causr eyes trik serious grams etc etc" all rolled into one

Hilo
01-08-2007, 10:03 PM
mvp and shit is alll New York unfluenced maddd.

bawk do you see MVP&#39;s style. toronto has never been like this till utah came. trik had a style utah had a style they decided to go with NY flaver.

and look on msn ill show you who the real causr id the real Acter is and all the other graffiti artists out in mvp and stuff. im just sayign nothign is really original anymore. some of your shit is bitten too not that its a bad style or anything because others have there thoughts about your style as well. just next time im chattign with you on msn. ill show you who the real people are. without newyork there woulent be a toronto.

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/217/picture199rw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

here grape, somehtign simple i did for you maybe you can copy some of it.:]

Grape1
01-08-2007, 10:06 PM
Thanks&#33;

Stonk
01-08-2007, 10:07 PM
new mop ehh not sure whether im feelin it or not

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new034.jpg

>>Joker<<
01-08-2007, 10:11 PM
hilo thanx for the help with the tag im definately gonna do that with my own little twist cause i dont like to straight bite someone

i took my original joker tag and cleaned it up alot. just used more layers with my marker. it still sucks like shit but ill post up a pic when i incoporate your style with it.

(http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p2030018tk6.jpg)
[img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/7221/p2030018tk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hilo
01-08-2007, 10:18 PM
um cut down with the arrows. and the &#39;&#39; &#39;&#39;

>>Joker<<
01-08-2007, 10:29 PM
k thanx for the help

Hilo
01-08-2007, 10:30 PM
just keep looking at other tags to get an idea. even if they dont have those letters J.O.K.E.R still look at there stlye.

Rust.905
01-08-2007, 10:46 PM
.

mr pane
01-09-2007, 06:01 AM
grapes a good word but its got shitty letters

Grape1
01-09-2007, 04:41 PM
lol, ya, its hard to work with.

GOSU
01-09-2007, 06:13 PM
I like alot of your stuff Joker, here is mine

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/qwerty87/IMG_1871.jpg

First post, :unsure: ?

''HAZE'' *88*
01-09-2007, 08:53 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;HAZE&#39;&#39; *88*@Jan 8 2007, 09:24 PM
I thought the JOKER one in the upper left corner was pretty good, the J would look better if it was higher instead of being U ish, the quotes look really fucked but you said the marker was fucked so maybe thats why :rolleyes: but yea i like that one the best..

anything on this?
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02002.jpg
didn&#39;t get shit on this yet.. :blink:

whahappen?
01-09-2007, 09:15 PM
faze wow youve improved very nice flow i really like that curvisy feel
the middle one says staw and the s is cursive its old as hell and just thought id throw it in there and other tags i want crits on the letters i know they arent lined up well and ill fix it later
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/6258/shittagsou4.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8822/picture009zf3.jpg
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/5476/picture007xf1.jpg

wookiE
01-09-2007, 11:05 PM
the middle one is the best scec. but maybe try some addons for it

..SmOeK 1..
01-09-2007, 11:33 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/7851/frame00090yj6.th.png (http://img150.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00090yj6.png)

Says "alkamyst" aka "alka"

Crits? First attempt with this name.

nomek
01-10-2007, 12:25 AM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7668/mytagzc6.th.png (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mytagzc6.png)

theres mine. . . sorta messed up but who cares. . . <_<

C3ZR ONE
01-10-2007, 12:39 AM
Originally posted by nomek@Jan 10 2007, 12:25 AM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7668/mytagzc6.th.png (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mytagzc6.png)

theres mine. . . sorta messed up but who cares. . . <_<
You see the part where you wrote "for those who can&#39;t read it, it says -NOMEK-"..?
That looks a hundred times better than the contrived birdsnest of a handstyle you&#39;re runnin&#39;, and that&#39;s on the real. No fuckin with you, serious talk. Go back to basics and S-L-O-W-L-Y morph the shit.

There is nothing worse than seeing someone fresh off the press, try and rock some wacky emulation of a handstyle. It&#39;s just........it&#39;s not good. If you want help, I&#39;ll offer what I can.
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8571/im000261xq0.jpg

C3ZR ONE
01-10-2007, 01:01 AM
Start with real basic letters, just like with blackbooking. You&#39;re still looking for the essential flow of the letter. You build off that, you don&#39;t just break the natural flow all up and add a bunch of shit around it untill it&#39;s illegible. Feed off the basic shape and slowly bend it out. I&#39;ve said this many times before, but I look at letters as living organisms, or b-boys. They have attitude. They pop and lock, they up rock, but they don&#39;t break there limbs into five seperate pieces. they take the 2 joints they got per limb and make those two move funky. You follow me?

Anyway, here&#39;s a couple takes on your name.
http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/3307/im0004910001xc6.jpg

Skeam
01-10-2007, 01:22 AM
hey cezr... if you dont mind, is there any possibility of you doing a handy for my name? (nesc) id really apreciate it buddy im just havin trouble getting from the simple stage to something a little more complex.

cheers mate

C3ZR ONE
01-10-2007, 01:38 AM
Bad letter combination for my letter style. The letters are good. the order they&#39;re in doesn&#39;t flow for me, but to be honest, neither do the letters in my tag... E to tha Z to tha R...whata bitch... With yours I&#39;d just bust it out quick like this, but I&#39;m sure a better writer than I could make that shit mega fresh. At least I tried it...
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/2239/im000492yd4.jpg

bouncingsoul
01-10-2007, 01:50 AM
I liked the flow...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0564.jpg

Skeam
01-10-2007, 05:12 AM
thanx heaps cezr i really apreciate it ay, i been havin alot of trouble with my handy. now i just gotta work on biting that down to each and every little detail, haha not really.

cheers mate

Edit - ah just realise the one u did said nesc to bounce, cheers heaps aswell mate. 2 great examples now.

mr pane
01-10-2007, 06:56 AM
man cezr that too true bout those words not havin a good flow. theyr a bitch to write. u shouldnt settle with a word until uv found somethin that looks good some words dont look good even if you are. it took me months to find the right word. so dont worry if it takes a long time cuz itll be worth it when u find a good one.

wookiE
01-10-2007, 07:31 AM
Originally posted by mr pane@Jan 10 2007, 08:56 PM
man cezr that too true bout those words not havin a good flow. theyr a bitch to write. u shouldnt settle with a word until uv found somethin that looks good some words dont look good even if you are. it took me months to find the right word. so dont worry if it takes a long time cuz itll be worth it when u find a good one.
tell him pane. keep at it cezr, its coming together

MAiNKo
01-10-2007, 04:05 PM
cezr, i really like your handstyle alot, any comments/crits for my tag?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/qwerty87/IMG_1880.jpg

whahappen?
01-10-2007, 04:07 PM
i like the flow one that
i want crits on the arange tag
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8215/picture016zd1.jpg

ras
01-10-2007, 04:07 PM
CEZR&#39;s Handstileee is ace..

TricksForKids
01-10-2007, 04:08 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jan 8 2007, 09:51 PM
toronto styles right there^....i cant decide if you bite yet or not...but whatever, at least it looks good

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1891/thisismedl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump my mawfuggin tag&#33;

edit, wha happen, the tags nnot that bad man, something about the way you take pictures of your stuff makes it look alot worse, i dont quite know what it is, try separating your letters a bit more? i dont know, tags are all personal preference

STAR01
01-10-2007, 04:22 PM
anyone here tags in arab??

Tahworsetoy
01-10-2007, 09:38 PM
alright so I am a definite toy but I&#39;ve been workin on my "Arson" tag but I like the flow of the Acid one though it is probaly a pretty common name...All tips welcome thanks
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/48/scan0001pc4.th.jpg (http://img167.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001pc4.jpg) :D

Fube
01-10-2007, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 10 2007, 01:01 AM
Start with real basic letters, just like with blackbooking. You&#39;re still looking for the essential flow of the letter. You build off that, you don&#39;t just break the natural flow all up and add a bunch of shit around it untill it&#39;s illegible. Feed off the basic shape and slowly bend it out. I&#39;ve said this many times before, but I look at letters as living organisms, or b-boys. They have attitude. They pop and lock, they up rock, but they don&#39;t break there limbs into five seperate pieces. they take the 2 joints they got per limb and make those two move funky. You follow me?


^^^ words of wisdom, exactly how u should look at development in my opnion.
tricks: the b kinda confused me "bawk"? but u deff. have your own style and im feelin it.
so im not flickless,

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Handstyles/Zirconium.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Handstyles/Tunnel.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Handstyles/Boogy.jpg

crits welcome.

TricksForKids
01-10-2007, 09:54 PM
yeah fubester, its bawk bawk baby, i like the first red one got a nice flow to it minus the weird underline, whats it say? irgonilm? lol

jungle book<==8
01-10-2007, 09:55 PM
anyone know how to do a good C in handstyle? the only ones i can think of are really plain

Tahworsetoy
01-10-2007, 10:00 PM
fube I like your irconium one very good...any tips for me, fube?

Fube
01-10-2007, 10:24 PM
its a weird underline because its zirconium. lol. the underline is part of the z, but i did kinda squeez it together.


Tahworsetoy:
the only advice i can give to anyone is dont ever give up. it may look like shit now, but if u truly love graff then time is of no importance, just progressing. get a pen and a pad of paper and write till your fingers bleed. sooner or later a style or influence is bound to show up.

as for tips C3ZR hit the nail on the head in my book.

good crit is nice to have, but when u get your own flow down its yours. its hard to take everyone for there word because they all have different prefrences on what graff should look like. i might think something is ill but the next guy thinks its shit. just keep writing.

SKriBL*666
01-10-2007, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by elba@Jan 7 2007, 08:47 PM
Flash- i like the letters

Trash- i am sure your m was accident in the smack.. but it looks bad with taht streak otherwise its sexy
1st time on some really dirty tags. sorry about the glare. i know its posted else where but i wanted some tips thanks
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9053/0000100vw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2042/0000101hg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/6203/0000104rl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Aint diggin it bro. A little to messy. And come one, a kids playground?&#33; :huh: its all good though.

fredom-writer
01-10-2007, 10:53 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

12ozDemon
01-10-2007, 11:21 PM
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m159/jeff0906/gf.jpg

comments? crits?

d_g
01-11-2007, 01:52 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Jan 7 2007, 08:35 PM
Anyways, my handstyle&#39;s gone real downhill lately.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/handy07.jpg

Constructive critisism welcome.
Bump.

Sticking to my rule of &#39;post no crits, get no crits&#39;.

Fube, I really like your style. I would give crits but it&#39;s hard to find anything wrong with them. The last one is the best IMO, a little hard to read but I don&#39;t care cause it looks good haha.

Fube
01-11-2007, 07:07 AM
ses "boogy". are u going for a simple style? something about that ca i just love.

TricksForKids
01-11-2007, 07:35 AM
dg, i actually reall like that man, maybe separaate the S and E just a bit more, but its nice and simeple, itd look good on a mailbox with a fat mop dripping like a bitch

12ozdemon, the f doesnt fit with the style. and well, its ugly, try a simpler F to go with the other simple letters you have

aeon
01-11-2007, 07:39 AM
Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 6 2007, 04:50 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/tags/STA40769.jpg
just some rake about
TRibal???

mr pane
01-11-2007, 07:49 AM
spy n caset are some of the only words iv seen so far that i like.
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/733/picture019smallsi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

trashhh
01-11-2007, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by aeon+Jan 11 2007, 07:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aeon @ Jan 11 2007, 07:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Jan 6 2007, 04:50 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/tags/STA40769.jpg
just some rake about
TRibal??? [/b][/quote]
tribal?? what are you talking about?

BAPKEB
01-11-2007, 12:11 PM
i used a mean streak for all of thesehttp://img489.imageshack.us/img489/6018/1000281sv3.jpgsomeone tried to buff this onehttp://img403.imageshack.us/img403/2179/1000282hk7.jpghttp://img69.imageshack.us/img69/1828/1000283rh9.jpg

jungle book<==8
01-11-2007, 04:09 PM
heres one of my tags its not my best but its alright...
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/5161/picture019fg6.jpg
crits..?

Hot_Pocket
01-11-2007, 04:26 PM
Cesa- Make your letters more curved and smush &#39;em together a bit more.

Bap- Work on your handy, they all look like regular handwriting.

Mr Pane- I&#39;m feeling that Spy tag, except for I can&#39;t really see the P

Trash- Sick handy, I don&#39;t know how he got Tribal from it.

And since I don&#39;t post much of any picture

Working on a new name, Mr So.

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Tags.jpg

ras
01-11-2007, 04:33 PM
Shit hot there son ^^^

Bakeb...go back to the black book..

MrPane..nice shit

TricksForKids
01-11-2007, 04:33 PM
MRSO? make all your eltters alot simpler, and spaced out, and Bap, where the HELL do you live? lololol, it looks like you&#39;re tagging in the middle of nowhere, but whatever, at least your gettin up, work on your tag as well though

AiR
01-11-2007, 04:38 PM
Yeah, I think you guys pretty much covered it...

I&#39;ve been trying to make my tag more readable, what do you think about this:
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b191/waltermcgrub/000_0005-1.jpg

jungle book<==8
01-11-2007, 04:40 PM
ok thanks hot pocket but what do you mean by curve it more? like curve the ends or curve all the letters?

flip79
01-11-2007, 04:54 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3239/sake79ye6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

give some feedback

flip79
01-11-2007, 05:03 PM
http://a236.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/17/m_41750d66f76c643274bbe7257322cc8b.jpg

send some feedback, anything

Tahworsetoy
01-11-2007, 05:45 PM
wow air I love your tag nice flow... flip I like yours to (It says sake right?) nice flow the only thing i&#39;m not sure about is the dots but that is personal preference thing

SPI-3
01-11-2007, 05:58 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8551/gghjy8.jpg
any crits?

AiR
01-11-2007, 06:15 PM
Simple, and dope for a one-liner.

Tahworsetoy: Thanks.

jungle book<==8
01-11-2007, 06:33 PM
Originally posted by AiR@Jan 11 2007, 04:38 PM
Yeah, I think you guys pretty much covered it...

I&#39;ve been trying to make my tag more readable, what do you think about this:
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b191/waltermcgrub/000_0005-1.jpg
i like it but the top of the r goes out too far and the end of the r shouldn&#39;t underline it, thats just what i think. but its still really good.

fredom-writer
01-11-2007, 08:17 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Tahworsetoy
01-11-2007, 08:26 PM
I like the second one better (lighter blue) it&#39;s a little easier to read but still has good style...I know usually halo&#39;s are looked down upon unless you do actually do overpasses...overall it&#39;s good keep it up

Bazer
01-11-2007, 08:51 PM
Originally posted by SPI&#045;3@Jan 11 2007, 05:58 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8551/gghjy8.jpg
any crits?
that looks good dude. you should keep progressing with that tag. from the looks of it, I know it&#39;ll go somewhere good.

Cham
01-12-2007, 06:40 AM
just messing around.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y252/yeah_mayen/s1054680028_30007306_3245-1.jpg
ENRO

feed back would be appreciated.

*LoST*
01-12-2007, 08:14 AM
Originally posted by Cham@Jan 12 2007, 06:40 AM
just messing around.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y252/yeah_mayen/s1054680028_30007306_3245-1.jpg
ENRO

feed back would be appreciated.
looks pretty good...kinda looks like EN3O though..maybe because its a small pic.

crits on this?...
sorry for the bad pic..my cam sux...

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/kin3.jpg

Slushi
01-12-2007, 11:10 AM
Keep practicing ^^

I dropped the H from my name
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/2699/picture80qg8.jpg

flip79
01-12-2007, 02:25 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/sake79_2007/sake79.jpg

some feedback, anything

and am i the only one that didnt write there shit on paper

Natural Mystic
01-12-2007, 05:47 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture354.jpg

just did those a min ago what you think of it?

Nyc Sno
01-12-2007, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by Natural Mystic@Jan 12 2007, 05:47 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture354.jpg

just did those a min ago what you think of it?
wow are u serious writing sfc still free crew unless u are trane oner in disguise

Natural Mystic
01-12-2007, 06:03 PM
Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Jan 12 2007, 05:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Jan 12 2007, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Natural Mystic@Jan 12 2007, 05:47 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture354.jpg

just did those a min ago what you think of it?
wow are u serious writing sfc still free crew unless u are trane oner in disguise [/b][/quote]
said before
i ddint make it up and there dope writers in it
no idea it was another one
yikes

Fube
01-12-2007, 06:09 PM
its right above u, y do u shitheads insist on quoteing the gd thing?

Slushi
01-12-2007, 06:52 PM
Originally posted by Natural Mystic
and there dope writers in it
Then why are you in it?

whoarethereal evil
01-12-2007, 08:44 PM
lol

stemONE
01-12-2007, 09:36 PM
haha this makes me laugh,

laugh laugh laugh&#33;&#33;&#33;

whahappen?
01-12-2007, 10:42 PM
shit tags crits anyway...
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/6258/shittagsou4.jpg

Hot_Pocket
01-12-2007, 11:04 PM
Your tag is really similar to your throwie

whahappen?
01-12-2007, 11:24 PM
bad/good?

Asshat
01-13-2007, 01:28 AM
I find making my throwies or pieces similar forms of my handstlye prduces some pretty nice stuff, hence its a good thing, your bottom left tag is looking really even, flows nice. try piecing it

whahappen?
01-13-2007, 01:34 AM
haha me doing pieces funny stuff
yea my flow is usually better but the letters are sometimes kinda weak
blah old name that everyone will think that sucks
staw the first s is cursive
http://img322.imageshack.us/img322/5970/picture015pl8.jpg

stemONE
01-13-2007, 04:14 AM
im bored this is my taghttp://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4025/sinetagiq8.jpg
yes its simple as fuck and it looks like shit on paper and done in a biro but wen i use my marker i think she looks aight

crtis please

PEACE.

idiot
01-13-2007, 05:14 AM
Sine ur tag is aight but the n looks wierd kinda like a k. Its better to start off simple than trying to progress too soon and write something that looks like total garbage that u cant read. Mine is also pretty basic. I write NES
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/nes4.jpg
Crits are encouraged (i hate running out of paper&#33;&#33;)

stemONE
01-13-2007, 06:10 AM
yeah the n looks a bit wierd done in biro lol,i like simple tags more than tech ones coz you can read them alot easier and its easier to recognise ur tag so ur name gets around a bit more.
urs is nice i like it alot,my friend writes nesc lol,so yeh but ur tag is pretty sweet
PEACE.

..SmOeK 1..
01-13-2007, 01:13 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6853/frame00092ty8.th.png (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00092ty8.png)

"Alka" short for Alkamyst.

Crits?

''HAZE'' *88*
01-13-2007, 01:35 PM
Yo SINE maybe go for something like this, the S isn&#39;t very good but its not hard to get a good S and the ONE part isn&#39;t nessasary..
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02004.jpg

..SmOeK 1..
01-13-2007, 02:15 PM
^^everything looks really good on that buut the circle for the dot for the "i"

''HAZE'' *88*
01-13-2007, 02:33 PM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02005.jpg

''HAZE'' *88*
01-13-2007, 02:45 PM
actualy a capital I might look better... <_<
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02006.jpg

Hot_Pocket
01-13-2007, 03:33 PM
Lose the little loopies on the N, and make your I that lower case one, and maybe try out a lower case e


*Edit*
Just so I&#39;m not pic-less


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Tags001.jpg

revolt92
01-13-2007, 04:12 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9906/dsc00055ha0.jpg

Right guys i&#39;ve decided to go back to square one, Crits?

meetermaid
01-13-2007, 04:13 PM
move it to tot black books.

Hot_Pocket
01-13-2007, 04:56 PM
Originally posted by Hot_Pocket@Jan 13 2007, 03:33 PM
Lose the little loopies on the N, and make your I that lower case one, and maybe try out a lower case e


*Edit*
Just so I&#39;m not pic-less


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Tags001.jpg
Last post on page :angry:

DASH(EHG)
01-13-2007, 08:49 PM
Tick - nice letters u should make em 3-D then fill that in and outline that would look sweet ite peace.

haze-u should take away da quote marks and not bring the underline up so high but im rlly diggin ur s ite peace

MiNZ
01-13-2007, 10:33 PM
im feelin number 4 the most hot pocket
btw when most people think o&#39;s are plain they ad like a dot to the middle or if done big enough 2 exclamation points

wookiE
01-14-2007, 02:20 AM
hot pocket im liking number 5 the best. however the M on number 2 is easily better then the M on any of the other tags

trashhh
01-14-2007, 12:18 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/tags/tag12.jpg

kinda messed up the leters on this lol

revolt92
01-14-2007, 01:54 PM
Liking the r alot, the t&#39;s to small and for the A dont make it go so tall and thin but overall i like it.

Necro-
01-14-2007, 01:56 PM
trash your handy is sexy. could you do a tag for me? i write Maven. im horrible at tags. ill try one for u, too if u want lol.

Beast
01-14-2007, 04:27 PM
trash thats cool
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9072/picture014fc5.jpg

*LoST*
01-14-2007, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by *LoST*@Jan 12 2007, 08:14 AM
crits on this?...
sorry for the bad pic..my cam sux...

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/kin3.jpg
bumped for more needed crits

ternoner
01-14-2007, 05:44 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0845.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0847.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0848.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-14-2007, 08:22 PM
nice stuff trash.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1512.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1511.jpg

..SmOeK 1..
01-14-2007, 11:24 PM
Originally posted by ..SmOeK 1..@Jan 13 2007, 01:13 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6853/frame00092ty8.th.png (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00092ty8.png)

"Alka" short for Alkamyst.

Crits?
*buuuuuuump* for critzz&#33;

ternoner
01-14-2007, 11:28 PM
it sucks restart and try again sstarting with regular letters

Hot_Pocket
01-14-2007, 11:45 PM
Ternoner, don&#39;t be an ass, there&#39;s a reason he&#39;s posting here, and you&#39;re posting here, &#39;cuz you&#39;re a toy. And I just checked to see if you have any reason to look down on this kid and you have none, his handy is much better than yours, so don&#39;t give people crits like that, saying, "You suck, start over."

Alka- What I try to do to work on my style is do my tag as fast as possible and see what comes out, if it looks nice, I&#39;ll work it in, but as of now, you have an alright handy, generic style letters, but still good.

Sezer- Work on your Z, &#39;cuz it looks like an R when you&#39;re doing a one liner

Tern- It sucks, restart and try again starting with regular letters. (seriously)

Kin- Don&#39;t use an &#33; for your I, lose the quotes, and smush &#39;em together a bit

Cesk- Nice start, keep working

Trash- Toy as fuck, quit graffiti :P

Mr So- Dope as fuck, you king you&#33;



Cesa- The A is inconsistant with the rest of the letters.

jungle book<==8
01-14-2007, 11:50 PM
no one is on the page to crit...
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6798/picture037gy4.jpg
bad camera quality
crits anyone?

T_R_O_N
01-15-2007, 12:21 PM
the a does not match the rest of the letters.
new tag im working on, crits appriciated.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/Picture037.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
01-15-2007, 01:18 PM
^^
Nice handy, just fix up the underline and try not to use stars/Arrows too much

ras
01-15-2007, 01:19 PM
yeah man..that handys is ace

T_R_O_N
01-15-2007, 01:24 PM
thanks for the feed back

Fixion
01-15-2007, 03:26 PM
TRON that&#39;s ill. keep it up
CESA work on your A and put your letters closer together.

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1558/taygzh5.png
Crits?

slinks
01-15-2007, 03:28 PM
Just some sketches of tags... ive only been doing this for about a month so dont be too harsh... critics wanted

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti009.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti011.jpghttp://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti013.jpghttp://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti012.jpghttp://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti014.jpg

Fixion
01-15-2007, 03:30 PM
SLINKS start out simple. Those tags look like wack gang graffiti. Don&#39;t go wildstyle yet. Write SLINKS in regular writing.

C3ZR ONE
01-15-2007, 04:54 PM
Sezer, Turn, Trash, and Tron. Some good stuff. The rest- keep working at it. Most of you are doing a really good job of starting simple, keep working with that for the time being. Evolution is a slow process for most.

Fuckin around in the basement with some new ink. I wrote Mr. 12&#39;s name cuzz I did a handyrock exchange w/ him back in the day and loved the flow of his name ever since...

For anyone looking for a fantastic ink under 6 bucks that&#39;s redily available at craft stores, think leather dye... ;)
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/8803/im000501oz4.jpg

Welsh_Graffer
01-15-2007, 05:07 PM
Erm......
Biro tag.
Also webcam flick.
And remeber this is the Toy thread, So don&#39;t fucking flame me to shit....
Apologies for the bad quality..

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7843/tagew3.png

Truth.
01-15-2007, 05:45 PM
mome? it loks alright, i like the E and the M extension is pretty cool imo. just work on the m o m and that will be cool.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTAGGGGUS.jpg

VanityOne
01-15-2007, 08:36 PM
C3ZR ONE- love your hand style.

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/5271/graf007od5.jpg
critz on the black one? flame it.

G-Fat
01-15-2007, 09:15 PM
Originally posted by T_R_O_N@Jan 15 2007, 12:21 PM
the a does not match the rest of the letters.
new tag im working on, crits appriciated.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/Picture037.jpg
if i were you, i&#39;d lose the stars, unless there letter but if its for decoration i&#39;d lose em.
but nice handy eitherway

G-Fat
01-15-2007, 09:16 PM
Originally posted by VanityOne@Jan 15 2007, 08:36 PM
C3ZR ONE- love your hand style.

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/5271/graf007od5.jpg
critz on the black one? flame it.
needs some work, or least abit of flow to it. but practice makes perfect.

G-Fat
01-15-2007, 09:18 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Jan 15 2007, 03:28 PM
Just some sketches of tags... ive only been doing this for about a month so dont be too harsh... critics wanted

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti009.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti011.jpghttp://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti013.jpghttp://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti012.jpghttp://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti014.jpg
in my opinion in doesn&#39;t look like what its suppose to say, too much over lapping. some letters look like other&#39;s. quite confusing. but great attempt.
keep at it.

meetermaid
01-15-2007, 10:18 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7628/picture75mx7.jpg
http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/571/picture69ln7.jpg
lurrve that grimey shit..

Hot_Pocket
01-16-2007, 12:46 AM
Stop writing on your walls meeter.

meetermaid
01-16-2007, 01:48 AM
that&#39;s my wallpaper.
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/3585/picture82an2.jpghttp://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1121/picture83hp7.jpg
au revoir et bon nuit..
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/2453/picture89jp1.jpghttp://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9/picture87un6.jpg

wookiE
01-16-2007, 03:43 AM
dont tag your monitor man.

d_g
01-16-2007, 05:54 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 16 2007, 09:54 AM
For anyone looking for a fantastic ink under 6 bucks that&#39;s redily available at craft stores, think leather dye... ;)
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/8803/im000501oz4.jpg
How permanent do you reckon it is?

idiot
01-16-2007, 08:37 AM
^^^^^^ SICK HANDSTYLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
1 or 2??
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/nes5.jpg

MAiNKo
01-16-2007, 04:25 PM
Originally posted by MAiNKo@Jan 10 2007, 04:05 PM
cezr, i really like your handstyle alot, any comments/crits for my tag?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/qwerty87/IMG_1880.jpg
2, definatly

*bump* i need crits :unsure:

Tahworsetoy
01-16-2007, 05:36 PM
Hey there been workin on my tag a little tell me which you prefer (1 or 2) and then any other crits ya got thanks
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8999/tagya1.th.jpg (http://img295.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagya1.jpg)

click to enlarge

AteskOne
01-16-2007, 09:59 PM
^^^^names taken...try summin other than acid.

Tahworsetoy
01-16-2007, 10:02 PM
ahh i was wonderin about that I did have arson as one...is that taken? but other than that is the style ok? I&#39;ll scan one of my arson one&#39;s in tommorow...thanks for telling me... :)

Cramp
01-17-2007, 01:36 AM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/7991/crampjt1.jpg

I know its bad, but I&#39;m just starting and not backing out of it. Tell me how to improve it please?

Stim
01-17-2007, 02:18 AM
It&#39;s all about the form and direction of your letters, start by drawing an even curve or flat line in pencil. Write your letters so they somehow line up with that pencil mark and then erase the pencil. Also, in tags... don&#39;t do too many nonsensical extentions or excessive lengthyness.

Truth.
01-17-2007, 05:31 AM
gfat wtf why are ur pics so freakin huge. cramp go simpler dude, stop addin thos wurvy cirvies on there and just focus on ur letters man, get them down, then u can play with extension or w/e

crits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/jan17turh.jpg

wookiE
01-17-2007, 07:47 AM
Originally posted by idiot@Jan 16 2007, 10:37 PM

1 or 2??
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/nes5.jpg
i like 2 better

MAiNKo
01-17-2007, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by Truth.@Jan 17 2007, 05:31 AM
gfat wtf why are ur pics so freakin huge. cramp go simpler dude, stop addin thos wurvy cirvies on there and just focus on ur letters man, get them down, then u can play with extension or w/e

crits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/jan17turh.jpg
I would move the U a tinny bit out from the R, other than that, looks fuckin awesome.

emokid
01-17-2007, 03:36 PM
idiot, i prefer number 2, the massive arrow kind of ruins it

truth, well like that, especially the two t&#39;s

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/387/dscn6237al8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

emor
sorry if its anyones name or sumthin but i dont plan on using it, just like the letters.
i suck bad with the tags.

shamee1991
01-17-2007, 03:46 PM
na i rate dats peeti hot. i&#39;ve seen worst

whahappen?
01-17-2007, 05:45 PM
truth and emo i like both those
http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/3290/picture041yy6.jpg
for the battle good enough?

Tahworsetoy
01-17-2007, 06:12 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3450/tag001uw6.th.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag001uw6.jpg)
aight so I went ahead and tryed to work a few new name tag&#39;s cuz my other one is taken 1) and 2) say "MSX" and the other says silvia (that one doesn&#39;t have much style yet) but I put both up to see yall&#39;s opinion on which one whould be a better tag in general (once my skill progresses) and then just crits... Thanks you

Kayone707
01-17-2007, 06:17 PM
Originally posted by emokid@Jan 17 2007, 12:36 PM
idiot, i prefer number 2, the massive arrow kind of ruins it

truth, well like that, especially the two t&#39;s

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/387/dscn6237al8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

emor
sorry if its anyones name or sumthin but i dont plan on using it, just like the letters.
i suck bad with the tags.
if done with spraypaint and with flairs. this would look hot

asmatic91
01-17-2007, 06:27 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5223/neeasmashytsg0.jpg















ne1 think this shyt nice

whoarethereal evil
01-17-2007, 06:28 PM
agreed ^ agreed yas 4 kayones quote not asma

some of mine

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00442.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00407.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00359.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00358.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00350.jpg

Kayone707
01-17-2007, 06:38 PM
i like the first letter of your tag (on the bottom one)

slinks
01-17-2007, 08:20 PM
any improvement??

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti021.jpg

Tahworsetoy
01-17-2007, 09:19 PM
Originally posted by Tahworsetoy@Jan 17 2007, 06:12 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3450/tag001uw6.th.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag001uw6.jpg)
aight so I went ahead and tryed to work a few new name tag&#39;s cuz my other one is taken 1) and 2) say "MSX" and the other says silvia (that one doesn&#39;t have much style yet) but I put both up to see yall&#39;s opinion on which one whould be a better tag in general (once my skill progresses) and then just crits... Thanks you
bump b/c i fixed the broken link just look at the msx&#39;s I like those better

Fube
01-17-2007, 09:56 PM
its hard to crit on this shit but tahworsetoy i guess your livein by your name. shit just looks like handwriteing to me. keep going. people say keep it simple, well u dont get much more simple then that. time to step up a bit more.

here some so im not flickless.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Handstyles/alka1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Handstyles/LastScan.jpg

..SmOeK 1..
01-17-2007, 10:05 PM
Fube-Like i said in my PM, like the 2nd one. Where i got most of my ideas from :).

TahWorse-Agree with fube.

Slinks- Try some advice that someone gave me, try writing ur name really fast and if it looks good use it and work on it. Your flick just looks like you sat there and spent 10 minutes writing that. Try speeding it up abit more and make them flow together more.

Whoare- that looks pretty kool on that door.

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3803/frame00104sp7.th.png (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00104sp7.png)

Something I was tryin today at school

*LoST*
01-17-2007, 11:21 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Jan 17 2007, 08:20 PM
any improvement??

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti021.jpg
I agree with smoek 1, it does look like you took your time with it. A tag is to quick. but besides that it looks great...just change the bottom of the L cuz it looks lika an H...and try squishing the letters up a bit.

Cham
01-18-2007, 08:10 AM
ok I&#39;m trying to figure out waht name I want so here are a few ive been messing around with....

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y252/yeah_mayen/DSCN1867.jpg
water1, merk(1)

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y252/yeah_mayen/DSCN1869.jpg
enro1, enzo, water1(again), cham 1

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y252/yeah_mayen/DSCN1865.jpg
mac dre sticker, enzo

any feed back will be greatly appreciated...

MAERone
01-18-2007, 08:25 AM
my friend writes merk one and he kills that shit
just sayin

Cham
01-18-2007, 08:40 AM
I usually write merk with no one...what city?

zander
01-18-2007, 12:15 PM
heres mine :)

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djzander/Untitled-1.jpg

*LoST*
01-18-2007, 03:28 PM
^^^^is it me or does that say PuffPuffPass?....Please tell me that&#39;s not your tag name. I don&#39;t even know what to say about that.....

Billburg
01-18-2007, 03:36 PM
i think it does because the one at the bottom says toke......

DLove
01-18-2007, 03:41 PM
some lil hanstyles, need to work on em
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0817.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0820.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0801.jpg

2KoS
01-18-2007, 03:49 PM
that c looks bare like Cope2&#39;s

MAiNKo
01-18-2007, 03:53 PM
Cham- Im likin the ENRO and ENZO tgas the best out of all, they&#39;re a step above everything else. def like the stickie for ENZO, got a nice eazy thorie down for that name too.

DLove- I like the middle one best.

zander
01-18-2007, 04:23 PM
Originally posted by *LoST*@Jan 18 2007, 03:28 PM
^^^^is it me or does that say PuffPuffPass?....Please tell me that&#39;s not your tag name. I don&#39;t even know what to say about that.....
yep that what it says , it my tag cuz ppl where i live are weed h8trz &#33;~

Cham
01-18-2007, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by MAiNKo@Jan 18 2007, 03:53 PM
Cham- Im likin the ENRO and ENZO tgas the best out of all, they&#39;re a step above everything else. def like the stickie for ENZO, got a nice eazy thorie down for that name too.

DLove- I like the middle one best.
thanks for the feed back, I was leaning toward enzo also. Ill prolly stick with that for the time being. but thank you for your feedback

..SmOeK 1..
01-18-2007, 04:48 PM
Shouldnt be criting you 2 because you didnt take the time to crit anyone else. But since theres nothing else to crit

DLove- First ones the best, Easiest to read and cleanest. On the second one dont crowd a bunch of junk around your letters that doesnt fit in. Dont just add things on just because you feel like it and if they dont look good.

zander- Get a new name...other than that the style isnt bad just trying giving your letter abit more room so they arent so squished together



http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00104sp7.png

Post this again since no crits last time...

New style i was trying.

tasty
01-18-2007, 06:56 PM
zendar im loven that style, but seriously man that name, what are you thinking?
anyways heres mine, crits?
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image009.jpg

Nosypainter
01-18-2007, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by DLove@Jan 18 2007, 03:41 PM
some lil hanstyles, need to work on em
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0817.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0820.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0801.jpg
nice D

Kaser TBS
01-18-2007, 08:08 PM
tasty - I&#39;m liking that tag a lot, simple and legible. Nice work.


Here&#39;s one I&#39;m working on, only done it in paint so far. Started with the S and the E need to work on it and make it flow more coz the K, A and R aren&#39;t flowing with the style.

Constructive crits please...
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1443/mystyleinprogressdg0.jpg

Here is my legible tag too, this is from a while back.
Constructive crits on this too please.

Legible tag...
(IN MY SIGNATURE)

technyne
01-18-2007, 08:14 PM
first post here... just started about a week ago, I&#39;ve been fooling around with some handstyle/tag stuff and I figured I&#39;d post one for some crit:

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7978/echocp5.jpg

any comments are appreciated. if it looks like complete crap, tell me that- i&#39;d like some tips or suggestions on how to improve, though. thanks

whahappen?
01-18-2007, 08:18 PM
echo work with that first one the e and c look good dont make the h extend too much but itd be cool if it extended not so far though
kaser the left leg of your k the line points the other way and just looks weird take that out and make the r like the one in your sig cool a though
http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/3290/picture041yy6.jpg

SKriBL*666
01-18-2007, 08:21 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 15 2007, 04:54 PM
Sezer, Turn, Trash, and Tron. Some good stuff. The rest- keep working at it. Most of you are doing a really good job of starting simple, keep working with that for the time being. Evolution is a slow process for most.

Fuckin around in the basement with some new ink. I wrote Mr. 12&#39;s name cuzz I did a handyrock exchange w/ him back in the day and loved the flow of his name ever since...

For anyone looking for a fantastic ink under 6 bucks that&#39;s redily available at craft stores, think leather dye... ;)
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/8803/im000501oz4.jpg
Sexiest handy ever...

entri
01-18-2007, 08:36 PM
CEZR-real nice handies...fire&#33;

theres my tag.... :ph34r: :ph34r:

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture1256.jpg

whahappen?
01-18-2007, 08:37 PM
you should try critting people its really fun

Chop Logic
01-18-2007, 09:34 PM
I think most of you guys in here should try go simple letters and then build from there, just rty and let it flow dont have so many hard edges until you get good. Thats what I do anyway. I nicked these tags from sketches but I want crits anyway. Thanks.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymotags.jpg

CEZR how come you never go in the toy piece thread?

tasty
01-18-2007, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by tasty@Jan 18 2007, 06:56 PM
zendar im loven that style, but seriously man that name, what are you thinking?
anyways heres mine, crits?
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image009.jpg
bump for crtits
whahappened - its decent something abuot the s is weird to me tho. your handstyles also look soo much liek your throws, i dono if thats good or bad lol.

T45K
01-18-2007, 09:39 PM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture080.jpg
any critques????

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-18-2007, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Jan 14 2007, 08:22 PM
nice stuff trash.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1512.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1511.jpg
bump.
t45k- can&#39;t really see it to well.
tasty- not feelin&#39; the atr junt.
entri-space the letters a little more.

T45K
01-18-2007, 10:01 PM
yeah, ummm it&#39;s a old locker I have outside....

tasty
01-18-2007, 10:09 PM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands+Jan 18 2007, 09:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Edward"Sezer"Hands @ Jan 18 2007, 09:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Edward"Sezer"Hands@Jan 14 2007, 08:22 PM
nice stuff trash.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1512.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1511.jpg
bump.
t45k- can&#39;t really see it to well.
tasty- not feelin&#39; the atr junt.
entri-space the letters a little more. [/b][/quote]
its pretty slick man but thats suposed to be a Z right.. its lokin more like an R maybe work on it a lil

Fube
01-18-2007, 10:52 PM
^^^ its a one liner i believe, which if it is u get extra sick points from me. maybe add a touch of space between the line for the z so it dont over lap on the middle part. for ledgibility only Sezer. bet that shit would look extra sick with a nice drippy mop. id say its street time brotha. :)

Kaser TBS
01-18-2007, 11:21 PM
Originally posted by Kaser TBS@Jan 18 2007, 08:08 PM
tasty - I&#39;m liking that tag a lot, simple and legible. Nice work.


Here&#39;s one I&#39;m working on, only done it in paint so far. Started with the S and the E need to work on it and make it flow more coz the K, A and R aren&#39;t flowing with the style.

Constructive crits please...
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1443/mystyleinprogressdg0.jpg

Here is my legible tag too, this is from a while back.
Constructive crits on this too please.

Legible tag...
(IN MY SIGNATURE)
New page, Bump for a few more crits.

..SmOeK 1..
01-18-2007, 11:25 PM
Originally posted by ..SmOeK 1..@Jan 17 2007, 10:05 PM


http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3803/frame00104sp7.th.png (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00104sp7.png)

Something I was tryin today at school, new style be nice.
.....Crits? 2nd bump and not one crit.




Tasty- Looks really good. Flows nice. Excellent job.

Entri- Too messy, clean it up and make it readable.

tasty
01-18-2007, 11:35 PM
alka - i dono about that tag lol, its just so basic and plain. lke looks liek a huge roller brought down to a real small size.

kaser - that gap inbetween the A and the S And the S and the E shoudl go kinda looks akward.

..SmOeK 1..
01-18-2007, 11:58 PM
Oo well, was just trying a new style out. Thought it kinda looked like something good i would draw with a sketch of an alien..I unno i was high when i did it lol.

Fube
01-19-2007, 01:23 AM
Originally posted by ..SmOeK 1..@Jan 17 2007, 10:05 PM


http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3803/frame00104sp7.th.png (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00104sp7.png)




i might could do that with my dick and an etch-a-sketch. well, maybe my toes gimmie some credit here. no offence ment smoek but i believe hes saying to add something to it, give it some flava&#33; some flow, some flair. look at some of the stuff i sent u and bite the shit out of it. then add to it. then post it.

good luck brotha.

2KoS
01-19-2007, 04:12 AM
Originally posted by ..SmOeK 1..@Jan 18 2007, 11:58 PM
Oo well, was just trying a new style out. Thought it kinda looked like something good i would draw with a sketch of an alien..I unno i was high when i did it lol.
No you weren&#39;t.

Btw it looks like you did it with a fuckin ruler.

T45K
01-19-2007, 08:33 AM
Originally posted by Fube+Jan 19 2007, 01:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Jan 19 2007, 01:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-..SmOeK 1..@Jan 17 2007, 10:05 PM


http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3803/frame00104sp7.th.png (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00104sp7.png)




i might could do that with my dick and an etch-a-sketch. well, maybe my toes gimmie some credit here. no offence ment smoek but i believe hes saying to add something to it, give it some flava&#33; some flow, some flair. look at some of the stuff i sent u and bite the shit out of it. then add to it. then post it.

good luck brotha. [/b][/quote]
A dick and a Etch-a-sktech????? ahahahaha

Fube
01-19-2007, 10:23 AM
sounds kinda mean but i had to say it. lol. sig materal. do it.

KoreTwo
01-19-2007, 04:51 PM
Juast wanted to share something i found out. If you cut a small groove on the nib of your markers, you&#39;ll get 2 lines when you draw instead of 1, and sometimes it gives you a really nice effect. E.G. below.

Says HEALTH, but i messed up on the l. And no, i don&#39;t write health, i write kre. Just did that during health class.

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/health.jpg

technyne
01-19-2007, 06:06 PM
^^ cool effect



Originally posted by technyne@Jan 18 2007, 08:14 PM


http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7978/echocp5.jpg



bump

slinks
01-19-2007, 06:35 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti014-1.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti011-1.jpg

etch a sketch
01-19-2007, 08:45 PM
i don&#39;t like your underline for the lance one and also i don&#39;t like how most of ur letters are squarish.. i don&#39;t think thats even a word.. haha

Sluts_r_us
01-19-2007, 08:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/greenhandy.jpg

i hate doing them on paper...ill get some flixc of them on walls some time..

edit :heres some
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/120206_2202.jpg
ran out of paint so it got mad thin..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/122606_1801.jpg

look at it from an angle

Red3
01-19-2007, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Jan 19 2007, 06:35 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti014-1.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti011-1.jpg
I thought it said shinks... :D I find s&#39;s like that played out in most cases.


Sluts: I like it on the wall, like the thin-iosity.

.D.H.
01-19-2007, 09:43 PM
slinks make it less pointy. try and do it really quick a lot and eventually you&#39;ll devolop a nice, easy, hopefully good looking steezy. put a little flow and vbe into it, if ya get what im sayin.

sluts, i like it.bottom flick looks cool w/ those lights

slinks
01-19-2007, 10:55 PM
thanks for the crits...ill try to make it less pointy and more steezy

etch a sketch
01-19-2007, 10:57 PM
echo - nice and simple keep it up and you&#39;ll develop a great handie

whahappen?
01-20-2007, 12:04 AM
haha what the hell is up with you today:P

whahappen?
01-20-2007, 12:10 AM
HLLZ YEA MOFUGGAH ND ZOMGZ I WILL TEH PWN JOO IN TEH HANDYSTEZZLE BTTLE SO LEZ GO OR GTFO........UR MOM&#33;

ZOMGZ&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; PGE 666&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

freakshow
01-20-2007, 02:07 AM
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7489/im0087611zn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
handy for my new name

Fosale!
01-20-2007, 03:47 AM
too choppy.
the pen one is better.
id fix your T and bring your letters closer together

Fosale!
01-20-2007, 03:49 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 19 2007, 08:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/greenhandy.jpg

i hate doing them on paper...ill get some flixc of them on walls some time..

edit :heres some
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/120206_2202.jpg
ran out of paint so it got mad thin..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/122606_1801.jpg

look at it from an angle
bump.

Punny
01-20-2007, 11:20 AM
New tag.
"NekstOne"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Nekstone.jpg
Page 666 B)

noam12
01-20-2007, 11:24 AM
lol punny i like the guy on the side of the pic, the tag itself is pretty sweet though

Punny
01-20-2007, 11:26 AM
Thanks man, i kinda ran out of paper so i grabbed one of my dads post it pad things.

Bastardo
01-20-2007, 12:11 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8579/picture2509zf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TricksForKids
01-20-2007, 12:32 PM
666 ;)

spectr i actually really like that tags, reminds me of some heads in toronto, keep it up, especially that R

foasle that pesk on the glass is money

punny i only really like the T, try spreading out your N more, and make your e more noticeable

bastardo, sick as always, just hate that happy face lol

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/3415/aplhabit9hp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sluts_r_us
01-20-2007, 02:39 PM
fosale bumped my pics...those are me not him :(

TricksForKids
01-20-2007, 02:40 PM
the funny thing is, i KNEW it was you, like i made an effort to type sluts, not fosale..and yet i still typed his name...lol youve written for pesk for a while now, i knew;)

alive
01-20-2007, 02:47 PM
to think i almost missed page 666. gimmie a sec and ill put up a pic with a handy


bottom of both these pages.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03035.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03034.jpg


as for crits for the rest of u. . . . well i dunno shit bout handies. just wanted page 666. and fuck, crits too, but im afraid i dont really have anything to offer in return in terms of handy crits. im talking in circles. fuckk.


peace.

Hot_Pocket
01-20-2007, 02:59 PM
Bawk, I might have to steal your, M, R, S, and O :D




*Yeah, this post is just to be on page 666 :(*

BAPKEB
01-20-2007, 03:36 PM
just cause its page 666 doesnt mean all you satan worshipers have to jump out and start chantin not that eny one has yet

uhhh
01-20-2007, 03:44 PM
i love how you say "don&#39;t do this"
when nobody has already.
your a quite sensible person bapkeb <_<

DocterX
01-20-2007, 03:54 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/noname666.jpg

Bastardo- im diggin your stuff. Youve got mad style.
Alive- I like what i see. But would love to see just a handstyle.

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:00 AM
Originally posted by DocterX@Jan 20 2007, 03:54 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/noname666.jpg

Bastardo- im diggin your stuff. Youve got mad style.
Alive- I like what i see. But would love to see just a handstyle.
That&#39;s horrible.

Heres one of mine

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/Graffiti/Mine/img037.jpg

freakshow
01-21-2007, 12:02 AM
i hope you arent being serious

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by freakshow@Jan 21 2007, 12:02 AM
i hope you arent being serious
About what?

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 12:24 AM
your a fucking idiot
you first told some one there horrible, nice crit
then said you suck heres one of mine
first off that isnt a tag dickless
and second the guy you called horrible is better than you and the "piece" although id just say that your pencil had a seizure, has shitty letter structure

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:26 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 21 2007, 12:24 AM
your a fucking idiot
you first told some one there horrible, nice crit
then said you suck heres one of mine
first off that isnt a tag dickless
and second the guy you called horrible is better than you and the "piece" although id just say that your pencil had a seizure, has shitty letter structure
Sorry?
His was pretty horrible though.
And it&#39;s not like I&#39;m saying im the best or anything....
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/Graffiti/Mine/img015.jpg

ShIfTeD
01-21-2007, 12:28 AM
edit: wrong thread

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:30 AM
I came here for the same reason other people do.
To get better. I was pretty much messing around when I said that kids stuff was horrible.

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 12:34 AM
okay whatever i dont feel like arguing

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:37 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 21 2007, 12:34 AM
okay whatever i dont feel like arguing
Do you have aim?
I could use some help.
SwingForBloodx

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 12:38 AM
MSN
im paranoid as hell about cops so dont even ask for my user

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:40 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 21 2007, 12:38 AM
MSN
im paranoid as hell about cops so dont even ask for my user
Alright man, it&#39;s cool.

''HAZE'' *88*
01-21-2007, 01:53 AM
yo yo yo crits? shits? tits?
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02070.jpg
:rolleyes: :rolleyes:

not.a.gangster
01-21-2007, 02:09 AM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;HAZE&#39;&#39; *88*@Jan 21 2007, 01:53 AM
yo yo yo crits? shits? tits?
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02070.jpg
:rolleyes: :rolleyes:
Not bad, but don&#39;t ever write Haze. You&#39;re at least the 1000th to do so. Here&#39;s a good link for Haze.

http://www.interhaze.com/

Choose wisely. Choose something that represents YOU as a person, and can ONLY be you. Dondi was Dondi because that was his parent&#39;s nickname for him. Be unique, just because it sounds chill doesn&#39;t mean it&#39;s the right way to go. You should feel part of YOU on that wall. Not part of a fucking marker.

Other than that, you have good handstyle. Keep workin on it, and you&#39;ll progress well.

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 02:15 AM
it says faze
maybe

sank one
01-21-2007, 02:16 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/Graffiti/Mine/img015.jpg

wow are you fucken serious

http://bombingscience.com/graff/damotu.jpg

Fube
01-21-2007, 02:43 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/Graffiti/Mine/img015.jpg

wow are you fucken serious

http://bombingscience.com/graff/damotu.jpg

lol damn, he cant even bite right. thats a gross "trace" of a bite. i hate it when people come on here and dont think that someone in a graffiti forum is not going to call them out on it. retarded. when u do stuff like that here its like trying to pass off a fake 20 dollar bill to a banker. get a clue man.

on top of that dude, your in the wrong thread, there is a difference with Tags, and freehand/black book work.

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 02:49 AM
:o ...... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
pwnt

Red3
01-21-2007, 03:31 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 21 2007, 02:15 AM
it says faze
maybe
but his user name is haze also...

i saw 7ase, lol.


christ nice cover of a bite, and it&#39;s not a tag, espece du marde.

DocterX
01-21-2007, 03:53 AM
i appreciate the kind words wha happen?? And yeah his bite doesnt even look all to good. i was about to offer an exchange with the kid maybe my toy ass could come up with some nice simple letters for him...

But any critz?? i need to work on my tag.

(h)Faze- I dig it. not sure what to say about it.

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 11:59 AM
Originally posted by Fube@Jan 21 2007, 02:43 AM

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/Graffiti/Mine/img015.jpg

wow are you fucken serious

http://bombingscience.com/graff/damotu.jpg

lol damn, he cant even bite right. thats a gross "trace" of a bite. i hate it when people come on here and dont think that someone in a graffiti forum is not going to call them out on it. retarded. when u do stuff like that here its like trying to pass off a fake 20 dollar bill to a banker. get a clue man.

on top of that dude, your in the wrong thread, there is a difference with Tags, and freehand/black book work.
I didn&#39;t put the paper right on top and traced.
I used the idea for practice.
It&#39;s not like I&#39;m going to write that word... It&#39;s just so I can learn different styles of writing.

alive
01-21-2007, 12:27 PM
fair enough, but we dont need to see that shit. or at the very least, put a disclaimer at the bottom.


ok? so although honestly, i dont believe u, i think ur just trying to cover ur tracks, congrats, u came up with a good enough story for us to give u one pass. this happens again. i have confidence ull get banned, shamed, and killed.


peace.

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 12:36 PM
Originally posted by alive@Jan 21 2007, 12:27 PM
fair enough, but we dont need to see that shit. or at the very least, put a disclaimer at the bottom.


ok? so although honestly, i dont believe u, i think ur just trying to cover ur tracks, congrats, u came up with a good enough story for us to give u one pass. this happens again. i have confidence ull get banned, shamed, and killed.


peace.
What are you talking about?
Only things I&#39;ve written on walls, was with Paint Markers.
And I wrote "no war"

2KoS
01-21-2007, 01:29 PM
you sound like a dumb ass wannabe.

swingforblood
01-21-2007, 01:33 PM
Originally posted by 2KoS@Jan 21 2007, 01:29 PM
you sound like a dumb ass wannabe.
You&#39;re cool huh guy?
I said I&#39;m new....
So how am I a wannabe?

ras
01-21-2007, 01:34 PM
look hes new...we all make mistakes in biting somebody when we didnt even realize we was biting...im sure he wont do it again..

Bastardo
01-21-2007, 01:45 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/2827/picture2626im.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6662/picture2604lt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9105/picture2581zw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2179/picture2577yi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/8963/picture2544xu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9219/picture2506yf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)