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Fube
05-29-2007, 08:01 PM
nice maso. :o

for handy battle. crits welcome.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/rhymetime.jpg

MUSEone
05-29-2007, 08:06 PM
Fube- Im really felling it. Not much I could say, I think its fine the way it is.

May I ask wat u used? :blink:

MASO
05-29-2007, 08:11 PM
dang fube, that is pretty nuts. i like that but could you do a simpler one without so much addons. i'd like to see how that looks. and maybe its just me but what does it say?

Fube
05-29-2007, 08:15 PM
http://artistcraftsman.com/Merchant2/graphics/00000001/MULPII.jpg

a cheap alturnative to the high dollar shit. i rack when i need to and buy when i can.

it says "rhyme time". hunt for em.

newera
05-29-2007, 08:40 PM
way too much things in that. just stick with the tag and get rid of the brackets maybe but i really liek it. looks like you put alot of effort into it so ill give you that

Fube
05-29-2007, 08:51 PM
i wanted it busy. i like it when u have to actually hunt the letters. thanks for the feedback though.

MUSEone
05-29-2007, 08:52 PM
MASO- did u get my pm?

cosmic1
05-29-2007, 08:52 PM
maso- those handies are pretty sick man lots of flow
fube- i agree with new era to busy gotta keep it more simple i think
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5764/sspx0007nb1.jpg
bump

MUSEone
05-29-2007, 08:54 PM
...please don't tell me that says skape.....

cosmic1
05-29-2007, 08:56 PM
skope- i was just messin around with letters and i think it came out nice its simple

spag
05-29-2007, 08:58 PM
skope-like it, but not really feelin the p.

bobo9827
05-29-2007, 09:00 PM
yeah, change up the k too

MUSEone
05-29-2007, 09:00 PM
ok thank god. lol im judt startng a new name and tryig out "skape"

i saw ur post and was like "u've gotta be fucking joking me..." lol

MUSEone
05-29-2007, 09:02 PM
and i have a story that goes w/ "skape" so dont think I saw urs first and was like "o! im gonna change that to an a!" lol

cosmic1
05-29-2007, 09:12 PM
ill mix it up tonight post tomorow see what you guys think thatnks for the postive feedback tho
peace for the night haha

glyce
05-29-2007, 09:17 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soang.jpg

any advice?

newera
05-29-2007, 09:34 PM
on the top one get rid of that lineon the S. it make the O then look like a b and connect the k with the n so its all even. i like the underline though

cert1
05-29-2007, 09:50 PM
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/x95tmp1.jpg

crits if u cant see it tell me n ill get a better pic

newera
05-29-2007, 10:24 PM
middle one looks nice, im guessing the really hard to read ones are scribbled out?

skub
05-29-2007, 10:33 PM
yeah there scribbled out or very complicated and crappy :D

cert1
05-29-2007, 10:41 PM
na there scribbled out the 1s that arent r the middle bottom right top left and the top right

RemoZ
05-29-2007, 10:47 PM
Cert, those are dope. Wanna do an exchange?

Skope, Fix the K and the P other than that Dope.

Soank, lose that nipple on the S and bring the K close and tweak it a little.


Shitty one liner I made.

http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/8400/1001016bb2.jpg

cert1
05-29-2007, 10:53 PM
ok wat do u rite

newera
05-29-2007, 11:18 PM
that one liner aint really that bad
keep working on it

BAPKEB
05-29-2007, 11:24 PM
you hella jacked enem cert1 he does a heart handstyle like that

spiller
05-29-2007, 11:27 PM
i know alot of people that have hearts in their handsteezies.

tonentink
05-30-2007, 12:26 AM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2909/whitekoldxd3.jpg

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/883/goldkoldoi5.jpg

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/5295/koldtaggx0.jpg

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4919/greentoservm5.jpg

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9436/poletagar5.jpg

makeparty!
05-30-2007, 12:29 AM
Im really new to graf. Ive been doing makeparty stickers but i dont really have a name. Just recently i thought of a couple names i really like. I cant really decide between "Stez" and "Skez" but i like the way they sound and i think they are pretty orginal in terms of other people having them. Now i want to get a legit tag before i take it to the streets but im having a really hard time making a tag i like. I want something real graf looking so its not just written out but something you can actually read. Ive been working on a couple and this is what ive come up with. Please any critisizm, suggestions, and general help are welcomed. Thanks.

http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/member/pictures/1180502768graftags.jpg

CaMa
05-30-2007, 01:32 AM
Cert - Getting better brah. Keep at it. Im starting to like.
Remoz - I dont like the M brother, otherwise is aiight.
tonentink - Nah. Dont like it. At all. No crits. Just dont like it.
makeparty! - Practice son! I know your new but just p-r-a-c-t-i-c-e!!! and I prefer SKEZ over STEZ

Now for my junk... Just for the record, I was using Plastikote minis and NY Fat for these...

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6959/imgp0345gj7.jpg
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/1863/imgp0346pj0.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7948/imgp0347ck5.jpg

Crits!

larsson719
05-30-2007, 03:36 PM
I like the last "YZ", it looks good... and yea.. still working on my wickets after i get those down i'll work on heart styles too i c those alot around here

Dusk07
05-30-2007, 03:46 PM
Dusk.

http://aycu37.webshots.com/image/18516/2002296192499692920_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002296192499692920)

http://aycu06.webshots.com/image/17565/2002237458570757597_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002237458570757597)
FTSK-meh

http://aycu02.webshots.com/image/17521/2002210103943676558_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002210103943676558)



more crits? only got two..they were postitive just want more?

Degausserr x
05-30-2007, 04:04 PM
okay so i did this with a shitty marker and when i retraced it got really sloppy... so ignore that part... crits?

spag
05-30-2007, 05:08 PM
cama-nice flow.
makeparty-you don't need to add the extra stuff like quotes or arrows to everything. keep that it mind. make sure it flows. just keep practicing a lot.

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6186/img0163ts1.jpg

whatcha guys think? i played around with the t a bit. i'll return crits if you post an image.

Prince.Gov
05-30-2007, 05:50 PM
cama-nice flow.
makeparty-you don't need to add the extra stuff like quotes or arrows to everything. keep that it mind. make sure it flows. just keep practicing a lot.

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6186/img0163ts1.jpg

whatcha guys think? i played around with the t a bit. i'll return crits if you post an image.

the t looks way better,
keep it up

MUSEone
05-30-2007, 06:53 PM
Ideas for "eskape" or "skape"?

Im in a major brain fart right now. Nothing is coming to mind. :\

larsson719
05-30-2007, 08:00 PM
Yea it's looking good the "r" needs some tweaking tho.. here's some shit from me and baut (mines has shitty pic)
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6421/image219px5.jpg
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/273/image220hq6.jpg

Rogue
05-30-2007, 08:34 PM
okay so i did this with a shitty marker and when i retraced it got really sloppy... so ignore that part... crits?

Better than the last one you posted. Lose the add ons, the arrow, quotes, and such. Keep practicing, but you've gotten better since your last post.

Cert- It's good because it's simple, but keep working. Your getting there.

Dusk- Not bad, looks like you used a shitty marker though.

whahappen?
05-30-2007, 08:37 PM
I GOT A PHILLY STYLE I LIKE IT.

me too..kinda
pics tomorow
larsonn noooice
cert you really fixed it up i like it alot now

cert1
05-30-2007, 08:39 PM
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/x95tmp1.jpg

crits if u cant see it tell me n ill get a better pic


bump for crits

Rogue
05-30-2007, 08:48 PM
bump for crits

Wha wha, nice shit. I just relized that there's 2 cert's.......

BIGel
05-30-2007, 09:00 PM
larson can you do those phillys in something other than a ballpoint? they look awful as is, if they had some fat on them they'd prolly look good though.

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/241465150.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/241874165.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/249314941.jpg

MASO
05-30-2007, 09:03 PM
spag - nice work. like the t. the asterisk goes well with it.
larsson and cert1 got some dope philly handies.
muse - did you get my pm? you might have to turn on your pms since they did this update.

bigel - jus curious bout what you use to write those.

tasty
05-30-2007, 10:25 PM
lookin good bigel..

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9178/image0211to8.jpg
crits on that?

Degausserr x
05-30-2007, 10:48 PM
kinda directed towards rogue the helpful, but other crits are appreciated

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0950.jpg

MASO
05-30-2007, 11:04 PM
tasty - that tag is hott

Rogue
05-30-2007, 11:08 PM
kinda directed towards rogue the helpful, but other crits are appreciated

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0950.jpg

Haha, thanks. Better without all of the add ons, but that does it say in the corner? It's hard to see in the pic. Your getting better, your not great, but atleast you actually follow advice unlike some people on here.

Tasty- That's looking nice. I have to admit, I liked your old name better, and your old style better, but the new stuff is still fresh. Good shit.

Dusk07
05-31-2007, 12:35 AM
yeah did use a shitty marker..expo..ftl. lol. thnks for the crits guys.

CaMa
05-31-2007, 01:54 AM
CRITS??

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7447/imgp0352xw1.jpg
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/4278/imgp0355yc8.jpg

scoot
05-31-2007, 01:58 AM
second one is better in my oppinion cama.. its the stars and halo that throw it off in the first one..

btw, way to keep it nice and simple and to the point

CaMa
05-31-2007, 02:02 AM
second one is better in my oppinion cama.. its the stars and halo that throw it off in the first one..

btw, way to keep it nice and simple and to the point

Like this?
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6959/imgp0345gj7.jpg
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/1863/imgp0346pj0.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7948/imgp0347ck5.jpg

scoot
05-31-2007, 02:03 AM
exacally.. keep it like that.. just add a little more flair to it.. as in style

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-31-2007, 01:58 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture064.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture035.jpg

whahappen?
05-31-2007, 04:19 PM
good^
more attempts at a philly style
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6149/picture106ub1.jpg
i like these 2
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/4154/picture107le1.jpg
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/7219/picture104cx3.jpg

Prince.Gov
05-31-2007, 04:48 PM
CaMa-Your letter structure needs some work, its kinda plain...and i dont really like the blaze orange piant.
But keep it up

MASO
05-31-2007, 05:10 PM
muse - i got some stuff for you but can't pm you. hit me back.

MASO
05-31-2007, 05:14 PM
you gotta turn on your pms. user cp > edit options > accept pms

whahappen?
05-31-2007, 09:23 PM
boreedddd....
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/9261/picture108xx7.jpg
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8955/picture109le5.jpg

Roolete
05-31-2007, 11:50 PM
whahappened im not likin those, i think you should make them more readable

i feel like the first doesnt have any flow...crits?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4298.jpg\

*how do you upload pics now?

ordinary
06-01-2007, 02:50 AM
can anyone help me out with this.
I CANNOT come up with an "O" for my handstyle.
I write "ord" and my r and d are okay but they kinda suck too.
Any tips on how to make an O besides a circle?

d_g
06-01-2007, 03:01 AM
'O' is a pretty plain letter, kinda a bad one to start a tag with too. Can't help you except to say check out some other handies or add a letter to the front.

ordinary
06-01-2007, 03:05 AM
I know. Some people make them a little more creative with like lines through them and such but I can't find something I like.

d_g
06-01-2007, 03:33 AM
If I was you I'd add another letter in front. Don't worry about being attatched to your name. I don't know anyone who has changed their name atleast once. I'd add another letter to the front of it. You'll find getting flow a lot easier if you have a decent letter to start with. Try an 'S' maybe, that's always a fun letter for me to play with. I have a love-hate relation ship with 'S', and all the letters in my name for that fact :-s

inkbits
06-01-2007, 04:43 AM
Edward your "G" is real dope at the end of the brown hands man.

drunken props for drooler mildstylewriters.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p11032213.jpg

whahappen?
06-01-2007, 11:32 AM
inkbits your style is nice
eh...
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6865/picture110lk5.jpg
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/5714/picture112zg7.jpg

hate my r's and e's..
damn it in real life it doesnt look that shaky

spag
06-01-2007, 11:34 AM
nice shit inkbits.
nice flow in the teze one sezer.

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/8550/img0166bs2.jpg
uno, dos, y tres.
jus playing around with 1 and 2.
you guys think i could start putting up 3?

tonentink
06-01-2007, 11:37 AM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/3664/aotoppersky9.jpg

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/2606/freekerzud7.jpg

spag
06-01-2007, 11:51 AM
ey, you know what tonentink i looked through your posts and you haven't critted a damn thing and you're just posting mad pictures.

all you've posted are pictures and asking people if they want to battle.

i don't know if you expect to get crits or what; and at that why you would post pictures in the first place without expecting crits.

whahappen?
06-01-2007, 01:15 PM
tonetink i dont like any of those
i like these ones i did better a lil more even i guess
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/6527/picture096xl4.jpg
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4855/picture095uh1.jpg

Tri1
06-01-2007, 01:17 PM
nice shit inkbits.
nice flow in the teze one sezer.

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/8550/img0166bs2.jpg
uno, dos, y tres.
jus playing around with 1 and 2.
you guys think i could start putting up 3?

i recon the you need to work on the R in the third one. doesnt seem to look right.

Tri1
06-01-2007, 01:47 PM
need help so any crits?

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture001.jpg

SKAB_himself
06-01-2007, 01:51 PM
i like it.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-01-2007, 01:55 PM
nothing to crit ..

ugh..sum flair thing..from in my yard

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics325.jpg

and sum mop thats been running for over a year when i wrote Ra :p

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics326.jpg

shitty flick aha

Captain
06-01-2007, 02:12 PM
Inkbits how long have you been at this? Your shit's blinding. The good way.

Cert, take a chisel tip to school with you and try to fill a notebook a day. You're on the right track, only thing to really do now is look at tons of tags (not to bite, just to get your mind in the right setting) and practice your ass off. It's really pretty simple.

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3029/bekady2.jpg
http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/2194/moronlv1.jpg
http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/4661/bonerkf4.jpg

Just fuckin' around. Tell me what you think.

tonentink
06-01-2007, 02:30 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8813/fuckeveryonedy6.jpghttp://img78.imageshack.us/img78/7656/meanstreakwv3.jpg

http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/4162/streakerbrownte0.jpg
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/1852/drippysavagehu9.jpg

spag
06-01-2007, 03:38 PM
ey, you know what tonentink i looked through your posts and you haven't critted a damn thing and you're just posting mad pictures.

all you've posted are pictures and asking people if they want to battle.

i don't know if you expect to get crits or what; and at that why you would post pictures in the first place without expecting crits.

....

whahappen?
06-01-2007, 03:44 PM
tonetink i dont like any of those
i like these ones i did better a lil more even i guess
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/6527/picture096xl4.jpg
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4855/picture095uh1.jpg
shutup^

MASO
06-01-2007, 06:31 PM
captain - i like the boner tag the best
toser - the one on the yellow post is dope
whahappen - i can't crit on philly style since i dont understand it myself but it doesn't quite look like it has that philly flare yet

i was jus messin with these. totally stupid or got sumthin goin?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/14BS.jpg

whahappen?
06-01-2007, 06:39 PM
damn it!
as soon as i uploaded these i tried it again and did it better but now im to lazy to take a pic
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/5853/picture098ug6.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1884/picture097uv9.jpg
maso i like the top right the best

MASO
06-01-2007, 06:40 PM
thats a lot better. i like it now

Rogue
06-01-2007, 07:21 PM
The top right looks good, except get rid of the crown. Seriously..........it's gotta go. But nice job none the less.

MASO
06-01-2007, 07:22 PM
hahaha yeah thanks.

MASO
06-01-2007, 08:26 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/16BS.jpg
crits on any of these? thanks.

G - Wahl
06-01-2007, 08:27 PM
those are looking nice, maso

Prince.Gov
06-01-2007, 09:06 PM
maso-looking really good, exept i dont really like the bottom right one, its the end, the T M its a little ummmm.....trippy

Feat337
06-01-2007, 09:38 PM
Maso- everything looking good cept the first one top left. The first S kinda looks like a B.

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u188/Feat37/DSCN0741.jpg
Neither one is good, I know, just looking for crits

qway
06-01-2007, 09:48 PM
ya those are ok i can't give that much advice for handstyles cus i fail utterly at them but keep your letters more simple and just bend them a little then you can add otherstuff as you progress

caper2
06-01-2007, 09:53 PM
hey can someone do me a favor i really need a good tag and u guys have been doin some sik ones so can somone do me up a tag i write caper2

Feat337
06-01-2007, 09:58 PM
hey can someone do me a favor i really need a good tag and u guys have been doin some sik ones so can somone do me up a tag i write caper2

Dude you'll never advance as a writer if you don't do your own shit. Just get a piece of paper and a marker and try your own thing

Sem 4549
06-01-2007, 10:47 PM
first time postiN on bombing science...an im new...really new...advice?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5720/yeaon5.th.png (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yeaon5.png)

whahappen?
06-01-2007, 11:14 PM
new page soon but whatever
whiteboard cause i have no paper
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/1474/picturecw6.jpg

Sem 4549
06-01-2007, 11:18 PM
white board shyts hott

Prince.Gov
06-01-2007, 11:33 PM
first time postiN on bombing science...an im new...really new...advice?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5720/yeaon5.th.png (http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yeaon5.png)

Did you do that in the program "paint"?

Prince.Gov
06-01-2007, 11:38 PM
Feat-First of all dont connect your letters like that, second i would say no quotes, third is to write faster so your lines are strait, fourth is no 3 curly q's, fifth, use a better marker...keep it simple, keep experimenting.

whahappen?
06-01-2007, 11:40 PM
new page soon but whatever
whiteboard cause i have no paper
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/1474/picturecw6.jpg
ok bump mebbe?

Sem 4549
06-01-2007, 11:54 PM
yea i did mine in tha paint program...i aint got a camera on me but thats basically my tag...i practice alot an im tryna get good, so suggestions for itt?

Prince.Gov
06-02-2007, 12:19 AM
first get a camera...jk...get rid of the arrow, dont connect the s to make it the middle slash of the e, and make the m dip more... keep working on it.

Sem 4549
06-02-2007, 12:37 AM
haha i know i need a camera, an yea i'll work on it, thanks

Prince.Gov
06-02-2007, 12:40 AM
no problem

MASO
06-02-2007, 12:45 AM
thanks for the crits. and prince, i agree that last one came out pretty wack. i was jus tryin to go another way with the T.

RealaNightmaren
06-02-2007, 08:46 AM
SEM - Try to so curve your letters more, instead of having all those corners.
WhaHappen - Thats lookin pretty nice I'd say.

Here's mine
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a66/realanightmaren/blisstag.jpg

Prince.Gov
06-02-2007, 10:29 AM
Bliss-man i really love your letter structure, and flow, they are both good...i would say to just keep one working with it to get more and more coplex...maybe try something different with the SS.

Bazer
06-02-2007, 10:41 AM
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/1474/picturecw6.jpg
ok bump mebbe?

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0852.jpg

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-02-2007, 10:46 AM
nothing to crit ..

ugh..sum flair thing..from in my yard

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics325.jpg

and sum mop thats been running for over a year when i wrote Ra :p

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics326.jpg

shitty flick aha

bump..
ddaaamnn..your all so ghetto with teh whiteboards i need one...ultra 3k0 !

sketch3
06-02-2007, 10:50 AM
i had a lil kids etcha sketch, but with a pen, use to peice the fuck out of it, then i lost the magnetic pen, rip cheap lil etcha sketch rip off

Bazer
06-02-2007, 10:53 AM
hahaha.. thats funny man....

=| i found a sticker in my pocket. and i didn't wanna keep posting without pictures.

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0853.jpg

whahappen?
06-02-2007, 10:54 AM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/SP_A0852.jpg
hahaha shutup man...
but i am pretty hip hop...word

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-02-2007, 11:40 AM
damn crit my shit your bastards !

ich sproken die duetsh ja !

JukeToy
06-02-2007, 11:53 AM
I know it reeks of toy but what do you think anyway...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q210/zebba224/101_0064.jpg

sketch3
06-02-2007, 11:56 AM
i think u had a lil spazem with a marker in ur hand, i cant make out a single letter, you need to read the new to grff thread

JukeToy
06-02-2007, 11:57 AM
i think u had a lil spazem with a marker in ur hand thread

HAHAHAHA

Vice
06-02-2007, 12:36 PM
im going to have to laugh at that quote as well. i can see the E though!

Tri1
06-02-2007, 02:21 PM
I know it reeks of toy but what do you think anyway...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q210/zebba224/101_0064.jpg
Man just a guess but does it say TQED? you need to start off simple. then when you can do real simple tags good work up to the next level.

RealaNightmaren
06-02-2007, 02:22 PM
Thanks for the crits, Prince. I don't know what to do differently with the SS, tohugh.

And Juke, don't try and like mash all your letters together, space them out a abit.

Tri1
06-02-2007, 02:29 PM
need help so any crits?

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture001.jpg

im bumpjng this as i didn't really get any crits ect.

RealaNightmaren
06-02-2007, 02:43 PM
Looks pretty ill, Tri. Maybe it would look better with a thicker marker? Try that out sometime.

Vice
06-02-2007, 02:51 PM
i would probobly say the same thing as the guy before me. the flow is good and it looks good as a whole but i think it definitly would look better with a thicker marker. and also what Juke wrote was Tred not TQED. oh and Juke, the squiggle thing below the D should be moved down a bit as it looks as if it should be a letter or part of a letter. it makes the tag as a whole somewhat illegible. also the fact that the R goes back into the T doesnt really help either.

Bomber444
06-02-2007, 03:07 PM
juke go back to the drawing board

Tri1
06-02-2007, 03:26 PM
thanks for the crits real and vice. I did try it with a thicker marker but it just didn't seem to flow as well. looked to chunky.

Roolete
06-02-2007, 03:36 PM
yeah tri it has a nice flow

crits?http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4300.jpg

Prince.Gov
06-02-2007, 03:51 PM
good...exept for the O/! its too forced, i would say lose the !.

Fube
06-02-2007, 03:53 PM
looks like a sweet sticker to me. i like the s. but not feeling the o.


but then again, no one can read my shit. but i dont care. the letters are there.

heres some i been doin cus im bored.

crits welcome.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/LastScan-9.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/streetsessions.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/sessions.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/murderbynumbers.jpg

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-02-2007, 03:53 PM
nothing to crit ..

ugh..sum flair thing..from in my yard

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics325.jpg

and sum mop thats been running for over a year when i wrote Ra :p

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/CameraPics326.jpg

shitty flick aha

BUMP FOR THE LAST FUCKING TIME...CRIT SUM PAINTED SHIT DAMN ! :mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad: :mad::mad:

meso..looks aight

Fube
06-02-2007, 04:02 PM
y do u people insist on bumping there own shit? y? if your gunna bump somthing bump someone else with yours. or, just forget about it. i can understand one bump. but when u kids bump shit like 3 or 4 times u look like a douch bag. if u get no crits on the 2nd bump let it fuckin go. damn.

Wutchoogonnadoo? (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=25613)- get a better flick man. u got trees and shit on it.

Wutchoogonnadoo?
06-02-2007, 04:05 PM
y do u people insist on bumping there own shit? y? if your gunna bump somthing bump someone else with yours. or, just forget about it. i can understand one bump. but when u kids bump shit like 3 or 4 times u look like a douch bag if u get no crits on the 2nd bump let it fuckin go. damn.

Wutchoogonnadoo? (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=25613)- get a better flick man. u got trees and shit on it.

fube..i bumped it a few times cuz everytime i did ump it it got over looked compltley..
abd that RA is from march 06..aghagaga

Vice
06-02-2007, 04:32 PM
thats fine tri if you tried it and it didnt flow as good then thats fine.

MASO
06-02-2007, 04:37 PM
the AMK is pretty coo. the RAone doesnt look good.
fube - thats mad style/skills but it jus doesn't seem practical for the street but i know thats another story. still dope though.

Saeo1
06-02-2007, 04:38 PM
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u178/Sfeo-Oner/Frame00177.jpg

Killer Handstyle Fube.

Fube
06-02-2007, 04:49 PM
"maso" its not for the street brotha. thanks for the crits.

"saeo" i dont like the sharp point in your e. and the s confused me at first. thought it was a c.

Tri1
06-02-2007, 05:05 PM
watchoogonnadoo?- i like the A on the first one but get a better pic without the plants. The second one is a big no though

Fube- im lovin that style.

Saeo1- it's ok to take your pen off the paper. All the letters linked like that doesn't look that good. The structure of some of the letters goes wrong the s and a for example.

sir.holland
06-02-2007, 07:30 PM
Man just a guess but does it say TQED? you need to start off simple. then when you can do real simple tags good work up to the next level.


it reads tred....

whahappen?
06-02-2007, 09:01 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/5056/picture099op8.jpg

Synaesthesia
06-02-2007, 09:16 PM
This is mine, pretty simple and not that great. Any crits welcome.
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i722472_IMG0689.JPG (http://www.imagehosting.com)

RealaNightmaren
06-02-2007, 09:28 PM
Rapid - Looks good, I love the way you structured the D, I don't know if I'm really feeling the a though, but it looks nice with the rest of it. I'd say lose the arrow at the bottom, though.

whahappen?
06-02-2007, 09:28 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/5056/picture099op8.jpg

Prince.Gov
06-02-2007, 10:54 PM
whahappen?-i dont know much about that kinda style, its philly right? but i like that one

Sem 4549
06-03-2007, 12:42 AM
wah happen - yurs looks better every time yu post...i see yu really practice it alot...juss keep worken it an yu'll turn yur good tag even better

Synaesthesia
06-03-2007, 02:28 AM
Rapid - Looks good, I love the way you structured the D, I don't know if I'm really feeling the a though, but it looks nice with the rest of it. I'd say lose the arrow at the bottom, though.

Ok cheers man. I'll work on in tonite.

bbuba
06-03-2007, 02:29 AM
im gone 4 10 days then BS turns 2 confusing shit

amk
06-03-2007, 07:05 AM
w00t...you all hate the 2nd one...
that was from March 2006
why dont people read the posts..
but that means iv improved w03t
yes..

keep it up Whappen..i have your back..from them fags on 12oz

PEACE

revolt92
06-03-2007, 10:19 AM
Fuck 12oz, bs and cs bitches!!!!

WolfBurrns
06-03-2007, 11:01 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/phillysteez.jpg

Something differant.

tonentink
06-03-2007, 11:02 AM
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5884/sewkoldow2.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8008/sloptosergq4.jpg


http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1985/albertsonstagdz8.jpg

.jug.
06-03-2007, 11:05 AM
tha one on the man hole made me smile, you must write on everything..

tonentink
06-03-2007, 11:13 AM
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/3540/koldslopszl1.jpg
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7233/koldconezl9.jpg
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/5875/koldaotkk1.jpg

bouncingsoul
06-03-2007, 11:39 AM
Poop

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0781.jpg

MASO
06-03-2007, 12:35 PM
wolfburrns - that is something different. i dont think i like the three lines jus hangin down from the S,L, and E but maybe you could do sumthin with it. good idea though.
bouncing - i like the top circled one on the crease but maybe without the circle. the left middle one. i see you makin subtle changes but it definately looks better. i kinda like the one to the right of the circled tags even though i dont know what that X mark at the bottom is.

AnteUp
06-03-2007, 12:39 PM
nice and simple :)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0010.jpg
crits?
o and knews i like the left middle one also

enigmatic
06-03-2007, 03:26 PM
some tags i did in weird ass spots. i mean who lives an oven in the middle of an ally? weird.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2207.jpg

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2206.jpg

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/100_2205.jpg

SAMEONE those are all good now go paint.

spag
06-03-2007, 03:29 PM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6833/img0170mj4.jpg
i like it kasr i guess. still prettay simple.
sameone-the first in the thick red is my fav.

crits? think i start putting any up?

Bomber444
06-03-2007, 03:41 PM
Cert I like #1

What u guys think about this, cover of my bb
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/f.jpg

MASO
06-03-2007, 03:43 PM
anteup - it is exactly that. i like the second purple one except for that first E. and the first red one. i think the E goes better with it.
kasr is simple too.
bomber's is nice. good structure.

MASO
06-03-2007, 03:49 PM
some flicks of stuff i did earlier today.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/17BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/18BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/19BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/20BS.jpg

crits welcome. i think my execution is kinda bad.

spag
06-03-2007, 04:16 PM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6833/img0170mj4.jpg
i like it kasr i guess. still prettay simple.
sameone-the first in the thick red is my fav.

crits? think i start putting any up?
bump from endd.

nice maso i like them all.

bojangles
06-03-2007, 04:19 PM
arrow needs to be improved a little, i prefer 1 because all the letters are roughy the same size

Casa45
06-03-2007, 04:23 PM
BUMP FOR THE LAST FUCKING TIME...CRIT SUM PAINTED SHIT DAMN ! :mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad: :mad::mad:

meso..looks aight

You should really stop hitting places up until your somewhat good. so practice somewhere, ANYWHERE, just as long as people cant see it....

Bomber444
06-03-2007, 04:25 PM
these are my real tags, which u guys like better?
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/tag2.jpg
or this one
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d184/janddcards4sale/tag1.jpg

and dam meso those are the nicest tags I have seen in a while, period.

bojangles
06-03-2007, 04:27 PM
both pretty much the same. . . . .bottom one is better

Casa45
06-03-2007, 04:27 PM
WTF is the difference...

MASO
06-03-2007, 04:32 PM
WTF is the difference...

hahaha for real. you did the tag, took a flick, drew a circle, then took another flick. the tag is good though. but i think i like the one on the cover better.

spag #1 is better but i think you should come up with a bunch of different ways to write it.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-03-2007, 05:52 PM
some flicks of stuff i did earlier today.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/17BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/18BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/19BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/20BS.jpg

crits welcome. i think my execution is kinda bad.
i like them nice and simple.

Roolete
06-03-2007, 06:26 PM
yea maso their nice..and nice placement

Degausserr x
06-03-2007, 07:09 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0967.jpgcrits?

Bomber444
06-03-2007, 07:23 PM
hahaha for real. you did the tag, took a flick, drew a circle, then took another flick. the tag is good though. but i think i like the one on the cover better.


Yea they r both the same tag just wanted to see if you guys like the exclamation point or not.

MASO
06-03-2007, 07:27 PM
Yea they r both the same tag just wanted to see if you guys like the exclamation point or not.

oh you write SPEC right. the one above kinda reads SPECA to me. I didn't even know it was an exclamation point.

degassaur - thats kinda cool except i dont know what that is to the bottom right of it.

Degausserr x
06-03-2007, 07:31 PM
its kind of a crew me and my friends made for shits and giggles... any advice?
wheres rogue when you need him

Mo152
06-03-2007, 07:34 PM
dope tags maso but quotes are gay and played out by us toys, other than that your shits legit keep it up

MASO
06-03-2007, 07:40 PM
thanks mo.

degausser - i see, but with the quotes up top it kinda looks like a crossed out quote mistake or sumthing at the bottom. or maybe you could jus change the look of your crew name.

AnteUp
06-03-2007, 07:46 PM
Edward your "G" is real dope at the end of the brown hands man.

drunken props for drooler mildstylewriters.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p11032213.jpg
BUMP FOR HOTNESSS

umm i kno i asked u this before but wat kind of marker is this?

Degausserr x
06-03-2007, 07:46 PM
ight, but thats besides the point. advice on the tag would be better.

maso btw i like your tags, theyre ill.

Bomber444
06-03-2007, 07:49 PM
oh you write SPEC right. the one above kinda reads SPECA to me. I didn't even know it was an exclamation point.

degassaur - thats kinda cool except i dont know what that is to the bottom right of it.

Yea SPEC. Never thought of that last peice to be an A. w/e that exclamation point doesnt look that good in that tag I've done it better.

Yo maso are those tags with a krink mop?

Captain
06-03-2007, 07:55 PM
BUMP FOR HOTNESSS

umm i kno i asked u this before but wat kind of marker is this?

problably a deco or some other type of small-tipped paint marker.

MASO
06-03-2007, 08:00 PM
dega - the tag name itself is fine its just that i seen you post a similar one before. you should come up with a bunch of ways to write it seeing as B and K are pretty versatile.

bomber - yeah its a krink mop. but the first one is an OTR HTB.

Degausserr x
06-03-2007, 08:01 PM
ive changed the k around a lot, and like that one probably the most. however, i cant seem to find a diff B i like... help?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-03-2007, 09:51 PM
some flicks of stuff i did earlier today.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/17BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/18BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/19BS.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/20BS.jpg

crits welcome. i think my execution is kinda bad.
what type of mop or marker did you use?

Jroc1993
06-03-2007, 10:02 PM
http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/1663/newmarkermorneim4.jpg
just put some fiebings in my dryed out pilot

skub
06-03-2007, 10:03 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a151/badsanta170/tag.jpg

i effed up the u bad becuse i thought the buss driver was looking.

anyone can give me tips? or crits be as harsh as you want.

MASO
06-03-2007, 10:11 PM
what type of mop or marker did you use?

I used the gold colored mop from Bombing Science. its pretty tight.

Rogue
06-03-2007, 10:15 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0967.jpgcrits?

Way better than last time. K's suck, but I like the way you did yours. Start working on some other styles though, play around a bit. Tags can always get better, try a whole new style, you may end up with something thats way better, but if not start again. That crew tag looks like shit. Change that up aswell. Keep practicing man.

Skub- It lacks flow. The U looks like a v to me. Post a better pic with the U fixed and I can help you more.

Maso- Thats some nice shit. You followed my advice and lost the crown I see. You really have some potential in writing. Look forward to your future shit.

Morne- It lacks flow like skubs. Put your letters closer together, and write faster. It looks like you took some time to write that. Are those exclamation points or dots and quotes?

inkbits
06-03-2007, 10:20 PM
BUMP FOR HOTNESSS

umm i kno i asked u this before but wat kind of marker is this?

It's a Uni Posca man.

Jroc1993
06-03-2007, 10:21 PM
yeah it took me a second and my letters are usually closer but i didnt know if the ink was gonna expand (it did that to me earlier :S) and those are quotes and dots

bbuba
06-03-2007, 10:33 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/7442/dscn1107lv4.jpghttp://img488.imageshack.us/img488/9282/dscn1104we0.jpg

Degausserr x
06-03-2007, 10:43 PM
Make a new account and instead of Rogue, its Rogue the Helfpul.

Degausserr x
06-03-2007, 10:44 PM
oops.... Helpful*

Rogue
06-03-2007, 10:47 PM
Haha, don't give me all the credit though. A lot of people help in here

MASO
06-03-2007, 10:49 PM
DAMN resize those pics bbuba. the SIS tag looks more like a logo. anytime something is perfectly symmetrical i think logo. and the DOS tag reminds me of the NOS logo. Sis is kinda of a hard name to tag but it does need work. the I with the big dot doesn't look good. but you write FAZR and that looks pretty fun to write. and you should never write "bad ass" next to your tag haha.

bbuba
06-03-2007, 11:04 PM
its not sis its "SIZ" as in sizzle sis woukd b like sister or somfin

agreed w/ the DOS thing

fazr was gettin boring

Rogue
06-03-2007, 11:06 PM
Resize those pics please

Caso
06-03-2007, 11:17 PM
Hey guys, just registered in this forum like 2 minutes ago. I write Caso now, but I used to write Scan but I haven't gotten and recent flicks of my tags with Caso but this is one of my Scan tag. Comments will be appreciated!

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3071/casothrow002hh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bbuba
06-03-2007, 11:18 PM
Dega- Wer Do U Live?


Cant Do Pic Resize Now Camera Died And Pics Arnt On The Laptop

MASO
06-03-2007, 11:21 PM
sorry. SIZ. i thought you jus flipped the S around to make it symmetrical. anyway, jus keep playing with your letters. try and write each letter in lotsa different ways till something sticks.

caso - the three lines on the left look cleaner than on the right or maybe you could get rid of them all together. i see the A but the bottom part of it is a little funky. the S and N are nice. and welcome to the forums.

Samp1e
06-03-2007, 11:46 PM
WAMP WAMP
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7789/photo0001ob1.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3573/photo0002lz1.jpg
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6734/photo0003mu9.jpg
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7660/photo0004fp0.jpg

yiKES i'm no goodoodo

skub
06-04-2007, 12:06 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a151/badsanta170/tag.jpg

i effed up the u bad becuse i thought the buss driver was looking.

anyone can give me tips? or crits be as harsh as you want.

i know i gotta crit to get crits but im not good at graff so i cant give any good crits, so if someone would kindly crit my stuff :)

MASO
06-04-2007, 12:17 AM
samp1e - i like those tags. the first red one is the best to me.

skub - like rogue said, it lacks flow. i can see you're carrying the same letter structure throughout but try something else. come up with something totally different and you may like it better. or jus keep tweakin what you got. keep playing with your letters.

skub
06-04-2007, 12:20 AM
okay thanks i was tweaking it today and it looks way better, too bad i dont have my cam with me right now.

but the thing is im new to graff and when i think of a tag my mind goes blank, can anyone give me some tips on being more creative?

i know i got it in me, but over the years i lost it.

thanks :p

MASO
06-04-2007, 12:27 AM
jus go through the tag threads on these forums or other sites. look at every pic of a tag you can find. see which ones pop out at you and what you like about it. get inspired and start writing. don't bite but jus get a feel for what you like in a tag and put your ideas on paper.

skub
06-04-2007, 12:29 AM
okay thanks i was thinking about doing that but i thought that was blatant biting and biting = bad?

Revive123
06-04-2007, 12:33 AM
What do you think abt my tag. Please list anything that might improve it...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v324/philbob123/ffa.jpg

MASO
06-04-2007, 12:45 AM
hahaha yeah biting is bad. don't straight copy someone else's stuff. obviously if you like it, you like the structure and how it flows. try and get that flow in your tag with your letters. everyone gets inspiration from somewhere.

better post a pic before people get pissed. here's a flick of a crap tag but i thought it was amusing.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/inyoface.jpg
in yo face foo!

MASO
06-04-2007, 12:50 AM
revive - the R and and last E are not working. bringing the E around to an underline like that doesn't look good. there are other ways to do it if thats what you want. study a bunch of tags and get some ideas. that name might be difficult to write too. 2 V's and 2 E's but if thats your tag then you'll work it out.

Bomber444
06-04-2007, 08:20 AM
yea revive I'd say try and put some curves into your letters, especially the E's. Get rid of the underline and get a completely new R. Play around with it.

tonentink
06-04-2007, 10:41 AM
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6488/xoutyp9.jpg
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/3592/realtorss7.jpg
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3593/topbleezdj1.jpg

Degausserr x
06-04-2007, 11:55 AM
i live in atlanta

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 01:06 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/5056/picture099op8.jpg
toser in the 2nd on the e is to big
revive try an uppercase i i thought it said revne with a circle addon at first, the r is looking like a k, do your first e like you did your last one, and dont put that addon on the bottom of the last e, take off the quotes

tasty
06-04-2007, 01:21 PM
whahappened thats a sick tag there
toser - im diggin the last one

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo42.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo43.jpg

crits?

Bomber444
06-04-2007, 01:38 PM
I like the 1st one tasty, nice flow

bbuba
06-04-2007, 02:02 PM
oops

*Soap*
06-04-2007, 02:22 PM
Metro 519 love your tag style... great !

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 02:28 PM
haha just mad esome new ones with faces, my circle on the s always fucks me up
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/7458/picture101qi7.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/9441/picture100tz8.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6069/picture102uf0.jpg

*Soap*
06-04-2007, 02:42 PM
Novadays I put a saint sign over the tag and quotes("Soap") and under the tag I
write AMH(my crew) =...And Magic Happens

http://www.mobisux.com/album/data/500/medium/Soap_5.jpg
http://www.mobisux.com/album/data/500/37774Soap.jpg

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 04:04 PM
newer...
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7313/picture104uv6.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3628/picture103uo9.jpg

Iotyx
06-04-2007, 04:10 PM
soap, I like the way your "A" looks in the second and third row, first column ones.

Sersk
06-04-2007, 04:14 PM
first tag attempt, crits welcome...
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f213/RealKing/Tag.png

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 04:18 PM
take off the crown and fix the e so it edoesnt go down so far, and make your k around the same size as your first s
newer...
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7313/picture104uv6.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3628/picture103uo9.jpg

Iotyx
06-04-2007, 04:19 PM
Lose the crown, it looks fine without it.

Sersk
06-04-2007, 04:25 PM
a bit of a fixer upper from the last one posted...
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f213/RealKing/Tags2.png

Iotyx
06-04-2007, 04:26 PM
Eh, I think I preferred the e when it went down.

MASO
06-04-2007, 04:44 PM
lookin good whahappen

sersk - try a different E. they both look good. the second S in the blue one is kinda messed up but thats probably cause you write it too quickly.

MUSEone
06-04-2007, 04:54 PM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/2909/0604071746vg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
*ignore the dot under it and near the "e"
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3699/0604071747tl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits?

glyce
06-04-2007, 05:41 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soang1.jpg
any crits?

MASO
06-04-2007, 06:20 PM
muse - i'm not sure what it needs but its something. just flow i guess. looping the K around the top like that may confuse it for an R. the bottom one is better than the top. i don't like the x's in the E's.

glyce - thats nice and simple. the o is much smaller than all the other letters and i would say jus go with the underline instead of underline and quotes. or try a star. but thats jus me. i like stars.

MUSEone
06-04-2007, 07:18 PM
wat u think I should do to the top, lol it was my mop tag

reka one
06-04-2007, 08:20 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/06-03-07_1815-1.jpg

muse- lose them extra extensions

MUSEone
06-04-2007, 08:22 PM
On which one? lol

Saika
06-04-2007, 08:27 PM
I think he means the extension on the top of the K... that does really look like an R tho.. the one on the E I think is fine tho

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 08:40 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/06-03-07_1815-1.jpg

muse- lose them extra extensions
since you seem to what your doing with philly hands do you think mines alright and if not could you suggest what to do about it

reka one
06-04-2007, 08:40 PM
yeah, on the Ks and the "e" in the second one

reka one
06-04-2007, 08:43 PM
since you seem to what your doing with philly hands do you think mines alright and if not could you suggest what to do about it

ha yeah well for now i would work on the face but i never add them on cause i cant do them good haha but what do u write

MUSEone
06-04-2007, 08:45 PM
I think he means the extension on the top of the K... that does really look like an R tho.. the one on the E I think is fine tho


Yea im working on that I got a good one, but I can't find wat I just did w/ the pic lol

Fube
06-04-2007, 08:49 PM
Sersk- if that is your "first attempt" its really not a bad start. looks like your trying to put some style to it. try to keep a balance with your letters, u got one huge one then a small ass retarded e. the the rest of your letters are about the same size. best one in my opnion is the blue one. because evetything is just about ballanced. keep trying.

whahappen- dont take offence, but i fuckin hate your style. not that is not good, i just hate it. looks like a bunch of scribble to me. to each his own. have to say the first one is growing on me.

muse- bottom one is 30 times better then your top one. i dont like how u mixed your e's up. one uppercase and on lower. but i like the flow. keep developing it.

glyce- new? when u first start we all do the crowns and quotation marks, or halos. to me its imporntant to know how to use them. cant really read it due to the flic. looks simple. keep it up.

Reka- i know of another reka but whatever.( http://www.rekaone.com/ )and also with the quotes. your shit is horrible. a handstyle is not a speed contest unless your in the streets. when u do it on paper and have some time people expect to see that. when u get something u like, u practice it over and over till u can do it in your fuckin sleep. that just looks like u rushed it and expected some form of style to come out.

edit: also, if thats philly style i think its gay. id like to see some heads that do philly style rock it then maybe i would understand. no hate Reka and whahappen.

MUSEone
06-04-2007, 08:52 PM
Fube- thnx bro, im working on another, wel, i got the pick, but imageshack is acting fucking stupid, so i can;t upload it yet. :\ lol

tasty
06-04-2007, 09:15 PM
whahappened thats a sick tag there
toser - im diggin the last one

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo42.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo43.jpg

crits?

bump for new page and crits!

rekaone im not feelin that tag too much, maybe loose the quotes

reka one
06-04-2007, 09:16 PM
fube- i dont write reka, never did, thought of it but found that guy like 3 days later and i never claimed it to be good, thats y im posting it in the TOYS FORUM

tasty
06-04-2007, 09:28 PM
whahappened thats a sick tag there
toser - im diggin the last one

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo42.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo43.jpg

crits?

damnn i hate beeing the last on the page:(

bloodlandmoney
06-04-2007, 09:33 PM
i like em... there easy to read and arent plastered with shitty crowns and arrows

Fube
06-04-2007, 09:56 PM
fube- i dont write reka, never did, thought of it but found that guy like 3 days later and i never claimed it to be good, thats y im posting it in the TOYS FORUM

ment no DIS-RESPECT. just givein crits man. thats all.

whahappen?
06-04-2007, 10:19 PM
Sersk- if that is your "first attempt" its really not a bad start. looks like your trying to put some style to it. try to keep a balance with your letters, u got one huge one then a small ass retarded e. the the rest of your letters are about the same size. best one in my opnion is the blue one. because evetything is just about ballanced. keep trying.

whahappen- dont take offence, but i fuckin hate your style. not that is not good, i just hate it. looks like a bunch of scribble to me. to each his own. have to say the first one is growing on me.

muse- bottom one is 30 times better then your top one. i dont like how u mixed your e's up. one uppercase and on lower. but i like the flow. keep developing it.

glyce- new? when u first start we all do the crowns and quotation marks, or halos. to me its imporntant to know how to use them. cant really read it due to the flic. looks simple. keep it up.

Reka- i know of another reka but whatever.( http://www.rekaone.com/ )and also with the quotes. your shit is horrible. a handstyle is not a speed contest unless your in the streets. when u do it on paper and have some time people expect to see that. when u get something u like, u practice it over and over till u can do it in your fuckin sleep. that just looks like u rushed it and expected some form of style to come out.

edit: also, if thats philly style i think its gay. id like to see some heads that do philly style rock it then maybe i would understand. no hate Reka and whahappen.

yea some people like it and some people dont, its defiantly a preference thing, and theres like 8 basic philly styles and wickets and stuff, and my main one, the first one, is the one im really really trying to work on
if you wanna see good philly heads who do wickets and tall hands check out kadism, prozak, agua,karma ,anexa, enem, end, and curve are just a few that come to mind
haha cause i know mine isnt the best since i just made it up a few days ago but i can see it getting better the more i do it
thanks for the crit though
aser those are nice i like the 2nd one best

bbuba
06-04-2007, 10:32 PM
wut the hell?

memo
06-05-2007, 04:56 AM
I know there are some north londoners out there.. i just moved here a month ago (NW) and i cant find paint.. what stores carry paint. please pm with the any info! thanks (yes i have been looking around =( )

MUSEone
06-05-2007, 06:07 AM
Heres that one that i was talking about last nite that I couldn;t upload.

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6629/0604072114te8kd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

*Soap*
06-05-2007, 08:38 AM
soap, I like the way your "A" looks in the second and third row, first column ones.

Thanks...
Those were the first attempts

Vice
06-05-2007, 09:18 AM
Muse that looks good. good flow and structure. i like it, keep working on em.

tonentink
06-05-2007, 12:40 PM
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/935/graff101bl2.jpg
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4144/graff102hs4.jpg

trashhh
06-05-2007, 01:20 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41085.jpg

-Ark-
06-05-2007, 01:38 PM
Hey everyone. I'm really new to the graff scene, and I was wondering what you guys thought of my tags. I know they aren't good, but does anyone have any tips they could give me?
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=87&stc=1&d=1181068522

tonentink
06-05-2007, 01:54 PM
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/7191/graff106yg4.jpg
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/341/graff103gf6.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7884/graff104wn1.jpg

tasty
06-05-2007, 02:09 PM
toser that throw is sick

Tri1
06-05-2007, 02:11 PM
Hey everyone. I'm really new to the graff scene, and I was wondering what you guys thought of my tags. I know they aren't good, but does anyone have any tips they could give me?
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=87&stc=1&d=1181068522
:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

damn you i write that.

no hate though. if you want to improve lose the "" and try to get your letters to flow more. though you might have to write somthing els lol.:p

Dez-One
06-05-2007, 02:35 PM
Trash, I'm feelin that one man. Sick...as always.

bojangles
06-05-2007, 03:26 PM
did this today with the last of my chrome shitty carpaint at a chill spot..i write mane
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC00648.jpg

i dont like the E..i dont know whether to do 'E' or 'e' for the last letter

scoot
06-05-2007, 03:43 PM
seems like a name bite..