Toy Tagz..only

[-Ark-]

Hey everyone. I'm really new to the graff scene, and I was wondering what you guys thought of my tags. I know they aren't good, but does anyone have any tips they could give me?
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=87&stc=1&d=1181068522

[tonentink]

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/7191/graff106yg4.jpg
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/341/graff103gf6.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7884/graff104wn1.jpg

[tasty]

toser that throw is sick

[Tri1]

Hey everyone. I'm really new to the graff scene, and I was wondering what you guys thought of my tags. I know they aren't good, but does anyone have any tips they could give me?
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=87&stc=1&d=1181068522
:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

damn you i write that.

no hate though. if you want to improve lose the "" and try to get your letters to flow more. though you might have to write somthing els lol.:p

[Dez-One]

Trash, I'm feelin that one man. Sick...as always.

[bojangles]

did this today with the last of my chrome shitty carpaint at a chill spot..i write mane
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC00648.jpg

i dont like the E..i dont know whether to do 'E' or 'e' for the last letter

[scoot]

seems like a name bite..

[bojangles]

everyone sayin that, exept i have never heard of name in england . . . pissin me off

[Brian Peppers]

did this today with the last of my chrome shitty carpaint at a chill spot..i write mane
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC00648.jpg

i dont like the E..i dont know whether to do 'E' or 'e' for the last letter
looks liek you got angry and started scribbling on the wall.....

[bojangles]

thanks for that...dickhead

[tonentink]

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/7191/graff106yg4.jpg
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/341/graff103gf6.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7884/graff104wn1.jpg

aOt

[Rogue]

Try writing with both kinds of e. Post it here and I'll help you out more.

[diabolik]

Im pretty new to writing i've only been writing about 2 weeks but, these are some of my first hands

http://i13.tinypic.com/6bjjz3p.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/5z20ebc.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4q75jpt.jpg
http://i15.tinypic.com/4tav4v4.jpg

Crits welcome :)

[MUSEone]

Theres a guy in my area that writes monk... lol

[Brian Peppers]

thanks for that...dickheadI thought maybe you wanted some crits... calm down.

[Degausserr x]

okay so im messing around with what i write... crits?
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0971.jpg

[MUSEone]

Here i sit ripping my hair out because I can't get the "e" right when I keep trying the last tag I posted.. this fucking sucks lol It comes out different every damn time...

[MASO]

bojang - that E definately doesnt flow with the rest of the tag
monk - not a bad start at all
dega - thats a nice SKE. i dunno if the dot in the E was intentional but its not neccessary

here's one i been jus messin with
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/21BS.jpg
the M looks like crap to me but what do you guys think. or i could jus throw the idea out.

[alive]

bojangles- thats essentially the same as NAME's hand, which is also (sorry) wack.

maso, its not bad, get the lettesr closer together.



so. . . . a paragraph bitching about modern art, if u know mad shit abt it would make sense, if not itl sound retarded. but the point is the general handstyle

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03234.jpg



thanks

[larsson719]

ske - the "s" and "k" could be changed im liking the "e" though
Maso - The ones on the columns look ok the 2nd one I don't know about the extension things..
Well here's some stuff
des
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/7263/des2yp5.jpg
Here's some sick wickets from arar
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/840/ararah9.jpg
crittzzzzzzz

[MASO]

thanks i'll work on it.
alive - thats some nice writing. i like that "its that real new york city crime" even though the C in crime kinda looks like an E.
larsson - i cant begin to crit philly styles but it looks dope.

[Sersk]

my third or fourth attempt at making a good tag...
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f213/RealKing/Tags3.png

(i dislike the second "s" in the black tag)

[Sersk]

MASO: i like the first one in the first column
SKE: i like it except for the dot

[2KoS]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Photo-0117.jpg

[bbuba]

bojangles- thats essentially the same as NAME's hand, which is also (sorry) wack.

maso, its not bad, get the lettesr closer together.



so. . . . a paragraph bitching about modern art, if u know mad shit abt it would make sense, if not itl sound retarded. but the point is the general handstyle

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03234.jpg



thanks

those last 2 lines are hilarious

[MASO]

sersk - the black one is nice. yeah the second S is messed up but again it looks like you wrote it too fast. you can slow down during practice. very nice letters. the bottom blue one still got that weird little E that doesn't look good.

2kos - thats a nice tag. a little TOO much doodads for me (underline, circle, lines over the S, and a star) but its nice.

[alive]

thanks all, but i just wanted to say maso, it was supposed to read "that real new york city grime" but w/e. crime works too. haha.

2kos, if you pulled your letters closer together i would like it. and get rid of the star n shit.

i dont know SHIT about wickets.

sersk, dont do the E extension. and otherwise, just work on getting the letters to fit together better.

[dim]

ill wickets arar

[tonentink]

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/9823/savyp1.jpg

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/6016/shoekoldhu6.jpg

[larsson719]

savage - If thats what I think it says I don't know, changing the "a" will make it look much better
What do you guys think of this
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/8478/image226it4.jpg
Hint: For those that can't read it because it still is messy I'm working on it... the letters are on the top, says "deses"

[tonentink]

those wickets are fuckin sick ive tried but cant get it down

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/985/whiteaotsc0.jpg

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/789/whitecanfm2.jpg

[Vice]

my third or fourth attempt at making a good tag...
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f213/RealKing/Tags3.png

(i dislike the second "s" in the black tag)

ill have to agree with you that the S looks a bit strange but other than that they all look good.

oh and for anybody wondering i wont be able to post any pictures until i get a camera on my birthday which will be early july but until then ill just post crits.

[whahappen?]

thats alot better^ but separate the bottom of the s from the middle bar
better ones
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/5527/picture107nf5.jpg
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/9081/picture106vq5.jpg

[Degausserr x]

again this is just me messing around with a new thing to write...http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0974.jpg

[larsson719]

I can't read the ones in green :o I feel stupid

[whahappen?]

they say "zers"

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/DSC00077.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/DSC00076.jpg

[Fube]

they say "zers"

they say "scribble" to me. guess im not a fan of "philly style".


no hate on u. i just hate it.

[MUSEone]

First time using my mop, its fucking terrible haha
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/241/0606071446oi7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I want crits, good or bad.

[MUSEone]

O and here thes pic of that "monk"
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/5056/0606071350zq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Told ya. lol

[5yn]

[quote=MUSEone;780374]First time using my mop, its fucking terrible haha
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/241/0606071446oi7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
buddy u call that a mop!!! wheres the drips :o haha squeez the mop harder when ur at the bottom of ur letters works very nicely u'll see, and take thoes weird lines at the end off it dont suit quite nicely

[MUSEone]

Its crappy ass ink that I found at my dads office lol Should I add anything to it? Anything i should change (other than the lines)?

[MUSEone]

"Should I add anythign to it" <-- Meaning in the mop, ink, etc.

[MUSEone]

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4724/0606071353ql6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Back when i started, as in, like a week after. lol I sucks major ass, I know.

Crits?

[larsson719]

oh shit that was philly style? No disrespect man but you need more practice just like me :D
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1209/desle4.jpg

[Vice]

yeah i dont like philly style either... impossible to read. all the letters look the same, although no beef on anybody! just my opinion.

[Degausserr x]

i agree dude fuck philly style

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

i agree dude fuck philly style
co-sign.

[Rogue]

Don't hate on other styles, that's the point of style. Philly style is hard to do, even if it looks like scribbles. I've seen some dope Philly styles, that were insane. I don't like it much either, but it's just different. Keep up the Philly style, it's starting to look good whahappen.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Don't hate on other styles, that's the point of style. Philly style is hard to do, even if it looks like scribbles. I've seen some dope Philly styles, that were insane. I don't like it much either, but it's just different. Keep up the Philly style, it's starting to look good whahappen.
Maybe it's just me but i like to be able ot tell what a tag says.

[Degausserr x]

again this is just me messing around with a new thing to write...http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0974.jpg

bump.... crits?

[Rogue]

Work on the S and E, it doesn't flow very well.

[Revive123]

I was wondering if someone could write a few revive tags just to give me some ideas. I'm having a hard time coming up with a good tag.

[Rogue]

Look at every single tag with your letters in it. Don't bite it, but find a good flow like it. It will help, trust me.

[diabolik]

Im pretty new to writing i've only been writing about 2 weeks but, these are some of my first hands

http://i13.tinypic.com/6bjjz3p.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/5z20ebc.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4q75jpt.jpg
http://i15.tinypic.com/4tav4v4.jpg

Crits welcome :)

crits?

[Degausserr x]

i would have to say you have to many add ons. just try something plain and with minimal add ons, and some good flow.

[hungr]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00453.jpg
whoever and what not

[Degausserr x]

those are sick man. whatd you write em with?

[hungr]

tag with the resin from a spliff... a bingo dabber with some next ink in it
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00423.jpg

[Sumoe]

so grimey...

nice though.

[Revive123]

Just tryin to find a good tag. Any crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v324/philbob123/afaa.jpg

[Degausserr x]

i dont like that the r is bigger, looks like its capitalized and i just dont like it.

and the Vs like like Us to me... idk just keep trying

[Revive123]

Tried it in all caps. Better?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v324/philbob123/fafafaaf.jpg

[Degausserr x]

okay lets see...

before i say much im not like a pro or anything. rogues definatly the most helpful. but all caps makes it a lot better. i would say the first on looks the best to me... i dont really like that huge circle on top of the I but i dont know what i would do with it... i hate I's

just keep workin man its gettin better

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture189.jpg

[Degausserr x]

i like the one at the bottom with the huge arrow coming out... ive seen it before maybe in this thread and still like it a lot

[Revive123]

Thanks, I appreciate it.

[Degausserr x]

yeah man just keep working. i know i need to haha

and keep posting your shit... im about to try to tweak my S and E and see what happens

[Degausserr x]

ew this sucks

[Tri1]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture007.jpg
stll trying to perfect my tag crits?

[Degausserr x]

im gonna have to say i dont like how the R (if in fact that is an R) that the legs i guess are so short. K is pretty cool. keep messin with diff Ks Rs and shit and see how the flow and what now goes.

[Rogue]

Sezer- Nice shit. I love your style.

Revive- I'm really not feeling it. It's very boring, it needs some style. Your style is just like "REViVE" Work on your style and flow a bit, the post and Ill help you out.

[MUSEone]

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/2047/0607071540wa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5407/0607071548fc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Constructive crits?

[Vice]

not sure about the halo on the second one. whats that line going through the E on the first one? other than that i would say their pretty good flow and style wise.

[MUSEone]

haha the line going through the e on the first one is from another tag. lol it has nothing to do w/ the one thats in the pic.

thnx though, should i add anything?

[Vice]

hahaha. ummm at the moment i cant think of anything to add but ill let you know when i do. also i think i like the second one a bit more than the first.

[TricksForKids]

eske lose the halo, underlines, and quotation marks. word? word.

awk, make everything nice and simple like that A for now.

bawksy bawksy bawksy
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/584/bawkhandieslf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[MUSEone]

Thnx bro, im trying new things everyday. lol

[MUSEone]

If I take wat u said off, there basically be nothing left haha

[CaMa]

If I take wat u said off, there basically be nothing left haha

Just do one classy underline thats it.

Just a shwoosh and be done.

Or do it slow and hard and get some killer drips.

[MUSEone]

Thnx man, ive gotta work on my mop because I got really shitty ink. lol

[Captain]

bawk- I like it. Start doin' more complicated stuff.

I finnally got a new marksalot (best chiseltip evar!!!)
Just some screwing around with it:

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3203/falseos6.jpg
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6925/polishfp5.jpg

Tell me what you think.

[MUSEone]

Marksalot? Please don;t tell me u tag w/ it. lol

[Captain]

Marksalot? Please don;t tell me u tag w/ it. lol

hell no, It's just really smooth for notebooks.

and I fogot to give you tips- buy ten marksalots and twelve notbooks, and fill 'em up in a week or two. Not a couple tags to a page, each page should be damn near black by the time you're done with it. Don't do any halo's, quotes or underlines when you're there to practice letters. And try to find a middle ground between thinking out the letters and just letting them flow.

after you fill those notebooks, buy some more & repeat.

[Vice]

yeah i dont have any real decent markers yet but im trying to get a pilot when i get the chance.

[amk]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11ds.jpg

trying a philly approach

[MUSEone]

hell no, It's just really smooth for notebooks.

and I fogot to give you tips- buy ten marksalots and twelve notbooks, and fill 'em up in a week or two. Not a couple tags to a page, each page should be damn near black by the time you're done with it. Don't do any halo's, quotes or underlines when you're there to practice letters. And try to find a middle ground between thinking out the letters and just letting them flow.

after you fill those notebooks, buy some more & repeat.

Thnx, wats ur input on magnums? (not the gun OR the condoms lol)

[MUSEone]

AMK- im not much for philly style, never have been, so im not gonna say anything *keeps mouth shut*

[MASO]

magnums are not good. they bleed all over and jus don't give clean lines. stick with pilots!

[MUSEone]

Just wonderin, lol

[amk]

you have double posted like 3 times on this page..
have you ever heard of the edit button ? ..

damn

[Captain]

Thnx, wats ur input on magnums? (not the gun OR the condoms lol)

only used one once, and it was horrible. bled to the sides, wouldn't slide smooth, easily one of the worst markers i've used.

ps. don't double post. we have an edit button. At this rate I'm gonna have to bump my pics to the next page for crits.

[acidconceptone]

sharpie magnums are dope if you like your tag to go from black to dirtry brown overnight. and totally disappear by the end of 6 months. but if you are wack then its good because they buff themselves.

[MUSEone]

Jesus fucking christ people. damn. i was just asking a simple question, all i needed was a simple answer, like wat MASO said.

[Captain]

Jesus fucking christ people. damn. i was just asking a simple question, all i needed was a simple anwswer, like wat MASO said.
We have toy story for q&a. This place for tags & crits. You've got like 70% of the post count in the last two or three pages, without giving a crit. People are gonna get pissed about that.



I finnally got a new marksalot (best chiseltip evar!!!)
Just some screwing around with it:

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3203/falseos6.jpg
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6925/polishfp5.jpg

Tell me what you think.

bump.

[sketch3]

love the polish one

[MUSEone]

AMK- im not much for philly style, never have been, so im not gonna say anything *keeps mouth shut*

Wat was that again?

[amk]

Muse...look...you have been posting like crazy in here..chill the hell out...you posted like 10 times on the last page..aswell as about 3 double posts...just chill out..and post your graffiti..then chat..

[MASO]

that POLISH tag is nice. i dont know if i agree with the bottom part of the L and the I. the top part of it is nice.

[Vice]

should i start playing the elevator music now? everybody chill out no point in arguing. i will have to agree that the polish one is the best. i love the I.

[sketch3]

naa the i is bunk, werst letta there

[MUSEone]

I have an idea, how about be bitch to each other over the fucking internet?

I have to agree w/ wat most people are saying, polish one is best.

[5yn]

thats the illist drips seen in the toy tags in a while done like a pro

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00453.jpg
whoever and what not

[Vice]

agreed.

[bbuba]

sharpie magnums are dope if you like your tag to go from black to dirtry brown overnight. and totally disappear by the end of 6 months. but if you are wack then its good because they buff themselves.

the magnums stay forever and cant b covered up bypaint well i wrote on concrete last year that had been spraypainted 2 years ago and about a month ago i tried 5 dif kinds of paint and primer and the fucking thing is still ther

[Sersk]

POLISH tag is nice
Hungr: nice shit as well

newer
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f213/RealKing/Tag4.png

[Vice]

lookin good... like the flow.

[Degausserr x]

sersk that one is sick keep it up man

[Lucas]

Nice one

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

yes, Lucas.
It is indeed a nice one.
naa but for real work on your s.

[Jroc1993]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5866/morneonelinersdt9.jpg
i just learned oneliners from my friend Noen
crits?

[Dusk07]

^^^^lose the arrows. exadrate the letters a little* i guess how ever much u want depends on the handy style you want. also dont do one random dot... stick with basic letters and maybe quotes before going to astrics ext.=]

im still far from good. Anyways...sorry done with a thin tip shaprie but i was bored and i think u guys can get the main idea of my letter styles so if u can help me out..and just imagine it all fatter with a otr or somthin. i would have flix of my tags but here in az there are so many heroes and tags get painted over so fast its ridiculous. anyways critts please

http://aycu36.webshots.com/image/16555/2002408738478388713_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002408738478388713)
http://aycu40.webshots.com/image/18959/2002458547339738453_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002458547339738453)

[Dusk07]

btw. whats the best type of caps for tagging and fading?

yes im a toy. kill me.

[d_g]

Personal preference really. NYFat seems to be reasonably popular though.

[Dusk07]

i have some of those but like the pressure ext...and can u get real thin with those pm me if u want to save spam..

[d_g]

If you hold the can close to the wall and move fast then you can get a reasonably skinny line with no drips. Other wise use NYThin.

Pressure wise - Higher pressure, move faster to avoid drips, lower pressure move slower to avoid misty lines.

With caps, closer to the wall means skinnier lines further away means fatter lines.

Then you gotta get the right level of those two depending on what you're doing.

[Dusk07]

well yeah i know that ive tagged before with my ny fats i just cant seem to get the super skinny finish ..i can fan perfectly fine though. got that down yo.

crits

http://aycu36.webshots.com/image/16555/2002408738478388713_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002408738478388713)

http://aycu40.webshots.com/image/18959/2002458547339738453_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002458547339738453)

[Synaesthesia]

how do you fan?

[Dusk07]

with your wrist its like a upward away movement?

[tanka]

Sup? Heres My Toy Taggs.. lol Im Ready For Your Insults lol:eek:

[d_g]

Middle picture, bottom middle tag in black

That has the most potential. The 'T' is the best letter. Don't curve both legs of your 'A' in the same direction like that. The 'N' is a little too plain, doesn't match up to the rest of your tag. The 'K' needs a lot of work. 'K' by itself has a lot going on so you could make it a little simpler and get away with it.

[tanka]

kk ty. :)

[*Soap*]

DUSK you got some heavy style going on!... Keep on the good work...
I`m interested in your throwies...post some of those or send them to me in a PM

[DragonK4]

Yea dusk its pretty nice

[DragonK4]

Srry the pic is small criticize..

[Degausserr x]

dont attach it like that, just post the pic

[GAUGE]

dose anny one know how to add pics

[Degausserr x]

upload the pic on a pic hosting site get the HTML and click the button that is like yellow with a mountain on the top of the quick post and put the HTML in there

[GAUGE]

thanks

[GAUGE]

ok this site have a pic hosting?

[Degausserr x]

no... try photobucket or flickr or some shit idk

[PureSole]

eh my current tag
hows is it negros?
R got fucked up cuz i ran oout of room


http://i12.tinypic.com/643rbx4.jpg
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=115243365&albumID=0&imageID=3398097
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=115243365&albumID=0&imageID=3398097

[Degausserr x]

theres nothing posted

[PureSole]

Fied it my bad

[Degausserr x]

okay heres my opinion... i dont like how the star flows in. put a star there or dont. also its too far away... if youre gonna do quotes do 2 sets, i used to do 1 and now that i look back on that work i cry it looks so bad.

letters arnt bad pretty good flow, just keep working

[PureSole]

Thanks! yea i been thinking about getting rid of the star all toghether and doing 2 quote sets

[Degausserr x]

do that. and just mess around with diff styles and letters. youll get better.

[MASO]

jroc - those dont looks like one liners and you do gotta lose the arrow on the E
dusk - maybe you can try a different S while youre tryin stuff out. there's so much things you can try with D,S, and K. some of those K's are nice.
tanka - nice. got some flow there. the only thing about the black tags is you gotta lose that arrow in the A

[tonentink]

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/9399/slopskr6.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8936/slops2yc6.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3006/knew1rt4.jpg

[Sersk]

Tonentink: good flow, especially the white one
PureSoul: i know some kid in cleveland who writes Aper, but good flow

[5yn]

theres a pretty boss tosar who writes sume now in the 604 u can look tosar up on artcrimes unless its you but why would u be in the toy fourm homie


http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8936/slops2yc6.jpg
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3006/knew1rt4.jpg

[Captain]

Caper, it's decent, just needs some more practice.

kinda messy because I killed my marker-

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/8503/diseaseyf9.jpg

and just fuckin' around with a slightly different style.

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/2849/importantvd9.jpg

bump if you like 'em.

ps. I usually don't put dot's on the letters like i did in the first one, I was just trying to show my friend the concept.

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture001.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture005-2.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture004.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2089.jpg
crits pleaseeee

[MASO]

captain - i see the style but i dont think you can use the same letter structure/design for every letter (like the M,R,K in MARKS). it loses flow. i think that "I" looked good on that one you posted before but not these.

5yn - the first one is nice. maybe just a star or a quote on the right side instead of an exclamation point star. or maybe if you use a diff. marker it would work. i dont really like the spray tag. and did you go over somebody? haha.

[tonentink]

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/9339/stopaotbv6.jpg
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/6729/weakthrownq3.jpg
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/2008/walmarttoserrw7.jpg

SYN YOUR FIRST TWO LOOK SICK ON PAPER BUT THE LAST ONE WAS WEAK LOOKIN!!!

[5yn]

last one very old flick love your streak tag

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/DSC00076.jpg
anyone got crits on these flares?
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/TOSERROLLER.jpg
from vancity

[amk]

you write Toser..

AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO

AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO
AHAHAHAHHAHA LMFAO AAHAHHAHA LMFAO

[5yn]

i dont write toser sum other guy in nwk does, i dont know him just see his shit everywhere he got mad ups

[MASO]

guess tonen gotta be toser2
5yn - those flares are nice.

[tonentink]

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7312/streaksrk7.jpg
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1257/4toseryd5.jpg
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7990/glassqz8.jpg

[DragonK4]

Yea, i reattached my pic check it out

i know it sucks criticize


http://img442.imageshack.us/my.php?image=magiwo7.png

[Casa45]

^^^ those are hotttt.

And sezer has some hot tags also...

[DragonK4]

http://img442.imageshack.us/my.php?image=magiwo7.png

srry

[Jroc1993]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5866/morneonelinersdt9.jpg
i just learned oneliners from my friend Noen
crits?
bump for more crits?

[Dinan 3er]

bump for more crits?
the e is bad the n is bad the r is bad, the m and o are not as bad. and mix the arrow.

[PureSole]

thanks for the feed guys

Captain- im feeling that style but clean it up, the letters seem too uniform/generic

Jroc1993- try to use leeters all upper or lower case, let it flow, it seems you were tight on curves and shit
Loose the arrow for now or try to make it work for you
Dinan nailed it bout the letter tho

[true21]

COMMENTZ
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/060807_1706.jpg

[Aska.]

bump for more crits?

Loose the blob before it and the arrow on the end.
don't like it.. i cant crit it.. i dont like any of those letters to be honest.

[whahappen?]

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9173/picture108vb5.jpg
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/221/picture111lj2.jpg
booooooorrrrreeeeddd

[5yn]

ey i love that philly shit man thats pro keep it up

[MASO]

i dont know what to say about that TRUE. it jus needs flow. keep playin with it i guess.

[MASO]

was jus messin with this one


http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/26BS.jpg


crits on it?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

work on your s it looks outta place.

[DragonK4]

pretty tight maso

[Rogue]

I like your older tags better Maso, stick with them.

[MASO]

how bout these S's then...

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/27BS.jpg

yeah my older stuff is better but i always wanna keep tryin new stuff. i get bored puttin up the same tag over and over.

[Vice]

i like the top and bottom one

[tonentink]

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1277/streaklb0.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/3824/streak1tj2.jpg

connection stilo!!!

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/882/streak2dv6.jpg
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7254/streak3ki8.jpg

[role]

maso i think the middle one flows the best

[Fube]

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1277/streaklb0.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/3824/streak1tj2.jpg

connection stilo!!!

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/882/streak2dv6.jpg
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7254/streak3ki8.jpg

dem oneliners are ill. mop that shit.

edit: if anyone wants to trade some handys pm me.

[BIGel]

^word those are lookin good, i dont like the way the s comes over but thats a minor thing..

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/258417896.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/258417886.jpg

[Lany.]

http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/5043/img0180ge7.jpg (http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/5043/img0180ge7.jpg)

hahaha, my handstyles utter shit.

[horgiewozear]

how dyu upload picz?

[IWriteTame]

Here is my tag I did in a Burger King. I'm obviously toy, but I would like any and all critz, nice or mean.

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/8251/0606071901mq6.jpg

[MASO]

bigel - dope as always
lany - its very simple. looks like your S is two line for some reason. not bad to start. jus play with your letters and push them a little closer together.
horgie - go to picture gallery forum and look at how to upload images thread.
tame - make the T same size as the others. change up the E a little. put the letters closer together. maybe its your mop or ink/paint but its not flowing out nicely as you write. nice drips though.

[ShIfTeD]

yes, you are correct...it is toy, but if you realize that your handstyle needs more development, why are you puting it up on the wall?

waiting for your handstyle to be perfect is the best thing to do


this is what makes graffiti look bad

practice on paper bro, post pics on here so people can tell you what to step up

[IWriteTame]

Ok thanks both of you. I will practice on paper for now.

[Lany.]

thanks for the crits.
trying to evolve my tag now.

[HuntingLOLs]

yes, you are correct...it is toy, but if you realize that your handstyle needs more development, why are you puting it up on the wall?

waiting for your handstyle to be perfect is the best thing to do


this is what makes graffiti look bad

practice on paper bro, post pics on here so people can tell you what to step up
bullshit, graffiti looks bad in other peoples eyes wether or not a person is toy - 90% of people that i mention tags to say they think its utter bullshit and its just defacing property. dont bother not getting up as toy - you dont become really good without having a good flow. letters and flow should come together, not after eachother.
streak - no. 1 onliner is dope, keep that one up

[DragonK4]

check it out, it sucks really want crits
http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?srv=img27&img=/8/6/9/f_magim_4256ac2.png

[Vice]

give crits to get crits.

[DragonK4]

mmk

[Vice]

k as long as you understand.

[MASO]

crits on these welcome


http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/28BS.jpg


the top two mainly, stuff on the bottom is jus bs.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

make your s rounder not sharp at the top.

[Vice]

i like the top one the best.
good flow.

[Vice]

sorry for double post... but i just got the idea that i could use im phone to take a pic. but anyways...
YES it is toy. and YES i used sharpies, i dont have any other markers at this point in time. ive been writing this constantly for the last two weeks or so and this is where im at right now with it. crits would be EXTREMELY appreciated. and sorry for the crappy quality but its froma camera phone so what can you expect?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/vice2.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/vice1.jpg

well thats it...
tell me what you think and again, crits will be EXTREMELY appreciated.

[Rogue]

sorry for double post... but i just got the idea that i could use im phone to take a pic. but anyways...
YES it is toy. and YES i used sharpies, i dont have any other markers at this point in time. ive been writing this constantly for the last two weeks or so and this is where im at right now with it. crits would be EXTREMELY appreciated. and sorry for the crappy quality but its froma camera phone so what can you expect?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/vice2.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/vice1.jpg

well thats it...
tell me what you think and again, crits will be EXTREMELY appreciated.

Basically, restart. Those tags need an extreme amount of work. Too much extra lines, and no flow. Come up with a new idea, and I'll help you out some more. Good luck.

Edit- And don't think your 2 weeks of work were worth nothing. You practice a lot, I like that you try.

[rayseone]

maybe just try writing it normall in like normall writing, then go faster and sometimes your hand will do the work for you unwantedly, it will get flowy etc and you will have a nice simple tag. i hope that made sence lol

[tonentink]

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5270/aottagoz7.jpg
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4427/crowninmexl8.jpg

this one was done by my cuzzo ''kerz ''a few years ago and its still up!!!
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/839/vizinecrewib3.jpg

[MUSEone]

how bout these S's then...

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/27BS.jpg

yeah my older stuff is better but i always wanna keep tryin new stuff. i get bored puttin up the same tag over and over.

I think there all dope as fuck, but i like the top and bottom the best. Stay up bro.

[MASO]

thanks muse but i need crits on the NEWER stuff! thanks though.

must be nice to find little tags like that still up.^

[MUSEone]

thanks muse but i need crits on the NEWER stuff! thanks though.

must be nice to find little tags like that still up.^


ehh, they're still dope lol im still working on that one i posted the other day. lol

[Dusk07]

Storm drain. white zig.Turned of meh..but i was gettin shiz for not posting pics that werent tags on paper.
http://aycu06.webshots.com/image/16165/2001616321817732467_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001616321817732467)http://aycu27.webshots.com/image/18266/2001602848431249140_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001602848431249140)
http://aycu11.webshots.com/image/17490/2001659862590034448_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001659862590034448)http://aycu04.webshots.com/image/17483/2001617749826766203_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001617749826766203)

[Sluts_r_us]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/060907_2331.jpg


werd upskiii

[MASO]

dusk - the U is pretty plain and much smaller than the other letters. the tail of the S hangin down doesnt really flow to me there. and what were you gettin shit about? you SHOULD practice on paper.
sluts - thats a pretty dark flick but the esk is nice. the one is so-so. more drips in the right places would be nice too :)

[Sluts_r_us]

its pesk not esk lol...yeah shitty fone = shitty flick lol but fuck drips r dips lol, main road did it as fast as i could, people in the restaurant across the street were looking at me lol

[MASO]

oh PESK. totally missed the P there. well good job catchin a quick one then. wouldnt worry bout people in the restaurant they aint gunna do nuttin.

[Sluts_r_us]

yep, they didnt haha, i look in the window n they r starin at me so i jus kept eatin my bbq chips while walkin away haha, yeah the flash killed the p lol

[TTO.TC]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/CAA7CHYJ.jpg
i kno im gonna get alot of heat but wtf... i dont care critz:(

[MASO]

its very plain. looks like it took 2 lines to cross the T there.

[Chulo]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/philyhandsty.jpg
tryin to get a philly type style goin

[Run .]

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/4632/scan0001dq8.jpg
hey all , crits? comments? .

[DragonK4]

running, change ur R maybe and ur u is small, idk what to do about the rest its hard when u have 2 of the same letters in the row
yea..

[TTO.TC]

its very plain. looks like it took 2 lines to cross the T there.

the can stalled :mad:

[TTO.TC]

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/4632/scan0001dq8.jpg
hey all , crits? comments? .

i kno im not one to say anything but ur g kinda looks like an e

[Prince.Gov]

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/4632/scan0001dq8.jpg
hey all , crits? comments? .

man, you gotta give them to get them, i like it though

[MUSEone]

Last time i posted this, i got a bunch of bullshit crits that weren't worth my time. (except for MASO)

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/500/0607071540wa1vl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

CONSTRUCTIVE crits anyone?

[-GEKS-]

havent posted in awhile
been doin a lot of sticker art rather than graff
wateva
been workin on a handstyle, heres a few. are they too basic?
crits
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0989.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0988.jpg

[snub-0]

Last time i posted this, i got a bunch of bullshit crits that weren't worth my time. (except for MASO)

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/500/0607071540wa1vl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

CONSTRUCTIVE crits anyone?

i like it. ive always been a fan of that style E. maybe put put some more flare into the K?

[Mace]

bring em closer together kinda awkwardly spaced out and dont do both e's the same

[MASO]

chulo - i dont know too much about philly hands but i seen quite a bit and that doesnt really strike me as philly style. and if you're writin CHASE there already is one.
Running - that kinda works. i dunno. change the G a little.
geks - the bottom one of the first pic i like the best. seems like a good way to finish the E. i dunno bout that star though.
muse - i remember you said thats your mop tag and if so that looks good to me. i would jus say bring the last E in a little closer. if its a regular marker tag it may need sumthin.

i changed up the S's on these so its not pointy at the top. crits?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/29BS.jpg
oh, the top two tags i mean.

[G-Fat]

yooo thats ill man... keep up the good work, everything looks tip top shape ahha

[Dusk07]

Did this for fun. The handy style battle is wangsta. im not entering i just wanted to try my style out with it. didnt turn out bad..i dont think?

crits.


http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m2/byf8th/100_3800.jpg

[Vice]

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/29BS.jpg


i like the S on the third one down to the left. i like how the line going up on the bottom of the S is curved. although i think that you should use that S with the M's from the top two on the left.

[tonentink]

this tag was done by my lady!!!
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/197/tinkerbellkb6.jpg
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/9494/sticktaguk7.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7015/koldsticktagqf9.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/2622/cytotaggx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Run .]

cheers for the crits , ill keep that in mind .
cyto id lose the bottom off the t other than that, with some work its got pottential

[Fube]

sick stuff maso. keep it up. to much flair on your t with the first 2 but nice anyway. the vertical one and the....well the bottom of the page is ill.

[ESKE one]

for the handsteeze battle
wat cha think
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs057.jpg

to fube: is there anyway you and me will be able to exchange handstyles

[MASO]

thanks for the crits. i'll keep workin on it.
cyto - yeah that tail of the T gotta go or be changed and i think you should bring the O around a little more. it doesn't HAVE to be closed but jus closer.
Dusk and eske got nice tags for the battle. took me awhile to find the G in Dusk's one. in eske's the tightest part is the middle ANGST. letters look nice although i dont like the arrow above it.

[Dusk07]

Did this for fun. The handy style battle is wangsta. im not entering i just wanted to try my style out with it. didnt turn out bad..i dont think?

crits.


http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m2/byf8th/100_3800.jpg


bump for crits/.

[bikersnowboarder]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1304/539903552_b0bd6fb1f0.jpg?v=0

[bikersnowboarder]

i know it sucks, give me feedback.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1304/539903552_b0bd6fb1f0.jpg?v=0

[Chulo]

chulo - i dont know too much about philly hands but i seen quite a bit and that doesnt really strike me as philly style. and if you're writin CHASE there already is one.
Running - that kinda works. i dunno. change the G a little.
geks - the bottom one of the first pic i like the best. seems like a good way to finish the E. i dunno bout that star though.
muse - i remember you said thats your mop tag and if so that looks good to me. i would jus say bring the last E in a little closer. if its a regular marker tag it may need sumthin.

i changed up the S's on these so its not pointy at the top. crits?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/29BS.jpg
oh, the top two tags i mean.

is the other chase a old writer, or is he new?

[Jroc1993]

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/6144/mornetags2pg6.jpg
which is the best? crits on all of them?

[Rogue]

Yor still writing them too slow. It lacks flow because of that, it looks like your pausing while your write your letters.

[MASO]

chase is a pretty old writer. i dont know if there's more than one but there's chase stuff from Frisco to europe.

jroc - you gotta drop that arrow on the E. you seem pretty attached to it since last time. other than that, you jus gotta work on your style a bit. go check out some other tags and get some ideas flowin and jus keep writin. who cares if it looks wack at first. you can jus keep tweakin it until its right. oh yeah and what kinda marker are you using?

[ShIfTeD]

geks, maso, eske....nice shit, feelin all that


anything white is me

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/DSCN0978.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/DSCN0977.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/DSCN0976.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/venomisim.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/venomisim2.jpg


http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/DSCN0979.jpg

[Jroc1993]

yeah i like that arrow on the E but i dont know how else to end it

[MASO]

damn shifted thats some nice stuff. i love that tall/long hand (whatever you call it) and i usually dont like too many of em. but the one on paper looks nicer than the executed one. mainly cuz you didnt come down the middle of the O the same and the M is flared out more.

jroc- there's lotsa ways to end E's thats why you should look around and get some ideas. look at AGE on the last page for example.

[Dusk07]

Did this for fun. The handy style battle is wangsta. im not entering i just wanted to try my style out with it. didnt turn out bad..i dont think?

crits.


http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m2/byf8th/100_3800.jpg

crits...?

[tonentink]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3149/wangsta7uk4.jpg

[DragonK4]

dusk, dont take this the wrong way but it kinda looks a like a mess... thats my toy opinion though so whatever

[Rogue]

Yeah, Dusk. That looks horrible, it's a huge mess.

[tonentink]

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/2267/freeaotopsbn3.jpg
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/562/redtosswe5.jpg
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/4341/neoneg1.jpg

[sketch3]

wat a tosser

[tonentink]

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9325/slidff3.jpg
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3434/krookedsignyi7.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5072/underkoldgl2.jpg

[GAUGE]

how do u resize an image

[MASO]

go to picture gallery and read on how to post images. it covers resizing. use your paint program. use your photoshop program. use something! IMAGE>RESIZE IMAGE

[MUSEone]

thanks for the crits. i'll keep workin on it.
cyto - yeah that tail of the T gotta go or be changed and i think you should bring the O around a little more. it doesn't HAVE to be closed but jus closer.
Dusk and eske got nice tags for the battle. took me awhile to find the G in Dusk's one. in eske's the tightest part is the middle ANGST. letters look nice although i dont like the arrow above it.

MASO- It could me my mop if I can't come up w/ anything else, it could be my handy, but it needs something, just don't know wat... :\

And wats this I heard about me in a handy battle?

[DragonK4]

Alright, here it is i know its plain but i def need crits on this, srry i put it in paint, dont got a camera but this is the basic deal i appreciate it
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/8711/magitt3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[~Cent~]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Emma.jpg

It's "Code". Crits?

[DragonK4]

y is there a huge blob on the "d" and loose the dot on e

[MUSEone]

cent-add more flair, change the it up some, make it diff. that looks plain to me, but for some people, plain is good.

[Honor]

cent you need to work on your flow. it looks like you are going too slow and pausing when making the letters. the more you practice the more it will flow and you won't have to think about how to make the next letter.

[MUSEone]

^^ i agree fully.

[DragonK4]

crit me? please? i need it

[MUSEone]

dragon- change the "M" up a bit, as goes w/ ur G, and wats that at the end, an L or an I? The quotes don't work w/ each other.