Tags

[MUSEone]

I's piss me off to. lol Ive kinda got a good V, but idk if it'll flow w/ the rest of ur tag because idk wat it looks like lol

[Vice]

yeah im gonna post em up in a sec i only have a cemeraphone at the moment so i have to send a pic message and then host it. and also if your worried if it does flow ill try it out any try to mess with it a bit to make it my own.

[MUSEone]

Thats wat i do lol

[Vice]

except now i just realized i just sent two of the pics to my friend. fuck. well thats money gone. luckily though he just so happens to be a fellow writer so that a good thing hahah.

[DragonK4]

muse wanna do mine hehe.. just the G having problems with that

[MUSEone]

Haha im working on a handy exchange for someone atm but i'll keep ya in mind.

[DragonK4]

lol thanks

[Vice]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061107_17461.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061107_17441.jpg

ok here they are. so sorry for the image quality but i guess just do your best. lol

[Hester]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011533.jpg

[Fube]

for the handsteeze battle
wat cha think
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs057.jpg

to fube: is there anyway you and me will be able to exchange handstyles

throw me a pm. tell me what u write.

[-GEKS-]

Do wat this one guy once told me, buy 5 spiral notebooks and 2 marksalot markers, fill the books up in about 2 weeks, not just a couple tags per page, every page should be damn near black.

I couldn't find who said that, but if ur out there reading this, it helped. lol



thats a pretty sick idea i might try that my handies are terrible :(
eske lovin the wangsta handstyle
i'll bmp somethin from a few pages back for crits...
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF0989.jpg

[Vice]

well gecks it doesnt matter if your handstyle is shit. the whole point of getting the blackbooks and filling em up is to improve your handstyle and get better.if you do a massive amount and just keep workin at it its definitly gonna help you.

[Fube]

or, u could save time an money and buy a dry erase board, some dry erase markers, and an eraser.

helped me out.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/debate.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/murderbynumbers.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

lookin ill.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture200.gif

[Vice]

nahhh that would be too easy.

[-GEKS-]

aha! even better idea fube!
anyone got crits for the tags on the last page?

[Roolete]

fube- likin the top and bottom ones most.
sezer- u know how i feel

lose the line on top of the 'o'?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4338.jpg

[MUSEone]

or, u could save time an money and buy a dry erase board, some dry erase markers, and an eraser.

helped me out.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/debate.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/murderbynumbers.jpg

Im pretty sure dry erase boards cost more than spiral notebooks....

[Vice]

muse did u see my letters on the last page?

[Roolete]

i did and i dont think their great. lets see em in a tag

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Im pretty sure dry erase boards cost more than spiral notebooks....
not in the long run...

[SEEK_ONE]

http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/4219/0005250hz6.jpg
:(

[Vice]

probobly dont paint yet... no beef...

[SEEK_ONE]

okies

[meetermaid]

http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/1079/picture5si8.jpg

[~Cent~]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/11-6.jpg

Crits please. I tried to improve the one I had yesterday.

[MUSEone]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/11-6.jpg

Crits please. I tried to improve the one I had yesterday.

Its looking much better than the last. Fix ur e up some. And add some flair.

[AteskOne]

meh...not happy with this but whatever.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9751/scan0001rn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
"destroyer of worlds"...new song i'm working on.

[~Cent~]

Alright, thanks MUSE. Lol, what do you mean by 'flair'?

[Vice]

umph

[~Cent~]

Lol... Not sure how to add "umph" to writing :\. Any pointers?

[RealaNightmaren]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011533.jpg

Did you get your name from the scarlet letter?

[~Cent~]

Goddamn! Lol.

[Vice]

anybody wanna help me come up with a V and an I? i came up with a C and an E but cant seem to come up with the V or the I. if you come up with something i like ill mess around with it a bit to make it my own.

these are what i have already...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061107_17461.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061107_17441.jpg

[Rogue]

Eh, I'm not really feeling the C and E. I'll work on some stuff for ya' and post it later. Try and make your V really unique, it's not really a letter you can do much with.

[Rogue]

Omfg..........

[AteskOne]

bump no crits


meh...not happy with this but whatever.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9751/scan0001rn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
"destroyer of worlds"...new song i'm working on.


dude if you dont know if sticker slapping is illegal... then you're most likely not at the skill level to be putting them up. stick to paper kids.

[AteskOne]

my point exactly...no stickers for you. stick to paper for a WHILE.

[AteskOne]

his post got deleted....even the ones of his tags? wtf.

[Skru-Tape]

i like Fube's and Sezer's and i like Meso's too, has nice flow to it, maybe changing the O would be a good idea though, just give it a try and compare i guess.

[Skru-Tape]

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/249/freeq001io1.jpg
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6929/freeqjs4.jpg
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9809/freeq002yn5.jpg

i know theyre simple...any ideas how i should add to it?

[crik]

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/4939/scan004md2.jpg
CRIK

comments tips?

[DragonK4]

crik the line from the c is messed up

[crik]

if youre going to make a comment please leave me a suggestion also. :rolleyes:

[Rogue]

Crik- Throw it away and restart. Your letters are WAY too bunched together. You tag lacks flow, and it's boring. Your trying to do all kinds of crazy things, but for now stick to simple letters. Look at peoples tags with the same letters as yours, don't bite the tag, but follow the flow. Flow is everything along with letters, just keep working, and I'l help you out some more.

[whahappen?]

tall hands
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/84/picture116ii4.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8607/picture117zw1.jpg
heart wicket things
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4403/picture118zv5.jpg
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6226/picture119ox6.jpg

[MUSEone]

Lol... Not sure how to add "umph" to writing :\. Any pointers?

Add ons, flow. Make everything about the tag flow together.

[Vice]

yeah... you know... umph

[MASO]

hester - i really like that tag

atesk - it looks like the DEST part has a different flow than the ROYER and WORLDS part maybe cause you changed the style slightly or its jus more spaced out but it looks pretty pimp.

vice - you jus gotta practice your full tag rather than just C and E and people could probably help you out more.

freeq - thats a nice one. the top 2 look the best to me. i cant decide on that arrow on the Q. sometimes i think it looks good, sometimes not.

crik - got good avice from rogue

whahappen - the tall hands look good but maybe you could so somethin different with the face on the end. i'm not really diggin the hearts but i'm not one to crit philly stuff.

[nuf.rd]

http://www.imagehoop.com/view_thumb/793a11719/chea 032.jpg
i write heavy,crits please

sorry for the small size

[whahappen?]

new page damnit
tall hands
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/84/picture116ii4.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8607/picture117zw1.jpg
heart wicket things
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4403/picture118zv5.jpg
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6226/picture119ox6.jpg
heavy too many addons and good letters tho

[glass]

whahappen: yeah so i suck with tags idk, it looks interesting but i can't read it too well.

Crits?
http://i16.tinypic.com/4qzt0g0.jpg

http://i18.tinypic.com/4xo470i.jpg

[Hester]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011533.jpg

bumpster

[Prince.Gov]

Hester its good, cept for the arrow and the R needs work, lose the quote and the star thing and the lines, keep it simple...

[DragonK4]

heres my tag, srry i cant get a pic of it but this is the general idea so crit and please leave suggestions also it needs a lot of help

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8351/magixv6.th.png (http://img523.imageshack.us/my.php?image=magixv6.png)

[crik]

thanks for the tip man. i do have another one that i'm using right now. im gonna sketch a few more tonight and upload them tomorrow.

[IwriteNASR]

dragonk4 dont really like it lose the arrow and make it flow.
got bored and added shading thing
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7012/nasr001du4.jpg
crits

[Roolete]

hester- dont listen to him! dont change it at all iits beautiful!
dragon- id say lose the arrow for now, work on your letters
nasr- i like it
heres my newest stuff, i think i might have de-progressed, but crits?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4376.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4377.jpg

[Skru-Tape]

i like them last two, but the arrow comin off of the O dun look so hot, maybe have it just a line? or the top line to you sideways lll ? just some ideas, cuz ur arrows arent up to par wit the rest of the letters.

[crik]

i like how hester made a little face with the arrow and the parentheses. anyone else see that? haha

[[breakout]-azer]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z145/breakout-azer/STA60016.jpg

[Make•]

Magi...I'm not even going to say anything.

Nasr....keep practicing get a more consistant flow to it

Meso... looking pretty good, I like your M's

Rise... the S can be mistaken for the R if you know what I'm saying. theres not much flavor to it though man. I would lose the thing on top of the I and maybe just make a dot or something, and I personally don't like quotes on all 4 sides but I guess that's just opinion:p

[tonentink]

this one was done by my lady!!!
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/1912/luvtinkej8.jpg
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/9522/aotbrickht6.jpg
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/4135/walloftagsuq8.jpg

[Make•]

^bottom one is fresh

[[breakout]-azer]

Magi...I'm not even going to say anything.



Rise... the S can be mistaken for the R if you know what I'm saying. theres not much flavor to it though man. I would lose the thing on top of the I and maybe just make a dot or something, and I personally don't like quotes on all 4 sides but I guess that's just opinion:p


cheers make. yeah the s does look liek a r sometime it pritty much on how i get the tag down it either looks like a r or a s. yeah dot thing kinda sumin i just added uasly i dont bother with anyhting. no dot or anything. but bout the flavor thing how would u sujest puttin flavor into my tag?

[whahappen?]

tall hand
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/879/picture122eh6.jpg
toser bottoms best

[Degausserr x]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/most.jpgyes yes i know the letters arnt the same size and arnt really going from left to right but i was just fuckin around... crits?

[Captain]

whahappen- Looks alright, I'm not a big fan of tall handies
most- Try makin' your letters in line with each other, not stacked. And kill that arrow coming off the s, it screams toy.

more practice:
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/2020/kashsx1.jpg
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/8117/lithiumue7.jpg
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9080/wristgb8.jpg
I think i'm at the end of the page, bump for me if you like 'em.

[Make•]

-azer;789788']cheers make. yeah the s does look liek a r sometime it pritty much on how i get the tag down it either looks like a r or a s. yeah dot thing kinda sumin i just added uasly i dont bother with anyhting. no dot or anything. but bout the flavor thing how would u sujest puttin flavor into my tag?

well it's hard to say because you need to develop your own sense of style. start off trying seperate letters, don't worry about the one-line type yet. one thing you could do is try finding something that makes/can make all the letters look alike to get a type of flow. look at other people's tags to get some ideas but don't bite them, lol

[Big_Eazy]

Heres my tag....

[glass]

bump 'cause people don't crit anymore

Goas: try and make that a bit cleaner, you're def. in the right direction though. lot's of work needed on that A too.



whahappen: yeah so i suck with tags idk, it looks interesting but i can't read it too well.

Crits?
http://i16.tinypic.com/4qzt0g0.jpg

http://i18.tinypic.com/4xo470i.jpg

[MESN[905]]

x

[mrtickels]

Just started writing and looking for some crit

low quality flick but oh well =\
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v708/mrtickels/P6140003.jpg

says jnk

[Roolete]

hester- dont listen to him! dont change it at all iits beautiful!
dragon- id say lose the arrow for now, work on your letters
nasr- i like it
heres my newest stuff, i think i might have de-progressed, but crits?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4376.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4377.jpg
bump for crits, which one is best?

mrtickels- simple it down and work on flow
mesn- i like your "m", i like the "e" too but i dotn think it fits very well. u would have a sick tag if you made your other letters fit in with the "e"'s style. at least thats my opinion.

[tonentink]

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/277/fuctii6.jpg
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3212/tosjy4.jpg
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9325/bricksu5.jpg

[Vice]

i like the bottom one the best

[-GEKS-]

in the top pic, bottom 2 are the best imo
been workin on that notebook :P

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1002.jpg
was gonna enter this in the battle, bt was too late, woolda got owned anyway

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1012.jpg
which ones the best and how can i fix all of em

[Roolete]

give crits you nappy headed ho!

kidding. about the nappy headed ho part. give crits. i like the sticker, but the bottem of the s doesnt seem to fit as well. and the last pic is tits.

*edit* directed at tonentink

[MESN[905]]

age, your lower case a's look like y's...i thought you wrote yge for a sec haha

[Captain]

age the pink thing looks aight
meso, cut down on addons.




more practice:
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/2020/kashsx1.jpg
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/8117/lithiumue7.jpg
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9080/wristgb8.jpg
I think i'm at the end of the page, bump for me if you like 'em.
bumpizzle

[tonentink]

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/426/gurplepk4.jpg
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6720/trashlm7.jpg
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/1729/bingord0.jpg

[-GEKS-]

tone looks pretty nice altho yoo didnt give crits again :(
i woold consider removing the l or at least working on it, if the d was next to the o it woold hav better flow, the l is sorta killin it now

[Captain]

goddamn it tone that's like the fourth time i'm gonna get ignored because of you.

[-GEKS-]

i got yo back captain haha
the top and bottom flick look pretty good
i dont like the middle one, too mch goin on, i cant even read it
maybe im jst retarded tho who knows
the wrist one is the best of the 3

[Kode]

Need some crit.. I can't seem to fit in the "e"...

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/DBPlot1-4.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/11-7.jpg


And the closest I think I've gotten (with my home-made marker :D )

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/11111-3.jpg

[-GEKS-]

the d in the top 2 sort of looks like a c and l, maybe work on that
i dont think the d is 2 bad

[MASO]

big eazy - i dont know if that says COAS or GOAS but youre gettin there. just keep comin up with more ideas. the S is nice.

glas - the 1st one is nice without the line goin thru the S and the second one is nice without the lines goin thru the G and S. the G i could understand but i really dont get the line thru the S.

mesn - thats gettin somewhere but all the letters aren't really flowin together especially the E.

mrtickels - the J doesnt look like a J at all. the right line of your N is the same as the left line of the K. thats not workin. jus keep writin out new ideas.

roolete - i like the top one without the arrow underline. maybe just an underline. and not a 7 pointed star but a regular star. the three emphasis lines on right right are cool sometimes but i think if you're gunna use it you gotta make it a little cleaner lookin.

geks - the wangsta is nice n simple. looks a lot like eske's wangsta on the previous pages. the AGE is ok. it jus needs some flow. since you have so few letters jus write each one out in as many ways as you can. pick one you like and make the other two letters go along with it. you shouldn't limit yourself to those 2 E's, the 2 A's, and 1 type of G.

captain - if the middle one says KLASH, its weird that only the L is lower case. i can't even read the middle one and it looks like it has too much goin on. the WRIST one is ok but the I needs the most work and the T after that. no crits for tonen cause all he does is post and never crits but thats just him.

[Roolete]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4381.jpg
^ made a red kiwi mop- works so awesome. hows the tag?

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4382.jpg
^i kinda liked this..so why not. i tried the spanish exclamation point things

*edit* damn bottom of page. please, dont hesitate to bump me.

[Skru-Tape]

i like the mop tag alot

[iwritebasic]

why did u write retard? haha the first exclamation point is supposed to be upside down.

well heres my contribution, the restless criminals thing is really bad so dont comment on that.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a149/stjames91/rusto001.jpg

[2KoS]

HI I WRITE KOS. Lol.

1) I know the s should be a little closer in the first one 2) i know theres drips in the second one, it was bare high, so dont tell me.

theyre only here for contribution, if u dont like them, too bad. bye

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/100_0441smal.jpg


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/100_0442small.jpg

[whahappen?]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4381.jpg
^ made a red kiwi mop- works so awesome. hows the tag?

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4382.jpg
^i kinda liked this..so why not. i tried the spanish exclamation point things

*edit* damn bottom of page. please, dont hesitate to bump me.
bump for bottom of the page
the red kiwi mop tag is looking nice

[anarchy]

bumpster

Nice tag, but control your drips as you write, on this you made a spot where you jammed the marker down for a drip. I also think it could also use a few more drips. But that's just me.

[Degausserr x]

this is just some of my messin around with some and mos... the very top right is what i write mosty. crits on any?http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/mess.jpg

[Vice]

i like the top left one alot

[Degausserr x]

any crits on improvement or any shit

[Rogue]

The top left one is nice, except for the E. It just doesn't fit in right with the other letters. It just needs a bit more extension on the top.

[Degausserr x]

okay one sec im trying to change some stuff

[Degausserr x]

first heres my attempt on some new Es and adding extensions... a little sloppy and i used a different not as good marker
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/newEsandextensions.jpg
then heres some new Ss and new Es and stuff
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/diffSandE1.jpg

EDIT- crits advice anything would be great

[iwritebasic]

why did u write retard? haha the first exclamation point is supposed to be upside down.

well heres my contribution, the restless criminals thing is really bad so dont comment on that.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a149/stjames91/rusto001.jpg


since i didnt give crits:

some-i wouldnt make that weird loop with the S, try adding more style to ur M
meso-red mop tag is nice, if i would change anything it would be the M imo.
kos-go simpler with your letters, the K is retarded and i wouldnt connect the O to the S

crits on mine?

[TAZM]

iwritebasic i dont like how you connect it all and i cant tell if thats a t or a c needs work

some its not too bad but i dont like either of those S's. the diamond shaped one is bad and the other isnt too bad except that curly thing off the tail

My new name...
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm008.jpg

edit: sorry for bad quality and lighting

[Bazer]

if you make an account every time you change your name your gonna end up with a million accounts... just dont connect your letters like that man. the a with the t. and take off the litte arrow and the extension of the a.

[CanOx]

LOL this is from my first night ever of tagging
It is a fucking desecration

i shouldnt have sprayed the wall yet...but i was too anxious to wait

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/blitz.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/blitz2-1.jpg

[Vice]

stuff ive been working on... sorry for the quality...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061507_14011.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061507_14012.jpg

[iwritebasic]

wow give crits before asking for them...

[Vice]

i give crits all the time... but anyways heres some crits.

blitz i think you letters are to simple also theres not really any flow to it. maybe try writing it faster and try putting the letters closer together.
tazm the way you have the T and the A together makes it kinda look like an H other than that i think its good.
degausserr i like the middle on the bets. the E goes with the rest of it i think. and also the S is an improvement i think.
happy?

[Degausserr x]

okay...

tazm- i dont know what the fucks going on there. i cant read it. maybe im a dumb ass. go simpler, less ad ons.
blitz- id say lose the add ons and work on your letters. keep mixing up your letters until you get somehting you like. personally i hate Is like that with a huge circle as a dot... just keep working
vice- its basically the exact same thing... but i dont feel it. theres no flow. and i dont like how the letters slant. try to alter you letters to get some flow and shit... once again just keep working

[STAR01]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/3801/1002036mi9.jpg
i know it's really toyish but what the hell , crits?
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8775/1002050wu1.jpg
bad pic sorry bout that

[CanOx]

Thx for the crits so far
Id love to give crits, but I dont really know what to say!
Vice i like yours, but i agree the letters really dont connect as well as they should

[Degausserr x]

some more messin around what you guys like? crits and what not id appreciate
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/media1.jpg

[CanOx]

Some, i liked your other ones, and the Mos ones better, the mos ones had more character
these seem kinda plain tbh (but who am i to judge)

Heres somethin new...fuck blitz, im trashin that and im emberassed i put that on a wall...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/epoc.jpg

[Vice]

what does that say?

[reach]

it says epic

[Vice]

ah. thats actually not that bad now that i see it... i didnt really try. id say the only problem with it would be the circle around the I but i can see why you did it.

[Degausserr x]

yo canox bumb what you said you liked better

[CanOx]

its EPOC
its a line thru the O...not a circle round the i lol
i guess i should slant it more



i like these better..in particular the MOS

this is just some of my messin around with some and mos... the very top right is what i write mosty. crits on any?http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/mess.jpg

[Degausserr x]

yeah i kinda like the mos too... idk i need some more peoples input

[CanOx]

i dunno i like how all the letters are different sizes..and the placement is nice
the one on the bottom right

[Degausserr x]

yeah but that takes away from it being a tag... its not in line and the letters are diff sizes

[Make•]

nooo man! stick with the ones at the top of the page those are looking pretty good. I suggest not doing the mos handstyle, you should keep your letters in a line and try to keep them semi the same size, the o is too small

[Degausserr x]

which ones on which page... bump and say which

[Make•]

some more messin around what you guys like? crits and what not id appreciate
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/media1.jpg

these

[Degausserr x]

anyone want to give crits on those?^^^

[Vice]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/degausserrtags.jpg

yeah

[mrtickels]

some more messin around what you guys like? crits and what not id appreciate
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/media1.jpg

i like the top and bottom right, simple but they look good

CanOx: looks good but i thought it said epic at first to


any crits on this?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v708/mrtickels/P6150006.jpg
EDIT: my bad on the shit quality camera

[CanOx]

Jmk?

[mrtickels]

ops
JnK acctueally

[Vice]

then thats a backwards n... other than the n i think its good. i like the letters.

[CanOx]

i think the backwards n is cool, just take off the little tail on the left side
then it will be more legible?

more EPOC, some are fuckups/speed tests
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/S1030101.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/S1030102.jpg

[Captain]

epoc, just do slightly stylized simples for now. don't add anything if possible. it looks like you're depending on speed and the marker shape, that's not gonna get you anywhere.

you'll get there, don't worry. just let it flow.


(sorry for no caps, at my freind's with a broken shift key)

[CanOx]

Cool, thx for the input i agree with all of it
edit: wait what am i doin wrong lol? no bubble letters?

[bloodlandmoney]

the bubbles letters looks like a 3 year old was getting down, they dont really have a throwie feel, i would suggest returning to boxier letters for now. and i would agree with captain... slow down

[vampireboy65]

alright i not saying dont help ppl but dont tell them to change everything likes there name or every singel letter graffiti is about expressing your self u do what u want and have fun with it

[CanOx]

LOL
naw i appreciate the criticism
i dont want to do it wrong and look like a fag

[bloodlandmoney]

i wasnt trying to bring you down or anything... vampireboy graffiti is about expressing yourself but its also about getting better and you get better from crits, good or bad

[capitol]

Some good ol bathroom destruction while i was giving birth.
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1416/graf292aj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[STAR01]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/3801/1002036mi9.jpg
i know it's really toyish but what the hell , crits?
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8775/1002050wu1.jpg
bad pic sorry bout that



CRITS? please tell me how i can get better...

that JMK is defenitly good if you ask me

[Make•]

Epoc.. you need to get a better flow with your letters and try to keep them all of the same size.

Envr.. looks ok, the R is the best letter out of all of them. work on something to make it a bit more unique.

Star01... I can't really read the one on the magazine... but definitally lose the crown thing for the T, it also makes it look like an I.

[Captain]

CRITS? please tell me how i can get better...

that JMK is defenitly good if you ask me

1. get a chisel tip
2. do simple stuff that's a little squeezed here and there.
3. if you're gonna use a sharpie, don't do it so big. thin lines suck.

[STAR01]

thx for the advice imma work on it hard

[Tri1]

CanOX- i'd say keep it a bit more simple for now.

Still working on my tag.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture010.jpg
crits welcome.

[vampireboy65]

well u have to get better i with u there just i think u should devlelope ur own style and flow with some help i mean i wasnt really aming that at u more like at hella ppl telling ppl to change everything where in some cases i can see that but i mean it is ursand if u think it good work on it

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktags.jpg

any crits? which one do you think looks better

[Captain]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktags.jpg

any crits? which one do you think looks better

too many adds', pick one and rock it.
work on your 'a'
for now try and keep your letters a consistent size.


CanOX- i'd say keep it a bit more simple for now.

Still working on my tag.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture010.jpg
crits welcome.

make it simpler. weird curls look stupid.

[CanOx]

Hows this for simple

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/epco2.jpg

soank?

[Run .]

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/1060/scan0004mz0.jpg

any crits ,
which ones better ?

cheers

[Lamure]

I like the second one a little more.
The first just looks kind of sloppy.

[-GEKS-]

thats a way lot better epoc. once yoo got that down, start changin it a LITTLE bit at a time til its all good

[Captain]

Hows this for simple

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v648/implode2/epco2.jpg

soank?

good, now just practice your ass off with that, put a tweak in on the letter shapes here and there, try to let it flow. You'll start to get it.

[tonentink]

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3707/airkoldlc5.jpg

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3746/koldairbb1.jpg
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8531/neotosxm7.jpg

[Degausserr x]

some so ive been leaning towards this becasue i like the S... crits?http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/sometag.jpg

[CanOx]

Yea man, i like the S too

[Roolete]

but work on the "e"

experimenting, too many extensions?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4394.jpg

[Captain]

but work on the "e"

experimenting, too many extensions?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4394.jpg

yeah. keep the underline, trash the other stuff. I do like it though.

[CanOx]

Could someone write an 'epoc' for me?
i feel like im just writing plain letters, i have no idea where to go from here

[AnteUp]

new tag...oneliner
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0024.jpg

[Caso]

I write Caso, but lately I've been messing with it by replacing the C with a K.
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4292/stuff026qm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3148/tags004gm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/3592/tagsci0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits will be appreciated!

[Dusk07]

second one is the best. easiest to read. first not so much but ur style is nice keep it up bro.

[Degausserr x]

i need a new fuckin e this is hard

[whahappen?]

your joking right...
and thanks for staeilng mi sigz

[cerex89]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0130.jpg
Caso-on the first pic the little extension on the C is a little 2 much 4 me

[MASO]

anteup - that sameone oneliner looks like regular script writing. you should find different ways to connect your letters.

caso - the first one would looks nice without the long C extension and the last extension on the O is a little weird. looks forced. the middle one is nice except the 4 lines from the quotes plus 3 lines from the crown makes for a lotta little lines at the top. the last one is nice.

dega - jus write as many different E's as you can and make the other letters flow with the ones you like.

cerex - the 1st one is nice. the last two are not so nice. it looks as if 2 different people wrote it from the first and the last two. bring the letters in closer and make them flow together.

[-GEKS-]

yeah. keep the underline, trash the other stuff. I do like it though.

nah i think yoo shoold keep the star too. arrow on o and halo dont look so good imo

[tonentink]

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3707/airkoldlc5.jpg

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3746/koldairbb1.jpg
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8531/neotosxm7.jpg

aOt!!!

[Degausserr x]

hows this E and everything? also the letters kinda suck its just a rough idea...http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/newsometag.jpg

[Jroc1993]

i like yur M and yur S but yur O and yur E seem too plain

[mada focka]

Degausserr- i liked your original e and i think you could get away with using it. i also like you s but you should do something to the o and m because they r kinda plain.


ive recently been skething with "scan 4" but its still pretty toy. i had to switch because too many people new my last one. if someone else who actually isnt super toy like me could sketch around with it and post that would be pretty cool. ill post some more pics later

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/sketch.jpg

[heav]

handy i did for a mate:
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/6922/alexstephenshandywn1.jpg
and an I heart real art...
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4205/iheartnycopydg2.jpg

crits?

[Caso]

Thanks for all the crits guys, and for not being like "STFU TOY GO TO THE BLACK BOOK?!". I've been lurking on here for a while and have seen that too many times but I finally said fuck it and posted that shit.

As for what yall said, yeah on the C I was just trying to make it "flow" by not picking up my pen from the C to the A, same for the S to O.

And just so I get this out there that thing in the middle one is NOT a crown. I don't want anyone thinking I'm full of myself or just some dumb toy with a crown. I meant for that to be like a halo looking thingy and for some reason wanted to put lines on top of it, so I did. I now see how much that looks like a crown and I don't think I'm gonna use it anymore lol. And yeah I thought it was a bit too many lines with the quotation marks too.

Thanks! Hopefully I'll get some fresh pics sometime soon.

Edit- Heav that shit is fresh. And haha mad focker thats crazy becuase I used to write scan for about a month before I decided I wasn't really feelin' it.

[Roolete]

...i wanna be your mate..

its dope. the second one kind of looks like. "peal art".

[vampireboy65]

ok this kinda old but hey i want some crits PLZ(try not to be a HUGE ASSHOLE)http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/01170004.jpg

[Roolete]

wrong thread post it in the blackbook or throwie threads

[vampireboy65]

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCN0742_edited-2.jpgi messed up on the top right CRITS PLZ!!!!

[-Sinn-]

Lost - the one with the arrow in the O seems okay just rub a lil funk on it
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture306.jpg
crits?

[vampireboy65]

sinn ya thanks normaly i do and ya that the one i tag more than anything

[vampireboy65]

sinn i not really feeling ur n,s at first i thought it was a s idk what to change but ya besides that it pretty tight

[Degausserr x]

hows this E and everything? also the letters kinda suck its just a rough idea...http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/newsometag.jpg

bump for some more crits

and moda fucka which E were you talking about that you liked better?

[Captain]

To everyone on this page:

Your letters are all decent. Go practice your asses off and work on flow.

That is all.

Ps. lost, lose a few extensions, other than that, the above applies.

[Rogue]

Deg- I like your old some better. This new one seems to plain. It lacks flow and the letters aren't exciting. Stick to your old tags, they were starting to look pretty nice.

[vampireboy65]

ya deg u had some good shit going stick wit it and i like ur old E even though it didnt fit in with the other letters i liked it

[Vice]

no beef my my advice would be stick with the advice from the guy whos been here since 06...

[Degausserr x]

thanks rogue

[mada focka]

handy i did for a mate:
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/6922/alexstephenshandywn1.jpg
and an I heart real art...
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4205/iheartnycopydg2.jpg

crits?



haha "handy i did for a mate" anyways....

[Lamure]

Haha, that is a nice style though.
I have such a fucking hard time with tags these days.

[Lamure]

Speaking of which...
"AKAR" - Been trying to write this for too long probably.
Any potential?
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c393/evanyoung9/CIMG1980.jpg

[The_Sheep]

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCN0742_edited-2.jpgi messed up on the top right CRITS PLZ!!!!

It looks like your not moving fast enough with your pen, speed it up, then do it 100x over and over, seriously, i mustve filled out like 30 pages of paper front and back of my handstyle over and over

[WolfBurrns]

Haha. You'll eventually look back at those 30 pages and laugh. I have a notebooks filled with handys.

Edit: Heres a couple tags so im not wasting space. Still workin on the first one.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/solehande.jpg

[Lamure]

I'm ocd and have to rip out all the pages of my blackbook I don't like.
It's weird.
Can I get a crit for my tag^?

[Grape1]

sole - bottom one is lookin dope. "s" and "o" are nice with the little flicks on 'em. cool dip in the "e" 2.

akar - gettin there, sorta difficult to read, maybe space things out a bit more.

Some - A bit too simple, but simples are good, lookin nice.

i write grape(nsg):

crits welcome...

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9784/newfreights011wu2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[CanOx]

Grape im diggin that
except the R..it looks like an N
but dope still

[vampireboy65]

grape nice i like the bottem one the best it sick (what marker are you using?)

[spleezy]

Lost some of your shit is similar to the company lost's logos, and designs on hats n shit, i suggest a new word if your just starting, or throwing in some diff letters to make a new word?

if not cool too, but im juss sayin

[Grape1]

thanks for the crits, its a krink marker. not the old unibodies, the new ones. i got it from the bomb shelter in t.o.

[vampireboy65]

there is a lost company???wtf and my shit looks like theirs??

[BIGel]

been awhile since i poste3d in here, im working on a more gothic style these days..

thats pretty sick grape, simple but effective.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/170/5/2/gothic_lettering_by_bigel.jpg

[scoot]

sick style El but ur o's and g's look really similar

[d_g]

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/handy12.jpg

[Jroc1993]

been awhile since i poste3d in here, im working on a more gothic style these days..

thats pretty sick grape, simple but effective.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/170/5/2/gothic_lettering_by_bigel.jpg
what kinda markers do u use to get that effect? and that tag would probably take awhile cuz it looks complicated

[scoot]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/rollcall.jpg

[cyber one]

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/c1.jpg
green can was near dead. and the bubbles were a mistake. oh well....crits??...

[Slushi]

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1932/picture224bl7.jpg

My wallet. "bad motha fucker"

[Grape1]

ey thanks for more crits.

cyberone: styles lookin pretty cool, some bigger flares might do the trick, and I can't really see the "b". gettin there.

tawse: Incredible style. The underline does the trick. Nice.

Heres another two of mine. Tried a cleaner one in my book, and one doing a bit of a slant... crits welcome. :)

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/4861/tags001mm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/9858/tags002lj8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Lamure]

Love the style.
Maybe git rid of some of the extras? Like that squiggle after the e.

[Dusk07]

done with a shitty marker..anyways critsss..

http://aycu15.webshots.com/image/20614/2005265824603030520_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005265824603030520)
http://aycu15.webshots.com/image/17854/2005267423588100915_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2005267423588100915)

[dim]

grape i hate that squigily shit

[Roolete]

dusk im really feelin that, especially the s. id say fix up the k, make it fit more.

[vampireboy65]

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/lastscan.jpgit kinda bad but whatever ok where mine

[orket1]

GRAPE U SUCK I HATE U jks u kno me mister orket joker w.e u wantta call me lmao like i told u get rid of those fukcking squiglly liney thingyies BLARG they ruin it alllll but when u changeing ur name after china? oh and work on ur "R" abit it looks like a "A"

[Roolete]

vampire....thanks...

...

post it in the exchange thread, urs is there.

[BIGel]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1222/578381328_122b3c18bf.jpg?v=0

[iwritebasic]

bigel-i think that u have one the best styles i have ever seen

[Vice]

so i took ante's advice and i came up with an new name. the letters in vice were just too difficult. well i came up with the name sake. this is what ive come up with.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062007_22541.jpg
and
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062007_22531.jpg

edit: and im unsure about the arrow. hence the reason why i only did two. crits?

[MASO]

omg dont write sake
http://www.lay-lo.com/graff/s/sake_001.jpg
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/sake1011.jpg

[exhale]

what part of canada is he in?

anything i can improve on?
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/zuntitled10.jpg

[tense]

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6711/img0748ae0.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1957.jpg
now shut the fuck up.

[cyber one]

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/c1.jpg
green can was near dead. and the bubbles were a mistake. oh well....crits??...anyone else? crits? oh, and i dropped the b a few months back... says cyerone.

[Jroc1993]

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/4954/012sk9.jpg
changed up the M and wrote faster
crits?

[tonentink]

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/1288/mailsavage1fe2.jpghttp://img182.imageshack.us/img182/7265/notoserzk4.jpg
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/9132/petskoldvp3.jpg

[EASE_RDK_JDC]

BIGEL

How come youre in the toy section?
Your stuff is def. not toy.


Can we do a hand style exchange?

[Captain]

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6711/img0748ae0.jpg
How'd you pull that fade shit?

[Z FUSE]

BigEL is! the shit! and captain if that's isnt from his marker streaking then dayum skillls tense!
um i'd like sume crits please.
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/2870/dsc00342du9.jpg

[amberTrichome]

it says retab
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2371/photo0013qu4.jpgnot sure if anyone writes this or whatever... crit?http://img341.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0013qu4.jpg

[Jroc1993]

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/4954/012sk9.jpg
changed up the M and wrote faster
crits?
nisky- i like yurs i wouldnt change it too much
ambertrichrome- its still hard to read now that i can tell what it says but id lose all the extensions and stuff and maybe itd be easier to read
bump cuz i got overlooked

[EASE_RDK_JDC]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y45/DEADCRASSSONG/easetags.jpg

Crits?

[kelio]

EASE: go simpler, good start though.


http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/DSCF0919.jpg


critz on the new tag?
sorry about the size :(

[Lamure]

I think you can go a little more complex than that...

[tonentink]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/793/whitekoldvl9.jpg

[Jroc1993]

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/4954/012sk9.jpg
changed up the M and wrote faster
crits?
bump againso i can get some crits
tone im likin that tag whatd u use?

[Skru-Tape]

morne, i think u need to go more advanced than that, lose the lil noth at the end of the "e", but u can keep the extended line off of it. and id do something better wit the 'o' and the 'r' try makin em nopt look so plain

[Skru-Tape]

and tonentink, im really diggin that one last one u posted.

[tense]

How'd you pull that fade shit?
i think the ink was just like that for sum reason on that particular tag cuz every other tag i did with that marker was flat, they didnt look all 3-d n shit

[cerex89]

bored
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0138.jpg

[Fixion]

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4843/sexmeisterlo1.png
Friend took this sexy ass polaroid of my tag. She's an awesome photographer. Well yeah crits?

Morne. It's cool that you connect your letters, just space em apart a lil more and write neater. And don't write fast, tags don't have to be written fast.

[amberTrichome]

thats really sick fixion black meanstreak under it?
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/354/photo0003111hc7.jpghttp://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8673/photo0014hj3.jpgeh? it says retab btw again

[Degausserr x]

Morne. It's cool that you connect your letters, just space em apart a lil more and write neater. And don't write fast, tags don't have to be written fast.

I'm pretty sure he's doing a oneliner... meaning the letters should be connected and written fast.

rehab- i like your letters and style but space them out more and make it a little more legible.... keep at it

[Fixion]

isn't that "Zers" guy in these forums?

[Degausserr x]

theres a ZERS in this form... i did a tag for him a while ago i think...

[Jroc1993]

I'm pretty sure he's doing a oneliner... meaning the letters should be connected and written fast.
yeah it is a oneliner but i do need to add more style to it i just dont know how:mad:

[Degausserr x]

sorry cant give you much on that... only tried one liners a few times and they shouldnt even be called that theyre so bad

[Jroc1993]

mine or yurs?

[Degausserr x]

haha mine... youre getting there bro just keep working

[Degausserr x]

these are what ive been putting up latelyhttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/peglegpirate/CIMG0995.jpg

[Aska.]

isn't that "Zers" guy in these forums?

whahappen? writes zers.. .

[Kode]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Kode1.jpg

Its not actually that great to post up, I know that the "E" Looks messed up, but it doesn't usually. I tried a diffrent style of a "K", and threw on a halo above the "E". I thought about crossing an "x" inside the "O", but I thought I'd post this up first. Any crits would be great.

[tonentink]

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/3498/savage2ev1.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3262/toppincy2.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/7091/topstj6.jpg

[orket1]

orket eh w.e i like it give me something i should touch up on or do to make this better thx

[d_g]

Orket, reasonably simple which is always a good start but try and loosen up a little, throw some curves in there.

tonentink, middle picture left tag is probably the best. I don't wanna sound like an arsehole but I don't think you should really be 'toppin toyz' unless you have good reason to do so. From what I can see their tags don't look too bad.

Kode, same as what I said to Orket.

Some, top left is the best, the S isn't too shabby, try and flair out your other letters a bit to match, they make the S look like a lone ranger if you know what I mean.

[Kode]

Alright, thanks.

[ESCO1]

crits please?
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