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bouncingsoul
06-23-2007, 04:34 PM
Alright, planning on doing this handie in between to fill up that space "True to your roots" Kinda sloppy and the letters need a biiiit work. Oh well

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0850.jpg

Putting it in between here by the way

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0846.jpg

Kode
06-23-2007, 06:16 PM
Yeah, the "True to your roots" was kinda hard to read until I knew what it said. And the pic looks nice.

Any crits on these?

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Kode1-1.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Kode2.jpg

And one of my crew that I haven't experimented with since I got into it.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/NFC1.jpg

Bazer
06-23-2007, 07:03 PM
kode, done write kode.. do you know how many people write code???...

Kode
06-23-2007, 07:08 PM
Fuck

BIGel
06-23-2007, 07:15 PM
^dude fuck that if you want to write kode write kode, its a good beginning name with easy enough letters. EVERY name you can think of has been taken, that part doesnt matter, just take the name and make it your own.

its not your name that counts, its the style behind it.

Kode
06-23-2007, 07:27 PM
Alright, thanks Bigel. I'm gonna stick with Kode.

Anyone have crits for the tags?

MUSEone
06-23-2007, 09:19 PM
U have a better k than him? Prove it. lol

Kode-ur e's look like u bit them from mine.

Degausserr x
06-23-2007, 11:59 PM
this is me fucking around with new words and trying to make SOME a little better and bringing back BLK for a little

crits?

http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667718_8182.jpghttp://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667717_7930.jpghttp://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667719_8432.jpghttp://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667720_8680.jpghttp://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667721_8928.jpg

ThickGravy
06-24-2007, 01:17 AM
Dont write MSK.. MSK is a well known crew.

d_g
06-24-2007, 01:30 AM
Esco, those are really illegible bro, I have absolutely no idea what they say. The bottom line starts off looking like 'desa' and ends up looking like 'C@s2'. That's the first thing I'd working on if I was you, just getting your stuff a little more legible.

Bouncing, The 'Roots' is really fucking nice. Same with the 'To'. They 'yours' is nice as well but to me it needs a little more spacing, esp. around the 'y'. The 'True' is good as well but looks like the top bar of the 'T' needs to be pulled out on the left a bit, and maybe curve out the 'R' a little more. Very nice.

Kode, same as what I said to you before, just keep practicing.

Degausserr x, same as what I said to Kode before, just try and loosen up a little, throw a little more curve in there and just keep practicing.

Jroc1993
06-24-2007, 01:37 AM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/9049/mornetaguy3.jpg
caught some tags thursday night
crits?

MASO
06-24-2007, 02:26 AM
kode - i'm not really diggin the x in the O and the D is a little weirdly shaped. i would work on those 2 letters and try a bunch of different k's since you can do alot with it

dega - the E in your SOME handy doesnt fit with the SOM but the SOM looks good.

jroc - the letters seem kinda plain and your N kinda looks like a U in that one. i dont know if the big dot on the left was intentional but it doesn't look good there. i would say jus get a little more funk in your letters.

spag
06-24-2007, 02:39 AM
Do wat this one guy once told me, buy 5 spiral notebooks and 2 marksalot markers, fill the books up in about 2 weeks, not just a couple tags per page, every page should be damn near black.

I couldn't find who said that, but if ur out there reading this, it helped. lol

quoted for truth. and jroc.
do that.
and just go crazy with your hand. eventually it'll start flowing.

some other guy told me to fill a notebook up with handstyles and just sketch them a bunch. it helped a lot as i got new ideas to "change it up" a bit.

orket1
06-24-2007, 03:01 AM
thx dg here one of the burners i think i might doo lol um that other one is for fun cuz grape is my hombre lmao um ye we in the same crew

more crits lol

oh i think the burner might be in the wrong sectioin but w.e

after_dinner_payback
06-24-2007, 11:33 AM
Any critz???http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3395/scan0009oy4.jpg

tonentink
06-24-2007, 12:42 PM
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4195/aotoppersto9.jpg
aotoppers !!!

MASO
06-24-2007, 12:42 PM
so you should resize it... the top one is better than the bottom. the bottom one is pretty much script writing. you should work on your letter structure a bit. check out some other tags online to get more ideas of structure.

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 01:16 PM
anyone want to help me with an E to fit the SOME up there?

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 04:57 PM
okay some shit i did today when i was out... crits?
http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671894_4951.jpghttp://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671899_5947.jpghttp://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671900_6201.jpghttp://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671901_6477.jpg

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 04:58 PM
btw the whole wide shit wasnt my fault... its bc that dude didnt resize so my images stacked weird like

cyber one
06-24-2007, 05:08 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/c1.jpg
green can was near empty. and the bubbles were a mistake. oh well....crits??...one last try for crits... says cyerone

MASO
06-24-2007, 05:14 PM
dega - the 1st one is the best. you could shorten the underline on it a little. the one on the table, i cant even read. but yeah, do more like the 1st pic.

cyber - i'm pretty sure you got some crits on that and you should give some crits before you ask. but all in all its a nice tag. you could do without the orange clouds around it but i think someone already said that.

here's one i was jus messin with.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/32BS1.jpg
crits welcome.

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 05:17 PM
okay some shit i did today when i was out... crits?
http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671894_4951.jpghttp://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671899_5947.jpghttp://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671900_6201.jpghttp://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671901_6477.jpg

bumpster

maso im feelin all the letters on that. got some nice flow and everything... i love your style.

EDIT- cyerone the orange clouds or wahtever they are take away from it being a tag. add a little more flare and itll be tight

okay heres some new attempts at Es let me know wahts good and wahts sucks ahah
http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673525_986.jpghttp://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673526_1240.jpghttp://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673527_1496.jpghttp://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673528_1748.jpghttp://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673529_1997.jpg

LinX
06-24-2007, 08:50 PM
yo what up .. my friend does this shit and its hot, was gonna start doin it with him but i dont have a tag need a lil practice at it.. people call me linx or pizzy <my nicknames> but i dont know what it would look like if it was tagged up anywhere.. can someone give me an idea.. thnx

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 08:56 PM
im pretty sure theres a thread... "new to graffiti? start here."

and it like auto combined my 2 posts so dont over look the new Es

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-24-2007, 09:44 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture227.jpg
for nero
saine
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture226.jpg
some-make your s softer not jagged look a tmaso's s. dont' use such a big marker just get a regular sharpie.
maso- nice feeling that ish maybe lose the quotations.
cyber one- nice and simple.

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 10:18 PM
even though the E still sucks, hows that S? and yeah the underlines way too long idc right now..http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_674440_2999.jpg

SoundOff
06-24-2007, 10:33 PM
A couple I did.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v389/Link459/06-24-07_1928.jpg

Crits please, want to improve.

d_g
06-24-2007, 10:36 PM
FUCK THIS SHIT. I just wrote out mad crits for everyone on the page and then instead of hitting shift + R I hit ctrl + r, and lost it all. So I'll quickly summerize.

Cyerone, shit's nice and simple, just watch your can control, try and keep all the flairs in the same places.

Masokst, looks real nice, use the T from the tag in your sig, and watch the K almost looks like an R.

Teze, your mum will be angry when she sees that shit :-P the lower case e looks better IMO, maybe try and use an uppercase N instead, it would give it some nice symmetry with the A.

Some, the S isn't too bad, 'O' is a shit letter, you're on your own with that one, either make the m all curves or all straight, half and half rarely works, try a lower case e instead.

Siran, add some curves bro, curves mang.

And just a note to everyone, we all help each other out here, there shouldn't be a select few that stand around just to give out crits. If you would like to have your work criticised please crit everyone from the last 4 or so pictures or don't expect to get anything in return.

MUSEone
06-24-2007, 10:36 PM
I think the second on down looks the best, keep at that one, im feeling it could get somewhere.

I need some ideas for "eske"

PM me some of ur guys shit out there that I can mess around w/. Itd be much appreciated. And NO, im not gonna bite it, everyones style came from somewhere.

Degausserr x
06-24-2007, 10:40 PM
thanks DG...

siran- im not feeling it. letters arnt bad theres just no flow, work on that.

Derogatory9o5
06-24-2007, 10:41 PM
Yo siran work on kinda adding a little something to the letters , i think i like the last one the best because it looks like you could work with it more.. but ya change it up a little , all in all i like it.

MASO
06-25-2007, 12:28 AM
FUCK THIS SHIT. I just wrote out mad crits for everyone on the page and then instead of hitting shift + R I hit ctrl + r, and lost it all. So I'll quickly summerize.


hahaha that sucks. thanks for the crits though. i'll keep workin on it.

teze - your tag is always hot. the bottom SAIN looks better than the top one (mainly the S) but the top E is better than the bottom.

siran - i would say to make a basic tag. all even sized, simple letters, then start tweakin from there. the I with the big circle for the dot needs work. just find a different way to dot it or capitalize it. and yeah curves, curves.

jersOneTIC
06-25-2007, 01:56 AM
maso - your style is ill
some - try workin on your m
here's some of my stuff...crits?
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/762/003008ap5.jpg

siZo
06-25-2007, 03:54 AM
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/2927/picture009pk7.jpg

Critz please, i cant find my proper marker so.. :p

Mr Tasty
06-25-2007, 09:26 AM
maso - your style is ill
some - try workin on your m
here's some of my stuff...crits?
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/762/003008ap5.jpg
jers top one is dope...but the bottom one looks like aers
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/taste123567.jpg
not realy a toy tag...but il post it anyway

Tri1
06-25-2007, 09:42 AM
SiZo-id say go a bit more simple for now. try to keep the letters the same size. like the i should be in line with the rest of the letters. Also lose the add on for now.

MiNZ
06-25-2007, 03:30 PM
sizo-basics i went basics when i first started and just kept it that way
jers-dope tag but way to much goin on for me and might take a while on the street

me stuff:
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/1971/l57766151c1f51c81bde693cu2.jpg
stainerrsss
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/4673/la19d063425334d7a98be5cqr4.jpg
1/2 n 1/2

crits?

MASO
06-25-2007, 03:40 PM
jers - at 1st i liked the top one but when i saw the top part was a huge extension off the E, it struck as a little weird. the bottom one is nice but the J would read an A to me if i didn't know your name. you could do without a lot of the extensions on that one too.. the crown.. 3 quotation marks is odd. i would jus keep the underline and star for that one.

sizo - do what tri says

tasty - i can't read that. i see a T and a E... whats with all the photoshop effects?

mesn - the bottom one on the yellow sign is nice. i'm not sure about the dots. jus seems like drawin out 4 circles takes time. maybe just a star on the end? the streaker tag - the MES is nice then it looks like you got a little uncomfortable writin the N and the arrow looks a little shaky.

Mr Tasty
06-25-2007, 04:22 PM
...really u cant read it?...
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/test3.jpg
easier to read?

IlikePie
06-25-2007, 04:52 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Tags038.jpg

Accidental one liner.

Degausserr x
06-25-2007, 05:26 PM
my wonderous paint i made this morning... its on a flat surface so theres no drips =[
http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_681502_3946.jpg

Bazer
06-25-2007, 05:57 PM
taste what did you use for that one?

Vice
06-25-2007, 09:08 PM
alright guys,
i write stak now cause i was vice, disliked it, tried sake, found out he was a legend, and ended up here.
well these are the tags I've come up with.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062507_20561.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062507_20551.jpg

and i know their pretty much the same pics its just i wanted to show all of the lines but still have you be able to see the tags. so what do you guys think?
crits?

oh and for my crits,
ilikepie: i like it except for the last letter. i cant tell what that is. is it an L?
deg: you have really improved. im lovin it, its got good flow and the ink looks like its great.
and tasty: i can only really read the E but just lookin at it it looks good haha.

edit: and i know that the last K's on both of the pics are fucked up. :o
edit #2: im not so sure about the T. ive been messin around with it for a while and i cant seem to come up w/ anything for it.

aefx-one
06-25-2007, 09:23 PM
http://i19.tinypic.com/67ybd51.jpg

tonentink
06-25-2007, 09:37 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/6262/bigupqz5.jpg

aOt !!!

and kelio its a wider shot of the photo you dumb phuck its to show the taggin !!!

MASO
06-25-2007, 10:15 PM
...really u cant read it?...
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/test3.jpg
easier to read?
oh i see. taste. took me a little while to find the S since its so damn wide i thought i was lookin at 2 letters.

ran - thats a nice one liner

dega - i dont really like how the arrow jus comes out of the E like that (jus like morne's E) maybe if you do a little loop or flourish first or somthing but the tag is lookin better.

vice - the A and K are your best letters. i think you should try switch up the S and T. try and put some curves in it instead of so many hard straight lines.

aefx - i see the thought in tryin to make the letters connect but they connect oddly to me. it needs more flow IMO. and you got a buttload of extensions on it.. 2 dots on the sides, underline with 3 dots, halo with quotes. jus pick one or two.

kelio
06-25-2007, 10:36 PM
just fucking around on a box. haha.

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/5651fab7.jpg

Fube
06-25-2007, 11:07 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/32BS1.jpg

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture227.jpg

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/762/003008ap5.jpg

top ones hot, need more development. does the dry erase borad help u out?
would u recomend it?

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/4673/la19d063425334d7a98be5cqr4.jpg

bump deeeeees!

one of for me i like, want propa crits on it.

"the street sessions"

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/streetsessions.jpg

MASO
06-25-2007, 11:15 PM
fube you gota do me a handy in that style haha. at first i couldnt read it for shit but now it pops out (or you made it a little simpler). pretty dope. but why do you always put the circle over the middle?

hungr
06-25-2007, 11:31 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00492.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00509.jpg

MASO
06-26-2007, 12:21 AM
hungr i like that top one. the bottom one is alright. maybe bring the letters closer together?

GHOST 2-5-2
06-26-2007, 03:29 AM
here are a coulpe i just did to get some crits
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4629/doapsmoker001kk3.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=doapsmoker001kk3.jpg)ignor the smoker face i just got bord with my normal tag and add it
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/3802/doapsmoker002mr2.th.jpg (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=doapsmoker002mr2.jpg)
crits please

Hester
06-26-2007, 01:44 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0740.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0738.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0708.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0735.jpg

MASO
06-26-2007, 09:05 PM
ghost - i really like the bottom one. nice. the top one is not as great. the D doesnt look like a D really mainly because that bar is jus floating there i guess.

hester - i like those tags. the 1st and 3rd i like the most because of the connections. the 2nd flick couldve been better without the underline jus cuz it makes the T look like an I but if people know your name then they'll know.

Degausserr x
06-26-2007, 09:30 PM
well.. my mom found out i do graffiti last night. great fun. she took everything. here's everything i did before i got caught...
http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_690218_1459.jpg
right after i did it
http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_690223_2259.jpg
later with all the drips
http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_690219_1712.jpg
like 2 secs after so it prob dripped A LOT more
http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_690221_1964.jpg
marker tag with marker i JUST racked.

i had like 3 new markers and lots of ink and shit GOD DAMN IM PISSED!

MASO
06-26-2007, 09:34 PM
damn that sucks. nice drips on the second one. kiwi mop? hope she didnt throw all your shit away. if she did jus go dig it out.
vice - you should bump it on the next page. this one is done.

-GEKS-
06-26-2007, 10:51 PM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1024.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1021.jpg

tags im workin wit
that really scks balls some. nice tags tho

MASO
06-26-2007, 10:55 PM
geks - the bottom one is much better than the top. the top G isn't flowin very well. thats the main thing. the bottom one is clean and simple. i know there's not a lot of ways to draw a straight arrow but i think it needs more umph. maybe a little more curve on the tip. nice though.

"exist...
06-26-2007, 11:23 PM
hey yall I'm new here thought I'd get some crits n shit.

hester - dope shit. I like all the styles you've got there. Maybe work with the S a bit I reckon you could put more style into it, more like you do with the E's in the first tag and the R's on all of them. Really digging the R on the last tag.

some - lose the arrow on the end of the e and work on keeping the ome all the same size (width and height).

geks - The second one's way better. Reckon you should use the lower case n cos it's more round like the other letters. Might make it more consistent and flow a bit better. Try keeping the horizontal line in the G straight like the other letters maybe bring it "into" the space of the G a bit more and kick it down a bit or somethin. Otherwise it's pretty good for a simple.

Anyone got any crits for this one? says "kept" by the way

http://sp2.fotologs.net/photo/2/62/75/woleb/1182914049_f.jpg

MASO
06-26-2007, 11:26 PM
nuthin really to say. its pretty dope. i like it.
o and welcome to the forums

MASO
06-26-2007, 11:30 PM
"the street sessions"

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/streetsessions.jpg
bump dis.

glyce
06-26-2007, 11:33 PM
that looks really sick maso but i dont know about tha circle thing. it kind of draws my attecntion away from the letters

-GEKS-
06-26-2007, 11:41 PM
maso didnt draw that tho
still dope
thanks for the dope crits on the last page, helps a lot

whahappen?
06-26-2007, 11:44 PM
kept take off the lower left curve on the k's leg
hester and age nice
some new ish
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5571/picture128kr1.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2880/picture129ig5.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2820/picture127wi0.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6995/picture130wg0.jpg

-GEKS-
06-26-2007, 11:49 PM
all the ones beside the first i cant read :(
they still look cool tho i gess
:D
first one is fire

MASO
06-27-2007, 12:14 AM
yeah i jus bumped fube's cuz its dope and no1 really critted on it.

whahappen - i like the 2nd and 3rd one the most but thats probably because i recognize those styles. the third is nice but the second couldve been done better. the lines seem a little hesitant when you come down to the bottom.

Fube
06-27-2007, 12:28 AM
thanks for the bump. just wanted to start something different instaid of just bumping your own shit bring someone up with you. try something positive for a change in this place. people need to understand this portion of the forum is about progression. dont take a bad crit. wrong. its all about progression.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00492.jpg

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0708.jpg

http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_690223_2259.jpg (http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_690223_2259.jpg)
some, i would get rid of the asteric thing at the beginning. but the mad drips make it look better.
hester, are u a south paw? feelin the one i bumped. i liked something from all of yours but this was my fav.
hungr, likes yours cus its just dirty.
happen, just watched infamy again and if philly steez is what your going for, u got it.

"exist...
06-27-2007, 12:29 AM
fube that street sessions is sick but I can't really crit it cos I couldn't do any better... maybe lose the circle. it's not really necessary I guess. Don't really know what to say.

tight stuff

Fube
06-27-2007, 01:07 AM
^^^^yeah its just one of them things u did but u wish u didnt. ah well. thanks for the words.

NewGraffer905
06-27-2007, 01:20 AM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Core.jpg

It's "Core".

umop.ap!sdn
06-27-2007, 01:26 AM
kept take off the lower left curve on the k's leg
hester and age nice
some new ish
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5571/picture128kr1.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2880/picture129ig5.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2820/picture127wi0.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6995/picture130wg0.jpg


getting better with those phillys nice

tesfortis
06-27-2007, 01:28 AM
I wish I understood how to do philly handstyles.

hungr
06-27-2007, 02:05 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00524.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00525.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00526.jpg

NewGraffer905
06-27-2007, 02:11 AM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Core.jpg

It's "Core".

And this is "Mage". I'm still experimenting with words for names. Any crits, please.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Mage.jpg

"exist...
06-27-2007, 02:16 AM
Hungr - That last one looks sick with all the drips. The R is dope

Core is heaps better than Mage

Core - Hard to crit because there's not heaps specifically WRONG with it... it's pretty much in proportion and consistent with shape and stuff... You could work on making your letters more interesting. Maybe change the round part of the R and make the E one stroke instead of two. Try fucking with serifs (the little tails on the end of letters). Maybe on the E or the C.

NewGraffer905
06-27-2007, 02:24 AM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Core2.jpg

Is this an impovement?

kelio
06-27-2007, 03:42 AM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Core2.jpg

Is this an impovement?


NewGraffer905: i like it keep working on it and it will look ill. i think its good for something basic though. personally my handstyle is wack. guess i just have to keep working with it. just keep it up.

hungr: im really feeling your style its hot. i really love that last one nice drips. did you make your ink or buy it? cause i really need to make/buy some.

umop.ap!sdn: your hand is ill.

"exist...: keep working with it maybe take the wing off of the top of the K.

Fube: shits ill as always. really nothing else to say about it.

whahappen?
06-27-2007, 03:48 AM
happen, just watched infamy again and if philly steez is what your going for, u got it.
thanks, i watched that part like 3 times today, enem is awesome everytime i watch it
core curve the bottoms of the c and e alike

RUP'E
06-27-2007, 04:59 AM
hungr the last one is prtty good.fube thats mad what marker did u use.
whahappen, im not that into it its to frilly.
RUP'E

NewGraffer905
06-27-2007, 12:38 PM
Trying "Tonic". I'm still deciding on what to write.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Tonic.jpg

Tri1
06-27-2007, 02:59 PM
I think Core is better. On Tonic lose the flair at the start of the T. It looks a bit forced and out of place. But otherwise i'm liking it.

Tag with a new marker and ink i just made. Sorry the inks a bit weak.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Image026.jpg

Vice
06-27-2007, 06:01 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062507_20561.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062507_20551.jpg



bump for crits cause the only person who crit(ed?) was maso.

ark i like it. the flow is good but i would say that maybe you would want to thicken up the ink if thats possible? i dunno if thats just me.

Dusk07
06-27-2007, 06:20 PM
Second time paintin my tag not writtin

Done with german outline not fatty so it was hard to get the flares right

Anyways crits

http://aycu29.webshots.com/image/20108/2000517242811698809_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000517242811698809)
http://aycu04.webshots.com/image/18443/2000580427690411416_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000580427690411416)

Fube
06-27-2007, 06:26 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00526.jpg

^^^bump for hungr.


hungr the last one is prtty good.fube thats mad what marker did u use.


http://63.210.199.180/03/70/5/37054.jpg.fpx?qlt=70&wid=144&cvt=jpeg

^deees. round 15 bucks at any craft store,

vice: looks like the same thing written over and over. practice makes perfect they say. i guess my question is, do u like it?
do u think its your best?
what type of crits are u lookin for?
most times if u dont get crits u need to try harder and do something better. dont just scribble something down and expect everyone to give u advice on it.
keep goin untill u do something that u feel is "ill" and post that.

any advice i would give u now is look at the big boy forum and take a look at some handys u like, dont bite em. use them as an influence untill u get a style thats all your own.

developing a nice handy that u can do on a consistant basis with any word is difficult. takes a lot of time and dedication. if your not willing to do that then u might as well quit.

just keep at it. imitation is the best form of flattery. but not bites. remember that.

whahappen?
06-27-2007, 06:33 PM
WITH FACES
good or eh..?
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9981/picture133rf4.jpg
i like these next 2

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/84/picture132ny8.jpg
dusk lose the addons and make your letters more proportioned
stak the t could be mistaken for an n

Fube
06-27-2007, 06:43 PM
well happen. due to your crits u gave just now. your "philly" style could be mistaken for someone droppin a blue sharpie repeatidly on some notebook paper. to each his own. if u like it thats fine. but i dont.

i didnt like the infamy philly shit eather. guess im not a fan.

Dusk07
06-27-2007, 06:45 PM
written

http://aycu18.webshots.com/image/18177/2002376695795566418_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002376695795566418)

Jroc1993
06-27-2007, 07:04 PM
lose the quotes and the underline thing and it should be good

Vice
06-27-2007, 07:13 PM
alrigity now... i was messin around with ma letters and i came up with this. and if you cant tell im trying to decide which type of T i like best.

edit: im a dumbass and forgot to post the pic... :(

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062707_19031.jpg

Captain
06-27-2007, 09:15 PM
vice, baby, take fube's advice. Get some inspiration, have an idea what you want- should it be all pointy and shit or is it gonna be all loopy, etc.?
Then get a few chisel tips and practice. don't just do a bunch, put thought into each letter. (not only thought, try to 'feel' the letter.)

Try practicing different words and don't use the same letters all the time, learn to re-create letters at will so that they'll flow with the other letters.


Doing a ton and then posting them's not gonna get you anywhere.

Tri1
06-27-2007, 09:34 PM
Vice i like the first one the best out of all of those. Most of the rest look to sqaushed up together and it looks forced.

TAZM
06-27-2007, 09:50 PM
stak i dont like your S but everything else isnt tooooooooo bad.
dusk on the other hand i like the S but nothing else.
whahappen i cant read it but looks fresh
hungrs got nice dripsss

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm024.jpg

Jroc1993
06-27-2007, 10:09 PM
try put more style into yur m and lose the devil sign thing and it should be better

"exist...
06-27-2007, 10:35 PM
Second time paintin my tag not writtin

Done with german outline not fatty so it was hard to get the flares right

Anyways crits

\ (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000517242811698809)
http://aycu04.webshots.com/image/18443/2000580427690411416_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000580427690411416)

Reckon this one is better kill the curly shit on the K and it will be dope. Probably don't need the line above it either. Make the serif on the top of the S a bit shorter so it doesn't cut through the K. Kinda makes it look like you've put a T up there for some reason. Looking good though. The DU looks sick. So does the S except for the top bit.

Jroc1993
06-27-2007, 10:42 PM
who the hell are u i dont see u givin crits

Fube
06-27-2007, 10:50 PM
both yall need to put it to pm's. getting a good positive vibe going and u fools are killing it. probably gunna get your post deleted anyway, along with this one but hush.

umop.ap!sdn
06-27-2007, 11:28 PM
it should be readable.. it really isnt until after you read your name.. your letters should be the same size. i think you should start new.

edit:

Give crits before you ask for them.

NewGraffer905
06-27-2007, 11:28 PM
Looks like its saying "34S" :\

Heres some attempts. I couldn't seem to take away the tail on the "T" because it just comes out when ever I tried to write a tag.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Tonic-1.jpg

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Tonic2.jpg

And I managed to get one without the tail.. Although I think it looks bad.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/Tonic3.jpg

MASO
06-27-2007, 11:42 PM
ark - thats nice n simple. three letters may be hard to do more with but i think you could add more funk to it.

dusk - your spray tags are pretty nice except for the under and over lines. maybe you could keep the one under it and shorten the horizontal bar a lot. and yeah, shorten the serif on the S. the written ones are good too. i'm not too sure about looping the K all the way back like that. seems like there's a bunch of other ways you could end it.

tazm - the only letter that doesnt fit there is the M and try bringin your letters in a LITTLE bit closer together and see how it looks.

blase - you gotta start simple. you connections arent really making sense. jus start out with even sized letters and tweak from there.

tonic - it is simple right now and you can start playin with your letters a lot. you dont HAVE to lose the start on that T as long as you make it work with the rest of the tag.

i just suggest you write out all your letters in as many different ways as you can. look at other tags you like and get some ideas flowin. keep writin out letters in different ways then formulate a tag around the letters you like.

SoundOff
06-27-2007, 11:43 PM
hungr - AWESOME I'm lovin' it. :D
Dusk - Good, good, but don't like the "k" in the second pic. I know it's the same, but the pic's dif and I just don't like it in that one. D:
Blase - Too jumbled, couldn't read if I didn't know your name.

And so yeah I changed my name, here's my new tag.

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6426/0627072033nl2.th.jpg (http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0627072033nl2.jpg)

Pronounced like choice.

hungr
06-28-2007, 01:20 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00533.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00534.jpg
with a...
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00532.jpg
murdered hand!

whahappen?
06-28-2007, 01:34 AM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5914/picture136lx1.jpg
new style
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9728/picture137ka4.jpg
hungr g is weird

GHOST 2-5-2
06-28-2007, 03:36 AM
new style and an old one so you guys can compare i even labled it for you so guys dont have to think to hard haha
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8360/newshut002qc6.th.jpg (http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newshut002qc6.jpg)
crits please

hungr
06-28-2007, 03:19 PM
it seemed like a good word to write :D (pretty nice pickle dick tag too)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00535.jpg

sacwacko
06-28-2007, 04:38 PM
whahappen- nice new style - the smiley.
hungr-lookin good.



critz please...new name.
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled9.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled8.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled7-1.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled6.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled2-2.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled3-1.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled1-5.jpg

Fube
06-28-2007, 06:22 PM
#3 sac........#3.

glyce
06-28-2007, 07:36 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/stag.jpg

any crits? i think it looks to boring

tonentink
06-28-2007, 08:40 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4369/krazyarrowdy8.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4379/allovertowncr0.jpg
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1451/bumpysignhj5.jpg
this last one had some bumpy shit on it so it was hard to make a smooth konnection!!!

MASO
06-28-2007, 09:25 PM
relax sac. tonen never gives crits. thats just him. and you cant really expect the junior members to really know any better despite people sayin
GIVE CRITS BEFORE YOU ASK!
but there it is again.

anyway, i'm feelin #1 and #3 the most eventhough they all pretty nice. i jus dont really like the E's in the other ones mainly.

ghost. i like the top right one because the A has a little curve at the top. makes it look better.

glyce - it may be a LITTLE boring but its lookin nice. you should tweak your letters a bunch if you think its boring. jus try sumthin new.

whahappen - the face with the crown on it is the 1st one you did that i like and the handy is lookin pretty dope too.

jois - i think you gotta steer away from usin a huge circle as a dot for an I and try to put more curves in your letters. it jus seems so rigid right now.

MASO
06-28-2007, 09:35 PM
the new ones could work but your D's really look like Y's there.

Fube
06-28-2007, 09:50 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1029.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1030.jpg

man, sorry the flicks suck. ive been on a paint pen on black plastic. its addicting.

glyce, sometimes simple is better. i like that.

sac, i like #3 u hooker. cant go on tellin people how to improve once they reach a certian point. its up to u now. progress.

tonen, like the last one.

MASO
06-28-2007, 10:15 PM
pretty nuts fube. cant stop lookin at the throw lol. you definately got a nice writing hand. i like the E's, C's, G's, and S's the most but it all flows well together.

i always thought they should make a black page black book. or do they?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-28-2007, 10:22 PM
They do for charcoal and pastels, i believe.
fube keep that shit coming i like the way you keep your ish busy.
hungr- everytime i come on here you got some new shit up keep it up maybe help out some of the younger dudes who aint as good as you. you could help the more.
Tonenetink- i never really felt your shit, it reminds me of gangbanging and i aint with that.
Glyce- nice and simple lose the the swirl on the k.
sakwacko- not bad work on your r's some more and use lower case e's.

what_one
06-29-2007, 12:19 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1571/319xn7.jpg


how about a handy
whats

-GEKS-
06-29-2007, 12:24 AM
between the h and the t it looks sorta weird and jmbled, work on that i gess
and yeah they do make all black page blackbooks

hungr
06-29-2007, 02:38 AM
a new A is definetly needed, try lower case. and possibly a new W, gotta start the tag off with some pizazz
some random shit i did for whatever reference or learning
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/wat.jpg

tonentink
06-29-2007, 12:06 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2535/koldtagio3.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9351/koldtraskj8.jpg

hungr
06-29-2007, 03:16 PM
the hand cleaned up
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00540.jpg

Tri1
06-29-2007, 05:40 PM
what the hell happend to your hand in the first place hungr?
Blase- i'd keep it more simple for now. Work on the structure of the letters.

Another tag done with my new new ink. I was trying to get huge drips on the line underneath. Just some practis. Crits and comments welcome.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Image015.jpg
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Image016.jpg

tonentink
06-29-2007, 06:02 PM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7649/dumpstertp7.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/828/drippysavagevs8.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3466/drippyaotjp8.jpg

glyce
06-29-2007, 10:39 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/stag1.jpg
trying something new with my s. any crits?

trac
06-30-2007, 08:32 AM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/5897/tractag1kh6.jpg
new tag i been workin on any crits

mrtickels
06-30-2007, 04:03 PM
Tri1 - I like that ink alot
tonentink - im feelin the very top one
glyce - cant really read it buy my eyes are weak
trac - if that says trac im not felin the r or the line comin down off the a

glass
06-30-2007, 07:32 PM
trac: work on that R a lot, it looks like a weird F to me. just keep tweaking but i like the top section of the A.

Maik
06-30-2007, 07:33 PM
Hey, I'm new to graffiti and would like some pointers.
Here is what I have so far:
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/IMG019.jpg

Tri1
06-30-2007, 08:50 PM
Maik- looks good. nice and simple allthough the K does look a bit diffrent compared to the rest of the letters and i personally think a small a should allways have a tail. Start moving the leetrs closer together and experimenting with diffrent ways of writing it.

-Sinn-
06-30-2007, 09:01 PM
Marik - give it some flow

Tonentink - Really diggin the last one

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture328.jpg

crits?

newera
06-30-2007, 09:05 PM
maik- work on that alot and like sinn said give it some flow
sinn- pretty nice keep it up

Maik
06-30-2007, 11:12 PM
as in give it a flow you mean make the letters the same style right? can you guys pin point which letters I should change and how.

Thanks for the replies I really appreciate them

MainEvent
06-30-2007, 11:17 PM
http://a323.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_8a39272f259c91090ea840c28ec92d2a.jpg

-Sinn-
06-30-2007, 11:50 PM
thats style flow is... smooth

Roolete
07-01-2007, 01:46 AM
bored with stickers
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/imgonebillion.jpg

Fube
07-01-2007, 01:56 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00532.jpg
^^ouch mo fo. climbin fences?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00535.jpg
drippy steez.^^
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled9.jpg
numba 3.^^
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1029.jpg
^^what can i say? im greedy.
bumps^^
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1083.jpg
new one.^^ crits welcome.
roolete: sweet slap.
main: ill flow and color.

toke_wdc
07-01-2007, 02:48 AM
bored with stickers
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/imgonebillion.jpg
shits fresh

Maik
07-01-2007, 02:03 PM
crits please
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/IMG001-2.jpg

-Sinn-
07-01-2007, 02:07 PM
maik - put ur letters closer and just leave it simple for now and stick with capital letters

OSKAR
07-01-2007, 02:15 PM
anyone wanna give me some pointers? http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j302/addict616/IMG_1563.jpg

NAME246
07-01-2007, 02:18 PM
i am kind of new to graffiti any advice

MainEvent
07-01-2007, 02:19 PM
^change your name. theres already a shitload of kids that write Name on here.

the Oskar ish looks pretty good man, just keep practicing.

MainEvent
07-01-2007, 02:25 PM
lol just raggin on you. your handstyles a good start though, just do like the other dude said, move your letters closer and just play around with different prints and fonts of the letters

MainEvent
07-01-2007, 03:06 PM
Anything that could be improved?
i'd say work on the S, but shits coming together. just keep writing it over and over and it'll evolve on its own.

opte one
07-01-2007, 03:57 PM
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3087/tagce2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with W810i (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=W810i&make=Sony+Ericsson)

Maik
07-01-2007, 04:06 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/IMG002-1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/IMG003.jpg

I need help seeing if im going the right way with my shit.

and im wondering which m is better?
i think the first one is
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/whichmisbetta.jpg

-Sinn-
07-01-2007, 04:42 PM
gettin there and first M

Roolete
07-01-2007, 05:01 PM
experiment a LOT with M's. try stuff you think's ugly, bend the shape, mess around. i cant say my handy is pretty, it just helped me out.

...Syerf
07-01-2007, 07:06 PM
also definatly check out the toy advice and new to graffiti section of the forums for some good help...you can learn fast off of that, and jus so ya know, as being new you can for the most part bite some other werk, but you better werk it into somethin different when you get better.and keep it up.peace

-Sinn-
07-01-2007, 07:11 PM
ive crited everything heres somethin i did on the sidewalk with a stick and a lighter

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture330.jpg

and heres some regular stuff
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture331.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture332.jpg
one for my homie mint whos out of town

-GEKS-
07-01-2007, 10:19 PM
maybe make the n's closer together
and i dont like the t thing on the t

which of these is better? both say sito
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1292.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1293.jpg

MainEvent
07-01-2007, 10:47 PM
yeah maik, the first one is better. thats like the kinda M i use for my handstyles so im preferable to that.

HAKONE
07-01-2007, 11:55 PM
Not sure if I would consider myself a toy or not, but here's my tag anyway:
http://s204.photobucket.com/albums/bb212/JoelJpn/?action=view&current=File0346.jpg
It's really simple, but I want it legible.

HAKONE
07-01-2007, 11:59 PM
Sorry. Here it is:
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb212/JoelJpn/File0346.jpg

Darkeist
07-02-2007, 04:34 AM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/crappyoffsizedsketchhorriblehorr-1.jpg

left side of the page i think

hungr
07-02-2007, 11:20 AM
Hak make yer K more visible.. to me it looks like HAIL

Maik
07-02-2007, 06:23 PM
Hak-yeah make your k more visible
GEKS- i think the first one is better but i personally think the underlined x inside the o is too much

tonentink
07-02-2007, 06:40 PM
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/5110/dripswr7.jpg

glass
07-02-2007, 07:49 PM
tone: looks more like a throwie but whatever. work on that E and i think there are way too many drips and there's overall unneeded messiness to it. clean it up and i'll give a better opinion, just post it in like the blackbook or something.

Maik
07-02-2007, 09:08 PM
Oups just realized I ment 'K' not 'M' on the top post
*EDIT* forgot you can edit, il use this to get crits for my tag, its still pretty bad since i started yesterday but here it is:
(Don't know if the "i" should have that circle dot or just a plain line as the dot, and the m is kinda wierd)
Crits please.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/IMG009.jpg

and tonen thats crazy drippy..
try and keep the letters the same size

MAiNKo
07-03-2007, 12:57 AM
HAKONE- i like it, keeping it simple starting out is way better hten doing some crazy ass whack shit, keep it up.

anyone crits on my tag? i write sazek

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/qwerty87/aaa121.jpg

Maik
07-03-2007, 01:01 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g248/PeterDzwonek/IMG011.jpg
crits please

amberTrichome
07-03-2007, 01:04 AM
change the z up i thought it was an r at first... otherwise pretty sick

Ben Jay
07-03-2007, 02:20 AM
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x32/sekta1/DSCF0859.jpg

crits?

NoneOfThisIsReal
07-03-2007, 03:01 AM
So far it's pretty flippin' basic

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/382/dscf2213ga2.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf2213ga2.jpg)

Run .
07-03-2007, 03:20 AM
ben jay - looks arite just define your letters more and maybe lose some extentions . and just a shot in the dark is it written on a bodyboard :|

dont have my camera with me so just done it online

crits please it sez Optik

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/575/optikjo1.png

Roolete
07-03-2007, 03:30 AM
at first glance it looks like othr. but im sure on paper its more defined

d_g
07-03-2007, 04:54 AM
Boredom

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/handy13.jpg

Run, can't read that shit bro, scanners and cameras are pretty cheap these days.

Dimr, good start round out the D though.

BenJay, 'SE' is good, that wierd hybrid thing you have going on for the last few letters isn't working out too well for you.

Maik, you need some curves in there bro.

Mainko, that's nice, first letter is a little confusing though.

Roolete
07-03-2007, 05:02 AM
you have one of my favorite styles on the entire forum. your throw is perfect, and i love both of your tags.

Chalk
07-03-2007, 01:31 PM
HELP I HAVE NO HAND!
sad but true. I really really really blow when it comes to hands
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/helphand1.jpg

whahappen?
07-03-2007, 01:34 PM
number 2 is hot^
tried to add whip to my philly tag
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/1472/picture140qq3.jpg

Dusk07
07-03-2007, 03:15 PM
chalk number 2 is good. just add like more flare to the ends..put them a little closer together and do somthin with the a so its not so skinny and bam sick tag=]

Chalk
07-03-2007, 05:55 PM
thanks for the crits fellas. am i getting closer to something decent?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/helphand2.jpg
please note the naturally bad hand writing...

Jroc1993
07-03-2007, 06:20 PM
i like numbers 6,11 and 12 those would look nuts with some flairs
and number 10

Dusk07
07-03-2007, 06:36 PM
yeah try paintin those main those would look sick with flares.. try and get some mix in there...quotes..dots.. loop a letter? w.e flows. idk im not the best though ahah.

Bazer
07-04-2007, 01:13 AM
tis for the handyrock battle..

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A0905.jpg

spiller
07-04-2007, 01:25 AM
not really feelin it man.

amberTrichome
07-04-2007, 01:56 AM
maybe if it was a lil thicker and the picture quality was better i can barely read it... dzrasz?

Bazer
07-04-2007, 02:04 AM
you guys make me laugh. its says outkast.

Bazer
07-04-2007, 02:21 AM
thanks for the crits fellas. am i getting closer to something decent?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/helphand2.jpg
please note the naturally bad hand writing...

number six is dope but you should do your A without the little loop on the top. nah mean? some proportional stuff? know what i mean by proportion?
proportions:
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/Jun_22_001.jpg

Tri1
07-04-2007, 08:06 AM
some more tags. I'm not sure what el to do there isnt much you can do with a three letter tag.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Image010.jpghttp://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Image.jpg

Fazen
07-04-2007, 08:59 AM
Hi guys, this is my first post, and I'm looking for help with my tag. I'm writing as FazeN.
And hello to you all too :D

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j168/Foffof/Bombing%20Science/DSC00550.jpg

CaMa
07-04-2007, 11:24 AM
Fazen - No arrows man.. and at your stage, try doing your letters in all caps, then all lowercase. Then collectivley find what style suits you more... then tweak those letters. Replace what arrows you have now with just little lines or something. Keep tweaking brah! It's your path to a decent handy!!

Going downtown.
Astrocapstyles (I think)
Z is wack and so is my general handwriting.
Enjoi!

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7324/yzmarfuckaej6.jpg

Derogatory9o5
07-04-2007, 11:26 AM
Ark i like it just try to make it less simple.. add some stuff if that makes ne sense.

Edit: Ark is on last page -.-

Fazen
07-04-2007, 12:48 PM
messed around with them a bit, getting any better?
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j168/Foffof/Bombing%20Science/DSC00554.jpg

Tri1
07-04-2007, 01:43 PM
Ark i like it just try to make it less simple.. add some stuff if that makes ne sense.

Edit: Ark is on last page -.-


what like a halo and speach marks and shit like that? I might try out a halo since Ark is short for ArkAngel. But someone els wrote that.

and Fezen i'm liking number 7 nice and simple with all the letters about the sane size.

StAtiK1
07-04-2007, 02:34 PM
heres mine, critisizm is welcome. been writing for about 5 months and changed styles a couple times...

Fazen
07-04-2007, 02:40 PM
Been tweaking and came up with this....I quite like the FAZ but the rest I just can't seem to get. Crits???
Ark - the 'A' on your bottom pic is pretty kool, but im not feeling the rest.
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j168/Foffof/Bombing%20Science/DSC00555.jpg

StAtiK1
07-04-2007, 02:50 PM
fazen i see you usually combine your letters together, such as with the A and the Z. try writing your letters out by themselves, and then once u like the way the letters look find a way to make them flow together. thats what i did with mine and it looks a lot better than what it first looks like lol:P. also try to make your letters match each other, like all pointy or all curved, cause if like 4 of them are more pointy looking and 1 of them looked more curvy, it could look weird/awkward. good luck!:)

glyce
07-04-2007, 02:52 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/stag2.jpg
crits?

Sewn
07-04-2007, 04:06 PM
First post:
First tags ever:

I've been reading around the forums and places so I could get some sort of idea about tags. After that I tried my hand at it. These are the first 7 tags I ever did. I tried to make as many different styles as I could down. Tell me which one I should keep and which to throw out and so on and so forth. Any help is good!


http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z6/RKilla123/Random%20Sketches/Sewn.jpg


I know I didn't finish #5 I couldn't think of any way to make a W and a N that would go with the S and E

Also I only tried underlining and quotes (extra stuff) with the first tag.

MASO
07-04-2007, 04:21 PM
fazen, too many arrows all over the place in the 1st one. the second one, you should keep all the letters roughly the same size and in a straight line for now. and like i tell everyone else, look at other people's tags and get some ideas flowin. if you spot a structure or style you like, try and incorporate it. oh and dont be too concerned with connecting letters.

glyce - the arrow doesnt really flow with it. i think i liked your old S better.

sewn - #6 is definately the best and best to work with. keep goin from there.

2KoS
07-04-2007, 05:12 PM
statik.. dont do ur i's or s's like that....

fazen... dont set back to that shitty trend to writing something that looks good, but looks more like a logo than a bomb u see on a street walll... think about it... dont merge letters into others like that....

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Scan10002waysm.jpg

yes the e is fucked up i know...

Says 'Bedford. KOS. R.Y.S' for all the noobs...

Roolete
07-04-2007, 06:58 PM
thats dope..really good flow.

does this say reties?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0017.jpg

Mr Tasty
07-04-2007, 07:01 PM
fazn this is graffiti stop making logos...
ur tryin too hard...just write FAZEN in normal letters

clockwork
07-04-2007, 09:10 PM
Taste is right.
This isnt a logo contest lol.
Relax son, write that word atleast 1000 times. Then you will know how to write the letters. This will help later down the road when you decide for somthing solid to be thrown.

I missed you taste!!! You still writing bro?
I thought you quit.

<Hails from MO>

Captain
07-04-2007, 11:10 PM
2kos the last s looks a bit like a 'd' to me. other than that, nice.

faze, don't post again unil you get a goddamn marker and fill a few notebooks. I mean edge-to-edge cover-to-fucking-cover.

and this looks like it says reteeo, or ritieo.


thats dope..really good flow.

does this say reties?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0017.jpg

I've got goddamn summer gym and a fucktarded family so I've got no time to actually sit down and do anything. Plus i'm sick and don't have anything but crayons & immodium pills lying around.

happy 4th.

[shit i just realized i'm out of immodium. shitshitshit.]

clockwork
07-05-2007, 12:05 AM
I quote: faze, don't post again unil you get a goddamn marker and fill a few notebooks. I mean edge-to-edge cover-to-fucking-cover.

That is a good thing. I mean if I would have posted that stuff last year I woulda been eaten alive. Not saying its really really bad but your lucky some chill people are on.

FILL THEM NOTE BOOKS UP SON!
You got the whole rest of your life to run.
I suggest going to the New to Graffiti thread.

Got some good flick links and you can learn alot.
Wish you the best man...
Hope this helped.

Dont take all this negatively. We want to help. We all want help.
Its why were here dooooooood! :)

knarfyesac
07-05-2007, 02:32 AM
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb56/franklasalvia/07-05-2007021514AM.jpg
i write easy
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb56/franklasalvia/07-05-2007021740AM.jpg
my friend writes think
Crits?

kelio
07-05-2007, 02:48 AM
Chalk: #6 is fireeee.
Fazen: just think simple.
knarfyesac: easy needs to go alot simpler. and think needs to do the same.
did this with my streaker cause i was bored. critz?
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x108/hoop_blah/DSCF1176.jpg

Roolete
07-05-2007, 03:45 AM
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb56/franklasalvia/07-05-2007021514AM.jpg
i write easy
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb56/franklasalvia/07-05-2007021740AM.jpg
my friend writes think
Crits?
it looks like it says gay. and it looks pretty bad. the think ones are much better. my recommendation would be to start out like the think ones, and then mess around with your lettersa lot

Mello
07-05-2007, 10:06 AM
kelio - bit to simple id say

knarfyesac - yea the Easy ones look far to much like "gay" heh, follow roolete's advice.

roolete - looks like retieo to me :)


http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1585/untitled2yj0.jpg

2KoS
07-05-2007, 10:43 AM
2kos the last s looks a bit like a 'd' to me. other than that, nice.

You mean in R.Y.S? coz yeah now that i look at it, it does.

but the s in handy iiisss juss illlllll. =]

clockwork
07-05-2007, 12:24 PM
Word of advice.

Read the previous pages before posting pics of stuff. DONT PUT ARROWS ON YOUR TAGS! DONT PUT CROWNS ON YOUR TAGS EITHER. CAUSE ITS WACK!

I did them when I first started tagging and now I see new cats doing it and I wanna grab you's and shake you like a british nanny.

Dont do it. You will look silly.

And everyone will remember you doing it.

Melo you got the best lookin tag in her so far.
IDK about the Mercedes sign so much but its alright.

Mello
07-05-2007, 12:49 PM
Melo you got the best lookin tag in her so far.
IDK about the Mercedes sign so much but its alright.

cheers man, it supposed to be the peace sign, just noticed i missed the bottom line on that 1 lol

Roolete
07-05-2007, 02:02 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_4381.jpg
this is my best looking handy i could find...and it still has no flow

whahappen?
07-05-2007, 02:14 PM
your name has alot of potential
make all the tops rounded

Mello
07-05-2007, 06:50 PM
2 is pretty much as simple as you want to go, now you got to start working on making the letters flow. Best way i can describe that is when you writing it, try to take the pen off the paper as little as posable, without turning it into some gay logo :)

Vice
07-05-2007, 07:14 PM
alright now... this is the tag ive been working on... i got two pics - one chisel tip one sharpie. their a little different so tell me what you like about em, dislike about em, things i should add, etc.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/070507_19001.jpg
sharpie
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/070507_18581.jpg
chisel tip

and for crits...

blase: i like all the letters but the L and the S. they seem wobbely like your spending too much time on the or something. work on em.

roolete: like whahappen said, make the tops of all your letters the same - i think the would look the best rounded but you can make em flat just mess around w/ em.

mele: i love it cept for the peace sign attempt and that circle after the M. to someone who doesnt already know your name it looks like moelo. other that that its good.

so what do you all think of mine?

StAtiK1
07-05-2007, 07:19 PM
chisel tip is definatly better lol. id say make the letters a bit closer together and ur good, maybe add some little doo dads lol

renegade185
07-05-2007, 07:19 PM
Roolete, I like it, just the last letter doesn't flow.



Here is my tag i've been messing with lately. crits?
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new2.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new3.jpg

StAtiK1
07-05-2007, 07:22 PM
i cant decide which ones the best i kind of like them all lol.

Resp
07-05-2007, 09:25 PM
hey , http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i130/lowryder_77/RESPSKETCH.jpg

knarfyesac
07-05-2007, 10:36 PM
i took ur guys advice on making it simpler and now i cameup with this

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/111/untitledzg7.th.png (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitledzg7.png)

crits?

raveone
07-05-2007, 11:01 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0008-3.jpg

renegade185
07-06-2007, 12:41 AM
i took ur guys advice on making it simpler and now i cameup with this

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/111/untitledzg7.th.png (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitledzg7.png)

crits?

write it without connecting the s and y

knarfyesac
07-06-2007, 12:54 AM
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb56/franklasalvia/untitled-1.jpg
#1 or #2 crits?

Sewn
07-06-2007, 12:59 AM
Bump to new page, I only got a response from one person :(



First post:
First tags ever:

I've been reading around the forums and places so I could get some sort of idea about tags. After that I tried my hand at it. These are the first 7 tags I ever did. I tried to make as many different styles as I could down. Tell me which one I should keep and which to throw out and so on and so forth. Any help is good!


http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z6/RKilla123/Random%20Sketches/Sewn.jpg


I know I didn't finish #5 I couldn't think of any way to make a W and a N that would go with the S and E

Also I only tried underlining and quotes (extra stuff) with the first tag.

knarfyesac
07-06-2007, 01:08 AM
sewn i like 3 and 6 the best

sank.
07-06-2007, 02:44 AM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_0712.jpg

7thIncision
07-06-2007, 02:51 AM
2 is pretty much as simple as you want to go, now you got to start working on making the letters flow. Best way i can describe that is when you writing it, try to take the pen off the paper as little as posable, without turning it into some gay logo :)

Not to be a dick. But Blase, and also for most other people who posted on this page. Completley ignore what melo said.

Write your tag out like this: BLASE over, and over and over, and the letters will start to warp on their own. Talking about flow and arrows and shit all comes LATER. When you have decent letter styles. Different ways you can tweak them so they look nice.

This advice has been posted in this topic over and over, and it will probably be posted thousands more. Stay simple until you have decent letter formation.

Roolete
07-06-2007, 03:16 AM
i like it a lot sank. the k could use some work tho i think

critsticles?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0029.jpg

lets.go.paint
07-06-2007, 03:20 AM
farkkkk love the drips man, make the c a bit bigger though.



As I was gettin of the train, quick. Yeh I fucked up the R
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2083/0107071604fr9.jpg

Roolete
07-06-2007, 03:23 AM
i can see what you were goin for with the r, and i like it. and thats a dope S.

which one you like more?

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0030.jpg

CaMa
07-06-2007, 08:35 AM
Roolete - I like the first one more... but... change the middle line in the "E", and the second last letter (R I think). Also, that S is killer! Simple but effective!
Roms - You sexy cunt.
Sank - Not bad bro. Clean it up a bit, the K and the A ecspecially. But otherwise its coming along.

I was going for some flowy styles with this so tell me what you think!
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/354/yzflowyro7.jpg

renegade185
07-06-2007, 09:50 AM
CaMa, I like it.

bump for crits.


Roolete, I like it, just the last letter doesn't flow.



Here is my tag i've been messing with lately. crits?
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new2.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new3.jpg

Captain
07-06-2007, 12:58 PM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new2.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/new3.jpg


I likes these. Define the second a more though, it gets a bit too much like an 'o' now.

TAZM
07-06-2007, 01:18 PM
first time with new name.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm032.jpg

KioNoNeR
07-06-2007, 02:26 PM
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/1689/imgp0692smallms2.jpg
Crits?

Rogue
07-06-2007, 02:30 PM
TAZM- No offence, but that whole thing sucks. It's horrible. Stick to paper for a while, or maybe a name change was a bad idea.

But anyways, who want's to see a crap tag I did while I was fucked up? It's actually not too bad, but still sucks, I'm surprised it isn't worse.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r247/blakereimmuth/Rogue%20MFPC%20SD/PC150363.jpg

Remember, don't take pills and go paint. I don't even remember doing this tag, haha. But oh well, it's funny to look at.

KioNoNeR
07-06-2007, 02:46 PM
Crit for Tazm: Stick to paper at first like Rogue said. I like the T and A but it gets worse with the Z and M.

rayseone
07-06-2007, 03:51 PM
rogue - not bad for being fucked up

tazm - stick to papper for a while, push your letters closer together and make them flow

crits?


http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/4803/dsc00318rx5.jpg

KioNoNeR
07-06-2007, 04:05 PM
I don't know about that arrow. Everything else looks nice though. I dig that K. Crits for me? (It's up a couple posts)

rayseone
07-06-2007, 04:09 PM
its not a k its a R

i purposely didnt give you crits becuz you didnt give them out but since im a nice guy ill give you some lol

you should try to space your letters out a bit and make them a bit higher becuz on some of the pics it look just like lil squiggles, you have got a whole peice of paper dont be afraid to use it. also just let your hand flow, to me it looks too sharp, just let your hnd do the work man, write your tag outr around 100 times just in normall writing and slowly things will come in here and there

Captain
07-06-2007, 04:15 PM
rayes, do that, keep it up. and get a new marker, that one's gonna die in two minutes.

something i did two seconds ago, I cut it up and rotated it so it would be easier to read sonata. Once again, random words.

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/3732/twolf2.jpg

renegade185
07-06-2007, 04:29 PM
I really like that sonata.

Tryp
07-06-2007, 04:33 PM
captain your handstyle is amazing.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p252/DjVictory/Picture023.jpg

Captain
07-06-2007, 05:25 PM
As for your letters, try and even them out and simplify some. And buy yourself a chisel tip. It'll help you learn to flow simples, eventually it won't be necessary (But shit will almost always look better with it. It's not the way you learn it, chisel tip stuff is just sexier.)

Roolete
07-06-2007, 05:25 PM
chair is a nice name ur right...

speakign of new names, i changed mine last night. supposed to say chers. look too much like caers?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0032.jpg

SER.. :O
07-06-2007, 06:33 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/DSC00512.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/DSC00505.jpg
Yeah was out being a toy today... got chased too lol

KERO 3
07-06-2007, 08:34 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v338/brianaluvsyou/3-1.jpg

scoot
07-06-2007, 09:39 PM
kero- honestly thought it said nero.. make ur K look more like one.. other then that i like the simple style
ser- to be honest with u i dont like the style.. i dont like the u should give it more flair and less.. quotes and halos and underlines..


http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/?action=view&current=rollcall-1.jpg
(img wouldnt show so just follow the link)
^ new onliners...

SER.. :O
07-07-2007, 01:33 AM
kero- honestly thought it said nero.. make ur K look more like one.. other then that i like the simple style
ser- to be honest with u i dont like the style.. i dont like the u should give it more flair and less.. quotes and halos and underlines..


http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/?action=view&current=rollcall-1.jpg
(img wouldnt show so just follow the link)
^ new onliners...

Thanks for the tips, and I love your handstyles, but contrast to what you said, I would like to see some underlines on yours heh

mose2
07-07-2007, 01:47 AM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00875.jpg

this is the style i've been writing lately

Roolete
07-07-2007, 01:47 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0041.jpg

streetworthy?

Tryp
07-07-2007, 01:48 AM
^fuck yeah that shit is soaked.
wtf you usin there?

rolling roks
07-07-2007, 01:53 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/DSC00512.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/DSC00505.jpg
Yeah was out being a toy today... got chased too lol

i like the top one better
whatd you use for it?
but work on the bottom one more
dont focus on halos or quotes or anything around your tag
get your letter flow and style down
and what kind of marker did you use
looks like a marks alot or magnum
not dissing em
just wonderin

Roolete
07-07-2007, 02:07 AM
lol tryp as soon as you said that i sprinted down a few blocks to the nearest electric box, dropped a tag, took a pic, and ran back in like 2 minutes. (i have a good flash)

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0047.jpg

esko
07-07-2007, 03:54 AM
http://i9.tinypic.com/678333p.jpg

SER.. :O
07-07-2007, 04:13 AM
@ Roolette : DOPPEE Drips, and lol @ the electric box, I love hitting those xD
Im guessing its a Kiwi? but iono....
@ Esko : I'm liking it as a whole, but just not feeling the E, the way its shaped it kinda looks like an a, jsut make the bottom of the e farther away from the middle part maybe? And I think the K would be much doper as its own letter, not in the middle of the S and O...

Just my crits, stay up

CaMa
07-07-2007, 04:21 AM
I was going for some flowy styles with this so tell me what you think!
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/354/yzflowyro7.jpg

Bump for crits!

Roolete
07-07-2007, 04:29 AM
its good. i cant see anything to fix on it. i expecially like how the loop in the z isnt a perfect circle..i like that shape.