Toy Tagz..only

[SenTheFirst]

seyar, looks dope

star, keep practicing and you'll catch something you like in this tag, then something else in that one, then another and another and just put it together. i filled up like 6 70 sheet notebooks in an hour yesterday just doing that.

hoodrich, shutup. :)




my first round tourney entry

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0435.jpg

and the paradise battle

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0420.jpg

[gosh]

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/DSC02400-1.jpg
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/DSC02394.jpg
first post

[HoodRichSucka]

gosh, not too bad. practice handstyle a LOT. i personally think they are just as important as piecing and throws (i also suck at those). ur second pic looks like cursive i think. try to get ur own thing going. Good start tho. everyone starts somewhere. just trying to be helpful, not trying to act like i know a whole lot cuz i dont..

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/somehandys.jpg i got bored

[SenTheFirst]

seyar, looks dope

my first round tourney entry

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0435.jpg

and the paradise battle

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0420.jpg


me bump for critz too

[Rogue]

The second one is perfect. It flows, it's simple but it has style to it.

[gosh]

gosh, not too bad. practice handstyle a LOT. i personally think they are just as important as piecing and throws (i also suck at those). ur second pic looks like cursive i think. try to get ur own thing going. Good start tho. everyone starts somewhere. just trying to be helpful, not trying to act like i know a whole lot cuz i dont..

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/somehandys.jpg i got bored

those are hella steezy with the prismas, good job not getting too big with the chizzle tip. and yeah the cursive was just me going for something a little different, i like to fuck around with it.

[silentchaos14]

not felling the butter one but the beunos one is dope

teze - ill shiiiiit

same wit u bigel

fucking round crittz

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/45/lastscanyc3.jpg
this looks really good just make the big thing on the Y a little smaller

[Fube]

hooooood! u got one of the hottest handys ive seen. keep posting.

[minesweep]

alot of dope shit on this page
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9/dscn0841mo3.jpg
me just trying to see if i have enough variety to make me satisfied for now
reminds me of a totem pole for some reason

[gosh]

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/DSC02400-1.jpg
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/DSC02394.jpg
first post

bump/
i like your throws minesweep, and some of your handys are pretty nice

[HoodRichSucka]

hooooood! u got one of the hottest handys ive seen. keep posting.

dont know about that, but i apreciate it man

-d

[T0MB]

GOSH, I suggest putting the letters closer together. And I cant judge the second one because Its pretty blurry.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/TOMB-1.jpg

[gosh]

yeah tomb, i usualy do, i was just trying something new/taking up space. iactualy think the spacing makes it look a little quaint. I like your handstyle but i think the o could have more going on.

ps. haha i said quaint thats hella week but quaint stands out i guess.

[STAR01]

that paradise battle entry looks mad hot
thx for the crits imma work n it

[amk]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture006.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/Picture005.jpg

[HoodRichSucka]

^^dont like the circles above the T and try making the top of the S smaller but same style.. i dunno just a suggestion
-d

[KASE2]

bumping cause i got no critz
yea tha circle above tha "t" kinda makes it look lyk a "i"

[Eack]

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6678/2008071801ak0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6678/ (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=&i=2008071801ak0.jpg)

my tags suck balls, i need to work on it alot...crits plz

[scoot]

instead of making the K drag out in different ways you should just do it from one leg of the K and ur C kinda looks like a L sorda

[Mr Tasty]

new one..crits?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture154.jpg

[Eack]

yo i love that tag man, really nice

2 bad i cant tag for shit :(

[MUSEone]

tasty......teach me ur ways.....

*bows down*

eack- im actually feel it, keep working on the flow and just practice that shit bro, as for me im working on trying tpo get a new tag because my old one just isn;t working so be happy u have one hahaha stay up bro

http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/769/0821072028acw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Working on new name, "reds", crits????

[Eack]

ur d kinda looks like a "a"

[MUSEone]

Yea i noticed that right after i posted it, anything else? flare? handstyle? o.O

[StAtiK1]

fix the d and leave out the quotes and x's till your letters look good. if u fix the d and maybe make the S match the style of the other letters it should look good

[MUSEone]

how would u want me to make the "s"

explain..... o.O

[StAtiK1]

i dunno its your decision, but it just kind of sticks out a little bit cause it doesnt really match? i dunno maybe its just me

[MUSEone]

Haha after i looked at it again i thought the only thing that didn't fit was the "d" but i guess thats just ME

thnx though, i'll keep working on it.

[Eack]

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6678/2008071801ak0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/6678/ (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=&i=2008071801ak0.jpg)

my tags suck balls, i need to work on it alot...crits plz

bump can i get more developped comments

[MUSEone]

more flare....... =]

[Mr Tasty]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture155.jpg
scoze for friend

[HoodRichSucka]

^^^that S is hot hot hot

[Eack]

toy question = wats a flare :confused: :(

[MUSEone]

quotes, lines, x's,, etc. shit like than man

[Mr Tasty]

what?.....thats not wat a flare is....
a flare is a tag done with a spray can that ....FLARES
for example
http://a137.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/01088/63/17/1088907136_l.jpg

[MUSEone]

well atleast thats wat people on here tell me...., o.O

[capo93]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo

thats flair

flare is like when u flick up with your fat cap and the line goesfrom hard to sorta spread out?? if you knwwha i mean?

**edit** lame tasty you beat me to it

[MUSEone]

dem lieing bastards.......

[Mr Tasty]

lol
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/cras1se.jpg
crasone

[c0ld]

WTF a roach just fell on me while i was sitting here.
i know pretty much nothing abt tags. so......help.
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/8302/tagud3.th.jpg
critz?

[HoodRichSucka]

lol
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/cras1se.jpg
crasone

ill do a handstyle exchange with you anyday man. lmk. loving ur stuff
props
-d

[Dr. Kazer]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/DSC02044.jpg

[HoodRichSucka]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjustice.jpg

bump, i dont know why, but it reminds me of me and my stuff. but its not. its better...
-d

[wrek_it]

Any1 Wanna Exchange Tagz I Write Hype1

[*OsBaGoSh@]

Sezar- i like the clouds and te half arrows
tasty- i like the angle is that first letter is sorta confusing
Eack- fix the c and make it less L looking by extending the top maybe?

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0095.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0094.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0078.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0077.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/easytag.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0096.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0098.jpg

mine suck but im working on it critz plz

[c0ld]

WTF a roach just fell on me while i was sitting here.
i know pretty much nothing abt tags. so......help.
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/8302/tagud3.th.jpg
critz?

*bump*

osbagosh i cant really tell what they say....=\

id say start from scratch on it with something a lil simpler.

but like i said before i know next to nothing abt tags.

[the end]

Tasty- that's a sick tag, I really like it

Cold- just work on your handstyle the more practice you get the more it will start making sence just takes time

Osbagosh- I think you should really work on your handstyle as well, those tags are pretty nasty, stay off the streets for a while and hit up the notebooks

Here's what I've been putting up recently, nice and clean nothing too fancy
http://i13.tinypic.com/4zlzxw2.jpg

This was pretty neat.... Cute lol
http://i9.tinypic.com/4qsqpsl.jpg

[pocket change]

osbagosh- hit the books for a while..and lose the crown..your no king.
brandnew- your pic aint showin up kid..

anyways heres mine..you guys know what to do..peace.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/8537/ak028wj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[South-Pole]

Brandnew-pic not showing
Pocket-looks good,take off that swirl on that T

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Rofl/Tornlong.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Rofl/Tornarrow.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Rofl/oldoor.jpg

Had to move my lazy ass outside to take those
crits

[glyce]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soank-1.jpg

any crits?

[MUSEone]

take out the lines at the bottom and add something else, somewhere else... thats about al i can think of lol

[*OsBaGoSh@]

Soank- lose the two lines on the k.. maybe add drips??

tORN- I LIKE THE FIRST ONE BUT consider doing more than just that long line

Change- the second one is the dopest.. the estw combo is killer

i know its already on here somewhere but i rock photobucket how do i get my pics smaller ???

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0115.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0114.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0113.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0112.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0111-1.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0102-1.jpg

[wrek_it]

quikie b4 goin out n hittin up
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb174/true_krime/082207_2352.jpg

[xkespx]

Tasty- that's a sick tag, I really like it

Cold- just work on your handstyle the more practice you get the more it will start making sence just takes time

Osbagosh- I think you should really work on your handstyle as well, those tags are pretty nasty, stay off the streets for a while and hit up the notebooks

Here's what I've been putting up recently, nice and clean nothing too fancy
http://i13.tinypic.com/4zlzxw2.jpg


im loving that tag, well mostly the name. im a huge star wars nerd.
lol
i used to wright force

[Sou - Mvd]

For the handstyle round robin, word is answer

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/5254/001nr0.jpg

ps: fuck w's

[Mr Tasty]

thats def dope but make the W more visable

[7thIncision]

Oshbagosh - stay off the streets for a while, you need some hardcore time with the BB. Write it simpler until you can figure out what letters look good.

Wrek it - Lose the circle, and get more flow to it. Lose the Quotes too.

Sou - the ANS is good, but idk what happened to the last half, try using a fatter marker.. or make the tag smaller, proportion, you know?

[MUSEone]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6558/0823071819adu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

[TOES.EosCrew]

not feelin the N on the TORN tags, but still dope none the less

[MUSEone]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6558/0823071819adu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?


bump for crits.

[silentchaos14]

Eske im considering takin that extension on yur last e lol. its a nice simple tag the only real i have with it is the last e, i do mine like that too but its ugly as fuck

[mish7]

like this ones the best, its ment vertical (standing upright for you retards)
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j310/lago_liberation/DSC00902.jpg


then this one was the sideways, i took out the like arrow shit on the right side
http://s83.photobucket.com/albums/j310/lago_liberation/?action=view&current=DSC00901.jpg



and this ones SMALL haha but its rounder and i like it
http://s83.photobucket.com/albums/j310/lago_liberation/?action=view&current=DSC00900.jpg















TELL ME WHAT YAH THINK KIDS

[mish7]

small one
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j310/lago_liberation/DSC00900.jpg

sideways one
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j310/lago_liberation/DSC00901.jpg

[MUSEone]

1.) DON'T ASK FOR CRITS WITHOUT GIVING THEM FIRST!!!!!
2.)Don't double post, theres an edit button for a reason....

[the end]

Osbagosh- you need a lot of practice, stop vandalizing these innocent places, that mirror tag has like balls and a pecker hanging?

Kesp- I wasn't aware endor was star trek related, I'm over that tag and name though
http://i14.tinypic.com/4os07ba.jpg
Eh?

Anyone who cares- in my opinion you'll learn a lot faster practicing on your own instead of asking for advice all the time

[7thIncision]

EVERYONE: WHEN POSTING IN THE TOY FORUM, CRIT OTHER PEOPLE BEFORE YOU EXPECT TO GET CRIT.
AND OTHER PEOPLE, DONT CRIT PEOPLE IF THEY DONT GIVE CRIT FIRST, ITS THE WAY THE TOY FORUM WORKS.

[renegade185]

Mish - I'm not really feelin the the loop thing in your H.
the end - that says gecko, correct? I like it, do you have a cleaner pic.

here's some stuff i've done lately. been playing around with my a's. the pics are a little blurry, but i just moved to college and there is a pawn shop a few blocks away with a few digital camera's and i'm planning on getting one soon. btw it says hazmat.

crits?

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/rva2.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/rva1.jpg

[mish7]

haha i like how all these "seinor members" are tellign me what to do
this is a new account yes, but its not my only one
i know the routine on this shit yo,
just preachin man

hype, get some better letters, to generic, but i like the E

[mish7]

btw renegade you got some sick hand on the second one
i liek the a's i nthe first one tho

[mish7]

the a's in the secodn are like my old names tag, thats the only reason im not feelin it, cause my old shit was far to toy

[mish7]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j310/lago_liberation/DSC00773.jpg



OMG AMAZING jk
i liek the pink
i painted it
with paint
not spray
lmfao
go art class woo
hahahahahhaha-------
EDIT
from edward.
i love that pink too and graffiti creator.

[Captain]

haha i like how all these "seinor members" are tellign me what to do
this is a new account yes, but its not my only one
i know the routine on this shit yo,
just preachin man

hype, get some better letters, to generic, but i like the E

_________________________
OMG AMAZING jk
i liek the pink
i painted it
with paint
not spray
lmfao
go art class woo

Wrong forum. And if you want to bitch about 'senior members' show some skill. Otherwise get the fuck out. And jesus christ, if you've been here that long you'd think you'd know how to use the fucking edit button. That's fucking four posts in a row.

slick, do simpler letters.

guy below me, do that without the crown, cross, or star.

[SOOF]

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s84/danyel0228/08-24-07_0111.jpg

[the end]

Renegade- sick hazmat tags, really like that a on the first one, and yep it says gecko, here's another for ya
http://i16.tinypic.com/6fqjwc3.jpg

[*OsBaGoSh@]

Gecko- try someting other than the quotes and FUCK YOU there not chill spots. who hasn't tagged a bathroom..

Soof - like the f

HAZMAT- I LOVE TAHT TAG very cool

Allrigh i have been working on my write heres my style NEED HELP!
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0137.jpg

[Captain]

I gotta say man, I'm sorry, it's just not doin it for me.

cut everything off. at least try what I say, if it doesn't work, you can always revert to what you've got now.

work on flowing the letters as you write them. write being the key word, not draw.

just practice that until you learn. and try different words. don't stray from hard letter combo's either. you'll get it eventually.

[the end]

http://i11.tinypic.com/6bvaryt.jpg

[xFatel.Onex]

lmao size your pics down haha use like photobucket or something

[xFatel.Onex]

http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x125/stay-sober/digital086.jpg
Crits?
i was told to come here
says Sobr

[Captain]

try calming it down a bit. see what that does.

think about what you want your hand to look like. then acheive it.

[*OsBaGoSh@]

Heres the new ones i tried to make it more simple . but im working on it
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/joshuatarte/IMG_0142.jpg

[the end]

Haha dude, that tag looks better now... Youre welcome

[Dusk07]

Ha did this in like two secs, but i was practicing doing my handys super fast as im going out tonight but anyways here they are. super unclean and done with a thin tip sharpie but o well
http://aycu38.webshots.com/image/26717/2000399905001991378_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000399905001991378)

http://aycu06.webshots.com/image/24165/2000372237683938086_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2000372237683938086)

[7thIncision]

dust - Looks good, but you only really ned to post ONE of your handies, not all 200000 of them, do you see all the rest of us doing that? We all draw handy after handy after handy, but we take a flick of the best one or best few, then post THOSE.

Oshbagosh - looking better, but still loks of work, ditch the flair, just work on letters.

Sobr - Dont double post, maybe make the pic a LITTLE bigger [on photobucket, the forum size] but nice handie man, pretty solid.

[sex without condoms]

my nugggas.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072258a.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

my nugggas.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072258a.jpg
bump.
:p

[sex without condoms]

:0*

hump the bump

[MUSEone]

bump for crits.

BUMP FOR FUCKING CRITS!!

Seriously stop asking for crits until u give them.

[Dusk07]

dust - Looks good, but you only really ned to post ONE of your handies, not all 200000 of them, do you see all the rest of us doing that? We all draw handy after handy after handy, but we take a flick of the best one or best few, then post THOSE.

Oshbagosh - looking better, but still loks of work, ditch the flair, just work on letters.

Sobr - Dont double post, maybe make the pic a LITTLE bigger [on photobucket, the forum size] but nice handie man, pretty solid.
sorry just took pics of the paper..lol. if u go a few pages back others such as sezer and hrich did the same..didnt mean to piss anyone off just lazy and took pics of the paper lol..

[STAR01]

*OsBaGoSh@ (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=28267) http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/images/statusicon/user_offline.gif vbmenu_register("postmenu_853004", true);

i like that style keep up

[South-Pole]

Sex-fucking dope
Soof-Looks nice take off that crown
Gecko-looks good just take off the dots in the G and fix the K and it'll be better :)
Osba-feeling the toedums ones mad
Dusk-llooks great post a few handies not all of them haha,

This is Blasphemy

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/thisisblasphemy.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TORN-1.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/5602/im000892gc5.jpg

[xFatel.Onex]

Cezr Wrong Thread man your looking for the big boy tags thread:p

[StAtiK1]

mmmmm ...thats nice.... lmao, btw mods dont delete this post cause its my 200th w00t

[xFatel.Onex]

actualy now its your at 201 post

[Roolete]

my nugggas.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072258a.jpg
<3

[7thIncision]

CEZR - Love it man, madness... I like ho wou took the time to outline it.

[South-Pole]

Sex-fucking dope
Soof-Looks nice take off that crown
Gecko-looks good just take off the dots in the G and fix the K and it'll be better :)
Osba-feeling the toedums ones mad
Dusk-llooks great post a few handies not all of them haha,

This is Blasphemy

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/thisisblasphemy.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/TORN-1.jpg


uuhh BUMP!!!11

Cezr you make the this thread look like the big boy thread lol

[7thIncision]

torn - Lose the arrow, the one in the bottom right corner is your best one, maybe add some flair to the top and mess with quotes or something.

[d_g]

Geah geah.

Sex and C3ZR geah geah.

Those Torn handies are ok, you gotta make your n look less like an h though man. And it'd look better if you used one stroke for the n instead of two.

[Murder.Corpse]

This is my tag.
i need some help with it.
it's suppose to say "Giro" critism is welcomed.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z294/Melkore/153041.jpg

[MUSEone]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6558/0823071819adu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?


BUMP FOR CRITS!!!! This only got ritted ONE time in the last 2 pages...

CZER-ur in the wrong forum bud, this is the TOY tag forum :D
Murder.corpse-idk wat ur trying to go for in that ag, but id say just start off w/ something simpler, thats just me though.

[silentchaos14]

id say just lose all the extensions and shit and just show us the letters, cuz the extensions confuse the shit outta me

[7thIncision]

Eske - Proportion, when using a pen, draw smaller handies... for someting that size i would say a fine sharpie.

[Reak]

Cezr- hot shit
Giro- tone down the attachments and shit, but keep at it
Muse- your last e doesn't really follow the rest of the style, but it isn't ugly
2 new ones
please help me out of my hole

[Hoostein]

the 2nd one is definatley a penis.

[7thIncision]

Dude. Try writing it like a normal word.

[jersOneTIC]

Murder.Corpse - lose the bottom extension on the r and that thing on the o
MuseOne - i would say make all capital letters, its more consistent
my first attempt at a "flare" tag...
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2423/flaretaglq0.jpg

[b-boy]

http://i11.tinypic.com/4r9o4de.jpg

Been writing for about 2 and a half weeks now =] what ya think?

[MUSEone]

lose the halo and quotes.

[MUSEone]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/248/0826071625axe8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/248/0826071625axe8.c647e0a9d9.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=508&i=0826071625axe8.jpg)

crits? wat should i add/change/remove?

[silentchaos14]

does it say beds or reds? id say fix yur letters a bit and lose the arrow.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/2223/tagsxf8.jpg
which is best? crits?

[slomo201]

http://i19.tinypic.com/63viya0.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/63u7j1c.jpg
i tag Kash

[silentchaos14]

they both suck. go to the new to graff thread and start simple

[intaout]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1106/1243474907_b44cef4161_o.jpg
none turned out really but i though id post

[silentchaos14]

fuckin noobs! give crits before u get crits

[amk]

they both suck. go to the new to graff thread and start simple

this is your crit from me.
i didnteven need to type it :)

Jers...feeling thta philly shit man..looks ill

[idiot]

they suck indeed but its only because ur trying too hard. Start simple

[slomo201]

you guys are all talking about my tags right? so what do u guys suggest i do differently?

[idiot]

i was talking to slomo. My suggestion (slomo) is to start over and focus more on letter structure than the skwiggles u do (a toy trademark). Morne- Urs are ok....PRACTICE is what developes ur style so keep practicing. These are a few tags i use..
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/SSPX0028.jpg
Simple but clean........Criticism WELCOMED

[Rogue]

Don't write Base

[xFatel.Onex]

stick with nesto sounds dope and looks dope

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/11111111111111111111111111111111111.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/aaaa.jpg

[idiot]

YO!!! Sezer ur handies are fucking wild son!!

[silentchaos14]

alright emel you proved your point but thats no reason to change my name.
thanx for the crits to the ppl who did. emel u did get one thing right tho, i do need to sketch more since i havent sketched in like a week.

[Captain]

silent, fourth is best.

idiot, nes and nesto are way better than base.

[silentchaos14]

does it say beds or reds? id say fix yur letters a bit and lose the arrow.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/2223/tagsxf8.jpg
which is best? crits?
bump for more crits.
FUCK THE FOURTH ONE....ive been usin that for like 4 months

[the end]

i agree, 4th is best. and if you want to do something else you need to make one better not step backwards.
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6606/fastertrashmo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6606/fastertrashmo4.27654df367.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=528&i=fastertrashmo4.jpg)

[xFatel.Onex]

what type or marker is that i think its a pilot im not sure :P

[kosher]

morne, you've definately got something you can build on. i like the 4th one but spread it out a bit, make it bigger and work on your e.
kash, i think you should stick with you books for a bit before you hit the street. practice a lot.
idiot, i'm feeling your stuff. mad steezy with some nice swagger.
sez, sick handstyles on all, never got anything bad to say about your tags.
faster i really like it. letters all fit together nice, good style.

some tags i've done lately. please crit.

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2333.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2300.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2363.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2382.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2423.jpg

[whahappen?]

i was talking to slomo. My suggestion (slomo) is to start over and focus more on letter structure than the skwiggles u do (a toy trademark). Morne- Urs are ok....PRACTICE is what developes ur style so keep practicing. These are a few tags i use..
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/SSPX0028.jpg
Simple but clean........Criticism WELCOMED
:rolleyes:

[scoot]

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2423.jpg

that one is well.. kinda speaks for its self.. but it looks like u were using a chisel tip on that one

..

[kosher]

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2333.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2300.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2363.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2382.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2423.jpg

bump, bottom of the page. crits please.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Handstyle Battle:
word: Santa Claus
Due: When I get 10 entries.
Mod: Edward"Sezer"Hands

[Captain]

emu, some is tight some isn't.

sezer, count me in for that battle. i'll try to get you something by tomarrow.

some random isssh from a second ago:

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9789/img1686kz9.jpg

I'm not too fond of it, I just haven't had an imagepost in a while.

[calculating infinity]

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2333.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2300.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2363.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2382.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2423.jpg

bump, bottom of the page. crits please.
try to give them letters some steez. it (emu) looks way too bland, try bending them or something

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0831072307.jpg

for a girliee

[Grape1]

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8789/gaaaap207gg1.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gaaaap207gg1.jpg)

[jersOneTIC]

http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/2788/cimg5949oe0.jpg

[xKAPTIVx]

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a321/alexis27onfire/Kaptiv.jpg
working on it..
thoughts?

[Fube]

from this spot on, if u are not giving crits, or posting flicks, your post will be deleted. i dont care about bumps, bump all u want, if u bump excessively i will delete your post too, flick or not. this means, if u bump it once or twice ok, no bumping on the same page. no bumping more the 3 times. use your heads here. if your giveing props to someone, use pm's. i will delete your "that shit ill", or, "i really have nothing to say about that its sooooo good." me and the other toy mods have way to many post to scroll through and we dont have the time to be fuckin with pointless post. ya feel me? if u have a problem with what me, or any other mod deletes for that matter, pm that mod first. if your still not happy then pm msfyt, but shes a busy woman. hopefully soon we well see 70%flicks 30%crit.


-fube-

[Mr Tasty]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/tastenew.jpg
dont like posting in the tags tags tags!!!! thread cos this is just paper

[awormiscoming]

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a336/thecoreman/orek.jpg

[xKAPTIVx]

i like that character aworm, not so much the one on paper in the other thread

[StAtiK1]

kaptiv try moving your letters closer together any maybe lose the x's if u cant find a better way to incorporate them into it.:P

[Vice]

thought i would post this again for fresh crits...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00499.jpg

alright now... for my crits...

kaptive its decent it just has no flow. its straight up and down. excellent can control i must say, but no flow.

jers its pretty good. i think that maybe if you added a stylized underline to it it might look even better. try that out and post it up.

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02750.jpg

NAR RAWRRAWRRAWR

[StAtiK1]

by the way vice theres already a pretty famous writer named stak hes on state your name just saying....

[xKAPTIVx]

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a321/alexis27onfire/tag.jpg
marker tag, trying new things

[bla5t]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v189/zweenk/Image033.jpg
criticism ?

[Bazer]

i wanna get a philly hand... but i suck dick at hands... so be honest guys. seriousley..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1005.jpg

[bla5t]

i wanna get a philly hand... but i suck dick at hands... so be honest guys. seriousley..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1005.jpg

the stars kind of throw it off for me.. but other than that I your style

[letsg0skate]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0831072307.jpg

for a girliee
Less arrows crowns and whatnot everywhere. You have a sick style but I think it would look a lot better with something other then pen.

[scoot]

those sex without hands are dope. they got a chillen and cheu feel to them.. mind you i would take out alot of those add ons.. its like you were trying to make it looke better by putting stars and swirls.. by itself it looks dope.. just try not going over board with the addons

[Roolete]

yeaaah.. letsg0skate, im reviving my statement, your stupid.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0285.jpg

[Ravid]

not really digging the exclamation marks roolete but keep working with it.

[whahappen?]

i wanna get a philly hand... but i suck dick at hands... so be honest guys. seriousley..
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/SP_A1005.jpg
chill with addons and start simple completely
www.nightcrawla.com
look that entire site over^
version 1 and 2

[Pico Hollywood]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/SouthpawCapo_IV/Image032.jpg

Crew Tags can't see it all its wutever

Crits

[silentchaos14]

all i can see is a throw, dont do them in marker

[Ravid]

]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v645/flathead_dave/gjkjgkm.jpgCrits?


Bmp for crits.



Cant see anythng pico?

[sote]

It says sote. Any help/critique would be great.

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t125/sizlesteve/sotetag.jpg

[silentchaos14]

decent start i guess, just dont do that thing from the t to the e. also get yur t closer to yur o like yur s is

[Kruxos]

sote - if your gonna connect two letters you might wanna think about connectin all of them. also put your letters closer like silent said. then post flicks and we will continue. with your critiques. lol

[sote]

You said dont connect the t and the e. But i cant seem to find a way to put the T close to the O and the E without connecting and without it looking really jumbled.

[Kruxos]

try to put the t bar over the o. and think out your tag man. you've got forever to master it. its your tag. you should do it the way you feel it.

but u dont want it to look crap. you know how it goes.

[silentchaos14]

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/VisineMop.jpg
crits?

[StAtiK1]

silentchaos - first letter looks awkward make it match the rest

[intaout]

Sote- Maybe you should make all letters capital. then you would not have the problem with the t and e. but the marker looks really solid and the lines are smooth.
Morne- the letters seem kind of awkward and there is that weird thing on the E. try different letter styles. I just write a few pages of one letter and move on throughout your name. it helps me when I want to make something look a bit better.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1270/1325783536_b7416f5e54.jpg?v=0
the ink was food coloring so its not as bright as i want it but it works.
Crits please...

[the end]

intaout - i say bunch it all up closer, especially the k, and keep it even across the bottom.
silentchaos - for now, lose the little kicks on the m and the e, and try to pull that n out a little more, you almost lost it.
sote - try working with a capital T, at first i read "sole"

heres something im workin on.... 3 pics to show progression....why? idfk.
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3262/marciehi4.jpg
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9192/marcie2zf3.jpg
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8731/marcie3sq2.jpg

crits?

[whahappen?]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4581/picture020np6.jpg

[SPAZTiC]

crits please

http://www.thescenehost.com/image/images/IMG_7187%20(Small).JPG

[Seek139]

acme rtc?

[Seek139]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4581/picture020np6.jpg

obviously a attempt at a wicked work on it more though and get rid of the money nose pumpkin. Here is my sensai of graffiti use it for reference
http://b8.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/01275/81/87/1275437818_l.jpg

[SPAZTiC]

acme rtc?

yeah critique it please :)

[whahappen?]

obviously a attempt at a wicked work on it more though and get rid of the money nose pumpkin. Here is my sensai of graffiti use it for reference
http://b8.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/01275/81/87/1275437818_l.jpg
thats not an attempt, that is a wicked
post your shit then
and thats not even my good one anyways..

[whahappen?]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02750.jpg

NAR RAWRRAWRRAWR
hahahaha
id say get rid of the hairy balloon
and the really fucking wack letters]
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6927/picture019nd1.jpg
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/488/picture168jpgjb2.jpg

[Dusk07]

The only tags im kind of feeling on this page is ravid (bask) and the end. headin in the right direction guys lookin decent.
Others...keep workin on it =].

[Bazer]

wahappen??? exchange?
with a busted pen:
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/1212.jpg

[Arkoth]

http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phot0059fm4.jpg

fuck, didnt work.

http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phot0059fm4.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phot0059fm4.jpg

[jersOneTIC]

arkroth - make your letters all the same size
some shit inside an abandoned building:D
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/3185/cimg5947fv5.jpg

[dajam410]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/100_0849.jpg

[scoot]

dajam - i like it but whats with the big ass line behind/to the side of it?

[whahappen?]

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/8163/untitledzy3.png

[Roolete]

i like the r alot

somethin i did for a battle
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/poser.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

this whole page is lookin pretty fresh.
bazer ilike that wrote in blood style.
whahappen? thant philly steez is progresivelly gettin better.
jers- nice and simple lose that line going out the bottom of th s
da jam dope .
roolete i like your letters but not the flow of the word.
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/11.jpg

[cert1]

1nonlybaze-i like that busted pen tag
dajam410- i like it cept for the o
roolete- i like it



http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/ea210c65.jpg

crits please

[Arkoth]

K, repost.
Ty to the guy who crited already.
Ignore the crown.
How can i make this tag better? How can i improve my letters help me outt im a complete tooyyyy!

[dajam410]

Cert1- Theres too much going on around your handstyle, try and clean it up a little bit.

Oh, and do you actually write Cert?

[dajam410]

Homemade ghetto krink, older handstyle.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/100_0884.jpg

[brunorod]

Shit dajam, that tag is tight!

What's up guys, I'm new to these forums, here's my tag with the new OTR 071 I just got, I'm hoping to get some crits.

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/SKATag.jpg

[Bazer]

thats tag's alright. you just gotta be a little more loose with it know what i mean? just keep hittin it..

[sex without condoms]

i dont even need to do this but here you go.
this shits mad old anyhow but i could care less.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0831072307.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071315.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071314c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0829071314.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0821072258a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0817070024.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0813071308.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0813071302c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/0731071713b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010010-3.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/expooose.jpg

[Sans]

Playing around with a new word.

Please feel free to comment on what can be changed.

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9222/saqetaggz1.jpg

[T0MB]

Don't write SAQE.

[StAtiK1]

Sans - the S looks like an 8, and also get rid of the arrow at the end

[-GEKS-]

saqe- i dont like it
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1417.jpg
enterin this on a one on one battle with one of my friends sometime this week

[Fate]

http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/6943/p1060301tw9.jpg

[Snafu]

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/5845/untitleddf4.png
My camera isnt charged right now so i did this on ms paint any crits?

[Snafu]

fate i love the "E" but maybe make the"O" a littl bigger or taller

[silentchaos14]

ahh shoulda known that thanx
sans- if yur name is saqe make it more visible and if it sounds like sake just change yur name now

[Snafu]

silent i like it your m looks like my old w. i think you would be good with a crazy overlapping flow style. try it out and do it as fast and close together as possible.

[younopewho]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/nidex/Graff/nope3.jpg

Crits appreciated.

[Gumdrop.Behemoth]

http://i2.tinypic.com/4zu0ump.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/67sqnt3.jpg

[StAtiK1]

anser - change the S for sure

[dajam410]

Some random shit.


http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/100_0891.jpg

[renegade185]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/tag.jpg

[-GEKS-]

saqe- i dont like it
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1417.jpg
enterin this on a one on one battle with one of my friends sometime this week

bump cuz morons dont know how to crit

renegad- i like it but i cant quite read it
dajam- feelin it

[braxtons a g]

rengade-i like it
http://i3.tinypic.com/5yx7upc.jpg
im not feeling my F;/

[Ascendant]

Dajam410: nice embellishments, but the letter structure could be stronger. Nice overall.
Braxton: like the e, maybe try making everything a little smaller, what ever you're using looks skinny with that letter size.

[whahappen?]

I wunna get a philly style down so bad, shits dope as fuck. Every time I try it comes out dumb as fuck though..Ill try some tonight and post them. I
ve browsed all over nightcrawla.com. I don't really want a crazy fucking philly style because I can't even read alot of wickeds. Like Bazers was sick as fuck I like that. Anybody got any any tis or hints for me? Ima just be practicing them on paper for a while until I get a decent one down..Speeds seems like a key to give it a nice wicked look.
undertsand the difference between all the philly styles and start off at a short hand then progress from that

and bazers wasnt a philly, just study nigthcrawla and look at EVERYTHING on there that has hands on it

[Kruxos]

lol lyfe. so generic. but its cool man. i like your e also. work on your letters tho, try and push them together more.

[NEZ89]

dajam that stuff's nice
i'm still workin on my tags and handstyles

my old tag
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9265/neztagto9.jpg
my newest tag
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8622/neztag2ow8.jpg

[whahappen?]

was better before
dont do addons either they never look good
take the loop outve the z and the n

[Bazer]

nez, the first one looks better. the second one just looks like you wanna have a crazy handyrock but youre not good enough yet. start simple and tag alot. itll evolve.. try doing different ones though. but keep em kinda simple. but not to simple..

heres some i did today at skoo.

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/secondone.jpg
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z227/bazer6_ebook/firstone.jpg

[braxtons a g]

bazer-man thats lookin good i wanna see that done with a marker
new tag;]
http://i6.tinypic.com/53jljbk.jpg
friends tag
http://i2.tinypic.com/6g48obn.jpg
crits plz;]

[Naysayer]

the first one looks dumb how you have that line go thru the whole thing.

[intaout]

Nez- i agree lose the add ons
Baze- i really like that style it look really good. especially the first one.
Brax- it looks alright... i dont really like that line through it though

crit mine please
just a quick highlighter tag, messed the k a bit
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1280/1383880421_53ceea908d_o.jpg

[silentchaos14]

it would look sick with flairs

[braxtons a g]

i know i only drew the line through cause i cant think of ANYTHING to do with my F

intaout-what can i say about it... its like perfect!

[intaout]

i think it would look good with flairs. now i need to learn how to use cans

[intaout]

well you could try a different style of letters. you could make a curvy f and make the line through it low or high. i think low. or make it all capitals. exept capital y might be hard. just keep drawing it over and over

[Naysayer]

here is how I write it. I dont play much with handstyles so its probly not that great.

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/lyfe.jpg


ark- I love it.

[braxtons a g]

http://i15.tinypic.com/3zir9g0.jpg

[Kruxos]

take it to the pms.

lyfe, not much has changed with your tag, so why postin flicks? i still think you need to squeeze the letters together more.

[AT!]

Bored and i have post its :D crits please
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/1659/tags1bk3.jpg
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/2928/tags3cx1.jpg
and some other crap i did
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3142/tags2al5.jpg

[emokid]

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6846.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6845.jpg

new name, phantasmagoria. amazing word. hard to write though :/ this explains why its so bad

[Kruxos]

emo thats pretty hot.
my tag is short , 3 letters!!!!

[whahappen?]

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6846.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN6845.jpg

new name, phantasmagoria. amazing word. hard to write though :/ this explains why its so bad
AND 1800'S GHOST SHOW?
shit sorry for the caps

[Serum]

http://i19.tinypic.com/4u439sz.jpg

criticism welcomed

[misc]

sorry doubble post

[misc]

hey
im pretty new to graff ive only been doing it for about 3 weeks and have mainly been messing around with different handstyles.
this is what ive come up with so far, what do you guys think.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3571/tenkpv8.jpg

[Kruxos]

hey
im pretty new to graff ive only been doing it for about 3 weeks and have mainly been messing around with different handstyles.
this is what ive come up with so far, what do you guys think.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3571/tenkpv8.jpg

alright. dont connect any letters, just squeeze them together tightly. and make them flow, your N is all wide while all the other letters are compact (thats not gonna work). lose the ant trail comin from the K. you need to think up some letters. see you havent really done anything. there all generic letters just like the ones im typing. dont be afraid to mix things up a little. keep practicin.

[AT!]

Bored and i have post its :D crits please
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/1659/tags1bk3.jpg
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/2928/tags3cx1.jpg
and some other crap i did
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3142/tags2al5.jpg

bump 4 crits

[...Syerf]

At!....
People might crit if it didnt look like doodling...get a marker, write your tag only, then go for some crits. Look at it yourself and see if its very easy to crit....

[MUSEone]

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6403/0913072218axy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New name and handstyle im working on.

AT!-im w/ syerf, im not gonna crit doodling.

[Code_sucht]

The letters seem so spaced apart, Try doing All Cap letters..


Just look at other pics, innovate, make ideas, brain storm..
And loosen up that wrist, fucka

<3

[MUSEone]

The letters seem so spaced apart, Try doing All Cap letters..


Just look at other pics, innovate, make ideas, brain storm..
And loosen up that wrist, fucka

<3

My e, h, and y look like shit i caps.

And wat u mean by "loosen that wrist" lol

Damn dude, thats ill (but wat do i know...im still toy lol)

[Code_sucht]

Let the letters flow, not so kindergarten font looking..

It just takes time and practice, bro


Look at me, I still suck

[StAtiK1]

newish

[Ravid]

Crts please done with a pen.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v645/flathead_dave/blackbook011.jpg

At!/ i like your tyle keep it up.
Muse/ try syleizing your letters more.

[Code_sucht]

Do that with some flares and shit and good can control and I think you could be onto something sick

Change up the Seven, though

I dunno, I like it..

[in_the_red]

Ravid, I'd lose the long tail on the R. Also, try to make the letters all the same size so that no letter is more important than another - maybe give the I a little more room too, it looks a bit squashed or something. The I actually doesn't really suit the other letters, maybe make it a sans serif letter like your others - a straight line by itself. Lose the dots as well - you want your letters to look really good first, before adding bits on.

Statick1, I like yours but I don't think the T really suits the other letters, and the S looks really forced to me.

Museone, use capital letters. I think you need to use a fatter marker as well. Your H could be an N and your R could be an V - watch out for that.

AT!, your letters look really forced. Don't worry about making your words look like tags, if you know what I mean. Use simpler letters and focus on making them look good next to each other. It's best to start off simpler than try to make your stuff look complicated, you need to work up to it. I can't even tell you which works look best as I can't read them.

Hope that helps. :-)

[xLogicx]

Ravid: I like the style, but I think you can do away with the loop at the end that encompasses the "07"

MuseOne: Just closer together in my opinion.

http://www.t-mobilepictures.com/photo/photo16/38/d5/c054ff717423.jpg?tw=305&th=228&_rh=4twz2pgwv4w85skrm6qhhtedg

Rizen (Reason)
For some reason I can't make r.i.z.e.n. flow right. This is the best combination I could come up with. Any suggestions?

Also...how's the standard RZN look. I just wanted something fat and simple for the three letters.

[Doza]

What y'all think?http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s223/Doza_03/Dozahandstyle.jpg

[MUSEone]

Give crits to get crits.

loose the arrow and the quotes, fix ur a and d

[StAtiK1]

Ravid, I'd lose the long tail on the R. Also, try to make the letters all the same size so that no letter is more important than another - maybe give the I a little more room too, it looks a bit squashed or something. The I actually doesn't really suit the other letters, maybe make it a sans serif letter like your others - a straight line by itself. Lose the dots as well - you want your letters to look really good first, before adding bits on.

Statick1, I like yours but I don't think the T really suits the other letters, and the S looks really forced to me.

Museone, use capital letters. I think you need to use a fatter marker as well. Your H could be an N and your R could be an V - watch out for that.

AT!, your letters look really forced. Don't worry about making your words look like tags, if you know what I mean. Use simpler letters and focus on making them look good next to each other. It's best to start off simpler than try to make your stuff look complicated, you need to work up to it. I can't even tell you which works look best as I can't read them.

Hope that helps. :-)

lol theres no S it says think, but ya i know the T isnt that great:P

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011842.jpg

[CodeSix]

http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l203/Synergy-X/meh002.jpg

marker bled more than i wouldve liked, messing up some stuff. but anyways, crits?

[Sager]

id take it easy with the extras you dont really need that just focus on neat clean and simple for now