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Mello
10-12-2007, 02:29 PM
mr tastey - amazing as usual

sank - yea that K is ace

syrne - nice flair :)

i cant tag for shit, so trying to work on mine a bit;

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4381/melotag2pq8.jpg

ignore the shit "" on either side heh

Citizin
10-12-2007, 05:21 PM
Whole page is looking crazy..
Still not likin my hand to much, which one do you think is best?
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7434/shittytagseuphobf9.jpg

LikeOner
10-12-2007, 06:28 PM
yo citizin maybe dont worry about the add-ons just yet and the letters could be a little more proportional. I notice the lines are a little shaky, maybe try going faster?

p-town
10-12-2007, 10:49 PM
here wat you think

the end
10-12-2007, 11:16 PM
^^ i cant make out a single letter... go simple, until you learn how to form letters.

Citizin
10-12-2007, 11:47 PM
p_town: ...

Anyways, did these vertical ones..Happy with them actually. I don't know, lol.
I was thinking of that guy Eyesore and he always does vertical tags.
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5167/verticaleuphoak1.jpg
Not gunna post the other couple of pages becuase there all just the same tags. But I did come up with these really simple ones that flow, I can do in one line, and are readable.(It's a nasty picture but it's just for the jist of it.)
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/7534/flowybasiceuphoonelineyv3.jpg

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 03:08 AM
Don't join your H to your O like that, it makes your H look like a backwards 4. Same goes for your R. Don't link it like that. The vertical ones look silly (but good on you for trying something different). I think vertical tags need to have wider letters. Your letters are too dissimilar in the vertical tags, your E is really fancy looking and your P is really simple. All the letters look kinda silly - try doing wider letters which are simpler, ones that look more like the letters on your keyboard. You could always try a round/bullet tipped marker as well, they make tags look way different. Your tag should look good no matter what marker you use but some tags suit particular markers - I think mine looks best with a bullet tipped 'cause I have an F with horizontal bars.

Nobody else gets a crit 'cause I can't be bothered looking at the other pages 'cause I'm a lazy bitch.

Mello
10-13-2007, 05:43 AM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4381/melotag2pq8.jpg

ignore the shit "" on either side heh

bump for crits

citizin - the EU on your vertical ones look sick, after that the letters slip a bit far apart and the O really needs work
and as in_the_red said, dont join your H, makes it look wierd :)

p-town
10-13-2007, 12:22 PM
i started like 3 weeks ago and i'm just looking for advice(o and sorry for my last post)

Citizin
10-13-2007, 12:45 PM
i started like 3 weeks ago and i'm just looking for advice(o and sorry for my last post)

Looks like the same exact thing. First off, whatdo you write so we know how to help?

bump for crits

citizin - the EU on your vertical ones look sick, after that the letters slip a bit far apart and the O really needs work
and as in_the_red said, dont join your H, makes it look wierd :)

Lose the circle, it's different, but, it just doesn't look right. And yeah I'm gunna work with the PHO on my vertical tag because I'm really diggin it for some reason. but I have no idea how to hook up a p or an h. I'll figure something out. But, on the other hand..I don't know. The circle looks kind of good..lol. Try some without it.

SenTheFirst
10-13-2007, 01:04 PM
citizen- just work on adding style to it
melo- i like it, its clean. and you're gonna do more than one tag right? sometimes use the circle and sometimes dont...


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0584.jpg

Citizin
10-13-2007, 01:45 PM
citizen- just work on adding style to it
melo- i like it, its clean. and you're gonna do more than one tag right? sometimes use the circle and sometimes dont...


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0584.jpg

It's nice, it's simple. That's always the way to g. Just work with it some mroe..

And, I highly, highly, highly, highly, highly, highly doubt this but..
http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-gallery/data/503/1188738627_f.jpg

you?

edit: nevermind, lol, youre in the toy section I don't know what I'm thinking.

Citizin
10-13-2007, 02:00 PM
lol :P

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2991/verticalyvampedeuphozk6.jpg

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 02:20 PM
Citizin, that's no better, it's really messy. Don't make your O look like a teardrop. Lose the little extensions on the U, P and H. SIMPLE LETTERS! I should probably do a tag for you to show you what I mean... Maybe later.

Sen, that looks pretty nice, you don't really need any help, just practice.

Mello, space your letters out a little so we can see them a bit, it just kinda looks like a scribble. Work on your letters before you use stuff like circles.

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 04:04 PM
Well what the fuck lol. I was told my e and u look good but the other three were too simple.

Yeah but I disagree with Mello. I'm better than him (at tags) so if I were you I'd listen to me, but then again I haven't posted my latest tags on here anyway. It's up to you who you listen to though. There's no right and wrong in graff, but there's a general aesthetic, and I feel most people would agree with me. You need to work on style, but that doesn't necessarily mean making your letters look more complex. Some of the hottest tags are simple as. The letters people told you were too simple weren't necessarily too simple, they just needed to be structured differently. Have I explained myself okay?

Citizin
10-13-2007, 04:21 PM
I think I've gt a pretty simple normal tag down. I use it alot. I can do it in like 5 seconds, I love it. This vertical shit is just for other obsticals like polls and things of more length. It goes from small to bigger because I think it looks better like that.
(Sorry for the extra space)
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8770/simpleeugk4.jpg

KASE2
10-13-2007, 04:24 PM
CITIZiN - jus change tha "o" in tha multi color 1s iz koo tho

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 04:27 PM
I don't mean to be rude, but that's not normal looking, it's whack, you don't have it 'down'. Your P, H and O are all skinny and look like a little kid has done them, while your E and U are fat. Don't link your letters. Just practice heaps. How old are you, by the way? Just wondering.

KASE2
10-13-2007, 04:32 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/kstwo1.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/kstwo2.jpg

1st, 2nd, or neither??? crits please yadadada

MUSEone
10-13-2007, 04:37 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2238/1010071546aoe4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I agree w. everything that "in the red" has said on these pages

Crits?

Citizin
10-13-2007, 04:42 PM
kase- I don't know..can't really tell. work with paper.
muse- looks like..oil bar paint? I don't know, it's nice as fuck though.
Im out.

MUSEone
10-13-2007, 04:43 PM
kase- I don't know..can't really tell. work with paper.
muse- looks like..oil bar paint? I don't know, it's nice as fuck though.
Im out.

Thnx. Its Sharpie Meanstreak.

Word.

KASE2
10-13-2007, 05:36 PM
kase- I don't know..can't really tell. work with paper.
muse- looks like..oil bar paint? I don't know, it's nice as fuck though.
Im out.
haha i kno, i kuldnt find ne at tha moment hahaha fo sho tho

wolsley
10-13-2007, 06:02 PM
I'm 16. Allright, I'll try and make my letters fatter.

Personally I think its pretty good, it still needs improvement but it flows and looks better than some stuff out there.

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 06:12 PM
I agree w. everything that "in the red" has said on these pages

Cheers dude.

I can't read what yours says, I think you also need to go simpler. It doesn't look too bad though.

Kase2, not too bad, nice and simple, just keep practicing and it'll turn into something nice.

MUSEone
10-13-2007, 08:46 PM
Haha check this, i wrote in tha other day in class whern the teacher said it. ;)

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2301/1012071354aze2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SENATE

First try. tha a kinda went into tha n but u know wat im going for.

Citizin
10-13-2007, 11:34 PM
Tried red's advice. Had to wait a while to scan it I already had this done when I got home.
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4478/simpleverticalsdy3.jpg

I'll probably do a couple tommorrow after I get some crits.

in_the_red
10-13-2007, 11:51 PM
Yup, that's a lot better. I'd capitalise the H though.

capitol
10-14-2007, 12:10 AM
Euphno:Funny word..alright tag
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5475/graf632ly6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Broken tip i liked the effect though so i flicked it..

Citizin
10-14-2007, 12:17 AM
There's no n in my name. But I love that effect it looks like like you did one tag and just went over like 20 times. lol

SnowOner
10-14-2007, 12:59 AM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/dennis620/1014070152.jpg

I dont thnk Im great at handstyles but hey this is to help me right?

I beg you all to disregard the "One" part of it..i was trying to be cool but i failed hard :D

and i wrote you all a little message in the top right corner cause I love you all like a fat kid loves cholesterol...er cake**..

KASE2
10-14-2007, 03:25 AM
SNO - yea iz koo, plain but not hella plain. but yea u were right either dont do tha "one" or fix it hahahah other than that iz koo, but yea, i love cake az well!

SenTheFirst
10-14-2007, 04:13 AM
citizen- do it horizontal...
capitol- kinda boring, cap makes it worse
snow- make the n regular, not round...

harry
10-14-2007, 04:17 AM
just keep workin on ur style it will all come together if you keep practisin

Mello
10-14-2007, 10:30 AM
Yeah but I disagree with Mello. I'm better than him (at tags) so if I were you I'd listen to me, but then again I haven't posted my latest tags on here anyway. It's up to you who you listen to though. There's no right and wrong in graff, but there's a general aesthetic, and I feel most people would agree with me. You need to work on style, but that doesn't necessarily mean making your letters look more complex. Some of the hottest tags are simple as. The letters people told you were too simple weren't necessarily too simple, they just needed to be structured differently. Have I explained myself okay?

Yea definately man, your a lot more experienced than me so you probs no whats going to work better.
personaly i still say his first few look better than the one at the top of the page, but meh, each to their own.

sno - the one needs a lot of work, letter structer all the way :P
capitol - nice effect

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9935/tagsgn0.jpg

still cant come up with anything half decent for melo, but it actualy means something to me so im reluctant to change it =/

crits on the above?

SnowOner
10-14-2007, 11:58 AM
Yea definately man, your a lot more experienced than me so you probs no whats going to work better.
personaly i still say his first few look better than the one at the top of the page, but meh, each to their own.

sno - the one needs a lot of work, letter structer all the way :P
capitol - nice effect

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9935/tagsgn0.jpg

still cant come up with anything half decent for melo, but it actualy means something to me so im reluctant to change it =/

crits on the above?

Oh the "one" part of my thing i completely fucked up on X.x i swear to u i will never write it like that again.

Melo- im liking the very 1st one on top... it jus seems like theres a lil too much neg space between the L and O as compared to the rest..iono maybe push it a bit closer?

Citi- I like the E on the left, the U on the left, the P on the right, the h on the left, and the o on the left.

Cap- im tryna imagine wah the tag looks like with a good tip..seems pretty good but i cant really tell cause of that effect..pretty cool effect tho i must admit :)

Mello
10-14-2007, 05:39 PM
bah, ive had enough of trying to come up with a decent tag, im shit at it and would much rather sketch pieces than thousands of awful looking scribbles

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/9238/tagad1.jpg

thats what im sticking with, simple enough, looks ok and is readable, does everything i need it to.

c.n.k
10-14-2007, 08:32 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o6/pokoman/IMG_1041-Copy.jpg

in_the_red
10-14-2007, 11:38 PM
Yea definately man, your a lot more experienced than me so you probs no whats going to work better.

That's funny, you've never seen my stuff haha. I just sound more experienced I guess, because I'm articulate.

c.n.k. - Looks okay, hard to tell by the photo though.

Mello - the one you posted last is okay I guess, but your letters need to lean all the same way. The E shouldn't have those extra bits on it. I'd make the other letters rounded to go a bit more with the O.

Snow, that's not too terrible, use a fatter marker to give it more visual weight and keep practicing.

Capitol, what does it say? I can make out a couple of the letters...

Mr Tasty
10-15-2007, 08:17 AM
melo...i told u before..stop writing that ..thers a big melo in london already
where u live?

AT!
10-15-2007, 09:26 AM
Some shit head thought we'd make a crew so heres some new stuff
The 93' crew
The Fonz - At One - Trac 227

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3176/photo00020hc4.jpg

Any Crits Please?

Mello
10-15-2007, 09:58 AM
melo...i told u before..stop writing that ..thers a big melo in london already
where u live?

bristol, and the thing is, i know im not going to get up that much with this name, its just another learning thing until something better comes along. And im not going to be painting any time in the near future any way apart from the odd tag, so no worries.

but yea, i guess ill start thinking on a new name

*edit*

yea im thinking of just getting a few mates and all writing a crew name, piecing the name and all, rather than coming up with something individual. Less chance im blagging the name from someone else and a good chance to learn can skills :)

AT!
10-15-2007, 12:16 PM
mello - u photoshop ure shit and its hard to crit on somethin that u made look better and no offence it aint that hot either

lordloss
10-15-2007, 12:19 PM
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-5.jpg
just did this with my new mop crits??

mello-like ur shit your shit its good has style and flow and i can read it good job.

at-they look alright at least you make all the letters flow/look the same kepp working

NEZ89
10-15-2007, 12:21 PM
AT- those r pretty decent, nice and basic
Lord- same thing, and i like that ink color

Mello
10-15-2007, 01:12 PM
mello - u photoshop ure shit and its hard to crit on somethin that u made look better and no offence it aint that hot either

heh, i know mate im fucking awful, tis why im posting in the toy section :P
an i havnt got enough paper to just play around with tags on, when i got something that i know ill need i crack out a marker, til then though, no need.

any ways, just playing around with ideas;

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/9783/smhum5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

renegade185
10-15-2007, 02:42 PM
mello-i like it


http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/hazmat.jpg

thawbrkone
10-15-2007, 02:50 PM
nez89 that character is dope

ChewSA
10-15-2007, 03:03 PM
hows this ?
http://mail.google.com/mail/?attid=0.1&disp=emb&view=att&th=115a53fc65c8e16a

IlikePie
10-15-2007, 03:10 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/rakhand.jpg

Ehh, still needs work :/

Hazmat, I like that a lot

ChewSA
10-15-2007, 03:12 PM
you wirte Raiz ?
it's nice but i dont really like the i and z
theyre smaller and dont flow with the rest of the letters \= keep wrkin

crits on mine ?

Voze
10-15-2007, 03:14 PM
melo...i told u before..stop writing that ..thers a big melo in london already
where u live?

never heard of him I live right inside london south of the river..

IlikePie
10-15-2007, 03:16 PM
you wirte Raiz ?
it's nice but i dont really like the i and z
theyre smaller and dont flow with the rest of the letters \= keep wrkin

crits on mine ?

I can't see yours, but it's Rak, I'm just messing around with names, and trying to get something solid.

ChewSA
10-15-2007, 03:18 PM
oh, now i see the K make it bigger and line it up with the rest and then it will look good.
and mine is the one that says Kurs

mada focka
10-15-2007, 07:16 PM
perty fuckin toy i know, crits?

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/Image022.jpg

glyce
10-15-2007, 07:31 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/Picture.jpg
any thing i can do better?

"Riot"
10-15-2007, 07:34 PM
Renegade-thats dope.
glyce-looks good. Dont bring the bottom part of the so high.
scan-lose the stars and work on them letters.

I really fucked the arrow up on the ofb.
dont mind it :p

SCK crew aswell.

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/25454.jpg

in_the_red
10-15-2007, 11:56 PM
Riot, lose the arrows, quotation marks and any other extras you've added on, and just work on the letters.

Glyce, lose the underline and quotation marks. Try doing all capitals and don't worry about connecting letters.

Mada focka, lose the stars and the underline thing, make your letters all the same size.

I like pie, it looks like you're trying to make your tag look too much like a tag. I used to do the same thing. Write the word as you would normally print it and work from there.

Lordloss, your S is all squashed up. your K shouldn't lean to the left like that at the top.

ChewSA
10-16-2007, 06:26 AM
hows this ?
http://mail.google.com/mail/?attid=0.1&disp=emb&view=att&th=115a53fc65c8e16a

BUMP

Mr Tasty
10-16-2007, 11:42 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/blue.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/tza.jpg
not so toy..but watever

2KoS
10-16-2007, 11:56 AM
translation: i like to make toys envious by posting my shit in here

Mr Tasty
10-16-2007, 12:03 PM
maybe :)

Mello
10-16-2007, 01:10 PM
mr tastey - get out the toy section :P
riot - i cant read the OFB and i reckon shrink the S on SCK an it could look alrite
glyce - looks alrite to me :)

yea this is kind of small, but still, what you people think of

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6192/mehug2.jpg

and any one got any ideas how i could finish that with a LO heh?

wolsley
10-16-2007, 01:18 PM
Im not all that keen on the flair, the letterform of the M looks ok but the flair doesnt seem to fit in that piticular place.

Messer
10-16-2007, 01:54 PM
my handizzzles suck something bad....if anyone could help me with that.....and im not one of these noobs thats like "make me a tag so i can steal your style" this says THAW.....i write MESSER now
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Image033.jpg

G-Fat
10-16-2007, 02:03 PM
wtf is that?

Messer
10-16-2007, 02:13 PM
haha i said it sucked....haha you know....i was talking to a local legend and they said that if your handwriting is bad you wont be able to tag easy....which true cause my handwriting is illedgible

G-Fat
10-16-2007, 03:02 PM
theres no way to make lower case d's nice.

ChewSA
10-16-2007, 03:12 PM
http://xs220.xs.to/xs220/07422/15-10-07_144.jpg
??

Mello
10-16-2007, 05:36 PM
kurs - i like it, nice an simple, maybe loose the underline tho?
dansk - work on the S, but other than that looking good
messer - go back to simple letters for a bit

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7093/asdej4.jpg

yay? nay?

SenTheFirst
10-16-2007, 06:05 PM
not feelin the L

ChewSA
10-16-2007, 06:05 PM
i like it a lot except the E, go lower case letter E that would look sick.

the end
10-16-2007, 09:12 PM
http://i20.tinypic.com/141v0ol.jpg

My first one-liner.

the end
10-16-2007, 11:59 PM
http://i22.tinypic.com/oqyvzc.jpg
spacing is kinda bad.. whatever it looks alright
... and some of the 3d is incomplete but over all not too bad

KASE2
10-17-2007, 12:52 AM
MESSER - jus tak a whole nother approach 2 a tag hahaha
DANSK - "d" looks lyk a "c" nd tha "s" looks lyk a "g"
KURS - not really feelin tha "k"
MELO - daz tite bruh
THE END- tha second 1 iz dope

Dying to live
10-17-2007, 06:28 AM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/gfbbnnfgn.gif

Mello
10-17-2007, 10:11 AM
looks good but im not feeling that L

an DansK - yea only 1 L

Rogue
10-17-2007, 12:41 PM
Dying to live- Work on the L

The end- Your trying t hard to make it look pretty, you can't even tell what it says because of it. Try going a bit simpler.

Melo- Not bad, although the L should be pushed a little more to the right

Chewsa- Best thing for you to do is to lose the halo and arrow underline. You should also start from scratch and make a new tag. Just lacks flow really.

Messer- Are you trying to do a philly tag? If so you did a horrible job. Throw that tag away and pretend you never did it. Work on something different, because nothing about that tag is good.

Dansk- Try an uppercase D. Come up with something new.

AT!
10-17-2007, 02:35 PM
Heres Some Tags we done to see who best i vote trac 227

At One
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/1623/atoneoy9.jpg

The Fonz
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/2069/thefonzmc1.jpg

Trac 227 got to be the winna
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2500/trac227js2.jpg

any crits .................................................. .

Mello
10-17-2007, 05:10 PM
first 1 - liking the A, maybe make it flow into the top of the T, the ONE needs more jazz

2nd - not feeling that F, bring your letters closer together

3rd - maybe make the T a bit shorter, again, closer letters

intaout
10-17-2007, 06:39 PM
Akel- i like it all... really good
At!- i would choos the trac out of those three. maybey take out that thing on the t or make it flow more

crits please
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2343/1605380129_fc74329529_o.jpg

whahappen?
10-17-2007, 06:40 PM
shorten the lines

the end
10-17-2007, 09:51 PM
yea, i know that one is bad.. just couldn't get into the mood to finish it thoroughly.
http://i20.tinypic.com/2cwv4n4.jpg

fucked up shading on G... too stoned. the other shading mistakes i can live with....

G-Fat
10-17-2007, 10:54 PM
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a269/frankthetank686/DVC00327.jpg

Dying to live
10-18-2007, 02:00 AM
ARK mad stuff love the long things =]

2KoS
10-18-2007, 10:30 AM
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a269/frankthetank686/DVC00327.jpg

feelin this

wolsley
10-18-2007, 12:54 PM
haha i said it sucked....haha you know....i was talking to a local legend and they said that if your handwriting is bad you wont be able to tag easy....which true cause my handwriting is illedgible

My handwriting is really bad too, im working on improving my handwriting in general as well as my handstyle but I know what you meen. It makes it 100x harder in graf when your handwriting is bad because it takes a hell of a lot longer to improve.

Voze
10-18-2007, 03:45 PM
My handwriting is really bad too, im working on improving my handwriting in general as well as my handstyle but I know what you meen. It makes it 100x harder in graf when your handwriting is bad because it takes a hell of a lot longer to improve.

nah that's not true for me, i can't write handwriting for shit but when I tag it's like a different mindset... it's just how you think about it i think

LikeOner
10-18-2007, 04:20 PM
My handwriting is really bad too, im working on improving my handwriting in general as well as my handstyle but I know what you meen. It makes it 100x harder in graf when your handwriting is bad because it takes a hell of a lot longer to improve.

I agree, my handwriting is no good so it took me a while to even be as shitty as I am right now. I honestly believe some of us just weren't born to be great artists just like some people aren't born to be great football players.

wolsley
10-18-2007, 05:41 PM
nah that's not true for me, i can't write handwriting for shit but when I tag it's like a different mindset... it's just how you think about it i think

I know what you mean, I find with handstyles if you dont think too much into it they come out a lot better. I think thats why if I draw when im stoned its 10x as better because I flow and I relax and shut my brain down.


I still really want to improve my handwriting, from an early age I had problems with spelling, grammar and handwriting and iv worked so hard on all of them. My handwriting is slowly improving and iv found it goes both ways, playing with letterforms helps your handwriting as well as graf. And a good cursive handwriting can form the basis for some sick handstyles if employed correctly.

Oh and you know what I said about spelling and grammar? Well 2 years ago I could hardly type a coherrant sentance, I failed english 3 times and... I didnt use a spell checker or go back and correct anything in this post. There may be some mistakes but for someone seriously dislexic...

I write because I love to write in all shapes and forms! :D

Teez-EmM!!!
10-18-2007, 06:56 PM
Heres Some Tags we done to see who best i vote trac 227

At One
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/1623/atoneoy9.jpg

The Fonz
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/2069/thefonzmc1.jpg

Trac 227 got to be the winna
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2500/trac227js2.jpg

any crits .................................................. .
there all dope as hell u wanta do a handie exchange?? i write tezm

KASE2
10-18-2007, 11:49 PM
My handwriting is really bad too, im working on improving my handwriting in general as well as my handstyle but I know what you meen. It makes it 100x harder in graf when your handwriting is bad because it takes a hell of a lot longer to improve.

my shit's horrible 2, graffiti has actually improved my handwriting tho 2 b honest!:D:D:D

KASE2
10-18-2007, 11:52 PM
Ey Can Ne1 Direct Me 2 A Good Site Where I Kan Get Some Tips 4 A Philly Style Tag??? Im Tryna Hop On That Nd Bring Sum Of That Flare 2 Tha Bay. Yadadadada

wolsley
10-19-2007, 05:59 AM
Ey Can Ne1 Direct Me 2 A Good Site Where I Kan Get Some Tips 4 A Philly Style Tag??? Im Tryna Hop On That Nd Bring Sum Of That Flare 2 Tha Bay. Yadadadada

Translation? I'm not fluent in retard...

dim
10-19-2007, 06:21 AM
i think what he was trying to say was "yo does any body know a good website where i can bite some philly tags and put them in my area ?"
my answer is no u cant rele "learn" philly style watch enem on youtube and it may or may not give an idea on what to do

Mr Tasty
10-19-2007, 02:54 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/tasz.jpg

silentchaos14
10-19-2007, 03:20 PM
oh my fuckin god taste that is hot, but on the E dont make that bottom thing come up to the middle of the E. what cap did u use?

2KoS
10-19-2007, 03:26 PM
oh my fuckin god taste that is hot, but on the E dont make that bottom thing come up to the middle of the E. what cap did u use?

im not being a dick but im sick of people telling people not to use extensions ect.

DONT USE EXTENSIONS IF YOU'RE TOY.

but taste isnt, he's just annoying and flaunts his shit in here. and that E would look basic if it didnt have that.

standard.

bye

silentchaos14
10-19-2007, 03:38 PM
here i made a little diagram to show u what i meant.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Freights%20And%20Shit/Taste.jpg
when u come up that high it sorta looks like a b

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-19-2007, 03:55 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/handstyles-1.jpg

Dying to live
10-19-2007, 09:06 PM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/iygbeorgb.gif

?

From the Ground Up
10-19-2007, 09:09 PM
here i made a little diagram to show u what i meant.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/Freights%20And%20Shit/Taste.jpg
when u come up that high it sorta looks like a b

it doesnt look like a B at all.......it looks like an E..wait, THATS WHAT IT IS!

fool....taste ur shit is fire keep it up and u can stop posting in the toy forum....thought u knew that already ;)

Dying to live
10-20-2007, 04:19 AM
vid i made of my handstyles..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zgBGgsgivZk

Citizin
10-20-2007, 08:12 PM
Cool vid. To be honest I don't dig the E but it's hard to get something original.

syrne
10-20-2007, 10:44 PM
http://i20.tinypic.com/rhtjbd.jpg
kinda messed up the D o well....

djsupreeme
10-21-2007, 11:43 AM
get rid of the crown

brunorod
10-21-2007, 12:18 PM
Alright guys, here's mine. I changed my letter's style a bit, tried to give it more flow. Sorry for the quality. Please give crits!

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/SkaTagRed.jpg

Church
10-21-2007, 08:24 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3789/mobious1tag2ku7.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/107/mobious1ok8.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9464/mobious1tagvf6.jpg

Those are some of my old tags, since then I've been revising my style and creating a semi-new concept. I write Mobious1. Sorry the pics are poor quality.

Crits are welcome, and before anyone says anything, NO it does not take too long to write.

I'll post up my newest tag later.

the end
10-21-2007, 08:34 PM
GO SIMPLE!
all the addons are shit, you need to learn what makes a letter before you can make extensions

sex without condoms
10-21-2007, 08:36 PM
church.
no.

StAtiK1
10-21-2007, 08:45 PM
church that looks like it would take a bit to long to write, especially when your bombing lol

dim
10-21-2007, 10:02 PM
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0550.jpg
tshirt i produced today

Roolete
10-21-2007, 10:56 PM
it would probably be cool with people who dont write, but i dont like any of it. simple down the d, make the i and r more recognizable, and work on the flow in the r. and lost the other shit
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/10-21-2007085705PM.jpg
which ones the bestestest?

the end
10-21-2007, 11:10 PM
cher - my vote goes to green and tourquoise

i made you a throw ill post in exchange thread. :)

Kool-Aid Man
10-22-2007, 03:46 AM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/Picture2.jpg
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/Picture1-2.jpg
just came up with this

Church
10-22-2007, 09:23 AM
GO SIMPLE!
all the addons are shit, you need to learn what makes a letter before you can make extensions

Not called addons or extensions, they're cadels. I know how to make a letter, I've been practicing calligraphy for 3 years.

What I was trying to do was make a tag that stood out, because when there are doors, or walls that have everyones tag on it, no one walking by is going to notice one from the other. Unless your a writer yourself, people are just going to think someone scribbled on the wall. So when I did this tag I was trying to take away the flow from it so a persons eyes just won't fly over it. I wanted to keep the overall form boxy so it kind of had a wall around it from any other tags, this way it would be easier to notice.

The end tell me anything else about what you don't like about them please. Besides hating the cadels which I admit do take away from the tag because they're overdone and look kind of sloppy:p

Sexwithout Condoms tell me what you don't like about it, or what I could do to it to make it more visually appealing.

I know how to make those boring, typical graffiti tags that everyone else has. I was just trying to make something unique, so even people that don't write can just glance at it and tell from its style, "thats mobious1". I'll post up other pictures of tags I've been working on and a few that are like a bad cliche typical graff handstyle:o

thanks for the crits and keep them coming. I do want to improve on this idea.

BTW-cool tshirt dim, post another picture of how big the image is compared to the rest of the shirt though.

I like the second tag koolaid. When making your E though, try to make all the lines in one stroke. I dont know if its from the angle you took the pic, but it looks like the top spine of the E is shifted from the bottom. And bring the S up a little, because the tag sorta cascades. My whole tag cascades and I think it looks crappy because of it. Use the A and the S to sorta trap the K and E in. Overall the tag itself is clean and simple. good job

full_tymer
10-22-2007, 09:44 AM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3789/mobious1tag2ku7.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/107/mobious1ok8.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9464/mobious1tagvf6.jpg

Those are some of my old tags, since then I've been revising my style and creating a semi-new concept. I write Mobious1. Sorry the pics are poor quality.

Crits are welcome, and before anyone says anything, NO it does not take too long to write.

I'll post up my newest tag later.

looks like gang graffiti

Fat4l_ONE
10-22-2007, 09:55 AM
http://i24.tinypic.com/1s06co.jpg
http://i21.tinypic.com/15n9fn5.gif
Did the tag a while back and scanned it and did some stuff w/ it on photoshop for another site
Wat u think i need to work on more? I like Metro 519's style

Church
10-22-2007, 10:04 AM
looks like gang graffiti

Gangs use spin offs of textura quadrata, old e, and even some bastard secretary scripts. The reason my tag might look this way is because I used the same standards as influence.

South-Pole
10-22-2007, 10:51 AM
Not called addons or extensions, they're cadels. I know how to make a letter, I've been practicing calligraphy for 3 years.

What I was trying to do was make a tag that stood out, because when there are doors, or walls that have everyones tag on it, no one walking by is going to notice one from the other. Unless your a writer yourself, people are just going to think someone scribbled on the wall. So when I did this tag I was trying to take away the flow from it so a persons eyes just won't fly over it. I wanted to keep the overall form boxy so it kind of had a wall around it from any other tags, this way it would be easier to notice.

The end tell me anything else about what you don't like about them please. Besides hating the cadels which I admit do take away from the tag because they're overdone and look kind of sloppy:p

Sexwithout Condoms tell me what you don't like about it, or what I could do to it to make it more visually appealing.

I know how to make those boring, typical graffiti tags that everyone else has. I was just trying to make something unique, so even people that don't write can just glance at it and tell from its style, "thats mobious1". I'll post up other pictures of tags I've been working on and a few that are like a bad cliche typical graff handstyle:o

thanks for the crits and keep them coming. I do want to improve on this idea.

BTW-cool tshirt dim, post another picture of how big the image is compared to the rest of the shirt though.

I like the second tag koolaid. When making your E though, try to make all the lines in one stroke. I dont know if its from the angle you took the pic, but it looks like the top spine of the E is shifted from the bottom. And bring the S up a little, because the tag sorta cascades. My whole tag cascades and I think it looks crappy because of it. Use the A and the S to sorta trap the K and E in. Overall the tag itself is clean and simple. good job

are you doing graffiti or caligraphy cause both of them don't go along

...AMOK...
10-22-2007, 05:45 PM
full- thats weird as fuck man
tence- not feelin that shit at all

just a lil crap i been fuckin around with
crits
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok105.jpg

matman
10-22-2007, 06:31 PM
south pole no offense but that was a mad stupid comment saying caligraphy cant go with graff it all about the personal prefrence of how peeps wana write check up on some history bud

matman
10-22-2007, 06:39 PM
some of u guys getting good but alotta guys that are trying too much complex shit that looks retardid should try gonig with soem simple more 80s or 90s handstyles like cher for example u gotta fix that tag like i not dissin u or nething jus helping u out
if i where u id right now focus on soem simpler yet illin handstyles ha and werk ur way up

intaout
10-22-2007, 06:39 PM
amok- its kind of awkward , make all the letters the same size and work on the flow.
mines kinda sketch..crits?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2329/1699092716_2a9ea5890e.jpg?v=0

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-22-2007, 06:50 PM
Toy Handstyle Battle.
WORD: Roller Coaster.
DUE: First 10 entries.
MOD: Edward"sezer"Hands

sex without condoms
10-22-2007, 06:51 PM
yo eddy i sent your pack out todayz

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-22-2007, 06:55 PM
imma work on yours tonight.
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

Church
10-22-2007, 06:58 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3789/mobious1tag2ku7.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/107/mobious1ok8.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9464/mobious1tagvf6.jpg

Those are some of my old tags, since then I've been revising my style and creating a semi-new concept. I write Mobious1. Sorry the pics are poor quality.

Crits are welcome, and before anyone says anything, NO it does not take too long to write.

I'll post up my newest tag later.

BUMP, more crits plz. And statik you just said that to piss me off:rolleyes:

Ill post up some other ones later.

thawbrkone
10-22-2007, 07:07 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7441/img0087mq9.jpg
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5650/img0086mz0.jpghttp://img86.imageshack.us/img86/1026/img0085tf9.jpg
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2729/img0084zi0.jpg

sloppy n not a third of the hand styles i have

i write
thaw and brk

crits please
and sezer i deffntly want in on that roller coster battle

Grape1
10-22-2007, 07:08 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3826/sketches007ak1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

church - a bit sloppy, but sorta digging the craziness of it. maybe clean it up a bit?
ark - diggin' the extentions on the ends. maybe make the bottom of the "r" extention curl up like the other ones?

Roolete
10-22-2007, 08:11 PM
thaw and chruch, simples. church, u may think its all fresh blah blah blah but its UGLY.
grape, lose the face and work on the e, but i like it
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/blend.jpg

MAST4
10-22-2007, 08:38 PM
Thawbrkone-that shits hot, lookin good man
Grape- not feelin the character on the G, but overall its nice
Roolete- Lose the stuff above the e/ only use the bottom connection. The one at the bottom is good.

I had a couple deco's but used em up, so I have nothing besides a highlighter to make a tag with. Here it is tho, I'll get flix of it actually written up soon. Crits Please and thanks
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5610/1022072123nq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MainEvent
10-22-2007, 09:48 PM
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1881.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1880.jpg

Kool-Aid Man
10-23-2007, 03:36 AM
improved?
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/akes.jpg

harry
10-23-2007, 03:45 AM
get rid of the little line things an fix your e and k

harry
10-23-2007, 04:02 AM
full- thats weird as fuck man
tence- not feelin that shit at all

just a lil crap i been fuckin around with
crits
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/graff_amok105.jpg

man are you seriouse about life i cant beleive you are calling other poeples shit wakk that tag you have goin is wakkkkk as fuck man

harry
10-23-2007, 04:53 AM
heres my old tag i have gotten better since then ill try and get flicks of my new one...crits?http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff009.jpg

harry
10-23-2007, 05:20 AM
1st second and 3rd and scrap the rest

harry
10-23-2007, 05:22 AM
wait not the 3rd the 4th

Kool-Aid Man
10-23-2007, 08:04 AM
yeah the 3rd just looks like vik

iWuzOnce
10-23-2007, 10:35 AM
iono. i like the third.

MAST4
10-23-2007, 03:30 PM
im likin the 3rd and 4th most

reka one
10-23-2007, 06:39 PM
harry - i say drop the halo or at least make it smaller and it looks like somethin off of dafont.com

amok - drop them corny lines off the A n K and worry bout ur letters not ur extra jawns

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/1022071747.jpg
u might not understand it

glyce
10-23-2007, 07:05 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3789/mobious1tag2ku7.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/107/mobious1ok8.jpg
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9464/mobious1tagvf6.jpg

.i dont think you'll ever be able to tag that fast enought to get it up any were

dim
10-23-2007, 07:14 PM
are u trying to do caligraphy if so ........................ ok, but thats not a tag for damn sure not a tag. its a good start for script if ur into that sort of thing. some of the letters have a total oppisite style or they look like way different u no like the m and the p. the one is good

harry
10-23-2007, 07:40 PM
heres my old tag i have gotten better since then ill try and get flicks of my new one...crits?http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff009.jpg

bumppppppp
hey nah man i dident even know that site dafont existed untill you told me i dont bite off sites and yea ill try get flicks of some fresh work cuz that isnt looking to good more crits?

the end
10-23-2007, 09:57 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p212/matt13heff/1022071747.jpg

u might not understand it

"You might not understand it" means its NOT good. Kinda looks cool but you need to make letters everybody can recognize

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/61/micro1023kl5.jpg
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4042/ritchieevanhp3.jpg

LikeOner
10-23-2007, 10:14 PM
harry - good, i like it

harry
10-23-2007, 11:24 PM
yea thanks man but thats old ill try and get some flicks of my new tag to see how much ive improved

lordloss
10-23-2007, 11:31 PM
harry i like it just make your hole more like flat it wack how it is good job

harry
10-24-2007, 12:14 AM
the orange yellow one is home made ink but its an older handie the two black ones are newer but those arent very good examples i stuffed up the k in york and the b and s in bts so yea...http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff025.jpghttp://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff004-1.jpghttp://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff024.jpg

crits?

harry
10-24-2007, 12:15 AM
holy fuck im sorry about that how do i make them smaller?

Kool-Aid Man
10-24-2007, 04:56 AM
if your using photo bucket click edit and there should be a resize somewer...

ps there dope by the way..

desone07
10-24-2007, 06:37 PM
the orange yellow one is home made ink but its an older handie the two black ones are newer but those arent very good examples i stuffed up the k in york and the b and s in bts so yea...http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff025.jpghttp://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff004-1.jpghttp://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/flowyorkbts/graff024.jpg

crits?

digging the last one
nice shit.

heres mine: "DESone07"
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/9176/picture001wf8.jpg

Dream Creation
10-24-2007, 06:41 PM
i get n4s one 07 from that

synps
10-24-2007, 07:07 PM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/tag.jpg
Crits would be really nice.

T0MB
10-24-2007, 07:18 PM
loose the arrows and x's.

SEVENx818
10-24-2007, 08:26 PM
well ive only been in the game for a few

and yea i was running out of paint... ill post up more when the can was fresh .. but advice anyone?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y92/anti-flag/100_0149.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y92/anti-flag/100_0145.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y92/anti-flag/100_0147.jpg
and lol i seriously dont know why it says 2004

synps
10-24-2007, 08:54 PM
@seven: I like your tag it's simple and readable. you get some nice spots too.

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/canvas001.jpg
different style what do you think?

markingz.
10-25-2007, 01:06 AM
I think thats good but it seems like your trying to control your style too much, just a suggestion so dont take it personally, maybe try to let your letter be a little more free instead of so jagged, just a suggestion and see how that helps. But pretty good

Writers
10-25-2007, 03:24 AM
synps take markingz and my advice, dont make thiem so jagged, let them flow ineated of forceing them to bend

here a pic of my new styles on the left and my old on the right they look shitty cuz my camera died so i couldnt upload my newer ones o well
crits????? O and it says Craze for the ppl who cant read it
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/7325/1004153uh4.jpg

Dying to live
10-25-2007, 04:27 AM
last ones best but not a very good name =\

Tonberry
10-25-2007, 05:18 AM
when all else fails, make a one-liner. those almost always look nice.

JamesyBub
10-25-2007, 05:32 AM
harry put up pics of oren!

harry
10-25-2007, 07:12 AM
yea ill try get some soon hold up why dont u put pics up?

JamesyBub
10-25-2007, 08:06 AM
cbf tomoza night ill take flicks

Writers
10-25-2007, 01:09 PM
when all else fails, make a one-liner. those almost always look nice.


last ones best but not a very good name =\

whats a one liner???
and why isnt it a good name

synps
10-25-2007, 03:28 PM
Craze: I like the last one more because it less squished in. The first two its hard to figure out whats the r and the a.

Thanks for the crits, trying to be more flowing tell me what you think:
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/tag001.jpg

Church
10-25-2007, 03:36 PM
Here are some other older ones I found, Ill up more later. Thanks for the crits on the old one, Ill keep working on it.

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5811/2mobious1tagsee5.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2mobious1tagsee5.jpg)
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/5772/randomtagsdk7.th.jpg (http://img110.imageshack.us/my.php?image=randomtagsdk7.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3909/mobious1tag2pr7.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mobious1tag2pr7.jpg)

EDIT:
Found some more old ones.
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/Mobious1doortag-1.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/MerkandMobious1-1.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/Mobious1flashtag-1.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/Mobious1Tag-1.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/Mobious1TagandOrbitSticker.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/Clouds.jpg
I might have posted these already. None the less, crits please!

Church
10-25-2007, 03:38 PM
Craze: I like the last one more because it less squished in. The first two its hard to figure out whats the r and the a.

Thanks for the crits, trying to be more flowing tell me what you think:
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/tag001.jpg

Just clean it up a bit, like when you draw your lines keep it fast. I would also get rid of the double underline.

NAIK_SHOES
10-25-2007, 03:53 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6497/ccf2007102500000df9.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007102500000df9.jpg)

Naek

Church
10-25-2007, 03:57 PM
naek im really feeling that, but just separate the N from the A a little more.

synps
10-25-2007, 03:59 PM
church thanks for your crit.
I'm not sure i really like your style it kinda reminds me of arabic. Ill like second one in the first photo, its sorta simple but pretty nice and clean looking

Edit: Naek: I like it but i think you should define your letters a bit more: it could be read as bbk or haeln. I think as church said if you seperate the n and the a it will work better

NAIK_SHOES
10-25-2007, 06:06 PM
thank you
i'll try this

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
10-25-2007, 07:16 PM
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/MerkandMobious1-1.jpg


is this fucking hieroglyphics?
i bet you could do a throw up in the time it takes you to do this.
SIMPLE!

Church
10-25-2007, 07:40 PM
everything in those pics take like "1 Mississippi 2 mississippi 3 mississippi 4 mississippi 5". Say that at a normal pace like you would talk. None of those pics I posted take longer than that. Its easy to write fast when you know your tag inside out, I can even write it reverse or backwards for windows or w/e

harry
10-25-2007, 07:40 PM
yea man give up on that bullshit why would u even do that how many times did u have togo back there after getting chased off to do them? but i do really like the clouds on the door thats cool

Church
10-25-2007, 07:47 PM
yea man give up on that bullshit why would u even do that how many times did u have togo back there after getting chased off to do them? but i do really like the clouds on the door thats cool

Did you read what I just said? It takes literally less than 5 seconds man, just as fast as anyone else puts up a 7 letter tag, it goes quicker when I don't spell out 1. Speed is not an issue for me, if I walk by a door writing, I'll be done before I'm out of reach. Get it?

And your the first person to like those clouds, no one else who saw em was feeling it. thanks

harry
10-25-2007, 07:57 PM
yea i when i commented this thread your last reply wasent up yet man it just came up after bbefore i clicked post so my bad man but those clouds are fuckkking dope you should post them in the street art thread i think more poeple will apreciate them there

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
10-25-2007, 08:25 PM
...that doesn't change the fact it looks awful.
you asked for crits, GO SIMPLE.

Church
10-25-2007, 08:33 PM
;902410']...that doesn't change the fact it looks awful.
you asked for crits, GO SIMPLE.
ya thanks for the crits, i was just upset people thought it takes long when it doesn't.

Its cool though harry, I know what you mean about the post not updating, ill put the clouds in street art later.

Seize wanna do an exchange so I can see what you had in mind when you said simple? Wacha write? I got even older tags than that lying around, I just gotta find them. They are pretty simple too.

SenTheFirst
10-25-2007, 08:34 PM
for real

itd be one thing if the style wasnt cool and you rocked it well, but the style isnt cool and you dont rock it well

not tryin to be a dick or anything

the simple tag above you in the electric box looks way better and its not even that good

harry
10-25-2007, 08:35 PM
ooooo this should be good haha

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-25-2007, 08:35 PM
sen.
i like the sig.
my favorite wayne song.

Church
10-25-2007, 08:47 PM
for real

itd be one thing if the style wasnt cool and you rocked it well, but the style isnt cool and you dont rock it well

not tryin to be a dick or anything

the simple tag above you in the electric box looks way better and its not even that good

Do an exchange? I write Mobious1. I've been experimenting with handstyles just because I don't want that typical tag shit you see all over the place.

When I find those gay cliche handstyles I be sure to post em up so we can all celebrate the sameness.

EDIT: I used to write Mobiuos1 but changed it because Mobious1 sounds more pronounced. And sorry harry but your not gonna get any entertainment watching a beef since there is none:p

SenTheFirst
10-25-2007, 09:22 PM
oh def. no beef dude im just tryin to help

sezer- 100 cool points for that =]

(threw another quote for edward in)

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/mobius.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-25-2007, 09:33 PM
i'm making stickers with weezy's lyrics.
ill up some tomorrow.
that shits dope sen.
keep it up.
church listen to the man.

:-l
10-25-2007, 09:36 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6497/ccf2007102500000df9.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ccf2007102500000df9.jpg)

Naek

nice dude

harry
10-25-2007, 09:38 PM
oh i wasent saying it would be good for beef i was saying the exchange would be good

huskinator
10-25-2007, 10:25 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4859/1025072321qf1.jpg

i need to work on this shit....

huskinator
10-25-2007, 10:27 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4038/1025072313aw1.jpg

smikoer
10-25-2007, 11:42 PM
huskinator: I like your A's and the N in the second one. If that's a W then I think lose the loop in it.

capitol
10-25-2007, 11:59 PM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8231/graf520rq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Husk-You like fucking style?Noice..

Dying to live
10-26-2007, 04:02 AM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t216/Dying3k/rollercoaster.gif

harry
10-26-2007, 06:25 AM
you have a very fresh style but the looks like an o work on that even though it was prolly a one time mistake but just dont let it happen on the streets

Mello
10-26-2007, 06:37 AM
dying - pretty tight man, just work on that C
capitol - ehh, cant really read it, get a marker :p
husk - nice mate, like someone else said, loving the A's

trying a new name out, bored of Melo, crits?
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8301/elmtagideaskl6.jpg

huskinator
10-26-2007, 09:42 AM
shits fresh akel, give that c and o a little more space tho, as stated above

regos
10-26-2007, 03:59 PM
way to just draw out the bullshit from those graff creator sites.
very fresh.
oh, and by the way, i was being entirely sarcastic, sometimes people miss that on the internet.



whack as fuck.

it looks like you sketched that off of that graffiti generator thing... :S

LikeOner
10-26-2007, 04:14 PM
Church - theres too much crap going on and it doesn't flow well. theres no need to get all defensive, if you like it keep doing it, just don't get upset if others don't like it.

Mello
10-26-2007, 04:26 PM
aye church, listen to what people are saying, it doesnt look good mate =/

bump for critshttp://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8301/elmtagideaskl6.jpg

SenTheFirst
10-26-2007, 05:13 PM
akel- on point son keep it up
melo- looks like you are trying to do too much. definately lose the L arrow in the O thing. idk start simple

haha i finally went and bought some more notebooks

http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1196.JPG
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1203.JPG
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1201.JPG
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1204.JPG

Mello
10-26-2007, 05:35 PM
heh, yea i cant decide wether to change from melo to Elm, so any crits on the elm ones?

harry
10-26-2007, 07:22 PM
longer is better dont change111111111111111111111!!!!11!1!1!!!!.

Licossa
10-26-2007, 08:29 PM
both say pace

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/8267/picture012my6.jpg
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1112/picture013fp7.jpg

sen - looks good
statik - try to get some flow going, lose the dot and the quotation marks for now

IlikePie
10-26-2007, 08:46 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00144.jpg

Church
10-26-2007, 08:52 PM
black my heart, before the devil was a good album. Thanks for the exchange man, I got a few new ideas off it. I see what you mean by simple now.

EDIT: wow those pics came out shitty, I'll retake em later. I took the pics close since I wrote the tags really small.

Not trying to sound defensive or confrontational, just looking for help likeoner

Here it is Sezer:

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER6.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER5.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER3.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER4.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER2.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z168/Haulkbine/SEZER7.jpg

MainEvent
10-26-2007, 09:55 PM
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1985.jpg

MainEvent
10-26-2007, 10:01 PM
^thanks fam

sen- feelin your shit alot.

church and everyone else- just keep drawing and practice shit.

had to dig through photobucket to find these from a week or two back

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1881.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1880.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1877.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1954.jpg

Dying to live
10-26-2007, 11:17 PM
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1204.JPG
best imo

silentchaos14
10-27-2007, 12:17 AM
sen make your S a little bigger and it should be alright.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALTag.jpg
first real attempt at a tag for this name. crits?

harry
10-27-2007, 12:33 AM
your i is extremely over sized and the rest of your tag just looks like normal hand writing try to add some more style to it no beef man

silentchaos14
10-27-2007, 12:45 AM
haha i know man that I is supposed to be like that. but yeah my entire tag needs to be improved, tags are not my specialty.

Writers
10-27-2007, 03:56 AM
akel- on point son keep it up
melo- looks like you are trying to do too much. definately lose the L arrow in the O thing. idk start simple



haha i finally went and bought some more notebooks

http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1196.JPG
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1203.JPG
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1201.JPG
http://www.myfilestash.com/userfiles/compton6552/100_1204.JPG

looking good jsut hate the last tagg and lil weeezy is whack just my opionion:D

harry
10-27-2007, 03:58 AM
no your wack

Mello
10-27-2007, 05:11 AM
silentchaos - try to get your letters a bit closer together, and scrap the I, no offence :p
mainevent - loving that top one

trying to get a real simple handy that actualy looks alrighte, then build off that, so;
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2461/tagif6.jpg

crits?

Tokenkaligreens
10-27-2007, 06:03 AM
good stuff sen and main silent keep working on it homie.

StAtiK1
10-27-2007, 09:57 AM
both say pace

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/8267/picture012my6.jpg
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1112/picture013fp7.jpg

sen - looks good
statik - try to get some flow going, lose the dot and the quotation marks for now

state your definition of flow please

MainEvent
10-27-2007, 11:14 AM
pace, shits dope. i'd say just play around with the underline, cause thats the only thing i thinks lacking in the handstyle, everything else is esthetically nice.

melo, feelin that shit. nice and simple with good letters. get some markers and cans and go get that up.

church, alright man, first off, fix the fuckin focus. shits kinda giving me a headache. but i like the first third and fifth ones. try exchanging some of the letters in and outta different variations and just fucking around with the flow of the handstyle. pretty good over all, but the ones i didnt mention werent as good. so probably scrap those and focus on the first third and fifth ones

glyce
10-27-2007, 02:00 PM
i think the first one the and 4th one look pritty nice, but the second and the 3rd dont have a lot of flow

BIGel
10-27-2007, 04:42 PM
destroyed this bar with a marker..
http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v143/237/107/28202049/n28202049_31248238_7934.jpg

Derogatory9o5
10-27-2007, 04:47 PM
Today i was going out to pratice some tags!.

http://aycu22.webshots.com/image/30701/2000536787024253395_rs.jpghttp://aycu16.webshots.com/image/32255/2000581248961516135_rs.jpg

http://aycu06.webshots.com/image/33125/2000597352273357318_rs.jpghttp://aycu32.webshots.com/image/31231/2000532927345203836_rs.jpg

http://aycu34.webshots.com/image/32473/2000575375939694496_rs.jpg

Pretty nice simples , try to just tweak some stuff for a better look I guess

Arkoth
10-27-2007, 05:01 PM
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1985.jpg


Amazing man.. keep it up.
Which one of these should i use? Ignore "ink"
Im using a sharpie pro, and if i get good soon im gunna upgrade to a jumbo pen.http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4336/abcd0004rc1.jpg
Baring in mind im a TOY. How can i work on the top right one?

CRone!
10-27-2007, 05:11 PM
Those pics are gigantic. Size them down to make them visual.

Arkoth
10-27-2007, 05:19 PM
Those pics are gigantic. Size them down to make them visual.

sorry man, i'm an imageshaclk toy too
can you crits though just for the time being? i'll resize the next ones i upload

MainEvent
10-27-2007, 05:51 PM
i used a purple krink marker for that one, but shit came out blue on the hand drier which was pretty cool. just fuck around with pens and sharpies for a while. get shit like otr and krink and decos, etc later once you've gotten shit down more. my shits still really wack, so im not really one to give out advice, but get some of those like 300 looseleaf paper packets from staples or walmart, and just fill them with handstyles and throwies. helps shit evolve and sharpen alot more.

Arkoth
10-27-2007, 05:54 PM
cool man, thanks for the help.
thing is im from england ( lame i know ) and there's NO graffiti shops around, plus i cant buy from the internet yet, so im having to stick with markers from stationary shops, and sharpies etc.
lame

Licossa
10-27-2007, 08:29 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/101/picture015vg4.jpg

last hand I post I swear lol

you all need to learn how to resize images too I mean damn, I would crit more people but honestly I don't feel like scrolling to the right for 5 minutes

ovic - the first one you posted is the best, not sure what else to say, just keep doing it faster and faster and eventually you'll get some kind of flow

silentchaos14
10-27-2007, 08:37 PM
space out your fuckin letters, all i can see in there is an E and possibly an A. lose the halo too

IlikePie
10-27-2007, 10:14 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00144.jpg

*Bump*

Licossa, it looks like it says Doce
Sen, Your hands are hawt
Big, good work

C-Lurk
10-28-2007, 12:23 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/Chaos___/whats2BS.jpg
Whats2 (for exchange)

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/Chaos___/EKIM.jpg
EKIM (for exchange)

Crits? I'd like something other than "That sucks..."


Personal criticism: I like my S on the first, and the I on the second. The 2, on the first, could be better and so could the M on the second.




Also, could someone remove the huge ass pics up there? They spread the page out like MAD far.

Licossa
10-28-2007, 12:32 AM
*Bump*

Licossa, it looks like it says Doce
Sen, Your hands are hawt
Big, good work

says pace by the way, first thing I did with a brand new marker so i didn't expect it to come out so cramped

as for yours, the far right one is dope, the rest seem like you tried to hard to make it stylish and it came out forced


c-lurk - go simple, not really much else to say, they're pretty wack.

edit: guess I'll bump this shit again too


http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/8267/picture012my6.jpg
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1112/picture013fp7.jpg

IlikePie
10-28-2007, 12:42 AM
The loop on your P needs to end higher, and the cross on your A needs to be higher. And that one on the far right is just my normal handwriting :(

C-Lurk
10-28-2007, 12:45 AM
The loop on your P needs to end higher, and the cross on your A needs to be higher. And that one on the far right is just my normal handwriting :(

Pretty much agreeing here. Also, you might wanna bring the stalk of the P down further too.

Arkoth
10-28-2007, 04:46 AM
http://aycu10.webshots.com/image/31489/2004242887179095059_rs.jpg
now can you please crit?
how can i improve the "Ark"
please help :)

Kool-Aid Man
10-28-2007, 05:33 AM
ark the k is 2 far away from the rest.

Mello
10-28-2007, 05:37 AM
bump for crits
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2461/tagif6.jpg

ark - i think if you brought the K a lot closer to the other letters it would look pretty nice
licossa - yea like others have said, the P looks like a D and the bar of the A needs to come up a bit

Arkoth
10-28-2007, 06:31 AM
bump for crits
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2461/tagif6.jpg

ark - i think if you brought the K a lot closer to the other letters it would look pretty nice
licossa - yea like others have said, the P looks like a D and the bar of the A needs to come up a bit

thanks for the crits
i like your tag it seems to work with the letter spacing and flow, keep it up

GodAnubis
10-28-2007, 08:40 AM
what do you think about my tag
i know its sux but i would like to know what exacly sux ^_^
i dawing graf for about 1 month
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3038/dsc00299ob1.jpg

tnks

Saxaphone
10-28-2007, 08:48 AM
it sucks but i love your name

Mello
10-28-2007, 09:12 AM
stick to simples man, just get some basic letter structure down first

C-Lurk
10-28-2007, 11:59 AM
Drop the arrow, and gain some flow. Try working with how the letters look next to each other normally, and see if you can make the work with each other.

GodAnubis
10-28-2007, 06:31 PM
ok tnks for the advises
drop the arrow u say np

nana-dk
10-28-2007, 07:14 PM
some crappy cyber tagz i could get some real pics tonight

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/untitled1.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/b3.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/bomb.jpg

-GEKS-
10-28-2007, 07:57 PM
they look really nice, but sorta cliche if you know what i'm sayin.
and i cant read the second one at all

nana-dk
10-28-2007, 07:59 PM
it says rezerita

Fube
10-28-2007, 08:05 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1067.jpg

no idea where to post this really, but handys with a pen is hard to me!

C-Lurk
10-28-2007, 08:11 PM
On the second, the halo looks really bad.

Licossa
10-28-2007, 08:16 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8057/picture018bd8.jpg

Been thinking about changing my name to PENS, im not diggin the ce on pace, plus there already is a pace in chicago

SenTheFirst
10-28-2007, 08:59 PM
nana you spelled science wrong...

-GEKS-
10-28-2007, 09:28 PM
pens, scratch the halo and i love it

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1434.jpg
ignore the misshapen star
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1433.jpg
one with a pothead

is it better with or without the face?