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C-Lurk
10-28-2007, 09:31 PM
Pens- Looking good. Like stated, drop the halo.

harry
10-28-2007, 09:47 PM
nioce pens

-GEKS-
10-28-2007, 09:48 PM
am i invisible or something?
i've gotten ignored in every thread i've posted today lol

oh well im goinhg to sleep

JamesyBub
10-29-2007, 03:29 AM
my old tag lol.http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff46/kevr_2007/8.jpg

renegade185
10-29-2007, 07:59 PM
geks - im not really feelin the tag, and get rid of the pothead

i've been playing around with my tag lately. im starting to go from this:
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/tag3.jpg

to this:

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/hazmat2.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/hazmat4.jpg

crits?

Roolete
10-29-2007, 08:55 PM
your h doesnt flow but the last ones the best

Hobbes
10-29-2007, 09:21 PM
I'm just scribblin' on papers...I think I'm doin' it wrong

crits?

C-Lurk
10-29-2007, 10:57 PM
Hobbes, it's about expression. The only way you can do that wrong is when you stop doing it for yourself, and start doing it to impress others.

markingz.
10-30-2007, 10:06 AM
dont forget you want to show what your feeling to others too not just for yourself

ELITE
10-30-2007, 11:03 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/cornsrule/79TE0010.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/cornsrule/79TE0011.jpg

Some quick paper tags. Soz about the shit pics, shit camera phone. Me and search went on a bit of a raid last night, mostly tags n throws, so i'll go out later n get some flix. I'll add more then.



Hazmat : The new one is better imo, really feelin it!
Hobbes: Just keep on with the scribbles, eventually you'll see the improvement
Also, anyone in london (nw) who wants to write together pm me

iWuzOnce
10-30-2007, 11:17 AM
geks - im not really feelin the tag, and get rid of the pothead

i've been playing around with my tag lately. im starting to go from this:
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/tag3.jpg

to this:

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/hazmat2.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/hazmat4.jpg

crits?


shits hot and i'm definitely feelin the style. i like the H in the second one, with the low connection. keep goin.

Hobbes
10-30-2007, 11:52 AM
Hobbes, it's about expression. The only way you can do that wrong is when you stop doing it for yourself, and start doing it to impress others.

word I like some of the shit I just got but I'm tryin' to figure out how to tie in all the good shit 'n leave out the stuff that doesn't work.

I'm really tryin' to work on my hand style at the moment to get better overall.

just did this...

cerex89
10-30-2007, 12:01 PM
went to the frieght yard took some flicks
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0780.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0781.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0773.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0768.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0764.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0750.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0746.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0744.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0743.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0742.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0740.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0738.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0737.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0734.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0733.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0732.jpg

iWuzOnce
10-30-2007, 01:49 PM
post your own. not the right thread. and i wouldn't consider colt45 a toy there buddy.

C-Lurk
10-30-2007, 02:10 PM
word I like some of the shit I just got but I'm tryin' to figure out how to tie in all the good shit 'n leave out the stuff that doesn't work.

I'm really tryin' to work on my hand style at the moment to get better overall.

just did this...

Try to drop that connection at the end. It isn't joining any of the letters, so it's pointless, and takes up too much space.

cert1
10-30-2007, 02:36 PM
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u282/tepe1995/10-30-200732908PM.jpg

hobbes u should just do regular letters 4 now

elite on the 2nd 1 u should take the things out of the s

whahappen?
10-30-2007, 03:31 PM
those phillys are horrible

Crisco
10-30-2007, 07:39 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n271/criscofin/Nickspicsvideos.jpg

ELITE
10-31-2007, 09:40 AM
lol, camera phones are even worse in the dark lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/cornsrule/DSC00750.jpg



Can I have some crits for this (other than the poor photography lol)

mista10akey
10-31-2007, 08:03 PM
crisco keep practicing but start with simpler letters

-Leski
10-31-2007, 08:49 PM
I'm just scribblin' on papers...I think I'm doin' it wrong

crits?

Naw man, keep at it. Looks better then when I started.

Try writing it out in just regular printing, nice an' neat with no extra stuff, then you will kinda get your head around the letters shape. (like punishment lines @ school)

Then start bending them a little, not a lot, just enough to give em' a little charactor.

Then you just slowy keep working it until your able to bend the letters to make everything flow nice and clean.

It takes sometime, so get working on it. ;)

sallybsk
10-31-2007, 10:06 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n271/criscofin/Nickspicsvideos.jpg
yep keep practicing
letters dont haveeee to be fancy or shit. just work on flow and then letters will come naturally if you just practice.

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z156/leetsally/DSCN1609.jpghttp://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z156/leetsally/DSCN1606.jpg
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z156/leetsally/DSCN1603.jpg

acres1
11-01-2007, 12:31 PM
crits welcome

the end
11-01-2007, 07:24 PM
acres- the R looks too much like a B

IROC
11-01-2007, 10:10 PM
is it normal not to be feelin your own shit?

http://i10.tinypic.com/62ps4zd.jpg

sallybsk
11-01-2007, 10:35 PM
is it normal not to be feelin your own shit?

http://i10.tinypic.com/62ps4zd.jpg

rofls o course, took me so long to even be OK with my stuff. then i kinda like some stuff i do... but i still give myself lots of shit :|

btw crits? :>

IROC
11-01-2007, 10:36 PM
good thing im not alone lol, every time i draw somethin or paint somethin, i always say its shit

Bets369R
11-01-2007, 10:51 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n271/criscofin/Nickspicsvideos.jpg

your letter style doesnt flow very well. just too many points. make it flow smooth the whole way through. start with simple letters like your doing at school and just add some flare to it.

Crits please. I write Mutter/Mutr now, even though my name says Bets.
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/handstyle.jpg

Just something quick with a dry erase marker haha i ran out of supplys

capitol
11-02-2007, 06:32 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2513/graf725tr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bets:I like it noicee

GeeK
11-04-2007, 01:59 AM
BETS urs is pretty dope

tell me what u guys think? i need some crits

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/craka/DSC00457.jpg

kasr
11-04-2007, 08:33 AM
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa168/neukr/newbies071.jpg

C-Lurk
11-04-2007, 07:09 PM
Kasr, the K needs some work, otherwise I like it.

lordloss
11-04-2007, 10:20 PM
just some tags around town.KRITS(daas is in my crew)
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0120-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0121-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-3.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-7.jpg

geek=like the guy but you really need to work on your tag practice practice practice

kasr-like it just the k is fucked up i thought it was an h

GeeK
11-04-2007, 10:26 PM
just some tags around town.KRITS(daas is in my crew)
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0120-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0121-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-3.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-7.jpg

geek=like the guy but you really need to work on your tag practice practice practice

kasr-like it just the k is fucked up i thought it was an h


SICK! simple but still looks good. thanks for the advice

i really wasnt digging that tag im trying to make a new one now but having troubles with the G

lordloss
11-04-2007, 10:30 PM
thanks.ya when i do my g's i make them two parts so like one part going up then like a curve if you get what i mean. also just try to keep your letters the same size.

d_g
11-05-2007, 06:46 PM
There's a toy chat for a reason guys, feel free to use it.

lordloss
11-05-2007, 07:31 PM
sorry

GeeK
11-05-2007, 08:01 PM
There's a toy chat for a reason guys, feel free to use it.

oh wow.. sorry about taht..

d_g
11-05-2007, 09:41 PM
Don't mean to sound like a fuckwit but almost a whole page of chat I had to delete, this thread is for flicks and crits only.

Thanks.

C-Lurk
11-05-2007, 09:50 PM
I've already given several crits, so here's mine. Rip it up.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/Chaos___/ameek.jpg

Reads AMEK.

lordloss
11-05-2007, 10:01 PM
kind hard to read and is like really chopy and jagged straight lines dont really like it keep working

letsg0skate
11-05-2007, 10:36 PM
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4194/tagzth9.jpg

Crits pleaaase :] [says semor, which is pronounced simmer not seamore lol]

lordloss
11-05-2007, 10:43 PM
like the one is the middel the best the bottem r sucks dick actually allyour rs do change them up besides that they good.


STILL WANT CRITS FOR MY TAGS^^^

Mr Tasty
11-06-2007, 03:31 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/ts123.jpg

sketch3
11-06-2007, 03:33 PM
not feelin this style taste

C-Lurk
11-06-2007, 03:37 PM
not feelin this style taste

Same.

SenTheFirst
11-06-2007, 05:07 PM
amek- dont connect your letters, start with simples
taste- its unique, i kinda like it

haha my friend wants "real" or "true" tatooed on the inside of his lip and he wants to use one of my handies


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1242.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1240.jpg

lordloss
11-06-2007, 08:29 PM
[QUOTE=lordloss;910390]just some tags around town.KRITS(daas is in my crew)
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0120-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0121-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-3.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-7.jpg
sen shit is looking good keep going

"Riot"
11-06-2007, 08:48 PM
Lose the outside quotes.

lordloss
11-06-2007, 09:03 PM
what should i have instead i want some doo das

C-Lurk
11-06-2007, 09:15 PM
Sen- Thanks for the crits. For your tattoo, I'd say lose the exclamation point. I couldn't imagine that looking good as a tattoo...

Roolete
11-06-2007, 10:12 PM
just have it say trill

SenTheFirst
11-06-2007, 10:31 PM
post more tags peoples!!

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1243.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1244.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1246.jpg

capitol
11-07-2007, 07:03 PM
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6339/picture048rm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
SKOM:First tag is dec the rest the S is really not fittin in.
SENoner:Your funny:)

From the Ground Up
11-07-2007, 07:11 PM
amek- dont connect your letters, start with simples
taste- its unique, i kinda like it

haha my friend wants "real" or "true" tatooed on the inside of his lip and he wants to use one of my handies


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1242.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1240.jpg

tell ur buddy DONT DO IT!!

Bets369R
11-07-2007, 10:09 PM
http://i12.tinypic.com/87dqln5.jpg

Street Wize
11-07-2007, 11:00 PM
Capitol- Nice tag but i dont think the S really fits with it.

Here is mine but i write Trip but if anyone knows of any legends named Trap or Traps tell me cuz as you can see i can tag it a lil better than Trip
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/taptrip.jpg

letsg0skate
11-07-2007, 11:20 PM
use a marker it will look better and uh yeah the top left one is pretty bad but the two in the top right are alright. Looks like you've got simple down just add some style to them they look plain but don't try and go too crazy yadadamean

ayleusone
11-08-2007, 12:06 AM
couple things..... crits?

whahappen?
11-08-2007, 02:21 PM
amek- dont connect your letters, start with simples
taste- its unique, i kinda like it

haha my friend wants "real" or "true" tatooed on the inside of his lip and he wants to use one of my handies


http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1242.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1240.jpg
tell him not to, the hands arent too bad but it's a tattoo, and he'll regret it like in a month after it's done
although you would be getting up inside someone's mouth..

Mr Tasty
11-08-2007, 09:11 PM
il be a cunt and post my tag here :)
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs23/f/2007/312/1/a/Taste_Tag_3_by_Tastie.jpg

Pharoah
11-08-2007, 09:56 PM
bets its nice but i think it would look better if the letters werent all in different directions
taste is good too but is that really what u write it looks kinda complicated to do real fast
damn im havin a real problem comin up with a word that i can write decently does anyone know if cream is original?

Mr Tasty
11-08-2007, 10:00 PM
actualy its pretty qucik to write...just a lot of strokes
only a few seconds longer then my other tag

Pharoah
11-08-2007, 10:34 PM
yeah thats what i mean like a couple strokes per letter but its definately not toy

-GEKS-
11-08-2007, 10:34 PM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1439.jpg
crits on this tag maybe

Pharoah
11-08-2007, 10:37 PM
nice but ur arrows kinda big thats it :)

-GEKS-
11-08-2007, 10:40 PM
yeah i wouldnt use the arrows and halos if i was gettin up with it
their just for fun on paper lol

anemptyswishersweet
11-08-2007, 11:07 PM
any crits on this nesh much appreciated! yeah the markers runnin low...
http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/6835/dsc00032jz5.jpg

Bets369R
11-08-2007, 11:10 PM
i dont like that squiggly line.

anemptyswishersweet
11-08-2007, 11:15 PM
yeah it shoulda been so that the lines gradually get smaller... progression.

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-09-2007, 12:35 AM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9155.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9158.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9157.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9154.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Nukka.jpg

crits please
srry i posted so many i suck at taking pics so i didnt know which angle to go with and the bottom one i got bored with and fucked with it on photoshop and figured why not post it up

crik
11-09-2007, 04:07 AM
oh my god.
waaaay too many accents.
and a tag that big should usually be done with a can not a marker.
lose the line through the letters. id just start completely over with that. just too complicated and too much negative space and shit.
hurts to look at haha

Sintakz
11-09-2007, 05:41 AM
It looks good but I wouldn't use anything drippy for it because of all the lines. That's just me though, you do you.

lilil
11-09-2007, 12:35 PM
lemme kno wat yis think of dis...http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc140/Big-Jay298/marker-tagz.jpg

C-Lurk
11-09-2007, 01:57 PM
rules in graffiti suck, do your own thing...fuck the opinion of other people

That's not a rule, it's a suggestion.

Kool-Aid Man
11-09-2007, 10:46 PM
fasho start over simple

silentchaos14
11-09-2007, 11:17 PM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9155.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9158.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9157.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/CIMG9154.jpg

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e74/thedoppleganger88/Nukka.jpg

crits please
srry i posted so many i suck at taking pics so i didnt know which angle to go with and the bottom one i got bored with and fucked with it on photoshop and figured why not post it up
lose all the accents and dont use drippy markers for now. oh and u may wanna edit your face out because cops do visit this site, doubt your up enough to be wanted though.

revid!
11-09-2007, 11:49 PM
trying to werk one that i really like
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/7354/s5001157ru1.th.jpg (http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s5001157ru1.jpg)

Asperz1
11-10-2007, 12:53 AM
I agree wiht silentchaos14 for that Fasho tag.
The handstyles kinda whack.. it looks like it was copied of Graffiti Fonts for computers/ Gang tags. Oh and btw if cops visit the site cant they trace the Ip?..this is pretty sketchy..

But any crits on this?
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/2899/asperz111111pn3.jpg
(not the best..left my parismas at school by accident)

Kool-Aid Man
11-10-2007, 04:42 AM
loose the crown!

Asperz1
11-10-2007, 12:59 PM
what if i put a halo/circle isntead?

ELITE
11-10-2007, 01:06 PM
halo could work, but i think it would look better without tbh, but yea deffo no crown.

I wud just take off the crown and keep it like that, feeling it tho.

Asperz1
11-10-2007, 01:21 PM
ight..waht bout
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2900/asperzrevisedbs5.jpg

mmmburgers
11-10-2007, 02:05 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1128/1392996869_bf59db8a82.jpg?v=0

like yeah,, its my old tag

intaout
11-10-2007, 02:26 PM
new tag in my sig...
what you guys think?

Vagrant
11-10-2007, 03:29 PM
sick. too bad you copy and pasted the drips

meek1
11-10-2007, 05:53 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/912/meekonerxr0.jpg

LAWL.

libra25
11-10-2007, 06:18 PM
handstyle exchange ?!?!? pm me ;O

Sick!
11-10-2007, 07:30 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000d6e92b5/1/92/qN-I72kY3z_5YpF-yK8uT47PzFzsBHS4.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/JlC3ZMJA6z8yWl2BEy8SKiSD6FS7PN1W?referrer=hlnk)

virus tag....just messin around

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-10-2007, 09:23 PM
thanks for the crits yo
fuck! cops creep on this?!

yeah ive already started it over this time im doin it simple
yeah that drippy marker killed all my ink in like 3 hits anyway haha


http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1128/1392996869_bf59db8a82.jpg?v=0

like yeah,, its my old tag


mmmburgers i think that shit looks sick

haha meek thats down dude. photoshop? haha

Bastardo
11-11-2007, 09:55 AM
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6196/picture280374um5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
For a friend on his bedroom wall

STAR01
11-11-2007, 11:44 AM
I like that Louis Baxter thingy big time, only the red doesn;t really go well with the green if ya ask me
Faslo those drips are mad but lose all the things around the tag....


http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1655/1002312dz7.jpg

Something new i tried Tell me what you think




crits??

einsamkeit
11-11-2007, 02:28 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/2592/97657924sv8.th.jpg (http://img233.imageshack.us/my.php?image=97657924sv8.jpg)

I know it's ms paint... but i don't have a scanner or digi cam.

-GEKS-
11-11-2007, 02:50 PM
nice tags Star01, go hit the streets with that!


no. use actual letters, dont try to make parts of one letter go into the other letter
just do simples

and hone, start by making the e not so thin, like the other letters

5yn
11-11-2007, 03:56 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/tdbeezy.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster016.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster011.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster012.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster010.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster008.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster006.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster005.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster004.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster003.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/rootfops1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/stinkybritches2.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster001-1.jpg

Bastardo
11-11-2007, 04:14 PM
whats the third letter??

einsamkeit
11-11-2007, 04:14 PM
nicely done : )

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-11-2007, 04:15 PM
i like em but i thought the y was an s or an r for a while there

mmmburgers
11-11-2007, 05:04 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1347/1393948384_cb5aa51842.jpg?v=0
yeah, another old tag, done a few months ago
crits?

7thIncision
11-11-2007, 08:16 PM
Burgers - man, those letters are tweaked, it needs some work HARDCORE. It kinda looks mental.

Ney - dont loop the Y so much, as you can see, people cant read it... I like the Philly... except for the star... the rest of em are bad photos so its hard to see. AND if you are going to post all of your flicks, resize them so they dont take up the entire page.

Star - Leave the adjoining letters thing to company logos and other toys, it makes it hard to read and looks worse than just writing each full letter.

Ovic - Shut ur mouth, you obviously dont know what you're talking about.

Bastardo - Rocking it as always, good to see some painted stuff from you finally. Only crit is i might have gone with a brighten yellow.

Virus - The extensions on the R look stupid. i know you were just messing around, but take a look at them.

Meek - Man that pretty sick, maybe tweak the at bit of the R so it flows out more instead of just kind of stopping?

Asperz - man, looks good the only thing is the quotes, maybe intsead of that just put a * or something in front of the A to even out the piece, cause the quotes on the right side outside the loop are a little too left out.

5yn
11-11-2007, 08:35 PM
ahaha its an s

5yn
11-11-2007, 11:40 PM
sum new tags just for the guys who couldnt read my 1st ones :)

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster006-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster004-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster003-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster002.jpg

"Fasho" T|y|B
11-12-2007, 02:58 AM
so its nesone? ha i knew it was an s
but then in a later pic it looked like a y
i think its all good if you make the s more... non y/r-like...

lordloss
11-12-2007, 01:42 PM
some new tags.CRITS
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0126.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0125.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0124.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0123.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0121-3.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0122.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0119-2.jpg
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-4.jpg

5yn- i love you stuff the looking dope and ill spots

ummburgers-its alright keep it up

louis-i like the wall the nice handy

cerex89
11-12-2007, 02:32 PM
^^not really fellin it there is no consistant flow in it good start though

C-Lurk
11-12-2007, 02:35 PM
Yeah, SKOM. None of the letters flow with the others. It's a nice start, but should be better.

lordloss
11-12-2007, 06:46 PM
anyone got tips on how i can make my letters flow more i have been having a problem with it

C-Lurk
11-12-2007, 07:18 PM
anyone got tips on how i can make my letters flow more i have been having a problem with it

Practice a lot, or just look for connections between letters...

lordloss
11-12-2007, 07:50 PM
ok thanks and i practice like a mother fucker

-Leski
11-12-2007, 10:08 PM
Yah, Its just practice. Keep on writing it over an over on lined paper until you break down the diffrent strokes you can use to make the letter. Add flair and away you go.

letsg0skate
11-12-2007, 11:19 PM
yeah I was also thinking that your letters don't flow that well. The problem is each letter is kind of like a different style I don't really know how to explain it. just keep practicing and try different styles

Pharoah
11-12-2007, 11:36 PM
the one in the red paint thats over the silver has ok flow

Mello
11-13-2007, 11:37 AM
Skom - some of the individual letters look ok, but as a whole theres no flo at all =/

5yn - top 2 are to blurry, 3rd looks like its got some decent flow to it and 4th is blurry

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/412/melotagzy1.jpg

crits?

Vagrant
11-13-2007, 01:28 PM
yeah i need a lot of help with my tag.
I love my name but hate some of my letters - like the V
here are some various scribbles with a half-dead chisel tip sharpie:

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/tagpractice.jpg
I like the top one the best actually. later on I tried experimenting with looptailed lower-case g's

heres another page trying to work with lowercase letters, more experimenting with looptailed g's
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/tagpractice2.jpg

Crits, tips, help, please

Mello
11-13-2007, 02:51 PM
2nd page top one, the G looks pretty fresh, but not sure id recognise it as a G if i didnt know what you write

mmmburgers
11-13-2007, 04:31 PM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/tsaaalreadyarktik.jpg
the "a" looks like a "o"

5Funerals
11-13-2007, 04:58 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/SCAN001-1.jpg

Some Handstyles for alls yalls

-Leski
11-13-2007, 05:36 PM
wow,wow,wow.... Funeral, man, "Bend it, dont break it".

Edit:I like the second and third Rast from the bottom.

acres1
11-13-2007, 06:18 PM
acres nsg

Roolete
11-13-2007, 08:20 PM
acres looks good, lose that halo though
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/untitled-1.jpg

done4625
11-13-2007, 09:20 PM
http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff289/done4625/done.jpg


Yah im jsut starting to write but i got some people on crews helpin me.....what u guys think?!?

"Riot"
11-13-2007, 09:33 PM
Lose the dots.
Lose the slash over the o and quotes.

What did you write that with?!
A deodorant stick?

-Leski
11-13-2007, 10:23 PM
What did you write that with?!
A deodorant stick?

Yah, wth did you use?


I'm working on my tag now... I'm a stencil, karak, sticker kinda guy. My tag has always been more of a "sidenote" and I figure I should work on it.
One more guy posting wack ass tags in here lol.

BIGel
11-13-2007, 10:39 PM
done- lose that meanstreak to start off with, you gotta hve some game to make em look legit. otherwise not too bad bro.

straight moppin.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/288329929.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/288329681.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/288329444.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/288329433.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/241651915.jpg

Vagrant
11-13-2007, 11:37 PM
Bigel: work on the first one more, the second one looks pretty toy to be honest, the third one is the best, loose thing on the end of the 4th one, and with the 5th loose the addons and seperate the E and the L more.

Funerals: I hate your letters. Partly because I have 3 of the same letters and know they can be crappy, and partly because they look like crap.

Leski: We're like the same. Im a stencil, karak, sticker guy myself - who also has neglected his tag - who also feels he should work on it.


yeah i need a lot of help with my tag.
I love my name but hate some of my letters - like the V
here are some various scribbles with a half-dead chisel tip sharpie:

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/tagpractice.jpg
I like the top one the best actually. later on I tried experimenting with looptailed lower-case g's

heres another page trying to work with lowercase letters, more experimenting with looptailed g's
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/tagpractice2.jpg

Crits, tips, help, please

Bump for more crits, sorry.

sir.one
11-14-2007, 01:03 AM
last one at the bottem.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2139/2013676550_f38547ad73.jpg?v=0

-EgoDeath-
11-14-2007, 01:38 AM
Bigel - I love your style, only thing that gets to me is the G seems to have trouble flowing into the E

Vagrant - try to focus letters other than the G, it almost seems like youre neglecting the rest and not having much luck with it

Sir - I think it looks ill


Im fairly new to this, let me know what you think..

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2164/2014056030_d9bacb5243.jpg?v=0

twisties
11-14-2007, 05:11 AM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6666/aroundlq9.jpg
I like mucking around with whatever pops into my head.

LikeOner
11-14-2007, 05:20 AM
Done - I used to write Done when I sucked even harder. Keep going with it, its a sick name imo, I still write it sometimes. I wish I had people to help me out when I started, now I got bombingscience

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6550/img0083yk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

einsamkeit
11-14-2007, 10:09 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9751/honewe3.th.jpg (http://img215.imageshack.us/my.php?image=honewe3.jpg)

Mello
11-14-2007, 10:17 AM
bump for crits:
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/412/melotagzy1.jpg

Hone - liking it, nice and simple, the E needs a bit of work, but pretty good :)

twisties - some ok stuff, Homer looks best out of the 3 imo

ego - liking it, the * seems a bit out of place though

$EmEkOner
11-14-2007, 10:35 AM
im still tryin to choose my name before i start doing it places. so chill out.



ha im gonna ask yall what my name should be.even though your gonna make stupid ones. what should it be?

yo some advice pick a name that fits u man
but dont make it 2 long

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-14-2007, 12:19 PM
last one at the bottem.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2139/2013676550_f38547ad73.jpg?v=0



bump this shit
damn





http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/422/1002458zr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Ayo
11-14-2007, 12:36 PM
Done - I used to write Done when I sucked even harder. Keep going with it, its a sick name imo, I still write it sometimes. I wish I had people to help me out when I started, now I got bombingscience

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6550/img0083yk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Too much drip...

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
11-14-2007, 12:49 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/288329444.jpg

this is so tight.
perfect drips and it has so much flow.
what am i talking about, all your shit is perfect.

5Funerals
11-14-2007, 03:16 PM
LESKI: Thanks I know exactly what you mean!

VAGRANT: I cant really say shit haha I disagree about mine looking like crap though. Which letters are the worst?
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/handstyles.jpg

Some new variations/fixes. I hate the ones under the squiggly line, I have a feeling those are the ones Vagrant was talking about.

Vagrant
11-14-2007, 03:39 PM
Yeah those are the ones.

Stuff above the lines getting better. Loose the loop on the leg of the R, it messes up the flow. It may go with the loop on the T but not with two letters between them.
Try more S's. S's are hot letters and so much can be done with them.
Loose the triangle on the bottom right leg of the A.
It seems like you have a few different styles going and they clash too much. You have a Loopy R, an ubersimple A, a sharp S, and then a Loopy T. Pick one of those styles and try and apply it to the rest of letters. Look on the bright side, you'll have 3 different tags when you're done.

IwriteSEK
11-14-2007, 06:11 PM
~DELETED~

ehhh...
i is as toy as toys get, as you can see

Bets369R
11-14-2007, 06:15 PM
i like your s, the e and k need a little work but you almost got it. i would make the bottom of the e round and the bottom leg of the k sharp like the s

Kool-Aid Man
11-14-2007, 06:34 PM
just clean it up a bit.. get rid of some deceration maybe

IwriteSEK
11-14-2007, 06:38 PM
ok ill work on it

5Funerals
11-14-2007, 07:08 PM
Yeah those are the ones.

Stuff above the lines getting better. Loose the loop on the leg of the R, it messes up the flow. It may go with the loop on the T but not with two letters between them.
Try more S's. S's are hot letters and so much can be done with them.
Loose the triangle on the bottom right leg of the A.
It seems like you have a few different styles going and they clash too much. You have a Loopy R, an ubersimple A, a sharp S, and then a Loopy T. Pick one of those styles and try and apply it to the rest of letters. Look on the bright side, you'll have 3 different tags when you're done.

Thanks a ton man those are the best crits anyone has ever given me. I wil take it all to mind. Thinking back, those old handstyles were kind of cholo influenced which is just straight up retarted. I will probably have some new shit up tonight.

DEAF_VOICE
11-14-2007, 07:17 PM
http://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sctm/v155/46/109/6854916/n6854916_41175816_887.jpg

C-Lurk
11-14-2007, 07:58 PM
^Love the S to T connection!

Game Ova 07
11-14-2007, 09:32 PM
one of my earliest handstyles...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo3.jpg
major improvement...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo1.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo9.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo8.jpg
and my latest and probably best handstyle...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo5.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo6.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo2.jpg
and a character i thought id throw in there...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo4.jpg

sorry about the sizing guys...anyone know how i can fix that?

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-14-2007, 09:54 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/6294/1002462jm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)





http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/489/1002389or4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

capitol
11-14-2007, 09:58 PM
LESKI: Thanks I know exactly what you mean!

VAGRANT: I cant really say shit haha I disagree about mine looking like crap though. Which letters are the worst?
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/handstyles.jpg

Some new variations/fixes. I hate the ones under the squiggly line, I have a feeling those are the ones Vagrant was talking about.
Name change..rast will snap your neck if he sees that.

-Leski
11-14-2007, 10:07 PM
Its in pen so its skinny, will look diffrent with something thicker. Real simple.
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/8552/20gp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

@gameova, Imageshack.us, select image and check the resize box and the remove resolution bar box. Select resolution and host it.

Game Ova 07
11-14-2007, 10:08 PM
thanks =D

-Leski
11-14-2007, 10:13 PM
Its in pen so its skinny, will look diffrent with something thicker. Real simple.
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/8552/20gp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

@gameova, Imageshack.us, select image and check the resize box and the remove resolution bar box. Select resolution and host it.

Fuck the last post. Np man.

DEAF_VOICE
11-15-2007, 01:01 AM
http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sctm/v155/46/109/6854916/n6854916_41180974_4674.jpg

let me knw Good Bad Ugly?
Crits.

BIGel
11-15-2007, 01:35 AM
^ugly dog. lose those little add ons at the end, and the straight line joining the j to the t doesnt work just yet.

"toy tags"
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2007/318/8/b/some_new_writes_by_bigel.jpg

SkuzSCT
11-15-2007, 02:35 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/Picture003.jpg

-EgoDeath-
11-15-2007, 03:04 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2164/2014056030_d9bacb5243.jpg?v=0



bump for critz.

Skuz - I like it, I just dont know about the sun/crown looking thing up top.
Leski - connect them more, just looks like sloppy handwriting.
Rast - I like the last one the most.

twisties
11-15-2007, 04:07 AM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6666/aroundlq9.jpg
I like mucking around with whatever pops into my head.
bump for critz too :)

SkuzSCT- Liking the style!
BIGel- Sweet tags...I like the letter structure.
DEAF_VOICE- Not really likin the JT joining over the whole word. I used to tag Jest too but stopped.

-Leski
11-15-2007, 09:22 AM
Leski - connect them more, just looks like sloppy handwriting.

I was just thinking about how to do that, I'll work on my "sloppy handwriting".

I hate Z's I know how much of a bitch they are, loose the * in front of it and try to reshape the Z to fit in better. O's M's and B's are pretty easy to work with, just get that Z down and the rest would fall into place.

wolsley
11-15-2007, 12:02 PM
http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sctm/v155/46/109/6854916/n6854916_41180974_4674.jpg

let me knw Good Bad Ugly?
Crits.

There is a guy writes jest in my town and hes a lot better than that...

Haz-E
11-15-2007, 03:32 PM
skuz looking preetty fresh just not feeling da k but dats all good

just screwing around
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6047/image063wq6.jpg

Bizzaro
11-15-2007, 04:57 PM
dope shit haze

-Leski
11-15-2007, 05:05 PM
Keep at it or ditch it? I actualy kinda like it... It still needs work though, need to work on each of the letters more, any advice?
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4895/23hc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
.
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2460/24ps5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

@twisties, Doesnt look to bad. Whats your name? Binber, Homer, or Bredker?

ekimboi1
11-15-2007, 05:09 PM
id say get rid of them arrows!?

F3B3S
11-15-2007, 05:11 PM
old script.......

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/IMG_000112212112.jpg

Bizzaro
11-15-2007, 08:20 PM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd49/Bizzaro_album/22.jpg

letsg0skate
11-15-2007, 08:34 PM
Leski - Lose the arrows and try moving your letters closer together

Bizzaro - alright start, but if you use a marker it will probably look better. Also your b and s can use some work but they aren't too bad, they could just be improved

IwriteNASR
11-15-2007, 09:35 PM
besar- lose that arrow
jest- no addons
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5038/nnnasrwv1.jpg

Haz-E
11-15-2007, 10:10 PM
Bump cause got no crits


http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6047/image063wq6.jpg

intaout
11-15-2007, 10:30 PM
you should write your tag, but its not bad. I say make some of the letters the same size and change /rid the stars. Not a bad hand though...

KASE2
11-16-2007, 12:24 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/ksbrwn.jpg

sumthin new(ish) wutchu think, crits por favor

jersOneTIC
11-16-2007, 10:54 AM
nasr - the r is too close...the top part
haz-e - nice tag but im not feelin the stars
kase2 - the w is too close to the o
just messin around...
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3642/tagsin6.jpg

Church
11-16-2007, 12:14 PM
jersone that shit all looks good, but the r is kinda odd. like the r keeps acting like a buffer, breaks up the flow, kinda like je*r*sone. the O is too small in the first one. Otherwise the whole bit is subfly.

for me R,h, and m are hard letters because of all the stilts coming out the bottom.

F3B3S I like it.

Haz its cool and all the letters match up well, but get rid of those ribbons on the side. its like for breast cancer or veterans or something. Bring the letters themselves closer together, and get them more consistent. I know you prolly just messed up accidentally, but the b should all look the same etc,

Ill post up my new tag for some crits later.

-Leski
11-16-2007, 12:56 PM
lost the arrows, letters are closer. any other advice?
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/5479/70536323yi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Just made some mop paint. Really pale green-grey.
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7344/21fd9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

@kstwo, The T is kinda sharp.

Hoostein
11-16-2007, 05:10 PM
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/5c/9c/02a94ec2976d.jpg

Hoostein
11-16-2007, 05:55 PM
those need alot of work, the each one is kinda nice though.

I know, ill post some on paper tonight...

NEZ89
11-16-2007, 07:21 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/6351/im001411cj5.jpg

silentchaos14
11-16-2007, 08:34 PM
not at all. i dont mean to sound like i have a huge ego but i seem to be the only one crittin tonight so.
nez- your tag looks like it says alez, u should take off that wierd thing at the bottom of the N or leave some space there. other then that maybe lose the arrow and the quotes.

5Funerals
11-16-2007, 10:05 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/handstyles-1.jpg

New handstyle, concept idea for a possible crew or some shit (SOME ONE CREW) and the penis one is for dissing the awful taggers in my town who go over my shit for no reason.

intaout
11-16-2007, 11:03 PM
ya pretty much, they will prob think your homosexual...start war or leave them alone and they might leave you.
and fix your r, it looks like roast

originalhomeboy
11-17-2007, 04:59 AM
yo. Im going to start chucking this up... thaughts?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8007/handywisenn3.jpg

twisties
11-17-2007, 05:02 AM
^ Like the tag...But maybe shrink the Z down a bit or make the E slightly bigger as it's too small...Might just make things flow more.

Arkoth
11-17-2007, 07:47 AM
you should write your tag, but its not bad. I say make some of the letters the same size and change /rid the stars. Not a bad hand though...

Ah fucking shit!
you write ark too?
Do you mind if i keep writing it, i'm from England so it's not liek we'll clash.

Can i get some crits on this tag? The "A" is crap because i messed up, but the rest is how i want it.http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/290/dsc01461oe4.jpg

intaout
11-17-2007, 01:29 PM
damn... well i can tell your still pretty early in your writing stage. If you keep the name its alright, im in canada. But feel free to try different names... haha
well your tag needs alot of work. take out the doo dads and stuff until you have solid leter style down.

intaout
11-17-2007, 01:34 PM
I think i need to take my time more.
crits pleese
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2066/2041330584_cd52d7d505.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2306/2040534535_07a8ce98f9.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2287/2041330200_16be380141.jpg?v=1195328002

"Riot"
11-17-2007, 02:23 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/ofb.jpg
Reads OFB.
Crits?

Hoostein
11-17-2007, 02:43 PM
Thats pretty bad... Just start with simples.

bojangles
11-17-2007, 04:21 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC02072.jpg

jersOneTIC
11-17-2007, 09:22 PM
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2011/drippyfh6.jpg

Game Ova 07
11-17-2007, 10:36 PM
one of my earliest handstyles...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo3.jpg
major improvement...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo1.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo9.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo8.jpg
and my latest and probably best handstyle...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo5.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo6.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo2.jpg
and a character i thought id throw in there...
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Neo4.jpg

sorry about the sizing guys...anyone know how i can fix that?

any crits please =D

Arkoth
11-18-2007, 02:23 AM
damn... well i can tell your still pretty early in your writing stage. If you keep the name its alright, im in canada. But feel free to try different names... haha
well your tag needs alot of work. take out the doo dads and stuff until you have solid leter style down.

hmm, thanks.
how can i work on this tag?

harry
11-18-2007, 03:34 AM
fix your a and r and then try to make every thing the same size

SkuzSCT
11-18-2007, 11:00 AM
Alright...

Leski - lose those long extensions, not just the arrows at the end...
vagrant, leski, jest, egodeath, twisties, kstwo, nez, wyze, ofb, rast, besar, and nasr, you should all just stick to what you like, but practice simple letter structures as well and keep practising IE: write your name at least 100 times on scrap paper every day for a little while.

Haze, mane, and jers, Im thinkin you guys are alright, just keep doing what youre doig and youll get better... One thing for mane, just lose that little curl on the end of the e... it makes a solid simple tag look less solid

As for neo and hoostein, STAY THE FUCK OFF THE STREETS, you guys are toys, take the bits of advice from above and apply them to paper, NOT THE STREETS. Im not gonna try and say 'no offence' or 'Im not trying to be a dick'. Im blatantly being a dick, but its for your own good.

5Funerals
11-18-2007, 12:12 PM
JersOne- I disagree with that other guy I love the R. The O should be bigger though

Skuz- you speak the truth!

Hoostein
11-18-2007, 03:00 PM
skuz i asked for crits i didnt ask for you to be a dick....i didnt get up with the first two handstyles...just my last one so can you atleast crit me on that one? considering it is decent....

He gave you crits, quit whining. Just because it's not what you want to hear doesn't mean it isn't true. Thanks for the crits man.
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/cb/66/7e76cfd4f75d.jpg

This is what I was going for. crits

-Leski
11-18-2007, 03:35 PM
Thanks skuz, I did actualy just ditch that thing with the extensions the other day.
I suck at tags, need to keep working at them.
Thx for the good advice.

Rogue
11-18-2007, 07:05 PM
I'm posting this in here for all the toys that want to give up, or need some uplifting ego boost.

This was my tag 4 years ago when I first started writing.....

I love how I made my U look like a V hahahahhahah
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r247/blakereimmuth/P5050418.jpg

Time will help all of you, remember that....

Peace to the up and coming writers, and remember to never quit.

Rogue

twisties
11-18-2007, 07:32 PM
I think i need to take my time more.
crits pleese
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2066/2041330584_cd52d7d505.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2306/2040534535_07a8ce98f9.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2287/2041330200_16be380141.jpg?v=1195328002

These are alright...however, i think the letters should be slightly closer together as to it just breaks up the flow. Or just try some different style letters.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4111/picture0091bv7.jpg

5Funerals
11-18-2007, 09:18 PM
ABOUT - I think the a is too big.

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/newhand.jpg

I ditched the last handstyle with the curly r and t. I like this one much more. Crits?

Olick
11-18-2007, 09:33 PM
I'm posting this in here for all the toys that want to give up, or need some uplifting ego boost.

This was my tag 4 years ago when I first started writing.....

I love how I made my U look like a V hahahahhahah
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r247/blakereimmuth/P5050418.jpg

Time will help all of you, remember that....

Peace to the up and coming writers, and remember to never quit.

Rogue

done worry,.

myne was worse =]

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/mrshee/DSC_0094.jpg
toytag
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/mrshee/DSC_0077.jpg
more "up to date"

dont worry fellas. everyone starts out toy no matter what.

C-Lurk
11-18-2007, 10:59 PM
Ark- No flow, letters are far apart.
Each- Getting better
About- You're really just leaving all of the letters there, they don't seem to belong with each other but you cramped them together anyway...Like a class photo...
Rast- the one to the left of the big solo S...I like.

-EgoDeath-
11-19-2007, 03:30 AM
Rast, try using a lower case a in the style thats in normal computer font, with the upper hook and everything. it might flow better, imo.

SkuzSCT
11-19-2007, 07:09 AM
bottom line is you do what you wanna do. if he wants to write his name, even if it looks like shit, hes gonna do it regardless of what other people think of his skill. I personally didn't think the last ones were that bad though. Ive seen worse tags that get respect.
I guess that is the wonder of illegal art. It has no bounds , but still, sometimes loose boundries can be beneficial to everyone.
Keep in mind that those comments were directed towards very specific photos, and however harsh, were still meant as constructive crits.

Hoostein - New tag on paper is starting to look a lot smoother, keep at it

Some quick jots...
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/Picture007.jpg

C-Lurk
11-19-2007, 07:35 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/Chaos___/tag.jpg

Just messing around with my custom mops.

SkuzSCT
11-19-2007, 08:02 AM
I suggest losing the curly thing at the left of the A, but thats just me. Other than that it has decent flow. Go bigger to avoid the clutter and unreadability.

Anyone have crits on my shit?

C-Lurk
11-19-2007, 08:06 AM
Skuz- I dig the throw, and the Chiller-style (black with red shadow) next to it.

However, I think you got a little out of hand with add-ons. Maybe slim it down to the best ones. I like the outline on "ONER."

cerex89
11-19-2007, 12:29 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0807.jpg

spag
11-19-2007, 07:26 PM
Olick, nice flow. i like the throw skuz. Amek, put that on a bigger surface, can't really tell if it's good or not. Jens, nice flow for a kiwi. I can't use those and make good shit.

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/1429/bombsc001tj6.jpg

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4500/bombsc002mw0.jpg

5Funerals
11-19-2007, 07:54 PM
CEAS - Spread the letters out so they touch but dont cross over each other as much so its wasier to read other than that the top one is perfect

MainEvent
11-20-2007, 07:02 PM
jens- shits good. just keep practicing and repetition with it.

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickrock087.jpg

-GEKS-
11-20-2007, 08:12 PM
spag- ill ink/mop but work on the tag
main- dope shit nice flairs

beyondyereyes
11-20-2007, 09:58 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/umzor.jpg

I'm keeping it simple for now. Anything I should do?

Kool-Aid Man
11-20-2007, 10:26 PM
you should try making your letters the same size

beyondyereyes
11-20-2007, 11:17 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/wuzzuh.jpg

I'm still working on it. Personally I like my first one but we'll see where this goes.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-21-2007, 12:26 AM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/1A.jpg

twisties
11-21-2007, 03:31 AM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4471/aboutrs6.jpg

ForOhWun
11-21-2007, 08:47 AM
what whas that done with, looks photoshopped
also maybe try making your letter more simple and not so smushed

Fube
11-21-2007, 09:26 AM
dont know what it is but im feelin that bottom one twist.

cerex89
11-21-2007, 01:22 PM
@twisties LOOKS REAL GOOD NOW DO IT ON PAPER
@Edward"Sezer"Hands DONT KNO WHAT TO SAY BECAUSE UR GOOD
@beyondyereyes CHANGE UR LETTERS NOT THE NAME THE LETTERS
NOW FOR MINE
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0816.jpg

ForOhWun
11-21-2007, 01:31 PM
Gettin Better Jens, How bout trying to proportionalize the letters(the same size) and changing the bottom of the S .. Heres something i tried doing in paint to helphttp://xs221.xs.to/xs221/07473/JENS.JPG
The Grey is to help with the Height Proportions the rest self explanitory

Dusk07
11-21-2007, 03:55 PM
ehhhh they look wierd this time, buttt i havent posted in forever so here ya go.

dusk and duskoner. o and one ftsk

http://aycu14.webshots.com/image/33333/2003334023213536292_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003334023213536292)

Enormous
11-21-2007, 04:13 PM
twisties, real dope, what did you do it with?
cerex, looks alright but yuo could make the s better
dusk, cant really see your letters
heres one
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0116.jpg

kosher
11-21-2007, 09:46 PM
cerex i like it, nice and simple. lots of people don't appreciate how far that can go. (second pic) pleaaaase try to make it look more like your pic on your bed that one looked sooo much better
spag the marker one is much better, much more legible and much prettier.
main event you've got this shit on lock, very visually appealing. i'd love to see shit like that aroudn my hood.
beyondyereyes, fix the "s" and yea make the size at least a bit more proportional (second post) just keep the otek from the first just make the t and k smaller don't change the style up especially with the o, e and k
sez your stuff is ALWAYS amazing, i told you a long time ago to get the fuck out of the toy forum, and the statement still stands.
twisties to start lose every single arrow. i suggest working on the bottom one, a and t look good, make the b, o and u the same size and make it all fit nice together.
dusk i'm sorry but i don't like your letters, your style or anything you're trying to do. not trying to hate but personally i don't even know where i'd start with the advice.
enormous i really like it the letters have mad swagger

new style trying to keep it pretty simple, what do you think i'd love the crits good and bad p.s i already know and it is my own opinion that the star could be better and the m could be better. other than that take it away

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_3043.jpg

ekimboi1
11-22-2007, 09:13 PM
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/scan0005.jpg
fuck it i might as well post!
crits!?

anie 1
11-22-2007, 09:15 PM
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc203/momabeatmewitharuberhose/DSCF0403.jpg
anie has a flick:)

5Funerals
11-22-2007, 10:41 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/hands.jpg

Crits?

Kool-Aid Man
11-22-2007, 10:58 PM
rast - i like the bottom one the best, get rid of the halo on top of S and make the A straight it leans into the R at the moment and maybe shorten the width of the R...
do that and see how it looks... just trying to help

SenTheFirst
11-23-2007, 01:28 AM
this page is suffering

cept teze.. good stuff

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_1261-1.jpg

Flash_One
11-23-2007, 03:00 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4783/1002924me9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

Sushi! 905
11-23-2007, 08:11 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee153/dfratm/re-1.jpg

crits?

Flash...I like it, not so much the circle at the top though.
Sen....Pretty tight.
Rast... Its getting there
Annie... Keep it way more simple!
Ekim.. I dont know much bout philly styles but looks preety sick.

einsamkeit
11-23-2007, 08:27 PM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3483/dsc01303ax8.jpg

Crits plz.

-HONE20

Sushi! 905
11-23-2007, 09:03 PM
Lose the quotes and the x inside the O. Also give crits to get crits!

kosher
11-23-2007, 09:07 PM
yea i make it a habit to give crits to about everyone on the page before i post and some people seem to think they're the center of the universe and just want their shit noticed.



http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_3043.jpg

bump for crits...maybe i'll get some this time

einsamkeit
11-23-2007, 09:23 PM
I like the flow,

btw, is that vancity cause i recognize the bird on the bus stop.

munch1
11-23-2007, 10:45 PM
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CCF11232007_00006.jpgcrits

Bets369R
11-23-2007, 10:48 PM
munch i like the bottom marker one, but i would flip the bar on the H around so the line goes up then into a circle insteasd of down

smikoer
11-23-2007, 11:40 PM
munch, the marker one for me too.. just watch the C and the H

messy couple;
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6117/koeronetagyd1.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3599/astrole0.jpg

Pharoah
11-23-2007, 11:50 PM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3483/dsc01303ax8.jpg

Crits plz.

-HONE20

haw
another vancouverite
try to make your letters the same size it will look alot better

munch1
11-24-2007, 12:22 AM
smikoer- looks good like the astro one better

cool thanks

-Leski
11-24-2007, 12:26 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6671/examplepo6.png (http://imageshack.us)

Munch press this button and add your after thoughts then save.
Saves on posts. :)

twisties
11-24-2007, 04:58 AM
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/1131/picture0211mf4.jpg
This word is startin to shit me...I really liked it at first but i just keep hittin the same bumps.

Munch- I like the 2nd marker one..just looks the best out of them all.

5Funerals
11-24-2007, 12:30 PM
Twisties - i really dont mind that last tag at all
Munch - Deffinitely dont make that line go from the C, through the H, and start the O. Also, everyone ever puts one at the end of their tags. You take it a step further by putting a number 1 inside of your O. Its just generic is all. Other than that I like it especially the U and E.

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400006-1.jpg
worked on what other people suggested to me came up with some new ideas as well.

einsamkeit
11-24-2007, 01:29 PM
http://aycu15.webshots.com/image/35214/2003535380528786933_fs.jpg

Crits and help plz ?

kosher
11-24-2007, 03:06 PM
munch, they're alright.
smikoer, i like the o in the first one
twisties, it's starting to look alright just try to move the b up so they all have relatively the same base line and keep them around the same size.
einsamkeit, try to get some flow going on

F3B3S
11-24-2007, 05:04 PM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/IMG_000112212112.jpg

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k314/FEBS_01/442.jpg

F3B3S...;)

MainEvent
11-24-2007, 06:17 PM
febes- shit looks fresh man.
hone- good shit. keep working on with scrap paper and sharpies
rast- stick with the second one down on the left. shows most promise
munch- dopeness, get up with it.
kosher- dunno what that says fam. mayyer?

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski038.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski037.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski036.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski058.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski048.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski043.jpg

cheezit
11-24-2007, 07:44 PM
main one- sick
hone- h looks out of place kinda
rast-i liked all of the tags but the someone crew tag i dunno i just wasnt digging the hearts
now for me
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9466/tagszu5.jpg

MUSEone
11-24-2007, 07:47 PM
Kosher-im liking it, just work on ur j

einsamkeit-try looking for more ways to make it flow better, and make all letters the same case (as in upper or lower)

twisties-feeling it bro, now work on some little add ons and its be dope

5funerals-work on a better R for the first one and forget tha rest

febes-shits fresh

york-2nd one is tha best

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7786/1117071657awj7kt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits?

I needs something, i just dunno wat.....

-Leski
11-24-2007, 08:05 PM
@York. the tall tag is hot, really digging that.
@muse. it needs something over and to the left of the first letter. somthing to add a little weight.

munch1
11-25-2007, 02:12 AM
hone-just add a little style to it... your other letters are simple with a little kick to it so add a little kick to your h

5Funerals
11-25-2007, 02:38 AM
York - the tall one is deffinitely a lot better than the others.

New one that is based off of an old one:
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400008-1.jpg

Kool-Aid Man
11-25-2007, 04:03 AM
its looking better rast changing to rastro? or rastr? i think you should work on your s the most.

Bets369R
11-25-2007, 04:44 AM
Rast work on your R..it kills the flow