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crazea03

11-25-2007, 04:47 AM

here is my handy
crits pls
rast -feeling it
york i agree wit muse second one definite
http://a506.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/73/l_954a6656f8bc32266bd577e9205a6a81.jpg

Bets369R

11-25-2007, 04:51 AM

go a little more simple. cant even really make out the 2 middle letters

5Funerals

11-25-2007, 09:34 AM

Crazea - Its REON right? I like it a lot.

Thanks for the crits everybody. It says rastro and there is a little question mark in the O. Which R kills the flow Bets?

Vagrant

11-25-2007, 03:34 PM

Crazea - Its REON right? I like it a lot.

Thanks for the crits everybody. It says rastro and there is a little question mark in the O. Which R kills the flow Bets?

both.

anemptyswishersweet

11-25-2007, 05:15 PM

crits appreeshed
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2644/image009ce5.jpg

anemptyswishersweet

11-25-2007, 05:18 PM

rotated just for you
http://photos-196.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v151/149/8/1124520196/n1124520196_30084034_6986.jpg

einsamkeit

11-25-2007, 06:49 PM

like everything except the lines under the o

Kool-Aid Man

11-25-2007, 06:57 PM

yeah and on top of the o

larrylove420

11-25-2007, 07:00 PM

crazea03 = fresh
anemptyswishersweet = i would just get ride of the lines over n under the o but still fresh

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5275/lovetagyz4.jpg

Bets369R

11-25-2007, 08:34 PM

Crazea - Its REON right? I like it a lot.

Thanks for the crits everybody. It says rastro and there is a little question mark in the O. Which R kills the flow Bets?

yeah both R's kinda suck...try making the leg of the R come out different instead of strait out and down. use 1 bar for the R instead of 2

Hazex

11-25-2007, 08:48 PM

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1390/tags001rh4.th.jpg (http://img248.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tags001rh4.jpg)
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6674/tags002sv9.th.jpg (http://img80.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tags002sv9.jpg)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2141/tags003te6.th.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tags003te6.jpg)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/997/tags004mi0.th.jpg (http://img248.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tags004mi0.jpg)

Which one u guys could be better with some work on it?

kosher

11-25-2007, 08:50 PM

^ second one has most potential

einsamkeit

11-25-2007, 08:52 PM

I like the 1st one... if you fix your R

Hazex

11-25-2007, 09:03 PM

i think like u kosher i liek the second 1 ncie n simple

d-stroy

11-25-2007, 09:19 PM

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1196046627.jpg

bit.CHEEZ

11-25-2007, 09:45 PM

Ahhh Wtf Wtf Ahhhhh My Eyes Wtf Ahhhh It Fuckin Burns Ahhh U Fuckin Toy Just Killed My Eyes Wtf Ahhh Cant See Hsit Wtf Wtf Ahhh Fuckin Burns Ahhh

larrylove420

11-25-2007, 09:56 PM

Hazex - the 2nd one is dope as fuck. n i would use that one
d-stroy - your tag seems straight to me. i dont see anything wrong with it.

i need help with my tag. im split down the middle with either writin kush or love.
please help. haha

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5166/kushlovegy2.jpg

kosher

11-25-2007, 09:59 PM

write kush. instead of doing your k's with the thing coming down just do them like this (K). make your u's and s's more stylish and use an uppercase h. keep all the letters the same size

letsg0skate

11-25-2007, 10:06 PM

d-stroy - Not a bad start. I think the a is alright. The rest of the letters can use some work, but just keep practicing to see what looks good. Ignore haters like bit-cheez.

Love or Kush - I think love is an alright name I guess it seems like it would be used a lot already but then again every name has been done before. I would say don't connect the l into the o or the v, but that's just me

Haze - The 2nd and 4th look good to me if you just tweak them a little. good work though

bit-cheez you are a toy shut up if you are just gonna double post unnecessary comments that will in no way help him and I don't see you posting your work buddy.

twisties

11-26-2007, 05:49 AM

^ because a number of reasons..

Hazex- I suggest working on your 1st and 2nd tag overal all..they are the ones to me just stuck out as the better ones.

d-stroy- Work on your letter structure overal...Nothing really is flowing..It all looks broken up to me and needs work on what I mentioned.

larry- Change your name from Lover...It's really just..eh...Kosh would be much better for you overal!

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/1180/about1bu8.jpg
Crits always welcomed.

Hazex

11-26-2007, 07:35 AM

about only thing i see wrong with ur tags are the t i tought it was a ugly e beacause of the curley on the bottom but its my opignon and the best of those 1s are last 2 at the bottom

Fube

11-26-2007, 07:57 AM

Ahhh Wtf Wtf Ahhhhh My Eyes Wtf Ahhhh It Fuckin Burns Ahhh U Fuckin Toy Just Killed My Eyes Wtf Ahhh Cant See Hsit Wtf Wtf Ahhh Fuckin Burns Ahhh

hahaha i should delete this but it made me laugh, so im bumping it. lol. :D

undergroundanimal

11-26-2007, 12:18 PM

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus037.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus038.jpg

AT!

11-26-2007, 03:56 PM

[QUOTE=Sushi! 905;927434]http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee153/dfratm/re-1.jpg

crits?

QUOTE]

dont use decoy thats that guy out of gettin up they always steal the gd names

jersOneTIC

11-26-2007, 04:50 PM

just a quick one...
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2163/blutagfk3.jpg

anemptyswishersweet

11-26-2007, 05:06 PM

http://photos-196.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v151/149/8/1124520196/n1124520196_30084034_6986.jpg

hate pushing the obnogs but this needs all the crits that can be juiced

d-stroy

11-26-2007, 05:27 PM

ok this is my attempt at more flow and i guess style also?

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1196119354.jpg

larrylove420

11-26-2007, 05:30 PM

D-stroy - i think you did get more flow. this tag is by far way better than the first one. even though the first one was still nice.

intaout

11-26-2007, 05:59 PM

cease- try not to attach letters, make them all the same size...try all caps or lowers. you kind of have a upper case A thrown in the middle.
Napom- thats pretty sick. just drop the a attached to the p

Construction Dumpsters Are good cause they travel:) kiwi homade...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2216/2067351220_9d9a778d20.jpg

Flash_One

11-26-2007, 06:52 PM

kosher

11-26-2007, 06:55 PM

twisties looks WAAAAY better man. i like the top left one.
undergroundanimal, i can't read the but they look fresh.
decoy second one doesn't look half bad
jers i'm liking it a lot
anemptyswishersweet, i like it just drop the unnecessary stuff
cease, the flow doesn't look good. don't force it

revamped tag. outlined/shadowed in pen so you can see it (highlighter sometimes doesn't turn out in the scanner) now you CAN'T tell my my j looks like a y. i like the last one best. CRITS PLEASE!

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0008-1.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0009-1.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0010-1.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/scan0011-1.jpg

5Funerals

11-26-2007, 08:30 PM

MAYJER - I like the very last one a lot.
ARK - That looks really nice keep rockin that one!

Flash_One

11-26-2007, 09:57 PM

i the middle tag is a fucked up so dont focus on it so much.... other than that advice/crits?
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5367/1002939io7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thanks flashone

done4625

11-26-2007, 10:08 PM

http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff289/done4625/donedrip.jpg

2nd handsytle ive ever done....did it with whiteout..It was only thing i had at the time!
What you guys think?

kosher

11-26-2007, 10:14 PM

Give Crits To Get Them!!

larrylove420

11-26-2007, 11:08 PM

kosher - i think it would be better in a thick as in marker or something drippy. it looks like a highlighter. otherwise it seems straight

intaout - im likin the drippy shit n the tag. i wouldnt change shit.

so far its the really thing that i find that flows. even though it seems typical.
anyone have suggesions how to change it. crits?
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8131/lovetagii4.jpg

ForOhWun

11-27-2007, 08:29 AM

Twistieshttp://xs321.xs.to/xs321/07482/Twistieshelp.JPGMainhttp://xs121.xs.to/xs121/07482/MainHelp.JPGMunchhttp://xs321.xs.to/xs321/07482/munhcvhelp.JPG

ForOhWun

11-27-2007, 08:51 AM

http://xs321.xs.to/xs321/07482/lovetagii4help.JPG

ekimboi1

11-27-2007, 12:46 PM

done - make the letters flow a lil more and i dont think you are ready for drips!
love - that really doesnt flow cus the l,o, and the v are connected but the E is just chillin on the side, i really cant think of any thing about it, just practice alot more i guess..
flash - what does it say? cus the letters are too jumbled, maybe not, get a better pic!

heres some of mine- crits?
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x274/wheeelieboi250/scan0005.jpg

ForOhWun

11-27-2007, 01:31 PM

hope this helpshttp://xs321.xs.to/xs321/07482/bahaha.JPG

ForOhWun

11-27-2007, 01:47 PM

http://xs121.xs.to/xs121/07482/bahaha.JPGI tried fixing it a little

ekimboi1

11-27-2007, 02:30 PM

well you dont know a damn thing about philly wikeds so yea, imma work with that one!

Set17

11-27-2007, 02:38 PM

yeah right now tas is about the only one i could read beginners should keep it simple for a while then try to make it look better

ekimboi1

11-27-2007, 02:43 PM

well my user name is EKIMBOI1, which is actually EKIM BOY 1, so yea you should have been able to read it!is anyone that is giving me crits from philly?

larrylove420

11-27-2007, 03:08 PM

i think munchie's tag is dope how it is.

C-Lurk

11-27-2007, 03:16 PM

well my user name is EKIMBOI1, which is actually EKIM BOY 1, so yea you should have been able to read it!is anyone that is giving me crits from philly?

I'm not from Philly, but i've seen several of them.

I'd say try to clean it up, take out the excess lines. Particularly the K and I, and in between those 2.

nuke0063

11-27-2007, 03:31 PM

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3048/pict0027mo9.jpg

Slushi

11-27-2007, 03:53 PM

make all your letters the same size, and never do triangle arrows again

C-Lurk

11-27-2007, 04:15 PM

make all your letters the same size, and never do triangle arrows again

What he said...

You need a LOT of work...

AOTPs

11-27-2007, 04:26 PM

http://s192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/?action=view&current=fsdh.jpg

working on it let me no wut u think

MAST4

11-27-2007, 08:15 PM

nuke- keep that shit simple man. letters the same size and focus less on extensions and more on basic style in the letters and flow.

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9291/1127071831aey5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
let me know what you think

DistrixInkCo.

11-27-2007, 08:18 PM

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3048/pict0027mo9.jpg
make the letters flow more

the look like mexican gang tags.(no offence ne1)

no Arrows!!!

:)

Kool-Aid Man

11-27-2007, 09:26 PM

nuke i don't think google would make a mistake like that. you're far from god...

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd306/kooleraid/Picture1-6.png

nuke - get rid of the arrows and make letters the same size.

BIGel

11-27-2007, 09:48 PM

yea lose them arrows

new write

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/290513308.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/290513312.jpg

kosher

11-27-2007, 10:14 PM

^ i like it except for the r

Bets369R

11-27-2007, 11:06 PM

Bigel i like them both except the B..well i like the b..but maybe bring the top of it up just a little and lose the extension on the second one..or just do a different extension

Dying to live

11-28-2007, 05:15 AM

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1295/pb190247lj4.jpghttp://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pb190247lj4.jpg

is what that guy ment to post

Run .

11-28-2007, 07:45 AM

Nuke - yeh what everyone sez, arrows and size
bigel - i like
mast 4 - looks arite maybe make your letters straighter

which looks best out of these ? crits ?
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3777/taggg1728x1152864x576ea0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ForOhWun

11-28-2007, 08:01 AM

Big el. Sick. We Have Similar Letters Sometimes (E,L, R). (No im not calling y ou a bit) Love the G Run: Lookin Real Good, Lotta Tential. try no to rush the haNDY so much Nuke. TR%IANGLE ARRROWS? WHAT THE FUCK MAN!

SkuzSCT

11-28-2007, 08:56 AM

Fube

11-28-2007, 09:57 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/11-28-07_0818.jpg

because knowme wanted me to paint the up coming battle and i had some cheap black, this be it mayne!

not really lookin for crits but they are welcome.

cerex89

11-28-2007, 11:46 AM

this is my tag
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/j.jpg

CO_SNAIL

11-28-2007, 12:10 PM

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h221/BHALE1987/ALFIE.jpg
Crits?

South-Pole

11-28-2007, 12:10 PM

it says nens if im not wrong^^,looks nice ,simple an drippy how i like them :P
co-snail,looks good,try making your e in one stroke, don't make that middle bar of your A come back
mines

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/Image061.jpg

AOTPs

11-28-2007, 02:54 PM

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/fsdh.jpg

let me no wut u guys think?

5Funerals

11-28-2007, 06:07 PM

what the hell does that say?

AOTPs

11-28-2007, 06:52 PM

its says aker...an its jus a quick tag got any advice??

AOTPs

11-28-2007, 06:53 PM

an i messed the R up big time

5Funerals

11-28-2007, 06:57 PM

I thoughtt you said there was an H? Its good I just couldnt read it. Whatever that is at the beginning should be mover over to be closer to the rest of the tag other than that lookin dope.

renegade185

11-28-2007, 06:58 PM

aotps, i think he was talkin about my stuff. it says hazmat, and usually i have the h closer, i just messed it up when i did it.

AOTPs

11-28-2007, 07:00 PM

haha yeah man thanx renegade

megaj2

11-28-2007, 08:01 PM

cerex- looks good but fix the first n
bigel- i like the first one but the pointed part of the e doesnt really fit in. but thats just me
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k154/j2even/pics/P1010008.jpg
crits?

AOTPs

11-28-2007, 08:04 PM

mega...its not bad im not felling the G an the M jus seems plain ina way

megaj2

11-28-2007, 08:08 PM

aotps, i think yours would look better without the swirly thing in the a

AOTPs

11-28-2007, 08:11 PM

haha yeah jus a test one...we both work on ours an post it back up haha

lololzheffer

11-28-2007, 08:19 PM

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/handy.jpg
simple really simple and i know the bottom of the k is fuckd

megaj2

11-28-2007, 08:25 PM

^^
its all good but yea fix the k
nice n simple

"Riot"

11-28-2007, 09:00 PM

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/OFB-1.jpg
CRITS?

RECK-nice and simple but fix that k.
MEGA-take your time and fix the letters up a bit.

I SUCK AT tagging with paint as you can see hahah.
new hand?
crits?

Dying to live

11-29-2007, 02:54 AM

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/atgs.gif

lololzheffer

11-29-2007, 06:36 AM

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd199/michaelmiddleton10/atgs.gif

get a new marker and your set.

steps

11-29-2007, 01:26 PM

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee191/stepsgraff/P1010134.jpg

AOTPs

11-29-2007, 02:11 PM

^^^^more style and move it closer..clean it up a bit

AOTPs

11-29-2007, 02:34 PM

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/aker-1.jpg

nekid

11-29-2007, 06:57 PM

some shit.
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/173/f/1/BLACK_PEN_HANDZ_by_dweazy.jpg
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/173/6/5/BLACK_MARKER_HANDS_by_dweazy.jpg
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/173/c/6/FRESH_HANDS_by_dweazy.jpg

einsamkeit

11-29-2007, 08:48 PM

i like it... except the $ signs : ) unless its a play on words... if so i'm not getting it.

megaj2

11-29-2007, 09:42 PM

AOTPs, thats hella better
too bad i didnt get to work on mine

MainEvent

11-29-2007, 09:44 PM

nekid- dope
aotps- ok
steps- wack
akel- dope
riot- mediocre

einsamkeit

11-29-2007, 10:23 PM

http://aycu31.webshots.com/image/34510/2001528878248445419_fs.jpg
Did it in an exchange with this chick i write with.
Crits, and help please.

nekid

11-29-2007, 10:42 PM

nekid- dope
aotps- ok
steps- wack
akel- dope
riot- mediocre

thx, all i practiced was handz all day every day

kosher

11-29-2007, 10:53 PM

dying to live, i like it. it's solid
steps start out by ditching all the add ons, then make sure the letters are the same size and pretty close together and see where that gets you and don't do the T so that it covers the whole thing or so that the bars come down, you can't pull it off
aotps, same crits as steps but i really don't like any of your letters try to find different ways of doing them
nekid i don't like it. i'm not a big fan of phillies so if they are decent then alright that's fine just clean them up, they're messy and i know they're supposed to be messy but like they're messier than they should be
einsamkeit it's good. personally i'd use a different d

DeaNo

11-29-2007, 11:10 PM

Wuzgood i just recently started to create a tag of my own. A bunch of my buddies do it so i thought i would screw around with some lettering and see what i came up with.
tell me what you think. pointers appreciated.
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00044.jpg

kosher

11-29-2007, 11:13 PM

^ no no no no no. i'm telling everyone the same thing "start out by ditching all the add ons, then make sure the letters are the same size and pretty close together and see where that gets you" your style ain't bad. i really like the a. if those are 2 o's i suggest making them the same so as not to confuse the reader.

einsamkeit

11-29-2007, 11:13 PM

you probably want to make everything the same size.... i'm really digging your A

mmmburgers

11-29-2007, 11:14 PM

^^ try to keep all the letters the same size

mmmburgers

11-29-2007, 11:24 PM

well... make your letters as simple as possible
do that for a while
then, when you really start to "feel" the letters
bend them a lil
but ONLY A LITTLE, dont over bend, cause that looks gay
uhh,, yeah

DeaNo

11-29-2007, 11:36 PM

so this is what ive come up with so far .... :/http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00046.jpg

DeaNo

11-30-2007, 12:05 AM

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00049.jpg

syrne

11-30-2007, 12:08 AM

make it simpler

DeaNo

11-30-2007, 12:16 AM

so i changed around the e any thoughts should i change it back?
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00051.jpg

huffer

11-30-2007, 12:21 AM

^^^^mee too, try and make some of the letters connect together see how thath looks like the e connect to the a or the n to the o play with it some.

DeaNo

11-30-2007, 12:26 AM

lil skinnier marker http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00052.jpg

Reason To-Shine

11-30-2007, 12:31 AM

...I think your a is to spread apart... y'know? Try making the top of it swoop further down so the circle part at the bottom touches it...

Rank-oner!

11-30-2007, 12:33 AM

yo havent been on in months due to getting caught so im now posting stuff from earlier on in the year.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/035.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/040.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/058.jpg
and finally my really old one haha
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/121.jpg

huffer

11-30-2007, 12:34 AM

^^im felling thath last one alot.

kosher

11-30-2007, 12:40 AM

i like the a. i think you should lose the k extension

DeaNo

11-30-2007, 12:42 AM

meh gonna sleep peace http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00055.jpg

huffer

11-30-2007, 12:43 AM

ha really i kinda like the top the best

naww the bottom shit is drippy and well structured, there all nice but that is def my favorite. but fuck i need it to be later so i can get off of here and get out and lay some of my own haha.

huffer

11-30-2007, 12:44 AM

pm me with that i can change

it kinda looks like peans now which is to close to penis for me did you try the e to the a? the o looks like shit. and add soem shit like stars, underline, halo, crown fucking somethign its sooo plain right now.

Kool-Aid Man

11-30-2007, 12:48 AM

renk - feeling the silver ones A and N are a little hard to make out though.
deano - not feeling the O connection.

Reason To-Shine

11-30-2007, 12:50 AM

I like what you did with the n and o, making them one...

huffer

11-30-2007, 12:53 AM

^^^you have a bad eye then...good idea( probably cause i suggested it :p) but dident turn out to well.

Rank-oner!

11-30-2007, 12:54 AM

Haha yea those are some mad drips but that K extension really kills it haha

huffer

11-30-2007, 12:56 AM

^^true and the kinda pac-man thing on the left side of it??? what is that.

einsamkeit

11-30-2007, 09:53 AM

http://aycu31.webshots.com/image/34510/2001528878248445419_fs.jpg
Did it in an exchange with this chick i write with.
Crits, and help please.

Bump for crits : )

DeaNo

11-30-2007, 10:39 AM

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/DSC00057.jpg
changed the d around a lil anyone wanna tell me what i can add to make this more complex and where i should add it?

huffer

11-30-2007, 10:42 AM

^^^now its looking good. add some stars on the outside or a halo or somehting

kosher

11-30-2007, 09:37 PM

d and e look good. if you could match make all the other letters that style it would look good. don't like the n, o combination.

new style tag. done in highlighter so i had to outline. decided to give it 3d too.l what do you think? crits please!

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_3069.jpg

lololzheffer

11-30-2007, 10:20 PM

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/2.jpg

more simples critz please!!!!

KOSHER- that flow is so sexy;) go get ups.

Rank-oner!

12-01-2007, 12:40 AM

deano: have you tried capitol letters? I think that the letters in your name would probably look really good like that and might be easier to do.
eimsamkeit: im really feelin that A. haha its simple but really clean lookin
kosher: those letters lookin really nice. i want to see that in just a chisle tip tag.
^^^^zheffer: i like it but i would work on the R a little and maybe try curving the bottom part of the E up a little closer ( just to see how it would look)

5Funerals

12-01-2007, 02:12 AM

Dean - Ever consider writing DEAM cause if you messed around with the extension on the N it would make a really cool m. Its looking very good.

Reck - Work on the R.

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400009-2.jpg

Crits por favor.

PA3K ONE

12-01-2007, 02:22 AM

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1295/pb190247lj4.jpghttp://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pb190247lj4.jpg

is what that guy ment to post

thanks man...so this is my tagg...

coments?

twisties

12-01-2007, 03:48 AM

PA3K ONE - It's alright...Do it in a different colour as fluro yellow is just not good...go with black on paper.

5Funerals- Nice but your t isn't capital....If you are going to do all caps..then do all caps..imo.

kosher- Letters looking good only I really find it hard to read...Don't do it in fluro.

DeaNo - Lose the part on the end of the n and make it a proper O as it just looks like you've added something squiggly to the end of the n and it loses it flow.

Blam!

12-01-2007, 08:01 PM

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/blam.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/blam3.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/blam2.jpg

well i just started tagin not to long ago, and i have had 4 different names, and im trying to stay with this one but im not sure i should or not, plz give me feed back. thanks

Rank-oner!

12-01-2007, 08:34 PM

ehh you need to work on them a lot. i would suggest starting off with really simple lettering and space them evenly dont worry about incorporating and together or anything fancy yet. just keep practicing

Sintakz

12-01-2007, 08:55 PM

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/tektag.jpg

Yea I agree with Rank-oner. Start writing legibly then work on cleaning up negative space and making things look good.

5Funerals

12-01-2007, 10:52 PM

its starting to hit me like duh.

Sintakz - I really dont feel that tag at all. The circles on the ends arent working and neither does the underline with the arrow. The letters are really close together and overlap and just not structured great so its almost impossible to read.

Blam - just do simple and it will come for sure.

Ascendant

12-02-2007, 12:51 AM

Blam- maybe a little simpler, not loving the tipped m. I likethe B on the first and the A on the last. Keep the name.
Takz- didn't like this one much. Ease up on the extra stuff and focus on the letter form. the A shows promise.

"Riot"

12-02-2007, 01:11 AM

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/123213.jpg
Crits?

Bump for crits.

evade

12-02-2007, 03:40 AM

sintaks im not sure if ur one to give advise u stuff aiint lookin so hot compared to blam either your letters seem too straight and akwardly positioned deffinately lose the arrow at the bottom and the circles aswell as the e and put more curve into some of your letters they just dont look good

tempest

12-02-2007, 05:11 AM

dude. sintakz is expressin opinion here not braggin or w/e. that being sed, dint really feel the takz. hard to read. mayb mor curve and less cramping?

DeaNo

12-02-2007, 02:34 PM

this is the first tag i did with my new on the run marker. tell me what you think. what i can change etc. ty.http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/yeo049.jpg

"Riot"

12-02-2007, 02:43 PM

Use a capital D.
Lose the circle thing and the star.

maybe a drippy underline?

Blam!

12-02-2007, 02:54 PM

ya do a D not a d and lose the circle, but all of the letters look like keyboard letter, work on flow? i know i need to too

"Riot"

12-02-2007, 02:56 PM

I like how its nice and simple though.

less is more.

tempest

12-02-2007, 03:53 PM

slim: lose the arrow. the quotes rnt awful tho

anemptyswishersweet

12-02-2007, 05:40 PM

deano: rid of that star and the circle around the letters. work on your flow, try and figure out how maybe you could do that all in one or two strokes, instead of trying to form every letter in multiple pieces.

here's RES. raising every standard. rough exit strategy. on the smooth stone bench at midtown marta station.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4509/resrc7.jpg

Slim08

12-02-2007, 06:52 PM

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9660/img00356ry6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my tag on paper

evade

12-02-2007, 07:39 PM

lose the arrow on the m and the squigilly line or w.e that is up top and dont put the l and i together for now until u get some better letters

Sintakz

12-02-2007, 08:01 PM

I'm digging that RES. Slim I like your tag but yea, lose the arrow on your M.

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow.jpg
I know, I know, lose the arrow. The more I look at it the more I don't like it. This one is really simple, maybe it'll be liked more and I can go from there.

C-Lurk

12-02-2007, 08:05 PM

Lose the arrow, lose the underline on the T, and make it so the handle of your 1 doesn't look like it continues on forever.

letsg0skate

12-02-2007, 08:26 PM

Do a Capital I, and lose the squiggly things above it. Don't put an arrow coming out of the m. The actual letters are lookin alright though, and you will get better with practice.

Blam!

12-02-2007, 09:08 PM

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/karma.jpg

well i have changed names because blam ment nothing to me and karma really does mean some thing to me. plz give me feed back thanks.

mmmburgers

12-02-2007, 09:37 PM

Karma - dont make your letters all boxy, try like, writing them as simple as possible, and make your R look more like a R

lololzheffer

12-02-2007, 09:48 PM

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/reckk-1.jpg

lololzheffer

12-02-2007, 09:49 PM

megaj2

12-02-2007, 10:22 PM

tek- lose the arrow and fix the t
reck- dont connect the c and the k
karma- change your r and make your letters a little closer together
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k154/j2even/pics/P1010017.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k154/j2even/pics/P1010015.jpg
new tag.. i got sick of mega cause i suck at m's. crits?

ay nako!

12-02-2007, 10:44 PM

Sintakz

12-02-2007, 10:46 PM

I'm digging it but the last one's R kinda looks like a B due to the underline.

This one is still kinda the same style cause I like my letters. Made the T and 1 the largest thing so that it is still legible.

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow-1.jpg

megaj2

12-02-2007, 10:48 PM

ay nako- o shit 707 represent haha
and ur pinoy too? haha wow

tek- that ones a lot better

Sintakz

12-02-2007, 11:15 PM

"Riot"

12-02-2007, 11:22 PM

[QUOTE="Riot";934618]http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/123213.jpg
Crits?
[QUOTE]

BUMP for crits.

Sintakz

12-02-2007, 11:23 PM

Looks kinda cool from here, too bad it wasn't a bit closer up though.

evade

12-03-2007, 01:16 AM

sintaks WAYYYYYYYY better i would leave some space inbetween the t and the e and it would be damn good but u dont always need to put the 1 in ur name its pretty much implied

riot lose the extra additions like both sides of the o cuz the right side looks like its kinda crossing urself out and the b but i can see why you do it it just doesn't flow as it should

tempest

12-03-2007, 04:02 AM

sintakz: ur k could use less curve. but dam good improvement all the same

NEKEL1

12-03-2007, 06:09 AM

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow-4.jpg
A Little Bit Of Practice And Fooling Around...
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow-2.jpg
And I Came Up With This. I Don't Like The 1 But Can't Seem To Find A Different Way To Make A 1. Anyone Wanna Make A 1 In Their Tag So I Can Get Some Inspiration?

the tek is lookin ite but for the one maybe u could try and curve the bottom of the one under the tek to underline it. itd give it a bit more style and tie the one into the tag

lololzheffer

12-03-2007, 06:22 AM

tek- thats way better use the last 2.
everyone else- this is a toy tag thread not a fucking friend finder p.m eachother.

ForOhWun

12-03-2007, 09:12 AM

Just cause Sintaks Is an Ink Head Like Me I Help! http://xs122.xs.to/xs122/07491/uploadnow2.JPG

lololzheffer

12-03-2007, 03:06 PM

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/RECKDRIP.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/fcrhrecktruck.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/CANADAFLAGDAY-OHYEAH.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/reckk-1.jpg

DeaNo

12-03-2007, 04:01 PM

so this is my first tag using paint. tell me whatcha think. PEACE.http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/pants062.jpg

mada focka

12-03-2007, 05:37 PM

Deano, definently not bad, especially for your first paint tag. Whatch out when going over people like that tho. i would work on that area between the a and n.

BIGel

12-03-2007, 09:16 PM

reck lose that magnum and upgrade to a thicker nib, nice drips on the first one though..

for the handstyle exchange thread.

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2007/337/8/7/handstyles_of_the_rich_by_bigel.jpg

Blam!

12-03-2007, 09:46 PM

Here are some more tags,

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/blank.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/karma30.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/karma20.jpg

sorry i know not the best pics but feed back plzzz

hazetheone

12-03-2007, 09:49 PM

karma i think you just need to practice and get the feeling of the letter flow

syntaks i alwayse just write one / oner after my tag

Bets369R

12-03-2007, 10:20 PM

Bigel your handy reminds me alot of sabers handy with all the long flowing letter ends. not calling a bite at all, more of a compliment

Kool-Aid Man

12-03-2007, 10:22 PM

yeah sintakz i think it would look better with one not 1...
but what does putting one/oner in your name acctually meen?

Bets369R

12-03-2007, 10:26 PM

one means your the origional writer with that name

oner means you arent in a krew..not that you dont WANT to be..just that you arent.

vowels

12-03-2007, 10:32 PM

so this is my first tag using paint. tell me whatcha think. PEACE.http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc235/deanomacandog/pants062.jpg

try and get it done quick so you don't get those drips. it looks decc though and if you notice that you let out a little too much in one spot just blow upward so the shit stays there.. don't let that fucker drip! aha

calculating infinity

12-04-2007, 01:17 AM

one means your the origional writer with that name

oner means you arent in a krew..not that you dont WANT to be..just that you arent.

or it just flows nicer with the R at the end. it means anything you want it to.
edit: since i hate seeing a newpage with no picture
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/2539/1203071733ty2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
there are some handies

lololzheffer

12-04-2007, 12:38 PM

bigel-thats not a magnum its a mop. just a thinner one.
karma- thats alot better but you still need to work on yoru flow.

Blam!

12-04-2007, 03:19 PM

should i change my a and my m in karma???

hazetheone

12-04-2007, 04:01 PM

you should change the r and a i dont realy remember what the m looks like but dude thats all the letters man think of a name that has more flow unless you realy wanna keep it ...you could spell karma different carmuh carma i guess if the word itsself means something to you

EnvisioN

12-04-2007, 06:36 PM

Here are some tags I just got doing like 30 mins ago, wanted to see what people thought and want some crit on them..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0001-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0003.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0001-2.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0002.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0004.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0003-1.jpg

Like I said, only been doing anykind of graf for 2 weeks, I bought some dollar cans and a rusto the other day, looking to get some cardboard this weekend and thorw down some practice tags and throwies.

Roolete

12-04-2007, 07:07 PM

ew simple that down
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/omc.jpg

lololzheffer

12-04-2007, 08:01 PM

roolete-thoes are siq
envision- you need to get new letters that flow better. and loose thoes stupid zig zag things on the side. wtf are they little hand saws or some shit?

5Funerals

12-04-2007, 08:41 PM

EKO - Just keep working on it. Try it much simple. Write it out neatly and then give it style.
Roolete - my favorite is definitely MEDIAL.

Current handstyle on top. METHODS OF MISCHIEF was just fun to write.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/53400006-2.jpg
Crits?

Muchas Gracias

lololzheffer

12-04-2007, 08:44 PM

5- thats pretty clean...not much to say about it. just i odnt like the i in mischief. and the t in your name...make it the same as the one in mischief. pretty sick tho.

pm me yo.

intaout

12-04-2007, 11:14 PM

^Yes,Envasion= ... To get a solid tag developed it takes most people a year of diff. names and notebooks of practice. Its not a 1 week kind of thing....( oh and just read through threads, you will learn alot that way ((especialy the new to graff thread) )

C-SONE

12-04-2007, 11:24 PM

jawsy

12-05-2007, 01:34 AM

Eko: umm... just practice heaps. its lookin pretty shit
rast thats pretty good. better than your penis tag lol
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/3082/img3711ie5.jpg
crits??

Sintakz

12-05-2007, 01:48 AM

I'm digging that APER just not so much the swirley thing on the R. I'd personally keep it level with the other letters.

jawsy

12-05-2007, 02:06 AM

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/1013/img3718jx2.jpg
better??

beyondyereyes

12-05-2007, 02:09 AM

Aper I would lose the " and the underlines and space the words a little more. It's looking good though.

Envision or Eko just keep it simple.

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/ugzor.jpg

Need practice but anything I should add or change?

jawsy

12-05-2007, 03:15 AM

i dont like your t

AOTPs

12-05-2007, 03:32 PM

sotek:its ok...not feel in the T

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/aker-1.jpg
advice?

AOTPs

12-05-2007, 03:54 PM

thanks sintakz
heres one with all cap.
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/v.jpg

Blam!

12-05-2007, 04:14 PM

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/karma123.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/karma45.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc130/blade20460/karma678.jpg

Sintakz

12-05-2007, 04:56 PM

Aker - I'm digging the top tag. Much better IMO.
Blam - # 5 seems the best. I'm working on a project right now but I'll do a #8 for you when I'm not so busy.

beyondyereyes

12-05-2007, 04:58 PM

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/outtogetya.jpg

Sintakz

12-05-2007, 05:04 PM

Sotek - Your letters are kinda basic which is good when you first start but they don't have much flow. I suggest looking at established writers handstyles and just see how they make their letters and WHY they work together. I could give you a sheet of a "graffiti alphabet" but without knowing why letters work together you'd be no better off than without it. Keep trying though, don't give up.

Sintakz

12-05-2007, 05:22 PM

Just made the tags now. 4 for each. There are some letters I didn't like in them and I found out I'm not so good with M's. Here's a gift from a toy, to toys.

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/8454/img1332qc6.jpg
Here's Karma. I am dissappointed with the lowercase a I made on the second one if you are counting from top left to right.

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/2200/img1333xi8.jpg

Here's AKER. I really enjoyed writing this name. Disregard the star I was just testing out how fat the marker could go. Only thing I didn't like was that the last tag has a lowercase a that looks like a lowercase d.

mmmburgers

12-05-2007, 05:41 PM

yo blam, try not to let your letters be so boxy
like smoothin it all out

beyondyereyes

12-05-2007, 05:47 PM

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/sogay.jpg
it's improving i guess.

sloppy but practice will perfect it.

Fube

12-05-2007, 05:49 PM

Sintakz- if u look at the lower righthand corner of the post u do, theres an icon that ses "edit". this is so u dont have to post twice, if u missed something or it can go in one post u can just put it up so u dont clog up the shit.

Sintakz

12-05-2007, 05:49 PM

Yea the new T helps out a lot. My favorite one is the second one from the left.

@ Fube- Sorry bro I usually use edit but this time around I just did a quick post without even looking at if anyone had posted. My bad.

beyondyereyes

12-05-2007, 05:52 PM

so everyone having problems go on www.dafont.com and bite.

mix, match, and add a little more to it.

Sick!

12-05-2007, 05:53 PM

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/60000000f974ada/1/209/4Kk7CTwEyz_RZc9f2HbIcbYMjJ4j7jk_.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/cGtPFATxsj85wTgjMvhTV1C0xqduB_Gf?referrer=hlnk)
somthing new

Sintakz

12-05-2007, 05:56 PM

I'm guessing your tag is Frost. If so I'm not really feeling this. The F looks like an E and the S needs a bit of work. Not feeling the T and the R is a bit sketchy. Lose the skwiggly line as well. That is for the bigger tag though. The smaller frost is pretty good besides the F and T.

Sick!

12-05-2007, 06:03 PM

thanks gunna get sum shit up tommorow got family issues...
beyond-looks ok try doin it in marker and clean it up
sinatax-work on the "a" especially lowercase ones but other wise its all good

denaaa

12-05-2007, 07:02 PM

some of my stuff i wrote dena anything i should work on
crits?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/hello024.jpg

oh yeah that den near the bottom its a oneliner can anyone help me make an "a" for it please

diabolik

12-05-2007, 07:36 PM

Try to make your letters flow together and try to make them more proportionate and also cut down on the add ons

http://i18.tinypic.com/8etm3hi.jpg

http://i4.tinypic.com/6xubhn8.jpg

Crits?

denaaa

12-05-2007, 07:40 PM

id say space your letters out a little more on the second one first one is pretty nicee the m is a little bit choppy but that was prolly just a mistake

lololzheffer

12-05-2007, 08:24 PM

so everyone having problems go on www.dafont.com and bite.

mix, match, and add a little more to it.

im almost postive i just said that yesterday fagget.
your handys are ugly btw. that t is hurtin and you have NO flow.

on a postive note.
whats better my new handy:
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/reckhandynew.jpg

or my old one:
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/reckk-1.jpg

or even this...its pretty old:
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e154/yoyoblow/handy.jpg

yeah i love simples. tell me witch is best.

lololzheffer

12-05-2007, 08:26 PM

dena the only one thats good is on the right second from the top...the others arnt that great but i like that one....use that.

denaaa

12-05-2007, 08:27 PM

the new one is pretty sick its still simple but has a little more style then the simpler one

do you have any crits for my stuff ^^

lololzheffer

12-05-2007, 08:29 PM

i left critz yoh. just under i double posted cause im an asshole.

diabolik

12-05-2007, 08:44 PM

Try to make your letters flow together and try to make them more proportionate and also cut down on the add ons

http://i18.tinypic.com/8etm3hi.jpg

http://i4.tinypic.com/6xubhn8.jpg

Crits?

Reck definatley go with your old handstyle.

lololzheffer

12-05-2007, 08:49 PM

memz- its missing something. add something cool. but nothing toy yuh know?

anemptyswishersweet

12-05-2007, 08:59 PM

http://s3.amazonaws.com/graffiti/f8931b567dcb0937985116cb0ad71a32_580x270.png
fuck facebook graffiti!

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/451/dsc00039jd0.jpg
kina nasty

lololzheffer

12-05-2007, 09:12 PM

thats pretty tight apok. the only thing i i oculd say is to make all your letters the same size. the o is kidna small but it flows so idk?

anemptyswishersweet

12-05-2007, 10:11 PM

thanks man. and yeah that just how it comes out a lot of the time. i keep a consistent one line, thats my flow technique.

lololzheffer

12-05-2007, 10:35 PM

looks tight but i know what your saying about how it jsut comes out sketchy. fuckin pisses me off.

5Funerals

12-06-2007, 03:46 PM

Diabolik - I like the second one.
Apok - the one with the star in the loop is my favorite.
APER - a while back you had a tag with a curl at the end of the R. I liked it a lot then someone told you to change it and you did and now its not as good. If you like it that way its fine but dont take abosuletely all crits and apply them to your work because in the end its what looks good to you.

MUSEone

12-06-2007, 05:58 PM

http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/8498/1206071621ako6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Nems-like tha top on, but fix ur N a lil.

Crits?

Done w. tha sharpie haha

Kwis

12-06-2007, 08:01 PM

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow-4.jpg
A Little Bit Of Practice And Fooling Around...
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow-2.jpg
And I Came Up With This. I Don't Like The 1 But Can't Seem To Find A Different Way To Make A 1. Anyone Wanna Make A 1 In Their Tag So I Can Get Some Inspiration?

Hey man, I've had this for a while

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9751/tagtu5.th.jpg (http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagtu5.jpg)

Check the T.

Sintakz

12-06-2007, 08:11 PM

Kwis

12-06-2007, 08:18 PM

Lol. PLENTY of writers have had that since before you OR me started using it. That is a classic New York style T. At any rate, sorry for the big picture but I am starting to write a secondary name just to get good with it in case I decide to switch. What do you think about the tag?
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4668/img1335fw1.jpg

Oh word, I've only seen the T one other time and it was in San Franny, but whatevs call me an ass if you want, AND no one told me how mine was!
Sinkaz- Drop the quotes and try to make it flow mo'

lololzheffer

12-06-2007, 08:33 PM

muse-that handy is bangin. flows so good.
sinkaz- you dont need to drop the quoties. just kick a little more flow in the letters. but the letters are really good.

danker17

12-06-2007, 09:35 PM

some scribblezzzzzz
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8993/phdankest17mn6.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/63/otherside17se6.jpg

MainEvent

12-06-2007, 10:22 PM

shits cool man

st_nahpele_egnaro

12-06-2007, 11:46 PM

some recent tagging...
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4104/picture082bi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3383/picture053lt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4026/picture085bm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9310/picture046hj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

KASE2

12-07-2007, 01:19 AM

my boy rites NEMS, ur 1 flow is similiar

Try to make your letters flow together and try to make them more proportionate and also cut down on the add ons

http://i18.tinypic.com/8etm3hi.jpg

http://i4.tinypic.com/6xubhn8.jpg

Crits?

lololzheffer

12-07-2007, 06:35 AM

hi cror!:)- the gren one flows so nice.

"Riot"

12-07-2007, 09:15 PM

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/Mypictures023.jpg
Crits?

EnvisioN

12-07-2007, 10:24 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v343/dpillsbury_dough_boy/scan0001-3.jpg

alright, im back for round 2, realised that I should be writing simples... I like the top left, top right, and bottom left the best... let me know what you think now guys...

lololzheffer

12-07-2007, 10:47 PM

envision-progression. keep it up. just keepsketching out thoes simples.

Linux

12-07-2007, 11:50 PM

Just started, appreciate it if theres no flaming, :D.
http://i8.tinypic.com/81qq0jo.jpg

C&C Please!

Sintakz

12-08-2007, 12:37 AM

I love your screen name, Linux is badass, which distro do you use? As for the name. Um.... EAC ?

Linux

12-08-2007, 12:40 AM

yessir EAC.
Knoptix (boot on cd, for cracking), redhat.

sacwacko

12-08-2007, 12:50 AM

Sintakz

12-08-2007, 12:53 AM

Nice, I use backtrack 2 for my general all purpose hacking/cracking needs. Although BT3 seems nice once it comes out. To make this back on topic, it's ok for a simple except that your AC kinda looks like one letter and it looks kinda like you wrote EN. Try either a different style of A or space the letters out a bit more. For now focus on simple things, style, flow, and cramped letters will come naturally as you progress.

jawsy

12-08-2007, 05:50 AM

anroe

12-08-2007, 01:40 PM

...

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/hands.jpg

AOTPs

12-08-2007, 03:00 PM

^^^^ i like it but take the thing above it out,the line in the A and at the end take that star out

Sintakz

12-08-2007, 03:06 PM

^^^ I second this

desincrustant

12-08-2007, 04:47 PM

^^^ i third this..

denaaa

12-08-2007, 05:12 PM

^^^^ i fourth this

Hoostein

12-08-2007, 05:58 PM

^^^i fifth this

Drakula

12-08-2007, 06:53 PM

I sixth this!

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good320.jpg

So my last handstyle was quite complicated and my friends said they couldnt read it so I thought I would change it.I particularly like it cuz its one line.

lololzheffer

12-08-2007, 11:30 PM

im late. but.... i seventh this!
drakula- you dont belong in his forum. that handys bumpin.

the end

12-09-2007, 03:16 AM

white board scribble scrabble
http://i3.tinypic.com/6z94zya.jpg

anroe

12-09-2007, 07:11 AM

^^ nice

SEZ

12-09-2007, 11:25 AM

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3773/neatlsod0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4190/sign2li6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/3748/pikachufromsezzm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

FidelGastro

12-09-2007, 05:39 PM

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3249/gashandyqm9.jpg

wuchu know about that?

AOTPs

12-09-2007, 06:13 PM

^^^^drippy drippy,im digging it.move the S up a bit i would say,bout its

C-SONE

12-09-2007, 08:27 PM

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1130807.jpg

ONELINER

AOTPs

12-09-2007, 09:23 PM

^^^shits chill and the flares are sick too

lololzheffer

12-09-2007, 09:34 PM

thoes flairs are sexayyy:)

umop.ap!sdn

12-09-2007, 10:05 PM

lololzheffer is a todd and he knows it. nice flairs dude.

beyondyereyes

12-10-2007, 12:38 PM

C-Sone, it's sick but I'm not really into all the " on all four sides. Overdoes it.
Gas, raise the "S" and lose some of the extras such as the halo or underlines. Dope though.

Changing my name. I'm liking this so far. Crits welcome.
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/ghostly.jpg