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revid!
01-29-2008, 11:57 PM
for sureeeee!
haha i always go to do them and end up not liking them.
esp. if your handstyle doesnt flow real good then its hard too.

Cy-anide
01-30-2008, 01:05 AM
i actually like the fish :D but ur letters cud use a lil work , but hey i dont think theres a wrong or right way evryone has there own style i mean cuz i dunno if anyone is from nyc here but if neckface can become well known with his whack hand style then anyone can get up lol

Evasion Of Invasion
01-30-2008, 02:36 AM
Rank im likin it keep it up
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00634.jpg
idea im kickin around anybody got suggestions?

Cy-anide
01-30-2008, 08:47 AM
Rank im likin it keep it up
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00634.jpg
idea im kickin around anybody got suggestions?

i like where this is going :) im just curious how long did this take u? not sure a tag with such detail will be quick enough to write

mxman
01-30-2008, 08:55 AM
well if he had a big calligraphy style pen thing it would fly

Evasion Of Invasion
01-30-2008, 11:15 AM
i plan on using flairs to pull it off

FacedownAssup
01-30-2008, 12:01 PM
you gotta change your name man...
ever heard of ladie sevo??
shes a member on here and shes mad good.
im just tryin to save you some shit.
not tryin to beef

oh shit son i should change that up then...i was afraid something like this would happen..i shall think up soemthing new then it aint that hard

sham
01-30-2008, 12:39 PM
my current handy

i dont tag much
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/IMG_2192.jpg

Jihad
01-30-2008, 09:52 PM
tight bro i like your simples. keep workin' it sham.

kaze!
01-30-2008, 09:56 PM
Rank- That tag is bomb! I'd love to see that on a wall.
Sevo- Get loose with it! It'll be less sketchy. Bring the letters closer and it'll be sick.

I'm getting ready to go out and tag soon with this tag.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/DSC06661.jpg

Crits?

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 09:59 PM
http://a961.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/41/l_0adbda47c2fa0218a67721724484a180.jpg
older soft tag.

Street Smart
01-30-2008, 10:26 PM
kaze - dosnt flow at all, change the e and the R i think
meth - wow you say it says soft, cant even read it..

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 10:31 PM
the s's structure is to smashed togeather to understand it. it looks like a scribble now that i look at it

Street Smart
01-30-2008, 10:43 PM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/l_0adbda47c2fa0218a67721724484a180.jpg

???

kaze!
01-30-2008, 10:44 PM
kaze - dosnt flow at all, change the e and the R i think


Aww, I love the E :(

Street Smart
01-30-2008, 10:48 PM
well then it could work if you change the R and match the style of the S and E

crystalmeth and abortions
01-30-2008, 10:50 PM
http://a193.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/57/l_24068aa6ba0180f90bb177bc052d2320.jpg work in progress

fonone
01-30-2008, 11:36 PM
make the O the same size as the rest and have them all level... ill freestyle one for you.. stay simple lose all arrows and shit

fell free to bit the hell outa this if you want... lol.. not that theres much to bite seeing as the letters are standard but yea.
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8194/screenhunter17zm9.png (http://imageshack.us)

DRIPS!
01-31-2008, 08:48 AM
ahh havent been in the forums for a while, kaze try using a thicker marker to tag a fine point doesnt realy have sex appeal unless you do it realy small. and crystal meth that looks alright i kinda like it.
went bombing in -18c couple nights ago heres a handy i threw up on a lightpost
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4219/hpim4360qu5.jpg
and heres a handy on a bridge
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/8025/hpim4356lu2.jpg

Techkanuck
01-31-2008, 01:43 PM
http://a193.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/57/l_24068aa6ba0180f90bb177bc052d2320.jpg work in progress

maybe it's me but I'm feelin the little o...did it in one of mine...I think little letters can work if the rest is right for it

-GEKS-
01-31-2008, 02:14 PM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/srpinkgreen.jpg
drips and fon- lovin it
sham- u got the idea keep workin
everyone else go simple

Aces One
01-31-2008, 02:36 PM
Drips - thats damn fresh
Gek- thats pretty nice too

im havin trouple makin a nice D...D's fuckin blow....

luke_pjr
01-31-2008, 02:53 PM
anyone thell me if mustone is being used, ive searched it but cant find anything, your helps apreciated

cerex89
01-31-2008, 03:03 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1012.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1011.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1010.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1009.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1008.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1006.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1005.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1004.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1003.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN1002.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0999.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0998.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0997.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0996.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0994.jpg

-GEKS-
01-31-2008, 03:33 PM
okay.
obviously those arent urs, u flicked them in a yard
if u think they are toys, why did u flick them?
if u think they are not toys, why did u post them here?

i think we should try to keep the toy threads to posting ur own pics for crits and critting others. no one wants to crit someone who will never read it or ever hear of this website.

idk just what im thinkin


p.s. dont kno of any legends with must go ahead and do it

luke_pjr
01-31-2008, 04:13 PM
cheers for that geks

Techkanuck
01-31-2008, 04:32 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook.jpg
I know people hate my fish, but i want to work on it somehow, any possible directions?

luke_pjr
01-31-2008, 05:09 PM
crits?

Cy-anide
01-31-2008, 06:06 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture65.jpg (http://%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture65.jpg%5B/IMG%5D)
I know people hate my fish, but i want to work on it somehow, any possible directions?

yoo i love the fish keep at it

crystalmeth and abortions
01-31-2008, 06:28 PM
make the O the same size as the rest and have them all level... ill freestyle one for you.. stay simple lose all arrows and shit

fell free to bit the hell outa this if you want... lol.. not that theres much to bite seeing as the letters are standard but yea.
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8194/screenhunter17zm9.png (http://imageshack.us)


hell yea man. thats pretty dope. thanks

EP1C
01-31-2008, 07:02 PM
Tech- I kind of like the fish. It seems like it would be a nice stencil also.

Some of my own.
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7959/dscn0874kg9.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3176/dscn0875lj9.jpg
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8725/dscn0876ve6.jpg

DEAR
01-31-2008, 07:07 PM
practise practise
i used to be like that but just sketch the fuck out of every peice of paper that comes by you draw on everything and youll get better
try to hold those chisel tips so its flat

Maste
01-31-2008, 07:20 PM
gah i still cant do goo chisel tip tags but i like this one..done with a skinnier paint marker
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6904/mastetagqp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
that was how my tag was about a month ago. its progressed but i normally dont tag thing at home... so, i dont have any more pictures...ill try to get a newer one up soon

so i got bored so i did a few on some slaps
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7545/masteslapsla0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

KASE2
01-31-2008, 08:56 PM
ALL of tha 1's above me on this page need 2 b worked on badly, sry no h8 (wuld giv crits if i knew wat 2 say) :)

cerex89
01-31-2008, 09:19 PM
okay.
obviously those arent urs, u flicked them in a yard
if u think they are toys, why did u flick them?
if u think they are not toys, why did u post them here?

i think we should try to keep the toy threads to posting ur own pics for crits and critting others. no one wants to crit someone who will never read it or ever hear of this website.

idk just what im thinkin


p.s. dont kno of any legends with must go ahead and do it

i didnt put and explanation on the post but i put them so people get inspired

unsuccsessfull
01-31-2008, 10:22 PM
shittie frieght tag

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/103_0950.jpg

stupid wallmart paint

overdue
01-31-2008, 11:07 PM
unsuccesful- hella nice
maste- good
ideel- practice simples
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj024.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj023.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj010.jpg

Street Smart
02-01-2008, 01:14 AM
last ones nice due

Rank-oner!
02-01-2008, 02:06 AM
.

silentchaos14
02-01-2008, 02:11 AM
yeah that last one is nice, would be better if there was more pressure or darker colour.

Rank-oner!
02-01-2008, 02:24 AM
Due: bottom ones ill
un successfull: i think its pretty good
maste: top one is lookin pretty good

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newwewew003.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newwewew005.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newwewew007.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newwewew008.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newwewew009.jpg

fonone
02-01-2008, 02:48 AM
nah that fish is a mad character.. change the X to a 0 and yea and start more complex ones with tounges and shit coming out. would be sweet.


hell yea man. thats pretty dope. thanks

nps just stick with simples for now :). simples arent toy its gettig ahead of yourself with handstyles thats toy. same as pieces when simples are done well they can look awesome.

Street Smart
02-01-2008, 03:23 AM
yeah just do the opposite of what this guy says to do..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HUkC3g9A9VU

Techkanuck
02-01-2008, 11:11 AM
nah that fish is a mad character.. change the X to a 0 and yea and start more complex ones with tounges and shit coming out. would be sweet.



nps just stick with simples for now :). simples arent toy its gettig ahead of yourself with handstyles thats toy. same as pieces when simples are done well they can look awesome.
Tried to use the O instead of an X but it's not as nice, maybe once i get more flavor to it it'll be better with the O

fonone
02-01-2008, 11:53 AM
ah yea fair enough,

roa
02-01-2008, 05:51 PM
http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii222/roa613/yknow005.jpg

mmmburgers
02-01-2008, 06:27 PM
rank: love your handstyles man, they smexy

Rank-oner!
02-01-2008, 06:34 PM
haha thanks man i really appreciate that

MUSEone
02-01-2008, 07:10 PM
shittie frieght tag

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/103_0950.jpg

stupid wallmart paint

Looks dope to me. Wat tip did u use?

oakstr1
02-01-2008, 07:25 PM
rank1- i like your tag a shit load.(all besides the third one down)
unsuccsessfull - seems straight to me.

i know it needs work, but anyone got anything to say bout it?
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/67/oakstrzn4.jpg

SAID
02-01-2008, 07:26 PM
add some more straight lines and peaks at some places

Phoenix-Graff
02-01-2008, 11:18 PM
Basically what Im working with so far...

I write Nerns

Any suggestions on what I should change, add, or try?

7thIncision
02-01-2008, 11:54 PM
youre on the right track, keep it simple until you can tweak your letters enough, spend less time working on the layering the yellow/black.

try resizing your pics so they're bigger. its too annoying to click each pic to enlarge it. but not too big. ie: museone's bump.

doomsday.718
02-02-2008, 06:36 AM
rank those r illin............neone kno how to do nething with z ...............hard letter

STAR01
02-02-2008, 09:10 AM
RankOner is so love your tag i think its really good

i need a lot of help on my one i guess just started with a new name YENA i guess i like the tag on the upperleft best but i don't know what N i should use there please help
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/492/picture0003ii9.jpg

Phoenix-Graff
02-02-2008, 09:23 AM
alright thanks man

I'll work on it

remos
02-02-2008, 12:24 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/940/remos12mn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ignore the bad tags in the bottom i know there bad

Cin123
02-02-2008, 12:26 PM
pgraff- post some bigger flicks so that ppl can crit u more
and also i think u got the same problem as me, try not to make the lines jagged and work on your hand control make it not as sketch

j-f
02-02-2008, 12:30 PM
remos looks sick jus a lil sloppy

EP1C
02-02-2008, 01:49 PM
Remos that flows really well.

Mine is pretty much the opposite.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2729/dscn0883fl4.jpg

Rook.
02-02-2008, 02:09 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/628/testnq4.th.jpg (http://img295.imageshack.us/my.php?image=testnq4.jpg)

I just go into writing and i was hoping you guys could give me some tips about my tag.

Cy-anide
02-02-2008, 02:36 PM
mean drips

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/Partyness172.jpg

STAR01
02-02-2008, 02:43 PM
RankOner is so love your tag i think its really good

i need a lot of help on my one i guess just started with a new name YENA i guess i like the tag on the upperleft best but i don't know what N i should use there please help
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/492/picture0003ii9.jpg
sorry to bump but i didnt get any crits on this

Cy-anide
02-02-2008, 02:45 PM
star- its good i think u shud try a thicker marker though :)

unsuccsessfull
02-02-2008, 03:16 PM
Looks dope to me. Wat tip did u use?

ny fat.

roof hit from last night

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1681.jpg

the end
02-02-2008, 03:28 PM
does that say ARSOL?

unsuccsessfull
02-02-2008, 03:29 PM
resol

the end
02-02-2008, 03:32 PM
yea yea, thats what i thought it was suppose to be but unless i look hard enough it looks like it begins with AR... though i can see the RE better now.

what was throing me off was the top of the E how it flares since it isnt a very solid connection. i thought that part was like some dot for style

unsuccsessfull
02-02-2008, 03:35 PM
full picture of the spot

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1682.jpg

remos
02-02-2008, 04:26 PM
full picture of the spot

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1682.jpg

thats a dope spot you should do like a throw or something up there
sick all the same tho

lolque?
02-02-2008, 05:50 PM
star01 - dont force urself to connect all ur letters, it looks almost like normal cursive stuff.
remos-liking it.
ep1c-work on the letter structure, and make em all the same size
rook.-make all the letters the same size, work on the structure.
cy-anide-digging that shit, nice drips too.

heres mine:http://i258.photobucket.com/albums/hh277/lolque/DSCF4576.jpg
crits please.

SAID
02-02-2008, 06:36 PM
try to add some flow like spread it out abit and lean your letters

lolque?
02-02-2008, 06:44 PM
what do you mean lean my letters ?

SAID
02-02-2008, 06:46 PM
instead of them being upright, you lean them back or something.
whatever you feel comfortable with

lolque?
02-02-2008, 07:34 PM
so, i reworked it.http://i258.photobucket.com/albums/hh277/lolque/DSCF4577.jpg
crits plz

Street Smart
02-02-2008, 10:00 PM
loose the extention, use simple letters.

kase121
02-02-2008, 10:24 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo179.jpg

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo180.jpg

critics/help please, i suck at handstyles

Animal
02-02-2008, 10:27 PM
Kase- those look nice, only i would fix the tops of the B's to where they dont stick so far off the top.
the science looks ill as hell though.

kase121
02-02-2008, 10:33 PM
thanks man

Animal
02-02-2008, 10:40 PM
not a prob.

kase121
02-02-2008, 10:49 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo181.jpg

random words around my room

smikoer
02-03-2008, 02:18 AM
lolque; I wanna see a simple =O
kase121; i like the ziggy, keep it up

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2627/ko3roi0.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7546/koreuw3.jpg

Run .
02-03-2008, 03:30 AM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5004/img7222600x400zx0.jpg
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/529/img72241728x1152oa4.jpg

overdue
02-03-2008, 12:21 PM
smikoer -looks good, work on the k
run- that first one is fire
kase121- looks good
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj038.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj043.jpg

Techkanuck
02-03-2008, 02:01 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture76.jpg

Tryin to make the fish a little more useable

AEK
02-03-2008, 02:41 PM
critz?

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/aek_2007_/STA60064.jpg

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/aek_2007_/STA60065.jpg

Rank-oner!
02-03-2008, 02:53 PM
Unsuccessfull: you got up there and didnt do a throw or simple or anything???? nice ups man but you should have done more.
Run : not feelin the pink one but you've got a nice handy
Due: niceee

AEK
02-03-2008, 03:32 PM
critz?

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/aek_2007_/STA60064.jpg

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/aek_2007_/STA60065.jpg

bump last post on the last page

remos
02-03-2008, 03:33 PM
lookin pretty sick
i think its a little sloppy

AEK
02-03-2008, 03:41 PM
wat bits are sloppy or all of of it?

Evasion Of Invasion
02-03-2008, 05:25 PM
Jels make ur letters all more simple except ur "L" and drop it down to underline the last half of ur tag
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00644.jpg
evade on the left

remos
02-03-2008, 08:31 PM
those characs are sick!

"Riot"
02-03-2008, 09:38 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/JAKE030.jpg

overdue
02-03-2008, 09:52 PM
waiting for the bus.....
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj049.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj048.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj047.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj046.jpg
riot- like it
evasion- dpe karaks not bad either
aek- its alright could be better.. lose the swirly shit

"Riot"
02-03-2008, 09:59 PM
i like the d.
its realllyyy plain.

do something neato with the u and e=]

Techkanuck
02-04-2008, 12:25 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture79.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture81.jpg
Working on something new

Due- Man the color's are always rich as fuck, drips are always hot, what'd you use on the trash can?

Riot, the bottom one is sick

JEDI-MASTER
02-04-2008, 04:47 AM
shit scanner but heres sum pen tags, lil sample of all my different hands right now sum turned out better n others, threw a few wickets n there and tried a wicked (2diff things)
enuff babble here ya go
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi080.jpg

Jesta
02-04-2008, 10:29 AM
Only in pen cos I've got fuck all markers right now. Which do you reckon is the best? Any crits welcome.

http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee251/jemmison/SP_A0186.jpg

Dank21
02-04-2008, 12:07 PM
Here's my newest tag, how does it look? I know it's pretty simple.
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8549/tagcopyoh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Cause816
02-04-2008, 01:57 PM
Check it tell me what you think? (did it for a friend. not what i write)

remos
02-04-2008, 02:22 PM
im really liken those tags doe

xHWKxsTuDr808
02-04-2008, 02:40 PM
im not sure wich one to keep "oops" or "studr" i chose studr cus i speak with a "studder and i chose oops becuase im forgetfull.
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e46/chargerkd/008-4.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e46/chargerkd/007-3.jpg

Techkanuck
02-04-2008, 05:02 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture83.jpg

Something I'm tryin

808- Studr seems like a better way to go, more possibilities

Dank-nice and clean

Jesta- I like em, maybe a little smaller extensions and dot on the I, or make it more unique..idk?

thesilentvandal
02-04-2008, 07:30 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/dckdrips.jpg

Cliff
02-04-2008, 07:39 PM
Nice due mad clean. what did you write it with?

overdue
02-04-2008, 08:08 PM
wood craft- gold
ink in mop- black
krink- red

fonone
02-05-2008, 07:42 AM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5004/img7222600x400zx0.jpg
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/529/img72241728x1152oa4.jpg

wow.. too many extensions and shit within the word.. slow it all down

MARVY
02-05-2008, 09:21 AM
so, i was diggin theem, especially the 2nd pic

-Ark-
02-05-2008, 04:19 PM
So, my hand is like, fucking terrible. Check it. Sorry about the flash on the camera.
Any crits, comments, suggestions, etc. will be greatly appreciated.
Peace.

Blam!
02-05-2008, 04:26 PM
every thing is leaning to the left side, and get the arrow out of there, ARK, and put the quotes up higher.

-Ark-
02-05-2008, 04:38 PM
Thanks, Blam. Any tips on how to add a little flair to my handstyle? It just seems so plain. Bleh.

Blam!
02-05-2008, 04:42 PM
np man just stay at it, just keep drawing different way you could do your tag on papper, like diff styles n shit.

MARVY
02-05-2008, 05:25 PM
^^nice mike giant avatar!^^

jvillebboy
02-05-2008, 05:34 PM
heres a tagish thing. lol.

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2270/0205081331vs6.jpg

remos
02-05-2008, 06:49 PM
thats pretty sick

h!de7
02-05-2008, 06:56 PM
i know this is the toy section, but theres some dank stuff on here.

SenTheFirst
02-05-2008, 08:25 PM
dank?
not this thread. it needs help

i dont even know where to start crit'ing..

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/sen1.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/sen2.jpg

Dank21
02-05-2008, 09:03 PM
^^Sick style man

Here's my newest tag, how does it look? I know it's pretty simple.
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8549/tagcopyoh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bump:D
Any suggestions/comments?

Merga
02-05-2008, 09:12 PM
i'd loose the quotes, and that weird extension-thing on the end of the k. keep working on it. its not too bad, just simple. but simple is good.
also, you used "condone" wrong in ur sig

oh yea and senthefirst, thats sick.

Thrice
02-05-2008, 09:24 PM
Crit please
http://i30.tinypic.com/jip287.jpg

rocketeer
02-06-2008, 01:24 AM
Here's my tag, recently changed names because I couldn't make my old one look good.

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg238/rocketeer12/PICT0025.jpg

Can't decide between NTeK or MTeK. Which one do you like better? I like the upper right-most tag the best (with the dots). Crits please!

Sintakz
02-06-2008, 01:43 AM
Tech? It looks like shit to be quite honest work on simple letters first, the T needs MAJOR work, try not to let your letters blend with each other like the ech, and make the c and h separate entities.

N/MTek (lol lots of people are starting to write Tek now, good thing I might soon jump off the band wagon) the E looks ok, lose that long ass tail on the K though the extension looks wack. Space your letters out a bit more they are all just kinda.... smooshed. Oh, and welcome to Bombingscience.

remos
02-06-2008, 10:01 AM
Crit please
http://i30.tinypic.com/jip287.jpg

try to make the letters not cross eachother
i used to do that but it dosent look to good cuz your basically crossing your own stuff
try a few other styles

Thrice
02-06-2008, 10:14 AM
ya no one seems to like my bend style, i'll post my other style.
http://i29.tinypic.com/300dw11.jpg
took it in the dark with my webcam on my mac, created a sick effect if you ask me. CRIT PLEASE

7thIncision
02-06-2008, 02:06 PM
Rocketeer/Mteck: Bro.. the only thing going for that tag is the T. Now i could be like everyone else and say go simple, write MTECK over and over until your hands bleed.
But that always sucks to hear.
Dont weave your letters together so much.. Space em out. Dont curve your K around, try kicking the end out a little more.
Try something like this:
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-71730.jpg
Go for an underline instead of attaching it to the bottom of the k, your E is okay for the time being.

Thrice/Tech: Ditch the T extending over the entire word.. and get those quotes down they're not supposed to be up in fucken outer space.. try putting the left pair on the left side, close to the T, under the top. the right, put it about the same height on the other side. The C and H are okay, but the E looks like 4th grade attempt at hand writing.. try a lower case?


So i havent posted anything in a long as time, so i felt the need to put long ass crit.
For some reason my shit camera made it look like i put a silver dropshadow thing under it. i didnt.

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-70931.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-70509.jpg

Any crit boys and girls?

remos
02-06-2008, 02:10 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6227/remostagtb7.png (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

7thIncision
02-06-2008, 02:17 PM
Remos --

its a toy forum, give crits to get them.
How many times does this have to be said before everyone actually gets it?

Thrice
02-06-2008, 02:20 PM
i'd give crit on tags....if the tags i were criting weren't better than mine.

hazetheone
02-06-2008, 05:36 PM
dank?
not this thread. it needs help

i dont even know where to start crit'ing..

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/sen1.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/sen2.jpg

did you finaly get a new marker or is that a tablet

Dying to live
02-06-2008, 05:38 PM
its photoshop

bloom
02-06-2008, 06:30 PM
here are my handstyles..

Thrice
02-06-2008, 09:14 PM
Bloom, the underline extension on the top one goes out too far from the letters.
Here is mine, crit please
http://i29.tinypic.com/300dw11.jpg

bloom
02-06-2008, 09:28 PM
lol didn't notice that lol.. but just your style man your letters dont flow with each other

Thrice
02-06-2008, 09:43 PM
ya im having trouble with that, got any pointers? I want to keep that T, im loving it.

bloom
02-06-2008, 09:48 PM
Just keep trying all your other letters with a different style.. when i first was doing handstyles it took me like a good 2 months to come up with something good looking.. If your good at cursive and you have clean lines then I would recommend doing that.. but instead of just doing regular cursive add your own features to your letters..

fonone
02-07-2008, 01:33 AM
true that^ one liners also help add "flow" to a word.. though make sure the letters are all the same style.. will kinda fucked if they arent

bloom
02-07-2008, 01:39 AM
true that^ one liners also help add "flow" to a word.. though make sure the letters are all the same style.. will kinda fucked if they arent

yea thats why i write one liners becuase im good at them.. They look great if you know how to do them right.. they're quick and good looking..

Techkanuck
02-07-2008, 02:11 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture102.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture103.jpg

My new flow, somehow I gotta try to work this

Thrice- Maybe move the H down and change it up a lil and it'd work out?

mxman
02-07-2008, 06:53 AM
dank?
not this thread. it needs help

i dont even know where to start crit'ing..

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/sen1.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/sen2.jpg



photoshop + writing tablet or calig marker/pen? please explain.

twisties
02-07-2008, 07:16 AM
SenTheFirst- That was done in PS or Illustrator? Just looks too clean for a scan.
Thrice- It doesn't flow together..Keep trying different ways of drawing the letters to get the flow.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/set_0ne/Picture_0251.jpg

rsakens
02-07-2008, 09:01 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00013-2.jpg?t=1202396333
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00077-2.jpg?t=1202396351
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00082-2.jpg?t=1202396373
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00009-4.jpg?t=1202396417
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00080-1.jpg?t=1202396506

SenTheFirst
02-07-2008, 09:12 AM
photoshop + writing tablet or calig marker/pen? please explain.

wacom tablet and photoshop


buncha exchanges

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/brazer.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/munk.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/shake.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/akel.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/seru.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/exc.jpg

bloom
02-07-2008, 01:33 PM
its photoshop

Yea you can totally tell..

Serv-two
02-07-2008, 01:45 PM
Tech- thats a fine hand style you got there, flows very well

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7655/handstylepf1.jpg
I need help :(

-Ark-
02-07-2008, 01:56 PM
Serv: That shit looks tight. Maybe move the R a little closer to the E.

I took the advice I got from this topic and played around with it a little, and I think my handstyle got slightly better.
Check it.
Again, crits, comments, tips, etc. are greatly appreciated, cuz I have one of the worst handstyles in this topic.

7thIncision
02-07-2008, 02:23 PM
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-70931.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-70509.jpg

Any crit boys and girls?

bump that shitt cause i gave mad crit and got NONE.
Serv- Take the Random line off your E and separate the exclamation from the V.

*edit*
Ark - the pic is too small to make anything out, but from the looks of it your letters are a bit too sharp.. your quotes are to big and high up.

SenTheFirst
02-07-2008, 02:26 PM
something for my friend.

i put a watermark on it b/c i know he tries to claim my shit, people told me. haha claim this

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/freespeech.jpg

Techkanuck
02-07-2008, 02:59 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture102.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture103.jpg

My new flow, somehow I gotta try to work this

Thrice- Maybe move the H down and change it up a lil and it'd work out?

BUMP

Sen,I really like the flow and stuff, tablet or ball mouse.

Thrice
02-07-2008, 03:03 PM
i like it man, the top one looks like it has a gradient.

Techkanuck
02-07-2008, 03:12 PM
used a Pilot Gold Marker, looks amazing on walls as well.

Blam!
02-07-2008, 03:19 PM
nice graber.

bloom
02-07-2008, 03:26 PM
Originally Posted by 7thIncision

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-70931.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s22/Sake7/2008-02-06-70509.jpg

Any crit boys and girls?[/QUOTE]

You got some nice flow with your letters.. The only thing i would change is the "A" on the end on the last one, or is that a 1?

Thrice
02-07-2008, 03:32 PM
not sure about the extension on the E with the top one.
Does this have more flow?
http://i26.tinypic.com/9zx2t4.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/2emfxn7.jpg

Cin123
02-07-2008, 04:01 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/007-1.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/006-1.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/005-1.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/004-1.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/003-1.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/002-1.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/001-9.jpg
me and tezm

7thIncision
02-07-2008, 04:07 PM
Originally Posted by 7thIncision


You got some nice flow with your letters.. The only thing i would change is the "A" on the end on the last one, or is that a 1?

Its a 1. I dont really know what to do with it to bring some more to the right side of it. it looks wierd to just cut it off, almost too boxy

thrice - Lose the C crossing though the H, thats madd gay.

Cin123 - dont like the symetrical one... Tezm's lasttag is whack.. but the other two are pretty sweet.

fonone
02-07-2008, 04:22 PM
nah cin i like the symetrical one, seems nice and original. keep it up

bloom
02-07-2008, 04:51 PM
Its a 1. I dont really know what to do with it to bring some more to the right side of it. it looks wierd to just cut it off, almost too boxy

thrice - Lose the C crossing though the H, thats madd gay.

Cin123 - dont like the symetrical one... Tezm's lasttag is whack.. but the other two are pretty sweet.

Hey well just cut it off and post another pic and we shall see what people say about it. how about that??

Blam!
02-07-2008, 05:00 PM
Big ups to every one on this page.

fonone
02-07-2008, 05:14 PM
some ones i did the other night...
you cant see the "n" on this one, couldnt get far enough back to take the pic
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/7933/feb0773br1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just a quickie, had cars coming towards me so had to be fast
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5035/feb0774jj8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5035/feb0774jj8.dc504983b2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=523&i=feb0774jj8.jpg)

-Ark-
02-07-2008, 05:31 PM
Thanks for the crits, 7th. Just so ya know, if you click the pic it'll get bigger.

@fonone: I'm not feelin' the K in the first pic. Looks too much like an R. Also, the C in the first pic is a lil' squished, which makes it look like an A. Looks pretty good other than that.

fonone
02-07-2008, 06:00 PM
ahh the C is an I haha, i just didnt but the dot on top, thanks for the crits though ill have to look out for that

tech i like that handstyle, flows good but maybe change the A from going to a point to beng more like an upside down U with the middle bar? might suite the rest of the letters better? idk worth a try

-Ark-
02-07-2008, 06:03 PM
Oh, I gotcha. I guess if you toned down the extension from the I to the R, it wouldn't look like a C as much.

Techkanuck
02-07-2008, 06:27 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture107.jpg

Little dif A, prisma is drying out too

Rek- I like the second R without the beginning extension though

Cin- I like the second one in yellow more then the symmetrical ones. though the C should have more of a gap i think.

the end
02-07-2008, 07:14 PM
some door, some week ago
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/2034/indiodooraj2.jpg
some box, some days ago. homie trom is up on that too, he also wrote the o'shit
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5820/sagebrushboxze8.jpg
some wall, last night :)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5320/sagebrushwallvw2.jpg

nova-902
02-07-2008, 07:53 PM
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/tags/Novatag25.jpg

Seca:
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/tags/Secatag02.jpg

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/tags/Novatag17.jpg

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/tags/Novatag09.jpg

rsakens
02-07-2008, 08:55 PM
yo nova pure g isnt working today so here is your exchange sketch
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00091-2.jpg?t=1202439338

FABLE IR CRU
02-08-2008, 05:36 PM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tag001.jpg

Thrice
02-08-2008, 06:16 PM
i love that dude, nice.

FABLE IR CRU
02-08-2008, 06:30 PM
i love that dude, nice.

If your talking to me then thanks. simple tags are the best

Merga
02-08-2008, 09:29 PM
yea, thats real nice. i like simple tags alot too.
here's the only pic i could get.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/2125/jabtag1dh3.jpg

j-f
02-08-2008, 09:59 PM
yea, thats real nice. i like simple tags alot too.
here's the only pic i could get.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/2125/jabtag1dh3.jpg

that needs a bit of work. shouldnt be out on the streets yet.

SenTheFirst
02-08-2008, 10:15 PM
fable: idk about the curl thing
jab: its hard to make square letters look steezy when you just start

exchanges

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/swore.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/foam.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/proper.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/teze.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/arsenic.jpg

Merga
02-08-2008, 11:03 PM
alright, thanks for the crits
Senthefirst- dig the style

the end
02-08-2008, 11:10 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5320/sagebrushwallvw2.jpg

FABLE IR CRU
02-08-2008, 11:45 PM
yea, thats real nice. i like simple tags alot too.
here's the only pic i could get.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/2125/jabtag1dh3.jpg

Jus work on the J & bring the letters a little closer together & it would look good

the end
02-09-2008, 12:43 AM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/10/maker1lineip8.jpg
1 line for homie

FABLE IR CRU
02-09-2008, 01:05 AM
Which E should i use then & SEN if u want to do an exchange then here u go..

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tag001.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tagz004.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tagz002.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tagz001.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tagz005.jpg

blunttokes
02-09-2008, 01:27 AM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/1909/1003463il1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7345/1003471yd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2245/1003474lo3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
says roal oe in etch but the window was wet as shit wen i flicked it....
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8398/1003489wd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Dying to live
02-09-2008, 02:57 AM
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=ceL7NYkVsaU

Merga
02-09-2008, 04:36 PM
Fable - i dig the 1st and 2nd one, 3rd e, not so much.

j-f
02-09-2008, 04:51 PM
roal i think u should work on the 'L' a bit

mistikk
02-09-2008, 05:50 PM
<a href="http://s240.photobucket.com/albums/ff213/kingclick9/?action=view&current=graff082.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff213/kingclick9/graff082.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

mistikk
02-09-2008, 05:51 PM
http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff213/kingclick9/graff082.jpg

rocketeer
02-09-2008, 07:13 PM
fable, not feelin' the capital E with the long extension.

of all of them i like this one the most
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/tagz004.jpg

j-f
02-09-2008, 07:27 PM
y do ppl tag the snow i dont get it seems like a waste if u ask me... wont last longer than a coupla days

bloom
02-09-2008, 09:52 PM
y do ppl tag the snow i dont get it seems like a waste if u ask me... wont last longer than a coupla days

too true.

anemptyswishersweet
02-09-2008, 10:42 PM
fable work on your l
roal work on your r and your can control on that paint tag , some of your other ones are lookin ill tho
jab make your J look like the rest of that tag, and add a star or some shit is just my recommendation
sen the first, shit is fly as a mothafuckuh

and my shit
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/834/image006dm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

twisties
02-09-2008, 11:38 PM
Cram- I like your style but imo lose the :'s and the underlines..otherwise nice and easy to read and clean.

anemptyswishersweet
02-09-2008, 11:47 PM
thanks breh i just started writin this, once i came up with it shit just rung like a clock

SenTheFirst
02-10-2008, 03:03 AM
cram: i like the one without the dots better

a battle, finally got paper

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/battle.jpg

SEZ
02-10-2008, 09:46 AM
love your handstyles sen

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/576/eykssignaturewz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AZTEKA
02-10-2008, 12:56 PM
For a battle but what yall think.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/3517/02100ib0.jpg

Dying to live
02-10-2008, 02:36 PM
love your handstyles sen

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/576/eykssignaturewz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump

rocketeer
02-10-2008, 03:09 PM
sen, this might have been asked already but what are you using to write? stylus? what program do you use if you use a stylus?


btw, fresh. how long have you been working on your handstyle?

SenTheFirst
02-10-2008, 08:23 PM
thanks guys

that one is paper and a black prisma

but for my other things i used a wacom tablet and photoshop

been writing about 6 months

Blam!
02-10-2008, 08:29 PM
ya sen that prity dope man.

bloom
02-10-2008, 08:37 PM
For a battle but what yall think.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/3517/02100ib0.jpg

i like your style, its really creative.. it would look way fresh if it were cleaner

j-f
02-10-2008, 09:06 PM
AZTEKA looks sick have u tried makin it a lil thicker? jus a thot

rsakens
02-10-2008, 09:26 PM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5320/sagebrushwallvw2.jpg

that tester is nice
keep tat style up bro...

einsamkeit
02-10-2008, 09:28 PM
i agree... but the HBK needs some work.

j-f
02-10-2008, 09:31 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v141/jfrule16/jayt.jpg
any crits suggestions?

done4625
02-10-2008, 09:37 PM
http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff289/done4625/new%20stuff/GCSK.jpg

taggin this was hard but i got it done! to many people

Thrice
02-10-2008, 09:56 PM
So i write tech and this is a list of some letters im trying to use, what do you guys think? Let me know if im missing a letter(s) to create flow, im really trying to make something work with my T's.
http://i25.tinypic.com/oab58l.jpg

j-f
02-10-2008, 10:03 PM
tech im guessing ur trying to make ur handstyle kinda curvy like mare?

if u are sick..

but some of those curves arent working i think the flow might suffer a bit

Thrice
02-10-2008, 10:07 PM
What do you think of the T's?
Thanks, BTW.

j-f
02-10-2008, 10:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v141/jfrule16/tech.jpg

sry for bad quality but how bout something kind like this

rocketeer
02-11-2008, 12:31 AM
made one for ya, not sure if you'll like it tho. haven't gotten a wacom+stylus so i'm pretty messy with a mouse. it would be better if you did it by hand i bet.

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg238/rocketeer12/Untitled-1.jpg

sen got me all on that photoshop :p

Rank-oner!
02-11-2008, 01:09 AM
one liner
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/onlinetag002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/onlinetag001.jpg

Thrice
02-11-2008, 11:31 AM
Thanks man, looks good.

SenTheFirst
02-11-2008, 12:05 PM
rank, its got real potential. that could turn our super steezy. keep workin on it

try curving your a and n a little. the smallest bit does wonders


ps: if anyone wants the brush i use in photoshop hit me up, ill send it to you

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/rank.jpg

Infoe
02-11-2008, 02:18 PM
Sen, want to do a tag exchange?
I write baise, I guess you write, Sen one.
EDIT: Infact, your style is just dope. Meet me in the exchange thread for a throwie/tag exchange!

anemptyswishersweet
02-11-2008, 04:21 PM
yes rank, i am feelin it, now lemme see that shit up right here in the A

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-11-2008, 04:24 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v141/jfrule16/jayt.jpg
any crits suggestions?
the one with the circle comin out the y is gravy.

Cin123
02-11-2008, 06:28 PM
lol...gravy
tech- the one on the bottom is the best just keep practiseen man!!

JETPACK!!
02-11-2008, 06:45 PM
rank, thats nice, i like how you angled it.
tech, keep it up, your shits got potential

something i did a little while ago
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4909/belshandstyle1oj8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SAID
02-11-2008, 06:51 PM
love the connection in the l and s, not feelin the other letters tho

Cy-anide
02-11-2008, 09:28 PM
rank im loving that tag keep up the good work.

heres a tag i did influenced by my boy teech:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/IMG_0068.jpg

rsakens
02-11-2008, 09:33 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00016-2.jpg?t=1202787178

einsamkeit
02-11-2008, 10:49 PM
... to put it bluntly ... your k is terrible... and why the cursive e?

the S has potential though.

SEZ
02-12-2008, 11:51 AM
one liner
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/onlinetag002.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/onlinetag001.jpg

not quite a oneliner, but you've improved a shit load keep it up

MostSOLe
02-12-2008, 01:03 PM
this is me n my buddies round my town
any tips or cmnts?
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0117.jpg
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0128.jpg
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0113.jpg

Thrice
02-12-2008, 01:12 PM
most - those are all sick, love it. The 2 on the last pic are my favorites.
Any crit for me? I feel that my letterspacing is too far, but not sure how to keep it clean and close together, esecially with a E and C right next to eachother.
http://i29.tinypic.com/34gn79u.jpg

-Leski
02-12-2008, 02:18 PM
Tech you've got promise, your pen strokes look nice and clean but your letters kinda blow.

Take your name and write it out in plain printing, and take note of the diffrent strokes it takes to make the letter, then bend the letters by messing with the strokes.

Thats the best I can explain it... but you'll get there dude, keep practicing.

I changed my name, I couldn't make Leski flow for the life of me. L's are a bitch.
Changed my first letter for my little brother's and Know I'm Geski.

Experimenting with shit, really like it, going to fix it up to flow better.
New G, K, and i. Same ol' E&S. What ever, critz?
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2983/geski1ak8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MUSEone
02-12-2008, 02:30 PM
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6303/0212081524ada5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6303/0212081524ada5.30c570489d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=519&i=0212081524ada5.jpg)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/3660/0126082015aqf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/3660/0126082015aqf4.135d2bb920.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=519&i=0126082015aqf4.jpg)

first attempt at flair. go ahead and laugh.

RANK- im loving tha top one.
J-F-I agree w. eddie on this one. haha
LESKI-fix ur G up more. when i first looked at it i thought it was a 6. take out tha "x" in that k also.

Thrice
02-12-2008, 02:31 PM
that's a shame, i loved your L's. Thanks man, i know, but i just get so anxious with it. Here is some more simplistic tags i did. the bottom one has an ugly h, but what do you guys think about the connection of the T to the H?
http://i32.tinypic.com/avlu09.jpg

Chump
02-12-2008, 03:11 PM
im completely lost on doing a tag...
help?

-Leski
02-12-2008, 03:17 PM
that's a shame, i loved your L's. Thanks man, i know, but i just get so anxious with it. Here is some more simplistic tags i did. the bottom one has an ugly h, but what do you guys think about the connection of the T to the H?
http://i32.tinypic.com/avlu09.jpg
Fuck, New page.

Yah tech, you kinda got it with the top one.
Keep working with that one, try leaning it and that kind of stuff. Give it your own flavour but keep it basic, graff takes dedication and a long ass time to get proficent at. It sucks but the key is to keep practicing and resist the urge to put your stuff up before its ready, thats a big thing, you will regret it when you see it later down the road.

Thanks for commenting muse, I'll work out that G.
Your painted tag is a little thick, try and thin it down maybe? So the flairs are more prominent. I cant do flairs so I shouldnt talk, lol

Chump, start with basic printing then pay attention to the strokes that make the letters, bend 'em, experiment, ext. Look at how other people have doen things, read the advice given to them on how to improve or what people didnt like.

Czar One
02-12-2008, 03:20 PM
Leski, your I looked more like a Z.

MUSEone
02-12-2008, 03:21 PM
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6303/0212081524ada5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6303/0212081524ada5.30c570489d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=519&i=0212081524ada5.jpg)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/3660/0126082015aqf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/3660/0126082015aqf4.135d2bb920.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=519&i=0126082015aqf4.jpg)

first attempt at flair. go ahead and laugh.

RANK- im loving tha top one.
J-F-I agree w. eddie on this one. haha
LESKI-fix ur G up more. when i first looked at it i thought it was a 6. take out tha "x" in that k also.


bump new page

SEZ
02-12-2008, 03:35 PM
muse- work at it

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3834/eyksonelinerfv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thrice
02-12-2008, 03:49 PM
is this going in the right direction? The bottom is a more clean look of what i was doing, but the first one is the C and H connection i was thinking of using.
http://i31.tinypic.com/2qwf0jb.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/14v4in7.jpg

Cin123
02-12-2008, 04:22 PM
thrice- ye thats a bit better try and lose like the cursive writeing style not that good but gettin better man
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/0014.jpg
any crits???

MUSEone
02-12-2008, 04:27 PM
give em to get em.

Cin123
02-12-2008, 04:29 PM
wtf i did u tool

MUSEone
02-12-2008, 04:34 PM
and saying that makes me a "tool" how?

dont just give them to tha kid who posts above u, give em to everyone.

more u give tha more u get.

even though u dont deserve it after being a dick but w.e....

thu? if so, fix it up so that it actually looks like a t

SAID
02-12-2008, 04:38 PM
muse, sick flairs at the top of your m and a.
bring the top of your s higher and leave your can for like a second longer so that it does like a hollow circle.

Cin123
02-12-2008, 04:45 PM
that was the only crit that i had tho so thats what i put
cuz urs looks dope and same with sez so i dont want 2 look like a fuck dick sucker ye diggg?

MUSEone
02-12-2008, 04:46 PM
that was the only crit that i had tho so thats what i put
cuz urs looks dope and same with sez so i dont want 2 look like a fuck dick sucker ye diggg?

meh. works for me.

stilll didnt have any reason to call me a tool though. haha

Cin123
02-12-2008, 04:50 PM
tru
my bad
so u got a crit
:P lol

Cy-anide
02-12-2008, 05:15 PM
Bump...

Original Text:
rank im loving that tag keep up the good work.

heres a tag i did influenced by my boy teech:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/IMG_0068.jpg

MostSOLe
02-12-2008, 05:25 PM
Thrice its all about flow

make it flowin

SAID
02-12-2008, 05:26 PM
wordd, k's not bad, your other letters arent matchin tho

Techkanuck
02-12-2008, 07:14 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture119.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture120.jpg
pretty shitty but i tried some more
I know my shit is generally

Muse-The flairs are nuts, i like it and have no clue how to do them, I do think it's be cool if you added a dot after the ! to even it out

Sez- I like that K better

Thrice- Maybe make the T capitalized

Cin- a little more space?

CY-anide- your shit is always amazing.

j-f
02-12-2008, 08:31 PM
techanuk keep goin at it.its getting better. try making it a little more neat it looks a lil sloppy to me. i like your first one better than the first. fix it up a bit like the 'G' is kinda weird the rest is cool. Im not a fan of that underline thing.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v141/jfrule16/jayt1.jpg

well someone already enjoyed the 'gravy' circle one so im goin to stick with it and post a painted flick soon
but wut about this new one i came up with
any crits?

Street Wize
02-12-2008, 09:01 PM
Here is a tag i did on the front of my blackbook
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/trips1.jpg

Thrice
02-12-2008, 09:07 PM
is this going in the right direction? The bottom is a more clean look of what i was doing, but the first one is the C and H connection i was thinking of using.
http://i31.tinypic.com/2qwf0jb.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/14v4in7.jpg
Thanks everyone, so the whole big curve thing isn't creating flow? Also wouldn't a capital kind of subtract with the other letters as far as flow goes?

STreet- id lose the little ziz zag to the left of the T. other than that. nice

Street Wize
02-12-2008, 09:31 PM
ya i tried to make the pulse type thing but it did not work

Techkanuck
02-12-2008, 09:53 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture121.jpg

MostSOLe
02-13-2008, 10:54 AM
more green boxes
Most Kwik EchoOne
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0118.jpg
EchoOne, Solo
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0120.jpg
Most EchoOne
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0132.jpg

-GEKS-
02-13-2008, 03:31 PM
echo's nice
all the others need a lot of work