Toy Tagz..only

[j-f]

techanuk keep goin at it.its getting better. try making it a little more neat it looks a lil sloppy to me. i like your first one better than the first. fix it up a bit like the 'G' is kinda weird the rest is cool. Im not a fan of that underline thing.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v141/jfrule16/jayt1.jpg

well someone already enjoyed the 'gravy' circle one so im goin to stick with it and post a painted flick soon
but wut about this new one i came up with
any crits?

[Street Wize]

Here is a tag i did on the front of my blackbook
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/trips1.jpg

[Thrice]

is this going in the right direction? The bottom is a more clean look of what i was doing, but the first one is the C and H connection i was thinking of using.
http://i31.tinypic.com/2qwf0jb.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/14v4in7.jpg
Thanks everyone, so the whole big curve thing isn't creating flow? Also wouldn't a capital kind of subtract with the other letters as far as flow goes?

STreet- id lose the little ziz zag to the left of the T. other than that. nice

[Street Wize]

ya i tried to make the pulse type thing but it did not work

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture121.jpg

[MostSOLe]

more green boxes
Most Kwik EchoOne
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0118.jpg
EchoOne, Solo
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0120.jpg
Most EchoOne
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/CIMG0132.jpg

[-GEKS-]

echo's nice
all the others need a lot of work

[Blam!]

ye echo thats good man.

[SAID]

nice flow.

[Cin123]

EchoOne-those are the best tags there
the box in the middle is the best fuck deff as tags!
(yes SAID 600 posts:P)

[NEROISAHERO]

just some tags i did
i didnt try to doctor them up with arrows and shit
ive been doing this tag for awhile
just tell me what you think

[NEROISAHERO]

http://i25.tinypic.com/10pal20.jpg

[SAID]

try to work on those letters, and try to add some flow and lean your letters abit.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3302/i255565749732551wz5.jpg
already posted it long ago, just tryin to get some new crits on it

[j-f]

nero it looks a little like 'boxy' to me i unno keep working at it
techkanuck i like ur new g better but keep working its almost getting there
Said thats pretty sick those drips are looking nice

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v141/jfrule16/jayt1.jpg

there was liking on the circle one so im trying to perfect it and theres also a new one i came up with.

[-Leski]

Fixed up my G, I like my i the way it is... but I'll see what else I can do with it.
Need to start work on making the tag flow...
Any critz?
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2259/geski7jo3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NEROISAHERO, its to jagged. Simplify and round it out.
SAID, Looks like the dripps didnt agree with you there.

[2KoS]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Image064.jpg

[revid!]

echo and said nice shit!!
both really dope

[RFI. SPit]

trying to get a philly style developed, having alot of fun with it

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8319/photo239gv1.jpg

[SAID]

im not the best in philly styles either, but try n make your letters much longer in height.

[revid!]

yeah zof i think if you do that it will look sick
it already does but makin it taller will make it better

[RFI. SPit]

a bit sloppy
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7308/photo240ce1.jpg

[SAID]

im feeling that flow !!

[Stonk]

yeah zof the first letter isn't executed that well but i think stretching them all out would make them more philly-ish...i've tried philly shit for a while and came to the conclusion i dont live there so why should i have one..haha

working on a new tag

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00379.jpg

[revid!]

yeah zof dude...thats way better
so dope!

[iBomb4KOG]

crits?

BUMPED

[iBomb4KOG]

BUMP
http://i25.tinypic.com/15my79g.jpg

[RFI. SPit]

What do you guys think, angled inward or not?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9068/photo241yl1.jpg
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5231/photo242hm0.jpg

these markers are falling apart on me, they're running out and one of them is dripping everywhere, so these are really sloppy

[revid!]

dopeo man!

[mosezone]

tride, i'm really feeling that.

[revid!]

tryin to work on some new shit
need some feedback
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9257/cimg0146jt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9257/cimg0146jt0.2a2bd7f1c0.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=516&i=cimg0146jt0.jpg)
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/6933/cimg0147du3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Thrice]

nice shit, fix that left quote and make that halo big!

[revid!]

yeah i feels you

[Thrice]

Step forward or step back?
http://i27.tinypic.com/2hriphv.jpg

[revid!]

forward keep at it man
lookin good

[j-f]

feeling it all but the 'T'

[Sintakz]

Forward, definatly forward

[revid!]

how bout mine

[Sintakz]

I'm digging the top one just without the arrows. You could use the quotes on it if you want though

[Thrice]

too much? Also revid i'd try to make that L more dominant, could come off as a U becuase it's so close to the O. Maybe a capital L would be better.
http://i32.tinypic.com/fuytc3.jpg

[mosezone]

logo, i'm feelin both of them, but i think they'd look better if they both didn't have underlines/quotes/haloes/etc, just the word itself.

[revid!]

word.
thanks

[smikoer]

Step forward or step back?
http://i27.tinypic.com/2hriphv.jpg

My thoughts on this one:
Remove that extension coming off the T. Not needed at this stage.
Make the first line on the H straight so it all has better flow.
The last line in the H is too long. Make it shorter so its the same size as the others so it all has more a little more impact.

Hope my thoughts are useful.

[Thrice]

ya definately man, thanks. Although i feel obligated to make the lines in the H curved somewhat to flow with the E and C. Can it still flow without being the consistent curve?

[-Leski]

Yo thrice, Try making the T less dominant. Like experiment with making the e,c, or h the dominant letter in your tag. Let the T support rather then lead.
T's are hard letters.


Think I'm going in the right direction. Critz?
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/672/geski8zt5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[gosh]

a few pages back echo and said both have some dope tags.
I'm working on a new tag, trying to get back up on my game. these are a little sloppy but i'll have better ones up soon hopefully

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/IMG_2631.jpg
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/IMG_2630.jpg
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/kissxkiss_/IMG_2628.jpg

[Cy-anide]

techanuck - good shit i like wat i see. thanks for the props

[SAID]

the drips are dopeeee in the first one !

[Thrice]

cool thanks for the advice i'll be sure to do so. Nice tag BTW Geski, i'd like to see some extensions in there.

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture124.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture127.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture128.jpg
something i was trying out
none near me, no taggers near me, so if the names taken I can prolly still deal with it.

Leski- I like the i, maybe make them taller and closer?

Gosh- I like the first two, what markers do you have?

[SEZ]

BUMP THIS...
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4959/pukeeykscs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AMER KEEP PRAXTISING

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT007.jpg
whack.

[crimateNC]

http://a389.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/57/l_5a713c821ecae2fde700779d9142784c.jpg
yeah I definately need some tips and help

["Riot"]

lose the quotes. it has flow just make the first c like the last one and if that underline has an arrow at the end. lose it.

[crimateNC]

nope no arrow lol I don't do arrows... especially pointing down. k quotes gotcha

[-Ark-]

Crimate, that shit looks tight. Try making the quotes smaller and closer together, or just drop them all together.

[7thIncision]

Crimate - ditch the quotes.. mebbeh an arrow coming in on the right or maybe a * next to it?
its too even

[RFI. SPit]

Still messing around with philly style

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4430/photo244zr1.jpg

[SAID]

try and put more loops at the bottom and try n make em all flow in the same direction, but its greaaat seeing your progress dude !

[SAID]

this might help you out man.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=SbDZPwqu2-E
check when he hits the black wall, not like the ones with the hearts and everything, but the simple philly handies, see how everything flows together you know?
thought it might help you out.

[RFI. SPit]

trying to do things longer and neater..... shit's looking better already-
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5725/photo245qd7.jpg

[SAID]

totally,
i was thinking maybe instead of having scribbles in your letters,
put "ONE" ?
dont know about the outcome, maybe something to try out?

[RFI. SPit]

What do you mean?

all the hands say "zofone"

[SAID]

like this..
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5800/rfisr1.jpg
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5877/rf2zs7.jpg
feel me ?

[RFI. SPit]

oh cool i get what you're saying now. yea i might try something like that out

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

http://i31.tinypic.com/if3imq.jpg

[SAID]

try n stick your letters together more if you can.

[RFI. SPit]

messing around with that idea a bit, said.
top one came out okay
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9370/photo246ms4.jpg

[SAID]

noope.
for me, that experiment wasn't a sucess.
i rather the other one allottttttt more with the scribbles.
its comming along nicely though ;)

[RFI. SPit]

yea, i agree, i like the scribbles, or it just being empty more

[RFI. SPit]

me messing around abit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeES0Mp5-Dg

[crimateNC]

k i'll toy with diff stuff

[SAID]

ahaha niceee !

[NEROISAHERO]

new style not a drastic change but i figured id do better if i changed it up a bit
http://i30.tinypic.com/30ax3eg.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/29nh3d3.jpg

[scoot]

what does that even say man? im getting kero, or kerd. or even possibly kers

make it more legable and then work off that man

[sanrtizer]

therush- letters arent half bad but lose those addons for now
zof- those philly hands are comin along good
nero- simple it down a bit and try to make it a lil more legible
new handyrock
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7931/img0133nd0.jpg

[NEROISAHERO]

its says nero

[SAID]

i like how thats all going in the same direction like its getting sucked by a giant black hole.
love it.

[NEROISAHERO]

ok ill do a simpler version and then tell me what you think

[SAID]

yeah man, try to stay away from those blocky letters.

[NEROISAHERO]

http://i31.tinypic.com/o6bh37.jpg

[SAID]

try and round up your e and d

[NEROISAHERO]

http://i30.tinypic.com/5ob787.jpg

[Cin123]

sanrtizer-im feelin the phillie style

[rave905]

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj292/raveoh/raveoh003.jpg
i dont have a cam so this is an old flik
i do wit with an r at the end just like the first 1 so it says raver

[smikoer]

NERO;
keep them as verrry basic letters.
write it overandoverandoverandover until it hurts.
then, come back and show =]

[CESA]

make sure that your letters ar roughly the same size, and that each one is about equal distance from each other. the gap between the z and the r looks really wierd.

I can disagree with this. If you're experienced enough, you can pull something like this off very effectively.

[SAID]

rave, im really liking that E

[rocketeer]

hey rave, not feelin' it at all. The style doesn't seem to flow well, R and E seem more angular and the A and V a bit more curvy (or something). Try tilting the A to be more upright and make the R and E fit more in style with the A and V.

[sanrtizer]

therush- letters arent half bad but lose those addons for now
zof- those philly hands are comin along good
nero- simple it down a bit and try to make it a lil more legible
new handyrock
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7931/img0133nd0.jpg

bumpskies for critsss

[HEY.LOOK.AT.ME]

looks good but im not realy diggin the loopy extensions under the letters
n it looks like it would take u a bitta time 2 tag that

[sanrtizer]

no it takes like 5 seconds

[Eack]

sanr = dope!
nero = simple
Rave= work on the flow
i need crtiz for my tags they rly suck :S

mine say eraser (sorry bout makin em on paint i dont have a cam with me)
http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagdl7.jpghttp://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1262/tagdl7.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012192.jpg

[AnteUp]

BACK IN THE DAY... :(http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/Picture012.jpg
BUENOS AIRES
NEWER ISH :(...I THINK IM GONNA GO BACK TO THIS STYLE ^^^
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/kurds-1.jpg
KURDS BATTLE
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/fuckswoe002.jpg
WHATS II

[SAID]

silentvandal, shits insaneeeee

[BZAR]

Ante im likin the first one

[kaze!]

haven't been on here in a while...

rave- that is sooo good, but i thnk it'd be better if you moved the middle bar of the e just a bit lower. i also feel like i unintentionally bit you with the swishy thing and the x :(

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/DSC06663.jpg

ive been kinda slacking tag wise, but i think i improved a wee bit:P

what do you guys think of these?

[SAID]

try to improve you R

[BZAR]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n36/sab22k/Z029.jpg

Kabs tell me what you think

[kaze!]

change your s, make it a tad simpler and stop outlining it

[Degausserr x]

Kaze- I like the letters at the bottom, but work on the R. Give it more flow.

[-Leski]

Kabs, your letters are kinda sharp. In a bad way. The tag is jagged and doesn't have much flow... Hit the basics, work on a super simple letter style and just rock that for awhile. Like basic printing with just a tiny touch of flair.
Not trying to rag on you, trying to help.

Kaze I like it. Nice and simple, just keep experimenting and practicing.
Love the Remo, needs a little work on the shape of the R.
The kaze needs a little work on the k, try angling the top arm up and shortening it and loosing the tail on the R.

Still working on this style, I really like how its turning out. Might actualy start using it soon.

Any critz on it would be great.
Short version.
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1927/geski9nh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Tall version.
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/8800/geski10xa7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Devoted]

quicke on b-room door. messed up on the u. ill take some more and better pics when i drop one on paper. anyways

Dusk

http://aycu33.webshots.com/image/45912/2003466988448540535_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003466988448540535)

[GodAnubis]

i need your help i want to combine somehow those tags into one tag

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6586/tagsov6.jpg
and i know it sucks (the tags)

[MiNZ]

here to save the day
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/1119744527_76e697ea66.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0126.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0125.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0145-2.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/neuf3.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o163/MISTERFLICKSTER/Picture60042.jpg
crits?

[SAID]

nice flairs on your last one man
sexyyy ;)

[Eack]

sanr = dope!mine say eraser (sorry bout makin em on paint i dont have a cam with me)
http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagdl7.jpghttp://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1262/tagdl7.jpg

crits plz! i need them tagging wise :S :(

[Devoted]

quicke on b-room door. messed up on the u. ill take some more and better pics when i drop one on paper. anyways

Dusk

http://aycu33.webshots.com/image/45912/2003466988448540535_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2003466988448540535)

up

[rave905]

yo eack the middle one is the best ut im not feelin the second e its pretty gross

[Drakula]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/Paris%20Graff%20Flix/Image007.jpg

Handystyle for a battle on another forum.

Eack yeah those lower case E's aRE nasty.Make the middle bar bend less.

[Flash_One]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1222/cpatagggd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/1333/cpatag2gd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[Drakula]

don't post here again.

Those are soooooo dope.

[Blam!]

ya you dont belong in toy tag, get out now!

[SAID]

that flow is sickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

[fonone]

drakula- id say lose the extension on the left of the F
devoted - thats pretty nice i like the S, has some good style. only thing is "DUSK" might be a pretty played word
eack - those need alot of work, completely scrap the top one and fix the E on the second one. the third could look ok if you cleaned it up a bit and fixed the S.. personally i dont like it when the back tail goes further back than the top bit, looks kinda bad and lose the extension on the bottom of the A, just use a bar across the middle
kaze - id say they look pretty good, nice n simple, just make the letters a bit closer together

heres some of mine..

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6404/feb1779hs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3870/feb1780gz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old word.. did this a while back, as you can see the can shat itself

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4451/feb1781rg0.th.jpg (http://img341.imageshack.us/my.php?image=feb1781rg0.jpg)

[SAID]

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o163/MISTERFLICKSTER/Picture60042.jpg

BUMP THSI SHIT

[milo]

here is some stuff i did, i suck so go easy haha :p
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h111/shado_02/1203215090.jpg

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h111/shado_02/1203215146.jpg

[the end]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7915/testerhbkjy9.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/122/testtagdfma8.jpg

[JEDI-MASTER]

sum hands for yall
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi085.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi087.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi088.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi086.jpg

[_ORGAZM_]

OK im brand new to this site and all i have to say is this is badass. i have some tags i just did in my book that need to be critiqued because i just changed words a week ago and this tag is not built up yet.
http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg196/Orgasmphantom/IMG_2091.jpg

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg196/Orgasmphantom/IMG_2075.jpg

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg196/Orgasmphantom/IMG_2073.jpg

[the end]

lol, orgasm.

im really diggin the arrow ;)

[JEDI-MASTER]

orgasm...iight ur new,kool but u done ruined ur rep nig..its garbage get sum style letters r real weak learn a style man dont bite but look at others shit nd get an idea u got no flow at all in them letters...and on the first the o is to small keep leters consistent in size..lose the add on arrow it looks bad sorry man but lose it work on ur letters alot...now the third has a bit of a flow ur letters arent spaced as far so it shows ur getin the feel for the name...jus stick with it..ur gonna get jocked alot tho man...best of luck on these cruel forums

[JEDI-MASTER]

bumpskies for critsss
tall hands, iight well that last letter needs to have the leg in more to much space pul it in tighter wit the rest of the leters the loops for da filler content on the hands arent bad but try sumthing else it fucks up reading to much

[blunttokes]

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7429/1003586yp3.jpg
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5493/1003587pc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

CRITS?

[_ORGAZM_]

jedi thanks for the crits man. And as for my style those tags are no longer then your thumb man so i couldnt really get the good of control. Also in almost everything i do i like to make up my own style mixed a little with whats already there and i know i get a lot of shit for it but hey its my style and i kinda like it. anyways i know they will improve ill post some more up when they do.
ps. i got a lot of tags around town of my old word that i have no pics of. they are in a different style ill try to get a pic of one.

[_ORGAZM_]

oh and i guess i should give some crits out too. so blunttokes i like the drippy OE very fresh and simple. and the bottom tag is ok except for the first letter is a little to wide for my tastes. scrunch it up and itll look sick.

[JEDI-MASTER]

no prob man...yo i was mad harsh on u,ma fault but just keep practicing....if ur from da tri-state area u u should deff mess wit sum philly style hands well wen u get ur reg shit packed up i mean shit im going on two years myself no where the best but yo ill help ya ass out jus pm me u got questions or need help or watever wen i come in here i dont usually crit jus leave a lil sumthin n bounce aright nuff tlk

[blunttokes]

wurd.. thnx.. yee that R is kinda fat n shitty lol

[blunttokes]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9483/1003572ax0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/92/1003575gt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/1994/1003580nx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8489/1003571bl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the roal on the left sucks so ya lol

[JEDI-MASTER]

um has a throw on it but w/e
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi089.jpg

[blunttokes]

i think that is sloppy....

practice that

[*cept*]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/tag.jpg
crits?

[JEDI-MASTER]

i think de and philly heads would differ from u. do u know nething about philly hands?
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi090.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi091.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi092.jpg

[*cept*]

[QUOTE=JEDI-MASTER;1009623]i think de and philly heads would differ from u. do u know nething about philly hands?
QUOTE] word. thats some scarey fucking philly shit.
not really my cup of tea but sick.
you write escro?

[JEDI-MASTER]

thanx yo.
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi095.jpg
has a throw o well suck my dick
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi094.jpg
i liked da hand afgain suck my dick u wana complain
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi093.jpg

[blunttokes]

well that first one u posted was sloppy... the rest are pretty sick...

[JEDI-MASTER]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/tag.jpg
crits?

i like that man keep it comin
blunt its str8 man thanx

[JEDI-MASTER]

another philly for ya
this is a wicket
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi097.jpg

[NEROISAHERO]

constructive crits??
http://i32.tinypic.com/zk3jit.jpg

[MUSEone]

Any Philly heads in here dont be quick to jump at me...im just learning this ish...haha

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4347/004we3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?

Nero-Thats a good start but dont do u O so big. try and keep ur letters all tha same size.

EDITL: HOLY SHIT! God damn, im srry thats so big, idk how to resize it. =/

[NEROISAHERO]

thanks bro but i dont know shit about philly style so i cant help you

[JEDI-MASTER]

haha thats where i come in....iight maso ur getin thae hang of it but u still seem to have a lot os space between the letters get them on top of eac other need ro have the bottom real tight and the top loose enuf to make out the start of the leter bu still tight iight mayb work on sum filler content to make it pop and plz mn use photobucket u can resize on there well im out to smoke an L

[JEDI-MASTER]

[quote=JEDI-MASTER;1009623]i think de and philly heads would differ from u. do u know nething about philly hands?
QUOTE] word. thats some scarey fucking philly shit.
not really my cup of tea but sick.
you write escro?
ESKRO...wit a K occasionaly wit a C but ESKRO

[crystalmeth and abortions]

http://a870.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/25/l_b49fe7f2e5b933701e80f59a09d56c6d.jpg
new tag for "soft" in US history book

[hazetheone]

http://i25.tinypic.com/90qd11.jpg

[smikoer]

Nero; also straighten the R up =]
crystalmeth and abortions; i'm liking it, more please?
hazetheone; shits nice, no crown and not liking the underline though

1 - kore, newspaper ups
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/3438/korexxn0.jpg
2 - cardz/kardz, not really liking my C or second A.
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/2826/kardzoa2.jpg
3 - koer bad qual
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2744/koerblur2gw0.jpg
4 - koer bad quality take 2
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2517/koerblurdx8.jpg

[JEDI-MASTER]

last couple lokin hot

[crystalmeth and abortions]

smikoer- that kore tag is dope
http://a80.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/29/l_fe6c38ba64e780e3fc39d8c79d27b137.jpg
^doodle, dont like the tag i got but dig the concept

[done4625]

http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff289/done4625/new%20stuff/GCSK.jpg

Whats do u guys think i did this a while ago but i never got any crit.

[Darkeist]

bottom two
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool473.jpg

done - is that a GCSK? i cant really read it much
haze - shits looking fresh

[Mr Tasty]

new handstyle...crits?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture549.jpg

[idiot]

Tasty: it may be cool in time........but i cant read it.....keep trying......
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/SSPX0057.jpg
???????Suggestions

[the end]

tasty, weve seen better stuff from you... that is really sloppy

[sickTwo]

i couldnt find the markers i normally use for tagging.. so
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/3746/tagwb3.th.gif

[d-stroy]

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1203359266.jpghttp://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1203359267.jpghttp://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1203359269.jpg

[JEDI-MASTER]

i ve seen beter from u tasty, i dont like it man...yo ru always fdrunk cuz i was up in the good afternoon thread and i could barely read sum of ur ish

[TaskOne]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/013.jpg
crits?

sease- add some style into it, you got the right idea.
idiot - im feeling it. looks dope

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/remostag.jpg
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/tag.jpg

[wafflecakee]

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5660/bakerql7.jpg
really dig that TaskOne i like it alot.

[revid!]

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9862/cimg0165gz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SAID]

lol yea ive used my left hand before sometimes you can get some pretty good looking stuffups
werddddd!


.. and revid, it looks abit stiff n shaky.
try n work on your letters abit

[revid!]

yeah i feel you
this ones a bit more flowing
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9782/cimg0170yo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SAID]

fuck yea!
try to move your halo down, so it looks like its being supported by your letters.
feeling every single thing except that little loop.
i like the way your o comes out though.

[Soboe!]

ive worked on this for about 2 days its still rusty but id like crits thanks...
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080218_2.jpg
it says "Soboe" by the way

[SAID]

i like the flow.
dont like the loop in your s.
and try and make your halo more round, not so much straight.
id put it lower too.
and your underline is so straight.
loosen it up abit.
flows nice though.

[smikoer]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/013.jpg
bumpp for love

[Darkeist]

bottom two
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/imcool473.jpg

done - is that a GCSK? i cant really read it much
haze - shits looking fresh

bump, got no crits

[MiNZ]

dark your name makes for an easy one liner that would look sick keep working on it tho
all your letter can connect easy just pay more attention to local graff and work from there

[j-f]

i would change the E up and the first R shorten the extension on its leg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2140/sfadfdug71zy8.jpg

[dim]

http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/dimr_01/IMG_0990.jpg

[Cin123]

dim- your tags are 2 die for:P

[D5Rooke]

new to the game, looking for some feedback

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v325/district5rookie/IMG_0768.jpg

[scoot]

bro to be completely honest i cant even read what it says.. do it simplar and make ur letters stand out more

[Drakula]

That M is nice Dim.Original.

[boobies!]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q22/Kranks1/IMG_0513.jpg

new name crits needed

D5 - restart, do simple letters
dim - flows pretty good, keep it up
smik - i like it, good and readable. dont like the e tho

[SAID]

i cant read what it says.
simpler would be nice

[SAID]

try and make your r capital.
and when your p and e join em, it makes it look like an s.
try and fix that up abit.

[sallybsk]

ah boobs, i can make out a P E and an S but thats it, simpler like said said :p

after that, just work on flow because thats what i think makes a tag, then letters come naturally, when you get new ideas and so on.

-.just kidding i dont see and S anymore. x]

[fonone]

.

-.just kidding i dont see and S anymore. x]

i kind of do :S.. 2 even..

[MESN[905]]

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/1346/hpim0234yz9.jpg

[SAID]

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7431/heeeere1.png
feelin' it.

[Dryft]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/Smaz.jpg
Just starting, It's very simple, CRITS please - any tips is awsome
I hate my Z, i know i know

[SAID]

wordd, try n work on that z.
allot of straight edges, ever try rounded letters?

[Dryft]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/Smaz.jpg
Just starting, It's very simple, CRITS please - any tips is awesome
I hate my Z, i know i know

Bump to next page


Ye, I will work on it
I'll try rounded letters, that'll hopefully give it more flow, I never seem to round letters in tags
But still with the Z, rounding that doesn't seem like it would go well, but I'll give it a try
thanks

[SAID]

yea dude,
do your z in round letters like you woulda do a 2.

[Dryft]

k thanks
and btw, i'm not a dude haha

[SAID]

ahahaha sorry.
just my figure of speech.

[ANDRO]

some handstyles..

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6481/krinkandroir5.png

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3074/dsc0183ot5.jpg

just looking for advice.

[fonone]

dimr - very nice
mesn - im not familiar with that style but looks nice anyway
dryft - i like the S and M though i think the A and Z need a bit of work
d5rooke - i cannot read that. start from simples again, no need to try all wild style stuff the flow will come

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/4765/feb2083kq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/1096/feb2084jq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6424/feb2085ig0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3857/feb2088jm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this guy was going over my shit. so now ive started going over his. im pretty sure he goes to this high school near my house because all his tags are around there so im going to ask around about him and then tell him if he doesnt stop hes going to be found rotting in a dumpster in a back alley in midland. we'll see if it continues

oh and any crits :)?

[sallybsk]

Andro, it's got a sick ass flow, and the drips look reeeeal yummy.

lol fonone, dont get caught up in all that shit, drama gets fucking stupid.
but pretty dope tag, work on your N because it curves out right too far i think, and everything else is alright, make sure you dont put the lowest extension of the 'E' up so far it touches the middle.

[d-stroy]

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/freebird0197/1203482399.jpg

[rocketeer]

liking it sally, but not the halo

[intaout]

some handstyles..

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6481/krinkandroir5.png

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3074/dsc0183ot5.jpg

just looking for advice.

Love the color and opacity. homade? tagwise I would say pull up the A and lower the D so it's even but good flow.

[ANDRO]

its actually from a krink mop marker .. those things get hated on alot because they are over priced, but i love the colors that they offer!

[fonone]

that BSK is pretty tight id just fix the K and lose the halo

liking tha andro too, nice colours and drips,

[rocketeer]

that BSK is pretty tight id just fix the K and lose the halo

yeah, on the K try to extend the upper right part and see how that looks

new name, i can never decide on one.
http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg238/rocketeer12/Untitled-2.jpg
http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg238/rocketeer12/Untitled-1-1.jpg

I know someone writes nero on here, i hope our tags don't look similar. crits plz, how's the flow?

[fonone]

i like it neuro nice and simple id just say make the O the same size as the rest

[Keke]

help?(sorry , only had a pen at the time)
quick throw up i did when i wass bored (30 seconds or so )
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1786/stb0389gy8.th.jpg
tags, (no arrows,quotes or other cool things yet)which should i work on the most?;
[img=http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1786/stb0389gy8.th.jpg] (http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stb0389gy8.jpg)

[fonone]

Andro, it's got a sick ass flow, and the drips look reeeeal yummy.

lol fonone, dont get caught up in all that shit, drama gets fucking stupid.
but pretty dope tag, work on your N because it curves out right too far i think, and everything else is alright, make sure you dont put the lowest extension of the 'E' up so far it touches the middle.

thanks sally, yea your probableyy right haha i just dont need these kids going over my shit for no reason.

[Jihad]

keke- keep doing simples. by that you can work up your style. don't worry about quotes yet. arrows are usually really retarded looking and nobody does them anymore. like i said though just keep working it name on paper.

[.ALT.]

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l259/ericksteinberg/_1054214.jpg

[TaskOne]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/009.jpg
crits? broad daylight tag.

rocketeer- make the o the same size, maybe add a cool little extra on the end. make the bottom of the e extend to the U maybe? looks cool though

[.ALT.]

dryft- im feelin the blue one

sease- mad fresh

[.ALT.]

task- looking good. the S is looking good espically

[SAID]

feelin' that task.
try and flare that shit, itd be ill

[♠James♠]

I fucking hate the people posting in the toys forum jsut saying " dont pick up a writing utensil again unless its to blah blah blah" seriously STFU. Give toys like me and the other toys out their advice. We don't want that kind of fuckin' support.

[♠James♠]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/5961/sky062xi0.th.jpg (http://img103.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sky062xi0.jpg)

[♠James♠]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/752/sky071bl6.th.jpg (http://img103.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sky071bl6.jpg)

[.ALT.]

james- im liking the second one maybe change the top of the E a little bit. but definatly well done

[.ALT.]

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l259/ericksteinberg/_1054214.jpg

crit?

[♠James♠]

Thanks for the advice ALT. Don't really got much crit for that, suck at those tags lol

[.ALT.]

haha i gotcha. but just some more advice i think a little less 3d on the L in the first one would work for ya

[TaskOne]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/5961/sky062xi0.th.jpg (http://img103.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sky062xi0.jpg)

get rid of the arrows that are comming from who knows where. work on the flow of your letters and even 3D.

[♠James♠]

Alright I'll work on that, thanks.

[SAID]

yeaa bro, only use arrows once you know how to shape em the right way and your piece start flowing, for now, stick to basics.
all about flow.

[d-stroy]

Alt, your S looks alright but the rest of your tag needs to be fixed. Maybe draw your T different and The o and p neater.

[.ALT.]

yeah man thanks. im just trying to figure out the t

[♠James♠]

try slanting it towards the P instead, might look better

[Dryft]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/Smaz2.jpg

CRITS
I tried to fix the A and Z, still not quite workin for me

[SAID]

try putting a small a.
not capital

[♠James♠]

What he said ^^

[Dryft]

k,i just did a few, I'll put the pics up in a second.

[SAID]

sick sick

[Dryft]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n221/Kiations/Smaz3.jpg

There I tried it,
fackkk, this is actually pissing me off so much
hahaa

[SAID]

lmaoo.
all trial and error man.
feeling your blue one most outta all of em

[Dryft]

k, Thanks man
But I'm dead tired, so I'll post some more stuff tomorrow.

[SAID]

ahaha aiight
keep workin on that flow

[Jihad]

http://i32.tinypic.com/sqli1d.jpg

[Thrice]

James wrong thread, post those in blackbook. Those aren't tags.

[Darkeist]

dryft, i think your letters are too spaced out, and i dont like your S or M.

[Jihad]

dryft-go back to simples a little more. that doesn't really have enough flow and going simple again you can rework your flow throughout the tag.

[Jihad]

go with the blue one yea... thats got the most flow.

[Thrice]

jihad- keep a consistent i and try to avoid the variations of letterspacing, connectors and overlaps. The I's throw off any possible flow because you can see how their stem are in diff spots in relevance of the letters next to them.
Crit please
http://i31.tinypic.com/1412x40.jpg

[♠James♠]

oops sorry lol

Quote Thrice:"James wrong thread, post those in blackbook. Those aren't tags."

How the hell u do quotes? lol

[INDEPENDENT]

all you guys have to cut the boring out of you tag lol.

make it interesting but not shitty,
like clean and sharp? but just practise tons, and try new things try to get a handstyle down. and try to flow.

heres some old pics.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y108/313eminem313/graff/SSPX0136.jpg
diso
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y108/313eminem313/graff/SSPX0137.jpg
wares
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y108/313eminem313/graff/SSPX0355.jpg
top right of pic-diso

[rocketeer]

^^not sure if its the tag or the focus, but I can't really read it.

and about cutting the boring out, well we all gotta start simple and work up from there. you're just catching us in the growth phase.

[INDEPENDENT]

sorry about the pictures, yea the focus is fucked, and, yes start with simples please, nothing looks worse then seeing arrows and stuff through your own tag lol ive seen it happen.

[sallybsk]

liking it sally, but not the halo

lols, i know i was using a fat marker, i hadnt used in a while so i wasnt used to it . :p

i do some better ones with pencil but i just felt like vandalizing my desk some more. but thanks for the advice.

[sallybsk]

mmm dryft its coming along better, you can first try it slow, to have it not spaced as much, it always flows better like that. ( not super fucking slow, just not rushed, then practice each letter by itself) Then it will come along like that, then you can see its improvement, and you'll get new ideas for letters all the time.

[fonone]

oops sorry lol

Quote Thrice:"James wrong thread, post those in blackbook. Those aren't tags."

How the hell u do quotes? lol

lol you click the "quote" button at the bottom of the post youd like to quote :)

[ANDRO]

I made a new mop today.. Here's a few handstyles...

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/8136/moppppfv8.png

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9430/andromop4ca7.png

http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/8190/andromop3sd1.png

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/633/andromop2rs1.png

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2156/andromoprz2.png

crits??

[sarz]

Hey, i was just wonderin if i could get some crits and ways to improve this tag...

[Street Smart]

andro - dont like the an, cant read that bit, but there pretty sweet tags.
sarz - really nice, fix up the A and keep mucking around with flow and stufff...

[Karlaps]

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9399/img0029hx7.jpg
crits?

[Dryft]

mmm dryft its coming along better, you can first try it slow, to have it not spaced as much, it always flows better like that. ( not super fucking slow, just not rushed, then practice each letter by itself) Then it will come along like that, then you can see its improvement, and you'll get new ideas for letters all the time.

k, thanks, that helps alot
I'll be back tonight with some more stuff

[SAID]

i wouldnt make your s and p overlap.

[JEDI-MASTER]

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/jedi098.jpg

[rocketeer]

Sarz i actually don't like it try working on making your letters look more fluid. with that said, welcome and start givin' crits.

[Thrice]

Crit please
http://i31.tinypic.com/1412x40.jpg
Bump...independent-Do some simples those tags have no flow.