Tags

[Sewn]

That's so tight!
What do you use to write them, a tablet?

[Engine.357]

Pen Tool In Illustrator it really helpful when manipulating strokes to put them right where you want them... I'm a graphic designer so it is easier for me to, plus I like practicing on the computer so I don't waste paper or Blackbook space... I do want a tablet however so I can practice my hand strokes for quick writes out around the neighborhood, just need to save up some cash because I've spent a bunch on Montana Spraypaint and Deco Marker's

[Engine.357]

Bump

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe4.png
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/vas.png
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/PANIK.png

[jerm_haf]

wow that looks good ^

[Phoenix-Graff]

Started writing Teok a couple weeks ago in Massachusetts.

I have one idea for throwie but ive never done T's before so if you come up with anything better you can get at me on aim: vibriocholerae2

but I did come up with a few tags from styles Ive seen and definitley looking for some crits and/or compliments so let me know which ones you like, think I should change or hate.....




sorry about the quality ahah
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff83/pr0ne92/0315080947.jpg
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff83/pr0ne92/0323081627b.jpg
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff83/pr0ne92/0323081627a.jpg
http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff83/pr0ne92/0323081627.jpg

[geneparmesan]

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/vas.png]

bump that ahem.

[Engine.357]

*SLAP!*

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/slap2.png

[m.ziggy]

engine you have progressed so much in less then a week

[geneparmesan]

others could too ziggy, just depends on how you take the crits that are given to you. some people take them as hate, so therefore, they dont get anywhere. but hes one of the smart ones, ha.

[Engine.357]

Haha thanks guys now i just need to get better with throwies and bombs :D

[geneparmesan]

practice.

[Thrice]

looks pretty good 357, although I can kinda see why ppl say follow all caps or all lower case.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

i'll have more up later.
bad pic
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/762a03f59681.jpg

[Sewn]

haha are you being serious with that picture?

Edit: It got brighter from the last time I saw it lol, still kinda hard to see. Is it supposed to say Taze or Teze?

[the end]

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/2294/32308hbk1lineik7.jpg

[geneparmesan]

nice flow like a river.




sort of.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://a932.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/46/l_5771444c6f6a798683cb0381dbf8065b.jpg (http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=108235143&albumID=1632342&imageID=20045643)
http://a277.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/33/l_140b879e2e6c364c07e4c78c3ecf8214.jpg (http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=108235143&albumID=1632342&imageID=20045645)
http://a475.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/6/l_667d0a82fdbe988676ce5736689ea062.jpg (http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=108235143&albumID=1632342&imageID=20045647)
http://a995.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/123/l_e7b263e52e5b9932b39392f485e81d8a.jpg (http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=108235143&albumID=1632342&imageID=20045642)

[Sewn]

I like the circle one in the last picture, kinda looks like a face

[JETPACK!!]

teze, i dont like the swirlies in the first picture but i like the 2nd, and the door on the 3rd flick other than that black dot.

engine youve progressed a lot man, your slap looks nice, but drop the crown for the next one

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7804/tamkhandstylevo6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture169.jpg
lot's of work still to do

357- bad ass work, feelin the style on my name for sure

the end- nice and flowy, maybe straighten up the first bar of the H?

teze- definitely liking the one on the door.

jet- the M seems plain imo, but then again i don't know what you'd do to modify it and keep that style

[H3TT1NG3R]

u fucked up the 3d on the way beggining

[JETPACK!!]

word, i just noticed that. good lookin out

[H3TT1NG3R]

haha np. but its just a quicky so it doesnt mater

[H3TT1NG3R]

techanuk-middle center one with face is good, but id drop the face.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/laseknewtags.jpg
i nnneeeeddd a new k

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3923/pict0568dm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3923/pict0569gu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


quik shitty tags i did..dont really tag like this lmao...EVER..new tag im workin on...second time i ever wrote it

dont try and steal my fuckin tag either mutha fuckazzz

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture172.jpg

something in this general direction work??...it's a lot easier to learn with my window marker on the shit around my place

[H3TT1NG3R]

techanuk-middle center one with face is good, but id drop the face.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/laseknewtags.jpg
i nnneeeeddd a new k

bumpp
and
tech-theyre all alright, just simple tho, try and spice up yur letters sumehow

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3923/pict0568dm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3923/pict0569gu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


quik shitty tags i did..dont really tag like this lmao...EVER..new tag im workin on...second time i ever wrote it

dont try and steal my fuckin tag either mutha fuckazzz

bump bump mutha fukz

[oakstr1]

Engine.357 - like the style even though its not your name
Thrice - like bottom right one the best

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/2351/img048mp7.jpg

took me awhile to even like my tag. anyone have anything to make it better?
middle one i fucked up on.

[geneparmesan]

use your O and A from the first one, with the KSTR from the last one n youll be aight.


bankz-that arrow overtop the T is just....unneccessary & the T just looks too long. it makes the whole tag look busted.

[Hazex]

My one liner!

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/4992/picture017an7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[renegade185]

oakstr- i like the first one best, try writing it without connecting the letters
hazex- i like it

crits?
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/101_0298.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/101_0302.jpg

[Cin123]

renaged nice man keep up the flairs
oak the bottom 1n is the best
The_NaMEz_BaNKz the ruch tag is kinda shity the others are mad defff tho

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

cin123 - yea i know i jus did those quik and lazy..not suppose to look good u kno

renagade - those look sexy jus dunno wutta hell they say ..:\

[Soboe!]

Says: SNOT.ONER
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080313_6.jpg

Crits!

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

video of my handstlye i was bored...it came out bum becuase its hard holding a camera and writeing because you cant really hold down the paper..


http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/diplomat123/th_CLIP0482.jpg (http://s11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/diplomat123/?action=view&current=CLIP0482.flv)

bump

[Game Ova 07]

yeah renegade that looks ill...just cant tell what the fuck it says

[renegade185]

it says hazmat. i been workin on spacin the letters out a tad bit.

[Game Ova 07]

keep working it..its fresh

[Cin123]

cin123 - yea i know i jus did those quik and lazy..not suppose to look good u kno

renagade - those look sexy jus dunno wutta hell they say ..:\
respect

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook003.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook005-1.jpg

HY-KO window marker on the mirror, easy practice

[Engine.357]

Le Bump

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe4.png

[JSBiggz]

No offence engine....but the stuff you do on that illustrator thing is sweet....but you should practice on paper....the one on paper i saw of yours...looks...not as good as the one on the illustrator thing

[bloot]

bumpp
and
tech-theyre all alright, just simple tho, try and spice up yur letters sumehow
Drop the k on the last one and just use LASE.

[Engine.357]

No offence engine....but the stuff you do on that illustrator thing is sweet....but you should practice on paper....the one on paper i saw of yours...looks...not as good as the one on the illustrator thing

Yeah I know, I'm a graphic designer first and an artist second, I've been practicing on paper and I'll post one when I'm satisfied

[evolbcw]

im a graqphic designer too.. but yea a lil feedback... i know its plain and needs style but shit so do I...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v405/afropimp/evooooo.jpg

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook003.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook005-1.jpg

HY-KO window marker on the mirror, easy practice

bump

evol- I like it, try some extensions or some dif style letters, but it's nice now...DRIPS maybe?

[evolbcw]

and urs says VOIS right?? i think you should connect the V and the O sumhow but i like the S

[Hazex]

My one liner!

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/4992/picture017an7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumity bump
vois:It looks good overall but i thing u need to add sumthing to the botom of the S
Evol :like tech said maybe add a lil extention on the L
Can i get some more crits on it??

[JETPACK!!]

Le Bump

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe4.png

drop the crown drop the crown drop the crown drop the crown drop the crown. kthnxbye

vois, i like the flow on the second one, but you should find something else to dot your I with imo, i dont like th emini-S on it, and bring up the left leg of the V, see if it looks good.

[JETPACK!!]

teze, i dont like the swirlies in the first picture but i like the 2nd, and the door on the 3rd flick other than that black dot.

engine youve progressed a lot man, your slap looks nice, but drop the crown for the next one

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7804/tamkhandstylevo6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumpity-bum-bump screwed up the shadow on the far left. (my sincere apologies for double posting.)

[Thrice]

not feeling it, got a weird mountain thing going on, also try not to connect each letter the same way.

[JETPACK!!]

haha word, i call it the rockys. but yeah, ill work on a seperate letter steeze, i was gonna do that, but havent gotten around to it yet

[Oaklander]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2l91ov7.jpg

[drop one.]

^^ NEEDS VVork

[Oaklander]

http://i26.tinypic.com/2qc4ah3.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

i like it lose the 1 and fix the a up a bit.

[Oaklander]

Sorry, but that's not my name. Just messing around with Jetpack's name.

Thanks for the advice though, Edward.

[Soboe!]

Says: SNOT.ONER
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080313_6.jpg

Crits!

Bump got no crits

[wafflecakee]

i like it alot soboe!

[Soboe!]

thank you atleast someone gives me crits lol

[drop one.]

Says: SNOT.ONER
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080313_6.jpg

Crits!BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP ill son that shyt aint toy

[Meatl0f]

i like it alot soboe!

second that! that's not very toy.

[HAJA]

soboe.. its not bad, i would work on trying to make "snot" a little more ledgible, i wouldnt know what it says if you didnt say it.. lose the extra stuff and work on letter structure.. other than that, thers a really dope writer thats name is earsnot, writes snot alot so i dunno if you should use that name but w/e.

[Cin123]

im a graqphic designer too.. but yea a lil feedback... i know its plain and needs style but shit so do I...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v405/afropimp/evooooo.jpg
yo that THINK tag is sooooo dope lol jks
but yo wen u under line it dont make the line that long it a nice simp tag tho

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook008.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook007.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook006.jpg

little different on the tags and the fish is just to fuck around.

Hazex- I like it but i thin it'd be better if the R was more like the S

[Oaklander]

I think a lot of you guys are jumping the gun trying to make your tags all weird and squiggly-like.

[[phenom5]]

Dust42
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/9987/0325082024xb5.jpg

[-Panik-]

Bump

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe4.png
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/vas.png
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/PANIK.png

Dude thats so sick, could you do one for me:P
haha I write Panik
I just wanna see how it looks and how to work a style cas I am kinda shitty at tags right now

[MUSEone]

try and do do it w.o the line of the T going right through tha middle of the tag, and just do "4" not 42.

Other than that i like it.

[kroc_oner]

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PA180198.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PA180201.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PA180206.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PA180207.jpg
diff box by sum school
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PA180211.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/PA180214.jpg

[jerm_haf]

kroc...kinda basic, needs some more style.

[Engine.357]

Dude thats so sick, could you do one for me:P
haha I write Panik
I just wanna see how it looks and how to work a style cas I am kinda shitty at tags right now

Lol I did do one for you...

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/PANIK.png

[-Panik-]

oh shit, haha I didn't notice that one:P my bad bro

[geneparmesan]

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m227/kutemupkustoms/hippityhoopla2.jpg

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m227/kutemupkustoms/hippityhoopla.jpg
i like the second one better because i fucked up the first one, ha.

bump that vois hand in the first post of this page.
actually, i fucked up both of those, so, fuck 'em.

[HAJA]

:confused:yea um.. does that acctually say a word?

[Game Ova 07]

yeah k-roc...i personally dont thinkyour ready for street bombing...styles 2 basik

[Game Ova 07]

picts are from mad long ago and im alot better now...but whatever only thing i have to post right now
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/My%20Graffiti/Neo5.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/My%20Graffiti/Neo2.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/My%20Graffiti/Neo4.jpg

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

vois tags look way better

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture016-1.jpg

[-Leski]

its msfyt's birthday?

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

read the battles.

[-Leski]

My bad, lookin good though.

[Mass Appeal]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/NewImage.jpg

[Chump]

http://i27.tinypic.com/14mqp9y.jpg
i suck at tags lol
any suggestions?

[SAID]

thats not that bad man, just try and make all the letters go in the same direction.

[Chump]

http://i27.tinypic.com/14mqp9y.jpg
i suck at tags lol
any suggestions?

bumb
new page...
yea... when throw that M in there it changes the direction a bit

[SAID]

read my mind.

[H3TT1NG3R]

i dont liek the ump. thwith the u id just leacve it as a u without the coming back down part. then the m might look better with straight bars, liek a zigzag. the p, idk

[Chump]

you like the CH?
sweet... about 2 weeks ago only thing ppl liked was the C.
Movin on up lol

[H3TT1NG3R]

haha ya the h is alright, simple but alright

[Engine.357]

New tag... Should I keep the thinner lines for style or drop them, I think I might get rid of 'em, What do you guys think?

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe5.png
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe51.png

[MUSEone]

Lets see u do those on paper...

Came upon this today..

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8075/0326081600ahs6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[5Funerals]

maso - deffinitely getting there
chump - moving in the right direction
engn - I would ditch those lines its not necessary and will take more time

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/scan0003.jpg

went a little crazy

[MUSEone]

Gettin there?

haha thats old as shit, thats wat i meant by "came upon this", i totally forgot about it.

thx though.

[JETPACK!!]

yo engine, imo your G looks seriously mad wack, like an ugly 6 or something, try it again. and word, put some on paper man. we all know you aspire to be a graphic designer, but puttin it on paper will probably improve your handsteeze a lot quicker

and mr.maso, your steeze is nice yo, iunno what it is about it, but it warms my heart on a cold canadian day

[5Funerals]

didnt see that maso sorry

jetpack you are a weird kid with a hilarious signature.


I cant believe these people are reproducing

[Engine.357]

Lets see u do those on paper...

Came upon this today..

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8075/0326081600ahs6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Alright I'll try it on paper right now, pretty toy off the computer but we'll see :D

[MUSEone]

Heres some more recent ish..

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2025/0308081945abl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(yes, i know, tha O is a lil small in that, but hey, its on paper)
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/7781/0229081534apo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Tokenkaligreens]

lmao @jetpacks sig.
nice simple tag maso.

[MUSEone]

^^^^lol

???

[Tokenkaligreens]

lol it was meant towards jetpacks sigg.

[MUSEone]

O haha my b.

Heres another...

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/2316/0224081325cbx5pg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Engine.357]

Eh... Did it with Deco's but I would have rather used a chisel tip... just don't have any

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe52.png

[Jihad]

http://i30.tinypic.com/ayvy44.jpg

maso- ive seen them all, get up bro. start working on some new shit though. it would be cool to see something new from you.

engn- i like it, your g and all. those lines probably take too long, id probably say forget it.

[JETPACK!!]

didnt see that maso sorry

jetpack you are a weird kid with a hilarious signature.


I cant believe these people are reproducing

word i know, in two days some of the most ridiculous shit ive heard on BS has been said. its cool, keeps me coming back

engn, try it with your old G, i was feelin it a lot more than that one

[MUSEone]

http://i30.tinypic.com/ayvy44.jpg
maso- ive seen them all, get up bro. start working on some new shit though. it would be cool to see something new from you.

engn- i like it, your g and all. those lines probably take too long, id probably say forget it.

Umm ok? I said "recent". I get up, just not as much lately cause of my shoulder, and now im due for surgery on April 21st.

Dont say i dont get up when u dont know me or anything about me.

[Jihad]

im sayin that your shit is good dumbass. like "yeah man shits tight-get up". would it help your ego if i said "stay up"?

[MUSEone]

Well i take, "ive seen em all before, get up" as "idc, ive seen em all, get up more"

No need to call someone a dumbass.

[JETPACK!!]

watch the attitude bro, it becomes offensive when you can sense the sarcasim through the e-thernet.

maso, your shits hot, dont change your steeze unless you know its better

[Engine.357]

Hmmm... Which letters do you like from which one, Maybe I can combine them

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe51.png
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe4.png

[MUSEone]

watch the attitude bro, it becomes offensive when you can sense the sarcasim through the e-thernet.

maso, your shits hot, dont change your steeze unless you know its better

Thnx. But is this directed towards me?

[Jihad]

just being a smartass sorry. yeah, i can see how you took that sorry. i meant to say that ive seen those pics before and that you should get it up because its good man. thats just what i was saying drawn out. and about new stuff. thats the only hand ive ever seen of yours, and i wish i could see some others because the one is tight and really flows right.

[Tokenkaligreens]

engn i like the 2nd G better (blue) just keep tweeking it something will pop out.

[Jihad]

[QUOTE=Jihad;1051514]http://i30.tinypic.com/ayvy44.jpg

bumb for the critics.

[MUSEone]

its aight homie...

here ya go....

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3474/006az6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Old pic. they all have more steez now. Ill try and go get pics. h.o

[JETPACK!!]

Thnx. But is this directed towards me?

nah, if it was i would have said. "maso, your attitude..."

or however i started that sentence

jihad, make it simplier if your gonna ejaculate with the drips. cuz im having a hard time reading it.

an maso, honestly i still think your first ones the best. like i said, iunno what it is. but i like it

[SAID]

ahaha
.. a dick.
i loled at that bro ahahahaha

[MUSEone]

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/6864/0326082126ank9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I failed miserably on the bottom right one.

[SAID]

top rights hot !!
woulda done a star instead of that done though.

[MUSEone]

yea i was actually thinking that myself. brb. plus im trying to bend it more.

[Sunk]

bottom left does it for me

[Engine.357]

So do you guys like this G better? More crits if possible

Maso those are hot

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe53.png

[MUSEone]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9962/0326082137agc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8697/0326082136abx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
It has a bit of Philly influenece in it, but this is wat im going for, and before anyone says its a bite, ive been attempting this kinda of style before i ever saw this pic.

EDIT: ok fuck it, i cant find the pic to quote to show u guys.

[5Funerals]

im just gonna ask if you were looking at kadism tags.


were you looking at kadism tags?

[MUSEone]

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3898/spain2pn1.jpg


No, this is the one i was talking about. I have no clue who that guy ur talking about is.

[JETPACK!!]

engn, that Gs a lot better.
maso, its lookin nice, keep fuckin with that steeze

[Tokenkaligreens]

engn if you can make the top of the G like the top of the E it will look ill imo. keep at it.

[MUSEone]

So do you guys like this G better? More crits if possible

Maso those are hot

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe53.png
Thnx man, im not sayin its a bite ore anything, but it reminded my of my boy Guest's G.

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4913/1003307az0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[5Funerals]

im just gonna ask if you were looking at kadism tags.


were you looking at kadism tags?

whaddya say?

[MUSEone]

Uh.. i said that ive enver heard of tha guy, nor seen his tags. haha

[Tokenkaligreens]

haha i remeber that guest dude code or some shit...


ya and maso keep fucking with that style..one can never have to much of it.

[5Funerals]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4wI2_oozcdk
im not calling bite at all it just seemed you might have been influenced

[Engine.357]

I played with it for a while and I really like it now, what do you guy's think? If it needs more work Crit, if not I'll hit it up on paper

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/Scribe6.png

[Engine.357]

engn if you can make the top of the G like the top of the E it will look ill imo. keep at it.

didnt see that I'll try it out

[JETPACK!!]

i dont like the tails on the N, its too much for me. get rid of them and the arrow and underline it, see how that works, cuz in my head it looks nice.

[Engine.357]

Here's How it looks with your idea, what do you think?

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe61.png

[JETPACK!!]

yeah word, it looks a lot better. your gonna improve fast, your one of the few that listen to every crit an work with it

[smikoer]

JIHAD, for the amount of drips you got going i'd also have to also say simplify it a bit
MASO, I like the 'philly influenced' style that you're going for.
ENGN, niiiice as. lookin forward to seeing some non-digital stuff cause you obv know what's going on.

koer simple;
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1776/l30c82f7ed6b75da6633c12vo1.jpg
2;
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7687/l73a64261a379a2782b0d4alc0.jpg
3;
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6598/lec224359e293e9c9975b80ce9.jpg

[Engine.357]

Meh... I take criticism well so I have no problem taking advice in the end I'm gonna make it the way I want but constructive criticism helps in the process...

and to people who bitch about there shit being called... well shit they just need to shut up and get back to the drawing board

[JETPACK!!]

koer simple;
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7687/l73a64261a379a2782b0d4alc0.jpg
3;
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6598/lec224359e293e9c9975b80ce9.jpg

dawg, you actually painted a rock? the fucks wrong with you, find a wall. though i'll give you a pound for the bench

its a good simple, add some steeze into it, cuz its kinna boring

[smikoer]

Yeah.. need to practice on something before eyes see my crap.. and this is, after all, the toy section so I've a lot to learn.
I'm actually happy you say it's boring though.. means I can start attempting to advance it so it isn't so boring. =]

[mmmburgers]

Here's How it looks with your idea, what do you think?

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribe61.png

well, i'd say just squeeze the letters together a bit more

[MUSEone]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4wI2_oozcdk
im not calling bite at all it just seemed you might have been influenced

nah i havent seen that until u just now showed me. Thats just straight philly style, im squeezing mine down alot more. Like i said, kinda in that pic i posted.

[Wallace]

messing around with this for about 10 minutes, pretty sloppy i did it quick

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5700/tagzn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[SAID]

give em to get em..
but im feeling nice today.
work on your structure.

[Jihad]

http://i30.tinypic.com/ayvy44.jpg



Bumping my shit because i didnt get any crits.

[H3TT1NG3R]

id lose the pentagon unless you worship satan. and its mad faded

[Jihad]

id lose the pentagon unless you worship satan. and its mad faded

its black shoe dye. it was during the day and my camera phone fucked it all up but its black.

[H3TT1NG3R]

o alright. i cant really tell what it says tho

[-Ark-]

Jihad - Decent, but lose the pentagram for sure. Also work on makin' the letters a bit clearer.

I've been workin' a bit on my handstyle since it's been gettin' warmer out. Is it good enough for me to start hittin the streets yet?

[H3TT1NG3R]

^def. mad good and simple

[MUSEone]

Jihad - Decent, but lose the pentagram for sure. Also work on makin' the letters a bit clearer.

I've been workin' a bit on my handstyle since it's been gettin' warmer out. Is it good enough for me to start hittin the streets yet?

make all letters same size.

[-Ark-]

Thanks H3TT1NG3R and MUSE. Any big flaws other than that, Muse?

[Wallace]

give em to get em..
but im feeling nice today.
work on your structure.

thanks, i dont really want to give crits till i really know what im doing.

any more crits?

[MUSEone]

I think another kid on the site writes ark. But thats it. O well.

[Engine.357]

You guys kept saying to do my Tags on paper so I did a big one in Graphic Design Class today (Hence the background). Credit for the clouds goes to Blockhead, got the idea from his handstyles, so please don't call it a bite.

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribepic.gif

[[phenom5]]

Ark I'd say squeeze the letters closer a little bit more...it just seems like there's a little bit too much space between the A and R. Other than that looks alright.

Engine blockhead aint the only person to use clouds lol, looks nice though your def on the right track with the simples. Id say hit the streets with that ish

[Engine.357]

;1052609']Ark I'd say squeeze the letters closer a little bit more...it just seems like there's a little bit too much space between the A and R. Other than that looks alright.

Engine blockhead aint the only person to use clouds lol, looks nice though your def on the right track with the simples. Id say hit the streets with that ish

I know he's not the first but I got my Idea from one of his Handstyles and just wanted to credit him without pissing anyone off, I used some of Giant's throwie letters the other day and everyone got pissed so I don't want that to happen again

[JETPACK!!]

engine, that looks good bro, try squeezing the letters together just a bit more, see how that looks.

ark, like muse said, keep your letters the same size. the R is mad tiny.

been tryin out a new steezskies, already made better, need some crits on the actual letters kthnx

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1326/tamkhandsteeze3nl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Engine.357]

engine, that looks good bro, try squeezing the letters together just a bit more, see how that looks.

ark, like muse said, keep your letters the same size. the R is mad tiny.

been tryin out a new steezskies, already made better, need some crits on the actual letters kthnx

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1326/tamkhandsteeze3nl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I squeezed 'em together in Illustrator and I feel those letters look good spread out a little even though I kind of see what your saying...

I like how it flows but the first 3 letters have a lot of curvature and the K seems too pointy and less curvy compared to the T A and M

[-Panik-]

messing around with this for about 10 minutes, pretty sloppy i did it quick

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5700/tagzn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

dude loose the halo and like you said it's sloppy, you got a good idea of some style so keep improving, just write it out like 300 times and get good at it, also squeeze the letters together a bit

[m.ziggy]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo269.jpg

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo270.jpg

the more i look at it the less i like it, suggestions?

[kog_throwie]

i cant tell if thats a Z or a K

[JETPACK!!]

word son, that Ks mad wack. dont put a tail on it. an dont make your letters go BIG small BIG small BIG small. either all small, all big. the first letter bigger than the others is cool too.

[ViaHipHop]

its aight homie...

here ya go....

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3474/006az6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Old pic. they all have more steez now. Ill try and go get pics. h.o

4's my fav

[m.ziggy]

word son, that Ks mad wack. dont put a tail on it. an dont make your letters go BIG small BIG small BIG small. either all small, all big. the first letter bigger than the others is cool too.

do you have a suggestion on how to do that with a t and k? i cant get my letters to flow

[atlok7]

ziggy- i think they looks tight just try and make the top of the T more stylish. more like this one-
i drew this for a battle a while ago
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6643/photo128kj4.jpg

[m.ziggy]

thats sick man, i will keep working on it

that alittle better?
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo272.jpg
i know its the same exact t as yours, im just messing around with different things

[JETPACK!!]

engine, that looks good bro, try squeezing the letters together just a bit more, see how that looks.

ark, like muse said, keep your letters the same size. the R is mad tiny.

been tryin out a new steezskies, already made better, need some crits on the actual letters kthnx

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1326/tamkhandsteeze3nl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumpskies

setoke, it looks much better when you round the tail of the K imo. keep it up

[mmmburgers]

i dunno if i posted this before
but yea
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/Picture030.jpg

[m.ziggy]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo273.jpg

is it getting better?

[smikoer]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo273.jpg

is it getting better?

Perhaps it's personal taste, but I actually preferred the other K. That said, the green ones are my favourites..
Careful of the T going over the K, it makes it look like an R.
Don't be afraid to let the E flow into the T.
Keep working the last e so it sits well with the K.
Keep at it, it's looking good.

[WiseCracker]

yo i can't remember if i posted this shit yet, lemme know what's good.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2025/2369758602_3d4ab2e742_o.jpg

[-Ark-]

Wise - Lose the curl on the front of the W. Straighten the I up and do somethin' with it. Maybe dot it or something. Move it all a bit closer together.


Alright, I took the advice you guys gave and moved everything closer together and made the R bigger. I added a star inside the A, and I'm kinda feelin' it. What do you guys think?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

york exchange

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9081/dscn0397xc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9081/dscn0397xc8.fe21d354d1.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=dscn0397xc8.jpg)

[JETPACK!!]

honestly, what the fuck do i have to do for a crit. this shits gettin mad irrirating.

[-Ark-]

Jetpack, I'm feelin' everything but the M. Try playing around with it a bit. Maybe bend it a lil. Other than that, it's lookin' good.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

jetpack- I don't like the T or A but the M and the K are nice

[JETPACK!!]

(ark)thank you, my advice to you is to try making it all capital letters. i like the A but the R is lacking. small R's are pretty boring imo.
(cyto) that york exchange is a nice simple. the reason i first changed my name is because i hate Ys, especially startin the handy with one, there hard to steeze up. the only thing i dont like about it is the R and how it curves back when your bring it back up for the loop.

[-Ark-]

I used to do all caps, but I can't do capital As for shit, and my other letters were pretty wack too. Check my earlier posts in this topic if you wanna see how bad my tags were when I did all caps.

[JETPACK!!]

when i post my next handy ill do an exchange for you, see if i can come up with something better

[WiseCracker]

yo i know arrows are mad toy but lemme know what you think, i'm having a tough idea of what to do for the i's dot. lemme know
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3109/2369853056_1a21f43890_o.jpg

[WiseCracker]

york - nice, simple, keep it going
ark - i'm with jetpack on that one, mad caps son

[Slushi]

York: Thats some pretty decent stuff. Try and keep all you letters the same size for now.
Wise: Yikes, try simpler shit.
Setoke: Good, but the underline just doesn't do justice, you should experiment with different flows and underlines.

As for caps/smalls just do what you are comfortable with, or whatever you think you can do better.


Heres some super-whackness teehee
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3599/tagslz5.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

thats cute slushi, i like the bottom one, an thats one of the few halos i like. im diggin your S' too. try it without underlinin it twice, cuz imo one should be good enough

[WiseCracker]

slushi - go for the second one just get rid of the O. Keep letters uniform: size, shape, style

[Slushi]

York: Thats some pretty decent stuff. Try and keep all you letters the same size for now.
Wise: Yikes, try simpler shit.
Setoke: Good, but the underline just doesn't do justice, you should experiment with different flows and underlines.

As for caps/smalls just do what you are comfortable with, or whatever you think you can do better.


Heres some super-whackness teehee
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3599/tagslz5.jpg

I always end up at the end of the page :(

[-Leski]

...

[Slushi]

Panik.. don't talk.

[SAID]

yea dude, theres plenty of room for improvement in there.
dont go in the streets with that shit yet.

[WiseCracker]

can i get some tips?

[WiseCracker]

aight here's simple. lemme know if i need to go more basic, but it feels like when i do i lose what little style i have.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2037/2369421775_2dc82d4929_o.jpg

[H3TT1NG3R]

^on the top curve of your e make it liek a < then the loop at the bottom, it might look better

[JETPACK!!]

the one on the far right is the best imo. but like hittinger said, make the top part of your E more like the top part of your S, dont bring it down as much but just a bit to add some flava into it. try a slight hook on the top of your W, just a SLIGHT hook, kinna like you already have on the right side of the W. and either dot your I or put bars on it to define it.

[WiseCracker]

alright lets see, i got these first few that kinda went with what hettinger said, and the second set is like a combo of both... lemme know
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2249/2370279642_38bcff8bb2_o.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2041/2369472431_79096ba4f2_o.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

kay gimmie a minute, ill sketch you some shit. you were listening, but you weren't understanding. its cool though

[H3TT1NG3R]

try not to make your shit so curly, and if u do, liek the e and s, make tyhe bottom of the e close to a circle, and the same with the top and bottom of the s. then with the w it would look better if the middle part went all the way up like the outside lines

[Jihad]

No Arrows!

[-Panik-]

oh wow,
sorry, my comp is always signed onto this and my brother buys some shirts from the graff shop, and makes random little comments sometimes.
I apologize

[-Panik-]

apology for double posting,
but come to think of it, i think i will just delete that shit
it's kind of embarrassing:S

[-Leski]

-snip-

My bad, didnt read the other advice people where givin ya wise.
I'll let em help ya out their way.

[NiL]

yo i know arrows are mad toy but lemme know what you think, i'm having a tough idea of what to do for the i's dot. lemme know
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3109/2369853056_1a21f43890_o.jpg


Don't need a dot and take of fthe big line on the W, other than that just keep at it. I'ma try write this then put it up if I can be bothered hold up :P

[WiseCracker]

yo thanks for all the help everyone, many thanks. yo jetpack i can't wait for those sketches dude. no hate panik it's all good.

[glyce]

wise- those are looking good but i dont really like the e

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag002.jpg
sloppy as shit but what ever im trying to develope a oneliner and tips?

[*cept*]

wise- those are looking good but i dont really like the e

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag002.jpg
sloppy as shit but what ever im trying to develope a oneliner and tips?
i like it. one liners are hard as hell for me without makin it look cursivey like.

was just fuckin around today and decided to write drips and thought it ended up lookin pretty sick. i know theres a cat on here that already writes it, so DRIPS if your lookin man and you like it its all yours.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012-2.jpg
been fuckin around with the word amok too
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012-3.jpg
i know, that "A' looks like an "S"
opinions?

[WiseCracker]

glyce - yo thanks for the crit you got any suggestions on the e? and nice onelines, i couldn't pull that shit off if i tried.
cept - i like your style but the s doesn't fit. your first four letters match perfect but the s kinda stands out, try to make it fit

[m.ziggy]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo273.jpg

is it getting better?

bump to a new page, critics?

[glyce]

wise i think if you made the top of your e more like the top of your s it might flow better

[Jihad]

CEPT this is for you (do not write DRIPS, for that is highly gay)

http://i26.tinypic.com/2088xp1.jpg

1)do your simples!
2)add a tiny bit of steezz!

Hope this helps!

[Jihad]

i know that looks like shit im really tired but i hope you get what im trying to show you.

[*cept*]

CEPT this is for you (do not write DRIPS, for that is highly gay)

http://i26.tinypic.com/2088xp1.jpg

1)do your simples!
2)add a tiny bit of steezz!

Hope this helps!
those both look like absolute shit.
tellin me to go simple fool. mine were sbout as simple as they come. not to mention it looks the exact same as yours.
i dont really get defensive about crits, but cmon man.

Doesnt really matter anyway. i dont write either of those. it was just some fuck around shit.

[Jihad]

well... with the stuff you have going on up there with the cute smiley face and sloppy handstyle i was just trying to point you in the right direction. 99% of writers would rather see straight letters like that then that smiley shit. do you want me to give you something with more style??? im willing to help you out. what do you write too?

[*cept*]

well... with the stuff you have going on up there with the cute smiley face and sloppy handstyle i was just trying to point you in the right direction. 99% of writers would rather see straight letters like that then that smiley shit. do you want me to give you something with more style??? im willing to help you out. what do you write too? fool you have no idea what you are talkin about. that smiley was a joke.
tags arent about style.
i write cept.

and really man, you're gonna step to me with a tag lookin like this
http://i30.tinypic.com/ayvy44.jpg
minus the fact that its done out of shoe dye, you cant tell whjat the fuck it says.

[Jihad]

fool you have no idea what you are talkin about. that smiley was a joke.
tags arent about style.
i write cept.


1)shoe dye is good, you should try the kiwi shoe dye mop-rack it-shake-open-write-mad drips-done-you're an idiot

2)i don't think the smileys were a joke lol.

3)if tags aren't about style then why does everybody have their own?

4)once you start getting up you'll find that you cant always read peoples tags. doesn't mean its not good or decent.

[WiseCracker]

yooooooo inet beef is not worth it. both of you, make peace, move on. Jihad, cept prob doesn't want help and cept, jihad was just trying to help. everyone chill out

[*cept*]

1)shoe dye is good, you should try the kiwi shoe dye mop-rack it-shake-open-write-mad drips-done-you're an idiot

2)i don't think the smileys were a joke lol.

3)if tags aren't about style then why does everybody have their own?

4)once you start getting up you'll find that you cant always read peoples tags. doesn't mean its not good or decent.
i got to sig this shit, its so fuckin funny

[Jihad]

cept are you 13 ? haha

[*cept*]

cept are you 13 ? haha no much older

[Jihad]

http://i27.tinypic.com/qpm2hk.jpg

crits~

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

what does it say? I don't like it

[Jihad]

jesus... sia.

[*cept*]

http://i27.tinypic.com/qpm2hk.jpg

crits~
if i ever saw that shit, it wouldnt even be worth my ink to cross it out.

[Jihad]

post something cept.

[*cept*]

post something cept.


http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012-5.jpg

[Engine.357]

i like it. one liners are hard as hell for me without makin it look cursivey like.

was just fuckin around today and decided to write drips and thought it ended up lookin pretty sick. i know theres a cat on here that already writes it, so DRIPS if your lookin man and you like it its all yours.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012-2.jpg
been fuckin around with the word amok too
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012-3.jpg
i know, that "A' looks like an "S"
opinions?

First of all Drips is a pretty gay name, second Don't get mad at someones crits and start beef when you asked for the crits, if you can't handle criticism good or bad then you shouldn't tag because all of us toys who actually can write still suck until further notice even though we can write better than you

I took criticism and I went From This:

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/lfr.jpg

To this:

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribepic.gif

In a week, So shut your mouth, take our advice and maybe you won't suck

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

engine- I like the E's but eveything else is meh, don't use quotes, stars, and bubble clouds because everyone does that shit, just work on your tag, you N's are consistent, but they arn't pretty and your G would look sick in a different tag, work on flow

[IlikePie]

Cept and Jihad, you both suck, shut up.

[Jihad]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i129/shawn6589/DSC_0012-5.jpg

shawn, you wrote jihad better than you did cept hahah! just had to point that out.


e-beef is fuckin dumb... i know im not good but i have sense of whats decent and whats not. stop trying to act hard when people help you out. being a douche gets you no where. last time i checked we're all in the same boat.

[WiseCracker]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahhahahahahaa that's rich guys.

[-Panik-]

Cept, that kinda made me chuckle to myself
but enough with this beef
any crits on this tag?
http://i25.tinypic.com/2ebwbxv.jpg

[SAID]

not feeling those two line going horizontally on your p and k.
not liking your arrow either.
try and fix that star too on top of your i.

[-Panik-]

lol, aiight, any suggestions?
I kinda botched the arrow tho, it's usually more centered unless you mean I should lose it

[MUSEone]

First of all Drips is a pretty gay name, second Don't get mad at someones crits and start beef when you asked for the crits, if you can't handle criticism good or bad then you shouldn't tag because all of us toys who actually can write still suck until further notice even though we can write better than you

I took criticism and I went From This:

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/lfr.jpg

To this:

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribepic.gif

In a week, So shut your mouth, take our advice and maybe you won't suck

Dont waste ur decos on that shit. Move ur letters closer together.

[WiseCracker]

yo check this shit, i'm trying to put all suggestions into one. lemme know.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2202/2370727023_6c22b2c396_o.jpg

engine - yo i like the letters but deff lose the extras, and bunch
panik - SIMPLE!
jihad - you write sia right? well i don't wanna start useless beef, this is only a suggestion. go simple, just like straight up get rid of what you got

[Slushi]

Engine, thats looks phenomenal the way it is.

Wise, theres not much you can do now except keep practicing.

[H3TT1NG3R]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/wise.jpg
for wise

[*cept*]

First of all Drips is a pretty gay name, second Don't get mad at someones crits and start beef when you asked for the crits, if you can't handle criticism good or bad then you shouldn't tag because all of us toys who actually can write still suck until further notice even though we can write better than you

I took criticism and I went From This:

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/lfr.jpg

To this:

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x182/christian_tg/scribepic.gif

In a week, So shut your mouth, take our advice and maybe you won't suck
jesus titty fucking christ....
I KNOW DRIPS IS A GAY NAME, I WAS JUST PLAYING AROUND YOU FUCKTARD!!!
engine, that shit IS NOT a tag. something that takes you fuckin twenty minutes to do, and outline all pretty is not a tag.
this forum is gay as fuck. its full of little pre-pubescent little 15 year-old idiots who use their moms credit cards to buy them markers.

JIHAD- IF YOU SEE THIS, LETS BATTLE. YOU PICK THE WORD AND WHEN ITS DUE AND WE'LL POST IT UP FOR EVEYONE TO JUDGE. (engine, if your down ill battle you too)

[WiseCracker]

hettinger - i like that bottom one, i'll keep working on it and try to put some style into it. thanks for the tips man.

[MUSEone]

jesus titty fucking christ....
I KNOW DRIPS IS A GAY NAME, I WAS JUST PLAYING AROUND YOU FUCKTARD!!!
engine, that shit IS NOT a tag. something that takes you fuckin twenty minutes to do, and outline all pretty is not a tag.
this forum is gay as fuck. its full of little pre-pubescent little 15 year-old idiots who use their moms credit cards to buy them markers.

JIHAD- IF YOU SEE THIS, LETS BATTLE. YOU PICK THE WORD AND WHEN ITS DUE AND WE'LL POST IT UP FOR EVEYONE TO JUDGE. (engine, if your down ill battle you too)


hmmm, i know i have NO part in this beef at all, but can i join in? haha im bored as fuck today and its raining outside. =[

[WiseCracker]

yo my personal fav is numba 1 lemme know what's good with the rest.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/2371768708_dd7c6f4d02_o.jpg

Or did you mean this:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2058/2371014535_50cfceeb63_o.jpg

[iBomb4KOG]

honnestly im not feelin any of these on this whole page

[glyce]

wise- those are looking good but i dont really like the e

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag002.jpg
sloppy as shit but what ever im trying to develope a oneliner and tips?
bumpin for crits, how can i make it better?

[MUSEone]

by not making the leg of the K going under the whole tag.

[letsg0skate]

Dont waste ur decos on that shit. Move ur letters closer together.
Yeah, because they are your decos right?

[MUSEone]

Obviously not since i said UR" decos..

[*cept*]

hmmm, i know i have NO part in this beef at all, but can i join in? haha im bored as fuck today and its raining outside. =[
sure... figure out a word and we'll do it.

[MUSEone]

Meh, since its not my beef, u guys pick tha word. hah

[Soboe!]

can i join too? cause like seems like people are beefen for no reason and i wanna shut em up, yes im a cocky kid, deal with it.

[Slushi]

Me too.