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[Soboe!]

thats the spirit slushi!

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8721/dscn0408ja7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3588/dscn0409ea5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4889/dscn0411fi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Engine.357]

jesus titty fucking christ....
I KNOW DRIPS IS A GAY NAME, I WAS JUST PLAYING AROUND YOU FUCKTARD!!!
engine, that shit IS NOT a tag. something that takes you fuckin twenty minutes to do, and outline all pretty is not a tag.
this forum is gay as fuck. its full of little pre-pubescent little 15 year-old idiots who use their moms credit cards to buy them markers.

JIHAD- IF YOU SEE THIS, LETS BATTLE. YOU PICK THE WORD AND WHEN ITS DUE AND WE'LL POST IT UP FOR EVEYONE TO JUDGE. (engine, if your down ill battle you too)

You two should battle if theres gonna be beef, I'll battle if you want but I've got no beef with you I was just saying not to get mad at people's crits good or bad because they really can help.

[*cept*]

You two should battle if theres gonna be beef, I'll battle if you want but I've got no beef with you I was just saying not to get mad at people's crits good or bad because they really can help.
honestly, i dont get mad at crits ever. like if you would have said something i would have used it. But that fools shit is soo terrible, i couldnt let it go.

What about the word "Mork" for the battle. like mork and mindy
http://artfiles.art.com/images/-/Mork-Mindy-Photograph-C12148210.jpeg

some of you are probably too young to get it though, but i still think it would be a fun word.

[-Saiko-]

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8721/dscn0408ja7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3588/dscn0409ea5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4889/dscn0411fi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Keep sketchin son, all them letters look like normal cursive letters, be free and flow wit it

[MUSEone]

honestly, i dont get mad at crits ever. like if you would have said something i would have used it. But that fools shit is soo terrible, i couldnt let it go.

What about the word "Mork" for the battle. like mork and mindy
http://artfiles.art.com/images/-/Mork-Mindy-Photograph-C12148210.jpeg

some of you are probably too young to get it though, but i still think it would be a fun word.

Mork? works for me. deadline?

[Mr yarbles]

http://i32.tinypic.com/241jrs2.jpg

http://i32.tinypic.com/2n6xhkk.jpg

Crits? says tesone.

[WiseCracker]

yo my personal fav is numba 1 lemme know what's good with the rest.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/2371768708_dd7c6f4d02_o.jpg

Or did you mean this:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2058/2371014535_50cfceeb63_o.jpg
yo bump, your guy's beef is taking over this tread!:(

Mr. Y - Go simple, then come back

[Engine.357]

Mork and Mindy handstyle? I'm down? whens the deadline?

[Mr yarbles]

wise the last part of the w and kina close to the middle in the bottom picture spread it out some more the s looks kinda like a 5 and go a little bit more simple with the e

[*cept*]

Mork? works for me. deadline?

You guys want it to be a sketch or handstyle or what...

Id say due friday.

[MUSEone]

Well since u guys are beefing over handies, then i say it should be a handstyle battle.

[WiseCracker]

shouldn't all that shit be in a toy battle forum?

[Slushi]

A whole week for a handstyle?

[*cept*]

A whole week for a handstyle?
HANDSTYLE
WORD: MORK AND MINDY
DUE- MONDAY
POST IT UP IN HERE WHEN YOURE DONE WITH IT

[bloot]

Cyto-You need some flow, try to keep the letters the same size

Wise-All of your letters look out of place with eachother


simplistic, reads "coa"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v189/zweenk/HPIM0814.jpg

[glyce]

its real hard to see in yellow and that a needs some work

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag004.jpg
still trying to develope my online any tips?

[bloot]

its real hard to see in yellow and that a needs some work

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag004.jpg
still trying to develope my online any tips?

There isn't any flow in your letters, it looks like shit. Try to keep it simple and don't use extensions.

[H3TT1NG3R]

bloot-too light to see
glyce-idk its too messy
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/waman.jpg
just a one time use name-waman.
idk it has mad flow, but looks like shit cuz its sideways

[ickis3]

i dig the drips but i can't really see the W. it looks more like a V or U.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3040/2371737269_b49e075884.jpg?v=1206834423

[Jihad]

can i get some real crits- maybe some "ideas"... or "orginality" idk if anybodys ever heard of that on here. im not gonna write fuckin unicorns, starts and bubble letters- the worlds not like that; thats not reality. my letters are suppost to get bigger and have a down up down curve from left to right- yes thats right... its on purpose. life isn't preportional and pretty, its fuckin ugly- like my letters. if you don't like it shove it up your ass. if you can see that... help me out because i know im a toy. thanks.

http://i31.tinypic.com/2wp73tg.jpg

[Slushi]

Don't try to be original... ever. And your handstyle is in no way a microcosm of life.

[Jihad]

i dig the drips but i can't really see the W. it looks more like a V or U.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3040/2371737269_b49e075884.jpg?v=1206834423

i know what your trying to do lol... just write it again with all the letters the same width and hight. keep that r down... or try a uppercase.

[intaout]

huhuhuh. but its almost true when your starting out try to be"original" by adding a few arrows. some crazy underlines, maybey even a few lines straight over the tag!
but sia i say work on your letters, the abrupt sharp points look wack. and the curve of the i is bad too.

[Jihad]

Don't try to be original... ever. And your handstyle is in no way a microcosm of life.

why don't you get off your high horse and say something helpful. this forum isn't for dissing and beef its for people helping people with there hands.

[*cept*]

And your handstyle is in no way a microcosm of life.
:D

Jihad- You ask for crits and opinions, and then tell everyone to fuck off and your letters are supposed to look like shit. WTF?

[Slushi]

Stop being so defensive; You were clearly under the impression that it's original to suck.
I was only trying to remove you from that mentality.

[wafflecakee]

its real hard to see in yellow and that a needs some work

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag004.jpg
still trying to develope my online any tips?

i think thats looking better than alot of things here, keep practicing!

[glyce]

thanks man
trying it with a new s
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag006.jpg

ickis3- its ok but get rid of those arrows and keep the arch on the r down, make it kind of look like the top of your n

[jersOneTIC]

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6105/taghx7.jpg

[-Leski]

started too close on those flairs and it dripped, but I didnt need to tell you that.
Space out the letters a bit more, the crowding makes the R illegible.

[PumpItUp]

its real hard to see in yellow and that a needs some work

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag004.jpg
still trying to develope my online any tips?

Nice tag!

[SAID]

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6105/taghx7.jpg
dopeness.

[WiseCracker]

thanks man
trying it with a new s
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag006.jpg

ickis3- its ok but get rid of those arrows and keep the arch on the r down, make it kind of look like the top of your n
yo man i liked it before, try to develop the older one, this one isn't as nice. the s doesn't flow with the rest.

[Slushi]

tee hee

hhttp://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8978/morksp8.jpg

[wolsley]

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00419.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00119.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00328.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00277.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00123.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00381.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00380.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00377.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00374.jpg

[MUSEone]

3rds tha best. Just make the dot on the i a little smaller.

[m.ziggy]

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00277.jpg


i like that one just without the little lines after the e

[H3TT1NG3R]

omg abide those are amazing

[Slushi]

Decent, not amazing.

[cest2]

Crits?

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/1853/tagqw1.jpg

[wolsley]

Decent, not amazing.

I agree, My shit is nowhere near as good as what the rest of my town/citys writers have to offer.

[Slushi]

You're on the right track... try not doing your underline from inside your A

[Mr yarbles]

My first attempts at a one liner any crits?

http://i26.tinypic.com/im2hhe.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/t8rwhl.jpg

Abide- those are pretty sick the onlything I can see is that the dot on the i is a little big and I don't like the a for the underline

cest- make the letters a little bigger and spread out from each other

[Thrice]

Abide-sick stuff man, nice
yarbles-go simple, very simple
Crit please
http://i27.tinypic.com/16honxt.jpg

[Wallace]

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00277.jpg
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00374.jpg

i like these two a lot

[mosezone]

yarbles-simpler possibly?
ahem-it's ok, just get a little flow going maybe
abide-other than the thing off the A, it's looking hella dope

some shitty stuff from spring break, mostly boston
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01619.jpg
(the bottom one)
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01698.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01700.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01723.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01754.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01768.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i28.tinypic.com/m9866g.jpg

Something like that any better or simpler?

and mose I Like those tags.
nice and clean

[mmmburgers]

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/Picture004-1.jpg
kemist handstyle
critzzzzzzzzzzzzzz?
(sorry for the size, will resize next time)

[smikoer]

JERS: think I've said it before, but always love your stuff. Only crit is the bottom half of the E sitting a little too close to the J.
ABIDE: for the A, keep it whipped out like that, but, as a few other have said, not all the way into an underline.. still nice though!
CEST2; I don't like the C to the E connection.. and let the T be the same size as the other letters.
AHEM: Change the H, it goes against the flow. Maybe use a lowercase E? Whatever works for you.. Also have a flick for you below.
MOES; no crits from me, i like it

My first drips;
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1653/dsc02985ly0.jpg
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/849/50055778ne9.jpg
One I don't like;
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3523/77237093ju2.jpg
Random words:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6192/aliceru2.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2913/trickzep7.jpg
One for Thrice // AHEM:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9407/ahemit9.jpg

[Duct Tape & Death Threats]

Shit flick, but I got bored so I hit up most of the people on this page.. The ones I could read..
Consider that statement and the photo crits, haha.
In the ways of where to link letters and where not to.
ie. Kemist, it's mad but don't link the e to m. Makes it look like a u.
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3791/image0273ht6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[emokid]

first time out everr

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN7223.jpg

http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa215/pork_album/DSCN7225.jpg

sloppy cos i was SCARED.

those are some serious drips koer :)

[-Ark-]

emokid - I'm feelin' it, except for the halo. Keep it up.

Bumpin' this pic for more crits.

[oakstr1]

best one. they look dope as fuck

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb80/mosleysphotobucketofjoy/Graf/DSC00374.jpg

dope one to.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01619.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

abide, those are nice and clean. im diggin the flow of em.
mose i like the shape an how the letters get bigger as they progress
emokid, there good for your first time. but im not really feelin the arrow on your S

i really dont like it, im working on a better one now. it started out nice, then i worked with it and it just got worse.
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6240/tamkhandsteeze4dq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Wallace]

these are real sloppy i practice doing them quick

purple or blue? crits are greatly appreciated too

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8479/tag2sk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[JETPACK!!]

abide, those are nice and clean. im diggin the flow of em.
mose i like the shape an how the letters get bigger as they progress
emokid, there good for your first time. but im not really feelin the arrow on your S

i really dont like it, im working on a better one now. it started out nice, then i worked with it and it just got worse.
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6240/tamkhandsteeze4dq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fuck the bottom.

klasic, gives crits if you want em

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

dont under line ur tag with ur k..

and purple

[JSBiggz]

Klasic- do away with the K underline thing, move your letters closer together a bit
JetPack- Good simple. Get rid of the T overline....and start putting a little style in your letters.


http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8413/img0102rx1.jpg

crits on this?

[Wallace]

ive played with so many different k's and i cant seem to find one that looks right =/, if anyone has any ideas for it lmk

-Ark- i like it other than the star in the A
emokid it's tough to read, i see aieso

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

loks liek it was done with like a crayon type marker..nice

[JSBiggz]

loks liek it was done with like a crayon type marker..nice
Black Prismacolor Premere Marker

[emokid]

ive played with so many different k's and i cant seem to find one that looks right =/, if anyone has any ideas for it lmk

-Ark- i like it other than the star in the A
emokid it's tough to read, i see aieso

dude, its like, the most legible hand on the page. o u e s o.
props to anyone on a wall :|

[WiseCracker]

yo i'm diggin most of the stuff on this page, wallace lose the underline otherwise keep it up. jetpack keep working on it, maybe start over and try again.
I've been looking/working on these and i decided that i'm gonna keep one to work on, please give crits/ lemme know which is best.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3143/2378881294_a317565a3c_o.jpg

[Slushi]

is that you sister? She's hot.

[WiseCracker]

nah dude, random girl in the dorms. i can give her number for some positive crits hahaha

[mosezone]

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01863.jpg

forgot this one. mine's the red, obviously.

klasic-make all your letters the same for now, and lose the underline K thing
jet-maybe try making them straight and add a little steeze possibly
jbigz-lose the underline. otherwise, not looking too bad
wise-i'd say the 4th is the best. try making the letters fairly simple and make sure not to take a long time on each letter because it'll end up looking really forced and unnatural.

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook009.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook010.jpg

[JETPACK!!]

mose thats such an ill picture. were do you reside if you dont mind me asking
i love your M, its freshhh

[mosezone]

springfield, il. probably one of the worst scenes ever here, if you want to call it a scene, haha.

EDIT: and vois, get all the letters the same size. but it's not looking too bad. 3rd down on the 2nd pic is probably the best.

[HAJA]

wise keep workin on it.. i like the 4th one the best that E is nice, maybe try messin around using a lower case I?


ight heres my first time using an NY fat, any comments??

says = Tano SOD
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6059/jjgd8qv9.jpg

[Meko, ya heard?]

haja that sucks a fat wang

[HAJA]

like your mom..:rolleyes:

[Meko, ya heard?]

hahaha :D

[Karlaps]

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/2041/klaemklapsbn3.jpg
whats better?
im thinking of changing my word to klaem

[HAJA]

like klaem better.. gots more flow

BUMP any comments??
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6059/jjgd8qv9.jpg

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

fucks it say ?

[Casual7ie]

Its looking aight. im just not diggin the plain underline. make it an arrow or somethin. keep playin around with it tho

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook009.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook010.jpg

bump

Klaem- like the start, different L and smaller M might work out.

Tans- I like the color and flares are staring good, SOD seems to work but the T-A on your tans is rough

[JSBiggz]

Klasic- do away with the K underline thing, move your letters closer together a bit
JetPack- Good simple. Get rid of the T overline....and start putting a little style in your letters.


http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8413/img0102rx1.jpg

crits on this?

bump no crits

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

^^ fuck did use to do that? ...white shit

EDIT : for Vois

[Wallace]

looks like window chalk or something

[Techkanuck]

HY-KO Window marker, can do all kinds of tries and have the same feel as a real marker

[Karlaps]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/4167/klaemgreenpf8.jpg
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/7260/img003na7.jpg
few more

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

is it cleanable ?...

[Karlaps]

yer ofcourse it is its justa chalk pen

[Techkanuck]

ya, but when i'm in my house thats really what i'm going for
I've made some similar size and consistancy versions with real paintmixes for when i decide to use it

[woozie]

http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/1130/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0vu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits just came up with it a few minutes ago

[atlok7]

haja= dope flairs but try and make it readable

[Karlaps]

that is shit woozie

[Wallace]

ive been messing around with K's for like an hour now and i still cant find anything that looks right, any ideas?

[woozie]

hay karlaps how about some actual crits instead just its shit like why is it shit

[Karlaps]

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/7465/klasicbsfa8.jpg

[Karlaps]

its like random scribbles i cant even read it try make it more simpler like take away the big bit that comes off the bottom of the k and the bottom of the b.
and what does it say?

[HAJA]

the "klaem" is looking good, just keep writing it.. you will get it looking nice

heres my tag in marker...(how i ussually do it) says "TANO" btw
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3518/jj004et8.jpg
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8162/jj003dd2.jpg

[Karlaps]

thats fresh haja i really like it

[Wallace]

i like it a lot too, nice flow

[JSBiggz]

Klasic- do away with the K underline thing, move your letters closer together a bit
JetPack- Good simple. Get rid of the T overline....and start putting a little style in your letters.


http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8413/img0102rx1.jpg

crits on this?

crits?

[HAJA]

biggz.. that K is sick, whole thing is pretty good..i would add some quotes at the front to even out the flair off from the K, but thats just me. Its pretty long, but stick to it.

woozie.. i think you got a good start.. i would get rid of how the lower limb from the K goes all through the A...you may need to add a fourth letter.. 3 letters are hard to get a good flow goin'

ight here ill bump this for the new page..
heres my tag in marker...(how i ussually do it) says "TANO" btw
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3518/jj004et8.jpg
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8162/jj003dd2.jpg

[JSBiggz]

biggz.. that K is sick, whole thing is pretty good..i would add some quotes at the front to even out the flair off from the K, but thats just me. Its pretty long, but stick to it.




[/quote]

Uhh....there isnt a K in it


Its

M A S R O N E

lol

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

HAJA that shit is preety sick

[HAJA]

myyy bad.. well wtf is the last letter.. it would make a tight k lmao..all right i got the e now...i was just lookin at the n and e together..still fresh

[JSBiggz]

Uhh... yours are nice to...looks like you forgot to do a quotation in the first one....but in the second i would do away with the little horizontil lines on the line from the O

[HAJA]

ye thats mostly the one i do with paint to get a nice flair

[Cozmo]

First handwritten tag I've ever done. I grabbed a chisel-tip marker from work and started writing my name. I'm sure with a good marker it'd look better...

http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v192/148/86/710342260/n710342260_714911_5731.jpg

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook010.jpg

BUMPAGE

Tano- I like the flow but i still think the T-A is off a bit

Cozmo- Not too bad i don't like the line through the center

MASRONE- definitely like the stlye and feel but the A seems plain or something, MAYBE JUST ME

[smikoer]

JERS: think I've said it before, but always love your stuff. Only crit is the bottom half of the E sitting a little too close to the J.
ABIDE: for the A, keep it whipped out like that, but, as a few other have said, not all the way into an underline.. still nice though!
CEST2; I don't like the C to the E connection.. and let the T be the same size as the other letters.
AHEM: Change the H, it goes against the flow. Maybe use a lowercase E? Whatever works for you.. Also have a flick for you below.
MOES; no crits from me, i like it

My first drips;
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1653/dsc02985ly0.jpg
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/849/50055778ne9.jpg
One I don't like;
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3523/77237093ju2.jpg
Random words:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6192/aliceru2.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2913/trickzep7.jpg
One for Thrice // AHEM:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9407/ahemit9.jpg

Bump.*

MASRONE: I'm liking it, the E could do with a little bit more structure. Also, space them out a little bit more and try doing a larrger size.
HAJA: I'm not feeling how the N connects with the O. Looks more like the O is an extension off the N.
COZMO: Good start. Don't cross yourself out though.. lose that line through the word from the N and keep practicing.
VOIS: Going well. Advance your flow and make the letters better looking, don't be too concerned about quotes and lines in the middle of the O just yet.

[WiseCracker]

yo HAJA - i'm really diggin your shit, nice work. i'd say when you go to spray try to go a bit slower. it looks really messy.
Cozmo - simple simple simple then come back
smikoer - the random words and the ones that you did for other people look better then your own. what's up with that? go back get rid of the drips, work on paper!

Here's some stuff that i've been workin on withthe past crits lemme know what's good:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2362/2380774146_270f5ab03a_o.jpghttp://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2379937889_9cde26d5c9_o.jpg

[*cept*]

yo HAJA - i'm really diggin your shit, nice work. i'd say when you go to spray try to go a bit slower. it looks really messy.
Cozmo - simple simple simple then come back
smikoer - the random words and the ones that you did for other people look better then your own. what's up with that? go back get rid of the drips, work on paper!

Here's some stuff that i've been workin on withthe past crits lemme know what's good:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2362/2380774146_270f5ab03a_o.jpghttp://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2379937889_9cde26d5c9_o.jpg

i think the curlys off everthing dont look so hot.

[Wallace]

i like the bottom right one the most

[WiseCracker]

cept - why not?

[oakstr1]

JSBiggz - i like everything but the e on the end
moes - few pages back i like your tags a shit ton

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4885/62543575cp1.jpg
tag ive been workin on for awhile fine tuning and shit.

[Thrice]

Looking nice oak, try to get rid of some of that negative space there.
Crit
http://i27.tinypic.com/23hkvb4.jpg

[Cozmo]

Thrice, I like the middle one.

[Thrice]

is it street worthy?

[Cozmo]

Well, I'm probably the last person who should be answering that for you, given the whopping 0 pieces/tags that I've thrown, but if I saw that on a bus or something, I'd think, "Ah, finally a tag that doesn't look like all the other tags out there."

[H3TT1NG3R]

ya its fine, i mean anythings street worthy, ull just think its crap looking back when u get better, but that happens no matter how good u are u always proress

[WiseCracker]

Thrice - those look cool, maybe do some with a marker to see how they look. what prog is that?

Let me know if either of these are street worthy, i really like how they look so let me know.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2165/2380401989_f5a3dd866b_o.jpg

edit: yo didn't see hettenger's comment but still let me know

[H3TT1NG3R]

^i dont like how far the end of the s goes, id make it stop at like right when it is vertical. with the top of the e spread it out a bit, so the top doesnt look liek just a line. Then i wouldnt use the w as the top of the i, just use halo, or do it liek that kid abide's tag. and the w might look better if the middle part went all the way to the top, instead of just liek halfway

[Thrice]

i use a tablet, just using the regular brush in photoshop. i think they're street worthy, tho i'd give more space between the top strokes of your E.

[WiseCracker]

yo hettinger, i like 2 the best let me know if i'm getting what you are saying.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3238/2380447821_39e1a8316a_o.jpg

[woozie]

kinda a random question what do you think are the easiest letters to flow with and make look good.

[WiseCracker]

thanks thrice for the crit, the tablet idea is pretty sweet, i was wondering cause i can't make my strokes that smooth with a mouse. the stylus must be fun to write with.

[H3TT1NG3R]

ya 2 is def the best, s is beter, just prqactice it out, then the e is good, and thw w looks a lot better. with the i tho, idk the halos not doin it, id just liek make it so tehat the dot is part of the stroke, and is almost as long as the bottom part

[Casual7ie]

Wise-#2 is nice. deff street worthy. just keep writing it over and over and itll be like second nature.

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0009.jpg

sorry its kinda blurry. crappy cam. says kashir

crits please?

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

all i say is dont put the halo..and probbly take out the two dots on the side and put one dot above the bottom line of the K and the little hook of the R..instead of the side

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture204.jpg

kashir- definitely take out the dots and lines on the end and it'd be a nice one

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

i do my Os like u but i do the circle the opposite way

[Cozmo]

Thrice, I've got one of those tablets too. It's a nice big 9x12, so lots of space to draw. I love it!

[JSBiggz]

yo hettinger, i like 2 the best let me know if i'm getting what you are saying.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3238/2380447821_39e1a8316a_o.jpg

All your taggs look the same execpt for how you did the dot of the "i"

[H3TT1NG3R]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/vamansticker.jpgreads vaman... idk its liek a secondary tag away from lasek

[Soboe!]

ahh! VAMAN! you killed the sticker by squishing your tag together!

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080401_7.jpg

[H3TT1NG3R]

ya lol, i did it in a sharpie, then i figured id outline it in a mini pilot, and its too bold, but i still think teh tag has mad flow. even tho ive only put it up once.

[WiseCracker]

JSBiggz - that was the point, i was trying to see what the best way to dot the i. i have some good ideas on it now though

[Soboe!]

Wise try this, i was to lazy to resize it so im just givin the link to it.
i aslo didnt do an E cause i suck.

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080401_8.jpg

[JSBiggz]

JSBiggz - that was the point, i was trying to see what the best way to dot the i. i have some good ideas on it now though


Oh ok...my bad then

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook015-1.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook014.jpg

[KnoxIn]

this is one of my tags and yesum ima toy haha so gimme advice n shit please

[MUSEone]

Thats not a tag.

[H3TT1NG3R]

lol thst a peice or bomb dude

[Thrice]

Looking nice oak, try to get rid of some of that negative space there.
Crit
http://i27.tinypic.com/23hkvb4.jpg

street worthy?

[Slushi]

Vois, you ruined your bathroom.

[Soboe!]

street worthy?

nope :)

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

street worthy?


naa man too simple..ur lookin do to somethin only YOU can do...

[Jihad]

going simple, what you think?
http://i30.tinypic.com/21n46bp.jpg


vois-keep drawing in a book don't use that style. im sure you can come up with something better just keep working at it.

[JSBiggz]

do a longer name and develope some style

[Jihad]

but for a simple tag, is it cool?

[JSBiggz]

i dont really care for it...but thats just my opinion

[oakstr1]

JSBiggz - i like everything but the e on the end
moes - few pages back i like your tags a shit ton

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4885/62543575cp1.jpg
tag ive been workin on for awhile fine tuning and shit.

vois i like the second one the best.

crits? straight for street?

[Jihad]

^^^what does it say... it looks decent.

[*cept*]

going simple, what you think?
http://i30.tinypic.com/21n46bp.jpg


vois-keep drawing in a book don't use that style. im sure you can come up with something better just keep working at it. TONS BETTER! glad you took advice and went simpler. I would suggest picking a longer name though, it maker for a better tag IMO. but well done.

[Jihad]

TONS BETTER! glad you took advice and went simpler. I would suggest picking a longer name though, it maker for a better tag IMO. but well done.

thank you. na i purposely made my name three letters long so i can do a lot them quickly.

[WiseCracker]

soboe - i appreciate the help and i like that look but it's not really my style. If all else fails i'll save that and come back to it

[KnoxIn]

ok so these are some of my pieces like they go from my very first one (the knox with the face) to one of my last (the one with the 2 differnt color reds) so im wonderin if i am doin alright for 6 months into it

[WiseCracker]

knox - those aren't tags. those are throwies, start simple and keep at it. as far as throwies, they aren't good. go to the Toy's Bombs / pieces form and get some help.

[KnoxIn]

ok well like idk are they alright or what like because honestly no one else but me and i got my friends into it goes out taggin like really its just me... cuz my friends only go out when i do so ya i dont have any one to compare to

[WiseCracker]

well, i'm not really the best, but straight up those suck. like i said before go to the toys bombs forum, this thread is for tags only.

[KnoxIn]

haha ok ur a goodman im just happy you were honest but ok ill switch out of this thread thing

[WiseCracker]

haha yea dude, your lucky i got to you first. the other guys would have ripped you a new one.

[Techkanuck]

Vois, you ruined your bathroom.

It's a HY-KO Window marker, mad flow and erasable so i can try a lot of times and not have to move around

[Cozmo]

Oh, so it's like things that you write on car windows with?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/E5Elvis/dubh_tag_2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/E5Elvis/dubh_tag_3.jpg

[KASE2]

COZMO- go simpler, start wit tha basic lettering for now, ur 1 flows look mor lyk cursive nd they donr look all that hott, jus keep practicin wit simples, nd then manipulate the letters 4 better flow

[KASE2]

vois i like the second one the best.

crits? straight for street?

bring tha last few lettersw closer gether, kuz they kinda get spacier than in tha beginning

KNOX - keep practicing bruh

[Cozmo]

Thanks, Kase. I appreciate the tips. So just write straight up letters and mess with style after I get the feel and flow down?

[KASE2]

yea xactly man, no doubt tho stay up

[oakstr1]

^^^what does it say... it looks decent.

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4885/62543575cp1.jpg

says oakstr..tryin to get as many crits so i can make it better before i start to go fuck shit up.

cosmo - people tell me to not connect them all. it takes a while to get used to but it does look better when letters are seprate.( in alot of cases)

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook014.jpg

bump

Oaks- I like it but maybe move the O out a little and maybe the OAK taller?

[FeTuS]

looking for crits

[inchture]

http://i28.tinypic.com/a1qo43.png

need advice/crits

[FeTuS]

http://i28.tinypic.com/a1qo43.png

need advice/crits
does it say 'buick' ?

[inchture]

no it says trick

[FeTuS]

no it says trick

lol thot so, i was just playing... I have no input... i am trying to think of how to write it, and I am drawing blanks

[Soboe!]

no it says trick

you do know theres a really famous writer who rights "trik" and sometimes he does shit with his name like "trick" or "trix"
just taught i d say that

[inchture]

okay so do u think i should change it

[Soboe!]

yea, if you have msn add me ok it, its right .................................................. .........................................^^^
there

[oakstr1]

trick - try seprating the t n r

thanks vois.
i tried a new style that i havent done much before.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9265/oakstrjw2.jpg

i prefer the top one. crits?

[Soboe!]

try an upper case A and dont attach the the T and the R

[oakstr1]

thanks soboe..i was wondering if someone was going to think that i connect the T n R but it just looks like that.

heres it with capital A.
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/1105/red0fh2.jpg
crits?

[Soboe!]

oakstr i was bored... here
i didnt wanna bother resizing it
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080402_2.jpg

[oakstr1]

DAM thats dope..im not gonna bite it but shits fresh..it gives me a new angle at what i can do.

[Soboe!]

hell bite it if you want, i did do it for you

EDIT: heres a tip though, your tag will look extra hot if you dont do your letters slowly...
flick away quick and it makes the lines look so much better.

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080402_3.jpg

[oakstr1]

thanks then..the A n T are dope as fuck.

[Wallace]

Cozmo- looks like cursive to me
oakstr1- i like the tag in your first pic, and the top one in the second
Techkanuck- pretty good, bugs me that the dot on the i isnt lined up though
inchture-needs lots of work

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3103/imgiq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-Ark-]

Wallace - Looks pretty good. Get rid of the side lines and underlines though, and try some normal quotes and/or a single, larger underline.

Bumpin' this pic once more because I don't really know where to improve. Could that mean I'm ready to hit the streets with this one?

[Soboe!]

hell bite it if you want, i did do it for you

EDIT: heres a tip though, your tag will look extra hot if you dont do your letters slowly...
flick away quick and it makes the lines look so much better.

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080402_3.jpg

bump just so people dont skip over it

[Wallace]

did this real quick just to try the underline

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3676/img0001bz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FeTuS]

Looking For Crits/tips/

[Soboe!]

fetus id help you but i dont know where to start :S

[-Ark-]

Wanna help me then, Soboe?
:P

[FeTuS]

fetus id help you but i dont know where to start :S

Ha! pick anything.

[Soboe!]

Wanna help me then, Soboe?
:P

use upper case letters, it makes everything look better

[-Ark-]

use upper case letters, it makes everything look better

Not in my case lol
Check my earlier posts in this topic to see how bad my caps are.
Regardless of me not using capital letters, do you think I'm ready to hit the streets?

[Soboe!]

well honestly man, the only way i got good at handstyles is tagging hardcore. 2 summers ago i tagged everyday all day

[Cozmo]

Cozmo- looks like cursive to me


Yeah, that's because I thought a tag had to be something scribbled out. Misunderstanding on my part. I'm working on another look. :) Thanks for the crit, though.

I like yours, though. What does it say? Lasic?

[2KoS]

just tag n tag n tag n tag and you'll soon realize how to do letters better. people also dont realise doing some letters backwards, like starting from the bottom instea of the top with an S can be easier dependin on the style tho. but yeh. BLAM BLAM BLAM ALL DAY LONG

[H3TT1NG3R]

did this real quick just to try the underline

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3676/img0001bz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

way to pretty much steal the sound of my tag

[Cozmo]

Good idea...never thought of drawing them in reverse...thanks. :)

[Casual7ie]

wallace-yo looks good the underline is alright, with a lil bit of work itd be lookin real nice

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0010.jpg

crits please? really shit cam sorry

[Wallace]

way to pretty much steal the sound of my tag

was klasic, got tired of trying to figure out a nice K

at least its not the same exact tag, no offense but theres plenty of space for two "same sounding" tags

[H3TT1NG3R]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/lasekmeanstreak.jpg
moar crits plz
kashir-dotn go crazy with all those extentions
wallace-dotn steal my name lololol jk its fine

[Casual7ie]

lasek lookin nice. my only sugesstion maybe make a lil more space from the top of the a. it could just be that colour. nd thx ill try not to go crazy hah

[Cozmo]

This is going to sound toy as hell, but do you all use the same name for tagging that you do for bombs and throwies?

[Czar One]

yes

[H3TT1NG3R]

or liek shoerten it, liek take out the vowels, so lasek is lsk

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

yea lik i have two names The rush and Ever

i might just right RH, Rush, The Rush, or RSH...in my tags and for the other one EVER

EVR..or ER...or just EVER

[SAID]

why do you got two names man?
why not just stick to one?
:confused:

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

cuz i wanted to tag ever....but i didnt wnna stop writing rush cuz i was already up on every street everywhere...

so i jus took both

[inchture]

ignore the line at the top

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4205/lastscankg8.th.png (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lastscankg8.png)

[Tekos]

Here is my tag please help and crit
http://www.flickr.com/photos/25293694@N06/2384051060/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/25293694@N06/2383220489/in/photostream/

[inchture]

i dont see a tag tekos

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

yo man ..goto imageshack.us...press browse and click ur pik....

before u press upload resize it to " Messege Board "...

[Pure2352]

heres my tag - please give sugg.

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/4638/graffiti006al1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[jerm_haf]

your u kind looks like a 4. maybe dont drop ther line down so far

[-GEKS-]

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1631.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1630.jpg

everyone on this page go simpler
cept for lasek i like his

[MUSEone]

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1476/0402081946amj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




*sigh*

[woozie]

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/9967/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0yu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits i think i am getting closer ever time

[Pure2352]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/720/graffiti006gv3.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti006gv3.jpg)

I NEED ADVICE!!!!!!!!!!!

[MUSEone]

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1476/0402081946amj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




*sigh*

Bump bottom of page.

[Cozmo]

Muse, I like it, especially the flourish at the bottom.

Pure, it doesn't seem to flow to me. It's creative as far as not looking like all the other tags out there, but it just seems a little too herky-jerky to me.

Woozie, what does yours say? Kaby? I'm not totally feeling the letter between the A and the Y.

[woozie]

it says kafa i really suck at tags

[Casual7ie]

pure-make your u less like a 4 and itd look nice
woozie-is that third letter looks like a b and the last a looks like a y. just take it simple and dont do so many curves if it messes up the letters
maso-looks pretty nice. only thing i could suggest is maybe changin the underline, but its still nice

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0015.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0016.jpg

crits?

[Pure2352]

Kashir, thanks for the advice man. Some advice for u is to make the "a" flow, i like what u did with the rest- the r and the i is cool

[Thrice]

Step foward or backward? Street worthy?
http://i26.tinypic.com/14j14iw.jpg
Maso-nice as always
Casual-create more consistent curves and bends to get better flow.

[Cham]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2326/2375886475_33580de47a.jpg?v=0

[oakstr1]

first thanks to soboe for the T n A..i think this looks the best so far been workin on it for the past hour or so.

http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/8329/soboenocolabexr7.jpg

lasic - like the purp n everything but the A.
cham - what did you use in the top pic?

ahem - the AH from number 4, the EM from 7 then i think it would be way dope.


soboe = the flick thing dont work that good with my paint pen.

[Thrice]

thanks man, here is it combined.
Also i like what you did, just not feeling the R.
http://i26.tinypic.com/33pg8js.jpg

[oakstr1]

ahem - looks better. but i would right it would all together. instead of draggin them closer. you know?
muse - that tag is dope.


soboe's help with a better R
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/1337/so15bc4.jpg
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/215/so14lq0.jpg

[Cham]

oakstr1 (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=32022), the first r when its not connected looks more like a k. I really like the second non connected r you just posted. and I used a bbq sauce container in that pic... practicing ground shots at work....

[oakstr1]

heres the BEST of the best one i got
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3039/oakstr2oa7.jpg

you used BBQ sauce? just squirted the bitch on there? ima try that bitch haha

[Cham]

lol yeah it was in like one of those classic style ketchup containers

http://www.fotosearch.com/thumb/UNE/UNE165/u15861760.jpg

[oakstr1]

haha nice pic..but ima definatly do that bbq sht up n post some flicks. have a backpack full of bbq n mustard. haha

[Cozmo]

Food as art. I love it. :)

[Mr yarbles]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2j0jlu9.jpg

Eh crits?

Oakstr I like that t and everything else looks pretty nice the r and the s look like they need a bit of work though

[wafflecakee]

dickin around
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4250/img3185kk9.jpg

[WiseCracker]

yo guys give crits to get crits. golden rule of this forum, that was meant for the last page.
wafflecake - i love doing long exposure light tags, that shit is sick
mr yarbles - go simple and come back, you are going wayyyyyyy over board toooo early.

[Pure2352]

Hey im trying to pick a tag. - should i pick "ETHER" or "FUSE"?
Pick which tag u like the most( tags are numberd)

Give crits


http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/8435/graffitimb9.th.jpg (http://img397.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffitimb9.jpg)

[Pure2352]

Hey im trying to pick a tag. - should i pick "ETHER" or "FUSE"?
Pick which tag u like the most( tags are numberd)

Give crits

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2381/graffitimz2.th.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffitimz2.jpg)

[Wallace]

write what you like. personally i like ether more but you need a lot more work

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3103/imgiq6.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3676/img0001bz9.jpg
any more crits?

[Jihad]

Hey im trying to pick a tag. - should i pick "ETHER" or "FUSE"?
Pick which tag u like the most( tags are numberd)

Give crits

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2381/graffitimz2.th.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffitimz2.jpg)

none keep writing.

[Jihad]

write what you like. personally i like ether more but you need a lot more work

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3103/imgiq6.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3676/img0001bz9.jpg
any more crits?

go simple keep writing.

[Jihad]

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/9967/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0yu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits i think i am getting closer ever time

go simple keep writing. over and over and over again. pages and pages of one letter. just do it everybody has to, i did.

[Jihad]

Bump bottom of page.

maso, you know i love you bro, but i want more style my man.

[Jihad]

http://i30.tinypic.com/21n46bp.jpg




bumbin it for crits. its with a stock cap. ive been using a stock cap when practicing to get can control faster. its like learning to drive in an old peice of shit truck. makes driving everything easy. learned it from some elders. its just simple but i was hoping something from my igga maso or anybody.

[WiseCracker]

jihad - don't cross your name out, one it's unneeded and two it makes you look like you hate your name.

[Jihad]

jihad - don't cross your name out, one it's unneeded and two it makes you look like you hate your name.

haha =0, no seriously do you have anything useful?

[WiseCracker]

jihad - why do you always do that? you ask for crits then fuck with everyone you tries to help. no wonder your tags always blow.

[Jihad]

i never "fucked" with you lol. i thought you were kidding, because it is part of the a. grow some balls and stop being so defensive.

[Pure2352]

Jihad fuck you. you got a fuckin attitude. You say other peoples tags suck, your tag is the worst out, BITCH

[Flash_One]

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6944/sspx01262vo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[Pure2352]

Looks good Flash One, just suggestion- make the top of t shorter, and space letters out more, then it would look dope