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WiseCracker
04-03-2008, 05:30 PM
jihad - if i took you wrong then my b, but you usually tell people off when they give you crits. with the a though, i wouldn't bring it all the way through, like stop right before the i

Wallace
04-03-2008, 06:30 PM
Flash_One- i like it, looks like it could take a while to do it though

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7738/img9062in0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i ditched the underline by the end of that

Pure2352
04-03-2008, 07:52 PM
LASIC, man thats mint, wat u use for a marker?

Wallace
04-03-2008, 07:59 PM
bunch of different deco's

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:13 PM
lasic-fix your a it dont really flow with the rest of the tag
flash-that looks hot, but i really cant see it, maybe a better flic would be better
pure-im not diggin anything, no offense, just keep at it, over and over fill up notebooks and youll have somethin

and chill with the petty beef shit over crits. crits are used to help you.. not to fight over

MiGZone
04-03-2008, 08:22 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f391/allaround/IMG00009.jpg


crits?

WiseCracker
04-03-2008, 08:24 PM
migzone - go simple come back later. + give crits to get them.

H3TT1NG3R
04-03-2008, 08:25 PM
^dotn make the g and z connec,t and make it all floe liek dotn have the z under the g, and work on the g abit

MiGZone
04-03-2008, 08:31 PM
Wisecracker - how simpler?
H3TT1NG3R - how should my g and z look?

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:31 PM
migzone-start way simpler just plain letters and keep them all the same size and on the same level. and lose that arrow

H3TT1NG3R
04-03-2008, 08:33 PM
um make ur z just up at the smae level as ur other letters, um play around with the g, try not to make it so boxy and sharp, idk im not good a g's, just play around. the z is fine, just keep it simple, wih ur other letters, just keep um as simple as possible for now, ull get style eventually, u cant skip the step where ur tag is basically handwriting haha

MiGZone
04-03-2008, 08:38 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f391/allaround/IMG00010-1.jpg

basically like this?

H3TT1NG3R
04-03-2008, 08:40 PM
^YESSS good, tehn just over time ull develop style, and move ur letters closer together

Wallace
04-03-2008, 08:42 PM
MiGZone- start simple and work your way up


lasic-fix your a it dont really flow with the rest of the tag
flash-that looks hot, but i really cant see it, maybe a better flic would be better
pure-im not diggin anything, no offense, just keep at it, over and over fill up notebooks and youll have somethin

and chill with the petty beef shit over crits. crits are used to help you.. not to fight over

ill try out some different A's tomorrow and see if i like them, thanks


Flash_One- i like it, looks like it could take a while to do it though

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7738/img9062in0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i ditched the underline by the end of that
bumpp from bottom of the last page

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:42 PM
yes! haha like h3tt1ng3r said just keep doin it and get your style. over and over and youll get a style and have some nice handies. just dont pull the same shit as your other tag. that looked wack.

MiGZone
04-03-2008, 08:44 PM
alright
ima keep the arrow though =P

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:49 PM
hah. your choice. just keep it simple

MiGZone
04-03-2008, 08:51 PM
simple enough

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f391/allaround/IMG00012.jpg

Casual7ie
04-03-2008, 08:52 PM
maybe move the letters closer. and i really aint diggin that arrow, but hey keep it if ya want..

oakstr1
04-03-2008, 09:02 PM
heres the BEST of the best one i got
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3039/oakstr2oa7.jpg

you used BBQ sauce? just squirted the bitch on there? ima try that bitch haha

bump

flash - shits way dope. give crits though. but way dope.
migz - try smashin it together with the simple letters..n take the underline Z out

Jihad
04-03-2008, 09:05 PM
jihad - if i took you wrong then my b, but you usually tell people off when they give you crits. with the a though, i wouldn't bring it all the way through, like stop right before the i

yeah i was just trying to be friendly. by no means do i think that my shit doesn't stink. i might have a good simples and a little can control but im at that place where i don't know where to add style. when i read what you first said i just thought you were joking sayin was crossing myself out. i didn't mean to sound mean. sorry.

somebody else on here started talking shit when i tried to help them but they didn't get what i was trying to say and yeah i got pissed. then everybody turned to me saying dumb shit, making me look like an asshole. i don't care what people think of me but i don't enjoy people thinking im making fun of them or whatever, im not that kinda guy.

Pure2352
04-03-2008, 09:30 PM
Jihad- Hey man, sorry for flippn earlier, i didnt really mean to i was in a bad mood. I shouldnt have done that. Sorry.

Thrice
04-03-2008, 09:51 PM
Step foward or backward? Street worthy?
http://i26.tinypic.com/14j14iw.jpg
Maso-nice as always
Casual-create more consistent curves and bends to get better flow.

oak-i'd trim the extension on the right end of the T.
BUMP for CRIT

KASE2
04-03-2008, 10:25 PM
write what you like. personally i like ether more but you need a lot more work

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3103/imgiq6.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3676/img0001bz9.jpg
any more crits?
fix ur "I" on both of em, nd on tha second 1 get rid of that line on the bottom

Jihad
04-04-2008, 12:13 AM
Jihad- Hey man, sorry for flippn earlier, i didnt really mean to i was in a bad mood. I shouldnt have done that. Sorry.


Its cool.

Jihad
04-04-2008, 12:33 AM
simple enough

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f391/allaround/IMG00012.jpg

i drew up some stuff for you because i was boreddd. after i was done i noticed that its MIGZ not migs but shit here it is. hopefully you can get something from it haha. everything a little bit different, but tried to keep it pretty much really simple. so here ya go.

[http://i29.tinypic.com/33uxrid.jpg

MilkyCanvas
04-04-2008, 12:48 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01185.jpg

Whaddya guys think?

MilkyCanvas
04-04-2008, 12:48 AM
Don't worry about the name. Just how I write it.
But if you didn't already know, it means "milk" in Spanish.

Jihad
04-04-2008, 12:54 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01185.jpg

Whaddya guys think?

try more rounded letters man. dont do the edge'd stuff yet because it cuts your flow down to like nothing. rounded letters. it might look bubbly and shit but over time you can add peice of style like one by one and it will build up into this monster of a spanish milk. so keep to just simple curved letters. and dont do that fill 2d stuff because thats not a tag(not saying you didn't know that but yeah)plus it looks bad.

MilkyCanvas
04-04-2008, 12:57 AM
Rounded letters. Right. I'll get to it.
Thanks. :]

MiGZone
04-04-2008, 09:46 AM
thanks for the ideas jihad

WiseCracker
04-04-2008, 11:10 AM
migzone - like go back to what you had on the last page and get rid of the arrow. just keep writing the same thing over and over until you get some good style. if you have to write each letter over and over by its self.
jihad - i'm glad we understand each other a little better.

Yo i tried doin my new tag on one of the busses by me but it came out kind awkward, i'm tall and the seats lean back so it's a tough angle but you get the idea:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3248/2387888916_43345bb9e2_o.jpg
sorry for the shitty pic

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-04-2008, 11:24 AM
LMAO !!!..
Leche means fuckin milk in spanish lmaoo wow

Casual7ie
04-04-2008, 03:05 PM
wise-big improvement. i like it. just one thing. change the dot on the i. make it shorter then the body of the i. but the rest is good. and what kinda marker is that? looks nice
leche-dig spanish milk i guess. hah. like jihad said, make rounded letters to get more flow, and dont do that 2 colour outline shit. it makes it look really bad.

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0026.jpg
crits?

Wallace
04-04-2008, 03:12 PM
i think step1 would be to move your letters closer together

WiseCracker
04-04-2008, 03:14 PM
kashir - i use an otr.070 i got otr and grog ink i love the cover it makes. i like your your stuff so far, lose the arrow and keep working with it and i think it'll look great.

Wallace
04-04-2008, 03:21 PM
trying out a different A

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/632/imgwo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

seno1
04-04-2008, 04:33 PM
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6944/sspx01262vo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

Hey Flash

Thrice
04-04-2008, 05:15 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2h6t4qt.jpg
Crit Please.
Lasic, the 3 larger ones look nice, but you need to change the top C stroke, none of them are working.

Wallace
04-04-2008, 05:51 PM
in number 6, the A looks like a 7. so id ditch that one
id like number 5 the most if it were at less of an angle

reworked my c, and im thinking about getting rid of the dot on the i

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8907/imgry3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i like this one too, just imagine it with the new c
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/5944/imgdi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

itsbrooklynbitch
04-04-2008, 07:52 PM
crits please. i changed my name and worked on my style i haven't been on here in a few months.

http://i27.tinypic.com/fohgy9.jpg

WiseCracker
04-04-2008, 09:10 PM
^^ yo your tag doesn't flow. lose the quotes, underline and go mad simple. write it over and over then get style. that m doesn't fit at all.

Culture_Shock
04-04-2008, 10:15 PM
Mintwo looks fine. They're going to tell you to get simple, but aside from the underline and the quotes, I don't think it could be more simple. Maybe work on your quotes, but aside from that it's a great start

Mr yarbles
04-05-2008, 12:15 AM
Trying for something simple any better?

http://i32.tinypic.com/33y2i6v.jpg

http://i32.tinypic.com/no973n.jpg

itsbrooklynbitch
04-05-2008, 08:06 AM
Mintwo looks fine. They're going to tell you to get simple, but aside from the underline and the quotes, I don't think it could be more simple. Maybe work on your quotes, but aside from that it's a great start

thanks, what direction do you suggest I go next ?

H3TT1NG3R
04-05-2008, 09:52 AM
Trying for something simple any better?

http://i32.tinypic.com/33y2i6v.jpg

http://i32.tinypic.com/no973n.jpg

what marker is that?/ink

itsbrooklynbitch
04-05-2008, 10:11 AM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn318/Kashir157/IMG_0026.jpg
crits?

i think it looks nice. but maybe make the R a little bigger..

Slushi
04-05-2008, 10:15 AM
make the whole right side bigger...

Mr yarbles
04-05-2008, 11:24 AM
I useda prisma color

NEROISAHERO
04-05-2008, 11:55 AM
ok here we go again this i just sumthing i did for my gf when she came over one day
http://i28.tinypic.com/4fzhhz.jpg
and this is of my name
PS i dunno what the hell i was thinking with that last post feel free to kick my ass and i was being a faggit when i said i wrote for a year try like 3 months
http://i25.tinypic.com/33m7ukm.jpg
ok haha my aim screenname is snoboard623 if some one wants get get in depth with me

Wallace
04-05-2008, 08:04 PM
NEROISAHERO - work on your flow, the orange one in the middle looks the best out of the though

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8466/imgno2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ignore the purple one

bowchicabowow
04-05-2008, 08:44 PM
I had leftover paint so went handstyle crazy, making up shit on the spot. This one doesn't flow too well.

*removed the photo because it was horrible lol*

Thrice
04-05-2008, 09:22 PM
ouch, get ready to get dissed.

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-05-2008, 09:36 PM
I had leftover paint so went handstyle crazy, making up shit on the spot. This one doesn't flow too well.

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/psilolovesfluffy/yeahhh2.jpg


wow buddy u fucked up..*****s are gonan be cuttin on that for a while

bowchicabowow
04-05-2008, 09:41 PM
Haha I just took that shit out. Btw that big ass arrow wasn't really supposed to be part of the tag, I did that first just fucking with paint.

Hazex
04-05-2008, 09:49 PM
wow buddy u fucked up..*****s are gonan be cuttin on that for a while


i think you sould go simpler...

edit i was talking about picture idunno why it didint come

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-05-2008, 09:54 PM
i know why the hell did u quote my post ...lmaooo

Slushi
04-05-2008, 10:12 PM
On vpanel can't quote more than two posts within each other. It's ghey.

Casual7ie
04-05-2008, 10:56 PM
NEROISAHERO - work on your flow, the orange one in the middle looks the best out of the though

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8466/imgno2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ignore the purple one

i kinda like the purple one more. try making it bigger it may accually look mad good (the purple one) i dont like the underline on the silver one and the dot on the i is higher then the rest of the tag, try making it stop with the rest of the letters

BigBlueViolence
04-05-2008, 11:21 PM
Wallace- I actually like the purple one more. shorten the right leg and you're straight, bro.

http://i26.tinypic.com/5cazag.jpg

sacwacko
04-05-2008, 11:27 PM
that looks good but it reminds me of old cholo writing and gang graff a little too much.
its simple and good tho. so keep it up.

and the arrow on the left....no good ;).

Casual7ie
04-05-2008, 11:33 PM
violence-uhm ok, personally i dont like it, but if its your style, its your style. i suggest making your letters more rounded to get more flow and get rid of that sperm looking thin on the left.

BigBlueViolence
04-05-2008, 11:34 PM
that looks good but it reminds me of old cholo writing and gang graff a little too much.
its simple and good tho. so keep it up.

and the arrow on the left....no good ;).

Yeah, I was kind of going for the cholo thing. I don't have to worry about running into gang, most of my area is either blood or crip territory, and it's versatile, it can be a tall hand of just a quick tag. The arrow is whatever, I just thought it needed a little something more.

bowchicabowow
04-05-2008, 11:39 PM
Big blue those three dots just scream mexi-gangster. The whole style does. It's up to you if you are diggin it, but I'm just not.

Casual7ie
04-05-2008, 11:42 PM
Big blue those three dots just scream mexi-gangster. The whole style does. It's up to you if you are diggin it, but I'm just not.

thats true, be careful not to get fucked up by gangs. it looks alot like gang graff. and if you ever got caught cops may even look into you being in some kinda gang. haha prolly not, im just insane..

BigBlueViolence
04-05-2008, 11:43 PM
Big blue those three dots just scream mexi-gangster. The whole style does. It's up to you if you are diggin it, but I'm just not.

Like I said dude, it's kind of what I'm going for. I just think cholo script is dope. So like, so as long as y'all think it flows, then I'm good.

@ casual- I don't really worry about the cops too much around here. They have bigger fish to fry. As for the gang problem, I'm pretty sure that any thought of me being in ms13 will be gone once they see me.

Casual7ie
04-05-2008, 11:46 PM
i think its got flow so your good. when you get some flix of it up i wanna see em. haha im accually kinda diggin it now

sacwacko
04-05-2008, 11:55 PM
thats true, be careful not to get fucked up by gangs. it looks alot like gang graff. and if you ever got caught cops may even look into you being in some kinda gang. haha prolly not, im just insane..
not insane at all.
lol, actually a crew with 5 or more is considered a "Gang" and usually ups the charges.

Wallace
04-05-2008, 11:57 PM
i kinda like the purple one more. try making it bigger it may accually look mad good (the purple one) i dont like the underline on the silver one and the dot on the i is higher then the rest of the tag, try making it stop with the rest of the letters
thanks for the tip on the i, I may do that

Wallace- I actually like the purple one more. shorten the right leg and you're straight, bro.

thanks again
for your tag i don't really like it though =/, it looks realllyyy sloppy

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 12:03 AM
not insane at all.
lol, actually a crew with 5 or more is considered a "Gang" and usually ups the charges.

haha really? i guess im not as dumb as i think i am. wait so what if only person from a crew of 5 or more is caught, how do they know theres more people? and if all 5 get caught, they desirve it cause thats just fucking stupid. dont go painting with more then 1 other person. am i right?

garbage down tha way
04-06-2008, 12:04 AM
http://i26.tinypic.com/5cazag.jpg
this shit is so dope, keep fucking with that style. haha i used to write earn.

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 12:06 AM
haha really? i guess im not as dumb as i think i am. wait so what if only person from a crew of 5 or more is caught, how do they know theres more people? and if all 5 get caught, they desirve it cause thats just fucking stupid. dont go painting with more then 1 other person. am i right?

nawwww....all personal preference.
it depends on how u paint and if u got dumb ass writers with u.
in the yards, id say like 3 heads tops.
streets, 5 will get u caught for sure.
like i said....all depends on how u r writing.
and trust me, they have writers logged and shit.
i guarantee if ur in a crew of 5, they will over look it....just dont mention the crew and u should be fine.

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 11:08 AM
nawwww....all personal preference.
it depends on how u paint and if u got dumb ass writers with u.
in the yards, id say like 3 heads tops.
streets, 5 will get u caught for sure.
like i said....all depends on how u r writing.
and trust me, they have writers logged and shit.
i guarantee if ur in a crew of 5, they will over look it....just dont mention the crew and u should be fine.

hm, cool thanks. not that i ride with a crew, but good to know.

Pure2352
04-06-2008, 11:11 AM
Earn- Man i like your style, Kinda looks like old school So Cal . Keep it up

oakstr1
04-06-2008, 12:37 PM
big blue- i like that style a lot.
lasic - i think the purp tag looks dope


http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/1064/otfyn0.jpg
keep tweakin n shit.

Wallace
04-06-2008, 12:52 PM
thanks oakster, i think you should move your S closer to the K though since all of your other letters are so close together

lordloss
04-06-2008, 02:12 PM
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0177.jpg
new tag new name
ok CRITS Mutha fuckkker

oakster: hate it im sorry i dont know what it is i just dont like it but good start keep going
big blue: It does look exactly like gang graff and cholo but i really like it so what just dont add roman numbers and your fine keep going

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:16 PM
kom-im just not feeling any of those. it looks like they were rushed. the only one i kinda like is the last one but without those dots at the end.

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 02:21 PM
ummmm, yea, work on tht lordloss.
i think u take too long on each tag.
try to speed it up so u dont get those shaky lines and work on the flow man ;).

and tell me how these tags are....
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/Untitled4.jpg
crits :D.
sorry about the size, i did resize it??

lordloss
04-06-2008, 02:22 PM
yeah new word so i know there not good
but thats where im at right now
got any suggestions
anything you wanna show me im all ears

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 02:26 PM
i think u should probably crit mine, just edit it into ur post, its the least you could do, since i critted urs. and all i have to say is practice practice practice ;)

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:27 PM
dfians-all those are pretty dope. my fav is the one next to the throwie. and i dig that throw.
kom-make the letters rounded and simple and do it faster like sacwacko said. keep playin with it

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:27 PM
i think u should probably crit mine, just edit it into ur post, its the least you could do, since i critted urs. and all i have to say is practice practice practice ;)

yea really, give crits out like candy

lordloss
04-06-2008, 02:28 PM
wanna give me an example

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 02:30 PM
ummmmm, no sorry.

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:31 PM
haha, dude just mess around with it, and dont go mad slow, youll get it eventually

GraspREALity
04-06-2008, 02:33 PM
sacwacko-like the one on the right the most, but not really feelin' any of them. try not doing one-liners.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/OhDipiitzNick/Tag-HelloMyNameIs.jpg
Some Critss?

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:36 PM
get rid of the halo and the tag itself looks like somebody scribled on a sticker. its really simple, it just doesnt have much style to it. maybe by fixing the c and the a itll look better. they look mad crushed together when the s and r are not so much.

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 02:42 PM
you dont like my shit casr??
its not even a one liner??
i dont thin u know wut ur talkin about.
and yea, you need to work on that.
not feelin it.

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 02:53 PM
haha i dont think he does either. your handies are dope. but they look like oneliners, but whatever they still hot as hel;l

GraspREALity
04-06-2008, 02:57 PM
actually i do know what i'm talking about, and at a quick glance, they do look like one liners, but i looked back and they aren't. my bad.

AeroOne
04-06-2008, 07:01 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/965/graffiti007ry5.th.jpg (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffiti007ry5.jpg)

CRITS???

I write AERO 1

bowchicabowow
04-06-2008, 07:05 PM
I like it in general, but maybe use better accents.

AeroOne
04-06-2008, 07:08 PM
thanks, ya i just drew the letters, no add-ons

mosezone
04-06-2008, 07:14 PM
Wallace- I actually like the purple one more. shorten the right leg and you're straight, bro.

http://i26.tinypic.com/5cazag.jpg

other than the arrow, that's dope. maybe fuck around with it a little more to set it apart from the tons of plain-ass cholo shit around california (i'm assuming that's where you're from).

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 07:17 PM
aero-i like the simpleness, just make the top of the r rounded instead of flat. if ya know what i mean. and make them closer together perhaps

AeroOne
04-06-2008, 07:42 PM
ya ill try it, thanks man

sacwacko
04-06-2008, 07:56 PM
your not Aero "One"...lol

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 08:02 PM
your not Aero "One"...lol

haha aero is really played out. if it was a vagina, itd be saggin to the floor

MUSEone
04-06-2008, 08:11 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7281/0406081702awi1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Wallace
04-06-2008, 08:15 PM
i like it maso

AeroOne
04-06-2008, 08:16 PM
Casual- your sayin aero is messed, wtf is KASHIR then, i mean an israli or somthin?

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 08:23 PM
Casual- your sayin aero is messed, wtf is KASHIR then, i mean an israli or somthin?

yo chill. i said it was played out. mad people write that. not to orginal. like kashir isnt even a real fucking word, how many people you think write that? chill the fuck out man

AeroOne
04-06-2008, 08:25 PM
maso- thats sick, i like the s

im tryn to come up with a tag, should i keep AERO, or make a new one?

give suggestions please

AeroOne
04-06-2008, 08:26 PM
ok ya i guess i did flip out casual. i just took it completly wrong

Casual7ie
04-06-2008, 08:28 PM
yo aero personally id pick something else. it could be similar to aero, just not it. you could try like atero, or alero or alroes or just keep mixing up letters and such. or you could keep aero. as long as nobody in your area writes it. its up to you. and sorry if i came across as a dick.

Culture_Shock
04-06-2008, 08:34 PM
thanks, what direction do you suggest I go next ?

If you're gonna use those quotes, find some way to make them part of your tag. That's the main reason that toys are discouraged from using them, they just throw them on there like that's there is to it. Make sure they don't float off into space, like the one on the right is starting to.

mosezone
04-06-2008, 08:48 PM
casr, not looking bad, but lose the quotes and make the outline like a single line, or maybe 2 lines
aero, i'd pick a different name, but that's just me.
maso, i think it would be more dope without the underline, but it's still fresh.

just found these. they're both from when i first started writing this name. i know the GK one is hella bad, but whatever.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00412.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00411.jpg

oakstr1
04-06-2008, 10:33 PM
aero - everyone probly used someones name before unless its something unique. i used to write kush. n im sure TONS of people thought of that. haha

BigBlueViolence - really like that style. i would take the shit off the sides n just have the letters though.

muse - clean as fuck.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/7505/freshxu8.jpg
crits?

BigBlueViolence
04-07-2008, 09:11 AM
other than the arrow, that's dope. maybe fuck around with it a little more to set it apart from the tons of plain-ass cholo shit around california (i'm assuming that's where you're from).

I'm in Detroit

Oakstr- shit is sweet, but I'm not really feeling the r. You should try to straighten it up with the rest of the letters.

oakstr1
04-07-2008, 12:43 PM
thanks. haha everytime i think it gets better n better

moes - what you use on that drippy as one?


http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9872/tripme9.jpg
bbook out of paper. so i got the cleanest page possible.crits?

Casual7ie
04-07-2008, 02:45 PM
aero - everyone probly used someones name before unless its something unique. i used to write kush. n im sure TONS of people thought of that. haha

BigBlueViolence - really like that style. i would take the shit off the sides n just have the letters though.

muse - clean as fuck.

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/7505/freshxu8.jpg
crits?

im feelin that tag. if you move the ! over itd look really clean and nice

the one you made after that is alright. i like the one above better^^ but if you change the s to make it less like a 5 it would look pretty dope

mosezone
04-07-2008, 03:28 PM
thanks. haha everytime i think it gets better n better

moes - what you use on that drippy as one?


http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9872/tripme9.jpg
bbook out of paper. so i got the cleanest page possible.crits?

stazon mop.

MUSEone
04-07-2008, 06:46 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2589/0407081531aeb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AOTPs
04-07-2008, 07:22 PM
maso-shit is good i like the drips bro

here is a quicky it sux idc was bored and the bottom one is just a new style im trying to learn idk http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z28/kayo-222/merg.jpg

Wallace
04-07-2008, 08:03 PM
mosezone- its alright, id work on your e.
oakstr1- i really like the first one on this page other than the angle of the R
MUSEone- simple but nice, id push your letters together more
AOTPs- cant read it


im really starting to like the very bottom one here
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4476/imgdo5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i made the stroke on the A way too far down on these

Casual7ie
04-07-2008, 08:07 PM
maso-that shit is dope. the drips are nasty
aotps-that philly style (that is philly style right?) on the bottom really needs work. but philly style is mad hard. the top one has mad flow and is dope. i dig it
lasic-the bottom one is the best one. just dont extend the leg on the a so much. but its still really nice

Wallace
04-07-2008, 08:11 PM
yea lol i realized that last night when i did them, made that shit way too long. i think im going more in the direction of the bottom one

Casual7ie
04-07-2008, 08:32 PM
yea lol i realized that last night when i did them, made that shit way too long. i think im going more in the direction of the bottom one

yea fix that, and your set

-Leski
04-07-2008, 08:43 PM
Damn wally, your stuff came along fast... or I'm thinking of someone else.
Either way your in the right place and your shits coming along.

Wallace
04-07-2008, 08:44 PM
yea ive been practicing like a motherfucker lol, you probably are thinking of me... thanks

oakstr1
04-07-2008, 09:14 PM
thanks. R's are a bitch for me.

lasic - that bold one at the bottom is fresh. id just take out the extra lil dots n shit. just so it writes faster

MessTonic
04-07-2008, 09:15 PM
mosezone- its alright, id work on your e.
oakstr1- i really like the first one on this page other than the angle of the R
MUSEone- simple but nice, id push your letters together more
AOTPs- cant read it


im really starting to like the very bottom one here
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4476/imgdo5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i made the stroke on the A way too far down on these

the thick one at the bottom is sick! except it could be mistakin for casic

Wallace
04-07-2008, 09:50 PM
taking that shit to the streets this week i think

Amore
04-07-2008, 10:58 PM
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w288/colton308/dags.jpg
crits anyone?
sorry for the size/darkness.

emkmontreal
04-08-2008, 03:42 PM
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u289/thinkeroo/untitled.jpg

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u289/thinkeroo/n508254099_361627_3341.jpg

Teez-EmM!!!
04-08-2008, 04:56 PM
^^^^^^^^
dope flares
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0579.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0576.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0573.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0553.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0577.jpg
how do i get good flares??

MUSEone
04-08-2008, 04:59 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2589/0407081531aeb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump through a bunch of talk on last page.

SAID
04-08-2008, 05:07 PM
drips made me drip in my pants.

and renak, the green ones fire

MUSEone
04-08-2008, 05:08 PM
could of been better. a guy walked RIGHT as i walked out. O well. haha

SAID
04-08-2008, 05:13 PM
yeah, i've been having a couple of close calls these days too.

Techkanuck
04-08-2008, 05:21 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture232.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture235.jpg

MASO- Nice drips, the MA is my favorite part

TEZM- I really like the one by the Board and bag, would be nice a bit darker

RENAK- Green ones awesome, i really like the color and the flares.

Desipher
04-08-2008, 06:34 PM
.

-Panik-
04-08-2008, 08:48 PM
Maso,
I really like the Drips, you got a nice simple style
I can't wait to see how your tag improves with time

MUSEone
04-08-2008, 08:49 PM
Yea i have alot better shit comin up.

Working on a few new/newer styles, spring break is this upcoming week. Gonna post up alot more soon.

blunttokes
04-08-2008, 08:51 PM
panik from 705? haha

more like panic 905-416

jeps=mlz
04-09-2008, 04:47 AM
nice maso

smikoer
04-09-2008, 09:50 AM
emkmontreal: green one is awesome, not feeling the exts on the R and K in the blue one though
Teez-EmM!!!: good shiz, maybe a little bit more style to the 'stew'?
MUSEone: simple && lovely drips.
Techkanuck: not really diggin the line in the O, otherwise you def seem to be improving

crappy TAHN;
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7650/tahn1nq9.jpg

Cin123
04-09-2008, 10:18 AM
TAHN-try and keeep it all the same still like the T and the A are dif from te H and the N try 2 keep them all the same
tezm- mad flairs ma nikka FUCK SUNB/MERK!
respect 4 the crosses!

WiseCracker
04-09-2008, 11:17 AM
yo a tag on did on a piece i just threw up.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2143/2400541663_381da5a39b_m.jpg

Amore
04-09-2008, 06:10 PM
Maso that shit is ill.

Keke
04-09-2008, 07:38 PM
wise, i dont realy like that to much at all , the letters are to far apart and the structure is completly different with each letter , no flow , but keep working , at least your out paintin

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3893/img0104ei4.jpg
help, sorry for size

innerbleeding
04-09-2008, 07:59 PM
yeah it's shit i don't do tags like this. i just want to start expanding what i do n wanted to try something like this but can't seem to get it working. i think i got the E right?

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9508/picture012ry5.jpg
need tips
peece

intaout
04-09-2008, 08:46 PM
wise, i dont realy like that to much at all , the letters are to far apart and the structure is completly different with each letter , no flow , but keep working , at least your out paintin

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3893/img0104ei4.jpg
help, sorry for size

thank god you didnt post that, there is a resize button on the first page of imageshack manggg...........


soomethingblleeeed yehh a little sketcher letters have bit to many strokes and kind
of different sizes. but the letters are almost there. try with a thicker
marker maybey???

innerbleeding
04-09-2008, 08:56 PM
cheers bro was afraid id get ego trippin kids talking shit over the internet

i figured too many strokes so ill try again later n cut down on the strokes n be more carful with the sizes

peace

kast1
04-10-2008, 03:47 AM
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w289/konrai/P1020746.jpg
kast
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w289/konrai/P1020747.jpg
skrub


theyre hella sloppy and its late ill show better ones later

Keke
04-10-2008, 03:55 AM
Kast :I like the kast onegood flow , the A seems out there though , mabey a little smaller?
the skrub one , im just not feelin at all

crits on this new tag? im not feelin it but my friend says he likes it it says jesta the thing on the tight is an A
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1928/tagbigaxk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

jerm_haf
04-10-2008, 05:50 AM
i'm not really feelin the E and that A at the end looks like a D

Keke
04-10-2008, 05:52 AM
i'm not really feelin the E and that A at the end looks like a D

yeah i dont think the e flows, im workin on it , and the A is sideways,

opte one
04-10-2008, 10:50 AM
kast..i dont liek the A,i dont think it goes wit the rest of the letters...but the S is nice

innerbleeding
04-10-2008, 06:51 PM
kast1 jus fukken around i was bored

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/1857/picture022ws9.jpg

peece

H3TT1NG3R
04-10-2008, 06:57 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/laseknewtag.jpg
dotn mind the drips i fucked up

(SoS)Viruz
04-10-2008, 07:09 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Tag.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan.jpg

Shit I know not the best stuff out thier. But shit. Good Start.

-GEKS-
04-10-2008, 07:25 PM
actually its not a good start

lose all the arrows first
then work on actually using the marker like a normal person, ur lines are all streaky and weird

just wondering, how old r u?

innerbleeding
04-10-2008, 07:31 PM
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1485/ssssij5.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4626/sssssssssssssssdy8.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
04-10-2008, 07:36 PM
14 bro. Yea Im new to this shit. Not even use to it. As you can tell. Then what can i do to chage that.

MUSEone
04-10-2008, 08:16 PM
Not double post....

MiGZone
04-10-2008, 08:37 PM
(SoS)Viruz - Go simple

Techkanuck
04-10-2008, 08:53 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture237.jpg
Fuckin around a bit,

SoBeR- I like the small vowels, maybe a little wider and they'd flow better.

Lasek- Wonder what it's look like if you "messed" all the letters up like the L is, i'm feelin the shape.

Kobra- seems like you know what you want to try but the arrows and the lines should flow along nicer than those do, try some other concepts and work your fav 3 over and over, maybe start with the bottom left marker one one the second page without the add-ons and with more uniform structures.

-Panik-
04-10-2008, 09:10 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/laseknewtag.jpg
dotn mind the drips i fucked up

not bad, I don't actually mind the drips,
Keep workin it
http://i31.tinypic.com/5oyq77.jpg
New name, marker is running out, crits?

7thIncision
04-10-2008, 09:47 PM
move the quotes, get a new marker.
And dont bump something on the same page... just takes up space.

Vois - its fine, but work on letter styles.. dont focus so much on the layering silver/orange..

Virus.. Forget everything you think you know about graff. Dont write Kobra. Go through all your alphabet.. then pick out your favourite letters and make a word from that. then write it like it is on your keyboard. ie: SABER and after a while you will find the letters tweaking themselves.. thats how i got better, how Sake got better, how everyone else who doesnt really have any artistic talent to start off with gets better..

Techkanuck
04-10-2008, 09:51 PM
figured someone would call out the shading shit, had a prisma that was dying so i wanted it to look a little less sad.

-Panik-
04-10-2008, 10:05 PM
I have a new marker
its one of those On the Run Tagstars, I botched the quotes, thanks tho

BadlilDuck
04-10-2008, 11:33 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u259/H3TTING3R/laseknewtag.jpg
dotn mind the drips i fucked up
luv em drips
hmm Rein i think the r wud need some work on it
n sober dats mean
Kobra i reckon u shud lose the arrows
My 2 cents =D

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG000132.jpg
crits? im can't find a tag name atm so im trying out various random words
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG000142.jpg

MilkyCanvas
04-11-2008, 12:57 AM
Me trying to go simple:
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01191.jpg

What the simple turned into:
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01244.jpg

I like the last one. Crits please?

-Panik-
04-11-2008, 06:59 AM
Leche, Put your letters closer together
I don't really like how the C cross's the H either
but keep working on it

rsakens
04-11-2008, 10:17 AM
alright i true this one in here
simple but o well up is up ;)
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00031-6.jpg

AJACKSONKID
04-11-2008, 10:43 AM
Whats up everyone Im completely new to this and want to start getting better I thought of my tag the other day its EYKID like "hey kid" or "I Kid" this is the first tag i have ever done just looking for some feedback any criticism would be good im here to improve my game I know i suck right now and just viewing alot of your tags is great.

rsakens
04-11-2008, 11:18 AM
eykid ikid ?
no no non no
there is allready tkid (legend)
that would be like rates or sevok caim rondi
so better change it before you getting to use to it
that tag needs alot of work so get your self a thin pen and will up 10 a4 pages
with it after that do your tag make a pick post it and we will see

oakstr1
04-11-2008, 11:43 AM
lasek - like the drips like a fiend loves crack. you should make it one drippy mess.

rsakens - do you just have a wall somewhere close where you practice? i see the same things in a lot of your pics.


rainy day, marker tags. been workin on my 'S' n 'R' n i think everything looks pretty good in the first one.
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/2817/rainy2bo6.jpg

http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/4295/rainy1zo2.jpg
second one dont like that much.

sanrtizer
04-11-2008, 11:44 AM
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/636/img0179qu0.jpg

rsakens
04-11-2008, 12:51 PM
rsakens - do you just have a wall somewhere close where you practice? i see the same things in a lot of your pics.

yeah your right
i use to get up on different spots before
then i decided to practice on chill spots until i have
a sick style so yeah most of them are done in the same empty factory

Casual7ie
04-11-2008, 02:51 PM
sanrtizer-thats dope. im loving it.
oakster-i like the first one more, but the second one is pretty nice too.

Wallace
04-11-2008, 02:55 PM
sanrtizer- cant read it but i really like looking at it
i see KAMR

(SoS)Viruz
04-11-2008, 03:42 PM
You Guy got a New tag. I chage it around a Lil. I took out the Arrows. I have two dieffernt one I'll post them and I'll want to know which one i should use or which on better.

-Ark-
04-11-2008, 03:57 PM
LECHE - Everything closer together.

OAKSTR - Not feeling the giant cross on the T. Pretty good other than that. Steeze it up a lil and see what happens.

KANR - The N looks like an M, but it's pretty hot other than that.

Alright, I've been trying some different things with my tags. Tell me which # you like the best.
Also, should I go with the lowercase or uppercase R?
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3172/1000790qc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Desipher
04-11-2008, 04:01 PM
.

-Panik-
04-11-2008, 04:02 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/5oyq77.jpg
New name, marker is running out, crits?

bump

-Ark-
04-11-2008, 04:33 PM
You know, I just realized this thread has a fatal flaw. If our toy tags are being critiqued by other toys, how the fuck are we gonna improve? How do we know that the person critiquing us is talented enough to know what they're talking about?

Tokenkaligreens
04-11-2008, 04:39 PM
^^^ so true. lol Just read thro them and take to heart the crits of writters whos work you have seen and like or thought was skilled. Dont stress the toys they are most likly criting to get crits so just keep that in mind.

(SoS)Viruz
04-11-2008, 04:46 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/MakerTag1.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Tag2.jpg

I hope this is better than the Frist. Time but a I been working at it:D

kore
04-11-2008, 04:49 PM
KOBRA: Honestly, those are horrible. Just get rid of that style completely. Look at some other tags (not tags here in the toy section of course), compare their style to yours, since we're all toy here, bite if you have to, like that ESPO dude said, being a toy is great because you're pretty much allowed to bite other people's styles.

(SoS)Viruz
04-11-2008, 04:58 PM
Man this is nerve wracking. Like I cant fucking tag at all. Or I have no sicnce of style which fucking sucks. But I can kind of do pieces. Like Throw ups and stuff. But I feel if I get my tag down I'll have it. Like what can i chage on it or how sould i right. It.

Techkanuck
04-11-2008, 05:00 PM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture250.jpg

Wallace
04-11-2008, 05:41 PM
oakstr1- letters closer together
AJACKSONKID- needs lots of work, just keep practicing over and over
-Ark- its hard to see all of them because of the size, but id say 10
Vois- it looks just like your tags from a week ago to me =/

im starting to get pretty happy with my style.
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/4236/imgwv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

one or two?

-GEKS-
04-11-2008, 06:08 PM
i like one better without the quotes, just work on the l everything else flows

Wallace
04-11-2008, 06:09 PM
^^thanks


oakstr1- letters closer together
AJACKSONKID- needs lots of work, just keep practicing over and over
-Ark- its hard to see all of them because of the size, but id say 10
Vois- it looks just like your tags from a week ago to me =/

im starting to get pretty happy with my style.
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/4236/imgwv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

one or two?

bumping because i got the last post on the last page

BadlilDuck
04-11-2008, 06:17 PM
crits? im can't find a tag name atm so im trying out various random words
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG000142.jpg

bump

-GEKS-
04-11-2008, 06:18 PM
lose ALL the addons
and i think u'll have something nice

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-11-2008, 06:19 PM
there all kinda wack but i like num six...but u put too many lil do dads around it...blahh

(SoS)Viruz
04-11-2008, 06:21 PM
BadlilDuck- nice I wish I could do that.

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-11-2008, 06:22 PM
^^ lmfao...that shit is not nice....

this is nice..

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3664/sta71274jh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BadlilDuck
04-11-2008, 07:05 PM
haha sick flares
removed the add ons
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00015.jpg
crits?

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
04-11-2008, 07:23 PM
thing aout ur S..is its always interferrng wit hanother letter or like its connected to it self...look at the first one on the left look at the S..then the one directly to the right is ..like all on the U

then the one above the cursive lookin one..the S is merged into itself...

BadlilDuck
04-11-2008, 07:29 PM
haha yeh i get wut u mean
but for some reason i write wit them sticking together i just cant make em spaced out

MUSEone
04-11-2008, 07:30 PM
yes u can, its called practice....

innerbleeding
04-11-2008, 07:30 PM
You know, I just realized this thread has a fatal flaw. If our toy tags are being critiqued by other toys, how the fuck are we gonna improve? How do we know that the person critiquing us is talented enough to know what they're talking about?

it's an ego thing, not critiques. ;)

BadlilDuck
04-11-2008, 07:36 PM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00016.jpg
mmm yeh maybe i can. crits?

-Leski
04-11-2008, 10:16 PM
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/8214/geski6kg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
A little big, but I feel like taking up space...
Actualy its just too faint to see if I shrink it =P

suspek; The one you crossed out at the bottom is fairly decent.
Lasik; Remember that addons and extensions are part of the tag. They need to play a important part in it or they dont belong with it.

Yah, toys teaching toys... Thats why you take all the advice in here with a grain or two of salt. ;)

BadlilDuck
04-11-2008, 10:40 PM
Leski- i luv the O

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00017.jpg
wut else do i need to do to improve it?

MilkyCanvas
04-12-2008, 02:07 AM
Bring my letters closer together huh? That's it then?
Okay, thanks. I'll work on it.

oakstr1
04-12-2008, 09:04 AM
rainy day, marker tags. been workin on my 'S' n 'R' n i think everything looks pretty good in the first one.
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/2817/rainy2bo6.jpg
bump. crits?

ark - change the A n take out the star thing.
badlilduck - just move the K closer
leski - like the tag a lot.

woozie
04-12-2008, 11:28 AM
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/1076/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0pc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/9026/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0od8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry about the shirtless pics it is hot as hell
crits

-Panik-
04-12-2008, 03:42 PM
Saek, lose the halo, fix the E

letsgobombin
04-12-2008, 04:23 PM
few handies
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1118.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1117.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1116.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1115.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1114.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1113.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1112.jpg
saek- keep it simple for now, you look like you're made of plastic
oakstr- i like it, try to keep it the same level though
suspek- nice and simple, now you've got your base try adding some style/ flow. just realized make sure your s's are the same
leski- i like it looks like geski though

Thrice
04-12-2008, 04:34 PM
whatever you have to tell yourself woozie...haha JK, btw you have tiny nimples, i eat M&Ms bigger than those.

letsgobombin
04-12-2008, 04:54 PM
few handies
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1118.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1117.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1116.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1115.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1114.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1113.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1112.jpg
saek- keep it simple for now, you look like you're made of plastic
oakstr- i like it, try to keep it the same level though
suspek- nice and simple, now you've got your base try adding some style/ flow. just realized make sure your s's are the same
leski- i like it looks like geski though

bottom page bump

Desipher
04-12-2008, 05:27 PM
.

7thIncision
04-12-2008, 05:35 PM
Despher.. ill shit man. hope you could bust that out in under 30 seconds with a mop on a street corner

woozie
04-12-2008, 05:43 PM
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/1076/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0pc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/9026/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0od8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry about the shirtless pics it is hot as hell
crits
Bump
letsgobombin i cover myself in plastic ever day and i know my e's suck.
thric i take pride in my small nips
which tag is better

letsgobombin
04-12-2008, 05:50 PM
Bump
letsgobombin i cover myself in plastic ever day and i know my e's suck.
thric i take pride in my small nips
which one is better

your left nip lol:D

woozie
04-12-2008, 06:17 PM
soon my nipples will take over this thread

letsgobombin
04-12-2008, 06:31 PM
i swear some of this is gonna be quoted

oakstr1
04-12-2008, 06:44 PM
rainy day, marker tags. been workin on my 'S' n 'R' n i think everything looks pretty good in the first one.
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/2817/rainy2bo6.jpg


ark - change the A n take out the star thing.
badlilduck - just move the K closer
leski - like the tag a lot.

bump bump.

woozie - fix the A n K

H3TT1NG3R
04-12-2008, 06:47 PM
^whas u write taht with? looks liek a fucking paintbrush lol

Techkanuck
04-12-2008, 06:52 PM
first, i think we've had enough pictures or talking about our nipples unless you're a legal Female, then GAME ON.

letsgobomin- your tag reminds me of how I was trying mine, at least the P-O is similar to my V-O.

letsgobombin
04-12-2008, 06:57 PM
tech- i can see how our o's could be similar but how did u do your v's

Techkanuck
04-12-2008, 07:05 PM
don't have any pics of the V but it was basically like the Vert bar of the P you had in the very first one up there, but it's only similar and I'm way too toy with tags to matter

-Leski
04-12-2008, 07:28 PM
leski- i like it looks like geski though

I gotta change my profile... I do write Geski. :(

BadlilDuck
04-12-2008, 09:08 PM
Chuuuur for crits
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00018.jpg
needs improvement?
Desipher- dats uber duper frupper dope
woozie- the top one's the better one but i'll work on the e but i cant say much as im still toy as lol
oakstr- the s n r looks good

-Panik-
04-13-2008, 01:04 AM
leski- i like it looks like geski though

haha it's sposed to be geski, just clearing that up..


suspek, for everyone's sake lose the halo for now champ

BadlilDuck
04-13-2008, 01:18 AM
k wuts wrong wit halo's anyway haha

letsgobombin
04-13-2008, 02:58 AM
nothin wrong with halo's just get your tag down before you put add-ons on

BadlilDuck
04-13-2008, 06:06 AM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00019.jpg
needs improvement?

oakstr1
04-13-2008, 09:06 AM
haha its an OTR Flowpen, i love them.

suspek - i think the top one is the best. i would just make the E the same size maybe capital or some shit.

Techkanuck
04-13-2008, 10:50 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/blackbook-1.jpg
Found a couple cans of SHITTY paint and some cardboard. This is only my second tag using paint, the first is underneath it. I know there are mad problems with the paint, anything good/bad in the actual tag though

Suspek- I like the 3rd one if it had the P and K from the first(kinda like the small one next to it), maybe the same E only a lil bigger, otherwise the letters look like they'll be nice

Pootie13
04-13-2008, 12:30 PM
chyeah..

-Panik-
04-13-2008, 12:39 PM
k wuts wrong wit halo's anyway haha

there's nothing wrong with halos,
you just gotta get a handstyle down before you do anything that could possibly ruin your piece.

Capo Izi
04-13-2008, 01:27 PM
All either say Capozie, Capo, or LAT....

http://a211.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/92/l_3a945ed7ef3d56519416a5507c5569b2.jpg

http://a752.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/104/l_18fb159e41e5c228932a11246a8dcf17.jpg

http://a318.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/114/l_de2393d143a827e60fba9f77f93afb1d.jpg

woozie
04-13-2008, 03:20 PM
just like what ever other person says go similar and only use one color for tagz dude your c's look like squares

Mr yarbles
04-13-2008, 04:18 PM
All either say Capozie, Capo, or LAT....

http://a211.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/92/l_3a945ed7ef3d56519416a5507c5569b2.jpg

http://a752.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/104/l_18fb159e41e5c228932a11246a8dcf17.jpg

http://a318.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/114/l_de2393d143a827e60fba9f77f93afb1d.jpg

Don't join your c and your a makes it look like a weird r or an m
I don't ike the underlines and make the whole thing a little simpler
I really like your charecter though looks pretty nice

letsgobombin
04-13-2008, 04:24 PM
vois- your only startin with paint so keep practicing your control and try to get less drips every time
capo- the amount of add-ons and stringy bits are really confusing, it looks good at first but if you look closely the letters are really bad. not all of them, but most of them keep it simple for now

Wallace
04-13-2008, 08:46 PM
from last week

http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/1051/phone00dlsv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9360/phone00dowh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7112/phone00dthl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-Leski
04-13-2008, 08:48 PM
Good stuff wally.

Wallace
04-13-2008, 09:00 PM
thanks, i had some muchhh better ones on bus stops (the glass enclosures)... but they got buffed ='(

woozie
04-13-2008, 09:01 PM
good work perfect amount of drip one the second one.

RobG
04-13-2008, 11:52 PM
yeah wallace im feelin ur shit, nice drips fo sho. capo, nice ideas but too much shit goin on try to simple it out and dont use all the colors for ur tags its just distracting. heres a new style i just came up with, lemme know what you guys think.

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/271/imgp0421yn0.th.jpg (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imgp0421yn0.jpg)
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/4727/imgp0422lv8.th.jpg (http://img238.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imgp0422lv8.jpg)
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/6767/imgp0423nx1.th.jpg (http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imgp0423nx1.jpg)

calculating infinity
04-14-2008, 12:11 AM
are you crossing yourself out?

funer-loc
04-14-2008, 12:19 AM
make it simpler akine

-Leski
04-14-2008, 02:50 AM
I've never been able to work out a handstyle similar to yours Wallace, could you try and hit me up with a geski in your style? I'm curious how it would look...

I'll do your name with my hand in return. If you cant get it to work dont worry about it, no need to hit me back.

BadlilDuck
04-14-2008, 05:17 AM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00020.jpg
street worthy?

RobG- dats a massive dot for i, but y r u crossing urself out in the last one?
wallace- dope, is it homemade?

JSBiggz
04-14-2008, 08:22 AM
All either say Capozie, Capo, or LAT....

http://a211.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/92/l_3a945ed7ef3d56519416a5507c5569b2.jpg





the charactors in above the tag are deffinatly a bite from that Skateboard company...

RobG
04-14-2008, 10:18 AM
aight, thanks guys i got some simpler shit i been workin with ill post soon...and i wont cross myself out haha

ilikekicks
04-14-2008, 11:01 AM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_1386.jpg

Capo Izi
04-14-2008, 11:44 AM
the charactors in above the tag are deffinatly a bite from that Skateboard company...


No, I've been drawing it for 2 years, it does RESEMBLE the toy machine flying guy yes....because he has one eye and some shit on his head....but so...

http://members.shaw.ca/area51/toymachine_wax.jpg

Seriously I'm not biting, I've drawn all my characters for years....

seywhat
04-14-2008, 12:06 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/TempImage41.jpg
new handy style
capo- i say go simpler with ur tag, just like peices start simple and move up
suspek- not bad, maybe make the u the same height, i like the e in simple
lasic- its alright, but maybe just keep it on paper for a while. theres something wrong with it i just dont know how to point it out
vois- lookin pretty good

MUSEone
04-14-2008, 01:38 PM
From this....

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/7298/0326082137axz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


To this....

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3163/0412081642avf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Tha Os a lil off on the second one but its still better non tha less.

inchture
04-14-2008, 02:19 PM
museone i would crit but as i don't know whats good or bad i better not.

http://i25.tinypic.com/206eqle.jpg

crystalmeth and abortions
04-14-2008, 02:20 PM
muse- shits dope. def feelin how it flows

any one- i just got the grog squeezer and shits drippy as hell, no matter how fast and gentle i tag somthin. any tips on not makin it drip so bad?

MUSEone
04-14-2008, 02:39 PM
museone i would crit but as i don't know whats good or bad i better not.

http://i25.tinypic.com/206eqle.jpg

Go simple.