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-Leski
04-25-2008, 11:10 PM
We dont need to know your a girl, thats part of the beauty of graffiti.
Now your gonna have guys randomly hittin on yah...

Anyways, thats a really bad picture but what I can make out looks alright.
Its simple with just a little flair thrown in, looks like a good start.

JustKoolinB
04-26-2008, 01:10 AM
Got bored in math and started fucking around with some letters.
crits?
http://i28.tinypic.com/dzpdh.jpg



Thats a fat booty..;P
you draw those extra thick butts. AHAH
nahh

but um change the butt.
like too much empty space for no reason, and it ruins the letter structures.
and take away all those lines around it. Lolol.
Try not to get all fancy with your letters yet.
Start simple then work your way up.

2KoS
04-26-2008, 09:47 AM
ouk n kos
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Image050-1.jpg

on paper, KOS. bombing scienceeee. dont rag on me about extensions, got bored!
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Image066.jpg

old pic/blam but thought i'd show u how i luurve to change styleeeeee everynow and then:cool:
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/Image038.jpg

smile_
04-26-2008, 10:00 AM
2kos maybe alittle more simple?
near looks good


http://i31.tinypic.com/23r4b6b.jpg

:confused: thanks.

Meko, ya heard?
04-26-2008, 10:07 AM
Extremely old tags... they survived the buff
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-13.jpg
lines got skinnier though :/

DAWS <3
KILS

dudebro what marker did you use on that and did you have to mod it at all? always wondered cause tags like that are sick

2KoS
04-26-2008, 10:08 AM
now i remember why i dont post here anymore

Mr yarbles
04-26-2008, 11:34 AM
Alright thanks guys I wasn't really too sure about that style

Here's something simple
http://i30.tinypic.com/outix5.jpg

That's my usual tag
http://i28.tinypic.com/28vq3vq.jpg

and then something kidna different
http://i26.tinypic.com/orkl07.jpg

Crits?


Kos I like that style keep it up

-Panik-
04-26-2008, 12:38 PM
panik lovin' your signature. yeah i didnt read that, my bad.
bor- is that what you personnaly write or is it your crew?
and also you cant see it at all, use a thicker marker or something, cuz i cant see any style at all.

hahah "Dance with the devil" is a sick song, haha
and Tesone stick with your usual tag imo, it looks alot better and has much more flow

RezOner..
04-26-2008, 01:28 PM
tesone id use your usual one, but if you need an alternative use the bottom one.

Mr yarbles
04-26-2008, 01:54 PM
Alright thanks alot guys

AvengerAV
04-26-2008, 03:06 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/34zbuvo.jpg

need some feedback on this...tell me what u guys think, thx

EDIT: it says Avenger

-Leski
04-26-2008, 03:18 PM
Make the letters a tad more defined and it could be dope.
Excellent flow, excellent shape.
Maybe loose the star at the beginning, arrows I can take or leave, but defiantly define those letters !

Mr yarbles
04-26-2008, 03:34 PM
Don't like the stars kinda look like a's
Spread the letters out a tad bit I think
It's pretty sick though keep up with that style

Debok
04-26-2008, 04:31 PM
Maybe you could give more style to the first A

RezOner..
04-26-2008, 06:00 PM
what they said. also avenger is a fucking tough word, thats hard to do. did you write that on one of those calender things? oh dont have the letters forced into the other ones. how long did that take you?

AvengerAV
04-26-2008, 07:41 PM
yea its tough, and yea i did write it on a calender :D lol
kk thx and umm well i had this name for about 3 munths ....but ive only been writing for like 5 munths total lol........


edit: it takes me 10 seconds to write it out

-Panik-
04-26-2008, 08:38 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/2rr1lee.jpg
my cousin wanted me to draw him up a handstyle,
this is all i came up with, any crits?
just a quick simple done on tablet

MilkyCanvas
04-26-2008, 10:38 PM
What do you guys think of this? Crits please.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01276.jpg

Avenger, I like your style. I just have 2 problems with your tag. The V is kinda of closed up, almost to the point of looking like an O. And your first E looks like a K to me. That's all. Great tag though.

Game Ova 07
04-26-2008, 10:47 PM
heres a handy ive been working on crits?
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Graffiti/neo34.jpg

acereborn
04-26-2008, 11:03 PM
style it up a bit. lose the halo. figure out a better underline, imo it just doesnt look right.

AvengerAV
04-26-2008, 11:12 PM
-neo or veo or watever it says: thats pretty good man i like it just take out da !
-serum/milky: i dont like the s, u need to work on that and the m, and u need to make it more stylish (and y do u waste that marker on paper, just practice with an expo :D )
panik/morf: what did u use to write that, Ms paint?? and yea i like that it looks good

MilkyCanvas
04-26-2008, 11:19 PM
-neo or veo or watever it says: thats pretty good man i like it just take out da !
-serum/milky: i dont like the s, u need to work on that and the m, and u need to make it more stylish (and y do u waste that marker on paper, just practice with an expo :D )
panik/morf: what did u use to write that, Ms paint?? and yea i like that it looks goodWill do. And that marker was used because it looks alot better when it's thicker.

Game Ova 07
04-26-2008, 11:22 PM
its neo...and by style do you mean like connecting it...?
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/My%20Graffiti/Neo2.jpg

-Panik-
04-26-2008, 11:22 PM
Neo, lose the halo man, for now atleast,
serum, you seem to have a grasp of the simple, start adding steeze
and yea i used MS paint, but I usually write rein, just wanted a check before i sent that to my cousin aha

EDIT: actually neo, we posted at the same time, and i like the halo in the second post, keep it man

Game Ova 07
04-26-2008, 11:31 PM
lol thanks man

-Panik-
04-26-2008, 11:44 PM
No problem bro
you should work on getting a wildstyle down
wild 3 letters look sick if you get em good
but your simple looks good as it is
it's always fun to screw around, aha

Game Ova 07
04-26-2008, 11:58 PM
haha yeah ill post a wild handy ive been working on soon...i just needa perfect it before i start street bombing with it

AvengerAV
04-27-2008, 12:07 AM
yea neo that second post is sick man haha

AvengerAV
04-27-2008, 12:27 AM
as u can see by my name i go by av to, for short, dis is how i write it, any of u got n e better ideas how to write it, let ME no

http://i29.tinypic.com/2en2uee.jpg

tempest
04-27-2008, 07:09 AM
i wuldnt connect the v and the a. kinda looks like aw or an. just my 2 cents

Primal
04-27-2008, 07:32 AM
hey guys dont make fun of me but... haha i found my first tag flick :D
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/383/file0208ih8.jpg

LET THE FLAMES BEGIN!

near0
04-27-2008, 10:16 AM
neo - lose the halo, quote marks and the star
av - dont connect your letters and maybe make them less jagged?
primal - rework every letter

-Panik-
04-27-2008, 12:47 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/2rr1lee.jpg
my cousin wanted me to draw him up a handstyle,
this is all i came up with, any crits?
just a quick simple done on tablet

BUMP crits

Game Ova 07
04-27-2008, 01:37 PM
just got a question...when people do the halo is it suppose to symbolize like being a king in your area or w/e?

Oaklander
04-27-2008, 01:47 PM
Yeah; halo's should be reserved for old writers only.

Oaklander
04-27-2008, 01:48 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2e4b3sw.jpg

Nesk1
04-27-2008, 02:16 PM
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/Image010.jpg
I'll try and give crits but I'm not very experienced at all.
@ Oaklander I'd say try to not make the lines go over each other.

-Sorry didn't realise the quality was that bad.

Oaklander
04-27-2008, 02:22 PM
Thanks for the criticism. Nesk, I suggest trying simpler letters.

Nesk1
04-27-2008, 02:26 PM
Hmm I thought they were pretty simple to be honest apart from the K maybe they're a bit too squished

MUSEone
04-27-2008, 03:00 PM
Hmm I thought they were pretty simple to be honest apart from the K maybe they're a bit too squished

Dont listen to him. They are simple letters, only thing would be in the first one, dont loop the k like u did.

woozie
04-27-2008, 03:01 PM
ya nesk don't have your letters over lap and primal is that an old tag that you just took a pic of or is that your first tag ever that you just did

Nesk1
04-27-2008, 03:03 PM
Thanks Woozie and Muse

tempest
04-27-2008, 03:19 PM
primal - if thats ur first attempt i wuld say put down the custom marker, take out a sharpie, and start sketchin on paper. those drips will confuse u nd make it hard 2 improve (its kinda hard 2 figur out wat u need if u cant c shit).
oaklander - i cant hardly read tht. try unconnecting ur letters.
nesk- lookin sweet. lookin real good. i like it. aside from that stupid ass k ;). ur s could also use sum work. try workin he slant off, fattenin the letters (ther real tall), and ditching the swirly crap uve got on the k. ull find that it will look worse and less graffiti like but if u keep at it then u can lengthen the letters and twill look kick ass! yesterday i filled 26 blank pages front and back (and i mean filled) with shitloads of different tags. just keep practicin nd ull b the dopest ritir on the block. metaphorically u kno ;)

Nesk1
04-27-2008, 03:29 PM
Thanks Tempest =]
I think I'll try and post another picture tomorrow :)

smile_
04-27-2008, 03:58 PM
2kos maybe alittle more simple?
near looks good


http://i31.tinypic.com/23r4b6b.jpg

:confused: thanks.

Bump..

Nest, try not to overlap ur letters..

Nesk1
04-27-2008, 04:44 PM
Smile, fatter letters lose the huge circle for the I and not make the bottom of the e go up so much
The letters look a bit plain too

AvengerAV
04-27-2008, 04:56 PM
uhh need more crits thx


http://i30.tinypic.com/34zbuvo.jpg

need some feedback on this...tell me what u guys think, thx

EDIT: it says Avenger



primal, ya man dont use that marker yet, save it for wen u get better cuz it looks like a pretty good marker, but u need to practice alot more, and make it flow man

Nesk1
04-27-2008, 05:07 PM
Looking nice Avenger, just somehow try and make the first half a little bit more legible and maybe lose the star at the start

Oaklander
04-27-2008, 06:26 PM
oaklander - i cant hardly read tht. try unconnecting ur letters.


Fuck you, that's just the style I use. Clearly, you're an idiot.

TronMzero
04-27-2008, 06:36 PM
Fuck you, that's just the style I use. Clearly, you're an idiot.

Way to get so defensive.

And ^Pretty good Avenger^

I forgot who said remove the star at the starting A, but yeah I agree with you.

Gyse
04-27-2008, 06:44 PM
I posted this already in the throwup thread, but I figured I'd post it here as well since there's 2 tags. Any criticism appreciated.
Avenger- that looks pretty good, but if you don't abreviate that, I think you might have trouble with the throwup. maybe AVNGR. your choice. It looks good though.

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8774/04272008064846pmjo0.th.png (http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=04272008064846pmjo0.png)

TronMzero
04-27-2008, 06:48 PM
alright so i racked this weird marker today... It's alright. I can't complain. but check the handstyle. its ehhhh. that "A" isn't the "A" i usually use. I'll post more later.

http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/mattron0/DSCF2139-1.jpg

Don't mind the old, shitty throw in the back. i was just fuckin around a while back =P

RezOner..
04-27-2008, 07:20 PM
smile- thats way too plain, get some style. especially on the s, s's are the best. i'd lose the underline too.
oaklander you post here to get crits, don't cry when someone gives them to you.
spaz- besides the a, i really like it. good job.

TronMzero
04-27-2008, 07:33 PM
^Thanks dude^

I'll post another later with a different A.

-Leski
04-27-2008, 07:44 PM
Lots of critz going on in here. Some good, some bad.
this thread runs better when everyone tries to help out and give their opinion. :p

TronMzero; Not to bad a mop/marker there, just pause for a second at the end start and end of the letters to make them cleaner, or dont if you like it rougher.
Give it a little squeeze if its a mop.

Gyse; Work out that bottom one, I like how it flows. With the letters like that.
I do something similar with my tag.

AvengerAV: you've got my opnion already, just clean it up a bit and loose that first star. But dont do anything else to it !

smile_; Go out and grab some markers or write your tag smaller with the pencil.
Bolder lines would probably help you out a lot.

Nesk1; Really like that first on as is. If anything make it a tad bit wider so each letter has a bit more space, but just a tad.

Oaklander: I like that style you've got going, keep with it.

Only toss a halo on if you've hit a heaven spot, or if your handstyle can carry it.

Remember this is MY opinion and suggestions, you dont have to take any of it.

TronMzero
04-27-2008, 07:49 PM
thanks, yeah i racked the marker today. It's not too great. but yeah I'll take your advice thanks man.

(new pics coming soon too)

Game Ova 07
04-27-2008, 08:42 PM
spaz? theres one of those in boston...

Cin123
04-27-2008, 09:10 PM
spaz- nice flow
avernger- dont put the letters as close
smile- y is there a random line in between the M and the I
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/434.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/455.jpg
it was mad rainy any crits?

RezOner..
04-27-2008, 09:25 PM
yeah, dont paint in the rain. i cant tell what you write from that heart picture.

Primal
04-27-2008, 09:53 PM
ya nesk don't have your letters over lap and primal is that an old tag that you just took a pic of or is that your first tag ever that you just did

haha WAYY old.. i think it was my first one, im not sure. only pic i have tho :/

Oaklander
04-27-2008, 11:19 PM
Way to get so defensive.


I suppose I was a bit too harsh. My bad tempest. But still, that sticker blatantly reads defacer.

Game Ova 07
04-27-2008, 11:29 PM
yeah i have no idea what that says cin...

Wallace
04-27-2008, 11:46 PM
TronMzero- i like it other than the little extension on the A.
smile_- ditch the halo

quick rework of some letters
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3426/imgsk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nvstyles
04-28-2008, 02:16 AM
first post! but crit all you want...
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y43/nvstyles/IMG00864.jpg

La Coka Nostra
04-28-2008, 03:44 AM
cin, i think the heart idea is kinda sick
or it could be if pulled off right.
try scaling it down a bit.

tempest
04-28-2008, 10:03 AM
Fuck you, that's just the style I use. Clearly, you're an idiot.
lol! i dont know y i bother......

Anyway:
Smile - basically wat every1 els is sayin: make the dot on the 'i' smaller, make the curve on the e smaller and make the exclamation smaller and smaller until it dissapears ;)
cin-dude i luv the heart idea! thts sweet. not really feelin the other one tho. too drippy.
avenger-ur first e looks like a k. and if u really want 2 keep the stars on their then try slantin it a little. i think the reason most ppl dont like it is cuz its out place with ur tag. ur tag is slanted so it kinda jumps out the wall. the star is really flat tho and seems out of place. idk
spaz-nice. lose the superswirl on the z tho ;)
wallace - awesome! the i is kinda feeling left out tho. y dint u giv him any style ;)
awe -4 a first post, thats dope. idk wat those stupid circles r for tho. also, the way uve stroked that bar on the top with the e makes them look broken apart. try not lifting the marker off when u get to tht top bar. i dont even kno if u understand wat i just sed... Last crit! the two hatchmarks onthe top left...make it one, get rid of the one in the middle.

EDIT:i just read tht nd it dont make sense

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 12:15 PM
Fuck you, that's just the style I use. Clearly, you're an idiot.

your styles toy, now both of you stop it, your both bunk

tempest
04-28-2008, 12:16 PM
rofl

TronMzero
04-28-2008, 03:11 PM
messed up a little bit, mad small area =P but yeah. thats the other A i have.

crits? idk which A i should use...

edit:
spaz-nice. lose the superswirl on the z tho ;)


I was thinking of doing that actually. lol. thanks though, don't mind this one, I'm gonna lose the superswirl.

http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/mattron0/DSCF2140.jpg

MUSEone
04-28-2008, 03:53 PM
TronMzero,

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7633/or107xz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this is Mr. Spiral Notebook

and Ms. Marksalot

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/874/1088885ioefp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

make these ur new best friends.

:)

TronMzero
04-28-2008, 04:06 PM
^hahaha.

I racked 2 yesterday, and I got enough sharpies, and shit. =P

I'll start using it. :D

MUSEone
04-28-2008, 04:09 PM
yea haha stop using w.e marker that is ur using and writing on wat looks to be a longboard in tha making.. haha

TronMzero
04-28-2008, 04:19 PM
hahaha, it was like a retarded ass mini surfboard shelf... thing.. i dont even know, but yeah I'll be using actual PAPER and a sharpie or pen.

Wallace
04-28-2008, 04:20 PM
TronMzero- i like it other than the little extension on the A.
smile_- ditch the halo

quick rework of some letters
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3426/imgsk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumppp, i always get the bottom of the page =(

Bah Humbug
04-28-2008, 04:21 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll227/Aten_BPC/DCP02056.jpg
one of my worser tags

TronMzero
04-28-2008, 04:39 PM
^eh. Loose the little cross outs in the arrow and the swirl out of the letter N

not bad though

-Panik-
04-28-2008, 04:58 PM
your styles toy, now both of you stop it, your both bunk

hahahahaha best, without a doubt

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 05:34 PM
thank you my dear panik,
now i will post my old bunk ass tag
Snot oner(i believe ive posted it before)
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080313_6.jpg
its very crowded, ill do a cleaner one sometime soon just not now cause my "work" *cough*graff area*cough* is full of plates, pop cans, chip bags, and cups
until then... i leave you all with a simple crit, Dont add "add ons" onto LETTERS... that shit goes around the tag, the letters make the tag its self with its unique flow and shapping

RezOner..
04-28-2008, 06:40 PM
soboe your easily the best on this forum. is that from 2003? im lovin it though, i like that squishy style haha

-Panik-
04-28-2008, 06:41 PM
Yea, for sure post a cleaner one, the add ons are good
the letter structure needs work
other than that it's pretty good, haha
I can't wait to see the cleaner one :)
EDIT: is the S sideways? aha

boomboombox
04-28-2008, 08:30 PM
Wow 981 pages how do people make it this far..?

-Panik-
04-28-2008, 08:50 PM
if you look back, sadly most of it is pointless beef

Cin123
04-28-2008, 08:51 PM
TronMzero,

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7633/or107xz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this is Mr. Spiral Notebook

and Ms. Marksalot

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/874/1088885ioefp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

make these ur new best friends.

:)

LOLOLOL thats soo jks

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 10:17 PM
Yea, for sure post a cleaner one, the add ons are good
the letter structure needs work
other than that it's pretty good, haha
I can't wait to see the cleaner one :)
EDIT: is the S sideways? aha

yea son, the S is slightly crooked over :) it makes the flow MUCH faster, but no man there is alot of letter structure i will try to point it out haha ill post it again showing the letters

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 10:25 PM
BEFORE

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080313_6.jpg

AFTER

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080314_1.jpg

wafflecakee
04-28-2008, 10:29 PM
snot isn't a great word to use...

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 10:44 PM
neither is nose if you write it...
now shut up or battle me

glyce
04-28-2008, 10:50 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/grungrocker/soanktag002-1.jpg

Wallace
04-28-2008, 10:51 PM
neither is nose if you write it...
now shut up or battle me

Aahsahahahahaahhahha
ahsdhasdhsahahaahaAAHAHAHAHAAHAhaah

fucking win

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 10:53 PM
Glyce -your forcing a oneline, thats something you never wanna do... your trying WAY to hard to connect the letter, dont connect your letters till you got DOPE hand steezes down. and then you talk to a writer who has a dope oneliner and he will show you the way to go. and that half heart shit isnt workin son... drop that part forsure

Wallace
04-28-2008, 11:03 PM
soboe would you mind helping me out with some crits?

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3426/imgsk0.jpg
tear it up

Soboe!
04-28-2008, 11:08 PM
soboe would you mind helping me out with some crits?

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3426/imgsk0.jpg
tear it up

lets see, for the "I" make it upper case... and on the top of the S have alittle leg up word like mine does (top of the page). that S your using was the first styled S i ever did when learnin graff... i love seein how bunk it is.... Fix the beginning of the tag because it doesnt look like a letter(s). and the C should progress its self from there

wafflecakee
04-28-2008, 11:21 PM
neither is nose if you write it...
now shut up or battle me

i was just suggesting because earsnot is huge and often writes snot. but whatevs.

Game Ova 07
04-28-2008, 11:50 PM
do i hear a toy tag battle!?

BadlilDuck
04-29-2008, 03:25 AM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7620/editedea5.jpg
crits?
soboe- O.O

Dying to live
04-29-2008, 07:59 AM
do i hear a toy tag battle!?
i would get my ears checked out then =\

-Panik-
04-29-2008, 02:23 PM
i would get my ears checked out then =\

That was a rather dumb comment, I also thought a toy battle was comin on

maneframe
04-29-2008, 02:33 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/S7301354.jpg

-Panik-
04-29-2008, 02:39 PM
Not really feelin the e, it might be just me lol
but did you do the one at the bottom of the pic too?
anyways it's pretty nice, pretty simple, once you get a better hold of it
start adding some steeze :)

HERE.KBS.AOE
04-29-2008, 02:44 PM
yo whats good
i write here and im in kbs and aoe
im from kitchener ontario

is there any way to make these flicks show up bigger?

maneframe
04-29-2008, 02:45 PM
the bottom one was just some experimental calligraphy shit i did. the reason the E goes a bit thin at the side is cos it was a brand new t-nib and it needs to be broken in...

-Panik-
04-29-2008, 02:47 PM
Upload ur flicks on like tinypic or something here, and then copy paste the forum link into ur post,
and mane i didn't think the thinness was your fault, but I just don't like the structure of the e, personal preference, i'd like to see more of your shit tho, you look to have potential

maneframe
04-29-2008, 02:51 PM
cheers man, yeah i'll get some more shit up soon!

-Panik-
04-29-2008, 03:07 PM
post some sketches up so you can get crits before you hit the walls/streets wit it

TronMzero
04-29-2008, 05:35 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/S7301354.jpg

I'm really feelin' it. but that E... that E, change it up and thats a dope handstyle you got there.

Game Ova 07
04-29-2008, 06:29 PM
i know i thought one was comming...=(

neways
mane-shit looks like it flows well besides the E
suspek-looks pretty good but i dont know if thats a good name considering a legend from boston and ny write spek

La Coka Nostra
04-29-2008, 09:45 PM
bored at work.
out of control with the fake drips.
ehhhhh?

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/8104/drippyhandct6.jpg

boomboombox
04-29-2008, 09:50 PM
Just something kinda creative
http://i32.tinypic.com/28helcg.jpg

P.S - this pic is also in 905 thread

bowchicabowow
04-29-2008, 09:55 PM
La Coka Nostra - Yeah definatley out of control fake drips, haha. But I'd try warping the entire word in on way or another, it's really "straight" right now.

I changed my name to NEAR. I only know of one famous NEAR but he only paints portraits and lives nowhere NEAR me. (lol)

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/633/handysr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/633/handysr5.93e4830897.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=329&i=handysr5.jpg)

MilkyCanvas
04-30-2008, 12:25 AM
I already got crits from 2 people yesterday or so. But I'd like a couple more please. I just got this new name, and I like it, but I can't seem to make it look too great. I haven't been writing for very long, but I know that I can do better than this.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/DSC01310.jpg

SyrupNZ
04-30-2008, 03:51 AM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh91/switchbladeposse/IMG_1302.jpgChick that started graff about a month ago. First attempt at a one liner.
Crits plz

tempest
04-30-2008, 03:59 AM
dont do a 1liner til u hav normal tag

SyrupNZ
04-30-2008, 04:16 AM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh91/switchbladeposse/IMG_1305.jpg

This is what i got so far.:confused:

tempest
04-30-2008, 08:31 AM
go simple! argh. ur s is ok, the y is passable, but the rest...lose the weird thing on the r, make the loop on the p strate, get rid of the extension on the u and the dot on the s. dont make the y swirl like tht. but good attempt ;)

Feelza
04-30-2008, 11:29 AM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk11/Flongoid/DSC00040.jpg?t=1209572697
my attempt - sadly fairly wank atm so crits more than welcomed.


bowchicabowow - i like it but your N looks like a U
Mane - agree with tronmzero, the E looks pretty out of place

Soboe!
04-30-2008, 12:16 PM
feelza dont add any arrows or shit to your letters and make your K like this sorta

|....|
|__|
|\
|..\
|....\

SenTheFirst
04-30-2008, 12:39 PM
@ everybody on this page- PRACTICE MORE. start simple and clean and work your way up

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/jHANDS2.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/jHANDS.jpg
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/jhands3.jpg

wafflecakee
04-30-2008, 02:17 PM
give crits to receive crits

MilkyCanvas
04-30-2008, 05:53 PM
why the hell did you bump yourself on the same page...I don't know what the blazes you're talking about. ;]

bowchicabowow
04-30-2008, 05:59 PM
Syrup - Go simpler, the style will create itself once you get your basic letter structure down.

feelza- I could say the same.

Any crits on mine yet? I like it, but last time I liked a tag of mine it sucked.

smikoer
04-30-2008, 07:10 PM
bowchicabowow; keep 'em all the same size would be my first crit and..


@ everybody on this page- PRACTICE MORE. start simple and clean and work your way up

RezOner..
04-30-2008, 09:41 PM
syrup, change up everything cept your begining letters. pratice more.
Feelza- change your s. and your k, i reccomend taking away the arrow at the end.

Mr yarbles
04-30-2008, 11:27 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/r0e0pw.jpg
Crits?

Mane: I like that and I actually like your e

Syrup: change everything but the s and the y

RobG
05-01-2008, 02:29 AM
sen - that shits dope man
yarbles - no flow, your letters just dont seem to fit they all got different styles, try to keep it consistent

heres some Philly handstyles i been workin on, lemme know if ya dig em or not

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0455.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0453.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0452-1.jpg

sorry the pics are so big, cant figure out how to get em smaller right now

RobG
05-01-2008, 02:30 AM
i write MASEK if you cant read em

RobG
05-01-2008, 02:34 AM
sen - that shits dope man
yarbles - no flow, your letters just dont seem to fit they all got different styles, try to keep it consistent

heres some Philly handstyles i been workin on, lemme know if ya dig em or not
I write MASEK

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0455.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0453.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0452-1.jpg

sorry the pics are so big, cant figure out how to get em smaller right now

sorry about the tripple post, just had to bump this shit so people will see it on the fresh page.

tempest
05-01-2008, 12:31 PM
nice job. try sum wickeds!

Soboe!
05-01-2008, 06:24 PM
lovin the philly steez kid, keep it up.

MilkyCanvas
05-01-2008, 06:40 PM
I already got crits from 2 people yesterday or so. But I'd like a couple more please. I just got this new name, and I like it, but I can't seem to make it look too great. I haven't been writing for very long, but I know that I can do better than this.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/DSC01310.jpgBump. There we go. It's a new page. Estas contento Sen?
Syrup, like everyone else has been saying, throw everything away except the S and the Y. I'm talking about your one liner here. I don't like the Y in the second picture. Keep the S and the Y from the first pic.

Saek, take the arrow off of the K. I don't like your S too much. Maybe because it sorta looks like mine. Or maybe because it just doesn't appeal to me. I'm not sure yet. Um, rework the A I guess? It seems sort of unbalanced/unlevel if that makes sense. And I guess I like the E.

Crits please?

Soboe!
05-01-2008, 07:29 PM
i got one, dont write Serum, its too close to SIRUM whos a famous writer

MilkyCanvas
05-01-2008, 07:41 PM
i got one, dont write Serum, its too close to SIRUM whos a famous writerDamn, are you serious? Where is this guy located?

But anyways, what do you think of that anyway?

innerbleeding
05-01-2008, 07:48 PM
MELBOURNE OZTRALIA
F1C SWB. hes in the ironlak writing team.
if u can burn these joinups..
http://www.ironlak.com/writerteam/index.html

SyrupNZ
05-01-2008, 08:24 PM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh91/switchbladeposse/untitled.jpg




Trying to get better, i think all the practise is working. I did all these lame tags around it but the looked gay so i cut them out. Crits please

SyrupNZ
05-01-2008, 08:59 PM
Yeah, i don't know of any in New Zealand though so im gonna stick with it.

Mr yarbles
05-01-2008, 11:06 PM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh91/switchbladeposse/untitled.jpg




Trying to get better, i think all the practise is working. I did all these lame tags around it but the looked gay so i cut them out. Crits please

It's getting better
Try to make it all the same size and make the p less edgy, more liek the r
Try not to get your r into your u either makes it look kinda sloppy
Also lose those two lines under itand the question mark

Dalinquint
05-02-2008, 01:34 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2158/2444644913_f242c94048.jpg?v=0

oakstr1
05-02-2008, 12:06 PM
^^^im feelin that^...not typical but i think its mad dope..i would close up the D a little bit(i think its a d)

them phillys would look bomb painted.

ZE-Jay
05-02-2008, 12:29 PM
dude anyone in the uk offering to give tips on best place to get stickaz

letsgobombin
05-02-2008, 12:51 PM
order them off thebench504.com

oakstr1
05-02-2008, 01:07 PM
new tag easy to read.
akoner
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/11/akonerai0.jpg

letsgobombin
05-02-2008, 01:19 PM
its simple but it does seem like your writing akon-er (the rapper) if you pull it off its fine you just might get some stick

tempest
05-02-2008, 01:22 PM
lol. i always kno its u cuz u take the pictures underwater ;). get ri of that thingie in ur o. and ur r is 2 pointy and flowless(tht a word?). the bottom part of it shuld b like the btm part of the k and not rotated up

C3ZR ONE
05-02-2008, 03:50 PM
Bump that Syrup tag. This thread is mostly disaster, which is okay. It's a place for learning the most essential, and a good place to get pointers, so if you're posting in here then props, even if you suck, but this one was very nice.


...damn I ramble a bit. sorry. Sen The First is fresh too.


.

Cin123
05-02-2008, 05:52 PM
RobG- now thats a mother fuckin dope ass tag
Canvas- try and get some flow
queit- lol wat is that :S

IlikePie
05-02-2008, 05:55 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/DSC00850.jpg

I dunno if my hand is good or not really. I like it, but never been commented on it. Says Fack Me Nicely :P


*Ps*
I got bored and outlined it in class, sorry :)

H3TT1NG3R
05-02-2008, 06:25 PM
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1299/spiderwithtagqc9.jpg not my best, but its a a freehand spider, done with a whiteout pen filled with acryllic

MilkyCanvas
05-02-2008, 07:06 PM
MELBOURNE OZTRALIA
F1C SWB. hes in the ironlak writing team.
if u can burn these joinups..
http://www.ironlak.com/writerteam/index.htmlGreatttt.
I checked him out. He is pretty sick though. Guess I have to change my name.

I'll post something later.

Mr yarbles
05-03-2008, 12:18 AM
First e came out shit but whatever
http://i25.tinypic.com/qp5gyr.jpg

Kinda old now, bus tag.
http://i31.tinypic.com/2e0s20w.jpg

Milk I don't really think you should change your name jsut because someone has a similar name almost every name is taken anymore
if no one writes it around you I think it's fine,
but that's just my opinion.

C3ZR ONE
05-03-2008, 12:21 AM
Paper tag= not so fresh.
Bus tag= fresh. Go back to that steez.

Anybody wanna do a handy exchange? I'm wired and there's a blizzard outside...

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 12:32 AM
i will if you're still around.
RECON

C3ZR ONE
05-03-2008, 12:36 AM
chea. Gimme a couple... Damn I hate the N's...

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 12:48 AM
not exactly CEZR quality handstyle...but nonetheless.

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3199/cezrhandkw1.jpg

do i get bonus points for adding that drop shadow? haha

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 01:14 AM
:( I always go unnoticed, I guess I do suck bad at hands :(

C3ZR ONE
05-03-2008, 01:16 AM
I like the C and the E alot. Thanks dude!

My boy gave me some new ink called witches brew. It's distributed by Rebels till death crew. Thought I'd try it out, but I've never used one of those built in ball dobbers before. feels weird. (It had alot more shape with a chisel tip..haha)
http://a69.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_45475df7b251e33f5b27038b9d86c504.jpg

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 01:19 AM
First e came out shit but whatever
http://i25.tinypic.com/qp5gyr.jpg

Kinda old now, bus tag.
http://i31.tinypic.com/2e0s20w.jpg

Milk I don't really think you should change your name jsut because someone has a similar name almost every name is taken anymore
if no one writes it around you I think it's fine,
but that's just my opinion.The fact that I just found out that someone snitched and the police know who am I also affected my decision to change my name. But it's so hard. Can't come up with something too good. Gotta keep trying.

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 01:21 AM
CEZR, that R is steeeeeezy.


I like pie, your hand is dope.
i like weird styles like that.
you wanna do an exchange?
Throwup/simple..and a handstyle?

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 01:22 AM
Oh, and by the way Yarbles, I agree with CEZR. The bus tag is not as readable as your paper tag, but it still looks way better. So keep that. I like it. Of course, don't take anything that I say too seriously. 2 months of experience under your belt isn't too much.

C3ZR ONE
05-03-2008, 01:25 AM
:( I always go unnoticed, I guess I do suck bad at hands :(

Naw dude. Your handyrock has an origional flow to it. I like it minus the outline. some of the letters got kinda squished in there, but it's fresh. That M is fuckin out there!

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 01:29 AM
Woohoo, attention :D. I'll try and work up a simple tonight, but I'm about to pass out. And the outline came from boredom, I had another where the outline had 3D :p

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 01:32 AM
post it up tomorrow if you gotta.
you write RABY right?

IlikePie
05-03-2008, 01:37 AM
Nahh, Rab, that other guy writes raby(drakula I think).

C3ZR ONE
05-03-2008, 01:37 AM
Woohoo, attention :D. I'll try and work up a simple tonight, but I'm about to pass out. And the outline came from boredom, I had another where the outline had 3D :p

Haha. I used to do all that shit when I entered the handstyle battles on here. I had so much outlines and 3d and fake drips on my shit you couldn't even see the tag and I almost always won. It was retarded. Nowadays I think kids are getting smarter and can see past that shit. I don't think I'd even place anymore.

Nostra, are you in the US?

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 01:41 AM
yessir. east coast.
and word RAB, that's good cause i would've struggled with the Y anyways.


haha i remember your old hand battle entries CZER. I've been ghost on the forums for mad long. They were always dope though. There's alot better writers on here now.

Sone10
05-03-2008, 02:14 AM
Ok heres mine its abit crap well i am a toy :P i stuffed up at the E

http://www.graffitivideos.info/Picture(74).jpg

Mr yarbles
05-03-2008, 02:16 AM
Alright guys thanks
I stopped putting the n over the o after a while beucase some people told me it was too pushed together, but then other people like it. I guess it's just taste.

and milk Somebody saw me writing and told my parents so I know how it sucks, I still write the same name but I usually war bandanas and hat or something whenever I go out I don't really take many chances anymore.


http://i27.tinypic.com/2ywv86a.jpg

But anyways I tried to make it like the bus style, what do you guys think?

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 02:18 AM
what does it say?
tesone?

Mr yarbles
05-03-2008, 02:28 AM
Yea

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 11:24 AM
Alright guys thanks
I stopped putting the n over the o after a while beucase some people told me it was too pushed together, but then other people like it. I guess it's just taste.

and milk Somebody saw me writing and told my parents so I know how it sucks, I still write the same name but I usually war bandanas and hat or something whenever I go out I don't really take many chances anymore.


http://i27.tinypic.com/2ywv86a.jpg

But anyways I tried to make it like the bus style, what do you guys think?You even wear that stuff for just tagging? And I'm really liking those. Especially the Es, and the star. Sick man.

And, if my parents or a simple by stander knew, it'd be okay. (Not speaking as if I'd like to get caught anytime soon. You get the idea though). They're not going to tell the cops. But seeing as the cops know...If they were to gather enough evidence, they could charge me. So just to be safe, I'm changing my name.

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 11:25 AM
what does it say?
tesone?Yes.

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 11:26 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01311.jpg

Alright, what do you guys think? I like 2 and 3 the best. But I can only stick with one. Which should I use, and how can I make it better? And don't mind the screwed up astrick on number 3. It doesn't normally look like that. xD

Mr yarbles
05-03-2008, 11:36 AM
Yeah Iw ear all that just for tagging I get really paranoid anymore

I like 4 the best milk just push the letters close together and 2's not that bad either, just keep practicing and it'll get alot better.

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 11:40 AM
Yeah Iw ear all that just for tagging I get really paranoid anymore

I like 4 the best milk just push the letters close together and 2's not that bad either, just keep practicing and it'll get alot better.Alright. Cool. Now to go practice some. Just came up with the name 15 minutes ago. EVERYTHING I came up with last night and earlier this morning was taken by a significantly famous writer. No matter how much I thought I was being original. But Aris isn't taken by anyone special. So I'll use it.

sickTwo
05-03-2008, 12:36 PM
aight heres my tag i write drip star
http://cbowen.totalh.com/files/tag.jpg
any feedback?

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 12:50 PM
yeah...
change your name.
drip star?
wtf?

sickTwo
05-03-2008, 12:55 PM
fine... how about like drip

sickTwo
05-03-2008, 01:02 PM
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8628/tagbtrux7.png
hows this sry for the awful image quality

tempest
05-03-2008, 01:15 PM
*sighs* drip star? seriously? ok first. get rid of the '!'. next get rid of the huge i dot, its ok 2 make a circle just not a huge one. then destroy the superswirl on the r and get rid of the asterix. str8ten up ur d(its rotated, making it smaller (and weirder(yes, this is a bracket within a bracket)) than the other letterz) like the other letters and dont leave the gaps between the bars.

Mr yarbles
05-03-2008, 02:08 PM
Re do everything, even the name.

C3ZR ONE
05-03-2008, 03:16 PM
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8628/tagbtrux7.png
hows this sry for the awful image quality

The D and the I are weak. The R isn't that bad, the P is too plain and drop the big circles abouve the I and below the exclamation. Big circles are more for girls handwriting than writers handstyles. The astrix isn't bad, but yo, just work over the whole alphabet really hard, then try to come up with a name.



**Here's a personal oppinion of mine. Take it for what it's worth.. If your handstyle would fit and fill a Hello sticker, or a lined piece of paper nicely, it probably doesn't have much flow or shape to it. Alot of dope tags look like they're trying to move or jump as opposed to a standard signature across a line.


yeah.

sarz
05-03-2008, 03:21 PM
Hey guys.. could i possibly get some crits?
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4801/photosmn5.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photosmn5.jpg)

maneframe
05-03-2008, 05:18 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC00536.jpg

jut rockin some backwards names: ENAM

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 06:48 PM
Sarz, don't overlap your S and A. And change your R...

Enam, that looks pretty dope. All I have to say is give your M some curves like a woman.

shiva - the destroyer
05-03-2008, 07:14 PM
Hey guys.. could i possibly get some crits?
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4801/photosmn5.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photosmn5.jpg)

maybe when you crit someone else first

krave
05-03-2008, 07:29 PM
sicktwo, DRIP is a common name, think of a good name that suits you and is also original


http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1704/kravenonstopdu5.jpg

-Panik-
05-03-2008, 08:08 PM
milky number 4 is my fav probly, just write that out a bunch then start to add some style
http://i27.tinypic.com/2ik4msn.jpg
crits? I'm losing/fixing the star, just ran outa paper so don't crit on that

krave
05-03-2008, 08:21 PM
bump


sicktwo, DRIP is a common name, think of a good name that suits you and is also original


http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1704/kravenonstopdu5.jpg

sarz
05-03-2008, 08:36 PM
thanks i'll try to come up with a new R..

and panick.. i like that .. the S especially.

MilkyCanvas
05-03-2008, 09:39 PM
Krave, I'll crit yours after someone else does the same. Don't ask why. =D

Panik, I couldn't really find anything wrong with your tag. I happen to like that star in the O. I've got nothing to say I guess except keep that up. I'm sure someone else will find fault in it though.

KiefOner
05-03-2008, 10:09 PM
crew name

crits?

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 10:39 PM
Before I butchered it with fake drips.
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/6887/orangeoutlinekb1.jpg


After:
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3716/orangedripslh0.jpg

ItsjustAride
05-04-2008, 12:21 AM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/9605/dsc01174wc8.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc01174wc8.jpg)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/1747/dsc01180tm2.th.jpg (http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc01180tm2.jpg)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/3535/dsc01183bv8.th.jpg (http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc01183bv8.jpg)

RobG
05-04-2008, 02:09 AM
eapie - weird name but i like the first one, just lose the random shit like dots and those slash marks, the underlines cool though. i like that style, its original

recon - you got a cool style goin but just try to keep the letters the same size and make it flow together more. not really feelin that r either

krave - i like the tag id just like to see it done a little cleaner and without the oner

esko - like it just try to get the k to flow more from the s, i have trouble with the k in my name too. and yeah, lose the random little add ons, except the underline, i think the stars aight there

heres a bunch of random shit i did tonight. first ones a weird style i just wanted to try, rest are phillys. i recently added an R to the end of my name so lemme know what you guys think, it says MASEKR now.

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0463.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0469.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0470.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0471.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0472.jpg

La Coka Nostra
05-04-2008, 02:36 AM
way too much going on in those hands.
not a fan of philly style.
well...unless you can pull it off good.

sarz
05-04-2008, 03:27 AM
MASEKR: i like the first style on there a lot, but probably a bit too complex for tagging with?

tempest
05-04-2008, 10:38 AM
Masekr: looks like sum1's been watching infamy ;). i like the third one the most. on the first one try to stop the e from eating the k so much. looks confusing. ther all nice tho

dcite
05-04-2008, 10:47 AM
milky number 4 is my fav probly, just write that out a bunch then start to add some style
http://i27.tinypic.com/2ik4msn.jpg
crits? I'm losing/fixing the star, just ran outa paper so don't crit on that

it looks terrible when the whole hand is underlined in my opinion

tempest
05-04-2008, 11:00 AM
it would look bettter if u pushed the underline up and got rid of the squiggly one

Oaklander
05-04-2008, 11:39 AM
That tag looks terrible in general, frankly.

tempest
05-04-2008, 12:04 PM
meh. its not tht bad imo. the k needs work nd so do the quotations. that scribble above the s is just uselessly toy. but its not terrible

ReHZoG
05-04-2008, 12:43 PM
Panik, ur tag looks nice,i just dont like the second line,my opinion,

Hey im looking for a good and simple G, Any suggestion?

RobG
05-04-2008, 01:03 PM
i havent watched the whole infamy vid yet im tryin to get it now, ENEM is so sick though ive been lookin at a lot of his shit

Mr yarbles
05-04-2008, 01:58 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/11ipz86.jpg

Crits?


Rob that philly style'll be dope it just needs a little work I just cant put my finger on it though

oakstr1
05-04-2008, 02:03 PM
http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0463.jpg

Rob.. shits nice. i would change the E. not sure how though.

tempest
05-04-2008, 02:59 PM
tesone: a lil crowded ther. let it breathe
RobG:i can email u th whole movie if u want. just pm me ur addy. its fuckin good. jase is crazy and saber makes u go omfg!

oakstr1
05-04-2008, 03:37 PM
tesone: a lil crowded ther. let it breathe
RobG:i can email u th whole movie if u want. just pm me ur addy. its fuckin good. jase is crazy and saber makes u go omfg!

what film? ive seen won with a guy name jase..is it the same one where there in the mtn factory or somethin. n he just bombs the fuck out of trains?

-Panik-
05-04-2008, 08:00 PM
Thanks for the crits guys, I dropped the top squiggle
and fixed the underlines and the side dots
got a new E
I'll get some flicks up soon
thanks again guys

MilkyCanvas
05-04-2008, 11:34 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01349.jpg
Screwed up on the exclamation mark. It's not supposed to look like that. But other than that....crits please?

RobG
05-05-2008, 02:04 AM
yo thanks for all the crits, helpin me out alot

ARIS - good style to your letters just try to tighten em up some. try to get the a and r to flow together better. likin that s too, steeezy

heres a few new ones i did tonight. theyre sloppy, no hand control tonight, but lemme know what you think anyway, says MASEKR

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0480.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0483.jpg

http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll111/trailslayer1/IMGP0484.jpg

six6six
05-05-2008, 02:10 AM
milky: i like it, nice and simple, but the 'I' is a little too simple. try to tweak it around a little bit. rob g covered the rest.

rob g: i hate you sir. you are skilled as fuck with those philly hands. tight shit man

crits on this? SPET:
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb290/raoulduke666/100_2098.jpg

Sheds
05-05-2008, 02:48 AM
milky: i like it, nice and simple, but the 'I' is a little too simple. try to tweak it around a little bit. rob g covered the rest.

rob g: i hate you sir. you are skilled as fuck with those philly hands. tight shit man

crits on this? SPET:
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb290/raoulduke666/100_2098.jpg




i'm really feelin the orange one on the right, the only letter im not liking is the T but I hate those so I can't say much. I like your letters though

maneframe
05-05-2008, 05:42 AM
^agreed, that orange is fresh. i like your S.

tempest
05-05-2008, 08:25 AM
what film? ive seen won with a guy name jase..is it the same one where there in the mtn factory or somethin. n he just bombs the fuck out of trains?

aye thts infamy.
SPET: hav a go at makin an uppercase t

Mr yarbles
05-05-2008, 05:27 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/sczvaa.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zzs177.jpg
Crew tag.
http://i28.tinypic.com/2rrxf6b.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/2hr2umh.jpg

crits?

maso1
05-05-2008, 05:38 PM
Milky Canvas: Looking pretty good maybe do something with the I
Rob G: Looks sweet
Sheds: Looks pretty sweet except maybe do something with the T, but looks good anyway

jersOneTIC
05-05-2008, 09:49 PM
using that krink...
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2686/dsc00220mx2.jpg

legittom
05-05-2008, 10:18 PM
http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x80/legittom/graffiti/PICT0038.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-05-2008, 10:18 PM
Damn that last e is fresh
So's the whole tag

Game Ova 07
05-05-2008, 10:48 PM
can anyone help me out with a wild type of handstyle...mine are wayyy to basik...ill post my regulars tommarow =D

Amore
05-06-2008, 01:06 AM
New tag. Crits welcome, will post more pics with it done in markers and maybe some throws.
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w288/colton308/2004Layton001.jpg

wafflecakee
05-06-2008, 01:33 AM
clean, but steeze it up a bit slowly!

MUSEone
05-06-2008, 06:10 AM
New tag. Crits welcome, will post more pics with it done in markers and maybe some throws.
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w288/colton308/2004Layton001.jpg
I konw people hate when others say this but, dont write Seize.

imo.

La Coka Nostra
05-06-2008, 12:24 PM
he can write seize if he wants.
seize ain't that big.
just on bombing science.
and bombing science means nothing.

MUSEone
05-06-2008, 01:14 PM
he can write seize if he wants.
seize ain't that big.
just on bombing science.
and bombing science means nothing.

^^^This is a prime example of wat i was talking about..

atlok7
05-06-2008, 01:17 PM
he can write seize if he wants.
seize ain't that big.
just on bombing science.
and bombing science means nothing.

its pretty big

La Coka Nostra
05-06-2008, 01:23 PM
dude...the internet is nothing.
who the fuck cares what some kid on bombingscience writes?
people sit at home and draw graff so they can go post it on the internet.
go fucking paint.
you know why old school graff is so good?
because people didn't have the internet, so they only learned from styles around them that they saw UP ON WALLS.
</rant>

*cept*
05-06-2008, 01:34 PM
dude...the internet is nothing.
who the fuck cares what some kid on bombingscience writes?
people sit at home and draw graff so they can go post it on the internet.
go fucking paint.
you know why old school graff is so good?
because people didn't have the internet, so they only learned from styles around them that they saw UP ON WALLS.
</rant> goes both ways man. because of the internet people have access to styles thousands of miles away. you can talk about technique with someone in germany or brazil right now if you wanted. 20 years ago all you had was your homies, shit gets stale like that.
graff nowadays is so diverse because of the melting pot the internet creates.
/no beef

La Coka Nostra
05-06-2008, 01:36 PM
oh, i wasnt trying to beef either.
and i'll agree. the internet has some advantages.
but it makes graffiti look way more glamorous.
there is kids on here who do nothing but draw and post pictures.
and that is all they will ever do.

...i was gonna say more, but those titties in your sig made me lose my train of thought.

*cept*
05-06-2008, 01:39 PM
oh, i wasnt trying to beef either.
and i'll agree. the internet has some advantages.
but it makes graffiti look way more glamorous.
there is kids on here who do nothing but draw and post pictures.
and that is all they will ever do.

...i was gonna say more, but those titties in your sig made me lose my train of thought.
true, but im sure there was blackbook bombers back in the day aswell.
its all relative.

haha im leaving to go paint my little chill spot right now.:D

Amore
05-06-2008, 05:53 PM
Didnt wanna start all that ^, but thanks for the crits.

Wallace
05-06-2008, 09:33 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9592/phone0010xz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/2337/phone0013qn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6136/phone0008ch8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kaze!
05-06-2008, 09:51 PM
Wallace- Do simples, and go easy on the drips.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0499.jpg

Trying my new marker. I got a bunch of others but this one is the cleanest.

Wallace
05-06-2008, 09:52 PM
yea personally i dont like that many drips but thats the first time trying out that paint

La Coka Nostra
05-06-2008, 10:14 PM
drips are bomb.
drip more.

Mr yarbles
05-06-2008, 10:30 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2pra8o9.jpg

Ony my desk at home crits?

and there's no such thing as too many drips.

Aner there's something about the r I jsut don't like other than that it's nice

kaze!
05-06-2008, 10:37 PM
*weird double post*

RezOner..
05-06-2008, 10:44 PM
aner- make the round part on the r less oval and more round, if that makes sense. flows good, besides the e.
yarbles- theres too much going on man. try to space out your word more, and not do that thing with your t, first glance it looks like a cactus or some shit.

*cept*
05-06-2008, 10:47 PM
Wallace- Do simples, and go easy on the drips.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/SP_A0499.jpg

Trying my new marker. I got a bunch of others but this one is the cleanest.
lovin that. and werd on the drips imo. takes away from the letters

SAID
05-07-2008, 06:48 AM
loose that loop at the end of your R.

aesopjux
05-07-2008, 09:57 PM
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=1zzl7qa&s=3

My first time posting. I'm not even sure if this will show up...

Havent been writing for that long
Crits if it shows up?

aesopjux
05-07-2008, 09:58 PM
<a href="http://tinypic.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i25.tinypic.com/1zzl7qa.jpg" border="0" alt="Image and video hosting by TinyPic"></a>

maybe this wil work..

$1LENCR
05-07-2008, 10:00 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9592/phone0010xz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/2337/phone0013qn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6136/phone0008ch8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yo u gotta check yo shit.
do sumthin different.

mash-up
05-07-2008, 10:01 PM
yo wassup

mash-up
05-07-2008, 10:04 PM
wat do u guys write

GHOST_307
05-07-2008, 10:04 PM
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn193/GHOST_307/l_e6a401a31f014745f892a39baff4dcdc.jpg


http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn193/GHOST_307/l_36b9899f1cd00a17327d924f5fa8efc1.jpg

mash-up
05-07-2008, 10:04 PM
yo thats good

mash-up
05-07-2008, 10:05 PM
casper u go to westmount eh

mash-up
05-07-2008, 10:06 PM
?

Wallace
05-07-2008, 10:08 PM
chill on the posting mash

kaze!- other than the loop i really like it, simple but affective
Mr yarbles- i read Tesae, and i dont think thats what it is =/
$1LENCR - thanks for the amazing advice

trying something different, crits are very appreciated.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/4345/imgxu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aesopjux
05-07-2008, 10:20 PM
I like it. I duno why but sumthing bout the "i" is buggin me.
Pretty good though

La Coka Nostra
05-07-2008, 10:24 PM
s is not good.
make room for the i