Tags

[white]

<<nice wafflecake

erm if any1 cud say summin constructive about this shit i wud be more than happy:
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c283/evilharlequin_/DSCF2472-1.jpg
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c283/evilharlequin_/tag-1.jpg

i like the choice of name, kind of simple like mine, the bottom of your letters, the way they flow is fresh

[JETPACK!!]

some quickies while walkin the mutt

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9329/tagav1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5955/tag2qv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

harley, that looks good. you should take the arrow off the tail of your Y. and your H is covering up a bit too much of your A.

[Los]

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1830/scan0010jn9.jpg
Crits please

[Mr yarbles]

crits?
http://i27.tinypic.com/20j4woy.jpg
New e
I know I fucked up the t

rasek It's pretty dope everything flows nice the r just looks kinda wavy?

harleys it looks good but the s kinda looks like an arrow

[Dresden]

Critique Please.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/hellkat/IMG_0907.jpg

[shiva - the destroyer]

make the E bigger to start with
and use single lines, so don't do that square between the R and the S so every line has the same thickness

[JETPACK!!]

some quickies while walkin the mutt

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9329/tagav1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5955/tag2qv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

harley, that looks good. you should take the arrow off the tail of your Y. and your H is covering up a bit too much of your A.

bump for crits. dresden, keep your letters on a line. dont throw em all over the place. it looks ugly

[SAID]

try and add some sort of flow to it, or a lean or bend of some sort.
i'd also lose the big quotation marks.

[pepe.teh.prawn]

need help deciding which tag outta these three, they are all real different [no shit] i can add quotations and shine and all the bitz, just need help on which basic one.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=26&pictureid=98

[harley.]

i lyk the top right 1

[harley.]

crits?
http://i27.tinypic.com/20j4woy.jpg
New e
I know I fucked up the t

rasek It's pretty dope everything flows nice the r just looks kinda wavy?

harleys it looks good but the s kinda looks like an arrow
thats cuz it is an arrow u donut

urs is pretty sik, im feeling the t and ur Es specially
the fing thts between the s and the e at the end looks kind of weird tho

[Jesta]

http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee251/jemmison/SP_A0050.jpg

crits?

[Sive]

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1164/dsc08405rg7.jpg

[Sive]

can anyone gimme some tips?

[RezOner..]

nooooooo jet did you change your word? i liked reign:(

[RezOner..]

sive arrows are good in small doses, not in everypossible place

[Cin123]

loose all those arrows

[SAID]

and quotation marks.

[~Star~]

last night.
fucked up on the m and the e.
fuck it.

crits?

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9412.jpg

no offence, im a toy to, but thats a pretty hurten handstle, the only letter i like a bit is the A, the arrow isnt really flowing with the tag... keep working,

[StAtiK1]

sive - forget u ever wrote that tag and start again with simple letters, and keep writing your name until you get something you like

[*cept*]

try and add some sort of flow to it, or a lean or bend of some sort.
i'd also lose the big quotation marks.
id have to disagree, i think his flow is all up/down and i think it looks sick. and i am a sucker for quotes. whatever though, to each, their own.
that some junobo jet? looks watery

[*cept*]

Critique Please.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/hellkat/IMG_0907.jpg

not a tag.
write you graff name like you write your name in school.
post it up.
we'll then progress from there.

[Los]

Dresden- Use single lines and fix the Second E (Take out the box)

Sive- Lose the all the arrows.

[H3TT1NG3R]

^...wtf is that o

[jerm_haf]

Sive- start over!
Los- simple, but not a lot of flow. work on making it stand out

[Los]

I was trying out new O's
I know its shiit.

[jerm_haf]

to be honest, it looks like a lower "e"

[Juicee]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/invert.jpg
crits?

Jesta: u got sum madd flow the under line kinda bugs me tho, its too short i think
Rasek: shyts hot, maybe add some underlines or something on the top
pepe: the bottom one seems like it has alot of flow n it looks tight. or at least it looks better thann the other ones
sive: lose the arrows and im not really feelin ur "S"

[Juicee]

http://www.dafont.com/rufa.font

took a big ol' byte of this, huh Los?

[Sive]

Ok so everyone told me to lose the arrows and al this shit and i tried it out and it look so empty so i started scribling and came up wit a new tag so i wanna know which one i should have. Also is it possible to have two tagz?cuz dat would be sweet. i mean i kinda wanna keep sive cuz i have already started writing it and im already know by it . i dont know, i need ya help guys i would really appreciate it.

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/3696/dsc08415hc7.jpg

[Sive]

wTF?!? why so fuckn huge?! how do i resize it?

[Mr yarbles]

hah I was walkigna round the park when I saw this
It's like the first tag I ever did, holy hell I sucked.
http://i30.tinypic.com/nvabft.jpg
NO CRITS ON THIS. I realize it sucks.

http://i26.tinypic.com/2crslqo.jpg
Crits?

Emi Resize that shit
The first tag looks nice but it still needs alot of work
Make the i as big as the other letters if possible and lose the dot above the m

Sober
Shit looks fresh I usually don't like arrows but you did it right

[noxi]

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6733/claiml6.jpg

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9972/blahgl9.jpg

Crits please? I need help on my "t" and "a".

[RezOner..]

lolz i love how everyone bites propers inverting the colors style.
tes lose the loop on the t. lookin good.

[Sive]

Yarbles youve improved heaps! how long did it take you too develop ur tag?

juicee ur tag looks nice. how did you get dat colour?! is it photoshoped?

[Mr yarbles]

7-8 months and there's still alot that I could improve on
I really wana learn philly handstyles but I don't know where to start
:/

Everything's going to look completely terrible in the begging you just gotta keep looking at what you can improve on.

[AdRe*]

New Here
This is a quick tag with a homemade mop from a bingo marker
tell me what y'all think
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1180.jpg

[Oner]

http://i30.tinypic.com/2qkjiok.jpg

Hey i'm kinda new to graffing, couple of months but yeah.

I was wondering what people those of these, and what one they prefer and what one i could work on, i prefer the one with the funky S because it adds a bit of style.

any suggestions/feedback?

[Sive]

ceks ur getting the idea but improve letters ;)

[pepe.teh.prawn]

yer but the bottom one looks kickass with a chisel tip, tomorro ill get the cam out and take a pic.

[Duppy]

New Here
This is a quick tag with a homemade mop from a bingo marker
tell me what y'all think
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1180.jpg

Bit drippy?

[pepe.teh.prawn]

ceks, im liking the second one, thats like the basic melb tag style.

okay, this is one of my styles but with a chisel tip... need crits

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=26&pictureid=99

[DECO ONE]

CRITZ...which is best?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000118.jpg

[AdRe*]

Haha yeah a "bit"
don't like using that one
no drip control

[Mr yarbles]

http://i29.tinypic.com/aa9lav.jpg
Added an r

Resin the second one is the best I think just lose the dot above the e

Septa it's nice but try to make the letters less edgy

[noxi]

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6733/claiml6.jpg

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9972/blahgl9.jpg

Crits please? I need help on my "t" and "a".

BUMP.

[Keke]

heres somthing i came up with for a new name
saem, i like the a and e but i didlike the s and m (heh) , and i dislike the lines on the m

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=266&i=img0252yx1.jpg)

[Mr yarbles]

Sorry so many posts I jsut think this one looks better:
http://i27.tinypic.com/vhrrl5.jpg

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

heres somthing i came up with for a new name
saem, i like the a and e but i didlike the s and m (heh) , and i dislike the lines on the m

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=266&i=img0252yx1.jpg)



looks nice ..i like it for some reason...but i say dont make the two ends of the S connect...to look like a 8

[Keke]

thanks, i tried shortening the s ends it looks alot better :-) thanks

[smikoer]

Mr Yarbles; I think your N looks better when it sits to the right of the O as opposed to on top of it.

[Kinzone]

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2526/0520082016ars3.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0520082016ars3.jpg)

crits needed badly. get at me

[RHODE]

http://209.61.242.212/rhode.JPG

http://209.61.242.212/rhode2.JPG

http://209.61.242.212/rhode3.JPG

RHODE tagz. Let me know what you think.

401 | REJ | The Only Reason To Get Off The Fucking Couch

[noxi]

heres somthing i came up with for a new name
saem, i like the a and e but i didlike the s and m (heh) , and i dislike the lines on the m

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=266&i=img0252yx1.jpg)

what marker are you using?

[SiC-22]

Hey guys, im pretty much coming out of nowhere..but ive been sketching up some tags.
Lately I have been trying to get rid of my "dead space"

http://i25.tinypic.com/33peddy.jpg

http://i31.tinypic.com/adhuhj.jpg
Crits would be great.

[ENOC]

recent work.
changing it up a bit.
still a work in progress.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9501.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9502.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9503.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9504.jpg

[pepe.teh.prawn]

recent work.
changing it up a bit.
still a work in progress.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9501.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9502.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9503.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9504.jpg

dude, LK is an actual gang (in melbourne anyway) but in america i dont know, i think it might be latin kings, thats what it is here anyway, as for crits that tag is alrite but you need to tighten it up a little make the letters a little closer and (this is just my opinion) but add like some presence, like shine or a halo?. either than that man its pretty sweet

[Bets369R]

these arent my name, but exchanges ive done for other people
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/seizegism.gif
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/docter.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1156.jpg

[pepe.teh.prawn]

these arent my name, but exchanges ive done for other people
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/seizegism.gif
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/docter.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG_1156.jpg

nice work, i like the last one best, with the chisel tip ;)

[pepe.teh.prawn]

hey all, just wanted feed back on my tag is all

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=26&pictureid=99

[Oner]

Hey Pepe, loving your tag man!

[noxi]

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6733/claiml6.jpg

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9972/blahgl9.jpg

Crits please? I need help on my "t" and "a".

bump.

[RezOner..]

fuck dude dont triple bump yourself. vame, nice, your getting better. lol at the double tag.

[AdRe*]

CRITZ...which is best?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000118.jpg

I like the second one

[SiC-22]

Here is some newer stuff ive been doing.

http://i27.tinypic.com/24q4c2q.jpg
I use trap for tags because i like the way it flows when im writing it.

http://i26.tinypic.com/2hhzu48.jpg

They are toy, but I think if i practice i'll get better.

Tips would be awesome on how i could improve it.

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1211-1.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1210-1.jpg
Some differ style tags Im using

[Cin123]

this is 4 everyone if u start graaff dont go staright 2 arrows cuz wen ur toy they look wack so stop now!

[RezOner..]

and no qoutes. nobody says your name till your good.

[AdRe*]

wow hurtful but
makes lotz of sense
thanks for that

[IlikePie]

:( This makes me sad....

[ENOC]

dude, LK is an actual gang (in melbourne anyway) but in america i dont know, i think it might be latin kings, thats what it is here anyway, as for crits that tag is alrite but you need to tighten it up a little make the letters a little closer and (this is just my opinion) but add like some presence, like shine or a halo?. either than that man its pretty sweet


yeah i know.. but LK in my city is just some little no name crew LEATHER KINGS. and yeah i think its Latin Kings here in america. normaly i rep my other crew SNDK 44. and yeah ill throw a halo or a shine.. ill play around with it some more. thanks..

[renegade185]

sic-get rid of all the arrows, and add ons. start wit simple letters
adre-fix the a in the first one, and space those letters out in the second one
deco- the first and second one are the best
noxi-try messin around with all uppercase. just play around with the letters some. you'll find somethin that works

havn't posted any of my shit in a while, but this is basically what im workin with now.

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l303/Renegade185/101_0569.jpg

[Cin123]

:( This makes me sad....

is that 2 me? lol

[RezOner..]

just to the overall lack of talent.

[Hot_Pocket]

^Exactly that, if I could find my damn camera, then I'd post something, but.... I think I've lost it again :(

[Cin123]

Lol

[Kinzone]

Hey guys, im pretty much coming out of nowhere..but ive been sketching up some tags.
Lately I have been trying to get rid of my "dead space"

http://i25.tinypic.com/33peddy.jpg

http://i31.tinypic.com/adhuhj.jpg
Crits would be great.

i think your s is mad sloppy. everything else just needs to be cleaner. try making it lil simpler and not trying to add to much flair. . i think the name is pretty ill even though i know a couple kids who have it

[Keke]

me and my friends were driving and we saw this guy gas, whos been buffing me all around so we buffed him , so many people looking its kinda sloppy
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1526/img0260wl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1526/img0260wl7.2a19ccf53c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=179&i=img0260wl7.jpg)

ans this was on a box, i dont know why it looks like it gets bigger and bigger, it might have been pic angle because i just looked and it looks alright
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/9828/img0263rv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/9828/img0263rv3.c761f269c5.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=179&i=img0263rv3.jpg)

[Los]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6217/scan0014bn6.jpg
Just simple..

Sic-Take away arrow at bottom. And other arrows in above tag (traps)
Adre- Not much flow.

[RezOner..]

keke we call that getting crossed. welcome to the world of graffiti
los, inverting your colors doesnt make you proper. go with the first one, that has nice flow, and a better s. try to keep it so that your s doesnt connect with itself. (on the second one)

[Los]

I only inverted cause i used a highlighter.
I know the second one sucks.

[noxi]

fuck dude dont triple bump yourself. vame, nice, your getting better. lol at the double tag.

Well, no one is giving me any comments on my tag.

And thanks renegade. I still need help on my "t" though.

[SiC-22]

Alright, thanks guys.

Hm, think should i try a different r in them?

Do you mean more simple letters like this?
http://i25.tinypic.com/mhdk7m.jpg

http://i29.tinypic.com/iyzj9l.jpg

[renegade185]

the letters dont flow. start wit regular old letters, like you learn when your little.

[Mr yarbles]

Tesoner
http://i30.tinypic.com/2py10uf.jpg
One for my friend
Emak
http://i28.tinypic.com/30s9dnb.jpg

Crits on either

Trap
Simple
You're trying to makje your letters all great but they're not going to look good till you go back to simples.

Los
Looking good first one especially

Hazmat
I'm liking that alot

[pepe.teh.prawn]

I like the second one

i like the second one best also

[letsgobombin]

yarb-make all your letters the same size, especially your o, same with the emak, i thought it was cmak with a dodgy add on

trap- write like this ,TRAP, then you can experiment
sic- you'll change your name eventually, you might not know why yet but you will and stay simple
is it just me or are loads of toys just posting pics asking for crits then not giving them?
its like their the kind of writers that show all their mates their wack tag and they dont know what looks good and they're like 'wow,you've got a sick tag, you've got to go spray it'. not a rant, just an observation

[SiC-22]

Thanks for the advice man.
And i finally get what you guys are saying by writing with simple letters and then trying stuff out after that.

[*cept*]

Alright, thanks guys.

Hm, think should i try a different r in them?

Do you mean more simple letters like this?
http://i25.tinypic.com/mhdk7m.jpg

http://i29.tinypic.com/iyzj9l.jpg
copy this-> TRAP

exactly how its shown, dont put any flair on it or anything.

[SiC-22]

When do i start adding stuff to it then?

[*cept*]

When do i start adding stuff to it then? not for a while. after writing it just regular, you'll begin to develop your own things... lurk around here a little more. you'll see that a clean nice tag is much more respected than a fuxored one like your rockin now.

[SiC-22]

not for a while. after writing it just regular, you'll begin to develop your own things... lurk around here a little more. you'll see that a clean nice tag is much more respected than a fuxored one like your rockin now.

Alright thanks man..Im pretty new to doing tags.
pretty much all before ive been sketching throw ups

[*cept*]

Alright thanks man..Im pretty new to doing tags.
pretty much all before ive been sketching throw ups word, no worries. heres a good example

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=266&i=img0252yx1.jpg)[/QUOTE]

see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag.
and please dont hit the streets for a while.
keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick.

heres another good example for ya
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg

[SiC-22]

word, no worries. heres a good example

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=266&i=img0252yx1.jpg)

see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag.
and please dont hit the streets for a while.
keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick.

heres another good example for ya
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg[/QUOTE]




Oh, okay..yeah i guess after looking over mine its pretty much a bunch of shit that doesnt go together.
thanks though

[*cept*]

see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag.
and please dont hit the streets for a while.
keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick.

heres another good example for ya
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg




Oh, okay..yeah i guess after looking over mine its pretty much a bunch of shit that doesnt go together.
thanks though[/QUOTE]
no worries man. keep postin up your new shit. and dont take crits too hard.:D

[SiC-22]

Yarbles- The Emak I like. I think it would look cooler with a different E maybe?

Is this more simple?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2mdpj74.jpg
Should i keep working with stuff like this and move on from here?

[*cept*]

Yarbles- The Emak I like. I think it would look cooler with a different E maybe?

Is this more simple?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2mdpj74.jpg
Should i keep working with stuff like this and move on from here?
fuck yeah, absolutely. move the p back just a little, and make the loop of the P and R look the same. and keep praticing with that to make it even smoother

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1212-1.jpg
Okay I've took some of your suggestions
and I've been seriously working on my tag
and here is one of my recent one
not satisfied yet but just need some crit
to find out how I can improve it

[Los]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1212-1.jpg
Okay I've took some of your suggestions
and I've been seriously working on my tag
and here is one of my recent one
not satisfied yet but just need some crit
to find out how I can improve it

Your A looks a bit messed up :S
Try and close it?

[*cept*]

Your A looks a bit messed up :S
Try and close it?
and make it a bit smaller

[Kinzone]

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2526/0520082016ars3.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0520082016ars3.jpg)

crits needed badly. get at me

bump

and i gave a crit so dont hate

[kinglerxst]

ok honest/constructive critisism (dont just say YOU SUCK) how could i improve it

it says LOKI

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00635.jpg

[kinglerxst]

P.S. now i took away the halo, it is much cleaner and I added 3 vertical lines in the deadspace after the I

[theorist]

crits anyone?

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n315/thomas_060/Picture001-2.jpg

[ENOC]

LOKI- theres too much going on for me.
take the dots after the I off.
a floor tag from the other day.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9510.jpg

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

VAME shit it could be better but ur still gettin up

[kinglerxst]

but im trying to get everything really tight and busy, should I go for just simple alphabet like writing? Cuz LOKI is really hard to fit together any other way. maybe someone else could ACTUALLY DRAW LOKI FOR ME TO SHOW ME WHAT I COULD DO

[ENOC]

Crieg- yeah thats one of my shitty floor tags i hardly ever do them anyways.. i think my other work is better. usually ill use my streak, or my mop. i dont go a single day without getting at least one tag.

[kinglerxst]

EEEEWWWW!!!! I just burped and PUKED!!!

[theorist]

crits anyone?

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n315/thomas_060/Picture001-2.jpg

bump new page

[kinglerxst]

nasty

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

yeah enoc i get up every day to but with a damn sharpie in school i need a mop but when i make 1 it sucks and im might just buy 1 on here and get some grog ink

[-Panik-]

http://i28.tinypic.com/1zdy8m0.jpg

I dunno just messing around with shading and stuff, how are you guys liking the new tag

[kinglerxst]

I bought a KRINK mp and the 4th bloody time i used it THE MOLE HAIR NIB THINGY PEELED RIGHT OUT

[kinglerxst]

HALP ME tell me how to improve (ive taken off the halo and the dots and the qutes, added three vertical lines where the dead space at the end of the I is


PM me if your live in the GTA

[ENOC]

creig- mops are easy to make. get a kiwi shoe polish thing..
empty it. clean it completely out. put some paint in it. i just use house
paint. and add some dot 3 brake fluid. i use about 3 - 4 cap fulls. and dont fill it to the top. cause itll all end up coming out of the nib. if you do. put your nib back in. cap it. shake it up really good. and go fuck shit up.. and you should invest in a streak. they work good when it comes to tagging. gotta love em.

[ENOC]

LOKI- post a flick of what you have so far. without the halo the dots and what not..

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

iight cool yeah i new how to make them but like i didnt no what paint to use but my friend let me use his mop at school and damn that waz like 2 mounths ago and they still cant get that shit out cuz i used grog i love it but ill make 1 tonight prob

[kinglerxst]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00635.jpg

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00635.jpg

[kinglerxst]

I dont have one, just use your IMAGINATION

[ENOC]

hahah fosho.. its mostly trial and error. i've found a bunch of other random shit that i can use around my town to make a mop. my very first mop was made from a body fragrance spray bottle. with some whiteboard eraser used as the nib. i made it entirely by accident. so just mess around with some stuff that looks like it could work.

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

lol cool shit but dude imma go out tonight and bomb with paint

[kinglerxst]

ok... im posting a link

[kinglerxst]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00723.jpg
read it

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00721.jpg
my bbook

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00720.jpg
a crap hmemade sticker, i have sh** markers

[ENOC]

dope crieg.. make sure to get flicks.
and loki- i did your shit on paper as to how i would do it..
im uploading them right now.

[kinglerxst]

cool thx

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

iight i will and ill send them to u,u got myspace?

[kinglerxst]

I love it when someone on bombsci isnt a totall dick

[Panda Jerk]

lol cool shit but dude imma go out tonight and bomb with paint

i dont like you u act like uve been here forever

and i didnt know you could bomb with paint how odd

[kinglerxst]

how about e-mail

[kinglerxst]

oh sorry wrong guy

[ENOC]

lol yeah creig here.. http://www.myspace.com/danny_zuko

[ENOC]

LOKI-the first things that came into my head.


http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9513.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9514.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9512.jpg

[kinglerxst]

hye ENOC can you PM me when you upload em' i gotta get off now

[kinglerxst]

NVM nice! I like the first one because its simplistic

[kinglerxst]

Ill upload my new ideas tomarrow or PM u ENOC tell me what you think

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

ok i just added u ok ig2g later

[-Panik-]

Loki, diggin every bit but the K
haha
just personal prefference
http://i28.tinypic.com/1zdy8m0.jpg
crits on this?

[SiKkZeM]

http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o252/SiKk240/zem.jpg

here's mines .. around my school's evaluator's

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

dank shit zem props

[ENOC]

Panik.. looks sickk.. i like it.. you should get a streak for that. but make a dual color streak. shit would look sick..

ZEM.. i like it. sick drippy.. lol what ink do you use?

[kinglerxst]

yah I know I suck at Ks like it panik stay up where should i use my silver krink mop

[ENOC]

Loki- just practice the K. just seriously start simple. on it..like go crazy on a paper with K's lol. and start to change it a little and add stuff. you know??
as for your mop, crush anything with your silver krink mop.. just hit anything semi smooth.

[La Coka Nostra]

its like a toy store in here.

[SiKkZeM]

lol.. thanks guys the ink i was using is the one in the ink recipe here that's "sticky"
90 pens 80black and 10blue. cup of rubbing alcohol..let it sit overnight.. and did this today during school.. i just got into the game so lets see whats up..

i stay down south. miami.. anyone?

[ENOC]

lol.. thanks guys the ink i was using is the one in the ink recipe here that's "sticky"
90 pens 80black and 10blue. cup of rubbing alcohol..let it sit overnight.. and did this today during school.. i just got into the game so lets see whats up..

i stay down south. miami.. anyone?


hmmm nicee. ill have to try that one.
i read it a while ago.. never got around to doing it..
looks like it comes out pretty good. Stay up!

[SiKkZeM]

Its dopee just mad messy to fuk with.

[inchture]

can i got tagging even thogu my tags is quite bad or wait until i have a better one

[itsbrooklynbitch]

http://i26.tinypic.com/34zdjy8.jpg

havent been on here in a few months because... um... i sucked really bad before. been workin hard, crits???

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1214.jpg
Here you go trying a uppercase A and added a halo
I dunno kinda dont like the using a differ a but I gotz to admit to myself it looks a lil better
what do you guys think?


Glow- I like it alot except not diggin the double lines at the bottom
Panik - Nice style get rid of the quotes and the three lines at top of the halo
Zem - Sick Drip ur Z is kinda fat

[kinglerxst]

Ive got a new name, do you like my new name "ZERG" (starcraft)

or should I just screw with K's (Do you like how it flips around inside the I or not?)

ZERG TAG\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ [PS I can make it cleaner, this is with crap markers]
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00725.jpg

[kinglerxst]

ill be back on on sunday

[SiKkZeM]

yea it was my first time using a Mop. so i sqeezed it too much.. lol but sikk Dripz.

[$1LENCR]

Adre- feelin the tag, just not the A.

zerg- not feelin the E. work on it a lil more.
and wait till u get the tag down.
then add all the other shit.
e.g. quotation marks, halos, etc.

[$1LENCR]

its like a toy store in here.

NO FUCKING SHIT.
I THINK YER LOST.

[-Panik-]

Nice double post champ;)
Zerg it doesn't really seem to flow at all, try and do all your lines in one streak


http://i28.tinypic.com/1zdy8m0.jpg
crits on this?

bump? not many crits

[Mr yarbles]

http://i30.tinypic.com/24bvpy0.jpg

Adre
I like it just not the e.

Glow
It's nice
But why's it sideways?

[letsgobombin]

tes- try it with the o the same size then post it
esko- take off all the add-ons, the dot in the o and you've got a not too bad starting tag to develop
zerg- keep it simple for now,just like ZERG or zerg
adre- take off the add-ons, take away that line that goes through the d and make it all the same style the a is squarish and nothing else is
glow- you're keeping it simple now put them close together

[unreal180]

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/faker279/DSCN1159.jpg
helpful critz?

[SiKkZeM]

my school is going nuts trying to find out who is this little fucker.. ;)
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o252/SiKk240/zemsmily.jpg
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o252/SiKk240/zemblue.jpg


critz?

[Liquid Soul]

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/8725/dscf2062cf5.jpg

[SiKkZeM]

thats dope... make a shirt..

[unreal180]

zem wot marker did u use?

[SiKkZeM]

home made mop... i made with the sticky ink recipe (pen ink)..

[unreal180]

nice
im 2 lazy to make my own ink but ma mate makes it so its all good
try giving ur handy somedetail around the edges

[SiKkZeM]

lol.. yea im ma start writing Zem alot nicer then just a plain ZEM.

[unreal180]

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/faker279/DSCN1159.jpg
helpful critz?

bump

[harley.]

<<nice wafflecake

erm if any1 cud say summin constructive about this shit i wud be more than happy:
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c283/evilharlequin_/DSCF2472-1.jpg
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c283/evilharlequin_/tag-1.jpg

bumpitty bump
oh heres another 1
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c283/evilharlequin_/alttag.jpg

[sKetCh_0092]

harley i think the first two lot pretty good i like the "H" and "R" but i don't really like the buttom one though its just me

[$1LENCR]

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/faker279/DSCN1159.jpg
helpful critz?

bump

what's it say?
and did u put it on paper?
cuz them drips look FAKE.
but work on it tho.
it looks decent.

[Liquid Soul]

Fake drips man, not a good look tbh mate.

[reb]

Idont like the whole fake drips thing, or the huge extension on the R

[atlok7]

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/3751/75901726ct6.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/9093/78784369dd4.jpg
http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/3016/64732564qc4.jpg
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6545/23365491op3.jpg
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9851/42760435jd7.jpg
just a few flix from today

[Mr yarbles]

http://i28.tinypic.com/10wocjs.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/f0bsls.jpg
Crits?

I found this today too, pretty terrible.
http://i25.tinypic.com/33f7ybo.jpg
No crits on this.

Atlok
That shit sick nice stlye

faker go simple the fake drips looks like shit and that r extension is wierd
The f is kinda fucked up too.

[miss-mass]

This is where i'm at as of now. Can any of you give me some suggestions?

[intaout]

miss-mass
Junior Member
yes, make your letters a word not just symbol/lines things. take out everything extra for now, all you need is letters; read new to graff

[Duppy]

This is where i'm at as of now. Can any of you give me some suggestions?

Go even simpler then change the way you are putting your own style in, because you clearly need to change that, don't rush things either go slowly... You'l get there just keep at it.

[miss-mass]

Alright thanks guys.

[Bazer]

mass. you and alot of people including me when they first start out make tags that look like logos. lol. just make some normal letters. then gooutside with a marker, then hit random shit up, boxes, doors etc. and youll start getting a motion that you like. eventually youll start thinkin more about it and your letter will change. i used to come up with a handstyle and then a few days later when i would drive by it i'd be like "oh shit ima do my A like this next time"

get a dry erase board....

[miss-mass]

Thanks a lot man.

[bowchicabowow]

caiser - sweet and simple, keep it up.

[kinglerxst]

Hey, ive got pics of ZERG ive been drawin up this weekend

[1]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00726.jpg
CRIT?
[2]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00727.jpg
the orange and yellow one is "PIXELLY" CRIT
[3]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00728.jpg
CRIT
[4]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00729.jpg
My favorite
[5]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00730.jpg
CRIT
[6]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00731.jpg
Funny
[7]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm45/loki2759/DSC00732.jpg
2nd favourite

[kinglerxst]

sorry, theyre not tags.... but tell what you think? whats your favourite?

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

yeah really no drips

[Crieg ya ya DIG]

no fake dips i mean

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1219.jpg
still working on it but I really feel like my flow is getting better
critique please what else should I work on?

[H3TT1NG3R]

^ adre?doin good so farrr. just work on ur r sttuff, teh a next to 3 lokks good

[Mr yarbles]

Take th d r and e from one and put it with the a in four

[Mr yarbles]

http://i30.tinypic.com/30vbsj8.jpg
Testin out some ghetto junobo
Crits?

[AdRe*]

thanx allot guys
damn that junobo is nice
I got the same exact one if thats orange thats the one
you have to squeeze it while you write but if you dont its gonna look like shit
yours looks really nice thought props on that shit
cant wait to see how it looks on the streets

[my.favorite.addiction]

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0013.jpg

sponsored by Kiwi shoe shine mutha fuckas!!

this ones in chalk an comes with a throw an a hiena..

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0020-1.jpg

me an Domo'z MPR..

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0026.jpg

[unreal180]

what's it say?
and did u put it on paper?
cuz them drips look FAKE.
but work on it tho.
it looks decent.

it says faker
its on a toilet door
them drips aint fake it wa dun with a krink
i dunno why it driped like that

[unreal180]

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/faker279/DSCN1159.jpg

bumpo
it was done on a door and they aint fake drips i dunno you they went like that
helpful critz

[Kruxos]

man u already got crits. loose that shitty underline

[Wallace]

has anyone ever wrote just "oner", nothing else?

[fonone]

some shit faggot around my area has. hes a shit faggot, believe it or not.

[$1LENCR]

atlok- marker?
zerg- nice throwies, just not feelin the quotes haha.
work on your "pixely" one. it's good, but not feelin the arrows or work on them or something.
overall, pretty good tho.

[kinglerxst]

thanks mate! Im not using qutes now and I need to do the pixel one with a ruler and outline it alot thicker

[Kans]

sorry its small2389 yh i know its pretty toy so can someone help me to improve?

[NoCanControl]

sorry its small2389 yh i know its pretty toy so can someone help me to improve?

rawr someone with my name! hahah, jk jk, idc, but you should work on legability.

[Soboe!]

fuckin around on the computer

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/saroehandi.jpg

[sacwacko]

i like i like.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/5.jpg

[smikoer]

ASPEK: nice name, nice lettering. work on the underline and left quote

[Cin123]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1219.jpg
still working on it but I really feel like my flow is getting better
critique please what else should I work on?

theres someone in tdot that is madd up and dope that writes adore ur gettin a lil 2 close i think

[AdRe*]

damn I dont even know that cat
He probably is dope but havent heard of him
how bout this is this still too close?
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/05-28-08_2320.jpg

[Soboe!]

theres someone in tdot that is madd up and dope that writes adore ur gettin a lil 2 close i think

adores my buddy, hes originaly from winnipeg, which he was up crazy. then he moved to toronto

[bbuba]

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3859/dscn1862dn9.jpg

[bbuba]

sry bout size tlk later tired now

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/05-28-08_2320.jpg
Bump
Crits please am I on the right track?

[Soboe!]

dont bump your shit on the same page which is 3 fuckin posts up

and no your not. dont do one liners yet. your not good enough yet

bbuba Resize that shit!! NOW!!
and also dont write sane or fazr. Sane was a legendary writer who died. and now JA one the worlds most up bomber continues his name. and there a dope Fezr on here who wouldnt be please your name has ONE different letter.
and if your gunna be a cocky little ignorant bitch and talk back to me i rather battle :)

[fonone]

what is with you calling every new person out to battle as if to prove yourself to the bombing science community, the guy hasnt even responded yet and your getting all uppity, give it a break.

[jerm_haf]

Adre- its getting there. I liked your lower "a" more than the one you used in that pic
bbuba-try again. dont make your tag bubble letters. you want something quick and flowing. that bubble sketch dosent look good at all and your "a" looks like a "j"

[Soboe!]

what is with you calling every new person out to battle as if to prove yourself to the bombing science community, the guy hasnt even responded yet and your getting all uppity, give it a break.

no no irekn, i said if he feels the need to bitch back ill battle him instead of beefin. see:p
i got nothing against the dude but if he ended up gettin cocky with me i wouldnt talk shit back id just say ok battle time :D

[bbuba]

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/5356/dscn1864zt0.jpgsry for writing sane andi joined a year ago and have been writing FAZR since before then and no one has said anything now does anybody have anything against ASTER

[jerm_haf]

i could give a shit about what you write but write it well.

[Fame.]

ShOne:

http://www.picresize.com/legacy/images/rsz_1Picture%20002.jpg

opinions pleeease

[AdRe*]

then what do you suggest I do then
since Im not good enough yet!?
Im still working on it Im not claiming Im the shit just need some critique
so the whole Im not good yet didnt have to be said I know that shit
Im a F**KIN TOY!!!!! I KNOW SO DONT TELL ME THAT SHIT!!!
excuse me for my language ppl

[Mr yarbles]

Don't write sane
He's a legend

Anyways
adre
I think he ment your getting too close to his name?
I like it but the loop on the a is a little big

[AdRe*]

yeah maybe I was just sayin
everybody in here knows that
don't come here trying to be all hardcore
c'mon man I respect you but I dont fear you

Yeah that loop is a lil exaggerated

[Mr yarbles]

http://i28.tinypic.com/20k39qe.jpg
crits?

Oh yeah and adre steez that r out
It just looks too plain to me

[braxtons a g]

http://i29.tinypic.com/beh6wx.jpg
adre-make loop smaller
sane-move your letter a lil closer.. too much empty space

[jerm_haf]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/05-28-08_2320.jpg
Bump
Crits please am I on the right track?

I sid that looked pretty good, but i liked the lower case a you did early. it had mad flow...just try that and try not to go bipolar again!

[jerm_haf]

http://i29.tinypic.com/beh6wx.jpg
adre-make loop smaller
sane-move your letter a lil closer.. too much empty space

This has NO flow. work on just writing it normal and then making the letters look more stylish

[braxtons a g]

yea i know iv been working on different letter styles but an L and F is hard as hell to do.. heres some others.. IM TRYING EVERYTHING i guess its just a hard ass name to do..
http://i30.tinypic.com/ifmqg3.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/znka61.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/219ceh3.jpg
i know this one dont flow i was jsut working on different letter styles
http://i27.tinypic.com/ot2b10.jpg
^JUST KIDDING :D

[Keke]

the just kidding ones , could evolve to be your best ones, they sure as hell have the most flow

[braxtons a g]

the just kidding ones , could evolve to be your best ones, they sure as hell have the most flow
damn.. i never thought of shapin them.. i was just pissing my friend off writing his tag like a girl then decided to do mine haha..
http://i27.tinypic.com/2cy0ftd.jpg
:D

[reb]

Dude I like that simple lyfe2 tag.

[jerm_haf]

yea i know iv been working on different letter http://i30.tinypic.com/ifmqg3.jpg


I like the "e" in this one. try and do the "l" the same way

[ENOC]

some of my most recent stuff..
the nonstop is my newest tag..
crits??

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9518.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9525.jpg

[$1LENCR]

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w78/dummerdrummy/05302008.jpg
yay.
taken on a bus.
true frisko busflow.
sorry for the bad quality.

[Blorbis]

duuuuude...resize that shit lol. and maybe do some paper tags so we can see it better and give real crits.

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9948/resenre0.jpg

[jerm_haf]

Enoc-I like the 2nd one but try and do something between the a and m instead of an extra humb
$ilencer-i cant make that pic out. need new flicks
blorbis-way too simp. needs style

[ENOC]

thanks ill work on it..
ill see what i can do.
if anything ill end up making the
a and the m closer by removing the extra hump. idk.

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

i hate commin in here cuz it all sux...=[.....idk why i came in..ima dickk

[IlikePie]

Aww, my eyes :(

[braxtons a g]

someone write lyfe2 so i can see some other handstyles.. i know mine has no flow so any tips?

[wafflecakee]

theres an exchange thread yo

[Nine9]

First ever attempt at a tag with a can of paint. Actually the first time I've gone bombing anyway.

Nine.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/19756855@N06/


Lyfe - Personally I think your letters are too far apart and too jagged. Try for rounded letters that flow a bit better, or get the edges to mirror/complement each other throughout the word if you know what I mean.

[kayotix]

i writ this a few times but maybe a bit to much to write quickly, crits please :)

http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/4/5/29/f_kayom_e03dd33.jpg

[Shiva.]

it looks like it are just 3 seperate letters next to each other, try to make it like 1 piece.

and don't bother about writing it quickly, that's for pussy's

[kayotix]

yeah i feel what your saying, i mean for me at least i like the A n K, but your right in that it doesnt fit together well, il work on it

[bbuba]

i found this on my computer i forgot i did this about a yer ago

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/7914/0504071627kf2.jpg

my first atempt at a kiwi

[Nesk1]

Kayotix, what Shiva said.
Bbuba try to keep the letters the same height and close enough to each other, although you said it was like a year old so I'm sure you've improved
New name maybe? Soer
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/Image025.jpg
Sorry pen is starting to run out

[Nine9]

Middle one is SICK.

[silentchaos14]

i writ this a few times but maybe a bit to much to write quickly, crits please :)

http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/4/5/29/f_kayom_e03dd33.jpg
put your letters closer together and re-post, just keep tweakin this til it flows properly and tone down the extra shit (the "s, dots and arrows).

Nine9- the simple tags on your flickr are nice

[letsgobombin]

my tag it isnt my best one but its the only one i got flicked, i need to move the bit inside the s a bit more right to take up more dead space
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1208.jpg
kas?- its hardly readable, take the bits off the s and fit it together the k and a seem like they would flow together

[kayotix]

kas?- its hardly readable, take the bits off the s and fit it together the k and a seem like they would flow together

wasnt sure if you were refering to me there, if so, it says KAYO, and thanks, am currently working on a version 2

[letsgobombin]

ye, the y and o don't seem to be y and o's at all

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

my tag it isnt my best one but its the only one i got flicked, i need to move the bit inside the s a bit more right to take up more dead space
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1208.jpg
kas?- its hardly readable, take the bits off the s and fit it together the k and a seem like they would flow together



preety sexshee

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-1-1.jpg
New Tag. "Kobra"