Tags

[letsgobombin]

preety sexshee

cheers, i didnt really realise it was that good until i did my first one for a while and thought 'its pretty good'
edit: does that make sense?

[Nesk1]

Kayotix, what Shiva said.
Bbuba try to keep the letters the same height and close enough to each other, although you said it was like a year old so I'm sure you've improved
New name maybe? Soer
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/Image025.jpg
Sorry pen is starting to run out

Bump
Kobra go simpler I'd say
Letsgobombin that's looking real nice

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

ohh god man u need work...

[ShOne.GUK]

Nesk1- first 2 'S' look like 8s && scratch tha 'R'

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Picture003.jpg

[Nesk1]

ohh god man u need work...
Thanks Shone, and Bankz any idea on what I should work on or just re do the whole thing?

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

looks like you one lined the whole thing...looks like it says SOEM...lolz..


...more space between ur letters also...becuz peopel who jus randomly see ya shit wnt be able to decypher what it says...
the S on the #1 and #2 look like 8;s

and on the #2 you cant even see the O at all..

[MARTYRaz]

a new handy..ne crits??http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT0758.jpg

[braxtons a g]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2jc649x.jpg
idkk.. just trying new stuff

[Nesk1]

Thanks Bankz, and Lyfe go simpler

[kayotix]

whats that say??? i see like 4 L's and a 472

[Nesk1]

Kayotix it's supposed to say Lyfe2 I think
And what about this?
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/Image026.jpg
I know my O is a bit dodgy, but I can fix that.

[kayotix]

the top one looks cleaner, but the last letter on it looks like a Y

[Nesk1]

the top one looks cleaner, but the last letter on it looks like a Y

If I didn't make the E and the R touch do you think it'd make it look alot more like a R?

[kayotix]

its because the bottom of the R goes down and under the tag in one line, make the R and the underline seperate like the second tag, but just as clean as the top one

[Nesk1]

I see, thanks!
And btw without the underline which R do you like most?

[kayotix]

i'd prefer the bottom R if it was cleaned up defo, its lookin good tho

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraTag1-1.jpg

[DRONE_905]

i writ this a few times but maybe a bit to much to write quickly, crits please :)

http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/4/5/29/f_kayom_e03dd33.jpg

nice arrow , shit needs a little more , or less space between the letters

[DizzyOne]

This is my shitty tag. I've had this for a long time, at least 4 years... but I haven't really practiced it much. I stopped for a long period of time.

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c144/bigtrex/Graffiti/asd.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c144/bigtrex/Graffiti/piece3.jpg

Any pointers?

[kayotix]

it looks like it says diggy, if uve had that one for 4 years try starting from scratch and chaging the letters from the ground up, might come up with something better than trying to improve on your old one

[Nesk1]

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/soer.jpg
Ok how about that?
And dizzy basically what Kayo said

[kayotix]

yeah man looks pretty sick, im thinking of changing my name completely, gotten sick of writing out so many k's and y's trying to make the letters work lol, il post back when i got sommit new

and kobra, most of those k's look like e's apart from number 2, induvidualy some of the letters look cool but they dont look right together

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

Never midn this crown..thats nuthin..lol


http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/7296/pict0847il7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1120/pict0848di4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8547/pict0850qo9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Nesk1]

Thanks for them Bankz, but tbh I prefer mostly lower case letters

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

lol...when i wrote ur tag i put SOEM..lol..then i was like ohh its soer...

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

but can u put soem critz up on mah shittt >?

[braxtons a g]

dizzy- change your z's. they look like g's.
nesk-you need a new R man. or atleast space the leg of the R from the loop.
bankz- its good but theres aome extra stuff that dont need to be there.. like them arrows.. but other than that.. good :]

[$1LENCR]

Never midn this crown..thats nuthin..lol


http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/7296/pict0847il7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1120/pict0848di4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8547/pict0850qo9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

looks pretty good.
just not feelin the water drops.

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

^^ tru..i usually dnt put those..i was jus tryin it out..lol

[braxtons a g]

^^ tru..i usually dnt put those..i was jus tryin it out..lol
ohh shit.. i just got my 100th post.. and your ABOUT to get your 900th.. thats tight :D

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

lol congrats man..

do u do trades n shit ?

[braxtons a g]

lol congrats man..

do u do trades n shit ?
i CAN if someone wants too

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

i need caps what u got son ?

[braxtons a g]

i need caps what u got son ?
like trade styles? just makin sure i got you straight..

[FABLE IR CRU]

Is this toy??
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/Stickercombos002.jpg

[braxtons a g]

Is this toy??
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/Stickercombos002.jpg
lol iv never heard a question like that.. umm. yea. unless your killin it with multi color wildstyles and puttin blockbusters on skyscapers.. then it could be considered different.. but it IS nice n simple.. so if its you.. your on the right track..

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

lol i meant trade items..

[ReHZoG]

Starting with tagz, simple, like I want
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3994/ssssmg6.png (http://imageshack.us)

Crits Please

[braxtons a g]

oh ok :] i got like 30-40 pink dots..

[braxtons a g]

Starting with tagz, simple, like I want
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3994/ssssmg6.png (http://imageshack.us)

Crits Please
well.. thats too simple to be honest.. it looks like just a word written. try and throw some style in it but dont go adding arrows and halos and useless stuff

[FABLE IR CRU]

lol iv never heard a question like that.. umm. yea. unless your killin it with multi color wildstyles and puttin blockbusters on skyscapers.. then it could be considered different.. but it IS nice n simple.. so if its you.. your on the right track..

Let me rephrase that Is it good or Bad? Some crits would be helpful

[braxtons a g]

Let me rephrase that Is it good or Bad? Some crits would be helpful
its decent.. but it could be better.. space the A and B just a tiny bit

[Nesk1]

Sorry bankz man, I find it hard to give crits, cause I'm shit and new at graff so I find it hard to crit people at stuff I don't know but I'll try,
I'd say lose the teardrops
On the underline where it loops and does the arro make the line that the arrow on a bit closer to the underline, if you get me?
And don't make the S at the end drop down

[braxtons a g]

i know this is the wrong topic but if anyones feeling generous and feels like it they should tell me how much my throwie in my sig sucks :]

[ShOne.GUK]

i know this is the wrong topic but if anyones feeling generous and feels like it they should tell me how much my throwie in my sig sucks :]

honestly......... theres some serious work to be done lol .. maybe u should add shadowin && u really need to work on them letters!! so stick to paper for now

EDIT:


Nesk1- first 2 'S' look like 8s && scratch tha 'R'

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Picture003.jpg



BUMP crits, opinions?!

[braxtons a g]

thanks shone :]
that tag is super tall and it makes it harder to read but the S has a lot of added stuff to it

[kayotix]

shone, i like that style nice tall letters and all, your N sorta looks like a U at a glance, nice though

and braxton, basicly what shone said, work on ur stuff on paper for longer, improve ur style bfor sprayin it

[BadlilDuck]

200 pages since i last visited O.O
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00034.jpg
crits?

shone- are u goin for the philly style?

[Tokenkaligreens]

That P is huge make the letters similar sizes and in the top one it sorta looks like a D.

[Mr yarbles]

Sabe
that's sic
Try tagging it instead of just using sticker next time

suspek
That p is way too huge

rehzog you ahve the right idea now you just need to add some steez to those letters

shone
I like that kina style keep it up.

[jd1]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010021-1.jpg
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010023-1.jpg

[ShOne.GUK]

shone- are u goin for the philly style?

- in a way.. i could make it way more philly if i wanted or added more of a wicket .. but i like it to be type legible

[631]

shnoe- like the style looks real nice

balilduck- not bad. i like it maybe change that E

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010021-1.jpg
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010023-1.jpg

kinda stupid how u did a tag and not a piece or throwup on that spot...

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraTag1-1.jpg

I know I need improvement. But what could I chage about the way my tag looks.
Crits?

[Blorbis]

hmm... I'm really liking the 2nd one for some reason, I think it's because the "K" is more toned down. It sort of looks like an E in the other ones. Here's something I just did lol, crits plz:

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1876/resen3gi3.jpg

[braxtons a g]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010021-1.jpg
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010023-1.jpg
not to be rude or anything but you rEALLY need work.. that looks WAY too gang-like lose all the extra stuf.. lines, crown, dots, etc. and i cant even read it to be able to help you..
viruz-some of your Ks look like "lE".. make it more "K" like

[(SoS)Viruz]

Just had a break through with the tag thanks brax

[braxtons a g]

WELL POST EM UP! i keep gettin retardeder n retardeder with mine.. idk what the hell im gonna do lol

[bbuba]

banks- i personally think you have to many lines in it but other than that it looks good

[ENOC]

earlier today..
still working on it..
crits?


http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9533.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9535.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9537.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9541.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9542.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9543.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9544.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9545.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9546.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9547.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/IMG_9548.jpg

[kayotix]

dont put that little crown symbol, the bottom few look good, the top two not so good, looks clean, 7th one down looks the best, practice to do it like that every time

[BadlilDuck]

kobra- keep it simple
vame- 1st and 6th ones are the best
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00035.jpg
i think i made the p smaller idk. crits?

[traP905]

2nd one is decent.better then the others at least imo.

[smile_]

http://i31.tinypic.com/9u0sap.jpg

any crits? and sorry for shitty pic.

[Nesk1]

Smile drop the arrow on the end of the e

[Mr yarbles]

vame it's looking alot better
I just still think you could do more with the m
and on the one liner dont have that bump before the m

[kayotix]

heres another idea for my tag, a bit simpler than befor, crits please

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/7576/kayohaloqy0.jpg

[braxtons a g]

smile- cut the silly arrow on the end of the E
kayo- looks good but cut just a lil bit off the loop of the A to make it look a lil simpler.. other than that.. tighttt:)

[Queezy]

Fuck up
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyTag.jpg

[631]

vame- im feeling the new a

[631]

like 10 min ago...

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l259/ericksteinberg/photo-2.jpg

[Wallace]

ribbon SA?

vame- you're definitely improving, keep practicing
Queezy - your z looks like shit, literal shit

[(SoS)Viruz]

Lovin the Drips but yea it look like a Ribbon

[631]

yeah i definatly gotta make that a little thinner... i wasnt that happy with it but id figure i would post it

[631]

better?

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l259/ericksteinberg/photo-3.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yea, atleast it dosent look like a Ribbon anymore.

[631]

yeah i was happy with this one

[Cin123]

Fuck up
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyTag.jpg

if u fuck up then y post:S

[Bets369R]

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-2.jpg

[bbuba]

bets- i like the red one on the the mail thing on the left the best

[smile_]

http://i26.tinypic.com/243i0xs.jpg

any crits? removed that unneeded arrow... thx. will return crits if given.

[Thrice]

It would help if it were smaller and tilted right....I think the S and M go well together, just squeeze that M, it's too wide. For the I L E...well it's plain and simple while the first 2 letters have a style thing going on....fix it up. I'll try to come up with some idea for ya in a few...in the mean time
CRITS please. (trying to make a philly handstyle out of the larger one.)
http://i26.tinypic.com/2hyfczc.jpg

[bbuba]

smile- u should put "your on candid camera or something on there"

[smile_]

thx Thrice. I think you should try to make your tag a little more simple the H on the big one looks more like a N, try to a lower case h and maybe you wont have that problem... and shit, candid camera haha. :D

[Thrice]

In reference to the large one or all of em? For the large one that isn't my concern really due to philly handstyles structures. Also I hope these 2 help you, im a bit tired and can't come up with much.
http://i28.tinypic.com/2i7qtlu.jpg

[bbuba]

its just a thought

[jerm_haf]

^^^ i like the left "s" and the "mile" on the right one

[Thrice]

more....
http://i27.tinypic.com/28jzjh3.jpg

[BadlilDuck]

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00035.jpg
crits?

bump
thrice-right one looks alrite
smile- i dig the simple e =D

[Thrice]

duck-loose the K extension for now.Also i'd chill on the P a bit. I take it you write suspek....what's with that random circle? halo?? Lose it for now. I see you are making slight adjustments to the letters, when you do those try to get something that flows and has a style that can derive from it and be done to your other letters.

[bbuba]

duck- i would say the second one down is the best and with what thrice said loose the k extension also the quotes worked to fill in the extra space ontop

[Bets369R]

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/003.jpg
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/001-2.jpg

bump for some crits. what should i keep what should i change up?

[Thrice]

give crits to get crits......but go simple

[kayotix]

ahem the second one looks better i rekon, i like the letters being a simular height, looking good

[kayotix]

a few more ideas, need some inspiration

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8307/newesttagdb9.jpg
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2878/kayo1linerea4.jpg
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/2442/kayo2linerft7.jpg
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/3513/kayooriguz5.jpg
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/1790/kayoswirlvb7.jpg

p.s sorry for the long post

[CoCoPuffs]

I really dont think I should be givin out crits because I dont think I know enough to crit someone elses work lol.. I just started learning about graffiti a few days ago.. but heres mine
crits please? :)
http://i30.tinypic.com/5ag7c2.jpg

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

dont do the quotes unless ur tag is THAT nice enough...

[Cin123]

skar man there all ready like 5 million writes with that name

[CoCoPuffs]

ok, so no quotes, and change the name. xD any pointers for the coming up of a new name?
btw thanks for the crits

[$1LENCR]

do something original.
like an acronym.
like i write SARLE$.
it stands for
Seeking A Life Evading Stupidity.
just make up something.

[RezOner..]

dude you realise theres an r in sarles

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

i need some help on my crown
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3531/l017gi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3531/l017gi6.1005e0dbaf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=209&i=l017gi6.jpg)

[CoCoPuffs]

do something original.
like an acronym.
like i write SARLE$.
it stands for
Seeking A Life Evading Stupidity.
just make up something.
hmm, never thought of that lol let see what I can come up with

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yo CoCo like be original. You Letters that you like to write then mix them up to make your Tag.

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

some one help me with my crown? just some ideas i know its messy..
anyway coco..look at my s..but dont bite it

[jerm_haf]

some one help me with my crown? just some ideas i know its messy..
anyway coco..look at my s..but dont bite it

I like your crown...get rid of the shadow or whatever the fuck you were trying to do on the left sides of it and it'll be dope

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

thanks bro

[RezOner..]

i need some help on my crown


no, you dont. don't crown yourself. when i see a crown over a tag i turn into the hulk and smash whatever surface its on. don't regard yourself as a king. sorry to be frank.

[CT08]

The crown is the least of your problems

[bbuba]

i agree crowns shouldnt even be done by the best because they know they are the best and it shows so they dont need a crown

did that make sense?

sandstorm-you should write ur tag in the marker so it wont look so shaky even while practicing

[Bets369R]

crowns are for kings, you arent a king so lose the crown.

[$1LENCR]

dude you realise theres an r in sarles

haha i meant Seeking A Real Life Evading Stupidity.

[Mr yarbles]

A couple from today
http://i30.tinypic.com/29djp90.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/11v0a2v.jpg

sandstorm. drop the "King" from the name
You're no where near bein called a king
push your letters closer in.
and write it with a bigger maker so it's not so shaky

[TheMuffinMan]

i need some help on my crown
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3531/l017gi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3531/l017gi6.1005e0dbaf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=209&i=l017gi6.jpg)

lol im bored so heres a quick tut

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f62/nicklue/1212554258.jpg

just play with it basically you will find something you like

[AdRe*]

Crits I'm trying out a different "E"
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/06-03-08_2356.jpg

Sandstorm- theres a reason your in this forum and its because your a toy not a KING
so unless you really think you need that in front of Sandstorm get rid of it, work on it
get a marker and practice, practice, and of course practice

[XEDGEX]

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c6/Angelcitykaos/xedgex.jpg
crits?

[Zork.one]

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c6/Angelcitykaos/xedgex.jpg
crits?

dude too bigg, ur a toy u dont wanna cause to much damage yet.
stick with small easy shit.

[Bets369R]

i kinda like your style. i wouldnt actually write XEDGEX its a cool forum name but a stupid graff name. everyone will think your just some strait edge kid (i know you are but..) thats running around announcing it to the world..and wont take you serious. i know this skin head writer but he doesnt go around writing "SKINZ" everywhere..if you get what im saying

[Zork.one]

sorry i saw how i posted that and i didnt mean it in a negitive way,
make the tag smaller ans letters closer together, maybe a few arows or a halo or some kind of accessory.

[Zork.one]

Crits I'm trying out a different "E"
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/06-03-08_2356.jpg

Sandstorm- theres a reason your in this forum and its because your a toy not a KING
so unless you really think you need that in front of Sandstorm get rid of it, work on it
get a marker and practice, practice, and of course practice

lovin that tagg!!!
Lovin that beef!!!

[AdRe*]

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c6/Angelcitykaos/xedgex.jpg
crits?

Work on your flow a lil more and make it smaller

[XEDGEX]

i kinda like your style. i wouldnt actually write XEDGEX its a cool forum name but a stupid graff name. everyone will think your just some strait edge kid (i know you are but..) thats running around announcing it to the world..and wont take you serious. i know this skin head writer but he doesnt go around writing "SKINZ" everywhere..if you get what im saying


sorry i saw how i posted that and i didnt mean it in a negitive way,
make the tag smaller ans letters closer together, maybe a few arows or a halo or some kind of accessory.

yeah bets i feel you i write it because i feel like i can realate to people if they see it. they'll be cool that guys edge or someshit like that.zork, yeah dude i know i just felt like doing something huge.

ive only been writing for about a month or so but i think i picked it up realy fast.

[Bets369R]

you can still use the xxx to let people know your edge. or the sxe. your name doesnt have to be edge. its kinda tacky. idk to each his own. come thru long beach so we can write. also, graff (for me atleast) is about the mystery of the man behind the name.

[IlikePie]

sorry i saw how i posted that and i didnt mean it in a negitive way,
make the tag smaller ans letters closer together, maybe a few arows or a halo or some kind of accessory.

I dub you, the biggest dumbass in this whole forum.

[La Coka Nostra]

edge, the handstyle doesn't look that bad. i like the E's.

[XEDGEX]

you can still use the xxx to let people know your edge. or the sxe. your name doesnt have to be edge. its kinda tacky. idk to each his own. come thru long beach so we can write. also, graff (for me atleast) is about the mystery of the man behind the name.

yeah man for sure. do you piece or only tag?

[XEDGEX]

thanks coke

[Bets369R]

yeah man for sure. do you piece or only tag?

i piece too but my paint supply is empty so for now im just writing

[reskalicious]

http://http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/4/6/3/t_watupm_30c29d5.png (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/6/3/f_watupm_30c29d5.png&srv=img33)

Which one is best?? Crits plss

[whocares!?!?!]

dude too bigg, ur a toy u dont wanna cause to much damage yet.
stick with small easy shit.

^^ fuck that shit, STAY BIG, it will pay off in the long run, I promise. If anything, don't do big x's make them small, or don't do x's, kinda plays down the style you have in the other letters. it'll emphasize the other letters, ya dig?

[drop one.]

y u tellin him to go smaller
its go big or go home kuz his tag isnt that bad. just werk on ur letters and makem closer yo kid listen i was just written in my note books over n over then i finally got my tag but nobady that doesnt kno my style doesnt kno wat it says really so its ok ppl sed it looks like 5555 or aaaa

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

anedre and edge your stuff is looking sooooooooooooooooo good
i need some help on my crown
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3531/l017gi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3531/l017gi6.1005e0dbaf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=209&i=l017gi6.jpg)

anymore crits?

[drop one.]

ye change ur name make it shorter and dont use pens and lose the crowns im not talkin shit but im helpin u kuz it looks wak

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

its not the best but its not wak..
and im not changing my name chump

[drop one.]

r u seriuos? ok dnt chnge it
but atleast make it look good not half print half cursive then stik a crown on top

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

dude post your own stuff before you say how bad mine is

[drop one.]

ok h.o

[drop one.]

http://a697.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_c60acec322b79d6a43a3b06c25f06190.jpg
the tag fuked up on the e was kinda high but ye



well i kno its the TAG thread this was the best pic i had of my tag

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

what does that even say..
anyway wanna battle later? settle this beef

[Shiva.]

ok mister sandstorm..
first of all, you don't deserve the title "king"
second, don't use a pen, the lines aren't straight.
third, shorten your name. (to sand or storm, not both of them)
fourth, the vertical extension on your S doesn't add anything to your tag of the flow (wich is missing anyway)
fifth, don't make the horizontal bar on the A that long
sixth, your N is cursive
seventh, your D is just lame, make a vertical bar, not some spiral thing
eighth, in your second S the c part on the top is too far to the left
ninth, your T is just a cross.. an ugly one
tenth, the O, the R and the M are just simple letters, at least make them look not-crappy
eleventh, use kapitals (like SANDSTORM)
twelfth, on the crown: loose it.
thirteenth, you are posting here for crits, so don't be a bitch when you get some.

enough? i have a lot more crits left for you, i'm still being nice.

[drop one.]

what does that even say..
anyway wanna battle later? settle this beefyo r u serious do u want to be humiliated?

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

and shiva..thanks.. some of those things i agree with ill try to work on it..
Drop..pick a word..we will see who gets humiliated

[drop one.]

ok

[Shiva.]

hahahaha, this will be fun

[drop one.]

the word is sec or ces
post ur shit in the toy bbooks piece sketch NO GRAFFITI CREATOR

[Tokenkaligreens]

I want in too. lol cuz im fucki9ng bored

[drop one.]

fukin shit man i wanna battle the fag ass toys that call me out so those r the ppl that imma battle

[Tokenkaligreens]

k youR a fag ass toy who cant write. Am i IN IT NOW?


theres my entry lol
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/img007-1.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i31.tinypic.com/vo4o0l.jpg


Sandstorm are you serious?
Your tag sucks balls, and you're trying to call people out?

CCS you're tag's nice I like how the bottom and tops flow, but if that's you're actual tag people are going to think it's just some crew.

drop does that say skiaas?

[AdRe*]

I just tried to write your name "king" Sandstorm really quick
and I just realized it takes a shit load of time to write I got tired at the 2nd s in sandstorm
I dont know how your going to be able to do a quick tag in the streets
Your tag should be something quick and nice
Now imagine your in a high traffic area and see a nice surface to write on
c'mon seriosly your shit is going to take to loonnnngggg time to tag
those are just my thoughts personally and so is this get rid of the KING please!!!!

[Tokenkaligreens]

na it not my tag i was just doing it for the hell of it.

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

some times i write sand or sandy or sandman or sandels or sandtrap or sando

[AdRe*]

Naw not you bro
that kid who goes by "KING SANDSTORM" reppin KOGC crew

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

what it do

[AdRe*]

DAMN you go by all those wow
I wouldn't even be able to remember most of them haha

[XEDGEX]

thanks for the feedback guys

[Thrice]

Adre your letters don't flow together. Each letter has a different style.

[H3TT1NG3R]

old but i want crits my a is different now but crit everything else

[AdRe*]

Yeah I know but it means something to me
I could get rid of the A but idk just wouldn't feel right to me

[drop one.]

werd i kno exactly wat u mean kid

[ShOne.GUK]

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Summer08.jpg

crits pleaseee :eek:

[(SoS)Viruz]

Guk-What dose it say, but loose the Star, and the Some of the Quotes. To me it look like WAVES. And loose the Arrows at the bottom. It make it look real cheese

[Tokenkaligreens]

in philly styles like tht theey usually rock the 4 qwotes and stars and add ons are part of alot of philly hands, also i dont think those are arrows rather part of his S and E.

shone See how you built you next letter off your first one, imo dont do that. do the whole letter and just squeeze em togther to get that effect.

[ShOne.GUK]

in philly styles like tht theey usually rock the 4 qwotes and stars and add ons are part of alot of philly hands, also i dont think those are arrows rather part of his S and E.

shone See how you built you next letter off your first one, imo dont do that. do the whole letter and just squeeze em togther to get that effect.

lol thanks for pointin thaa out to "viruz" && yea true good looks .. thas really wat i wanted crits on (tha building tha next letter off tha first one)

but idk if i should make tha 'n' its own letter too .. i was thinkin it would look too much like tha 'h'

[(SoS)Viruz]

I got you GUK, Im not a dick head.

A but thats philly style I didnt even know that.

I'll throw my new tag up their I finished and my old one for comparison.

[ShOne.GUK]

I got you GUK, Im not a dick head.

i dont write "GUK" its a crew. i write "shone" pimpin && i never said u was a dickhead lol

[(SoS)Viruz]

Naw I wasnt sayin that you said that Im ment to say Im not one of those guys who are like a dick on the Toy forms. Lol.

[MUSEone]

Somone say philly style?

http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/6854/0326082137akd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Old, but first ever attempt a philly style.

Looks better now.

[ShOne.GUK]

worrd. lol im feelin thaa muse .. i fell in love wit philly hands not too long ago && now i cant stopp !!

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Summer08002.jpg

mad sloppy. this was on a closed down Sonics fast food restaraunt

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Neandoldtagz.jpg

Yea my new tag. It simpler and way better to me.
Crits?

[kayotix]

yeah kobra its lookin alot better, the letters fit together better than before, keep practising to make it smooth tho, also get a chisel tip pen to write it with as its hard to see what its gonna be like if you tagged it with a paint marker or sommit

[(SoS)Viruz]

Alright lol. Thanks man.

[AllYourWallsAreBelongToMe]

worrd. lol im feelin thaa muse .. i fell in love wit philly hands not too long ago && now i cant stopp !!

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Summer08002.jpg

mad sloppy. this was on a closed down Sonics fast food restaraunt

I like it. Good up and down flow.

Also, that Sandstorm kid is kidding right?

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/69/hpim0531ln4.jpg

bleh

[IlikePie]

All of you except Sebroh suck. Those aren't Philly at all kids.

[RezOner..]

lulz

[MUSEone]

All of you except Sebroh suck. Those aren't Philly at all kids.

Is that why a philly head taught me how to do mine?

Its w.e i dont put it up anywhere just messin around one day.

[Aspire]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/dormanhighplaya/p_00147.jpg

ill try to post more later on tonight.

[jd1]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010026-1.jpg

crits plz

[Mr yarbles]

Jesse I think your e in two is dope
But put it with everything else in the top left.

muse
I actually think that tag is pretty nice
Love them philly styles.

[jd1]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/dormanhighplaya/p_00147.jpg

ill try to post more later on tonight.

that has a sick flow to it

props

[ShOne.GUK]

All of you except Sebroh suck. Those aren't Philly at all kids.

Dick riding much?

lol j.pp soo watchu consider philly??? are philly hands not basically tall print letters && crazy ass wickets etc? .. im not sayin thas exactly wat im showing or thaa i have it on lock. but it DOES resemble wat philadelphia graffiti is mostly about

[$1LENCR]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010026-1.jpg

crits plz

work on yer throwie.
feelin tag #1.

[jd1]

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010028-1.jpg
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010030-1.jpg

[Shiva.]

i don't like your E
and is jesse your real name?

[jd1]

i don't like your E
and is jesse your real name?

yessum

[Shiva.]

ok, but lose the thing at the bottom of your E andt try to keep it the same size as the rest of your tag

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

jesse that first pic is ill!!!
but lose your toy E

[Shiva.]

that's what i said, sandstorm, lose your toy name

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

ohh and shiva is so un toy..........right

[Shiva.]

better than KING sandstorm, hahahahha

[Thrice]

Ya writing your actual name isn't such a good idea.

[Shiva.]

who are you talking to?

[Tokenkaligreens]

it all depends jesse is a pretty generic name and f you live in a big city whats it matter. ya if you get busted you just did some leg work for the pigs but thats it. DO YOU.

[Shoook]

http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/scan0010.jpg
new tag tell me what you guys are thinkin about it

[StAtiK1]

lose the quotes and its good to go pretty much

[artcrime99]

i think it looks kinda lame, it needs somthing i unno wut tho

[Shoook]

i think it looks kinda lame, it needs somthing i unno wut tho


yeha i was thinking the same thin and i know were your coming from on the lame its just simple as alphabet letters theres no real handstyle its just ....blah thanks for the crits man

[RainFaLL]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/oui008.jpg

Trust me, I KNOW HOW HORRIBLE THESE ARE! I know Im toy, no need to hate. Everyone starts somewhere. But what I really need is what I can do better, like if someone could do a simple of Kaze in some good handstyle, i would be so grateful

[RezOner..]

toy exchange thread bud.

[RainFaLL]

toy exchange thread bud.
Sorrrrrrrrrry!

[king sandstorm (KOGC)]

kaze you should add a crown or some arrows or somthing..but it looks pretty dope

[jerm_haf]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/oui008.jpg

Trust me, I KNOW HOW HORRIBLE THESE ARE! I know Im toy, no need to hate. Everyone starts somewhere. But what I really need is what I can do better, like if someone could do a simple of Kaze in some good handstyle, i would be so grateful

Tope left is pretty sick. I'm feelin that A

[Slushi]

kaze you should add a crown or some arrows or somthing..but it looks pretty dope
You're a fucking joke.

[RezOner..]

finally someone agrees with me.

[Shiva.]

sandy, you don't deserve to give crits

[RezOner..]

oh wait, thats a unanimous opinion. my bad.

[SWIV3Ltwo]

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36/jdhillon85/Graffiti/Scan_17-1.jpg

i know its whack.....not my favorite letters;)

for a battle on bs

for a battle on here

[RezOner..]

swivel you dont suck hard like i imagined...

[Slushi]

he does.

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/69/hpim0531ln4.jpg

bleh
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/184/loltilere9.png

[smile_]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2re19qb.jpg

a better pic?

&& CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K, remove the unneeded swirl at the bottom, and those dots at the side.

Kaze, the top left one is the best, just make your E bigger and remove that drop thing from the A.

Shuk, remove the quotations, and try to add alittle more style.. it looks a little bland?

[(SoS)Viruz]

Rainfall- Dude the on ein the upper left core is Dope. I like the K. I flows. a but dont listen to Sandy over their he's like The Diffinition of Toy, he just a joke. A but keep it up.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i32.tinypic.com/11iekjq.jpg
Getting tired of writing tesone

Crits?

Smile it's nice liek teh s especially

kaze, Make your z a bit wider
Fist one's best imo

sebroh
It's good but lose that swirl at the bottom
and why'd you start it out one liner and then stop?

shuk
I like it, nice and simple.

[jd1]

Ya writing your actual name isn't such a good idea.

since mark198, tracy168, and mitch77 (famous OG NY train writers) didn't use their name, or anything...

[Trade]

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e122/trademark0013/Photo81.jpg

[Basic954]

Ummm, yeah. That sucks.

[kayotix]

not many people do, but if u wanna go for the strait edge style, make sure the letters are consistent in size and some like the L are slightly rotated, fix it, it is looking a bit shady at the moment though, odd style

[Shiva.]

is that a straight edge style? if it is, straightedge sucks even harder

[Trade]

not many people do, but if u wanna go for the strait edge style, make sure the letters are consistent in size and some like the L are slightly rotated, fix it, it is looking a bit shady at the moment though, odd style

thnx

[tassajara17272]

http://i32.tinypic.com/3463pfc.jpg
i write clover
what do you think?

[BaceThrowies]

clover, dont use the arrow as an "O" and your "V" looks like an "L" when you use it to cross your E.

[tassajara17272]

yeah i use the arrow cause i havent found an O that flows yet.
do you think if i keep the V straighter when it crosses the E it'll work?

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

wh oever put the showings up on ur sig..did it purposly ..lol...probbly soem teen...

unless its fake

[Mr yarbles]

http://i25.tinypic.com/2z6imvd.jpg

Probably final change on my name

ANy thoughts?

clove
Do some simples.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yarbles- Chage that R. It dose fit.... Remove that lil thing above the K i think it is. You really should just start over cause It hard to read. Like re-write it and play with 1 letter at a time till u get it the way you like it then base all of you letters like that. Helps it flow.

[BaceThrowies]

yeah i use the arrow cause i havent found an O that flows yet.
do you think if i keep the V straighter when it crosses the E it'll work?


try to make it more simple and less edgy

[fonone]

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/674/sany0055yx1.jpg
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1637/sany0014xd6.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5863/mar09115nj1.jpg

[Bets369R]

that green irekn is dope except for the n

[letsgobombin]

irekn- your second one is probably the best, but you need to work on it a bit, use a thicker marker for the second one and try to work out a new n
aikr-how do you say that? is it ay-ker? it looks good just take the bit on the top of the k off and maybe join the bottom of the k and i
bace- take out all the random dots and it will be ok
clover- start over from simple
skelic- same as above

[fonone]

lols yeah it was on a bus and it was bouncing everywhere so it came out real fucked up.

[vus_01]

hy, i write for about 6 months...and this is my tag for now

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/128/tagok8.th.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tagok8.jpg)

[letsgobombin]

make your v larger and make the edges of your letters touch, also take out the exclamation mark in the u, make the underline straight and take away the star then re-post

[Ease_84]

tagg

[Mr yarbles]

you say it like acre
Like an acre of land
and thanks alot guys I know it's pretty rough but I was tired of my other tag

vus make your v larger
it just looks like a checkamark next to the huge u and s
also make the underline straight and not all jaged looking
and I'd lose the exclamation inside the but but that's just me

irekn
That shit is dope
Especially the green

[Nine9]

tagg

Sick.

Nice and simple and flows awesome.

[ENOC]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/GRAFF026.jpg
Crits?

[(SoS)Viruz]

Enoc- This sticker next to your tag looks funny lol. Bring the M closer. Other that its nice. O yea likin those DRIPS

[ENOC]

hahah thanks.. yeah i been working on getting it closer..

[white]

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0284.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0285.jpg

[$1LENCR]

SEBR- where do u live?
NUKES- N from #3, U from #1, all the K's are the same, and work on your S.
and work on your tag more before adding all the other fancy shit.
and what's with the 303?

[garbage down tha way]

graffiti just isnt for some people..

[La Coka Nostra]

...im sayin

[JETPACK!!]

i fell off this whore trying to get down.

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1373/billboard3hu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[fonone]

why only the tag duder :(, taking the effort to get up there you should have atleast done a hollow.

edit: wish i could get to spots like that haha, not that theres any near me but even if there was i probabley wouldnt be able to get up without a ladder or some shit.

[barbadosone]

@ ENOC ...I like it, always nice to see oneliners!

[barbadosone]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk72/zhgraff/a.jpg

[vus_01]

yaaa love it biatch.....

damn nice, good flow :)

[JETPACK!!]

why only the tag duder :(, taking the effort to get up there you should have atleast done a hollow.

edit: wish i could get to spots like that haha, not that theres any near me but even if there was i probabley wouldnt be able to get up without a ladder or some shit.

i hit two billboards. the piece is on the one beside it. but it's for the battle, so im not posting it.

and these shits done even have ladders. i gotta monkey my ass up. plus the shits always so fucking wobbley, gettin down it buckled an i just went right over. i got lucky, i had my arm right under my jaw, if i didnt, i woulda hit a pole with my jaw. nice 15 foot fall haha. suprised i took minimul cuts.