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(SoS)Viruz
06-08-2008, 11:31 AM
Lol Down the Way. Some ppl just need work.

garbage down tha way
06-08-2008, 11:38 AM
rasek, dope spot, but you should have just done it in black on the all white part imo. itd pop better.

JETPACK!!
06-08-2008, 11:40 AM
word, 8 cans on me. no black, didnt think i needed it.. silly me, you ALWAYS need a black in your bag.

(SoS)Viruz
06-08-2008, 11:57 AM
Rasek Vitamin water. has a nice ring to it. Thats a dope spot. i can see someone walkin down the street going like hey look at that.

white
06-08-2008, 12:07 PM
SEBR- where do u live?
NUKES- N from #3, U from #1, all the K's are the same, and work on your S.
and work on your tag more before adding all the other fancy shit.
and what's with the 303?

i just do the 303 for shit i post on here cause im from denver - colorado303 thats why - everything else i truly do i usually dont write it. i know my s is shit and i try to correct it and tends to end up looking like more shit

JETPACK!!
06-08-2008, 12:09 PM
i fell off this whore trying to get down.

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1373/billboard3hu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumpity bump bump bump that shit

(SoS)Viruz
06-08-2008, 12:23 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraTagsz.jpg
Crits?

sketch3
06-08-2008, 12:25 PM
oi you never use the bilbords to ur advantedge,

it woulda been dope to have
''rasek the'' cool crisp anti''christ''

white
06-08-2008, 12:28 PM
oi you never use the bilbords to ur advantedge,

it woulda been dope to have
''rasek the'' cool crisp anti''christ''

lmao

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 12:31 PM
from wat ive heard, i still belong in here so....

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/8515/0604081911avd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New ish.

kayotix
06-08-2008, 12:52 PM
letters look pretty smooth, lose the stars and maybe the circle round it aswell

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 12:54 PM
Then id just be down to the general tag i already have.

Pointless seeing is how im trying NEW ish.

jd1
06-08-2008, 01:05 PM
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010040-1.jpg

muse, i think that shit is dope, but that's coming from the eyes of a toy.. so i dunno if that means much :o

MUSEone
06-08-2008, 01:11 PM
muse, i think that shit is dope, but that's coming from the eyes of a toy.. so i dunno if that means much :o

haha thnx. But people still call me toy also so...

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
06-08-2008, 01:21 PM
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c281/amp9041/P1010040-1.jpg

muse, i think that shit is dope, but that's coming from the eyes of a toy.. so i dunno if that means much :o

...makes me sad for some weird reason...idk..lol..well man u need work..dont make it all bunched up and all dat ish...

and kobra u need style..

rocketeer
06-08-2008, 02:06 PM
haha thnx. But people still call me toy also so...

maybe try it without the stars?

shun
06-08-2008, 02:25 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraTagsz.jpg
Crits?

2 things worth considering:
keep it simple. start off with letters that look EXACTLY like the ones on your keyboard. spell out your name alot, look at it, change the letters, give them style.
also, no offense dude, but i would think about changing my name if i were you, "KOBRA" is pretty toy.

Mr yarbles
06-08-2008, 02:37 PM
Jesse you need to spread your letters out more, they're pretty much on top of each other.

maso I like the first one better, but yeah that star is a bit much.

Rasek that's pretty dope.
Nice and clean keep at it

AdRe*
06-08-2008, 03:55 PM
Been quiet for a while now
putting some serious work into my tag
not my best but efff it
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/06-08-08_1548.jpg
Crits pls?

Mr yarbles
06-08-2008, 04:24 PM
Adre you've improved tons, looks really nice.

http://i31.tinypic.com/16lmr6c.jpg
Been workin on this heres what I ave so far
Crits?

Keke
06-08-2008, 04:27 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2niw8hu.jpg
adre0 looking better, i dont like the backwards e though

Apoc Dozer
06-08-2008, 10:39 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1059/aaaaly1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Please give some tips for my friend

jerm_haf
06-08-2008, 10:58 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1059/aaaaly1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Please give some tips for my friend

...start over. its really hard to read, and it dosent look good at all....

white
06-08-2008, 11:08 PM
muse one - keepn it real
jesse - spread your letters out except i still cant believe you are using your real name
adre - sick as hell nice but the first tag, the bottom right part of the A should probably swing the other way or jag the other way or something but it still looks pretty sick

Keke
06-09-2008, 01:51 AM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8635/btmxw8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8635/btmxw8.5accb17c58.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=156&i=btmxw8.png)
meh
apoc- go simple thats..really bad

Keke
06-09-2008, 02:07 AM
sorry doulble post

Apoc Dozer
06-09-2008, 10:00 AM
Thanks, that is exactly what I wanted to tell him, but now he will get to see himself

It says Reptt, do not know why he chose to add a second T on there :rolleyes:

Thrice
06-09-2008, 11:50 AM
it'd help if it were rotated right keke, but none the less it's looking pretty good. I'd fix the H tho.
Crits please
http://i31.tinypic.com/e70x34.jpg

kayotix
06-09-2008, 02:17 PM
i like number 2 with the all caps, 5's nice but the M doesnt look a part of it

AdRe*
06-09-2008, 02:49 PM
Thanx for the critique guys means allot
Ahem - your fourth one reminds me of H&M clothing logo take a look http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s252/born_prestige/h_m_logo_show.jpg
Pretty weird huh but still sick ass style

Hater-AiD~>
06-09-2008, 03:19 PM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/Picture060.jpg

turdfurgison981
06-09-2008, 04:51 PM
says NAP, just wanted to keep it simple for now, crits would be appreciated
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m107/turdfurgison98/DSCF2483.jpg

Kruxos
06-09-2008, 05:21 PM
quick 1 liners

if u make em right they look sick

BigBlueViolence
06-09-2008, 05:25 PM
Nap- try to make your P more defined. Give it it's own line, don't just use the A

taking over 603
06-09-2008, 06:46 PM
i fell off this whore trying to get down.

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1373/billboard3hu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thats shits funny! Careful Bro...........

Mr yarbles
06-09-2008, 06:56 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/282h5t.jpg
Eh.
any crits?

Ahem
3rds my favorite

Aid give the d more definition looks like it says aic

BaceThrowies
06-09-2008, 09:54 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/1737/195208fd2.jpg

crits please?

Shiva.
06-10-2008, 03:51 AM
give crits to get 'em

jupsick
06-10-2008, 03:56 AM
says NAP, just wanted to keep it simple for now, crits would be appreciated
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m107/turdfurgison98/DSCF2483.jpg

dude make ur letter umm....not together...not a 1line... could look alot better..

Mo152
06-10-2008, 04:26 AM
Some bullshit
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c219/bobsInTheMob/100_0765.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c219/bobsInTheMob/100_0767.jpg
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c219/bobsInTheMob/100_0768.jpg

Pesky_Human
06-10-2008, 08:40 AM
says NAP, just wanted to keep it simple for now, crits would be appreciated
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m107/turdfurgison98/DSCF2483.jpg

I like the idea of one line stuff, but it's rare that I see great ones. Work with the letters separately and freak each letter. My $0.02 anyway...

Pesky_Human
06-10-2008, 08:44 AM
The e/3 at the end flows in the opposite direction from the other letters, but I like your letter style, and you have whatever marker you used on this dialed in.


Been quiet for a while now
putting some serious work into my tag
not my best but efff it
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/06-08-08_1548.jpg
Crits pls?

cora
06-10-2008, 11:49 AM
crits on tags:

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/7633/corabz8.png

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 02:04 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/TEK.jpg
Crits?

South-Pole
06-10-2008, 02:05 PM
^go a bit simpler(edit:both of you,cora and viruz)

ahem-no.2's the best

nap-looks like a good start for a one liner,work more,seperate letters.

gupe-liking the first one

a new idea that i've just found.the heart starts from the e

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42435.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Lol/SSA42434.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 02:05 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/TEK.jpg
Crits?
BUMP
CRITS?

South-Pole
06-10-2008, 02:08 PM
don't bump for crits right after you posted,look like at my post on the previous page,and give crits before asking them

Mo152
06-10-2008, 02:13 PM
viruz, none of your letter flow at all.

south pole, i see some potential try a new O and R that match the style of the T and M, ohh and get rid of the heart.... please.

Cora, You need to try to make some letter before you start doing them all fast and conecting them like your doing, you C looks like a D in some of them, on
your O looks like an E, define your letters, but with style and flow

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 02:16 PM
South I like it. But the The first letter is inconsistence. I thourhgt it was a Z and a D at Frist. But its a T right.
The one in the middle and the Center are pretty nice

cora
06-10-2008, 03:07 PM
viruz, none of your letter flow at all.

south pole, i see some potential try a new O and R that match the style of the T and M, ohh and get rid of the heart.... please.

Cora, You need to try to make some letter before you start doing them all fast and conecting them like your doing, you C looks like a D in some of them, on
your O looks like an E, define your letters, but with style and flow

thanks a lot. is this better?

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3609/corahandgq0.png

Mo152
06-10-2008, 04:05 PM
yea make your R match now. all your letter are "pointy" cept that one

Mr yarbles
06-10-2008, 04:12 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/282h5t.jpg
Eh.
any crits?

Ahem
3rds my favorite

Aid give the d more definition looks like it says aic
Bump this up

and you guys need to give crits if you expect to get any
geez.

Torn the n needs work looks like an m

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 04:34 PM
Mabey dont make you line on the A soo long be it tight. Just fix the R.

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/TekTagz2.jpg
Crits. I chaged it a little.

H3TT1NG3R
06-10-2008, 04:43 PM
^teh yall look liek zek or lek

(SoS)Viruz
06-10-2008, 04:46 PM
Damn.... Lol.

H3TT1NG3R
06-10-2008, 04:55 PM
dotn make the t or any other letter the underline, if u want make ur t by having a simpelt top just a line, then start and flick ur pen down for teh bottom of teh t, and see if u liek how it goes out, or maybe just make it hook slightly at the bottom teh E is pretty basic, and the k will get better over time

IlikePie
06-10-2008, 05:05 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1213134989.jpg

Blahhh

Cin123
06-10-2008, 06:02 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/285.jpg

Mo152
06-10-2008, 06:29 PM
Dot the I cin, and Viruz, all your letter are like standing out to much, make it look like a word, instead of adding so much "style" to each letter.

desokidd
06-10-2008, 06:38 PM
wats up people

desokidd
06-10-2008, 06:39 PM
http://s302.photobucket.com/albums/nn96/desokidd1/?action=view&current=hh.jpg

Mo152
06-10-2008, 06:49 PM
Dont double post, and your link is broken

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3161/2568381781_9b5294c7cb.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3073/2568374631_a56e28d121.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2272/2568374415_66c1e7870e.jpg?v=0

cora
06-10-2008, 07:10 PM
everythings good besides on the last one. i don't really feel that E.

JETPACK!!
06-10-2008, 07:50 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/285.jpg

i feel bad for that car. shoulda put a piece on it.

im not feelin the heart-shape it has. makes you look mad soft.

CT08
06-10-2008, 08:22 PM
Gupe that second one is dope just change up the G so its easier to distinguish as a G. You get me?

desokidd
06-10-2008, 09:16 PM
fuck my pic isnt showing
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn96/desokidd1/hh.jpg

Mo152
06-10-2008, 10:44 PM
your trying way too hard....

AdRe*
06-11-2008, 01:15 AM
Tek - You might think it looks like shit but your doing good believe it or not, just keep practicing on it and with time you'll develop a nice flow and don't change your name too often unless you really have to, just get used to going by one name right now.
P.s. South-Pole is kinda right, I learned the hard way too wait at least till your shi* is on the next page till u bump

Cora - Slow it down a lil, seperate the letters a lil and make the C a lil more noticeable, and ur NY throwup I cant tell thats an A at the end

Gupe - Some of that bullshit looks raw, like ur second one where you one lined the U and the P looks good just spread it out from the E a lil mo
Nap - It is simple, like u havent heard it already but yeah put work into it

wafflecakee
06-11-2008, 01:16 AM
desokidd you should be able to draw a tag without any flair and make it look good. no need for outlines.

AdRe*
06-11-2008, 01:30 AM
Changed the backwards E
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1310.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1306.jpg
Does it look better?
Crits?

Mo152
06-11-2008, 01:47 AM
Adre, either stand the first the letters up more like the last on , or slant the last letter like the rest

more of the same. with a dif marker.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3044/2569234111_7cd88a0f98.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3281/2569234263_b6c62824d9.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3162/2570059842_89f46120e6.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3092/2569233891_5c4416d83c.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3028/2570059622_b7f5d38111.jpg?v=0

Bets369R
06-11-2008, 03:49 AM
from tonight

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/IMG00029.jpg

cell pic :(

Mo152
06-11-2008, 03:51 AM
better than no pic ;)

Mr yarbles
06-11-2008, 01:42 PM
Betsr
Make your b a little more defined
Looks like it says detsr

Jo32o3
06-11-2008, 01:56 PM
MO152 those tags are wicked clean.

Bets369R
06-11-2008, 03:38 PM
Betsr
Make your b a little more defined
Looks like it says detsr


It was, the top of the B dripped down into the middle

white
06-11-2008, 03:48 PM
mo - your 4th one , the e looks to much like the p, but they are clean and look good
deso - like mo said, trying to hard
adre - the e doesnt flow, break it down with the rest of the letters

Kruxos
06-11-2008, 05:10 PM
http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/7669/dsc00025hf7.jpg

illustrate
06-11-2008, 05:35 PM
Looks fuckin clean to me, always been a fan of Halo's myself.

Mr yarbles
06-11-2008, 05:52 PM
Betsr I can kinda see that now
Keep working with that style it looks dope.

kruxos nice love them one liners
and yeah I like halos too as long as they're not look as long as the tag and done right.

IlikePie
06-11-2008, 06:31 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1213225335.jpg

Been making fun of some kids who think they're good on another forum.

Kruxos, not a fan of the R, but it's nice.
Betser, that's the kind of shit I like to see
Gupe, the 4th one is the best, but it still needs work. Rep the 303 harder bud :)
Adre, just not a fan, not going to say anything other than work.
Deso, no, don't do all that stupid shit.

(SoS)Viruz
06-11-2008, 07:04 PM
Mo- I the yp look like a backwoards 4. But the others are tight.

Crits? I need help and just dont say I need to go simple go into detail on what I need to change.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/CYZT.jpg

Shiva.
06-11-2008, 07:13 PM
in style 1 there is no flow, make the T smaller and try to use the bottom of the Y used in style 2
for style 2, make your T smaller
style 3, leave some space between the letters, make your T smaller and don't do the extension at the top of your Z, make it like a Z, straight lines.

you could also just take the letters from where you wrote "i write cyzt" and go from there.

this was for the beginning, afer that, work on the bottom of the C & Z and try to make it flow.

Mr yarbles
06-11-2008, 08:09 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/2hi9dg8.jpg
Just fucking around
I made it negative cus I used highlighter
Crits?

Kruxos
06-11-2008, 08:28 PM
LOL pie thats not an R, its an E, its how i did it for the one liner.

(tonaone)

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 08:32 PM
nice shit yarbles..
cyzt..try messing around with your 2nd style a little more..start getting a flow to it and itll look better

anywho..study the tags

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/Picture066.jpg

Mr yarbles
06-11-2008, 09:20 PM
Amuse
Shits dope, but there's someting about the s I think it's just too big in comparison to the other letters
Other thant that it's nice and it's got mad flow

Hater-AiD~>
06-11-2008, 09:22 PM
Amuse
Shits dope, but there's someting about the s I think it's just too big in comparison to the other letters
Other thant that it's nice and it's got mad flow
i just changed my s too..i dunno what to do with it at the moment..it used to be smaller but didnt really flow with the rest of it...now it flows..but i think it only looks good when its large like that..thanks for the crits though

pikser
06-11-2008, 10:00 PM
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/Picture047.jpg

crits

kayotix
06-13-2008, 05:29 AM
dude this is a tag thread

inkbits
06-13-2008, 06:30 AM
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p13185959.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
06-13-2008, 07:48 AM
^ sexy

Speedy
06-13-2008, 10:18 AM
What the hell?! All my posts from yesterday were deleted. :confused::mad:

cora
06-13-2008, 12:51 PM
i've been working on my tag and this is what i got now. crits?

http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/4058/corastyleal0.png

Mo152
06-13-2008, 02:59 PM
well you C is semi straight on the page, then the rest of them start drifting up, keep them straight. maybe make the letters bigger, they seem real small

Speedy
06-13-2008, 03:32 PM
Mo, am I going insane or is there really a whole page missing from yesterday? Someone told me to get rid of the add ons on my tag and I did and reposted it asking how to get more flow. Right?

Mo152
06-13-2008, 03:33 PM
yea, there were deleted posts. and yea you did i remember

Mr yarbles
06-13-2008, 03:53 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2ebv2tv.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2d91swj.jpg
Added a t aikrt now
I dunno about it though any thoghts?

cora lose the dots

Speedy
06-13-2008, 04:50 PM
Thought so. What reason could one possibly have for deleting literally a whole page though?
Anyway. I'm looking for a way to have less lines and make it more connected. I hate my A. I've tried about 30 other ways to make it and even though I don't like it at all, this is the one I stuck with. Anybody have any good samples? I'm pretty happy with my S, K, and L and I don't even know what more to do with the J. My main focus right now is the A though. I tried just "writing" like you told me to Mo. I got the same advice about 2 months ago. Then I slightly changed my letters each time and this is what I ended up with.

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8678/jaskaltag2kx0.jpg

I'm still not fully happy with it though. Could anyone write Jaskal and post it just so I could see something different to get my mind more open...

Speedy
06-13-2008, 04:51 PM
=X Sorry for the double post.

Thrice
06-13-2008, 05:06 PM
it'd help if it were rotated right keke, but none the less it's looking pretty good. I'd fix the H tho.
Crits please
http://i31.tinypic.com/e70x34.jpg
Speedy/Cora-go simple and slowly add style and make it consistent and flow well.
BUMP for crits

Mr yarbles
06-13-2008, 05:11 PM
usually I'd bitch at you and tell you to go to toy exchange
But whatever. Net time you want something though take it to the exchange thread

mad shitty.
http://i32.tinypic.com/ohthz9.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/13zofb9.jpg

Speedy
06-13-2008, 05:38 PM
Sorry. I should've looked. Thanks by the way. I want something less pointy and more curvy though.

cora
06-13-2008, 05:44 PM
new name.

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/7783/combhandsteezeez7.png

kayotix
06-13-2008, 06:35 PM
ur C sometimes sorta looks like an L, i dont think the style of your L goes with the O and M, dont think the letters flow together very well

kayotix
06-13-2008, 06:36 PM
a new version of my tag

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8163/kayoyc2.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
06-13-2008, 06:58 PM
^^^ that dosent say "kayotix" dose it???
looks like it says kapo with a backwards p

jerm_haf
06-13-2008, 07:09 PM
^^^ that dosent say "kayotix" dose it???

luster
06-13-2008, 08:12 PM
my friend wanted me to post these for him and he'd like some feedback on which one is better..
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/IMG_0685.jpg

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/IMG_0679.jpg

cora
06-13-2008, 09:01 PM
^they both look like 2 diff words but i like the 1st one. and any crits on this? my friend said my c looks like a d but whatever.

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3707/combonesteezeoz1.png

jerm_haf
06-13-2008, 09:11 PM
^I see what he means. pull the "c" off the "o" a lil bit and you'll have a pretty descent tag goin

luster
06-13-2008, 09:18 PM
like jerm said pull it of the o a little im feeling the rest of the tag
and yea it is 2 different names he wants to know which one looks better..

SAID
06-13-2008, 09:33 PM
luster, the dream one is nicer imo.
fix up the k in the first one and it'll look good too.
he should try writing "casket"

delicious-toy
06-13-2008, 09:43 PM
Thanks guys, im the one whos tags those are, im just a retard and dont know how to post flix

Anyone got anymore input or crits?

kroc_oner
06-14-2008, 12:49 AM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0045.jpg
also killed a buswith like 6 tags and a bench park and a few bathrooms i need to flick those probaly wont be able to

Mo152
06-14-2008, 02:39 AM
because i feeling like extra nice here you go jaskal. nothing special but a way to look at your name dif. way
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4125/img00139bo1.jpg

and some more gupey gupeness
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8223/img00142tf9.jpg
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/2204/img00141wg6.jpg
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5919/img00140cg2.jpg

kayotix
06-14-2008, 04:24 AM
gupe ur tags look clean, and no my tag doest say kayotix, it says KAYO

reb
06-14-2008, 04:38 AM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff215/Lachy911/searscannedtags.jpg
My shitty handsteez.

Mo152
06-14-2008, 12:34 PM
bigger pic?

Mr yarbles
06-14-2008, 03:09 PM
Maikrt
Thinking about dropping the t.
http://i28.tinypic.com/t000tf.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/20uqwwl.jpg
Going for a phillyish style

any crits?

Sear top left is best imo

gupe it looks nice
But second one down on the bottom your u looks like a y

MontanaPainter
06-14-2008, 04:24 PM
if you want to go for philly handstyles make em longer

good work though

MR.ROPER
06-14-2008, 05:11 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/dannyrodarte/IMG_0269.jpg?t=1213487542


critique my tag, i want to get better.

Shiva.
06-14-2008, 05:15 PM
seriously? you want to get better?

crit someone else's tag.

MR.ROPER
06-14-2008, 05:31 PM
yea im serious.

Kruxos
06-14-2008, 05:37 PM
youre a douchebag.

if you want people to help you out you have to contribute to the thread/forums.

Shiva.
06-14-2008, 05:46 PM
like critting someone else's tag....... ?? idea?

jersOneTIC
06-14-2008, 09:51 PM
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2606/tagixh2.jpg

Thrice
06-14-2008, 10:06 PM
Jers-I'd work on proportion, fix the J and 2nd E. Also i'd lose the question mark and squiggly line above it.
Crits please
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zygyft.jpg

jerm_haf
06-15-2008, 06:09 AM
^^^ #2
Jers: pretty fly

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
06-15-2008, 07:10 AM
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2606/tagixh2.jpg


jers preety frooshh....wut'd u use..a markathon blue ?

WoeInfinite
06-15-2008, 12:09 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/061508_15501.jpg
tryna' work towards a philly style kinda thing.
i dunno if im gonna stick with it.
any help though?

Mr yarbles
06-15-2008, 02:45 PM
Still going for that philly steez
http://i31.tinypic.com/x3d8g3.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/3478uj4.jpg

Woe it's good as a simple but nor really philly

Jers
It's dope Don't change it.

WoeInfinite
06-15-2008, 03:15 PM
whatr should i add or change to give it more of that feel?

Mr yarbles
06-15-2008, 04:16 PM
just practice
alot

I've kidna figured out that it takes fast controlled stroeks kinda
When you take it slow or stop in he middle of the letter it can pretty much kill it

Go and look up some philly handstyles and figure them out kinda and get the lettering down

I really can't help you too much cus I'm pretty bad at them and just trying to learn too

cora
06-15-2008, 04:43 PM
i love the color KEI but work on the handstyle.

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9352/combonesteezjo5.png

kayotix
06-15-2008, 05:16 PM
thrice isnt that the same pic of AHEM u submitted befor???

cora it looks ok but ur o m and n are a bit simple, like normal writing style, make them more stylish like the c b and w

mr yarbles, it looks pretty sick, even if it isnt true philly style you can see the philly influence so keep it how it is as ur own style

Thrice
06-15-2008, 10:29 PM
Ya it is, but I wanted more crit. Still do.

busr22
06-16-2008, 05:06 AM
i like simpler tagzzzzzz.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today031.jpg


this tag sucks but its on a turnpike barrier. we ran across it at night when there were limited cars coming. it hasnt been buffed yet either and its been over two months! it was a week or two after i started writing. my tags have much improved since. i will post another one later. it was writen with shaving cream.

Shiva.
06-16-2008, 05:35 AM
written with shaving cream???

Tonberry
06-16-2008, 02:35 PM
Busr... God no... For the love of god, no... I mean.. I wouldn't even call that graff, man.. That's just vandalism.

libra25
06-16-2008, 04:29 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4408/0219080132sy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

The_NaMEz_BaNKz
06-16-2008, 05:39 PM
^^ doze are fresh mayne...im diggin the boondockz too ..lol funyn show

braxtons a g
06-16-2008, 06:03 PM
busr-LOL.. keep practicing.. my shit looks gang related so i cant really say much..
jers-sexyyy :]

JETPACK!!
06-16-2008, 07:20 PM
Busr... God no... For the love of god, no... I mean.. I wouldn't even call that graff, man.. That's just vandalism.

what the fuck do you think graff is?

libra, that first one is ill. nice flow to it.

Mr yarbles
06-16-2008, 07:43 PM
busr
The s looks like a wierd k or a b
and the r i kinda wierd looking

INDEPENDENT
06-16-2008, 08:03 PM
good stuff jers
the j and e are good sizes.

heres a old tag...love doing simple tags but having dripz
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y108/313eminem313/graff/SSPX0223.jpg

Mr yarbles
06-16-2008, 11:13 PM
Lose the arrow
Or put it somewhere else
and make the d the same size as the othr letters
and the dot on the i looks kinda wierd to me
idk

It's pretty nice though

Volume_one_
06-16-2008, 11:15 PM
i'd say ditch that curle thing on the side of the O and make the D a little more curvy and for the top of the I i'd say make a cirle instead of a little dot, All this tag needs is some dramatic features

Hater-AiD~>
06-17-2008, 06:45 AM
new handstyle for new name
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/IMG00106.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/IMG00107.jpg

JOGA (YOGA)
jogameister

shun
06-17-2008, 09:43 AM
pretty blurry, but looks decent. i dunno if thats the style your going for, but spreading the letters out just a bit could help.

Hater-AiD~>
06-17-2008, 10:02 AM
i just like my letters scrunched together like that..i dunno why

AcosOne
06-17-2008, 10:07 AM
yeah thats a style you could go for... it just might look a bit flowier when they're not squeezed together... and independant, i kind of like the arrow... it looks quite fresh inside the O, idk... id have to agree with mr. Yarbles on the other things though.
ok my tag...
http://i32.tinypic.com/25zlatx.jpg

any crits on this one?

kayotix
06-17-2008, 10:07 AM
hateraid you got an other less blurry pics?

any crits?
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8163/kayoyc2.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
06-17-2008, 10:17 AM
hateraid you got an other less blurry pics?

any crits?
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8163/kayoyc2.jpg
id work with your 4th one..it flows until it gets to the Y..which i dont think fits any of them
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/3605/kayoyc2xu1.jpg
IMO

and no..ill have better pics later..im at work and i got bored so i took those on my camera phone

and acos...that tag looks nice

(SoS) Flu
06-17-2008, 10:39 AM
yeah thats a style you could go for... it just might look a bit flowier when they're not squeezed together... and independant, i kind of like the arrow... it looks quite fresh inside the O, idk... id have to agree with mr. Yarbles on the other things though.
ok my tag...
http://i32.tinypic.com/25zlatx.jpg

any crits on this one?

man that tag is on point man keep at it. there isnt anything i can say bad about it that you can fix.

smikoer
06-17-2008, 02:28 PM
Diso: Keep the D the same size and lose teh long arm off that arrow.
Joga: through the bad quality it looks ok. better flick?
Kayo: I like the style you're going for. The two Ks on the left i like.. although work on getting that O to match.
Acosone: The second O needs a little work.Otherwise, you're definately on the right path. keep practising!

1:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1184/46196728re2.jpg
2:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/152/60379232qs9.jpg
3:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8534/69051715vc5.jpg
4:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3500/16268534tv6.jpg

AdRe*
06-17-2008, 03:14 PM
I'm sad to say but very f**king excited to announce my new name
used to write Adre now I write Damen
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1341-1.jpg
Crits?

shun
06-17-2008, 03:24 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1341-1.jpg
Crits?

lose the halo. you dont have to connect every letter to the next, they CAN connect, but they should still be able to flow without a line connecting them. besides that... work more on your D and E. then you could have a good starting point for a tag

Mr yarbles
06-17-2008, 03:37 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/27wyx5z.jpg
simple
http://i29.tinypic.com/2igkfg3.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/154k29w.jpg
A bit of steez
Maek
Crits?

damen your m,e,and n are spaced out to much puh them in
Lose the arrow extension on the n
If you're going to have a halo make it small not the size of the whole tag

smik
They're dope as fuck
and you're like the only one who gave anyone crits
Good job :)

aco
Looks real nice keep it up

WolfBurrns
06-17-2008, 06:44 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/same.jpg

uhm... am i in the right place..?

smikoer
06-17-2008, 09:55 PM
maek: Thanks for the props. The first one is nice! Would love to see it done in a thick marker. Would be dope. The second one is a little sloppy.. watch the E and K. Also, perhaps lose the underline for now, it's a little distracting.

same: nice up!! 'nuff said.

Nine9
06-18-2008, 02:16 AM
Damen - The straight letters style doesn't work too well there, try rounding shit offalittle to make it flownicer.

Same - Dope spot, tag doesn't look right to me though for some reason.


Some I did yesterday. Still not perfect, kinda simple but it's getting better. First pic is best IMO, used a fatter cap and thick paint and it came out nice. Gonna use a fat cap all the time in future.

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/954/258802070840b3881ecalh9.jpg
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/492/2588020094c738a7063aya4.jpg
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/1808/2588024094264937d655pt0.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
06-18-2008, 02:17 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/same.jpg

uhm... am i in the right place..?

what a waste..you should have bombed that

*and to nine...what the hell are those lines next to your tag..it looks like a 9 with some random line going through it..imo i would get rid of that..but do what you do

Nine9
06-18-2008, 02:22 AM
It's coming off the e, into a 9 and underline.

shun
06-18-2008, 11:03 PM
maek: i like the first one the best. kinda oldschool style.
nine9: i agree with hater, i see where your going, but if you choose to keep it it will need some workin

taggage. these are done on a tablet, so the width is obviously a little messed up.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag1.jpg

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag2.jpg

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag3.jpg

WolfBurrns
06-18-2008, 11:59 PM
Nice S. :rolleyes:

Mr yarbles
06-19-2008, 12:22 AM
Alright thanks to everyone who critted me
I'm gonna keep the top style
But here's a slightly different one
http://i29.tinypic.com/28uhj0m.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/23v14jk.jpg

shun last ones best, it' got the best flow and the best letters imo
try and make your u and n a bit bigger

nine I can see what you're going for
But the whole 9 at the end needs alot of work if you're going ot keep it
Other than that though I think it looks pretty nice

Tonberry
06-19-2008, 02:09 PM
Nine, I like it, I'd just lose the underline thing.

Uh... I meant to fit the letters more tight and close together but I guess I was thinking otherwise when i did it. Crits, anyway?
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/zzzzzzzzz-1.jpg

Edit: It reads CERS.

MessTonic
06-19-2008, 08:37 PM
Nine9- Im feeling it, but you need to work on a little bit better of can control. Also i think that tag would look sick as hell flared.

Alien invasion
06-20-2008, 12:15 AM
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc73/kickXtheXbaby/021501.jpg
crits please.

smikoer
06-20-2008, 01:29 AM
Diso: Keep the D the same size and lose teh long arm off that arrow.
Joga: through the bad quality it looks ok. better flick?
Kayo: I like the style you're going for. The two Ks on the left i like.. although work on getting that O to match.
Acosone: The second O needs a little work.Otherwise, you're definately on the right path. keep practising!

1:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1184/46196728re2.jpg
2:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/152/60379232qs9.jpg
3:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8534/69051715vc5.jpg
4:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3500/16268534tv6.jpg

SELF BUMP for crits.. Appreciated.



http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/zzzzzzzzz-1.jpg

Bumping that too cause it's awesome.

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 08:13 AM
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc73/kickXtheXbaby/021501.jpg
crits please.


Alien...the one in the bottom right... bring the lettering closer together, I think it would flow better


crits on my tag???

MUSEone
06-20-2008, 08:43 AM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/501/0619081947aza2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Nine9
06-20-2008, 09:13 AM
^ I think with a wedge tip pen that might look better. You got a nice little flow with all the letters, but I think it can be tidied up a bit.

MUSEone
06-20-2008, 10:15 AM
That WAS w. a wedge tip nib...

shun
06-20-2008, 10:46 AM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag1.jpg

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag2.jpg

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag3.jpg
any more crits???

maek: those are sick man, keep it up.

alien: waaaay too much goin on right now. keep it really simple, and i mean REALLY simple. your style will be better for it in the long run.

maso: the halo on top of the A looks sloppy to me, and the S and R could use some workin, they dont really flow as well. overall, i thing it looks good, keep at it.

MUSEone
06-20-2008, 10:53 AM
Sure thing...

Um....try not making ur tags tall? Idk.

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 11:25 AM
Shun: on your 2nd tag, you see how the 's' goes into the 'h'... get rid of the crossbar on the 'h', just use the point on your 's'











...if that makes ANY sense... it's a miracle...

Kruxos
06-20-2008, 11:57 AM
no, dont do that, thats cheesy as shit.

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 12:00 PM
no, dont do that, thats cheesy as shit.

ok, so what would you suggest? let's see some of your shit.

Bazer
06-20-2008, 12:03 PM
that is cheesy.. he's making a tag not a logo...

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 12:26 PM
that is cheesy.. he's making a tag not a logo...

ok, great, but where is your input, mouthpiece?

Tonberry
06-20-2008, 01:01 PM
Hai, kan eye git sum critz? kthnx.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/n669267154_982144_1248.jpg

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 01:05 PM
Hai, kan eye git sum critz? kthnx.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/n669267154_982144_1248.jpg

only if you promise to use proper grammar from now on.

Tonberry
06-20-2008, 01:09 PM
Okay.

Bazer
06-20-2008, 01:17 PM
ok, great, but where is your input, mouthpiece?
what the fuck?? are you trying to be a dick or do you just come off as one?

shun, use the S in the third picture with the hun in the first one.

Tonberry
06-20-2008, 01:20 PM
...Crits?

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 01:36 PM
what the fuck?? are you trying to be a dick or do you just come off as one?

shun, use the S in the third picture with the hun in the first one.

a bit of both, but i was trying to give my input, and you just come in and be a wise ass

FeTuS
06-20-2008, 01:38 PM
only if you promise to use proper grammar from now on.

ummm, go back to paper....

Mr yarbles
06-20-2008, 03:08 PM
Fetus shut the fuck up
Nobody cares what you think.

JETPACK!!
06-20-2008, 03:19 PM
some new shit im tryin. fucked up the circle on the left.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/7214/rasekhandyte8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MUSEone
06-20-2008, 03:36 PM
a bit of both, but i was trying to give my input, and you just come in and be a wise ass

srry but saying something is cheesy because itd end up looking more like a logo and not a tag isnt being a wise ass, its called criticism. deal with it.

Nine9
06-20-2008, 06:06 PM
That WAS w. a wedge tip nib...

Oh right. Wider wedge tip then I guess.

Kruxos
06-20-2008, 07:19 PM
fetus wat the hell are you talking about,you asked for my input, and i had already given it, my input was not to fallow your input.

rasek - those swirls are really not comin across right, i dont think it fits at all with the rest of your tag. honestly i think it looks good with just the quotes. but thats just my take

fromthegrave
06-20-2008, 07:22 PM
rasek- dont make the K into a circle and drop the circle on the left. the rest is ok.
by ok i mean sick

Tokenkaligreens
06-20-2008, 07:35 PM
Rasek, Hmm lol I think the lil cirlcle things would work if you make it part of the R like how you did the K, but instead of flowing it off the leg use the 1st bar of the R. Work it it could be a pretty sick handy, but its also not that bad as is.

RezOner..
06-20-2008, 07:39 PM
rasek try raising the top part of your k so it doesnt look like raseh

azulman
06-20-2008, 08:18 PM
dear- looks good from afar

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l259/ericksteinberg/photo-1.jpg

just done like 20 min ago

I like this quite a bit. the mop is too sick.

Thrice
06-20-2008, 11:09 PM
Lose the accessories and circles rasek.

Fize
06-20-2008, 11:16 PM
Hey guys, please any criticism is welcome. Just started the past few days and have just basically been brainstorming tag ideas and came to find Fize is my favorite. Here is an example, and sorry for the quality but I had to use my shitty sidekick camera since my digital is broken =(.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/Fize.jpg

Mr yarbles
06-21-2008, 01:44 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/2z7l8ag.jpg
New hand kinda
Slightly new name
Might go out with it
But I'm not sure

rasek
Your style's dope
But I'm nt feelin the loops

FIze
Get a better quality picture if you want anybody to crit you

Shoook
06-21-2008, 02:37 AM
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/handy2.jpg

vus_01
06-21-2008, 06:42 AM
love it, shook...

rasek, nice but loose the lines..dope man

631...sick mop.....really god, like color sooo much ^^

me.against.society
06-21-2008, 11:34 PM
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk280/seconddark/mas0001.jpg

sacwacko
06-22-2008, 01:17 AM
jetpack - ok flow, bad structure thow.
fize - get a better pic, and practice a lot.
once - not bad but get rid of the frilly shit, thats better for pieces.
mas - start over, go simple, either use a smaller tipped marker or write it bigger.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/5.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/7.jpg

new name...look at the tags. crits pleazzzzzzzzz

vus_01
06-22-2008, 06:34 AM
that second is good, like it...just that underline iss too far from letters

Nine9
06-22-2008, 08:24 AM
Prefer the first tag.

AcosOne
06-22-2008, 02:13 PM
lol theyre basically the same... the fisrt one looks doper because it's done in marker and a bit cleaner ... try to keep the letters the same size and on one line the next time though, it looks like its on a slope compared to the underline...

Thrice
06-22-2008, 02:46 PM
mas-Go simple and work up with a slow style while maintaining flow.
aspek-Nice style, work on proportions a bit and the tilt of the letters. lookin nice tho.
http://i27.tinypic.com/6gif81.jpg
Crits please

sacwacko
06-22-2008, 03:32 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/3-1.jpg

a little somethin new. crits :)

Tonberry
06-22-2008, 09:36 PM
AHEM, I'd cram the letters more tightly so it doesn't look so loose.

ASPEK, It's looking pretty dope. The only thing I'm not feeling is the K.

Thrice
06-22-2008, 09:49 PM
Thanks man i'll be sure to do that. What do you think of the letters tho....seeing a philly handstyle in progress?

Tonberry
06-22-2008, 09:51 PM
Oh yeah, definately. I meant for that to be implied in my post :P.

smikoer
06-22-2008, 11:56 PM
Diso: Keep the D the same size and lose teh long arm off that arrow.
Joga: through the bad quality it looks ok. better flick?
Kayo: I like the style you're going for. The two Ks on the left i like.. although work on getting that O to match.
Acosone: The second O needs a little work.Otherwise, you're definately on the right path. keep practising!

1:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1184/46196728re2.jpg
2:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/152/60379232qs9.jpg
3:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8534/69051715vc5.jpg
4:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3500/16268534tv6.jpg

2nd bump for: talk&lack of crits. Helpful crits much appreciated!

ASPEK; shits nice, love your style although I think the extension off the A or the K needs fixing.
AHEM; ready for some taller+closer ones?

Shoook
06-23-2008, 01:23 AM
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/handy2.jpg

bump for crits , yo aspek handy is ill man

Mr yarbles
06-23-2008, 02:06 AM
http://i27.tinypic.com/5kkccg.jpg
crits?

Shuk make your s the same size as everything else

aspek
Dope.

ahem push your letters in closer

mas
Make your letters flow together
You're doing every letter as an individual you need to look at how the letters look compared next to each other

smikoer
06-23-2008, 02:15 AM
To those that haven't been critting.. please give crits to receive.. cause I'm damn hungry for 'em and have been critting.

SHUK: rotate that S around a bit to match how the other letters are sitting
YARBLES: not feeling that underline my friend

KASE2
06-23-2008, 03:00 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/shellmop.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/sloppymop.jpg

smikoer
06-23-2008, 03:41 AM
HEMP; haha nice name nice drips

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7595/oyzterae4.jpg
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1227/fghru5.jpg

mosezone
06-23-2008, 02:50 PM
just some shit from west coast/chicago trips
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01991.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01992.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01993.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01995.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01997.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01996.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01999.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00447.jpg

any crits possibly?

MUSEone
06-23-2008, 02:56 PM
Uve gotten alot better since that last time i saw ur shit. Keep it up.

I always love seein 2 tone solid tags.

KASE2
06-23-2008, 04:46 PM
im feelin it MOES

KASE2
06-24-2008, 04:00 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/petcohemp.jpg

drop one.
06-24-2008, 10:50 AM
shuk it isnt too bad i kinda like it has like a toy nyc steez to it


a bunch of ma tagz :)
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h40/chris_22_/DSC02961.jpg

Thrice
06-24-2008, 12:49 PM
Lose that P and O extension in the top and bot(also E has bad structure on mid stroke). Also lose the arrows and halo stuff for now. The one you need to work with is that middle left one, change the O and P, keep that Z and E, cuz they're looking real nice. I do however really like how your first two strokes on the P.

me.against.society
06-24-2008, 01:05 PM
poze - i like the third one

tried what you guys said and came up with thishttp://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk280/seconddark/tag02.jpg

Thrice
06-24-2008, 01:11 PM
Go real simple man, M doesn't go with the A, and that S looks like an 'e' with an extension.
Freestyle
http://i26.tinypic.com/14lkima.jpg

PHEANONE
06-24-2008, 01:23 PM
yo sup

intaout
06-24-2008, 01:23 PM
MAS-work on your letters lots, fill a few notebooks and loose the underline and quotes for now.
POSE- Actually the best one is the sharp one on the left middle. Put do the same as above^
HEMP- Love the simple effective style. keep it up
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/892/dsc0071pa4.jpg

mosezone
06-24-2008, 02:47 PM
just some shit from west coast/chicago trips
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01991.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01992.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01993.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01995.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01997.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01996.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC01999.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00447.jpg

any crits possibly?

bump to new page. phoe, shit's pretty nice except the E is sorta weird. really feeling the O though.

Thrice
06-24-2008, 02:55 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/14lkima.jpg
Bump for crits.

HEMP-Nice and simple, get more drips tho.
Phoe-tweak the O and E a bit.
Moes-Not liking that swirly S.

Waze
06-24-2008, 03:01 PM
lol, stuff i did late at night im bad alright but meh :D

Shiva.
06-24-2008, 03:14 PM
learn what a tag is

candykiller
06-24-2008, 03:31 PM
Just started 2 months ago. still trying to perfect my tag before I do anything else. And I can't decide which one I like more. You guys can decide which is better. Crits, please :]
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3699/moobj2.png

KASE2
06-24-2008, 04:19 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/petcohemp.jpg
bump ya dig

Fize
06-24-2008, 06:25 PM
So I am contemplating on changing my name to Nize since F is kinda tricky for me, especially in the start to do anything with.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00110.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00111.jpg

Wallace
06-24-2008, 06:30 PM
nize- needs lots of work on the flow, get your letters closer together as well

astro- im liking both of them, number two more though

GaZm13
06-24-2008, 06:44 PM
Just started 2 months ago. still trying to perfect my tag before I do anything else. And I can't decide which one I like more. You guys can decide which is better. Crits, please :]
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3699/moobj2.png

The bottom one for sure.

KASE2
06-24-2008, 10:24 PM
wat kinda ink u use 4 ur drips MOEs?

mosezone
06-24-2008, 10:34 PM
umm, i usually just use ****, but i believe those flicks are with like 1/3 fiebings and 2/3 ****.

KASE2
06-25-2008, 12:34 AM
fo sho

KASE2
06-25-2008, 02:13 AM
So I am contemplating on changing my name to Nize since F is kinda tricky for me, especially in the start to do anything with.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00110.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00111.jpg
ey bruh, id say try gettin more creative kuz it looks jus lyk regular writing, jsu keep workin

KASE2
06-25-2008, 02:14 AM
watchu think
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/darkhemp.jpg

vus_01
06-25-2008, 03:58 PM
like it astro like it....

and here is my tag wit da pencil...so whatcha think?
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/849/dsc00009jz5.jpg

Thrice
06-25-2008, 04:22 PM
Astro-in the first one I'd ditch that A, it's overplayed and doesn't flow great with the rest, none the less great job.
Vus-simple and nice, with something like that it looks best with a mop, get a flick of that and post.
crits?
http://i27.tinypic.com/ur1v7.jpg

beyondyereyes
06-25-2008, 04:39 PM
Ahem, have you tried using all capital letters? I'm not good myself with lowercase so try it out.

Judge the tag to the side.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/block.jpg

Thrice
06-25-2008, 09:03 PM
Keep it proportionate, and ya i've got quite a few diff styles of all caps, tried to get some nice lowercase ones now.

MEH2
06-25-2008, 09:16 PM
my handstlyes kinda whack...i need to work on it still
other then that im decent, i think lol.

KASE2
06-25-2008, 11:07 PM
wrong thread

lol, stuff i did late at night im bad alright but meh :D

KASE2
06-25-2008, 11:09 PM
bump
POSE- fix yo "e"

watchu think
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/darkhemp.jpg