View Full Version : Toy Tagz..only
vus_01
06-25-2008, 04:58 PM
like it astro like it....
and here is my tag wit da pencil...so whatcha think?
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/849/dsc00009jz5.jpg
Thrice
06-25-2008, 05:22 PM
Astro-in the first one I'd ditch that A, it's overplayed and doesn't flow great with the rest, none the less great job.
Vus-simple and nice, with something like that it looks best with a mop, get a flick of that and post.
crits?
http://i27.tinypic.com/ur1v7.jpg
beyondyereyes
06-25-2008, 05:39 PM
Ahem, have you tried using all capital letters? I'm not good myself with lowercase so try it out.
Judge the tag to the side.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/block.jpg
Thrice
06-25-2008, 10:03 PM
Keep it proportionate, and ya i've got quite a few diff styles of all caps, tried to get some nice lowercase ones now.
my handstlyes kinda whack...i need to work on it still
other then that im decent, i think lol.
KASE2
06-26-2008, 12:07 AM
wrong thread
lol, stuff i did late at night im bad alright but meh :D
KASE2
06-26-2008, 12:09 AM
bump
POSE- fix yo "e"
watchu think
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/darkhemp.jpg
vus_01
06-26-2008, 02:53 AM
yea thx m8ts...
yo beyondureyes-it nice, i like the O and U looks cool
about that whit mop. yea i have one for dripz...will try it out
peace
smikoer
06-26-2008, 06:00 AM
HEMP; you have that simple style down IMO
MOES; get that O to look a bit more tidy?
AHEM; get that bottom bar on the E to flow into the M if you know what I mean? and define that M a bit more.
ASTRO: definately the bottom one, just work on that R a little bit so the O flows with it. maybe work the leg on the R up to a higher point?
NIZE; smaller flick
GHOUL; I like it, that G needs working though. looks a little small
VUS; not really into 3 letter names for writers.. but it's simple enough
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/1786/mayntainormf5.jpg
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9494/oyzteraf2.jpg
my giving crits to getting crits ratio is about 12:1.. I should change names to.. ignoredoner. CRITS PLEASE AND THANKS!
MedTwo
06-26-2008, 06:15 AM
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/7622/image0116xz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
candykiller
06-26-2008, 10:03 AM
Just started 2 months ago. still trying to perfect my tag before I do anything else. And I can't decide which one I like more. You guys can decide which is better. Crits, please :]
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3699/moobj2.png
Bump for crits
CUBANO
06-26-2008, 11:13 AM
I love number 2.....they are both really good tho..i was a hard decision....
Id say if you were trying to perfect your tag to give up b/c both are fucking awesome.....
A+
But i just like #2 better....
dapallox1
06-26-2008, 04:14 PM
here are a few of my first tags. Kind of suck, but I think they are pretty good for my first ones.
This one, the character would of been better, but cops showed up, so I didn't even get to touch it up.
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f30/dapallo/summer112.jpg
This one the lines are not the straight because of wind, and I was in a hurry to get it done before it started raining.
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f30/dapallo/summer120.jpg
Shiva.
06-26-2008, 05:54 PM
this is the tag section, and work on your can control
and why did you draw a dick in your tag?
dapallox1
06-26-2008, 05:58 PM
haha, what? where is there a dick? Yeah, I realized that I posted it in the wrong section, sorry about that.
Shiva.
06-26-2008, 06:13 PM
well, in the second picture, the tag on the left. the N with extensions looks suspiciously much like a penis.
Speedy
06-26-2008, 07:28 PM
Astro your tags are both dope. I've been writing for almost a year and I hate my tags. You're only 2 months in and I don't see a single thing wrong with yours. Keep it up man.
candykiller
06-26-2008, 08:52 PM
Astro your tags are both dope. I've been writing for almost a year and I hate my tags. You're only 2 months in and I don't see a single thing wrong with yours. Keep it up man.
Actually...I'm a 14 year old girl. Surprise, surprise :D !!
KASE2
06-27-2008, 01:51 AM
^^^ thot i senced a bit of the female touch in the penmenship, the only thing id change is the "s" i mean its not bad i jus aint feelin how it flows in2 tha "a" but thats jus my personal opinion
Mr yarbles
06-27-2008, 05:24 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2ele6ug.jpg
Crits?
Dap
Lose all of your ad ons and go siple
Also why is there a red pile of shit?
med
Looks pretty nice
Lose the star on top move it to the side maybe
and lose te swirley thing on top too
Hemp
Looks dope
More drips next thime though
Just kinda looks like the kinda tag that would look good with drips
Speedy
06-27-2008, 11:19 AM
Actually...I'm a 14 year old girl. Surprise, surprise :D !!
=O Sorry. lol Regardless, keep it up.
remos
06-27-2008, 03:31 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/img049.jpg
i need new markers...Crits?
PB-n-JLB
06-27-2008, 05:23 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/9319/30591518ej0.jpg
Two names I use. I'm pretty new to this, so I'm still just on paper. Any crits?
Bump for crits
oh my god that was beautiful lmao! im not one for arrows in tags but you pulled it off pretty nicely :P
i see so many who use handstyles with funky ass little arrows in them every which way.. its almost a little annoying..
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/9319/30591518ej0.jpg
Two names I use. I'm pretty new to this, so I'm still just on paper. Any crits?
in the second one too much of that swirl on the "D"...keep your letters relatively closer in size to avoid giving people headaches..
i prefer the second to the first though
RezOner..
06-27-2008, 06:01 PM
candy theres a way to get like, get your ts to avoid having the weird upward loop, but still having them flow. when you write you t do the stem then the left side but then like.. double it over almost? its hard to explain.
HëRbN
06-27-2008, 06:23 PM
Smikoer- you dont really need any crits, shits ill man. im diggin the steez!
Yarbles- i like it, get a better camera though ; )
Dapollox- I would stick with paper man, no beef but you have alot of practice to do, for your peices start using bars for sure and your handstyle most definately does have a penis in it.
Medtwo- nice simple style, you rock it well.
Candy- the second astro is tight the first aint bad either keep it up!
Heres one i did for the battle that didnt happen lemme know what you guys think.
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9759/handstylesa8.jpg
I apologise for it being some bulllshit xO
And sorry for such a crappy pic, done with a metallic paint pen and snapped with a camera phone.
Crits?
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q155/hispequena06/pixyyyjpg.jpg
Smikoer- you dont really need any crits, shits ill man. im diggin the steez!
Yarbles- i like it, get a better camera though ; )
Dapollox- I would stick with paper man, no beef but you have alot of practice to do, for your peices start using bars for sure and your handstyle most definately does have a penis in it.
Medtwo- nice simple style, you rock it well.
Candy- the second astro is tight the first aint bad either keep it up!
Heres one i did for the battle that didnt happen lemme know what you guys think.
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9759/handstylesa8.jpg
haha, underneath chaos..maybe just one line? clean it up a bit so it's not so busy looking..sorry if it sounds weird.. xO
otherwise pretty sick!
HëRbN
06-27-2008, 06:45 PM
Order Out of Chaos, and i didnt have enough paper length for it to be one line. It was a first attempt at a new style.
Order Out of Chaos, and i didnt have enough paper length for it to be one line. It was a first attempt at a new style.
It's still crazy better than I'll ever do, so I guess nothing more for me to say other than to keep it up :P
I dunno what to do with that "X" in my quickie other than to write it like it is...help someone?
HëRbN
06-27-2008, 06:53 PM
haha practice, youll get it. My handsytle looked like ass before that one.
Try taking the I down like normal but then swoop it over and up to make this / line of the X. and bring the leg of your Y across the underneath your name. Just an idea to toy with. (No pun intended ;) )
haha practice, youll get it. My handsytle looked like ass before that one.
Try taking the I down like normal but then swoop it over and up to make this / line of the X. and bring the leg of your Y across the underneath your name. Just an idea to toy with. (No pun intended ;) )
haha why thank you :P I'll be back in this thread...soon?
And LOL at your sig....FOOL!
Edward"Sezer"Hands
06-28-2008, 03:49 AM
http://a117.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/57/l_c2f62b9a18fafc9366fdbe9647785edc.jpg (http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=108235143&albumID=1488308&imageID=18816577)
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/1111111-2.jpg?t=1214639727
KASE2
06-28-2008, 02:12 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/slzhemp.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/hwdhemp.jpg
Tonberry
06-28-2008, 02:29 PM
Sezer, I like everything except the S, and the only other thing I can think of to fit my personal preferance, is lose the heart on the R, it looks good already.
Hater-AiD~>
06-28-2008, 03:44 PM
Hemp - nice simple
Sezer - is nice..its different..i think the "r" is a little over done though
Herbn - Not really feelin the "O's"...also your "U" looks strange..it kinda throws everything off
Pixy - I wouldnt make your P and Y so fat..but thats just me
PB - I would take the advice to take the swoop off of that D..kinda makes it look like an S in a way
Remos - yes you do need new markers but its nice
Yarbles - pretty nice..somethin about that E...but i dunno
heres my shit..crits greatly appreciated and taken into consideration
When I first started using this name
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture094.jpg
Hittin the book first
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture107.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture102.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture103.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture101.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture104.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture106.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/handstyles/Picture105.jpg
Mo152
06-28-2008, 03:59 PM
Sezer, I like everything except the S, and the only other thing I can think of to fit my personal preferance, is lose the heart on the R, it looks good already.
haha too bad there is no S in there it says tezer. lol
hemp is a mad generic name, its a dope tag but the name is mad generic.
edward, its fresh as usual.
hater, you change your name too much
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3271/scan0003ps4.jpg
Hater-AiD~>
06-28-2008, 04:04 PM
im curious as to how I change my name too much..i wrote rate when I first started..then i left for a year and came back with amuse..i found out a shitload of people write that so now i write yoga..its not like I change my name for fun
letsgobombin
06-28-2008, 04:11 PM
you'll normally change your name a few times before you get one that you like i started with saint then rase then ryse then pox for like an hour and then pocs
Mr yarbles
06-28-2008, 08:34 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/4h309w.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/2din8l2.jpg
crits?
Joga make the first one a one linr
Looks like it should be
Overall I like the paper tags better though
Hemp
Pretty nice keep it up
Hater-AiD~>
06-29-2008, 02:06 AM
well that first one is just some practice that i got when i first started writing the name...the letters have been through some changes since then..thanks though
FABLE IR CRU
06-29-2008, 02:41 PM
All done with ILLLADEL ink & paint.
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill5.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill4.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill3.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill2.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill1.jpg
Tonberry
06-29-2008, 02:56 PM
Does that say Sabe? If so... Don't write that. There is a someone who writes Saber and he will probably eat your soul.
Shiva.
06-29-2008, 03:17 PM
it says Fabe.
FABLE IR CRU
06-29-2008, 03:39 PM
All done with ILLLADEL ink & paint.
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill5.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill4.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill3.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill2.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/ill1.jpg
Last page bump
yah id lose the extension on the F cuz it looks like an S
HëRbN
06-29-2008, 04:54 PM
yeah looks exactly like an S
CUBANO
06-29-2008, 06:17 PM
^^^Lol i didnt even know it was supposed ot be an F....looked like it said SABE.....
KASE2
06-29-2008, 06:43 PM
hahaha oh shit it sez FABE
whocares!?!?!
06-29-2008, 08:16 PM
for the battle
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/962/bombingsciencebk5.jpg
Noxer1
06-29-2008, 08:24 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/nnuszc.jpg
i havnt ben writing very long i write noxer1 my friend gave me the nsme any suggestions?
renegade185
06-29-2008, 08:26 PM
dont write that. do at least some research before pickin a name.
Noxer1
06-29-2008, 08:29 PM
why sholdnt i write it
renegade185
06-29-2008, 08:31 PM
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=2204&PHPSESSID=ba914ba224f78e300f2c7a07802b55c2
thats why
Noxer1
06-29-2008, 08:35 PM
are you kidding me that guy fucking sucks who cares if some fool around you wirtes it none around here does
your just jealous cus your a fucking toy bitch
FABLE IR CRU
06-29-2008, 08:38 PM
Yeah i need to work on my F
Noxer-DONT RITE THAT!!!THATS LIKE RITING COPE2 OR SKUF!
WhoCares-Is that the word for the handstyle battle?? I like that tag tho
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t11.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t10.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t9.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t8.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t6.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t5.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t4.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t3.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t12.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t2.jpg
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/t1.jpg
Mr yarbles
06-29-2008, 08:43 PM
Fabe
Lose the swirley extension on the f
It does look like an s
You can still make it swirl but not as much
and make the line in the f more defined
Noxer
ahahahahahahahahaha
You fail so hard
FABLE IR CRU
06-29-2008, 08:43 PM
are you kidding me that guy fucking sucks who cares if some fool around you wirtes it none around here does
your just jealous cus your a fucking toy bitch
Firat of all the REAL noxer gets up way more than u do.
Second his styles are WAY better than yours
renegade185
06-29-2008, 08:44 PM
are you kidding me that guy fucking sucks who cares if some fool around you wirtes it none around here does
your just jealous cus your a fucking toy bitch
im just tryin to save you some trouble. go ahead and put your shit up around town. you're the one thats lookin like a dumb ass.
Noxer1
06-29-2008, 08:49 PM
are you kidding i doubt he gets up more than me i geet up all around my fucking town
that dude just looks like some fucking toy his style is shit
Wallace
06-29-2008, 08:53 PM
Yeah i need to work on my F
Noxer-DONT RITE THAT!!!THATS LIKE RITING COPE2 OR SKUF
kid a couple towns away from me writes cope, fucking idiot. ive put him in his place on most of his throws and tags
noxer1- give up, or at least dont call yourself noxerone......
and you say you are so up in your city, yet you say you haven't been writing very long and your friend just gave you the name? you're bullshit kid
your tag even looks like a bite of noxer's
whocares!?!?! - i like it, i think the S should be one stroke though
FABLE IR CRU
06-29-2008, 09:02 PM
are you kidding i doubt he gets up more than me i geet up all around my fucking town
that dude just looks like some fucking toy his style is shit
When i see flicks i will beleive u
Noxer1
06-29-2008, 09:08 PM
why i dont got anything to prove to you fucking toy
besides im not retarterd i dont want to get all the cops on my ass
HëRbN
06-29-2008, 09:30 PM
nox post some flicks to bring the heat, talkin shit gets you no where. Cops aint gunna get on you just cause you post some pictures on here, pics are pics thats it. they cant prove shit. were all still free arent we?
Seriously tho the more shit you talk without postin anything just makes you out to be more toy. and 99% of people who call people they dont know nuthin about toy, are most likely toys themselves. Real recognize real homeboy straight up. and you got like 5 posts, dont start out like that.
Mr yarbles
06-29-2008, 09:35 PM
hah just leave it
He's probably just another sandstorm who thinks he's being hilarious.
KASE2
06-30-2008, 01:38 AM
my boy NEMS in tha pic
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/nemsyhemp.jpg
kinda sloppy on those street signs
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/bluesignhempynems.jpg
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 04:50 AM
are you kidding i doubt he gets up more than me i geet up all around my fucking town
that dude just looks like some fucking toy his style is shit
you are fucking pathetic...honestly...and very toy at that.
your handstyle is utter shit and you have the nerve to put a crown on it after writing for a few months?..post flicks or go kill yourself...if you did either one it would be funny none the less
lover
06-30-2008, 08:55 AM
photos from my blackberry
a painting i just did (i tried resizing it a million times i dont know what the fuck is up sorry about that)
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk447/jamestillisnotcool/IMG00168.jpg
everyone loves a fresh marker
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk447/jamestillisnotcool/IMG00165.jpg
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 09:19 AM
photos from my blackberry
a painting i just did (i tried resizing it a million times i dont know what the fuck is up sorry about that)
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk447/jamestillisnotcool/IMG00168.jpg
everyone loves a fresh marker
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk447/jamestillisnotcool/IMG00165.jpg
your 3d on that asterisk is really strange..did you have a vanishing point or what?
lover
06-30-2008, 09:28 AM
i screwed up on them
something i need improvement on
any other crit.
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 09:30 AM
i screwed up on them
something i need improvement on
any other crit.
not really..you have a nice simple tag...on that canvas..i wouldnt have filled yoru tag in with white..i would have left the bg..so the bg could show through the O..thats just my opinion though..i think it would have looked better
lover
06-30-2008, 09:46 AM
i was thinking of that once i finished and then i just rolled with it
i have a few canvas and if not the city is endless
ill have to try it out tonight or some shit
i think the one on the bench has good flow
other then the o a little fucked
what do you guys think?
thanks for the advice hater-aid
Thrice
06-30-2008, 10:13 AM
Lover-nice flow and clean lines.
Hemp-clean and fresh as always, keep it up man. Lovin it.
Screwed up on the end of the M, off balance, but you get the idea.
Crits?
http://i31.tinypic.com/15x979y.jpg
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 10:18 AM
Lover-nice flow and clean lines.
Hemp-clean and fresh as always, keep it up man. Lovin it.
Screwed up on the end of the M, off balance, but you get the idea.
Crits?
http://i31.tinypic.com/15x979y.jpg
dont connect yoru letters yet..those loops throw everything off
calculating infinity
06-30-2008, 10:23 AM
are you kidding me that guy fucking sucks who cares if some fool around you wirtes it none around here does
your just jealous cus your a fucking toy bitch
lulz. troll is successful
Thrice
06-30-2008, 10:24 AM
The loops are the point of the philly handstyle tho.
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 10:28 AM
The loops are the point of the philly handstyle tho.
I didnt know thats what you were trying to go for..i though you just tried to connect them like that..
either way..the tag needs more flow..youll get your loops down if you practice nonstop..its like learning to ride a bike
Slushi
06-30-2008, 10:30 AM
You're not from philly.
Thrice
06-30-2008, 10:30 AM
Ya once I get those down it'll have great flow, but for now I need to practice. Just posting what I have in progress so far to get the idea through of what it's going for.
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 10:36 AM
well keep those pictures documented somewhere on your computer so you can check and see how your progressing..say like every 3-4 days..sometimes its amazing when you go back and see what little changes you make here and there
Amase
06-30-2008, 10:46 AM
Its been a while since i've posted lol
lover - lovin the light blue and shits clean i like it
Thrice- i agree with everyone lose the loops and get that flow down
heres the new name
http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk391/Korpone/bold-1.jpg
sorry about the glare
crits?
hemp- im jealous of your name, cuz you thought of it first. love the tag, not diggin the P, specifically the pointyness of it.
lover- i would lose the extension on the R on the remax tag
ahem- i know you're going for that scripty style, but you gotta do something to that. spread it out, thicker marker, i dunno. if it was spread out it might flow better.
korp- tighten the other letters up to the O, too much space in there imo. i would also continue the upward stroke of the R and P all the way up, connecting it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag4.jpg
new tag. done on a tablet in photoshop with a caligraphy brush. im pretty happy with it, and wish i had a broad tip marker to put it on some walls ;]
Thrice
06-30-2008, 10:49 AM
You're not from philly.
Moving to Philly in September, so Im just practicing it and getting ready.
hemp- im jealous of your name, cuz you thought of it first. love the tag, not diggin the P, specifically the pointyness of it.
lover- i would lose the extension on the R on the remax tag
ahem- i know you're going for that scripty style, but you gotta do something to that. spread it out, thicker marker, i dunno. if it was spread out it might flow better.
korp- tighten the other letters up to the O, too much space in there imo. i would also continue the upward stroke of the R and P all the way up, connecting it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/tag4.jpg
new tag. done on a tablet in photoshop with a caligraphy brush. im pretty happy with it, and wish i had a broad tip marker to put it on some walls ;]
bump for new page
Hater-AiD~>
06-30-2008, 10:59 AM
fresh!
KASE2
06-30-2008, 11:32 AM
hahaha fo sho bruh, ey tho sadly enuf tell me y ur only about tha 2nd person whose known wat it meant
FLIP FLOP
06-30-2008, 11:49 AM
shun- i like the s but i think the tag would look better if u connected some of the letters, its still pretty good though
KASE2
06-30-2008, 11:56 AM
bump 4 life
my boy NEMS in tha pic
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/nemsyhemp.jpg
kinda sloppy on those street signs
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/bluesignhempynems.jpg
-GEKS-
06-30-2008, 02:03 PM
i like the hemp, the nems is sorta weird tho idk not feelin it
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/blueinvert.jpg
anyone wanna exchange or w/e i'm down
and crits 2
Thrice
06-30-2008, 02:13 PM
Nice style and flow man, im down for an exchange. What do you write? I write Ahem.
-GEKS-
06-30-2008, 02:29 PM
sor, essor, w/e somethin like that ha
i'll have urs up within the next 20-30 minutes
candykiller
06-30-2008, 02:31 PM
Just started 2 months ago. still trying to perfect my tag before I do anything else. And I can't decide which one I like more. You guys can decide which is better. Crits, please :]
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3699/moobj2.png
[To clear the air for future questions, yes, I am a girl] Thanks to to previous writers for giving me tips and idea's. Still working on it, though. Bump for new page.
-GEKS-
06-30-2008, 02:40 PM
2nd one is better, fix the r and the o, and get rid of that hideous underline comin from the o ha it kills it
edit: thrice my scanner is bein retarded, i'll try to get it up tonight but idk. its sayin its not connected but i'm lookin at it plugged in ha idk.
DanYone
06-30-2008, 04:01 PM
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm179/Danyone/DSC00510.jpg
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm179/Danyone/DSC00509.jpg
crits?
maso1
06-30-2008, 05:33 PM
Tag by my friend Nest1 when we were out bombing
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/G.jpg
KASE2
06-30-2008, 09:46 PM
^^ tell him 2 fix tha "t"
*SIZE*
06-30-2008, 09:57 PM
tell me what you think im just starting to try some new things.
candykiller
07-01-2008, 01:20 AM
Size, learn what a tag is
Amase
07-01-2008, 06:26 AM
http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk391/Korpone/HPIM0036-2.jpg
messing with it sorry about the blurryness
But i'm with Kase2 Nest needs to fix that T looks like a lower casse E to me
Hater-AiD~>
07-01-2008, 06:41 AM
id make the O a little skinnier..given the fact that the other letters are a little smaller...also the loop on the P
*Spectone*
07-01-2008, 06:44 AM
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/9496/0630082350xe2.jpg
crits please
Hater-AiD~>
07-01-2008, 07:12 AM
beautiful flow
*Spectone*
07-01-2008, 07:21 AM
thanks
Leadpoisining
07-01-2008, 08:27 AM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/P1000123.jpg
esnet1r
07-01-2008, 09:02 AM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/908/tenser9ur.png
Leadpoisining
07-01-2008, 09:06 AM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-81.jpg
-GEKS-
07-01-2008, 10:05 AM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/taninvert.jpg
made this for ahem
Shiva.
07-01-2008, 10:10 AM
hey, i wanted to say that.
only with "bitches" after that
give crits to get crits, bitches
-GEKS-
07-01-2008, 11:49 AM
i didnt ask for crits bitches
i'm doin an exhcange with ahem i dont care if u crit it or not
wat wat
H3TT1NG3R
07-01-2008, 12:02 PM
^lmao
TagsRover
07-01-2008, 12:12 PM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-81.jpg
It's kinda busy, but is that a porta-potty seat, cause that's pretty gross?
candykiller
07-01-2008, 03:38 PM
It's kinda busy, but is that a porta-potty seat, cause that's pretty gross?
I'm pretty sure its a trashcan...
Mr yarbles
07-01-2008, 04:02 PM
It says rein right?
well that arrow thing is usually used as a t
So I'd change it and put a dot
Shoook
07-02-2008, 02:55 AM
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/scan0001-2.jpg
Cin123
07-02-2008, 05:55 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/212.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/213.jpg
on the orange one the N is fallin
seywhat
07-02-2008, 06:52 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/handybattle.jpg
for the handy battle that never went up :(
cin- maybe make the bottom right side of the n more round
shuk- i dont like how the s drops down so far
rein- make it a bit more legible
geks- that ahem is lookin nice
Shiva.
07-02-2008, 08:53 PM
i didnt ask for crits bitches
i'm doin an exhcange with ahem i dont care if u crit it or not
wat wat
give crits to get crits.
and i you don't whant to get crits, why are you posting here?
and if it is for an exchange, do it in the toy exchange thread.
-GEKS-
07-02-2008, 09:37 PM
it just says post toy tags
u dont have to post crits if u dont want to
yo thrice u ever make me a handy?
blastblast
07-03-2008, 02:06 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00078.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00074.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00076.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00077.jpg
likin the simplicity of the first one blast but thats about it
Leadpoisining
07-03-2008, 02:18 PM
i dont like the arrow on the L
European style (Belguim, Antwerp)
wich one you like the most?
http://s226.photobucket.com/albums/dd128/Zotte_gek/?action=view¤t=3608024.jpghttp://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd128/Zotte_gek/3608024.jpg
http://s226.photobucket.com/albums/dd128/Zotte_gek/?action=view¤t=3608024.jpg
Mr yarbles
07-03-2008, 05:51 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/13yo609.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/rk0w8p.jpg
Just fucking aroudn last night.
Give crits to get them
Jesus.
sywhat
handstyles pretty nice
JETPACK!!
07-03-2008, 07:06 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4871/tag3wg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/4369/tag4sy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9774/tag5gd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2273/tag6qb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some shit from last night
unsuccsessfull
07-03-2008, 09:04 PM
^not really feelin the r but the rest is dope
Mr Tasty
07-03-2008, 09:08 PM
yea was about to say..rest is dope but work on the are...make the loop abit bigger
KASE2
07-03-2008, 10:18 PM
yea make tha loop match tha 1 in tha "e"
JETPACK!!
07-03-2008, 10:20 PM
word, thanks guys. ill do that for my next sesh
*SIZE*
07-04-2008, 03:51 PM
Sorry..wrong pic
sank.
07-04-2008, 04:00 PM
thought id post this here, some exchanges
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m258/si0n/IMG_1100.jpg
$1LENCR
07-05-2008, 12:29 AM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/908/tenser9ur.png
sick handstyle.
HELLOMYNAMEIS,
07-05-2008, 02:35 AM
RASEK: your shits always sick. but im not liking your R. make the loop a bit bigger? other than that, its dope.
SANK: i like your Bets and Rein, but try to space the last one out a bit, i cant tell if its "SKIREK" or "SAREK".
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk477/FELIX--/Picture123.jpg
Crits?
im messing around with new names.
i used to write MAKI but i hate M's.
i like the way SOK went together.
i havent researched though,
does anybody know if its already taken by someone?
feel free to throw up name ideas too.
FLIP FLOP
07-05-2008, 10:19 AM
Someone is probably useing it but as long as they arent a king and dont live near you i think you can still use it. it looks pretty good except for the K
Thrice
07-05-2008, 10:51 AM
Rasek-fix that R, lose the bottom connnectors, only looks good if you do it once, rather than 3 times. Lose the accesories, and i'd make that E capital. Also never do your tag more than once on a wall unless it's on you property so other writers won't see it, or if you do diff. handstyles. Most places someone is going to cross each one out and diss you bad. Also i recommend practicing with a mop, don't be restrained to paint. Simple tags like that look best with some drips.
HELLOMYNAMEIS,
07-05-2008, 05:39 PM
^^
Your S is a bit much for me, you need to keep it a little smaller and tighter so it doesnt look
like your attempting a crazy ass arrow. work out a better e. make it flow better, it looks slightly choppy. keep up the good work though.
sallybsk
07-05-2008, 06:27 PM
SOK... well work on it, it's good, but, you don't need that extension coming back on the 'K'. you know how it goes, keep it simple. :P
&&
sike... you don't need the S to come that far back, and try to find a new 'E'. Just like that guy said.
remos
07-05-2008, 11:48 PM
RASEK: your shits always sick. but im not liking your R. make the loop a bit bigger? other than that, its dope.
SANK: i like your Bets and Rein, but try to space the last one out a bit, i cant tell if its "SKIREK" or "SAREK".
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk477/FELIX--/Picture123.jpg
Crits?
im messing around with new names.
i used to write MAKI but i hate M's.
i like the way SOK went together.
i havent researched though,
does anybody know if its already taken by someone?
feel free to throw up name ideas too.
work on the E and mabye something different with the O
and someone writes SOKA chek out the okanogin thread hes getting up
WoeInfinite
07-06-2008, 12:51 AM
3 in the morning.
still tryna get that philly style down.
i give up...
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/070608_02331.jpg
HELLOMYNAMEIS,
07-06-2008, 01:13 AM
work on the E and mabye something different with the O
and someone writes SOKA chek out the okanogin thread hes getting up
It says SOK not SOKE.
there is no e.
thanks for the crit though,
im not quite sure what to do, but ill try to work out a new O.
Mr yarbles
07-06-2008, 01:14 AM
Woe Not to be a dick or anything
But it's not really philly
Make em tall and skinny
Make em walk you know?
Go out look on the philly thread here or on twelve ounce prophet
and study it till you can read it well and you start to get the feel for them try copy the letter strokes and all that and try and find real phillyheads ask them about what you're doing wrong and how you could improve it, because obviously talking to me isn't really going to help you.
Anyways, here's something from tonight
http://i25.tinypic.com/w86tkg.jpg
HELLOMYNAMEIS,
07-06-2008, 01:19 AM
^ im really diggin those drips.
but i cant make out the first letter.
Mr yarbles
07-06-2008, 01:24 AM
thanks
It's an A
HELLOMYNAMEIS,
07-06-2008, 01:27 AM
OHH, i see it now.
WoeInfinite
07-06-2008, 01:34 AM
yeah ive been tryin to get that tall hand down,
it just always looks weird to me with the tall W
idk ill work on it though, thanks
hammer_time
07-06-2008, 01:41 AM
yeah ive been tryin to get that tall hand down,
it just always looks weird to me with the tall W
idk ill work on it though, thanks
im not from philly or have any extensive knowledge thereof, but i dont think its horrible, i went back a page to track down what you were talking about and when i looked at it i knew immediatly what it was supposed to be before i read your words above the pic...
im sure someone from philly will have somethin mean to say tho...
WoeInfinite
07-06-2008, 01:48 AM
yeah i posted somethin in the philly thread just now.
so hopefully in the morning ill get some feedback...
cuz as far as i know all i gotta do is make it taller
haha i just mess around with it.
thanks though..
HELLOMYNAMEIS,
07-06-2008, 02:28 AM
http://i311.photobucket.com/albums/kk477/FELIX--/Picture123.jpg
Crits?
Bumped. For more crits.
im stumped on working out a new O.
hammer_time
07-06-2008, 02:34 AM
diggin the S, and the O. i am kinda biased tho, in my younger years i wrote sour, and i wrote my s's and o's very similar sometimes, with the downward hook on the s and the line in the o...
very nice, but the k just doesnt quite match the flow of the s, and the o. maybe try the loop back from the s, on the right side of the k's bottom leg so its not jagged like that...
if that makes since, hell i dunno, it might look worse too...
im not good at givin crits but im kinda drunk and it sounded like it would work in my head
*good-night losers*
$1LENCR
07-06-2008, 07:23 AM
Woe Not to be a dick or anything
But it's not really philly
Make em tall and skinny
Make em walk you know?
Go out look on the philly thread here or on twelve ounce prophet
and study it till you can read it well and you start to get the feel for them try copy the letter strokes and all that and try and find real phillyheads ask them about what you're doing wrong and how you could improve it, because obviously talking to me isn't really going to help you.
Anyways, here's something from tonight
http://i25.tinypic.com/w86tkg.jpg
nice shit.
im just not feeling the bottom line on the A.
but other than that, its a pretty dope tag.
mosezone
07-06-2008, 04:09 PM
is that etch?
i don't really need crits on these cause i know they suck horribly. they were done at super akward angles, and i didn't really get any flicks of some better ones. don't even really know why i'm posting them.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00455.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC00452.jpg
Mr yarbles
07-06-2008, 04:15 PM
Nah white acrylic
Bus tags?
Next time try holding on to the top to stabalize yoursef more
and go a little slower
I hate bus tags there so akward.
mosezone
07-06-2008, 04:45 PM
nah both were subway tags. and they could have been better if less people had been on, but it was in the middle of the day on a saturday in chicago, so i literally had a person right next to me, and all around me, so i had to look super inconspicuous while catching tags, ha.
modeswang77
07-07-2008, 01:17 AM
some pretty toy shit but im just startin out writing. I think it's been 15 days?
anyways, comment on the shit, tell me what you think. it's just a handstyle tag
haha the o is goofy but it's all i could come up with for the moment :eek:
smikoer
07-07-2008, 02:46 AM
Modes; remember to give crits if you want them..
Cool start. My advice is to go simpler with the letters because you're only starting and need to know what builds a letter. Once you can nail good looking simples you're ready to progress from there.. Post up a simple please.
Here's my crits on the tag anyway:
Lose the extension on the M. Don't need those quote things above the O. Lose those extension things off the D. Lose the line above the E. Do a different style S.. and also remember to keep all the letters the same size for now.
happy writing, keep at it
I guess I have to give crits to receive, even though I know virtually nothing about hand style :cool:
Modes - Try and keep your letters the same size and distance between. Like how your D and O is a lot smaller then every other letter.
Been writing for 2 weeks about this is what i got so far. I went a little crazy with the accessories but...
http://i29.tinypic.com/2r3ky8n.jpg
Says Burnt, been my nickname since 7th grade. bad quality.
MilkyCanvas
07-07-2008, 09:33 AM
Modes: Ditch everything, and start out with nice, simple, rounded off letters. Just casual letters. That's what I did a while back ago, and it worked for me. Just work with it.
Burnt: I like how you went simple. I just thought that your R was a P, and your T was an L. Maybe it's because I'm really bad at distinguishing letters sometimes. But on the other hand, they are pretty scrunched together. Keep the style, mix it up, practice, and spread 'em out just a little bit more. That's my opinion.
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2687/dsc01465zv9.th.jpg (http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc01465zv9.jpg)
It reads Measure. MSR for short. Crits please?
And yes, the A and R reallllly need work.
candykiller
07-07-2008, 06:05 PM
Milky: I like it, but like you said, you need work on the 'a', I don't think the 'r' is that bad, overall it's nice.
Nug: Make the 'n' stand out a little more and your 't' looks like a 5.
Mode: Work on your...everything.
Bumping mines -
(Still needs work. You guys can decide which one is better)
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3699/moobj2.png
Laze-
07-07-2008, 06:35 PM
Yea sweet them Astro
jerm_haf
07-07-2008, 07:45 PM
Im diggin the bottom one
agreed. lose the star (or whatever it is) at the bottom and your set
MUSEone
07-07-2008, 08:30 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8104/0707081543aez5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
*SIZE*
07-07-2008, 09:16 PM
Critz?
remos
07-07-2008, 09:19 PM
size- make it all the same size and try something different with the e
also from personal expeience i used an s like that and everyone thought it was a 5
MilkyCanvas
07-07-2008, 09:21 PM
agreed. lose the star (or whatever it is) at the bottom and your setI personally think that the arrow at the bottom looks great.
But that's just me.
MilkyCanvas
07-07-2008, 09:23 PM
Size: Give crits to get crits.
And trust me man, that is in no way simple.
What you need to do is actually go simple. Drop the star, the quotes, and whatever that stuff is at the bottom. Just start literally writing out your name in print, then keep working with it until you get something.
It's what most of us did.
MilkyCanvas
07-07-2008, 09:24 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8104/0707081543aez5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)You know...I have to wonder why you didn't put that on the nice smooth door to the left.
MUSEone
07-07-2008, 09:26 PM
Has that same wall shit on it.
*SIZE*
07-07-2008, 09:34 PM
i just think the s looks empty without anything in it i didn't know what to do with it....im working on another style right now just can't get my letters down..
candykiller
07-07-2008, 10:59 PM
Size: work on the 'S' and 'E' a little, lose the star, the things at the bottom of the tag need to go, and fix the quote marks so it'd flow better.
[ n thnx for the critz :) ]
Mr yarbles
07-07-2008, 11:38 PM
Size
Start over write your letters like you would in school
No add ons no nothing yet
Don't even rock an underline.
Most of the good handstyles in ehre are becuase of their letter structure not because they but a bunch of stars and qouts in it
Start simple and work from there
MilkyCanvas
07-08-2008, 08:07 AM
Modes: Ditch everything, and start out with nice, simple, rounded off letters. Just casual letters. That's what I did a while back ago, and it worked for me. Just work with it.
Burnt: I like how you went simple. I just thought that your R was a P, and your T was an L. Maybe it's because I'm really bad at distinguishing letters sometimes. But on the other hand, they are pretty scrunched together. Keep the style, mix it up, practice, and spread 'em out just a little bit more. That's my opinion.
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2687/dsc01465zv9.th.jpg (http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc01465zv9.jpg)
It reads Measure. MSR for short. Crits please?
And yes, the A and R reallllly need work.Quite honestly, I'll like this once you dig it Yarbles.
rsakens
07-08-2008, 03:33 PM
went on a building site and found some line marker so went tacking footpaths in my town that shit is funny and will stay for a long time =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00304.jpg?t=1215542085
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00312.jpg?t=1215542126
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00314.jpg?t=1215542151
some normal tags =]
tags
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00366.jpg?t=1215542956
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00373.jpg?t=1215543013
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00372.jpg?t=1215543028
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00367.jpg?t=1215543045
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00370.jpg?t=1215543082
rsakens
07-08-2008, 03:35 PM
fucking helllllllllllllllll
double post again ! =/
deleted this one please
Mr yarbles
07-08-2008, 03:37 PM
Milk it's pretty good
It's a good start, the letter structure is alot how mine started out
Maybe make the a less of a star and push your letters a little bit closer in
Keane that's dope
Keep that up
I like how your k's and r's have that ninja kick kinda thing going for them
haha
letsgobombin
07-08-2008, 03:38 PM
i got some of that line marking stuff but mine sprays like a 2 inch wide line, anyway, they're kinda hard to make out and it would look much better if it was a fatter line, your n can sometimes be confusing and so can that bit coming out of the s on the rsa, but otherwise some fresh original tags
size- give crits to get crits next time but just go simple for now like SIZE
mopin dopin mike
07-08-2008, 11:04 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/287nom1.jpg
injury
07-08-2008, 11:41 PM
METE, right? i feel the first M big time and even the E after that but differentiate the T, make it more noticeable, and i'd have that long line off the 2nd E go under the letters, not through them.
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk212/sneakatack/100_1126.jpg
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk212/sneakatack/100_1142.jpg
^^ playin around with krylon 360
WoeInfinite
07-08-2008, 11:57 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/graffiti142.jpg
fuckin around in chem class with a highlighter and a fine point sharpie...
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/graffiti116.jpg
old.
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/041108_16371.jpg
first woe tag i caught..
super faded Violet flowpen...
remos
07-09-2008, 12:56 AM
i like the w in the green one woe :)
WoeInfinite
07-09-2008, 12:58 AM
thanks, im workin on the handy, i thought it was dope, then i saw propers and gesus's and all them
haha
BadlilDuck
07-09-2008, 01:08 AM
haha the mass one looks sumin lyk gesus's and i like that green woe as well.
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00037.jpg
messin around wit diff names
WoeInfinite
07-09-2008, 01:18 AM
i like the first two, the K is dope.
haha yeah i got a lil inspiration from him..
modeswang77
07-09-2008, 01:23 AM
I guess I have to give crits to receive, even though I know virtually nothing about hand style :cool:
Modes - Try and keep your letters the same size and distance between. Like how your D and O is a lot smaller then every other letter.
Been writing for 2 weeks about this is what i got so far. I went a little crazy with the accessories but...
http://i29.tinypic.com/2r3ky8n.jpg
Says Burnt, been my nickname since 7th grade. bad quality.
nice and simple start, but the letters seem to be too close, I have to agree that the "R" does look like a "P" and the "T" does look like an "L"
just keep writing, over and over and over, your letters will develop naturally
you just have to be patient
modeswang77
07-09-2008, 01:28 AM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/8317/sikehandstyleai1.png
crits please.
the "S" is a little out of control, work on a different "e" and just work with new ideas, write it over and over til it flows a bit better
modeswang77
07-09-2008, 01:51 AM
so here's the simplified Modes
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p350/modeswang77/Modessimp.jpg
crits?
modeswang77
07-09-2008, 01:57 AM
Critz?
you're WAY over doing EVERYTHING
start from scratch with very simple letters
we all know we all want to advance quickly but rushing it is definitely not the answer
really simplify things so much more and just let it work itself out over time...
and for the time being, ditch all of the extra things going on, all of that shit will come into play when or even if it needs too
let the handy flo from the heart
modeswang77
07-09-2008, 02:16 AM
Modes: Ditch everything, and start out with nice, simple, rounded off letters. Just casual letters. That's what I did a while back ago, and it worked for me. Just work with it.
Burnt: I like how you went simple. I just thought that your R was a P, and your T was an L. Maybe it's because I'm really bad at distinguishing letters sometimes. But on the other hand, they are pretty scrunched together. Keep the style, mix it up, practice, and spread 'em out just a little bit more. That's my opinion.
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2687/dsc01465zv9.th.jpg (http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc01465zv9.jpg)
It reads Measure. MSR for short. Crits please?
And yes, the A and R reallllly need work.
the "R" isn't so bad, but i think you should fix the sizes just a tad. the first "S" just seems like it's too big
the "S" on the "MSR" tho is pretty dope, it's a little more together
yes the "A" needs some work, make it look more like an "A" and dont keep it too scrunched
the second "e" looks pretty good too
BadlilDuck
07-09-2008, 03:17 AM
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p350/modeswang77/Modessimp.jpg
lose that connecting line in between o and d and maybe make the edges rounder? idk just my point of view dunno bout others
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/IMG00037.jpg
messin around wit diff names
crits? =)
smikoer
07-09-2008, 03:24 AM
so here's the simplified Modes
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p350/modeswang77/Modessimp.jpg
crits?
MUCH better! Keep us posted as you progress.?
will post up a couple laterrr
Mr Tasty
07-09-2008, 04:35 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/Picture762.jpg
injury
07-09-2008, 09:17 AM
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk212/sneakatack/100_1126.jpg
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk212/sneakatack/100_1142.jpg
^^ playin around with krylon 360
criticisms anyone? i didn't get em last time... and offered some
hook me up with some genuine internet advice
Shiva.
07-09-2008, 10:51 AM
taste, i love your style. glad to see you back.
rsakens
07-09-2008, 12:37 PM
suspek
that first tag in gold is fresh =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00385.jpg?t=1215621718
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00372-1.jpg?t=1215621737
Kruxos
07-09-2008, 01:19 PM
criticisms anyone? i didn't get em last time... and offered some
hook me up with some genuine internet advice
yo yo is that in DC? near SJC. its a pretty nice simp, goes together nicely
BadlilDuck
07-09-2008, 09:54 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00385.jpg?t=1215621718
mmmm yellow me likey
Shiminator
07-09-2008, 11:10 PM
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p50/Shiminator/IMG_3139.jpg
modeswang77
07-10-2008, 12:04 AM
SKER new word
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p350/modeswang77/SKER.jpg
crits?
$1LENCR
07-10-2008, 01:07 AM
criticisms anyone? i didn't get em last time... and offered some
hook me up with some genuine internet advice
i like the flare on the last letter on the second flick.
good shit.
stay up.
sker- , yeah start simpler and don't make connections if its not a oneliner
Shiminator
07-10-2008, 02:56 AM
Any crit on mine?
Mr yarbles
07-10-2008, 03:00 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2eoclk2.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/ae1eo9.jpg
Few from tonight
You guys need to start giving crits if you expect shit.
Taste that's some of the freshest shit I've seen in a while
:)
modeswang77
07-10-2008, 03:42 PM
yarbles- fresh shit, not diggin the quotes tho, but tht's just me, i also can't read it, but im new and toy as fuck so really, what do i know?
arrangement of letters and new E
the R and S are a little fucked up
fucks the flow at the end
KERS
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p350/modeswang77/KERS.jpg
RESK
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p350/modeswang77/RESK.jpg
I think RESK flows a bit better
but once again what do i know
crits?
Shiminator
07-10-2008, 03:45 PM
Resk looks a bit better, but I'm a toy. Anyways, I think if the letters were smaller and pushed together more, they would look better. Just me, though.
modeswang77
07-10-2008, 03:51 PM
suspek- dope ass gold tag, really diggin that first one
Taste- sick style
shim- when you post, put the name up as well, im guessing it's BRAINE? fix on that a and e. the a is just weird, all swirly an shit
Wallace
07-10-2008, 06:11 PM
KERS- get your letters closer together and work on your flow
Mr yarbles- AEK?
Suspek- fresh, top one
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/6538/phone0020xw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4601/phone0021dq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Mr yarbles
07-10-2008, 06:39 PM
AEKZ
Lasic that's pretty dope keep that up
FLSteele16
07-10-2008, 07:24 PM
This is my tag crits welcome.
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5792/scan0007ed9.jpg
Wallace
07-10-2008, 07:25 PM
flow, ditch the halo
Shiminator
07-10-2008, 08:19 PM
Ah, alright. I'll keep practicing.
Mr yarbles
07-10-2008, 08:19 PM
Cosmic
Spread your letters out don't let then overlap makes it look really sloppy
Make your I as big as all the other letters and lose the circle dot on it make the dot a line or something but don' make it into an x that's cheesy
Lose all the accesories for now. maybe just an underline
Kers
It's got alot of potential at this point
Make the bottoms level or give it an underline to make them appear level
The resk looks better
Just keep writing it over and over again and your style wll start to adapt to it
commongoals
07-10-2008, 08:23 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g112/zakkkisrad/Photo318.jpg
Wallace
07-10-2008, 08:25 PM
keep writing for a very long time, thats almost normal bad handwriting...
Mr yarbles
07-10-2008, 08:35 PM
Yeah that looks like some gangshit or something
No offence
Your a and o ar the only things that are good in this
Keep working
Alot.
modeswang77
07-10-2008, 10:03 PM
Cosmic- give crits to get crits
yarbles-thanks, i appreciate it, it's nice to know my shit's comin around
modeswang77
07-10-2008, 10:16 PM
Lasic- fresh shit mang
ARKO-uh shit man, make it real simple, almost like regular print. look at your key board and copy the letters how they are on there. just keep writin them over and over and eventually you'll develop some style into them. go thru this site and read all the graff you can and just write write write. read alot of the stuff in the toy forum
mekosbc
07-10-2008, 10:34 PM
how do you connect an e to an s in a one stroke tag? i cant seem to get it... seemz immposible... i try to come up with wayz but they look like shit...
BadlilDuck
07-11-2008, 12:17 AM
if u cant do it dont do it
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/septa.jpg
Crits Please!!It says Septa if you cant read it. I need help on a "t" and a "p."
yarbles::Looks fresh...
Resk::Practice more, looks like regular handwriting.
Lasik::Dope shit...
common::your shit is plain as hell, keep practicing.
Wallace
07-11-2008, 12:42 AM
on the top one your e and p blend together to look like EK
Lol i dont really see it.
modeswang77
07-11-2008, 01:03 AM
noxi- try a rounded loop on the P, maybe that will help. It will make it flow a bit better too. also on the first one, fix the a so that the top line doesn't connect to the loop on the left side, if that makes sense
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/septa.jpg
Crits Please!!It says Septa if you cant read it. I need help on a "t" and a "p."
yarbles::Looks fresh...
Resk::Practice more, looks like regular handwriting.
Lasik::Dope shit...
common::your shit is plain as hell, keep practicing.
bottom page bump.
And mode I'll try that out and post pics tomorrow. Thanks
Mr yarbles
07-11-2008, 02:13 AM
http://i33.tinypic.com/o52vb4.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2u7lp48.jpg
A couple more pen tags.
Septa
Lose the dot in the p and make the square part alot smaller
Make your t uppercase
Lose the wierd attatchment on the a
thesecks
07-11-2008, 06:27 AM
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/5562/53199580nc6.jpg
rsakens
07-11-2008, 09:05 AM
keep ignoring my shit bitches =)
haha just messing tell what you think of my new stuff
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00390.jpg?t=1215708236
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00367.jpg?t=1215543045
went on a building site and found some line marker so went tacking footpaths in my town that shit is funny and will stay for a long time =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00304.jpg?t=1215542085
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00312.jpg?t=1215542126
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00314.jpg?t=1215542151
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00366.jpg?t=1215542956
thats enough for now =]
remos
07-11-2008, 01:17 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/img049.jpg
newer style
srry bout the shit marker
crits?
Aska.
07-11-2008, 01:30 PM
keep ignoring my shit bitches =)
haha just messing tell what you think of my new stuff
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00390.jpg?t=1215708236
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00367.jpg?t=1215543045
went on a building site and found some line marker so went tacking footpaths in my town that shit is funny and will stay for a long time =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00304.jpg?t=1215542085
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00312.jpg?t=1215542126
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00314.jpg?t=1215542151
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00366.jpg?t=1215542956
thats enough for now =]
your ground tags are so dope.. take them all city
Mr yarbles
07-11-2008, 04:35 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/apbgg.jpg
Tries at a one liner.
Keane still fresh
Secks don't write master.
WoeInfinite
07-11-2008, 10:11 PM
i like that tall hand you got goin there..
still workin on mine..
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071108_15491.jpg
A couple more pen tags.
Septa
Lose the dot in the p and make the square part alot smaller
Make your t uppercase
Lose the wierd attatchment on the a
Aiite thanks. Ill try and post a pic later tonight of what you guys said.
edit::
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/noname-2.jpg
I kinda messed around with it and did what modes and yarbles said.
shits fresh yarbles and same with keane.
And WOE, try changing the E a bit. Looks sick other than that.
modeswang77
07-12-2008, 12:53 AM
woe-the E reminds me of some clockwork orange shit, like alex's mask. what i mean is don't extend the middle too far out...
septa-just keep on workin mang
remos-not diggin the last, whatever that is, looks like an unfinished heart :/
keane-dope shit for real
yarbles- alot better than i could do, but im not diggin the S, looks like a music note er somethin
secks- not diggin the stye too much, and make a new word, you're not a master
WoeInfinite
07-12-2008, 01:15 AM
yeah i feel you guys on the E
haha
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071108_16061.jpg
changed it up..still fucked up the fucking E
=.=
maybe jsut do a lower case one? or does this one match better if i shorten the middle?
Scratch
07-12-2008, 01:17 AM
septa either the top left or the bottom farthest to the right, keep it simple, none of that 4 stuff.
my shit
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/yaek.jpg
Mr yarbles
07-12-2008, 01:32 AM
woe
Make your e taller looking it looks a little short for a tall hand
Extend the first storke of your e past the middle and don't push the middle out too much
Lose those lines around your halo
and add some kind of philly arrow in there or something looks kinda plain
Also I havn't realy seen too many lowercase e's unless you're trying to script
It's getting there
Philly's confusing as fuck just keep at it
WoeInfinite
07-12-2008, 02:06 AM
yeah tell me about it..mad confusing.
haha
thanks though, ill work on it in the morning..
Lemz24
07-12-2008, 05:36 AM
Ur stuff is so dope rsakens. I love the handstyle bro
What you guys think of this...
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa122/HannebauerNHK/11-07-08_0121.jpg
Lemz24
07-12-2008, 06:08 AM
So just do my tag simpler??
rsakens
07-12-2008, 06:18 AM
thankx guys for the comments on my shit above
septa either the top left or the bottom farthest to the right, keep it simple, none of that 4 stuff.
my shit
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/yaek.jpg
nice you start to get in to flares
the basik letters of the tag could still use
some work man slow down a bit and keep them simpler
noxi leaf some more space in between the letters
WoeInfinite woe wde ? i like it keep them coming man
Mr yarbles why are you try to burn with oneliners ?
try to get a striate letter tag down first of all =]
remos that shit looks alright :) just a lil sketchy and i don't like the scribble in the background
Lemz24 like the man sad above simpler is better hommy ¦¬]
rsakens
07-12-2008, 06:46 AM
the last one is alot worste 1st is ok but not good
do normal strate letters and then take a
good look at them and find the right place to bend them around a lil
letter for lettter ofer and ower again you will figure it out after a vile
just take your time and don't go wild from the begging on that shit ain't working
Lemz24
07-12-2008, 06:56 AM
Alright rsakens
So 1st one is aight but work on it
and 2nd one is shit.
Thanks for the crit
WoeInfinite
07-12-2008, 01:49 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071208_01471.jpg
entry for dialbo3 handy battle...prolly shouldnt have even entered it
oh well...i was bored.
mekosbc
07-13-2008, 12:11 AM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0033.jpg
Scratch
07-13-2008, 01:00 AM
septa either the top left or the bottom farthest to the right, keep it simple, none of that 4 stuff.
my shit
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/yaek.jpg
bump
BadlilDuck
07-13-2008, 01:20 AM
woe shorten the middle thingy on the e
septa - stay simple sumin lyk the one next to 7 develop that cuz it has potential
scratch- no idea wut it says
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/DSC01046.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/DSC01049.jpg
mucked around wit drips :D
mekosbc
07-13-2008, 01:23 AM
yo woe lol i do the dripz haha good shit it lookz ight
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