Tags

[EgoZen]

aw im loved yo:D

Finally I have a sig :P

[Mello]

havnt got a cam at the moment so have to settle for a shitty pc pic, looks alot smoother and less bunched up with a marker
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/8848/tagsca5.jpg

crits?

bump.

and

mekosbc - tight, get out of the toy section :p
zen - loving the whispy blue one, just sort out the N a bit heh
woe - looks good, like you said just work on the E :)

[Mr yarbles]

Spread your letters out more
It's hard tot ell what it says
Your letter structures good thoug so keep those letters.

zen put your letters closer together
try using the z from the paper tag and put it with the e and n of the blue tag.

[WoeInfinite]

Finally I have a sig :P

scoooooore

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217625567.jpg

Boredom.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i37.tinypic.com/4h70np.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/785.jpg
fucking around with a new e

pie I don't like your e ina nte
But evrything else is on point

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217626238.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1217626826.jpg
Yeah, I know I fucked the E over in that one. But some more fuck arounds.
Drop that first hand, like as in get rid of it, and keep working on the second one. Play with letter sizes and positions, it makes your handy look more fun.

[GimmieGotShot]

zen; id say work on your e a nd n
noe; dope
lmone; nice
ante; you fucker. always switching lovers.
yarbles; ill shit!

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk190/gimmiegotshot/reepher.jpg

[IlikePie]

That's mister Pie, not Ante :(

[GimmieGotShot]

Gah sorry. Marijuana plays trickes on you :(

[mikeattack]

You are pretty good. add some stuff mabey like a squiggle or a arrow

[EgoZen]

You are pretty good. add some stuff mabey like a squiggle or a arrow

:rolleyes:
Nice joke...
Thank you, I`m feeling like shit already and you just made it worse...

[GimmieGotShot]

u cant take shit to heart on here
or you'll never survive

[EgoZen]

u cant take shit to heart on here
or you'll never survive

Look at mine and your post count...
And anyway I`m feeling bad cause today everything has gone wrong...
I even almost crashed my car today..

and I didn`t had any coffee :mad:

to the below post:
It is not about the post count..
It is about what he said...
That I will never survive...
As you see I`m quite a time on here and so I know
how the regime on here is..

[Mr yarbles]

Oh shoot, watch out for this cat, he's got mad posts on bs.
So hardcore :rolleyes:

[mikeattack]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e313/mike-rehab/rehab_3.jpg

crits please...

[Cesk]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2yl2242.jpg
What one do you prefer?
And any tips with my handstyle? I know it shitty.

[Wallace]

rehab and cesk

keep practicing for at least a few weeks, then come back asking for crits. work on flow and style.

[Cesk]

rehab and cesk

keep practicing for at least a few weeks, then come back asking for crits. work on flow and style.

Haha yeah man, i just switched to this name today, so I mean do you have any tips? Besides flow and style?

[Wallace]

not really, those are very important. try and get your letters a little closer and ditch the addons

[WoeInfinite]

woo i suck.
i wanted to add something like everyone does er, and ism and shit, but woer? woeism is alright..but idk
doesnt sound good.
so i made woezr, woeski and woesef:]
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/080208_17111.jpg

[EgoZen]

woeski nice!

[CAN-KILLER]

the woeski is nice

[I GOT CLOUT]

I think the Woesef looks the best, but Woeski is the better name.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16193.jpg

[mekosbc]

dope ass tag lovin the s..


and woe ur hand style is getting better

[alph]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p120/alfffpub/DSCF8347.jpg
Crits?

[Wallace]

lose the arrows work on your flow, come back in a couple weeks

[terkoe]

http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q291/tonygspot/toyalleysin.jpg

[Wallace]

you got lined for a reason, stick to the books for a while

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/4kustx.jpg
Didn't juice the nib enough :/

Sin go simple sketch more
Stay off the streets.

alph lose your arrows go simple.

Easer dope hand looks like it dosn't really have control to it though, try not to overlap the letters too much

woe the woezr hand did it for me keep that imo, your handies are getting pretty dope

[Wallace]

yarbles thats one of your first tags that ive had trouble reading :confused:
edit- i see the aekz now it just took a minute, the tall K screwed me up

ive caught so many tags lately but no pics :(, ill try and get some soon

[Mr yarbles]

hah me too, but I usually go out the next day to get flicks, and this place is becoming buff city :(
I need to get some better ink

[WoeInfinite]

thanks for all the crits guys!
:)
yarbles that looks like you were inna rush man.
easer thats tight man, lovin the E's and the S

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0031.jpg?t=1217760156
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0030.jpg?t=1217760097
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tag.jpg?t=1217760007
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0035.jpg?t=1217759934
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0004-1.jpg?t=1217759884
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0032.jpg?t=1217759905

[EgoZen]

What do you write?
Ke4vne
Keaxle
Kessa or what?

[rsakens]

ha ha no i write keane

nessa was just for fun

[merp13]

@rsakens = nice tags... like the 4th pic the best
@Mr yarbles = cant really read it .... abit messy keep it more simple. not bad though
@terkoe = keep practicing mate ... make the letters smaller and closer in and forget about the arrow coming of the N

ok here is my merp13 tag.
i done it with my new squeezer filled with krink
http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l184/nath2006/DSCF0225.jpg
please give critz so tell me what you think and how i can improve it . thanks

[Mr yarbles]

http://i36.tinypic.com/v6137o.jpg
Different one fucked up the o
and yeah the other one was rushed and it was a really small space.

keana those handsteezes are dope

merp it looks good, but kinda hard to tell from that angle

[rocketeer]

looks good merp, but i'd say clean up the "M" because it looks like maybe an "a" and an "n", get rid of the quotes and bring the underline up so it crosses the R and P.

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0031.jpg?t=1217760156
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0030.jpg?t=1217760097
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tag.jpg?t=1217760007
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0035.jpg?t=1217759934
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0004-1.jpg?t=1217759884
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0032.jpg?t=1217759905

new page bump

[Mr yarbles]

http://i33.tinypic.com/o6h4xf.jpg
Damn thought I'd get this up before anyone posted.
Just a couple different styles

[WoeInfinite]

ha i like those yarbles..
especially the one with the arrow under it.

[respERATION]

i'm loving your K

[boobies!]

new name, cream.
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q22/Kranks1/IMG_1108.jpg

yarbles - looks pretty good, space out letters a bit more.
rsak - keep it up

[Scratch]

honestly i cant read that as cream

[Mello]

new name, cream.
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q22/Kranks1/IMG_1108.jpg

yarbles - looks pretty good, space out letters a bit more.
rsak - keep it up

took me a little while, but i can see the C,E,A,M, that R has got me though.

[Scratch]

i see the r, but if i no one had told me that said cream itd be incomprehensible. just make it a little more legible and itll be good

[boobies!]

yea I will make it more readable. post something up later.

[DRGN]

http://i33.tinypic.com/o6h4xf.jpg
Damn thought I'd get this up before anyone posted.
Just a couple different styles


likin those styles. dope.

[C3ZR ONE]

new page bump

I like this. All but the van. The van is weak.

[$1LENCR]

brik- dont think its taken. lookin dope tho
cream- nice tag, i just dont like the M. creative R tho.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i37.tinypic.com/2q3vl7p.jpg
New z

cream keep working with it
and chane up the r

brik space your i and k out more from each other

[Wallace]

aeks- your handstyle is coming along nicely, getting more and more towards your own style... keep it up
cream- clean it up a little, make it a bit more legible maybe

[$1LENCR]

yarbles- nice handstyle, just not digging the K.
other than that, it looks pretty sik.

[smile_]

xxxx

[Wallace]

Ouk?
OLK?

[Mr yarbles]

ouk i think

[smile_]

xx

[Wallace]

fix it up then because theres definitely something in between the A and K that resembles a letter

also add some style to it, its very basic

[smile_]

xxx

[Mr yarbles]

That one is like 20 times better

[smile_]

xxxx

[Wallace]

bored so i did ak, this was first try... didn't think the a and k would connect like that.
this is not what i write for anyone who doesnt read the non-bold
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/3852/phone0003hl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[RINS]

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3127/73091962ix2.jpg

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/502/10960984tb6.jpg

[mekosbc]

yo smile it lookz likes it says auk on the last flick

[smile_]

yeh I think I should move the A & K closer together.

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1550.jpg
Crits???????

Clue- yo its nice and simple just keep practicing try some new shit give it some steeze
AK- yo its so easy its hard to tag but I took a w(ak) at it
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1552.jpg

[FeTuS]

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3127/73091962ix2.jpg

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/502/10960984tb6.jpg

@Clue: Lovin that top tag, seperate the 'c' from the 'L' a bit... it looks like 'due'.
The 'e' on the bottom one needs some work tho...

lookin for crits on my new shit...

[above2]

http://i37.tinypic.com/2rfu90k.jpg

[FeTuS]

http://i37.tinypic.com/2rfu90k.jpg

you should change your name... cuz its taken... by someone much better...

[$1LENCR]

clue- its lookin sick.
shit would look dope with some drips n shit.

[Wallace]

@Clue: Lovin that top tag, seperate the 'c' from the 'L' a bit... it looks like 'due'.
The 'e' on the bottom one needs some work tho...

lookin for crits on my new shit...


clue- its lookin sick.
shit would look dope with some drips n shit.

are you guys serious... lol

[FeTuS]

are you guys serious... lol

It's the toy forum, we are easily amused...

[ShaolinNy]

i write sneak.I was told to have all my letter the same but it seems inpossbile with the e..This is the best i could do ive been pratcing alot n this is what i came up with

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo28/86/ba/57886d669fb8.jpg

Crits pleaze!!!!

[Wallace]

got bored at the movies
props go to illadel for the nicest ink ive ever used, goddamn shame its almost gone

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5804/phone0006se6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5815/phone0007yf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this was fun
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/9168/phone0009hd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i normally dont tag in chill places like this, its nice to be able to stop and take a pic

[smile_]

thats ink? looks like paint to me.

[Wallace]

he called it ink and the consistency and smell are like ink. its so nice and opaque though, amazing stuff

[smikoer]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/2190/totbustaggingdu6.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Shakey flciks, sorry.
http://i36.tinypic.com/2s1ovw8.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2agj7k5.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/k1qlic.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2s1wv7p.jpg

Koer that tag is fucking sexy
Dunno why but that o looks really dope to me.
Toys take note that's how a good tag looks. good letters minimal add ons.

lasic
I dunno it looks like you're trying to cram too much style into it
Lose some of the extensions and add ons

sneak
I even showed you what to do due
Go simple.

[ShaolinNy]

Mr yarbles im still lost...What ever i try i cant make it look good and i cant figure out any one liners at all except the one i posted and if if i keep it simple it looks bad...what should i do :(

[Mr yarbles]

sneak you just gotta keep writing it over and over and over again
Your letters arn't all the bad but seperate them
make your e as big as the other letters and lose the star look in your a push your letters in more and you'll have a tag you can work with
Just kep practicing we all went through this stuff, we all were bad once, just keep up at it and take our crits and it'll get better

[smikoer]

Mr Yarbles- the AEKZ at the bottom = dope. loving the Z both Es and R. Is the first E capitalized? Either way, still goodshiz.

ShaolinNY; Mr Yarbles has the right advice. Also wouldn't worry too much about onelinering until you are confident enough at simpleness.

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/3562/bricktagtf1.jpg
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2968/insidetagzkgq3.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Few from tonight
http://i33.tinypic.com/1z3a53b.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/s63nlg.jpg
R.I.P. :/
http://i37.tinypic.com/1puhjd.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/2ll0xo3.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2w565wx.jpg

koer still diggin that hand

[MessTonic]

^nice man, i really like how you shouted out burnie mac.. he is a legend in the comedy R.I.P.

[mosezone]

word, props on the bernie mac shouts, i shoulda thought about that when i was bombing earlier. yarbles, when your handies don't look rushed, they're fucking dope.
i only flicked like 2 tags from tonight. anybody feeling them?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02017.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02022.jpg

[Vagrant]

I'm feelin them, especially the second one

mine from tonight:
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/Flair1.jpg
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/Flair2.jpg
Pink Dot Krylon

[originalhomeboy]

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7021/dsc00127zh7.jpg

Star ruined it...

[Sadistic.Child]

no it didnt, the R(?) did

[originalhomeboy]

no it didnt, the R(?) did

Yes R and really?

[Sadistic.Child]

yea man, the stars pretty ok, its just its abit to skinny, if you know what i mean...

[originalhomeboy]

yea man, the stars pretty ok, its just its abit to skinny, if you know what i mean...

indeed i do.

[Mr yarbles]

Up down one lines
They're hard as fuck
http://i34.tinypic.com/24mdhl3.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2jadbf9.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2d0chg3.jpg

herts lose the jagged leg on the r it kills the tag.

[bak]

love the up down style yarbles

vagrant im feelin that can control

new pretty boy tag idk i was aiming for LOLMONSTARRRRR crits?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/08-10-08_2104.jpg

[rsakens]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/2190/totbustaggingdu6.jpg

lol thats a decent hairstyle :)

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tags.jpg?t=1218448436

[I GOT CLOUT]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16193.jpg.

[EgoZen]

Trying some different stuff
http://a109.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/16/l_1bdc0e6758e456c30f541e4ad86487dc.jpg

Haha this just popped into my mind:
http://a129.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/74/l_c68b71bbf435a0b570c4856502eef2b0.jpg

[Atmosphere]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/dik001.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/dik002.jpg
Crits..Ill give some to the next person to post a pic

[EgoZen]

Trying some different stuff
http://a109.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/16/l_1bdc0e6758e456c30f541e4ad86487dc.jpg

Haha this just popped into my mind:
http://a129.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/74/l_c68b71bbf435a0b570c4856502eef2b0.jpg

Last post on previous page bump

I really don`t feel the letters Amer :S
Try some wilder lines you know...
It looks kinda stiff :S

[Atmosphere]

Shiiiiit I cannot do this well enough.

[LeaksOne]

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff009.jpg
i kno its a boring tag but thats exactly why im posting it.
Crits?

[Mr yarbles]

Up down one lines
They're hard as fuck
http://i34.tinypic.com/24mdhl3.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2jadbf9.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2d0chg3.jpg

herts lose the jagged leg on the r it kills the tag.

anymore crits?
This style is so hard tog et a handle on :/

leaks put all you letters on the same leve
Good way to do that is draw an underline and write it right on top of the underline.
lose your extension on the k make your s less edgy.

amer keep trying.

Also, ya'll really need to start giving to get.

[LeaksOne]

amer- keep practicin. borrow so examples of your letters from other people
yarbles-ive attempted the up down before and it was hard as hell so i stick to the left right

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff010.jpg
so somethin like this yarbles? i had to start over cuz im so used to my S and Kand i still dont like the K.

[Mr yarbles]

Much better
Try and make it a straight line though
Do it before you write the letters
Lose the curve in the l for now push your letters in together more
Bring the middle of the k up more then post it again

[LeaksOne]

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff011.jpg
like so? i still dont like my K an i gota fix my S. to me it looks like a funky A

[Mr yarbles]

Yes like that
Try and lose the edgyness in your ka nd make it more rounded
try and make everything at least touch the underline
I know it's hard and sounds pointless
But it helps.

[LeaksOne]

oh no i kno what your sayin it jus complicated. im workin at it tho.

[EgoZen]

The Leaks with the curvy line looks better IMO

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah I'm not expecting it to be perfect or anything
Just get that down and get used to writing it till you get it down
Then start fillin up notebooks with tags and your stye will grow into it eventually.

[LeaksOne]

yup ill try that yarbles. ego i like it too but your not entitled to only one tag so ill probably keep that one for later use. btw your tags are hot i like most of those styles. i need to start tryin new styles too. i dont have much experience under my belt so im usin all the help i can get

[RFI. SPit]

http://i38.tinypic.com/inet21.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Damn zof those are dope

[Darkeist]

Yo zof, those are dope. The bottom right one is my favorite

[k4m4k4z3]

http://i37.tinypic.com/fvvhw7.jpg
My tag. feedback please

[Nine9]

Looks and flows nice, although I have no idea what it says.

A little doodle.. any that I should work with?


http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/2433/dsc00933zo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/2433/dsc00933zo1.51b4cf5588.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=295&i=dsc00933zo1.jpg)

[rsakens]

lol thats a decent hairstyle :)

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tags.jpg?t=1218448436

bump any crits ?

[Nine9]

Top right and the middle one are amazing.. esp. the middle one. Love the 0's.

[k4m4k4z3]

http://i37.tinypic.com/fvvhw7.jpg
My tag. feedback please
It says "span" haha

[Mr yarbles]

Stuff from tonight, more tommorow if I feel like it
http://i36.tinypic.com/sfdm6a.jpg
Bad picture, it's pretty high up
http://i34.tinypic.com/1err8.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/5oumf4.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/30kc751.jpg
Dope silver acrylic
http://i34.tinypic.com/11tmon6.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2r39suc.jpg

span lose your extensions.

[smikoer]

rsakens; not feeling the extensions in the top left one. the bottom one in brown is nice as though.good shitand also loving the Os
SPAN; clean it up a bit.. dont go so crazy with the extensions and it'll look nicer i reckon
AEKZ; lose the loops on the A in the first pic. Frothing on the white drippy one! What's the line above meant to be? Not reallllly feeling it. Other than that, you know what's down and definately getting there. oh and again.. love your Zs. dope.

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/4797/endofbinls3.jpg
corked this one:
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6287/tylarj0.jpg

[AdRe*]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/dik001.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/dik002.jpg
Crits..Ill give some to the next person to post a pic
Amer loosin ur strokes
and if u dnt know what that means
then keep practicing use strokes instead of just up and dwn
my steeze
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-13-08_0132.jpg
OHH n by the way u didnt give crits to the next soo appreciate this if u dnt ha
p.s. in chicago theres a big time writer that goes my AMEER hes pretty dope

[AdRe*]

Different
would understand why ppl would read it as DANEN but its DAMEN
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-13-08_0159.jpg

[rsakens]

finally some good advice =]

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/4797/endofbinls3.jpg
felling the R why don't you use the same bend on the K ?
whould look sick man

its raining heavy here for days =/
hope its dry in the eve so i can get some new shit up
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tags.jpg?t=1218448436

[EgoZen]

yup ill try that yarbles. ego i like it too but your not entitled to only one tag so ill probably keep that one for later use. btw your tags are hot i like most of those styles. i need to start tryin new styles too. i dont have much experience under my belt so im usin all the help i can get


Thank you...
Well just fuck around with it..
And sketch a little bit like if you were on speed :P
And sometimes you will get something cool..
That`s my way... just use like 20 papers and do tags, tags
and tags...

Btw: the Edding 3300 is great for tags on paper

Zof you stuff is ill!

[Mr yarbles]

The line above it is just habbit now haha
It started as the three line crown kinda thing then I just started doing one line

koer your e can kinda look like a c but other than that good job

damen lose all your extensions go simple.

[FeTuS]

stop fuckin skippin over me. I already gave crits, now fuckin give me mine.

[Nine9]

Mush?

It's ok, I think it could flow a bit better and the long arcs on some letters kinda don't go with the two smaller letters, or at least the U.

[FeTuS]

Mush?

It's ok, I think it could flow a bit better and the long arcs on some letters kinda don't go with the two smaller letters, or at least the U.

You wanna show me what you would do with it?

[AdRe*]

Mush ur U looks like a L
dnt outline ur tags it looks toyish
keep practicing u got the basics just keep and keep putting in work
ohh and AEKZ yeeee I knw I usually dnt write it like that
it was just something different I was trying
feelin yo style...my fav
http://i33.tinypic.com/5oumf4.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081308_19051.jpg
just messed around..but kinda liked it... maybe ill try to develop more letters...

edit;
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/081308_19221.jpg
try and work it?
or nah?

[GaZm13]

Nah. I think you are trying too hard Woe. It's almost better if you scribbled it like taking notes in school or something. Just me, no beef. You seem like a cool kid, keep practicing bro.

[jerm_haf]

Nah. I think you are trying too hard Woe. It's almost better if you scribbled it like taking notes in school or something. Just me, no beef. You seem like a cool kid, keep practicing bro.

agreed. those letters just look like you were nervous while trying to write neatly (aka, they look shakey). keep trying

[WoeInfinite]

haha thanks, yeah i was kinda goin for the jagged look, but i see what you mean.

[mekosbc]

haha i was walkin in the yard down the block from my house...i seen a clean reffer... i didnt have any thing to hit it so i went to the rite aid and bagged a shoe polish... haha i went back and hit it... i know shoe polish blowz but its the only thing i could hit it with...http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0939.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

hahaha nice meko.

[-sense-]

so a reefer is like a clean train?

http://i33.tinypic.com/2nu6t60.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/69dmrt.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

you can delete it...see the edit button on the bottom right of your post?

[-sense-]

well i do now...thanks

[EgoZen]

Reefr is a refrigirator unit car..

[-sense-]

i see

im pretty sure this is upside down but fuk it
http://i34.tinypic.com/n16p12.jpg

[Thickalick]

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/2306/img1059sw3.jpg

[bowchicabowow]

DAYS - Ditch the underline, halo, and quotes.Space your letters more, I didn't even see the A for a little. And I thought it was HYS.

[FeTuS]

DAYS - Ditch the underline, halo, and quotes.Space your letters more, I didn't even see the A for a little. And I thought it was HYS.

I agree with the halo underline and quotes, But it looks pretty good, I was able to read it right away.

[whosthisguy]

and stop writing days. NYC writer...sorry

[bowchicabowow]

and stop writing days. NYC writer...sorry
He could probably get away with DAIS then right? I hate I's though.

[BigBlueViolence]

Sense- your shit straight confuses me, dude

Ignore the random bubble shit.
http://i36.tinypic.com/qoudtg.jpg


http://i37.tinypic.com/2wciu4w.jpg

[dj3hac]

I dont know if this belongs here, ive been writing for 4 years, i just though id submit one of my basic and readable tags.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture001.jpg

"ASKONe"

[alph]

Just looking for some tips
"Alph"
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p120/alfffpub/DSCF8422.jpg
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p120/alfffpub/DSCF8419.jpg

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-15-08_0310.jpg
Crits por favor?
Meko - u snapped
Earn - No one liners yet, put work on your initial tag, just keep practicing and keep posting pics to c if your on the rite trak
Ask - would like to c more of ur stuff looks dope...lose the quotes tho...
Alph - each letter has its own style try and make it all flow

[BigBlueViolence]

Arde- your tell Alph that he needs to make his flow more, then tell this other dude Ask whos stuff is all over the place that his shit is dope. Also, your handstlye doesn't flow at all, either. You can't drop knowledge that you don't have, dude

[DRONE_905]

http://i35.tinypic.com/2cnd1l5.jpg

[Thrice]

drone - Fix the E and looking good.
adre-go simple
Crits?
http://i38.tinypic.com/2z9a8wp.jpg

[rsakens]

haha i was walkin in the yard down the block from my house...i seen a clean reffer... i didnt have any thing to hit it so i went to the rite aid and bagged a shoe polish... haha i went back and hit it... i know shoe polish blowz but its the only thing i could hit it with...http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0939.jpg

this needs a bump ^^ dope stuff man


new shit ...
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tags-1.jpg?t=1218907799

[Mr yarbles]

http://i35.tinypic.com/24dr2hz.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/nlz8e9.jpg
Ahem good stuff try keeping everything proportioned though

[BigBlueViolence]

Yarbles- most of what you got going is pretty sweet, except the K. like everything going on is sharp and angled, but the K just looks too plain to me. It's definitely got potential, though.

[dj3hac]

i dropped my cam while running/bombing so all i have that works properly is my shitty webcam. here is something from my book, pretty wak i know.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture002.jpg
http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture003.jpg

[tahsk570]

http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/2306/mf1c256a64c78f4472a2f88pr7.th.jpg (http://img364.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mf1c256a64c78f4472a2f88pr7.jpg)

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/6757/picture010xr5.th.jpg (http://img518.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture010xr5.jpg)

:P crits please.

[dj3hac]

Incredible handstyle,the piece is a bit weak, but im not one to talk.

[tahsk570]

thanks for the crits keep em comin.

[mekosbc]

this was a bit rushed... rule number 1) NEVER GO BOMBIN WITH PARANOID ASS WRITERS THEY TEND TO FUCK UP UR SHIT AND SAY OH SHIT STOP COP when they see a car..haha not lime sum kid who asked me to help him with graff...but fuck it the tag is drippie hahahahahha love dripz =-D
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY1075.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/35kuywn.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/rsww9i.jpg
Steezing my k

noe that's freshhh

dj go simple.

[DRONE_905]

feelin it yarbles try somethin new with the R
but your A is flyyy

[rsakens]

this needs a bump ^^ dope stuff man


new shit ...
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/tags-1.jpg?t=1218907799

bump

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i36.tinypic.com/qoudtg.jpg


http://i37.tinypic.com/2wciu4w.jpg
Bumpskis

keane- the brown one is pretty sweet, I think you should try to keep your Ks straight like that.

[dj3hac]

okay, one thread is saying that my throwies / pieces suck and I "THINK" this one is saying that my handstyle is nice... or at least my tag. My hand style is dynamic, thats how i like it, i dont like having ONE defined style.

[alph]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p120/alfffpub/Photo4.jpg

[dj3hac]

alph, i like your stuff man, i like how you get it so close. a lot of people will give you shit, but personally i would like to see that around my hood.

["Riot"]

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080818_0121.jpg

[VoyR]

So I'm starting back at the beginning. So any tips for the handy, this is what I've got so far.

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/Handy1.jpg
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/0818081751.jpg

["Riot"]

voyer is like a easy handyy.
make its like a nice easy style.
kinda like cursvie with a little style.

im so fucing drunk.
if this dornt make sense ignore it!

[Run .]

http://i37.tinypic.com/1zocbc9.jpg

[rebostorm19]

any comments? too simple?

[blastblast]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/Photo607.jpg
crits?

run= too legit
rebostorm=way simple but ok

[Mr yarbles]

Run
your letter structure is all out of whack and your rocking too many wierd extensions and add ons.
Keep working with it.

blast lose the l underline and the arrow

Rebo It's good for now
Keep working with it.

I went out with my new k and r last night then realized I forgot my camera
:/
Flicks later in the day.

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture008.jpg?t=1219172807
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture009.jpg?t=1219172879

[Mr yarbles]

http://i33.tinypic.com/dxfszc.jpg
Messed this one up.

Keane not feeling that new n

[VoyR]

Still Working on it. But its getting better i think. Critz?
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/Voyer123.jpg

[dj3hac]

Run, i think its all good, i dont see too many extensions.
Blast, i like the underline and arrow, i think you should keep it, or subsitiute.
Rebo. i see a lot of potential with that G keep working on it though
Keane, i like the new N, and i imagine that you do as well... which is most important
Voyer, I liked it better more rounded. i defiantely like how the Y comes up more though

Remeber you write for yourself, not me or anyone else crits are suggestions not commands, do what YOU like.

[ClaimRSM]

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj179/Yaskin805/Photo2.jpg

my first tag i've made any crits?

[Hoaks]

Drop the arrows. start experimenting with your letters, curving and making bits longer and god knows what else

[BIGel]

no arrows allowed.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3079/2783054184_cd4810d8dc.jpg?v=0

[Scratch]

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0820081644.jpg
Harvard sq in MA anyone?

[mekosbc]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1181.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1176.jpg

[rebostorm19]

[QUOTE=Mr yarbles;1184534]
Rebo It's good for now
Keep working with it.
QUOTE]

Thank you yarbles, any good characters you suggest i could add?

[QUOTE=dj3hac;1184961]
Rebo. i see a lot of potential with that G keep working on it though
QUOTE]

What G??? o.O >< lol
my tag is ECT:
which part do you think was a G?

[mekosbc]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/gct.jpg
haha i see what he means ur e lookz like a g bro...try to keep the bottom of the e from touching the top...

[Diostah]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee90/diostah/img005.jpg

[LiMe..S.B.C]

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY1174.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i36.tinypic.com/29l1pxe.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/vh4uv5.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/svs22t.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2vcgl8x.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/w9hh1v.jpg
Dark, sorry.
Switchin up styles so shit dosn't get stale
What do you guys think?

Lime not digging the cursive stuff

scratch can't read it

Bigel dope but what's the seond letter?

claim, don't connect letters, no arrows.

[bowchicabowow]

Lime, that looks awesome, just ditch the extra stuff.

[Individual666]

this should clear it up...
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02072.jpg
haze is just a random user name i chose....calm.... :lol:

Get a new name please.

Heres my handstyle.

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/702/1103688hn6.jpg

[dr.one]

could i get some feedback on these tags
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2309/2590224693_c311f876b0.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3080/2790762090_8b34c8257a.jpg?v=0 fucked up the n

[Mr yarbles]

he bottom is fireee
Except that the d looks like a b

zap lose all your extensions make everything the same size lose the add ons make the p not have sucha huge lump
The stage it's at now it's almost impossible to read

Also you guys need to start giving feedback if you want some.

[MaVe911]

can someone please post up a pic of them writing FLATS? i need some ideas with writing it , it can be any style i like euro style so thatd b great too thanks

[Nesk1]

mave if you like euro style, then why don't you learn it?

[Individual666]

he bottom is fireee
Except that the d looks like a b

zap lose all your extensions make everything the same size lose the add ons make the p not have sucha huge lump
The stage it's at now it's almost impossible to read

Also you guys need to start giving feedback if you want some.

It actually says "ind" but I guess thats more to the point of nobody can read it. Drone the O and the N on the first Pic kinda looks outta place, but thats just me.

[bak]

lime that style is slick
dr. one the red one is sexy
scrtch i like the flow

my new philly tall style look idk
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/08-24-08_0955.jpg

[Proper]

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY1174.jpg

Nice cursive tag. I've been doing some curvise tags too.

[iPwnF00lz]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/Untitled-1-3.png
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/0801081718-1.jpg

[PROMO]

BLEY, work on making it flow; maybe put the letters closer together, experiment on paper, then move to the wall. AND NO ARROWS!

[iPwnF00lz]

Haha yeah I think I will be changing what I write because I have tried many different styles to make it flow together well but it usually doesn't.
Edit: Sometimes I do quicker smaller tags in this style, but it still isn't doing it for me.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/Picture79833.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/Picture79830.jpg

[PROMO]

Kinda looks like a swastika

[iPwnF00lz]

:confused:

[The_NaMEz_BaNKz]

Bley u kinda suck.. -.-...lol

your name kinda explains your style...which is jus BLEY !..lol

[sheltr]

one thing toys need to stop doing with their tags, is stop making one part of a letter the same as the eachother...

[SiC_one]

http://a270.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/10/l_8ea1938d69fbbfe42ed85c8ad06b171d.jpg
Any crits on my tag? I have been messin with it the last few minutes

[MONE]

SiC_one, try to make your letters more visible and not too bunched up.

Crits and Comments on mine? This is my first upload by the way. like anyone cares tho haha.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8281/monekz0.jpg

[BadlilDuck]

nice one mone.
sic i dunno wut it says, keep it simple first
crits on mine?
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/DSC01156.jpg

[MONE]

nice one mone.
sic i dunno wut it says, keep it simple first
crits on mine?
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/DSC01156.jpg

thanks, i like the 3rd one, but for me in my opinion. i would shorten or do something with the R extension, well not extension but like ehh. dont know.

its nice tho

[PROMO]

mone- looks good, if anything, try a new style because that one looks perfected
slier- the third one down is probably the best. The "I" is a little plain, maybe make it lowercase so you can dot it and add some detail. Also fix the extension on the "R" at the end.

[MONE]

mone- looks good, if anything, try a new style because that one looks perfected
slier- the third one down is probably the best. The "I" is a little plain, maybe make it lowercase so you can dot it and add some detail. Also fix the extension on the "R" at the end.

thanks, but looks perfected?
good or bad lol?
or just saying to try as many styles as possible

[Game Ova 07]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/BombScience.jpg

Crits Please

[MONE]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/BombScience.jpg

Crits Please

i like : D

dont know bout the arrow tho in my opinion but i like

[Game Ova 07]

should i have the arrow connect to the "O" or do something else?

[MONE]

should i have the arrow connect to the "O" or do something else?

iunno, try it. experiment.

[Game Ova 07]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/BombScience1.jpg
More like this i guess

[NEROISAHERO]

http://i35.tinypic.com/m9x4bp.jpg
i only like the e in the lower one
http://i36.tinypic.com/1677aqg.jpg
i really like the r and the o on the lower one
and the r in the upper one
http://i37.tinypic.com/21nl8hy.jpg
i like this one

crits kind sirs

[PatchesO]

MONE - Looks nice, i think the perfected comment could mean you got that style nailed.
SLIE - I like the second one myself
NERO - I reckon ya last ones best but the O doesnt seem to fit, kinda stands out to much i think.

any crits on this?
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4171/spa0414ep8.jpg

[Game Ova 07]

no crits for me =(

[MONE]

MONE - Looks nice, i think the perfected comment could mean you got that style nailed.
SLIE - I like the second one myself
NERO - I reckon ya last ones best but the O doesnt seem to fit, kinda stands out to much i think.

any crits on this?
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4171/spa0414ep8.jpg

SLIE - I like the second one also
NERO - Like the final but the "O" is too big, try to make it simple and flow.
PatchesO - i like it : ) but the "k" can do better.

thanks for the comments everyone.
anyone wanna do a TAG swap lol

[Game Ova 07]

im up for a tag swap

[skeevy]

http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o251/potowngangsta1/jpegrr.jpg

[I Hold The Throne]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q172/korky_monkey/08-27-08_1611.jpg
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q172/korky_monkey/08-27-08_1609.jpg
Watcha-watcha-watcha think?

[AdRe*]

OTEK- Like how the T hugs the rest of the letters on the 2nd one, get rid of the underline
work on ur E and K but I do like the 2nd K how it leans back on the E, overall it looks
NERO- Agree with u the E and R are dope but ur N is not there, in all except one it looks like a W...but personally I think u got ur E & R down just work on ur N maybe on the first line of ur N make it small stroke idk this is from a toy but keep at it
NEO- Its nice and simple...jst how u should start...but ur N looks a bit like a W too work on it try using strokes
VOID- Its different may not be appreciated by many...and not taken serious...Space it out a lil and jst take off from there

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/wgymo9.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/21oyn2w.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/2lufk7p.jpg
haha that fucker crossed me out a while back

otek lose your addons

spun go simple write it just like you would in school

sek looks good for now

[cerex89]

a little bit of tags in san jose
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0815081128.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0806081209.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0806081207a.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0806081207.jpg

[Flash_One]

advice? i dont think its too toy but i just wanted some tips.

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8523/picture0009wd9in5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
/img254/picture0009wd9in5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img254/picture0009wd9in5.jpg/1/)

[Flash_One]

i know the "c" at the begining of crew is fucked up a bit as well as the "r" to the right of it...

[Shiva.]

spun, I like yours

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2qixz09.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/uww0m.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2hmmzyx.jpg
Idk how I feel about my tag anymore any crits?

flash work on your flares

[Game Ova 07]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Bombin%20Science/NeoHandy2.jpg
alright here it is...added a little more style, my crew, and tried to make it not look so much like a "w"

[dj3hac]

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture018.jpg (http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture018.jpg)

New yellow paint marker, i feel pretty good about this one, but the S doesnt fit perfectly

[FLIP FLOP]

make the s taller and skinier to see if that works and what pat of n.s you from?

[dj3hac]

make the s taller and skinier to see if that works and what pat of n.s you from?

Gaston Area / Tantallon

I bomb in dartmouth mostly, some in halifax.

[Flash_One]

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/4181/imgp1219rm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/imgp1219rm9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img526/imgp1219rm9.jpg/1/)

suggestions?

[Flash_One]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2qixz09.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/uww0m.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2hmmzyx.jpg
Idk how I feel about my tag anymore any crits?

flash work on your flares

the middle one is the best of the 3 and lose the bottom one...

[Thrice]

yarbles-2nd one as well, and make the K left line vertical to keep flow with that A.
Flash-pretty nice, just do a little cleaning on it and please lose the accessories, way too much.the circle things, arrows, dots, and the last letter extensions kind of kill it. still great job, and keep the underline and quotes.
game-lose the cursive thing, and make the lines more curved and diagonal so they can fit close together, but lose the C extension and that weird inner vertical bar on the R.
Make the S flow with it, kind of breaks the tag, but none the less it's great, also make that E a bit smaller. Great stuff keep it up.

Crits please. yay for photoshop.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2rehyrc.jpg

[Czar One]

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/handy.jpg

[Thrice]

Czar-not really sure what to say, it looks great, nice job. Wanna do an xchange?

[Czar One]

yeah man. you write Ahem right?

[FLSteele16]

flash one- i like those last two alot but im not feelin the big circle you put in them.
Czar- everything looks good but the star.

[Thrice]

Yes sir. (czar)

[Mr yarbles]

http://i37.tinypic.com/zlre5g.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/6oocnr.jpg
Thanks for the crits guys
trying out some simpler steezes
Which is better?

czar it's good but push in all your letters also some of your

ahem make your e the size of the other letters

flash try not to get too ahead of yourself
Drop some of the extensions and add ons
seperate your f from your l makes it looks like another a
Work on your a more looks kinda wierd
and work on your s and h too
make the one on the same level as the other letters

Also you guys really need to start giving crits.

[smikoer]

dj3hac; maybe rotate the S a little to the left to make it fit?
FlashOne; nice style, also not diggin the circle
Yarbles; underline isn't needed on them IMO, also try not to let the start of the E touch its middle part? otherwise, nice

Drunkwriting was a baaaad idea last night..
KOER/JAYS
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/1274/koerjaysky4.jpg
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8461/koerbusstopio9.jpg
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8275/drunkoer2fw7.jpg
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[Game Ova 07]

i aint gunna give crits unless i get them...ive posted 3 flicks and got like 1 crit lol

koer-i wouldnt recommend marker on brick?...and you needa make it flow a little bit more...looks like it took you mad long to do one handstyle its gotta be quick

[AdRe*]

Aeks- the pink one ur A doesnt move with the rest of the letters...I think u got ur E and K down u just have to work on steezzing ur A & S a lil more...I like ur sharp shit ur rounded out stuff is iight
Koer- Ur marker is a lil streaky...and I agree bad Idea drunkwriting...get rid of your underline and work on str8ing it out....I like ur K start frm there and try differ stylez for the rest of your letters to make it move with the K
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-31-08_0225.jpg
Critique Please?

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah people have been hating on my shit like mad lately though
So idk even know what the fuck to do.

Adre you got your letters down really good just make sure everything is on the same level and prportioned you know?
also I wouldn't write dame

koer your r is little wierd

[SiC_one]

http://a825.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/95/l_061e2f1401d640bab5a292cf5cee48e8.jpg

http://a310.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/38/l_29c38835078a937122e79f018bf71d75.jpg

http://a553.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/65/l_deaa15f97d36fdb51e59d6493d2a04d0.jpg

http://a658.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/58/l_33b28aeaa12c6d24900ff7b8232a82d9.jpg

My tag sucks, but I have been messin with it, give me some tips to make it better.

[Mr yarbles]

Give crits to get crits.

[RezOner..]

Yarbles just start off with simple simples... as in writing AEKS just like that.

[AdRe*]

well its DAMEN
but why wouldnt u write DAME?

[Mr yarbles]

Yarbles just start off with simple simples... as in writing AEKS just like that.

I have been?
People used to tell me it was good but then all the sudden everyone started hating on it?
Idk
I'll go simpler.

Edit:
Some older stuff
http://i33.tinypic.com/502jh1.jpg
What do you guys think about these?