Tags

[Tokenkaligreens]

honestly aeks to me your tag never really was that good, and I think once you get a decent handy down you'll regret seeing that crap around your town.

[Mr yarbles]

yeah you're right
Idk I just hate when I got two sides tellin me two completely different things
But I'll go back to simple letters

Edit again:
http://i36.tinypic.com/15d3yft.jpg
Simpler
Any better?

Edit again haha:
http://i38.tinypic.com/9pul9w.jpg

Word though thanks for helpin me out guys

[exitus]

looks good but wtf is up with the colors
maby if it dripped a little more or a fatter marker it would look better

[FLSteele16]

Damen- its sick i love it.
Aeks- the simples look really good.

crits please
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8940/scan0004if4.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i35.tinypic.com/oidlxz.jpg
Step in the right direction? or should I start over?

Rouge seperate the bar from the loop part of your r
make your g simpler and yor e simpler

[exitus]

FL your letters look real nice but i think you need more going on around them. maby like some swerls on the top and bottom, more arrows not connected to anything

[Scratch]

self promotion WOOO

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0826081729.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0820081644.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0825081439.jpg

^this last one came out pretty bad. haha look at what i was sitting on though.. that little fuckin piece of metal.

<3 climbing shit.

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

MR YARBLES thats definately a step in the right direction.. it looks pretty fly

[PatchesO]

ROGE - maybe keep the marker on the paper as much as you can on each letter, ie the R and G, i guess it throws me off a bit... idk im so toy :D
Mr YARBLES - i think your on the right track and its lookin dope.
VOID - i can see that goin somewhere, i reckon just keep doin it over and over and you see little changes that you like and can go with. works for me anyway.

any crits on this? im still tryin to work out how to use these paint markers, they been mad streaky on some shit? would that just be coz the surface is too smooth?
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/1377/spa0419qp1.jpg

[FLSteele16]

thanks guys ill work on it
Aeks-looks fresh i really like that e
sek-put more space between your e and k. Still keep it close but that looks like the e and k are connected.

[Mr yarbles]

Alirhgt thanks alot everybody

Sek you've got the right idea just space things out a bit more

haha scratch I love climbin shit too
But Ic an't read your tag
Yoek?

[Scratch]

haha close enough, its yaek. X]

climbing shit is literally my favorite part about writing

[I Hold The Throne]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q172/korky_monkey/Image006.jpg
First tag i've done with my K-60. Just the other day.

[RezOner..]

Yarbles its a step the right way... but go simpler.

[Mr yarbles]

Really?
Hmm I dunno how to make it much simpler
Tone down the last e?

[RezOner..]

And the K and the s. The a's alright.

[gcrolla]

agdsg

[Mr yarbles]

Word I'll work on that
Onyl problem is when i don't do my k like that i fuck it up for some reason
But thanks

Say it's good keep that up

[H1TBYNUMB3RS]

Scratch- first i thought they were bad J's then realized they were prey
sick Y's. Just space em out a bit. Once i knew the letters it looked allot
better so make it so it's distinguishable right away.

Sek- Lookin prey good, just lose the extension on the S or just shorten it.

Say- Deec, try painting the stickers black or something before writing them and that silver will pop, what marker? looks like a nice silver.

Otek- its aight, the T doesent fit or flow in and the K swirl was used incorrectly but its alright. Keep hitting books for a while.


Aight, first night out in the new town.
advice/crits anyone?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3255/2819316202_e8036ef5d4_o.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

i like the r but the p and everything else needs a lil more style ya know

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173204.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/173229.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194836.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00041.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00036.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00039.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115605.jpg

[gcrolla]

Pretty sure the mod "Sir.One" writes rae...

[Mr yarbles]

He writes ra.

I'm diggin the bottom hands sex

[denaaa]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/stt.jpg

my first time trying some calligraphyISH stuff tell me what you think

[gcrolla]

Say- Deec, try painting the stickers black or something before writing them and that silver will pop, what marker? looks like a nice silver

sdfgsdg

[FLSteele16]

Denaa- Looks dope
Rae- The last one is the best it looks sick.

Crits welcome
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/152/scan0001oy7.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/2rhbka9.jpg
Fuck i've posting too much.
Top right's the simplest I could come up with
Other two are more steezed out letters.


Roge Ditch that e make a simpler one same thing with the g
your r looks better just make the circle part smaller

Denas I don't like your s
That tag's good though

[gcrolla]

hashfg

[exitus]

id add some arrows, your s in the bottom left is relay cool

[testr]

im new here so wazup
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8660/groutpnoe7.jpg
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/3651/tagxt4.jpg

[Tonberry]

Don't waste those stickers for tags, and SAY is a pretty lame word, me thinks, Y being a mad gay letter. It's really simple too... Uh.. Just kind of looks like you only styled the S. Try making the tag less wide, and more tall. Work on the letters a tad, too.

Edit: Tester, that's pretty dope. I love the bottom one a lot. Reminds me of the Waster scratchy for some reason.

[testr]

yea czar said that on another forum
oh and say try and giveit a little more style and not like you just wrote it normally nameen

[gcrolla]

gfhdh

[H1TBYNUMB3RS]

Aight, first night out in the new town.
advice/crits anyone?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3255/2819316202_e8036ef5d4_o.jpg

bump.

Sex on last page was pretty fire
Aeks you should use the same e for both, i think the swirly one.
Testr prey good but doesnt someone pretty good here write testr? or tester??

[testr]

someone told me that but ive been writing test for a pretty long time and i think we live on the other side of the world anyway.
yarbles stick with that one in the top right ;)

[PatchesO]

PHEVR - for me its just your E that needs work, maybe even just a bit neater.
TESTER - that bottom one is heaps dope. i think your middle T on the top one could do with a bit of work.
SAY - bit too simple, get a bit loose with it and see what happens
YARBLES - i reckon the top right the go.

any crits?
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/9176/spa0420cs3.jpg
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8071/spa0421zi6.jpg

[staygoldas15]

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m202/singhboys/img064.jpg

Please critique

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140042.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140058.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135912.jpg

[viseversa101]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_c46dd655c777eef93ff0f505b3b5d583.jpg

[Sadistic.Child]

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/3651/tagxt4.jpg

you fail so hard...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3088/2791134204_8d5da1089f.jpg?v=0
YOUR DOING IT WRONG! oh wait, i forgot i dont want you to do my style...

[testr]

i have no clue who you are
ive been on this site like once
they hardly even look the same
and theres alot of styles like that

[Sadistic.Child]

well, im bash :) im guessing your tester
they do look the same, i do my E and S the same,
i just didnt have that E in this one perticular handi.
theres alot of styles like that but everyones letters are different.
just dont do this style again or everyone will say you bite even though it wasnt intentional

[testr]

oh well hello then bash and what are you doing in the toy thread anyway?

[Sadistic.Child]

got bored....

[gcrolla]

patches0-e and k are nice im not really feelin your s though
staygoldas-what does it say tamone? letters are too simple and loose the underline and quotation marks

[exitus]

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1776/0902081721aem1.jpg

[RezOner..]

moar arrows

[Czar One]

word, make it mad hip hop yo.

[exitus]

ok, i went from taging fixd to exitus though. Already did a huge one in a kroger bathroom with a magnum i racked from blick
more arows though, thanks

[Czar One]

...it was sarcasm. Never draw another arrow.

[RezOner..]

Anyways, Mr yarbles, the one on the top right on page back is alright, just make it so the s doesnt go over the k.

[exitus]

oh ok thanks i guess

[gcrolla]

sgdkjh

[exitus]

haha, im the arrow dis sacrifice
no one who ever posts in this thread will ever post an arrow again
looks like the exat same thing say

[exitus]

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5469/0902081916ek2.jpg

[denaaa]

gcrolla- that S and K have alot of potential but personaly im not feeling the a or the arrow and i like your old one better
exitus- the e and s have way too much going on dude and take away the dots and liness but your staying simplee its gonna get good
critss?
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/dneeee.jpg

[exitus]

hows that look?
and yea i like the uppercase A beter

[FLSteele16]

Exitus- style your xitus. and on a letter like the u make it all one line if you have to use two make sure they blend into each other.
Say- change the a.

[exitus]

thanks

[FLSteele16]

Denaa-didn't mean to miss you. It looks really good.

[exitus]

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/2179/0902082008yu1.jpg


whatha guys think of this one

[H1TBYNUMB3RS]

i like you cause you take advice and crits seriously, no one should hate.
okay, this ones better forsure. what you need to do if your using a chissel tip like that is hold it one direction,
i usually go widest facing down, and use strokes facing the same way throughout the tag. I would recommend
taking the doo dads out of the E and X and stuff but the S looks good. yeah the S is very good, try and keep all
letters the same size as that S and same style too.

[Thrice]

Bumpies and xchange with czar.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2vc6zy0.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/2lxxanc.jpg
Photoshpness

[exitus]

i like you cause you take advice and crits seriously, no one should hate.
okay, this ones better forsure. what you need to do if your using a chissel tip like that is hold it one direction,
i usually go widest facing down, and use strokes facing the same way throughout the tag. I would recommend
taking the doo dads out of the E and X and stuff but the S looks good. yeah the S is very good, try and keep all
letters the same size as that S and same style too.



thanks, the little things by the e and x were by accident, they bleed through from old pages.
im using a magnum so having the chisel facing one way is really hard. Especially when some lines come out real thick like the E and some come out real skinny like the T
Im thinking about ordering a otr mini and a krink 60 mop
o yea and i take crits seriously because im relay trying to imporve, not be a fucking poser

[gcrolla]

exitus- maybe dont do the little extensions* on the e and u
jajsf

[exitus]

http://i36.tinypic.com/1z2kepi.jpg

Tryed it again
say-I like the eye for the dot

[viseversa101]

ne feedback on this?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_c46dd655c777eef93ff0f505b3b5d583.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2zycx2g.jpg
Idk I like both styles

vise get a better pic

Exitus you're getting too ahead of yourself lose all the extensions stay simple for now

Say it looks good

[viseversa101]

this1 is a little brighter, i put the tag ona spray can character i did...there a little dark cuz of the bridges lighting i was under
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/1-1.jpg

[exitus]

vice that first one looks sweet
well i tried to keep it simple and then you told me to style it

[sex without condoms]

no exitus its like this.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/135649.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/2wqza7l.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/21b51qw.jpg
Fuck it I know I post too much haha
But I changed my k and s.

Word condoms I'm diggin that ish

vise from what I can see it looks nice

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140042.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/140058.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/135912.jpg

bump for aeks

btw i love you name so ive been doing mad tosses with it their in the toy throwies thread if you wanna peep yarbles

and aeks made your Es and As more rounded so they match your other letters

[Mr yarbles]

haha yeah I love this najme
I just hate telling people what I write cus they think I'm like mad depressed or something haha

Anyways
I dig the first flick the one on the bottom
and your handies all look real nice

[gcrolla]

aeks your new style is dope!

[Nirvous2000]

keep it simple G'ye

Sex-that exitus handstyle is tight!
vise- MAD DRIPS hahaha dope shit


http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p111/AscheZuAsche_album/handy1.jpg

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p111/AscheZuAsche_album/handy2.jpg

[sex without condoms]

dont waste mops on paper dummy

[Nirvous2000]

funny thing is its, an mini otr paint pen with homemade paint, and i have a retarded amount of ink, the other pen is a shitty old montana bomber, thats practicly empty any way, i keep my flowpen for the real shit, and my do em dirty for those bus stops haha

[Mr yarbles]

You're wasting your money
You could make most of that shit for free.

[Hookr]

exitus i think ur trying a lil too hard to make it look and fancy im feelin the way SEX WITHOUT CONDOMS threw it up shit is not to hard but looks dope

[Nirvous2000]

You're wasting your money
You could make most of that shit for free.

I make mops too, but nothing beats that moleskin, lasts forever.

[Grapheetoe]

so does homemade shit, as long as you make it right.

[Mr yarbles]

Word.

And mohair fuck that you can get a stempendous and it's the same.

[+Hoodwigga]

just not as rough of surfaces tho but yeah like the man said
stampendous

[Debok]

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/5852/image008jb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I've been writing for months and nun of my friends is a writers, so I wonder what writers think of my shit, ( I write DONE, dont say its already taken cuz I dont give a shit, if its taken I will king it )

[Grapheetoe]

man, you ain't kinging shit with that little tag, esspecially if you're in montreal.

as for crits to keep this post from getting deleted, your d looks like an s. fix that shit pronto.

[Debok]

Where do you see a S?

[Grapheetoe]

at the begining of your tag. i know how your nib is flowing, and it looks like an s.

[TONO]

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/Picture008.jpg

let me kno what you think...

[iPwnF00lz]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/Picture798127.jpg
going simple, playing around with a new name I'm thinking about keeping.

[Game Ova 07]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/Bombin%20Science/NeoHandy2.jpg
I know i already posted this but i got no crits last time =D

[Mr yarbles]

All yall need to give crits to get them.

This thread isn't going to work for shit if you don't.

[TONO]

game ova is that a jesus fish? beside the neo.

[Spraycan Stories]

Ipwnfoolz- Keep it simple, after you keep doing simples you start to establish a flow
Game ova- Not too shabby im seeing a flow keep at it

[iPwnF00lz]

Tono its really blurry but I am really diggin the k

[Game Ova 07]

i gave crits...awhile ago and stopped because no one crit on my work...what do you mean jesus fish???

[Debok]

Something with a Fish form and it says JESUS in it and ppl usually stick it on the back of their car

[TONO]

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/Picture009.jpg

a clearer one.. should i add anything? arrows or quotes or take away from it.. any crits are gewd.

[iPwnF00lz]

Adding more would probably be taking away from the flow, it might look nicer without the star and circle.

[Debok]

In my opinion you should try to connect the K with the N

[TONO]

gtk. on yours i would say the middle line on the f should be longer.. and the arrow would look good connected.

[TONO]

what do you mean connect them?

[Debok]

Are you talking about my tag?.... Yea connect'em try to make the N part of the K and also try to make your letters all the same size or you can make them small and then become more bigger, its just a tip or advice you dont have to do it, you should have your own style tho

[Scratch]

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0903081433a_0001-1.jpg

SIT + YAEK.

[viseversa101]

no respect unless they 10 yrs deep....real talk!

[sex without condoms]

yuck yuck yuck

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234820.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234856.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234922.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234702.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i37.tinypic.com/14twjo.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2ymsl03.jpg
Changed some letters around

Sex I dig your steezes

tono spread yur letters out a bit more

[AdRe*]

Yaek- Sick ass Philly style tag...dope
Flux - Probably sum of the most decent stuff I see here...Lose quotes and arrow...rite mindstate start simple and of course...Experiment your own style
Aeks - I don't know why u feel u have to get approval that your shit is good...just keep experimenting...just keep stamping and stamping over all ur stuff...just stay off this forum for awhile and just practice...seek inspiration if you need sum...
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/09-04-08_0247.jpg
Critique....one of my tags dedicated to one of my graff heroes(REKLO)

[exitus]

no exitus its like this.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/135649.jpg


sorry my internet sucks shit

that looks REALY cool but im not sure what im supposed to see
and thanks for making that btw

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/09-04-08_1707.jpg

[LikeRainButNot]

yarbles - nice tag, everything flows together well
adre - like ur letters, mabes make the O a bit bigger

practicing mah tags on my new whiteboard. heres wat i came up with. crits?
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/223/photo090408001cv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/223/photo090408001cv7.b23f00bb5b.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=510&i=photo090408001cv7.jpg)

[-sense-]

asek i like the trird but the dash in the o should be parell with the first bar on the a. just so i look like its poppin through.
adre i would try to define the c more
rain, just clean up the halo the a and even the quotes out and it would be pretty good.

just sketchin around
http://i34.tinypic.com/25upstd.jpg
i would pick the one with the pencil
http://i34.tinypic.com/fa94ow.jpg

http://i34.tinypic.com/2hdqk2t.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/1nzjmo.jpg
crits comms conserns?

[alph]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p120/alfffpub/Photo21.jpg

[Zire]

Hey guys. Graffed a little couple of years ago but recently got back into it after a trip to amsterdam. its so clean out there.:cool: here is my tag anyway. Let me know what you guys think. Oh and alph see what it wuold look like if the letters were spread out a bit, and the p looks a bit plain. keep working at it


http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/06092008249.jpg

[Game Ova 07]

if your gunna connect the ZAR might as well find a way to connect the E? N?...and get ride of the swirl at the end

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6255.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6254.jpg

[white]

sense - dont put "less" after your tag u will look like a dumbass

[Speedy]

Alph, far left is the illest. sac does that say rspek? I love your letters. mainly the k. Zars that would look a lot better if it was just zar. all the swirly shit at the end throws it off. I always see people that try WAY too hard to make their letters connect. But you pulled it off pretty good with the "ZAR". The rest makes it look bad though.

[Zire]

thanks for the crits, i'd like to keep the name "zare" but ill work on it and post back. cheers

[Zire]

Okay so i went back to the drawing board(pad in my case) and tried to connect the 'r' and the 'e' but it just weren't happening.
So came up with the word "zaro" instead and messed around with it. anyway here are a couple quickies i did.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/07092008261.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/07092008263.jpg

[cerex89]

found this at my college
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0903081137.jpg

[I Hold The Throne]

Hey aspek how did u make that sig of urs. I saw just earlier that is did not have words on it and it had color but now it has bombingscience and its black/white

[Mr yarbles]

http://i36.tinypic.com/bhngox.jpg\
http://i34.tinypic.com/262us8m.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/345lj5e.jpg
A few hands from last night

the p in that racism hand is sexy

zar lose the loop in in the r

apeks is dope

[RezOner..]

Kid, stop going out. Draw more. You're not getting it. The ratio of each paper tag to each actual tag should be a billion to one.

[Mr yarbles]

I have been sketcing alot?
But whateverI'll keep it to paper

this is about as simplas I can make it any problems?
http://i38.tinypic.com/xqjmki.jpg

[exitus]

http://i37.tinypic.com/149o4ed.jpg

Crits please
/\ I like the O looks like a cat eye

[Thrice]

Zaro-if i were you i'd lose that A. I once started doing that too, but it's bad structure, even for a tag.

[smiley 13]

yeah i know im toy and if its too hard to read it says lack. do you gups think i should cut the extension off the k or leave it or whathttp://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/lack.jpg

[denaaa]

yoo smileyy did you used to write smiley ?? if soo i knoww youuu

[exitus]

http://i33.tinypic.com/rvhoap.jpg

is this better?

[MilkyCanvas]

Someone said that I was a major toy.
And that I should go here. What do you guys think?

I messed up on the star but that's about it.
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/DSC01534.jpg

Aesk, the A and the E look alright, simple just like you wanted it. But I don't like the S and the K. Try and work out each letter individually. Just keep writing your name over and over again until it slowly starts to change. Stay off bombingscience, sit in your room, and grab lots of paper, and whatever you can write with.

Smiley, same as Aesk. Go simple, and try not to do anything fancy. Lose the extension on the K. By the way, it looks like an R.

Exitus, same as the other guys/gals. Except, you really need to practice. Alot.

[Mr yarbles]

Word finally someone gives me something worthwile, and it's good to see you back milk havn't seen you ina while you've improved alot since last time
Chane your s it kills the flow of your eltters

http://i38.tinypic.com/20thueu.jpg
Anyways I did this acouple days ago
Probably my last tag post for a while
any crits?

[MilkyCanvas]

Haha, alright, thanks.
Remember this shit?
I'm almost too embarrassed to show it. But I gotta face the past. It can't be erased.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/milk2.jpg

[MilkyCanvas]

Word finally someone gives me something worthwile, and it's good to see you back milk havn't seen you ina while you've improved alot since last time
Chane your s it kills the flow of your eltters

http://i38.tinypic.com/20thueu.jpg
Anyways I did this acouple days ago
Probably my last tag post for a while
any crits?OH FUCK you're Aesk?
Haha, wasn't paying attention to user names.
Anyway..the last pic before this one that you posted I didn't like, but this looks like THE shit. It's probably becaues I like thicker markers, and if your tag isn't thick it looks bad to me. I never leave the house with a thin marker. But what you have right here is dope. Fuck what I said earlier. This made the difference. It's like a totally different tag. Flows, nice and thick, curvy..like a woman.

[Mr yarbles]

hahahaha yeah I remember that and how you got mad at everyone for telling you to go simple haha
but whatever that was the past man
But shit you've improved tons from that keep it up

and thanks man :)
Yeah all I got round here is pens to practice with
:/
and that marker writes clean as fuck I love it haha

[Zire]

Thanks for trying to help guys but i guess im gonna have to develop my tag on my own, which is probably right anyway coz like 4 people have told me to do different things.i guess if your comfortable with your own tag(it atleast has some flow and looks kinda decent) then its okay to write. And aspek your tag is pretty good.

[exitus]

dude what the fuck, he gets crits and i dont?
what the fuck do you want me to do

[Speedy]

Yarbles dope as usual. Just try to make the top of the S bigger and curve more. It almost looks like a fucked up O. No hard feeling though because that's what my S's look like in my actual handwriting at school and shit. I don't know if anyone else has this problem but I'm extremely artistic and my handwriting looks like an 8 year old's. Milky I like all those letters but it doesn't flow. It doesn't look like you tried to write a word. It looks like you tried to write each individual letter by itself right next to each other. Know what I mean?

[Mr yarbles]

I'll give everyone that I can crits so there's no hard feelings

Exitus go simple no extensions no nothing work on paper not on the computer and push your letters in closer
ALso exitus is a hella hard word to write
I'd think about choosing a differnet name
a's s's k's r's e's are good letters write out your whole alphabet fit together letters that you like and work fromt here.

smiley looks like you're trying to hard to make it oneliner and steez it ou stick to simpler type letters
Actually resize it because I can't read it maybe if I could I'd liek it more haha

Also thanks speedy, I'm working on them hah
an yeah my handwriting sucks balls too

[Zire]

dude what the fuck, he gets crits and i dont?
what the fuck do you want me to do


There aint much crits you can get mate, untill you actaully have a tag that flows theres no way of improving. try and write your tag quickly( the one you just posted) and you'll see what i mean.

[Speedy]

Anytime. I'm gonna try to get some tags up in a day or 2. I take IOU's for crits. hah

[exitus]

oh ok, so how to i improve my flow?

[exitus]

i use paper but my phone (the thing i use to get em into the comp) is out of battery and i dont have my charger.
so everything i post here from paint i first do in my black book

[Zire]

oh okay. well firstly what style do you like? sharp edges? curves? swirls? its your tag so write it in the style you like. Secondly, have you tried joining up the letters, whats easier and more comfortable? and also remember to not loose basic letter stucture at this stage so dont over complicate your letters. If your finding your name difficult maybe thinking about changing it to something simpler.

[Zire]

exitus. here is how i improve.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/10092008264.jpg

[Shiva.]

that's the way, ahah ahah, i like it, ahah aha
just keep working like that, after a while it will be a nice tag.

[exitus]

yea ive got pages like that too
whats something i should write? i actually have grown on exitus
could u help me with the styles? like pics or someting

[aspen1]

just look at my advatar guys and give me crits cause thats what i use for all my aspen tags

[exitus]

repost it lol

[Shiva.]

exitus, what is it exactly what you want?
and everyone should have such pages.

[exitus]

idk a cool tag
i though you guys could help me
personally i like mine

[mosezone]

aesk-the S is kinda short and i'm not sure about the thing off the E, but it's pretty dope
lack-make it more readable
milk-decent, just work on the flow a little
exitus-simpleeerrrr

new name one liner (for the most part). this particular one is the only one i could flick and it's shitty, but crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02035.jpg

[FLSteele16]

aesk- dude it looks really good.
maoe- lose the extra stuff and make your letters all the same size for now.
zaro- it looks good but i don't like the ! in the o

whats up dudes i haven't posted in a while i got rid of the name roge and i write jinx now. this is the new tag tell me what you think.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/256/scan0002ce5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/scan0002ce5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img178/scan0002ce5.jpg/1/)

[MUSEone]

And u told MAOE to keep ll his letters the same size...

practice wat u preach.

Ur gonna have hell with getting flow for that x.

[FLSteele16]

its just i think his tag would look better with the letters all the same size im not sure if mine would look better that way thats why i posted.

[MUSEone]

most tags DO look better with the letters all the same size until u develop your own style and get good flow going.

[FLSteele16]

yea thats why i said to him to keep his letter the same size....
do you have any crits you could give me?

[MUSEone]

Drop the name.

OR start more simpler and find a good way to flow with that x.

but trust me. it wont be easy.

[exitus]

should i drop my name idk
what should i write/practice

[MUSEone]

Tha fuck?

Im not dr. phil.

I dunno.

[RezOner..]

aesk- dude it looks really good.
maoe- lose the extra stuff and make your letters all the same size for now.
zaro- it looks good but i don't like the ! in the o

whats up dudes i haven't posted in a while i got rid of the name roge and i write jinx now. this is the new tag tell me what you think.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/256/scan0002ce5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/scan0002ce5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img178/scan0002ce5.jpg/1/)

Jink (kweens destroy) writes jinx.

[FLSteele16]

fuck i thought i was the only one.

[RX-1]

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2521/quickaa0.th.jpg (http://img76.imageshack.us/my.php?image=quickaa0.jpg)

[lawlcat]

Trying to get back into writing. Came up with these. Crits anyone?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/sasfg.jpg

[smiley 13]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image039.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image034.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image033.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image022.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image029.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image030.jpg

[Nagger]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/006.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/005.jpg

[Shiva.]

give crits to get crits, bitches

[Zire]

Exitus- if you like your name but fiinding it hard maybe just shorten it or reaarange the letters? like ekzit? texus? Also write out the tag in simple letters like"EXITUS"(or whatever) then write your tag below it, just so you dont forget how letters are meant to look? Evryone was at your stage, its frustrating but put in the time and you will get there.
Lawlcat- wats that say? zak?
nagger- looks alright but its says? soyor? cut the length off the extension down too. Maybe a flick instead?

[Nagger]

soupr...

[lawlcat]

says ask

But I'm really not feeling how they flow.

[BigBlueViolence]

Soupr- I dig it, but I was having a hard time making out the P at first.

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5136/picture085dh7.jpg

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/253/picture086cj9.jpg

[Nagger]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/005-1.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/001.jpg
was bored so i seen your ask lawlcat and just started fuckn around with that name. tell me whatcha think.

[dj3hac]

exitus. here is how i improve.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/10092008264.jpg

I used to do it the same way.

[dj3hac]

http://i36.tinypic.com/bhngox.jpg\


i vote 'YES'!

[Nagger]

forgot this one http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/penuses001.jpg

[Nagger]

Earn what kind of marker is that? I want one of those.

[lawlcat]

those look pretty cool
im trying to get more of a bubbley, curvey type flow in stead of like straight cutoffs on the ends of letters, if that makes sense.

[Nagger]

yeah i know whatcha mean im kinda sick of that bubbly shit though personally.Anyways my first attempt at "zaro"if anyone wants there name pm me meh school now.http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/yoyoyo001.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

Earn what kind of marker is that? I want one of those.

im pretty sure hes using a white out pen

[Zire]

lawlcat my poor attempt at ask. Haha if i were you i would take no notice of it

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/11092008271.jpg

[Nagger]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/penuses004.jpg
ook thanks.

[Zire]

Just came back from a lil taggin session. Taggin on your own can be proper shit.

[cerex89]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081153.jpg
i used a black pilot and it came out green i dont kno how
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081109.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081107.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081105a.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081105.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081055.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081052.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0911081048.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/11092008271.jpg

dont really think you should be out tagging if your hands look like this mayne

[+Hoodwigga]

might wanna shoot him a pm cops are strong on this site

[cerex89]

y????

[+Hoodwigga]

well fuck i dont know if your a retard thats gunna let some info slip that could get you arrested. my bad

[cerex89]

not u the guy askin were the tag is

[Mr yarbles]

Just came back from a lil taggin session. Taggin on your own can be proper shit.

I love tagging on my own
You can get shit done fast and do alot and be out in like no time
With a few people's too heat for me

Ask, hood's right, we told you what to work on now work on it.

jens some of your e's look to edgy and don't flow with the other letters make em wave a bit more if you get what I mean

nagger simple, lose the extensions and addons.

earn move your n in a bit more

dj thanks for bumping me :)

[cerex89]

i get what ur sayin its not the official tag just messin around untill i find what i like

[lawlcat]

Trying to get back into writing. Came up with these. Crits anyone?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/sasfg.jpg
bump?
suggestions?

[+Hoodwigga]

stop trying to make it look like some old 1800s shit or whatever your trying.

[lawlcat]

I'm going for more curves than just straight, cut lines.

[+Hoodwigga]

well stop then. go look at some other tags (not in this thread) to get an idea of what looks good but try not to straight out bite em

[Nagger]

I agree with him go way simpler look at a bunch of tags and you'll kinda start seeing what looks toy and what does not.

[lawlcat]

Changed up the A and the S a bit. Seems to flow a little better.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/HTZDY.jpg

[braxtons a g]

lawl- dude start back from scratch.. you can come up with something way better than that
jens & zire - LEGIT :]

[Doobie]

lol my bad ill delete that post

[Truth.]

a tag i've been workin of for some time now. any critz??

http://www.picamatic.com/show/2008/09/12/09/51/991215_bigthumb.JPG (http://www.picamatic.com/view/991215_truth/)

[Queezy]

On the first one I would say make the u straight lines or hard edged lines and fuck around with the H more but it's coming along

[smiley 13]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image039.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image034.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image033.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image022.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image029.jpg
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/lacks1/Image030.jpg

crits please . i dont think i am in the position to give crits with work this shit

[Zire]

I dont wite ask, lawl cat said he wanted curvy lines so i just quickly came up with that to give him an idea ha ha.
Its weak i know :(

[Eack]

Trying to work on flares... not sure i had a good cap for it but w.e... wat do you guys think
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5522/img0002ft6.jpg

[Strate]

Here's something I've been working on:

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/MasterSword999/graf002.jpg

I'm not too sure what i can do with the L and O in this form. I don't think its bad, but I know I'm far from being able to say that.

[+Hoodwigga]

soh? what the fuck is it
ERASE it doesnt look that bad really. maybe having the exclamation point not so close to the end e would be better

[Strate]

soh? what the fuck is it
ERASE it doesnt look that bad really. maybe having the exclamation point not so close to the end e would be better

I see what i need to work on now. Its supposed to be soal, but I'm havin problems finding a nice way to fit in the a. That and I cant seem to find what i can do with the L

[Strate]

Trying to work on flares... not sure i had a good cap for it but w.e... wat do you guys think

I'm new to this, but it has good flow, and I'd agree with hoodwigga. maybe just a little more space before the '!'

[Shiva.]

erase, hold your can closer to the wall at the bottom, and further away at the top.
just keep practicing, you'll find out how it works.

[Nigel]

Could you crit this please? Tell me how much it sucks and what I should do to it please, thanks.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/213.jpg


loose the arrow and the quotes for starters :P

[Mr yarbles]

Oene you've improved alot
really diggin that kink in the last e keep it up

[+Hoodwigga]

im thinking make the kink come up and touch the upper part of the e and make the underline touch the bottom of the tag as well maybe

[Mr yarbles]

http://i36.tinypic.com/mcdrfc.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2eauumx.jpg

[Truth.]

yarbles try writing with the can so it makes a horizontal line like this - instead of the way you seem to be doin it like this l

should get your tags lookin a bit better letters need more work

[braxtons a g]

eack- you gonna have flares down quick.. i still havent mastered that shit

[lawlcat]

A bit rough, but just trying a new name out.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/bn.jpg

[exitus]

what do u guys think of hizo for a name
it means did in spanish which doesnt make to much sence but still looks cool and has some meaning

[blunttokes]

Could you crit this please? Tell me how much it sucks and what I should do to it please, thanks.

let your hand flow with the marker

keep in the books for a lot longer before u paint ur tags.

[whahappen?]

Could you crit this please? Tell me how much it sucks and what I should do to it please, thanks.
http://www.nicksplat.com/Tvshows/Characters/Nicktoons/The_wild_thornberrys/images/nigel_thornberry_big.gif

anyways
shit saeferoner hand
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9644/getattachmentaspxhg9.jpg
wudever

[+Hoodwigga]

dont like the s and maybe some more flair on one of the end rs

[braxtons a g]

crits :]

[exitus]

no idea what that says
looks like 242

[Zire]

lawlcat- thats an improvement but i dunno if that names taken or whatver.
exit-hizo sounds alright but i found it really hard to make a tag flow with i in the middle but i dunno thats just me. you might have more luck. have a go

[braxtons a g]

no idea what that says
looks like 242

Signature.. red n blue letters LYFE2

[+Hoodwigga]

start over completly
just us your letters without any add ons
cause you you got the plain letters looking good you can start progessing

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akeltag.gif

[exitus]

looks realy cool
i like the sharp lines, there crazy strait

[+Hoodwigga]

i like the oner alot more than your actual tag

[Dying to live]

so do i lol

[braxtons a g]

i know im just tired of starting over :/ the last tag pics pretty ill tho.. not sure who it was.

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/09-13-08_1545.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/09-14-08_0207.jpg
Saefeoner - space it out a lil since ur rounding out ur a and e its gonna be confusing to read
HIZO IS A CAKE ASS NAME!!! Choose a clever name something out of the norm
Akel- Sick ass shit, stay up playuhhhhhhhh

[Game Ova 07]

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/NeoHandy3.jpg
changin my handy up a little bit crits please

[Zire]

Resize the image. Does it say neo? spread your n out abit.

[Game Ova 07]

yeah it says neo

[gumball]

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll193/martin5511/n509985268_1658929_8471.jpg

my old one i dont got any pics of my new one with my new tag

[cerex89]

dont paint ever again

[Mr yarbles]

Word.

and if that says zeser someone should shoot you.

[ShaolinNy]

I know i need alot more practice but what u guys think?

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo04/a0/ab/b5c6f49e7569.jpg


crtis plz!

[Allmont]

better than mine :P

i need some (many) pointers on improvement, srry about the low quality pics:

its not really clear so, the first one says inkarnate and the second says inka

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee59/allmont/SSPX9883.jpg
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee59/allmont/SSPX9882.jpg

[RezOner..]

Wtf? Do real letters.

[Thread-Locks]

hey sneak come up with a word that hasn't been used more than 1600 times

[ShaolinNy]

hey sneak come up with a word that hasn't been used more than 1600 times

I didnt ask for crits on my name plus its a cool name and im the only sneak in my area...Can any one crit me on what i did plz

[Mr yarbles]

hahahaha I find it funny how you said I didn't ask for crits then you go ask for crits.

[Sadistic.Child]

I didnt ask for crits on my name plus its a cool name and im the only sneak in my area...Can any one crit me on what i did plz

seriously be WAY more original with your name, sneak has been used 190909090909 times, and its one of the gayest names ever. get a new name fagget

[ShaolinNy]

hahahaha I find it funny how you said I didn't ask for crits then you go ask for crits.

Hmm im obviously asking crits on my throwie n handies not on my name...So your BEAT on that my freind







seriously be WAY more original with your name, sneak has been used 190909090909 times, and its one of the gayest names ever. get a new name fagget

Go fuk yourself i love how im getting flamed on my name lol when i ask on crits on how my tag is not the name..No one in my area writes sneak n its also a cool name...So your the fag cussing me out on an internet fourm.

[Mr yarbles]

ALright here's some crits
You suck
Your name is gay your hand is wack and your throw fucking sucks too.
No one writes sneak around you cus it's probably the gayest name besides king.

[RezOner..]

Jesus fucking christ. If he wants to write sneak he can write fucking sneak.
@Sneak
Go simpler. Sketch the letters out probably 400 times on loose leaf. Repeat 1000X till its second nature.

[scoot]

http://i35.tinypic.com/1zl6m40.jpg
sorry bout the size i didnt have a chance to resize it

[ShaolinNy]

Jesus fucking christ. If he wants to write sneak he can write fucking sneak.
@Sneak
Go simpler. Sketch the letters out probably 400 times on loose leaf. Repeat 1000X till its second nature.

Thanks you,.....Ok will do...How are my letters? After tons of practice and i can perfect my letters i think it will pretty crazy/good what u think?

[ATE]

Well heres one of my tags that was with one of my throws..
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/HPIM1612-1-1.jpg