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Sadistic.Child
09-14-2008, 09:07 PM
I didnt ask for crits on my name plus its a cool name and im the only sneak in my area...Can any one crit me on what i did plz

seriously be WAY more original with your name, sneak has been used 190909090909 times, and its one of the gayest names ever. get a new name fagget

ShaolinNy
09-14-2008, 09:35 PM
hahahaha I find it funny how you said I didn't ask for crits then you go ask for crits.

Hmm im obviously asking crits on my throwie n handies not on my name...So your BEAT on that my freind







seriously be WAY more original with your name, sneak has been used 190909090909 times, and its one of the gayest names ever. get a new name fagget

Go fuk yourself i love how im getting flamed on my name lol when i ask on crits on how my tag is not the name..No one in my area writes sneak n its also a cool name...So your the fag cussing me out on an internet fourm.

Mr yarbles
09-14-2008, 09:38 PM
ALright here's some crits
You suck
Your name is gay your hand is wack and your throw fucking sucks too.
No one writes sneak around you cus it's probably the gayest name besides king.

RezOner..
09-14-2008, 09:50 PM
Jesus fucking christ. If he wants to write sneak he can write fucking sneak.
@Sneak
Go simpler. Sketch the letters out probably 400 times on loose leaf. Repeat 1000X till its second nature.

scoot
09-14-2008, 10:12 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/1zl6m40.jpg
sorry bout the size i didnt have a chance to resize it

ShaolinNy
09-14-2008, 10:13 PM
Jesus fucking christ. If he wants to write sneak he can write fucking sneak.
@Sneak
Go simpler. Sketch the letters out probably 400 times on loose leaf. Repeat 1000X till its second nature.

Thanks you,.....Ok will do...How are my letters? After tons of practice and i can perfect my letters i think it will pretty crazy/good what u think?

ATE
09-14-2008, 11:35 PM
Well heres one of my tags that was with one of my throws..
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/HPIM1612-1-1.jpg

ErrorOner...
09-15-2008, 12:41 AM
Trying to work on flares... not sure i had a good cap for it but w.e... wat do you guys think
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5522/img0002ft6.jpg

straight up that tag looks good even though those may not be the best flares. thought i'd share my attempt at flares and a couple acrylic mop tags...

AdRe*
09-15-2008, 02:18 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/09-14-08_0207.jpg
Bumpskizzsss

RezOner..
09-15-2008, 04:40 PM
Well heres one of my tags that was with one of my throws..
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/HPIM1612-1-1.jpg

Time to acknowledge that you suck. Don't do halo's don't do qoutes don't do your t like that your not good at graffiti kthxbai

Zire
09-15-2008, 04:59 PM
Fucking around with my tag...

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/15092008323.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/15092008325.jpg

Crits

Nagger
09-15-2008, 06:23 PM
your arrow is jokes. I guess the bottom one is better but like the z and r looks different from the a and o.

lawlcat
09-15-2008, 10:09 PM
feeling it zaro, try doing something with the A if you can, just to make it flow better.

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/ufd.jpg
doker

Mr yarbles
09-15-2008, 11:22 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/1555sog.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2akcljd.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/dphl47.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/mh7cxt.jpg
Few from tonight

zaro no crowns your arn't a king
also the ag dosn't flow very well

lawl cats I dunno what it says

amen your proportions are all off and your eltters don't look so great

ate rez is right.

lawlcat
09-15-2008, 11:26 PM
feelin the K, good stuff.

mine says doker btw.

Mr yarbles
09-15-2008, 11:35 PM
Looks like it says ouker
So fix that up and it'll looks nice

Oops didn't know I put a thumbs down up there hahaha

Zire
09-16-2008, 10:16 AM
zaro no crowns your arn't a king
also the ag dosn't flow very well



Yeh... i am. I just draw shitty on purpose coz i want to be in the toy forum. Noted.

Nagger
09-16-2008, 11:39 AM
Im guessing your being sarcastic. o.o

Nagger
09-16-2008, 11:59 AM
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/souuuuup001.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/souuuuup004.jpg

viseversa101
09-16-2008, 12:20 PM
not to my liking but lookie where its @
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/75.jpg

Zire
09-16-2008, 01:07 PM
Im guessing your being sarcastic. o.o

Haha Indeed.:D

GIG
09-16-2008, 01:25 PM
http://lh4.ggpht.com/deliopera/SM_rZk9SQ5I/AAAAAAAABQ4/7r-KZXFQPvc/s800/0915081617.jpg

Haven't posted here before

@Vise, It looks like it's on the back of a highway sign, but you can't really tell.
@Zire, I like the letters, lose the crown though.

viseversa101
09-16-2008, 01:26 PM
it is

Nagger
09-16-2008, 01:56 PM
is that a tag gig?

GIG
09-16-2008, 02:57 PM
I don't understand your question...

Nagger
09-16-2008, 03:08 PM
Im not even gonna bother.

seywhat
09-16-2008, 03:12 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/hand.jpg

Nigel
09-16-2008, 03:34 PM
What do you guys think of this? Is it TOO simple? I simplified it a lot, and went all lower-case, I found I couldn't do much to the N to make it fit the SER too much, maybe I'll figure it out another time. I think this looks pretty solid but it might be too simple/boring.

Is it considered kinda stupid to have upper and lower case letters in your tag? Like above he has lower case letters but his r is an R...

Masta T
09-16-2008, 03:36 PM
my tag, kinda been messn with the letters. critz? if u think u giot an idea for da name PM me n put it in the exchange n ill try one for u

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/tag.jpg

testr
09-16-2008, 03:59 PM
a t-shirt geting made...
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/713/tshirtee8.jpg

Zire
09-16-2008, 04:39 PM
If thats your tag, i well wouldn't recommend wearing a t-shirt with your tag on it...

testr
09-16-2008, 04:42 PM
i dont realy care to be honest.

police-hey is that your tag?
me-no i bought it.


convesation over lol.

Zire
09-16-2008, 04:47 PM
True.

Rooftop Resident
09-16-2008, 05:32 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/1555sog.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2akcljd.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/dphl47.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/mh7cxt.jpg
Few from tonight

zaro no crowns your arn't a king
also the ag dosn't flow very well

lawl cats I dunno what it says

amen your proportions are all off and your eltters don't look so great

ate rez is right.

Dude, I think you should stick to Aeks, I think that name is fresh because to me it's a play on Aches, Aesk is blah.

Masta T
09-16-2008, 06:40 PM
yea i think thts a bad idea the shirt an it seems like ur full of ur self to.

my tag in highlighter crit? lol

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/tag.jpg

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 06:41 PM
Aeks-best shit ive seen from u. Period.

Just practice more can control. (reffereing to ur stuff in toy bombs/pieces thread)

RezOner..
09-16-2008, 07:06 PM
i dont realy care to be honest.

police-hey is that your tag?
me-no i bought it.


convesation over lol.

Everyone else- Hey, are you a self endorsing cocky ma facka?
You- Why yes, yes I am.

I don't see the point in trying to impress people by putting your tag on a shirt. In fact its kinda gay.

Yarbles fix up yo s

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 07:13 PM
Everyone else- Hey, are you a self endorsing cocky ma facka?
You- Why yes, yes I am.

I don't see the point in trying to impress people by putting your tag on a shirt. In fact its kinda gay.

Yarbles fix up yo s

Who gives a fucking shit.

Im pretty sure nobody but the cops are gonna seriously give 2 shits about his shirt.

If u think its gay, keep ur stupid comments to urself, nobody in ehre gives a shit wat u think, especially him.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:04 PM
bunch'a old shit
2007
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4431/picture034qy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

from like febuary or march 08
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/25/bombingjan19020tm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

march 08
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/3237/1003665to9.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2533/1003681ew8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:06 PM
this..

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/25/bombingjan19020tm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

compared to this...

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2533/1003681ew8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

Nice shit. Keep it up mane.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:08 PM
wurd thanks..

few weeks apart of eachother from what i remember of the start of the 2K8 season.

more flicks once i have time off of work to wonder and find tags lmao

over out

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:10 PM
haha fuck flicking old tags

go out and catch new ones and get flicks.

;)

RezOner..
09-16-2008, 08:13 PM
Who gives a fucking shit.

Im pretty sure nobody but the cops are gonna seriously give 2 shits about his shirt.

If u think its gay, keep ur stupid comments to urself, nobody in ehre gives a shit wat u think, especially him.

This is the internet, I can say what I want. If you have an issue, I don't give a fuck either. Using graffiti as a tool to get people to respect you is low, and pretty fucking gay. Here's some scenarios of what could happen.
You do a tag on a building. You walk into the building wearing your 'wicked awesome self bumping' shirt, they see the tag on the shirt, they call the cops.

Fucktard.

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:17 PM
This is the internet, I can say what I want. If you have an issue, I don't give a fuck either. Using graffiti as a tool to get people to respect you is low, and pretty fucking gay. Here's some scenarios of what could happen.
You do a tag on a building. You walk into the building wearing your 'wicked awesome self bumping' shirt, they see the tag on the shirt, they call the cops.

Fucktard.

So ur saying OBEY is low, and fucking gay?
U think cops go up to EVERY person that has on an OBEy shirt asking them if they are the ones who put up that poster or slap? No.
Theres no difference
Think shit through before u say it.

RezOner..
09-16-2008, 08:18 PM
Cops don't see obey shit up in their city.

Obeys a brand name btw. People don't tell people they wear obey clothing to make them sound better... Unlike people wearing their tag and telling people its their tag so they'll respect them.

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:19 PM
Really? Cause im pretty sure Obey is a VERY WORLDWIDE KNOWN artist....

RezOner..
09-16-2008, 08:20 PM
Except for the fact it's a legit company....

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:24 PM
Theres no difference.

Its an artist wearing their lable on clothing.

Obey may be a brand name but hes also an artist bud.

Who sai danything about repect? No him. Ur the one who said thats wat hes doing it for. Hes probably doing it cause he think s is cool, muchless fucking wants to.

Drop it. Post flicks.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:24 PM
Really? Cause im pretty sure Obey is a VERY WORLDWIDE KNOWN artist....


couldnt have said it any better


obey is oviously known by cops same as banksy for fuck sake.

anti-anti-crime
09-16-2008, 08:26 PM
except that alot people wear OBEY clothing. if you walk in with a shirt with a tag locally known that look slike it was put on with a sharpie there going to see something fucking up. dont be retarded.

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:27 PM
Wow kids, ur taking this WAY to far....

Its HIS fucking shirt let HIM do with it wat HE wants...

Doesnt involve ANY of us. Im just trying to prove a point.

RezOner..
09-16-2008, 08:28 PM
Theres no difference.

Its an artist wearing their lable on clothing.

Obey may be a brand name but hes also an artist bud.

Who sai danything about repect? No him. Ur the one who said thats wat hes doing it for. Hes probably doing it cause he think s is cool, muchless fucking wants to.

Drop it. Post flicks.

Except for it's like buying your own art... And not selling any.

anti-anti-crime
09-16-2008, 08:28 PM
and now your just backing out muse.
we wiiiinnnnnn

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:29 PM
Buying ur own art?

How can u buy something if its already in your posession?

U make no sense...

No, its just really going way to far. Its a shirt with a tag on it.....big fucking deal.

Plus, u only have one post in this debate, other than that one.

U don win shit. =D

anti-anti-crime
09-16-2008, 08:33 PM
now i have 3.
your wrong.
thats 3. if i had the chance id keep it going but it seems like its over :[

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:33 PM
obey is himself.... sells his stuff to local and worldwide stores... whats wrong with that?

money has always been good so why not take the offer and just SHUT THE FUCK UP!

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:35 PM
and you dont get arrested for wearing ECKO clothing it has graffiti all over there shirts

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:37 PM
Ive seen Stussy slaps up in my town and i have a few of the shirts, not ONCE have i had a cop come up to me and ask, "hey did u put up that slap on such and such street?"

anti-anti-crime
09-16-2008, 08:38 PM
because thats a NAME FUCKING BRAND
im saying you walk out with a shitty white shirt with a sharpie tag on the back. cops arent completely oblivious to name brands from something somebody just did.

MUSEone
09-16-2008, 08:39 PM
Who says the kid wont start a company?

U never know...

mosezone
09-16-2008, 08:48 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/1555sog.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2akcljd.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/dphl47.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/mh7cxt.jpg
Few from tonight

zaro no crowns your arn't a king
also the ag dosn't flow very well

lawl cats I dunno what it says

amen your proportions are all off and your eltters don't look so great

ate rez is right.

what city are you from?

BigBlueViolence
09-16-2008, 08:55 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1096/picture085sc5.jpg

Reposting due to lack of camera cord.

Can't really crit a page full of talk.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:58 PM
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1606/15921105lk2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
small cuz i cropped it

ROALONEZ OE

Eack
09-16-2008, 09:02 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4364/img0011pl2.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/20/img0010mx8.jpg

lawlcat
09-16-2008, 09:02 PM
feeling the first one.
the second gets kind of crazy at the beginning.

WoeInfinite
09-16-2008, 09:08 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/091408_18151.jpg

BigBlueViolence
09-16-2008, 09:08 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1096/picture085sc5.jpg

bottom of page bump
erase- I think you should use the style from the first pic, but without connecting them.
woe- dope, I just think your E should be a little bigger, to make it even with the other letters.

blunttokes
09-16-2008, 09:10 PM
[quote=BigBlueViolence;1206690]bottom of page bump
erase- I think you should use the style from the first pic, but without connecting them.
quote]



i was thinkin the same thing but the S on the second one would flow better if it was in the first one not as aonliner.....

keep it up erase.

SHIZAM! lol

impulse555
09-16-2008, 09:14 PM
i uno first tag almost got caught to so i think ill practise with cans a little more before i do a local place... duno if the pic uploaed

Eack
09-16-2008, 09:27 PM
i was thinkin the same thing but the S on the second one would flow better if it was in the first one not as aonliner.....

agreed
``PS: SHIZAM!

Mr yarbles
09-16-2008, 10:16 PM
what city are you from?

Chandler/tempe
How come?

Woe that's by far one of the best tags I've seen from you looks sick dude keep it up

erase kinda hard to read.

mosezone
09-16-2008, 11:28 PM
just cause that hand above you's repping XMEN, which is a big crew up in chicago. maybe they've got people across the US, not sure.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 11:30 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1096/picture085sc5.jpg

Reposting due to lack of camera cord.

Can't really crit a page full of talk.
where you from?

BigBlueViolence
09-16-2008, 11:31 PM
where you from?

Detroit

Mr yarbles
09-16-2008, 11:39 PM
just cause that hand above you's repping XMEN, which is a big crew up in chicago. maybe they've got people across the US, not sure.

Yeah he's in xmen and ae
Dosn't rep any az crews for some reason
Pretty dope dude
There's an interview with him in bombin magazine it's on their site I think

Sadistic.Child
09-17-2008, 01:05 AM
mr yarbles, i just realized you skate :)
your reflections in one of the pics on the other page.
i skate too >_<
been 9 yurrrz
fuck thats so off topic.


erase- your doing okay, just do regualr key board letters for now, looks way nicer... hard to believe man, but true.
and dont bother connecting letters for now, thats one thing thats really hard to make look good.

Mr yarbles
09-17-2008, 08:45 AM
haha yeah I've been skating for about three years now

Paper tag:
http://i35.tinypic.com/33u8osw.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/11tla3o.jpg
and I know I'm not a king so don't give me that speech hah

testr
09-17-2008, 11:48 AM
im sorry for bringing this up again but...

Who says the kid wont start a company?

U never know...

yes. exactly that actully. my mum knows a couple of owners of shops and they said they would take a couple as a favour and see how it goes.
i just need to get them made first.
so thanks muse.

and im cocky because?

lawlcat
09-17-2008, 01:51 PM
on paper. says doker.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/dgg.jpg

ErrorOner...
09-17-2008, 06:35 PM
A freestyle handy i did using my ghetto flowpen with my homemade ink..kinda drunk that night as well. :D
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0917081337.jpg

+Hoodwigga
09-17-2008, 06:47 PM
alcohol is quite a common excuse now isnt it

Sadistic.Child
09-17-2008, 07:13 PM
A freestyle handy i did using my ghetto flowpen with my homemade ink..kinda drunk that night as well. :D
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0917081337.jpg

Raw bite with the sun and the clouds

Mr yarbles
09-17-2008, 07:37 PM
Idk I wouldn't really call it a bite since alot of people do that
But still clouds and ish usually only look good on handies that are fucking amazing
and your letters aren't really all that great

ErrorOner...
09-17-2008, 09:22 PM
yea yo fuck that bite shit man!! That's like saying if I did quotation marks then im biting someone!! Ok so maybe thats an exaggeration but still... I saw that cloud shit on photobucket just browsing, And you are right yarbles but I still thought it looked good! After all this is a toy forum.

+Hoodwigga
09-17-2008, 09:28 PM
and your a toy

ErrorOner...
09-17-2008, 09:38 PM
and your a toy

Hows about you shut up and post a flick or are you scared of being judged??:(

Game Ova 07
09-17-2008, 09:41 PM
hoodwigga go back to the bean town thread.

+Hoodwigga
09-17-2008, 09:58 PM
and what the fuck is he bean town thread?
oh and i dont need to prove myself over the fucking interent ok dipshits?
ive seen your shit and thats just what is is shit. im not afiad of being judged i dont need you little inbreeds to tell me that my stuff is better than yours ok?

BigBlueViolence
09-17-2008, 10:10 PM
Hows about you shut up and post a flick or are you scared of being judged??:(

Haha, are you kidding? You're obviously the one thats afraid of being judged, throwing a fucking tantrum over crits. Also, his shit is absolutely better than yours is.

Sadistic.Child
09-17-2008, 11:02 PM
A freestyle handy i did using my ghetto flowpen with my homemade ink..kinda drunk that night as well. :D
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0917081337.jpg

looks like a sun bite to me

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3148/2811959681_b55240e81e.jpg?v=1220145710

Nagger
09-17-2008, 11:04 PM
no just a failure.

springbreak95
09-18-2008, 02:14 AM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00238.jpg
i gotz oneliners

Zire
09-18-2008, 11:48 AM
Too many people on this forum are too big for their littlle boots....sigh.

lawlcat
09-18-2008, 01:33 PM
on paper. says doker.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/dgg.jpg

bump for everyone bitching about a bite on the toy forums...


Really?

Juicee
09-18-2008, 04:38 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/jerrel.jpg

my first name

Genghis Tron.
09-19-2008, 09:45 PM
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/uzyy014.jpg

Critsssssss.

Sadistic.Child
09-19-2008, 09:53 PM
like this! also, resize your pics smaller

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3157/2871766180_ce99606d28.jpg?v=0

Genghis Tron.
09-19-2008, 09:56 PM
like this! also, resize your pics smaller

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3157/2871766180_ce99606d28.jpg?v=0

Haha, thanks yo. I'll resize 'em next time.

Genghis Tron.
09-19-2008, 10:40 PM
Hmm..I can't seem to make it look good at all.

Sadistic.Child
09-19-2008, 10:48 PM
takes practice man, use a chisle tip marker. not a round one for that type of tag.
use round one for very simple keyboard letter tags

Mr yarbles
09-19-2008, 11:01 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/m7ukr9.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/29cm4g7.jpg

Dork do exactly what sadistic said haha

BA_Rekaone
09-19-2008, 11:49 PM
yo can someone make me up a handstlye for SLY?? ive got a decent throwie, ive been tryin and tryin and they all look like shit. i use to write Rekaone but i changed to SLY. greatly appreciated thanks.

Sadistic.Child
09-20-2008, 12:04 AM
i would but Y's are hard to be original about

exitus
09-21-2008, 03:25 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2i12ghw.jpg

crits please
yea dork looks good

Genghis Tron.
09-21-2008, 09:03 PM
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/dorkone.jpg

Getting any better ?

Exitus : Dude, it looks dec but its kinda jumbled up and hard to read. Maybe try a different style, my opinion though. You're still better than me.

Sadistic.Child
09-21-2008, 09:07 PM
Exitus: your tryin to hard to make it look nice, dropp all the add ons your trying. tags rarely use addons its usualy just a bar of the letter tweaked a certain way.

Dork: getting better bro! keep it up, work on your speed and flow, i noticed when i rock my tags it only flows good when i go fast. ill get some pics of tags up soon.
Dork. keep it like that till you got your letters on lock, then try to get more original with them.
P.S. I love your name dork. i think i might rock some dork handies for the hell of it lmfao

Genghis Tron.
09-21-2008, 09:09 PM
Exitus: your tryin to hard to make it look nice, dropp all the add ons your trying. tags rarely use addons its usualy just a bar of the letter tweaked a certain way.

Dork: getting better bro! keep it up, work on your speed and flow, i noticed when i rock my tags it only flows good when i go fast. ill get some pics of tags up soon.
Dork. keep it like that till you got your letters on lock, then try to get more original with them.
P.S. I love your name dork. i think i might rock some dork handies for the hell of it lmfao

Haha thanks yo. I like my name too.

exitus
09-21-2008, 09:19 PM
god damn it lol its always to complicated

how bout thishttp://i34.tinypic.com/2s97sbc.jpg

lawlcat
09-21-2008, 09:32 PM
^^ whats going on with the U?

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/asa.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-21-2008, 09:38 PM
exitus, dont so that underline S shit. its bunk, and do a normal U

Lawl, whats that say? joker?

exitus
09-21-2008, 09:42 PM
am i doing it right?
http://i33.tinypic.com/v62a9g.jpg

lawlcat
09-21-2008, 09:43 PM
doker.
the D is a bit off in this one. figured id post it anyways since this thread is coming back alive.


edit: that looks better exitus. loose the add on the T and see what you come up with.

Scratch
09-21-2008, 09:47 PM
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0915081130.jpg
Molotow Pocket Chrome

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0913081507.jpg
Homemade gluepen marker

exitus
09-21-2008, 09:49 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/inyfep.jpg
then im just writing my name everywhere
thats not art thats vandalism

lawlcat
09-21-2008, 09:53 PM
...isn't that the point?
you'd be writing your name everywhere no matter how it looked.

better flick.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/sfda.jpg

exitus
09-21-2008, 09:56 PM
sure but whats the difference between a writer and a retard with a sharpie
style
thats basically my handwriting

lawlcat
09-21-2008, 10:02 PM
i'm basically telling you to start fresh.
work with shit. add ons aren't the only form of style. work with the letters first, then the adds if needed.

exitus
09-21-2008, 10:05 PM
but how much can you do with letters, not much
just like a little here, a little there

Sadistic.Child
09-21-2008, 10:07 PM
yea, exitus, do not do add ons onto your letters keep them simple homie

digi oneliner i did for Sneak

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3010/2877844984_f4331f7594.jpg?v=0

lawlcat
09-21-2008, 10:08 PM
im just saying, its possible.
look around at other peoples tags to get idea, hell bite if you need to. just to get you started.
then go from there developing your own style.

Scratch
09-21-2008, 10:08 PM
to be honest exitus, just listen to them. everyone always thinks the way youre thinking until they realize how important simples are.

id rather see a wicked average simple tag

than a wicked average complicated tag

exitus
09-21-2008, 10:14 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/2it659l.jpg
good tips
ill work on simples

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
09-22-2008, 12:13 AM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5850/forcesun2.jpg

exitus
09-22-2008, 12:13 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5706/19457986si3.jpg

whacha think

exitus
09-22-2008, 12:14 AM
cross looks good but all your drips go into the letters and makes it super hard to read
if u use paint do it level so it drips down and not into your tag

Nigel
09-22-2008, 08:09 AM
What's your guys' thoughts on this? (nser)

Is it too simple?

Thanks.

EDIT: Can you guys see the image if I host it from my computer? If not, I'll use a image hosting site.

exitus
09-22-2008, 12:51 PM
i really like it, great simple

Zire
09-22-2008, 03:09 PM
try using a an upper case R, then tend to look a bit better

Nigel
09-22-2008, 03:21 PM
Thanks, I think yours is pretty good too exitus but I think the u seems a little off... I think maybe putting it a bit closer to the t might look better.

I'll try the upper R, but would that mean I would have to do all my throwies as nseR?

Wallace
09-22-2008, 05:42 PM
both exitus and nser need to work A LOT on their handstyles. both are incredibly simple and messy.

Culture_Shock
09-22-2008, 06:29 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2i12ghw.jpg

crits please
yea dork looks good

Forget what everyones saying dude, this one looks tight.
A little loopy, but at least it's original...
And I think your tags look better on paper than with a tablet.

Mr_Amaziing
09-22-2008, 09:12 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/484/dsc00860gb6.jpg

Exitus- Looks good (kinda loopy,but still looks aiight)
Nigel- Too simple, it'll look better with a capital R fo'sho

Critz please!!

Panda Jerk
09-22-2008, 09:14 PM
make all the letters the same level

try going simpler maybe

exitus
09-22-2008, 10:58 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7224/0922082253fy7.jpg


http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8459/0922082255lh3.jpg


its dark, thats why i dont use camera. paint is easyer to show you it but i work it out on paper first

Mr yarbles
09-22-2008, 11:21 PM
You all really need to give crits to get.

http://i36.tinypic.com/214thsm.jpg
Aeskone srk Ripmonzter297.

Exitus dude seriously do what we tell you simple letters man
And that name is so unproportioned it going to eb really hard to write

unsuccsessfull
09-22-2008, 11:36 PM
sakkuuuuuura
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1780.jpg

ColdBlooded
09-23-2008, 02:43 AM
Zoner kerso fenek need to have a dht picnic somewhere by the ocean<3

This saturday actually...bring paint, be there or be square kiddo :)

exitus
09-23-2008, 09:10 AM
what did u write that with, crayon?
looks like a good tag but a realy shity surface/marker

lawlcat
09-23-2008, 12:08 PM
Yea tag looks pretty solid.
Get something better to write it with.


...isn't that the point?
you'd be writing your name everywhere no matter how it looked.

better flick.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/sfda.jpg
bump.

Strate
09-23-2008, 12:41 PM
I've worked on my tag more and changed it up. Unfortunately all I have with me now is a regular sharpie, all my big stuff is out of reach right now. Anyway, this is what I have now:


http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/MasterSword999/GetAttachment-1.jpg





Exitus- I'm likin the u and the way the E flows through. It is loopy, but i think its a cool style.
Joker- Love the J and R very nice flow

exitus
09-23-2008, 03:12 PM
on which one i posted 3
im trying to find one style and improve on it, i posted my 3 prospects up there

Strate
09-23-2008, 05:05 PM
on which one i posted 3
im trying to find one style and improve on it, i posted my 3 prospects up there

i liked the 2nd one you posted on this page. The third pic you posted, I like how you combined the E and x, but i still think the 2nd one posted is the best.

What do you think of mine?

BA_Rekaone
09-23-2008, 05:22 PM
yo can someone make me up a handstyle for "Sly"? i have a pretty good throwie but i always fail on my handstyle for it.

exitus
09-23-2008, 08:44 PM
good lol, i put 2 in a panara today
ill stick with that one

Strate
09-23-2008, 08:48 PM
good lol, i put 2 in a panara today
ill stick with that one


I've worked on my tag more and changed it up. Unfortunately all I have with me now is a regular sharpie, all my big stuff is out of reach right now. Anyway, this is what I have now:


http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/MasterSword999/GetAttachment-1.jpg

What do u think of mine?

ColdBlooded
09-23-2008, 09:12 PM
Read...its obviosuly a sakura it says right above it

DRONE_905
09-23-2008, 09:27 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/hx3eqp.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/2m3fbqx.jpg

Crits?

Baron
09-23-2008, 09:57 PM
yo can someone make me up a handstyle for "Sly"? i have a pretty good throwie but i always fail on my handstyle for it.

Haha I used to write sly back when I was 13-14. Anyway we aren't here to do your bidding, we'll exchange and crit but we will not do your job for you.

unsuccsessfull
09-23-2008, 11:00 PM
what did u write that with, crayon?
looks like a good tag but a realy shity surface/marker
it was a sakura smartone

Panda Jerk
09-23-2008, 11:04 PM
What do u think of mine?

i think it sucks.... gooooo waaay simpler

Sadistic.Child
09-23-2008, 11:12 PM
hes right, simple does it

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3047/2881309944_9bb2bd44d9.jpg?v=0

chillen with the homies and got bored.
see, its simple :)
fuck my hands are tooooooo generic

Mr yarbles
09-23-2008, 11:21 PM
Dope stuff sadistic

Inkiefinger
09-24-2008, 12:31 AM
http://img248.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00159po9.jpg

Sorry couldnt get it to work so you have to click link, but it says Hait. say what you feel

Nigel
09-24-2008, 07:33 AM
To be honest, that is whack.

Nigel
09-24-2008, 08:17 AM
Crits / thoughts?

Zire
09-24-2008, 10:21 AM
Iinkie, keep your letters the same size.
Nigel- its an improvement but lose the swirls, looks kinda gay and move your letters in closer.

Nigel
09-24-2008, 02:30 PM
Thanks for the advice so far.

How's these? Which one is the best out of the 3?

GaZm13
09-24-2008, 02:37 PM
I think the 2nd one looks the best but lose the halo and the underline. They aren't necessary.

Nigel
09-24-2008, 03:21 PM
Is this better?

And I hope I'm not being a critwhore, if I am, sorry.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-24-2008, 05:00 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/untitled-7.jpg

Nigel
09-24-2008, 05:06 PM
I think that looks really good but I don't like the T (The first letter is a T right?)
Better the T and then the whole tag will look great.

Then again... I'm a toy.

+Hoodwigga
09-24-2008, 05:09 PM
nah im feeling the t but not the es

Nigel
09-24-2008, 05:10 PM
There's an s?

I thought it said TezoR

+Hoodwigga
09-24-2008, 05:26 PM
the two e's in there. but yeah its tezer

Sadistic.Child
09-24-2008, 06:04 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/untitled-7.jpg

hey homie,
steezie!!
not much you can do with T's eh, flows great, diggin that kick on the R
keep it fresh, your rockin it good dont listen to them when they say they dont like a certain letter when they cant draw their own name if they depended on it,

+Hoodwigga
09-24-2008, 06:08 PM
you saying i cant do a tag if i depended on it?

Nigel
09-24-2008, 06:10 PM
He's calling us out man... But I suck so all I'm going to do is be your cheerleader.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-24-2008, 07:52 PM
hey homie,
steezie!!
not much you can do with T's eh, flows great, diggin that kick on the R
keep it fresh, your rockin it good dont listen to them when they say they dont like a certain letter when they cant draw their own name if they depended on it,
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3047/2881309944_9bb2bd44d9.jpg?v=0
bump this shit

oh and hoodwigga and friend it looks better painted. ;)

+Hoodwigga
09-24-2008, 07:55 PM
word i aint saying it looks bad im just saying i think it would look better if you messed with the e's though.
and can you actually do the r like that with a marker? dope if so

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-24-2008, 08:07 PM
its easier to do on paper than ms paint

Slushi
09-24-2008, 08:16 PM
What's tezer doing in the toy forum?


http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4121/scan0007bi4.jpg
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4267/tagonthingzu7.jpg
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5429/scan0008oy3.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-24-2008, 08:19 PM
whats sluser doing in the toy forum, im confused?!
:s

and tezer. i can rock that MS paint stuff too! :(

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3163/2886522104_94eef81e65.jpg?v=0

Nigel
09-24-2008, 08:57 PM
WTF that is amazing.

Fuck.

Slushi
09-24-2008, 08:59 PM
ms paint style haha

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/706/slusermm8.jpg

Sadistic.Child
09-24-2008, 09:04 PM
haha sluse, resize that and sig it

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3185/2885726633_c7971735a9.jpg?v=0

Sadistic.Child
09-24-2008, 09:18 PM
sorry for the double post,
and one for you sluser

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3010/2885753887_68c9ce4fb8.jpg?v=0

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-24-2008, 09:41 PM
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/untitled-8.jpg
for bash:
http://www.plong.com/MusicCatalog/B/Baby%20Bash%20-%20Super%20Saucy/Baby%20Bash%20-%20Super%20Saucy.jpg

kayotix
09-24-2008, 10:50 PM
nice handstyle sezer, some sick letters

heres my potential new name and new style, criticism always welcome

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3594/noahti1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

GaZm13
09-24-2008, 11:15 PM
I like that handstyle KAOTIX.
What does it say though? I'm a little confused.

Reason To-Shine
09-24-2008, 11:19 PM
I think it says noah

GaZm13
09-25-2008, 12:02 AM
That's what I thought but wasn't totally sure of it.

rsakens
09-25-2008, 05:30 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0007d.jpg?t=1222335860
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0018.jpg?t=1222335881

Sadistic.Child
09-25-2008, 11:50 AM
keane, try a different bar for the left bar on that K

| /
|/
|\
| \

that bar

Zire
09-25-2008, 12:35 PM
Noah Thats okay, But pretty hard to read.
Havent posted anything in a while. Heres the lastest with a brown felt tip. Um to other toys like myself, i would take a break from bomming science for a couple weeks and just sketch. You do improve. Any way crits?
http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/25092008331.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/25092008332.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/25092008333.jpg

BAGS
09-25-2008, 01:28 PM
Zire- I think your shit looks good. I like the simple letters, but it gets its point across. I would lose that halo though.


I write Esk. Here are a couple pictures from my phone. I know its basic but whatever, any crits would help please. thanks.


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/eskhand.jpg

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/eskhand2.jpg

abco
09-25-2008, 04:06 PM
Middle one is definitely the best out of the 3, I would throw some flavor into the s and k, I like your e a lot.

gcrolla
09-25-2008, 04:31 PM
Zire-Pretty simple, dont really have much to say except dont put the underline or extentions
Bags-Middle is best, dont add quotation marks, underline or the extentions on the K though


http://i35.tinypic.com/29olph3.jpg

abco
09-25-2008, 04:59 PM
Not too shabby, great simples imo. I like the Y a lot and I think you got the right idea on keeping the same theme throughout the whole tag.

BAGS
09-25-2008, 06:36 PM
^I agree. Simples are looking clean. I actually don't like the Y. It looks good, just not my style.

Thanks for the crits. What do you mean with flavor? Lol what else can i do with the S?

LeaksOne
09-25-2008, 06:39 PM
say - im feelin that. nice an simple
zire - i like all those but i would agree about taken the halo off.
bags - i like those but they can improve

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff020.jpg
im not too content with it but whatever. crits??

BAGS
09-25-2008, 06:46 PM
I think that is pretty good. I don't really like your S though, looks more like a 5 to me.

LeaksOne
09-25-2008, 06:50 PM
haha it does. i prefer my old S to this one. one of our fellow members suggested i change it. thanx for the crit tho

mmmburgers
09-25-2008, 07:36 PM
Leaks - make your letters smooth, dont go for the boxy type
cause it looks ugly as shit. but yeah, make them smoother, and get the flow
uhmm... yeah.

LeaksOne
09-25-2008, 09:08 PM
how am i suppose to round out a L?

blunttokes
09-25-2008, 09:10 PM
everything on this page is paper might aswell break that


http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5030/dscf0317bw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4726/dscf0318tf0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7341/dscf0319hm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sacwacko
09-25-2008, 10:41 PM
todays shit
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6329.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6330.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6333.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6335.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6340.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6342.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6344.jpg

blunttokes
09-25-2008, 10:58 PM
hahah nice bong.. im gettin a new bong tomorrow pics for u :P


go paint those tags bro...

Mr yarbles
09-25-2008, 11:01 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/vr5yx0.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/dcyld.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/xayq6f.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/241v09x.jpg

Crits?

sack they look good but you should invest in a better marker

Blunt looks good

Leaks they're on the right track just make them more rounded and try to kill the negative space flow is almost alot about negative space
Close it up and lose the edgy stuff

Say looks really good man you've been improving

sacwacko
09-25-2008, 11:17 PM
hahah nice bong.. im gettin a new bong tomorrow pics for u :P


go paint those tags bro...

Haha, i made another. way better. Its a ghetto ROOR. I call it the POOR bong. :P
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6311.jpg
sure rips though. :D


and tags for my chat ;)

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6178.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6176.jpg

And some toy ass local shit.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6177.jpg

lawlcat
09-26-2008, 12:21 AM
this whole page is looking pretty good.
waiting on getting this up around town.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/etgfgn.jpg

rsakens
09-26-2008, 05:19 AM
fresh hand sacowako

Juicee
09-26-2008, 11:04 AM
this whole page is looking pretty good.
waiting on getting this up around town.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/etgfgn.jpg

if that says joker, that name is used A LOT

lawlcat
09-26-2008, 12:11 PM
Doker actually.
I can imagine how many times its used. Not that it matters because there is NO graff scene around my area.

BAGS
09-26-2008, 12:55 PM
Doker- I think you should change your D. It looks way to close to joker. I think other than that though it looks pretty decent. Maybe make the top of the E curl in more. I donno, those types of E's are hard as shit.

Yarbles - I'm feeling it but i think your S looks too much like a 5. I guess thats a type of style but i dont really like it, I think your tag would like better with a different S. I think your K looks fresh though.

Dude with the bong - I think your shit looks pretty good. but definitely cop a new marker, lol.

Bomberx
09-26-2008, 02:53 PM
blunttokes - too drippy for me :p
Mr-yabbles - Sick i like the last pic , are you a photographer?
sacwacko - diggin the first pic (of the second post) for the first post , i think you need to rack a new marker lol
Lawlcat - I dunno about the bottom part of the R :\ maybe thats just me tho


My attempt at tags ,
Crits? (says FLAK)

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img144.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img141.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img140.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img142.jpg

BAGS
09-26-2008, 02:59 PM
I donno dude I'm not really feeling it. I don't like the loop on the F or how the L looks like a J. your A is a little basic but i think your K is pretty sweet. Overall it needs work though

HëRbN
09-26-2008, 03:02 PM
i think its oogly :/ sometimes less is more....

And letter structure should still be a factor in tags too

7nationarmy
09-26-2008, 03:09 PM
i think its oogly :/ sometimes less is more....

And letter structure should still be a factor in tags too

thats true
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1133.jpg
still preety toy :\

HëRbN
09-26-2008, 03:11 PM
But light years ahead of BomberX just because its simple and steezy. lookin good keep at it!

Culture_Shock
09-26-2008, 11:43 PM
blunttokes - too drippy for me :p
Mr-yabbles - Sick i like the last pic , are you a photographer?
sacwacko - diggin the first pic (of the second post) for the first post , i think you need to rack a new marker lol
Lawlcat - I dunno about the bottom part of the R :\ maybe thats just me tho


My attempt at tags ,
Crits? (says FLAK)

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img144.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img141.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img140.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s310/14nick/img142.jpg


Shoddy execution aside, I guess you deserve props for keeping the a and k simple... Nothing else works though. I think that the FL has potential to be a sweet K.

abco
09-26-2008, 11:57 PM
not sure how to make the O work, either it's too oval or perfect circle yet takes up too much space. Any tips?

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm114/trevorsklx/123.png

Panda Jerk
09-27-2008, 12:22 AM
plus nobody i know got killed in south central l.a., today was a good day. -ice cube
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0001.jpg

Speedy
09-27-2008, 01:16 AM
Bomber your FL looks like an H exploded. Lose the connections.
7 that's not bad at all. Simple but dope. Try making your pieces more like that.
Crocs keep working. You're on the right track. but something simple in the o. Even a line or 2 would work.
Panda I should just say give crits to get crits, hypocrite. But I'm diggin the middle yellow one. Keep working at it.

Panda Jerk
09-27-2008, 01:21 AM
thanks and idk if u read the post but it said plus nobody i know got killed in south central l.a., today was a good day.. i didnt say anything about asking for crits.. but thanks anyway... and im sorry for hurting your feelings.. i never looked back a couple of pages to see the so many crits u gave.. i apologize... like the sage francis song.:)

Speedy
09-27-2008, 01:25 AM
You didn't hurt my feelings. Just irritated and confused me. Anybody that frequents in the toy forum knows I give plenty of crits. And you must be smoking some good shit right now. I can't tell if you're serious or sarcastic. lol

Thread-Locks
09-27-2008, 01:30 AM
here's my tag that i've been working on lately, crits? and sorry for the size, you just have to click on it to see it bigger, so please take the precious time to do so

lawlcat
09-27-2008, 01:31 AM
i can't figure out what that says for the life of me...
start simple.

Panda Jerk
09-27-2008, 01:32 AM
sorry i must be an involent but what does it say

lawlcat
09-27-2008, 01:50 AM
thinking of changing up my E to lowercase. anyone?

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/aS.jpg

Panda Jerk
09-27-2008, 02:02 AM
im always down for a lowercase e

Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-27-2008, 02:20 AM
not bad panda simple it down a little bit for now

Thread-Locks
09-27-2008, 02:28 AM
sorry i must be an involent but what does it say

@ mine? It says Volta

abco
09-27-2008, 02:30 AM
Hey speedy what do you mean by a line or 2? like add a line in it like an "x" like some put in their A's, O's, D's and P's. I would love to hear more feedback, thanks.

Zire
09-27-2008, 11:58 AM
Doker, Not bad, the lowercase looks better and the extension on the r is excessive.
Volta- Go simpler, toys seem to think if people cant read it and theres random lines everywhere its a good tag.

Meh.. I need a chisel tip.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/27092008360.jpg

impulse555
09-27-2008, 12:21 PM
heres my third tag finished just in time cause right when i signed it some people showed up. the second pick is my fourth and its just quick logo almost out of paint

BAGS
09-27-2008, 01:16 PM
not feeling it impulse. it's mad sloppy, small and crammed. your tag needs work and that character is just lame. i would just sketch some more.

Masta T
09-27-2008, 02:34 PM
heres my third tag finished just in time cause right when i signed it some people showed up. the second pick is my fourth and its just quick logo almost out of paint

defrf needs way more flow, very sloppy, the p looks like a at guy weiner and i didnt evn kno the U was a u.
so work on flow, neatness, form of letters.

7nationarmy
09-27-2008, 03:14 PM
impulse:defenatlly the right thread..no means to be an asshole..keep at it ull get it
zaro:not to bad but not great..more flow tosimple letters look better in te long run
heres one of mine...not great but crits or hates are welcome :)
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/Photo15.jpg

Thread-Locks
09-27-2008, 03:36 PM
Volta- Go simpler, toys seem to think if people cant read it and theres random lines everywhere its a good tag.






I don't see how it's hard to read, or has "random" lines, but thanks i'll keep that in mind
And as for yours, the extras just don't seem necessary, and the R is pretty generic

ErrorOner...
09-27-2008, 05:42 PM
Volta- Go simpler, toys seem to think if people cant read it and theres random lines everywhere its a good tag.

hahah you speak the truth!! Some kid at my buddys house who was picking some buddha said he used to write everywhere and THIS was his tag!! I tore his ass up SOO bad he left without his weed! hahahahahaa
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0925082133.jpg

Well it's a good way to ruin a perfectly good hat!

DEAR
09-27-2008, 06:33 PM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1623/dscf0823ur7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
one liner idea
anyhtni

BigBlueViolence
09-27-2008, 06:50 PM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/Photo15.jpg

Does that say pubes? If it does then I commend you for having both a funny name and some style.

If it doesn't, then dude, that shit looks like it says pubes.

cerex89
09-27-2008, 06:54 PM
walking downtown sj
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0927080915.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0927080914a.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0927080914.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0927080913.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0927080912a.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0927080911.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0926081151.jpg

impulse555
09-27-2008, 07:35 PM
[QUOTE=BAGS;1216196]not feeling it impulse. it's mad sloppy, small and crammed. your tag needs work

thnx but the tag is a lot bigger like 3 meters wide 1 tall and i did it fast cause i was probaly gona get caught

but thnx

Sadistic.Child
09-27-2008, 07:58 PM
thnx but the tag is a lot bigger like 3 meters wide 1 tall and i did it fast cause i was probaly gona get caught

but thnx

you suck at lying, those are stock caps.
therefore the size of that is around maybe 1-1.5 meters. or could be smaller.
the 1foot tall thing is believable though. just.... dont like cause we know our shit way better.
just keep it more simpler next time and dont lie.

Epoc
09-27-2008, 08:15 PM
you suck at lying, those are stock caps.
their for......therefore


that was bugging me.

Sadistic.Child
09-27-2008, 08:31 PM
i fixed it you grammar nazi :p

7nationarmy
09-27-2008, 10:24 PM
Does that say pubes? If it does then I commend you for having both a funny name and some style.

If it doesn't, then dude, that shit looks like it says pubes.

lmao yeah it says pubes bro and thnx son..i try well i am still toy though son..holllla

Speedy
09-27-2008, 11:45 PM
Hey speedy what do you mean by a line or 2? like add a line in it like an "x" like some put in their A's, O's, D's and P's. I would love to hear more feedback, thanks.

Yeah pretty much. Or the double parallel lines. Those are pretty common. Like this-(ll). maybe even just one line. A small swirl possibly. MAYBE you could get away with a star. Just try different stuff and post it.

klic
09-28-2008, 12:40 AM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELRedTags.jpg

im really shitty at handstyles but ive been working at them, crits would be nice...

impulse - sorry but that looks horrible, i dont even know what that second thing is, go simpler and start from there

dear - looks good but id lose the halo thing and make the round part of your d a little smaller

pubes??? - not sure why your writing pubes, but it does look nice haha

BAGS
09-28-2008, 12:27 PM
Sphel I would work on your H, it looks way to plain you know? Your E needs work too, that style of E is hard to pull off. Stay up though man.

BAGS
09-28-2008, 03:15 PM
My shit looks the same as my first post. Any crits? My shit is really basic but i guess baby steps ..


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/eskhand3.jpg

Panda Jerk
09-28-2008, 04:03 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0004-1.jpg
spitting on children FTW

impulse555
09-28-2008, 05:35 PM
well heres a new one thati made p and the tiki thingie

http://www.google.ca/url?q=http://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DKgdUV20vn_4&sa=X&oi=video_result&resnum=2&ct=thumbnail&usg=AFQjCNHpmiWGBy2kAod-Cw0MZlfBY9q1pw

lawlcat
09-28-2008, 05:44 PM
stay on paper and do simples.
new to graff thread too.

BAGS
09-28-2008, 05:52 PM
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/eskhand3.jpg


bump

Panda Jerk
09-28-2008, 06:51 PM
make the k simpler

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0004-1.jpg
spitting on children FTW

Panda Jerk
09-28-2008, 06:53 PM
well heres a new one thati made p and the tiki thingie

http://www.google.ca/url?q=http://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DKgdUV20vn_4&sa=X&oi=video_result&resnum=2&ct=thumbnail&usg=AFQjCNHpmiWGBy2kAod-Cw0MZlfBY9q1pw

u suck so bad


do not even try to do "fly" letters stay to simplz

BAGS
09-28-2008, 07:14 PM
how much simpler can it get? and what do you write? Easter?

Baron
09-28-2008, 07:37 PM
well heres a new one thati made p and the tiki thingie

http://www.google.ca/url?q=http://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DKgdUV20vn_4&sa=X&oi=video_result&resnum=2&ct=thumbnail&usg=AFQjCNHpmiWGBy2kAod-Cw0MZlfBY9q1pw

I vomited on my self. Thanks.