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mrkurto
10-22-2008, 03:24 AM
drake that is fire!
loving it

-Panik-
10-22-2008, 09:31 AM
The only shit I'm digging on this page at all is drake's.

Revs- Yours isn't really bad, just not my style. I do think you have too many add ons, though.

Wanted- that shit is hurtin'. worry less about your letters being connected, and more about them looking uniform. And the dashes going on in there are pretty unnecessary , too.

I always thought opinions couldn't be wrong, until now, Wanted keep your shit up don't listen to this hater man

SageGSCnj
10-22-2008, 01:37 PM
Drake-I like the first one minus the surrounding arrow
Wanted-I disagree with BigBlue..I think your shit looks decent man keep it up!
Gone-Not feelin it really. Maybe its the lower case G's I dunno and theyre all a little too spaced. Group em a little more
Revid-Looks good but like Blue said maybe too many addons in there
Error-The first one I cant even read. The second one is just sloppy. Your letters are all over the place with style.

So I just started writin like 6 weeks ago, went out around my area and threw up a few tags and a throwie. Now my lawyer tells me cops are lookin for a kid writin Sage lol. Sooo with that said I have another name for "in-town writin" hahah

Crits?

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff350/sagegsc/1021081828.jpg

Nagger
10-22-2008, 02:09 PM
bored highlighter and pen http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/005-2.jpg http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/003-2.jpg lawyer wtf. looks decent lose the halo.

blisone
10-22-2008, 02:23 PM
Here are some of my tags i have tons of different ones but i use this one the most



http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/DSC05681.jpg



http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/DSC05682.jpg



http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/DSC05683.jpg



http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/DSC05710.jpg



http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/DSC05689.jpg



http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/DSC05714.jpg

XskeletorX
10-22-2008, 03:19 PM
blisone- i'd lose that extension on your A, makes it look like your tag says "cagl". i'd also lose the arrow too. and if those 3 lines above the A are supposed to be a crown i'd lose those too hahah. overall not really feeling it, try coming up with some different letters

SageGSCnj
10-22-2008, 03:26 PM
to point out two more things blis. The A and G are too smushed together. For a while i couldnt tell if it said anything or if it was some kind of a symbol lol. And lose the Anarchy sign thats pretty corny

mymu
10-23-2008, 04:08 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2wcii9y.jpg
My Tag...XD

-Panik-
10-23-2008, 08:21 AM
Blisone, I think you should practice writing each letter separately until you find a way to connect them better, it's too congested and confusing, lose all add-ons until you get a basic tag down, other than that, at least you're gettin' up

lawlcat
10-23-2008, 10:56 AM
mymu lose all the adds and make the letters the same size.
blis stick to paper until you get something decent and the adds need to go.
nagger and spec hot shit keep it up.

First time tagging with a can
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00168.jpg

blisone
10-23-2008, 11:59 AM
Alrite thanks for the pointers... and insults. those are old tho i dont use that anarchy "a" anymore im working on the new ones now tho. peace

cast tagz
10-23-2008, 02:45 PM
Hey everyone

im very new to graffiti. this is only my 3rd day

i recently just made a quick tag (i know its bad)

tips, and suggestion would be greatly apprieciated!


here it is

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t161/andrewtweeton/casttagone.jpg



toy!

SageGSCnj
10-23-2008, 03:02 PM
Cast-Try to go a little more basic till you get the hang of it. The only letter i somewhat like is the A
Lawl-Decent for the first try. Maybe just push the last two letters together a little. but still good stuff keep it up!
Mymu-First off resize your pics from now on lol. Secondly lose the addons and tighten it up. But its got potential
Blis-if you meant me i wasnt insulting, merely criticizing. Cant get better if no one tells you whats wrong right?

djkorova
10-23-2008, 03:03 PM
Who tags the same thing on a kid's slide 20 times in a row?

toy.

XskeletorX
10-23-2008, 03:12 PM
Pretty toy...crits?

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone10.jpg?t=1224634822
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone3.jpg?t=1224635082
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone4.jpg?t=1224635177
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone5.jpg?t=1224635325

Only got one crit on these...can I get any more?

MontanaPainter
10-23-2008, 03:15 PM
GTFO.

pronto.

he posted in the toy forum.

dick.

cast tagz
10-23-2008, 03:21 PM
Cast-Try to go a little more basic till you get the hang of it. The only letter i somewhat like is the A


ok thanks

cast tagz
10-23-2008, 05:29 PM
bump de dump

HaLo_07
10-23-2008, 06:05 PM
mymu lose all the adds and make the letters the same size.
blis stick to paper until you get something decent and the adds need to go.
nagger and spec hot shit keep it up.

First time tagging with a can
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00168.jpg

Shiit actually isn't that bad...You got some smooth motion goin...But definetly gotta keep gettin good at your handie. But you got some potential kid...Stay up.

ignorance is bliss
10-23-2008, 06:34 PM
sage-sick

Crits???

ALL the other shit in the backround is from my buddy hes just starting...thought i'd go over him in his own room haha


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1390.jpg



http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1384.jpg

kasone
10-23-2008, 06:39 PM
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-1-2-1.jpg

HaLo_07
10-23-2008, 06:43 PM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/43/l_436bbf22fd874a0fa9af5666fc96ea64.jpg

Lemme get some crits for this...

If your gonna critisize, then gimme some tips to why or how you would change it.
Or show some love...

P.S.-The bottom of the N isn't supposed to connect...Just a heads up.

kasone
10-23-2008, 06:52 PM
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-1-2-1.jpg

Bump to new page...
Halo, what does it say???
I like the idea of it, looks cool, but the CBT, AA under it just looks toy.
Work on getting simple letters smooth.
Check the tags on this page, they're simple but effective.
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/373/grandosvn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

EVERYONE WORK ON SIMPLE TAGS BEFORE SOME WILD SHIT. LOSE USELESS ARROWS, QUOTE MARKS...
And everyone, resize pics before you post them..

HaLo_07
10-23-2008, 07:04 PM
lLolL, werd, Naw, it sais YIN.

The CBT and AA are just there really. Crew shiit.
Didn't put any effort into that.

But thanx, the tags look clean, I'm diggin it with out a doubt.
Keep the shiit up.

ignorance is bliss
10-23-2008, 07:57 PM
sage-sick

Crits???

ALL the other shit in the backround is from my buddy hes just starting...thought i'd go over him in his own room haha


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1390.jpg



http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1384.jpg


new page

BigBlueViolence
10-23-2008, 08:32 PM
Dope dude.
There's something I'm not feeling about that C, though.

Mr yarbles
10-23-2008, 08:56 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/34gu8u9.jpg
Possible name change
http://i37.tinypic.com/13zy7bn.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/28mmxdt.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/qq4hv5.jpg
New name meka
My stuff always looks better on the street :/

Nagger
10-24-2008, 12:08 PM
gettn better.

ignorance is bliss
10-24-2008, 12:13 PM
what don't you like about the c????

i thought it flowed with the other letters haha

its the t that im worried about

Wanted!
10-24-2008, 09:17 PM
im thinkin of changin my name to "ICE" (intentionally creeping everyday) or everywhere

let me know what u guys think?

Cesk
10-24-2008, 09:43 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/34gu8u9.jpg
Possible name change
http://i37.tinypic.com/13zy7bn.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/28mmxdt.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/qq4hv5.jpg
New name meka
My stuff always looks better on the street :/

Woah, the 1st pic made me orgasm. Really dope tag.

bild12365
10-24-2008, 11:10 PM
its ok

jester.onest
10-24-2008, 11:11 PM
K this is what im writing
http://i38.tinypic.com/mip5qx.jpg

i need crits

lawlcat
10-24-2008, 11:13 PM
and to resize.
i dont even know what the hell im looking at.

oh and give them to get them.

jester.onest
10-24-2008, 11:44 PM
Lol resized.
Please crits lol?

H1TBYNUMB3RS
10-25-2008, 12:57 AM
Jster work on flowing the sharp letters with the round ones, name dosesent matter now but dont get that up yet

yarbles looks nice, top tags dope. im feeling the first name more than meka but keep sketching what you like and see what works

halo not bad keep sketching

ciats, looking good big, idk

and im out of paper towels
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3068/2970300273_a965605529.jpg

jester.onest
10-25-2008, 01:02 AM
Thanks for crits mate.
I only do it in school atm. for practice
I need to fix up the "j" don't I... any suggestions?

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 01:36 AM
ITS CATS hahaha its an extension off the A


but thanks for the crits


jester- your S looks like an 8, but sick.....i shouldn't be talkin tho cause my A looks like I A

Wick_
10-25-2008, 01:51 AM
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/Picture009.jpg

A few I just did on paper

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 01:56 AM
lose the arrow, the star on the end of your k is.........but i'd say the bottom one is the best of the three

Wick_
10-25-2008, 02:04 AM
Aight, thanks man

Infoe
10-25-2008, 03:49 AM
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/3274/zzroflz036mr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
When me and my boy ezra first started bombing, hahah memories..

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6991/image0105gp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Some ish a bit after that time..

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/6026/image01515yy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Getting better by this time..

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/5483/image022xu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
NEWEST..

Zire
10-25-2008, 07:51 AM
I like the third one the best, but its probs becuase simple tags are my favourite ones. anyway heres some of mine oldest to newest.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/04102008367.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/07102008378.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/17102008390.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/21102008397.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/25102008402.jpg

kayotix
10-25-2008, 08:37 AM
definately feeling the last one zire, much more style

SageGSCnj
10-25-2008, 10:30 AM
ITS CATS hahaha its an extension off the A


but thanks for the crits


jester- your S looks like an 8, but sick.....i shouldn't be talkin tho cause my A looks like I A

Its not so much the extension off the A but the halo over the extension that gives it the impression that its an I...maybe try to lose the halo and see how that looks?

pureemoti0n
10-25-2008, 11:15 AM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7572/2510081014vc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ye feeling the red zaron

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 12:13 PM
werd sage, but i think the halo above the c makes is funkier....


zarone- the loop off the e with the paint im not feelin...but the last tag is sick as hell

jester.onest
10-25-2008, 05:07 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7572/2510081014vc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ye feeling the red zaron

Move the "t" a bit closer to the "o" and chuck in a space between the "e" and "m".
See what it looks like without the fancy stuff then add it in later.

Nine9
10-25-2008, 05:53 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7572/2510081014vc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ye feeling the red zaron

Not feeling it, for me every letter just seems so seperate if you get me?

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 06:05 PM
looks like a mess of dots squigles and letters... not to sound brutal

jester.onest
10-25-2008, 10:40 PM
yeah you need to completely deconstructe it and get rid of all the fancy stuff.
try linking the letters together a bit,

smooth_nuts
10-25-2008, 10:47 PM
infoe-you should keep keep the second one and simple down the e and loose the under line and such...

bild12365
10-25-2008, 11:14 PM
http:// (http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=copy9of708d3sdh3.jpg)

bild12365
10-25-2008, 11:23 PM
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/579/copy9of708d3sdh3ic8.jpg

lawlcat
10-25-2008, 11:25 PM
some tag you got there

and does that... say... rasek?

BigBlueViolence
10-25-2008, 11:26 PM
HA.

smooth_nuts
10-25-2008, 11:31 PM
I second that.

ignorance is bliss
10-26-2008, 12:34 AM
like were gonna believe your 10th post

Infoe
10-26-2008, 05:19 AM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1562/hellomynameisqe3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BigBlueViolence
10-26-2008, 08:55 AM
I dig that.
I don't think you should dot the I, though.
and I'm not digging the hip hop star.

Zire
10-26-2008, 09:26 AM
Infow, thats pretty good, i think the circle above the f looks random though.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/26102008406.jpg

Mr yarbles
10-26-2008, 02:20 PM
Jster work on flowing the sharp letters with the round ones, name dosesent matter now but dont get that up yet

yarbles looks nice, top tags dope. im feeling the first name more than meka but keep sketching what you like and see what works

halo not bad keep sketching

ciats, looking good big, idk

and im out of paper towels
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3068/2970300273_a965605529.jpg
This tag is dope just move your h and o next to the other letters more
and yeah I'm gonna stick with skaer.

infow good job keep it up

Infoe
10-26-2008, 03:57 PM
Circle above the F? Hip hop star??
Haha it's a rounded halo and a star.. Just some add-ons to the tag. Cheers for liking it though, haha..
But, that stuff is normal in Sydney tag styles

Hookr
10-26-2008, 09:58 PM
bump

thebaconator
10-26-2008, 10:49 PM
infoe - i dont like the dot over the I or the star, everything else is fresh

http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/shde.jpg
crits.... E is too far away

Keke
10-26-2008, 11:09 PM
info- it looks nice, like the flow
bacon- i just dont like it , the letters don't flow together , and its out there, simplify

and on my part , a tag from about 6 months ago
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG_0549.jpg?t=1225080896
i always get asked about the tools for this one, its a bingo marker filled with some staining ink i picked up at mike's, its 3 different inks of the same brand mixed with no thinner it was already too thin and it dripped so great , i should make some more of that

ignorance is bliss
10-27-2008, 02:14 AM
just got this shit up....i know it looks bad but im wasted

i couldn't get my add ons on...and i have a broken ankle

CRITS??????

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1395.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1397.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1398.jpg

kayotix
10-27-2008, 06:25 AM
dont even no why you put the bottom pic, but your middle one definately looks the best, with no add ons or extras, keep it that way

Infoe
10-27-2008, 06:48 AM
Nice A cats, fix the S, make it a simple normal S.
Keke, nice simple tag, keep it up.

BigBlueViolence
10-27-2008, 08:01 AM
Ease- Awesome.
Horer- Also awesome

-AnTi-
10-27-2008, 03:06 PM
http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert.jpg

first attempt at a tag for LERT - i gave up on ANTI. did it on ms paint as i cant find my camera. crits please.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
10-27-2008, 04:37 PM
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/579/copy9of708d3sdh3ic8.jpg
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

ignorance is bliss
10-27-2008, 04:56 PM
lert-take that picture, wipe your ass with it and start all over.

HaLo_07
10-27-2008, 05:05 PM
Werd...Lert you can get a better lookin ink blot from an accidental spill than gettin up with that kinda tag on the street man...

In other words...No way man, shiit isn't even laughable it's so bad.
Keep on doin it on paper cause that shiit looks horrible.

SoBmoB
10-27-2008, 05:06 PM
.... lmfao.


1118 pages of toy handie handstyles.

god, i'm gonna be so amused reading every single page.

Mr yarbles
10-27-2008, 06:07 PM
info- it looks nice, like the flow
bacon- i just dont like it , the letters don't flow together , and its out there, simplify

and on my part , a tag from about 6 months ago
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG_0549.jpg?t=1225080896
i always get asked about the tools for this one, its a bingo marker filled with some staining ink i picked up at mike's, its 3 different inks of the same brand mixed with no thinner it was already too thin and it dripped so great , i should make some more of that

Seriously dude no beef or anything by why do you keep posting that same hand I've seen that same exact flick rollin for a couple of months askin for crits
Get out there and do more hands

LeaksOne
10-27-2008, 06:23 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff028.jpg
my regular tag on top an since some people told me to go less edgy heres my curvy type tag. still workin on it tho an still tryin to improve my edgy tag. my stuff looks better when i do it in public for some reason. but whatever. Crits??

Epoc
10-27-2008, 07:35 PM
leaks - s defiantly needs a bit o work

what one do you mengsters prefer? (then ill post a non ink dead version of it)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/5734/dsc00991sd3.jpg

Hookr
10-27-2008, 07:54 PM
whats with all the lines on the last one

SoBmoB
10-27-2008, 08:07 PM
someone already writes easer. you need to do your homework buddy...

he's a fairly big name.

Epoc
10-27-2008, 08:08 PM
whats with all the lines on the last one

a crossed out underline?

ahaha goddamn i love forums. pubic hair? no suggestions are cool too.

Hookr
10-27-2008, 08:47 PM
noooo.... the one on the blue tag the big one on the bottom all over the S looking letter

Epoc
10-27-2008, 08:52 PM
ahahah ill take that as the least favorite one. prbly an i and a p

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 08:58 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225157170.jpg

Crits?

XskeletorX
10-27-2008, 09:05 PM
Pretty toy...crits?

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone10.jpg?t=1224634822
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone3.jpg?t=1224635082
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone4.jpg?t=1224635177
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/gone5.jpg?t=1224635325

bumped for critz for the second time...lawlz

Hookr
10-27-2008, 09:05 PM
AVC!!!!


http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/P1000577.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/P1000584.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/P1000587.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/P1000630.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-196.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-141.jpg

Hookr
10-27-2008, 09:09 PM
REIN AV
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/P1000113.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-101.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-109.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-110.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-112.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-114.jpg

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 09:11 PM
the hookr stuff looks good but im not so big on REIN tags.....


as for GONE i like ho you got the face in your stuff and youve got a pretty clean line.

Keke
10-27-2008, 09:13 PM
Seriously dude no beef or anything by why do you keep posting that same hand I've seen that same exact flick rollin for a couple of months askin for crits
Get out there and do more hands

whhoops i didnt know i had posted it before, i found my old photo bucket and it was in there so i put it up , i have new stuff just dont really flick it because my only camera is my phone, and i dont want to get caught with graff on my phone

Hookr
10-27-2008, 09:25 PM
IDK if i have posted these yet

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-19.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-20.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/AVC%20crew/get-attachmentaspx-99.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1000700.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1000711.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1010139.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1010142.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1010140.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1010143.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/P1010390.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/TD/get-attachmentaspx-132.jpg

jester.onest
10-28-2008, 01:05 AM
hook, really feelin those.
haha gone, I used to write that. way back in time. I like the first three but not quite sure on the last one.

dethy
10-28-2008, 04:59 AM
http://shrani.si/f/1l/wE/2bpQZOmR/picture532.jpg

Hookr
10-28-2008, 07:00 AM
nice drips son

Hookr
10-28-2008, 07:02 AM
make sure not to add to much to the tag GONE cause it makes it look overplayed dont underline it if ur gonna do a halo, and stars

XskeletorX
10-28-2008, 03:14 PM
Aight, I'll keep that in mind, thanks

RazorRamon
10-28-2008, 03:57 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/28lgi9f.jpg

Stuck on the B

any tips + crits would be cool good or bad

ill throw my opinion out too for what it's worth...

ignorance is bliss
10-28-2008, 05:28 PM
Funk that shit up

cerex89
10-28-2008, 06:44 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/1028080828.jpg

thebaconator
10-28-2008, 07:29 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/28lgi9f.jpg

Stuck on the B

any tips + crits would be cool good or bad

ill throw my opinion out too for what it's worth...
what i would do with that b is just take the spine part and make it prallell to the line behind it and make it longer they curve together

cast tagz
10-28-2008, 07:45 PM
hey guys im really toy, i know


http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t161/andrewtweeton/casttagone.jpg

tips pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

skeet-skeet
10-28-2008, 08:26 PM
try making the pic smaller...

RazorRamon
10-28-2008, 08:45 PM
what i would do with that b is just take the spine part and make it prallell to the line behind it and make it longer they curve together

Aight i'll try that out and post it up good looks

propertea
10-28-2008, 09:42 PM
DELS. just messing around

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj196/ericstickers/sc0193eb22.jpg

RazorRamon
10-29-2008, 03:14 PM
DELS. just messing around

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj196/ericstickers/sc0193eb22.jpg

I'm feelin the style but i guess because i like simple tags more it seems too cluttered.

cast tagz
10-29-2008, 03:40 PM
hey guys im really toy, i know


http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t161/andrewtweeton/casttagone.jpg

tips pleaseeeeeeeeeeee


bump

please help me ^^^

abco
10-29-2008, 04:00 PM
cast, keep your letters the same size, keep writing because you will eventually develop your own flow and how to write it fast and peace out of the situation. I'm feeling the C since I do the same type in my tag but make it smaller. Also the A is fine but the S is a little weird. Work on different styles of S until you find one that fits your style.

propertea
10-29-2008, 05:15 PM
I'm feelin the style but i guess because i like simple tags more it seems too cluttered.

thats sorta the point dude, i was going for a wicket style

-AnTi-
10-29-2008, 05:55 PM
some quick stuff i did earlier
lines are scratchy cause the pen was fooked

http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lerttagfull.jpg

i like no 5 best
http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert1.jpg
but can i have your opinion


crits plz

Mr yarbles
10-29-2008, 06:36 PM
thats sorta the point dude, i was going for a wicket style

Those are terrible wickets
Work on your tall hands and your script
Wickets take years to develop and you can't skip the tall hands and the simpler philly hands
And unless you live in philly I doubt you'll pick up wickets anytime soon.

Once I get ungrounded I'll post some new flicks

propertea
10-29-2008, 08:04 PM
HA i'm aware bro. i was just messing around. hope you get ungrounded soon HA


Those are terrible wickets
Work on your tall hands and your script
Wickets take years to develop and you can't skip the tall hands and the simpler philly hands
And unless you live in philly I doubt you'll pick up wickets anytime soon.

Once I get ungrounded I'll post some new flicks

RazorRamon
10-29-2008, 08:28 PM
some quick stuff i did earlier
lines are scratchy cause the pen was fooked

http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lerttagfull.jpg

i like no 5 best
http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert1.jpg
but can i have your opinion


crits plz

you're letters are really uneven and non of the styles really seem to match. Work on trying to get then the same size/style.

I like number one the best though seems the most consistent

cast tagz
10-29-2008, 09:02 PM
cast, keep your letters the same size, keep writing because you will eventually develop your own flow and how to write it fast and peace out of the situation. I'm feeling the C since I do the same type in my tag but make it smaller. Also the A is fine but the S is a little weird. Work on different styles of S until you find one that fits your style.

thanks for the tips bro.

i agree with you, i really like my C how it kinda underlines it, it kinda original lol

any more tips from anyone?

white
10-29-2008, 09:49 PM
lert keep working on flow it will come to you, dont force it

some new tags ive been working on.....

10 and 11 are originals, same tag ive been using forever....everything else is pretty much new, ATK (#13) is my crew let me know what i should do to improve that shit

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003.jpg

AdRe*
10-29-2008, 10:16 PM
NUKES- Make Letters same size
LERT- Don't connect your letters, keep practicing
ECKS2- SICK SHIT, STAY UP!
NUMB- No critique really just keep working on it, stay simple right now and you'll develop style
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/moto_0109-1.jpg
Crits Pls?
Come correct too

skeet-skeet
10-30-2008, 02:23 AM
http://i512.photobucket.com/albums/t326/skeet-skeet_/IMG000019.jpg

Crits??
i dont want tips how to make it better..
i want to know what you think about it..

ADRE* you should get a better cammera or take a new pic cuz that is hard to crt.

wackattack
10-30-2008, 04:08 AM
pesk- your K looks like my R ahah but your headed in the right direction
Cast- figure out a better S that flows with the rest of it, a 4 letter word is easy to pull off, very symetrical P.s. if you are who i think you are you should come by and i'll show you some shit, if your not who i think you are then... continue on.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j216/J301/005.jpg

AdRe*
10-30-2008, 11:19 AM
Yo Pesk it looks dope, u don't need the halo its good without it
and I know about the quality of the pic its blows, heres sum stuff on paper
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/moto_0111.jpg

wackattack
10-30-2008, 01:57 PM
adre - i'd get rid of the shit above the W and the extra stuff underneath

skeet-skeet
10-30-2008, 02:40 PM
k i will work on not trying to be fancy.

adre jus get rid of the shit uner it and see how she looks.

stumpyhasnolegs
10-30-2008, 03:03 PM
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/579/copy9of708d3sdh3ic8.jpg




find a new word homie
http://i38.tinypic.com/119nl7n.jpg

-AnTi-
10-30-2008, 05:21 PM
damn - that bottom raser one is fucking sick man.

white
10-30-2008, 05:35 PM
ya first of all its RASEK not RASER....and show respect, names taken

just to add, this is tags, not bombs/pieces.....AND DAMN RASEK (the original) dats fresh

AdRe*
10-31-2008, 03:47 PM
thanx for the crits should of checked here before I went out today lol
peep it folks
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/moto_0114-1.jpg
crits?

Mr yarbles
10-31-2008, 09:01 PM
Whatever happend to onest?
http://i38.tinypic.com/zlzud0.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2isrgo.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/241o2mq.jpg
My stuff never looks good on paper :/
Street stuff coming at some point

ignorance is bliss
10-31-2008, 11:22 PM
HALOWEEN SUCKAS.....ITS HEATY TO PAINT BUT THAT THE WAY I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!


photos up tomorrow

gunsofbrooklyn
11-01-2008, 01:36 AM
halloween was good
managed to do some tags but i expect them gone within a week :/

TYG.rave
11-01-2008, 02:34 AM
who wants to see some real handstyles :]

pics pocted soon

ignorance is bliss
11-01-2008, 02:36 AM
all talk no flix hey.

TYG.rave
11-01-2008, 02:37 AM
all talk no flix hey.

pics posted soon lawl. chill bra. haha

ignorance is bliss
11-01-2008, 03:57 AM
haha im just jokin mate....anyone wanna peep my pre-halloween painting throw up....its in my buddies room......in tot throw ups

jester.onest
11-01-2008, 04:06 AM
Whatever happend to onest?

Street stuff coming at some point

Yeww! finally met someone else who uses onest.
im getting all my writer friends to do it.
i've loved it ever since Jeens on stencil revolution did it :)

Shamy
11-02-2008, 06:26 PM
im a toy but whats onest? line 1 liners?

neza
11-02-2008, 06:29 PM
thanx for the crits should of checked here before I went out today lol
peep it folks
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/moto_0114-1.jpg
crits?

love the drips! drippy tags are dope

[MiTH] hovz
11-02-2008, 06:48 PM
yo im pretty much new here, i know im a joke. i got respect for you guys, your stuffs pretty legit compared to the crap i throw down. some of the things ive seen here are pretty insane... heres just a few pics of what ive done. I know im a toy and i got nothing but here it goes... im trying to keep it simple from the start, build a base and then throw the junk up on it when im better.
the first one (hovz) is alright, the second is my fav right now (mith), the other two were older ones i had done and used before (mith) and (unite!).. im open to any criticism.

Keke
11-02-2008, 06:59 PM
hovz;1244314']yo im pretty much new here, i know im a joke. i got respect for you guys, your stuffs pretty legit compared to the crap i throw down. some of the things ive seen here are pretty insane... heres just a few pics of what ive done. I know im a toy and i got nothing but here it goes... im trying to keep it simple from the start, build a base and then throw the junk up on it when im better.
the first one (hovz) is alright, the second is my fav right now (mith), the other two were older ones i had done and used before (mith) and (unite!).. im open to any criticism.

none of that is simple simple is letters like these

MITH

write that over and over and it will look better

[MiTH] hovz
11-02-2008, 07:14 PM
aight thanks man. i just meant i wasnt trying to overdo with the arrows or with crowns and stuff. so i should just be starting with simple block letters? where do i go from there? i always have trouble with the i and the t transition. its pretty homo

Keke
11-02-2008, 07:35 PM
hovz;1244335']aight thanks man. i just meant i wasnt trying to overdo with the arrows or with crowns and stuff. so i should just be starting with simple block letters? where do i go from there? i always have trouble with the i and the t transition. its pretty homo

pretty much simple letters and then try out some different things, the most important thing is flow some of the best tags are ones that are crisp and simple, and if you dont like i---t just change your name.
ill try and get a pick of what i mean from going from simple to complex

edit:http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG00026.jpg

obviously not alot of work in that but it gets the point across

white
11-02-2008, 11:08 PM
Adre - like the flow to the tag
mr. y - cant read it sorry
mith - keep practicing it will come to u

CRITS _____ NEW TAG let me know how its lookin

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0004.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0005.jpg

jester.onest
11-03-2008, 12:13 AM
im a toy but whats onest? line 1 liners?
onest is just like "oner" or "onez"
just a tag suffix thing.

White- they are looking nice but the "n" looks more like a "v" in most of them. make them a bit more simple and the big "n" and "k" dominate too much. Is that an "s" on the end or an arrow? If it's an "s" then get rid of the line up before it goes down and get rid of the huge tail.


*working on new tag*
meek/meeks
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image066-1.jpg

aDmen
11-03-2008, 01:06 AM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4792/dsc1398rr0.jpg

cheers

skeet-skeet
11-03-2008, 02:15 AM
http://i512.photobucket.com/albums/t326/skeet-skeet_/IMG000036.jpg
http://i512.photobucket.com/albums/t326/skeet-skeet_/IMG000037.jpg

what "K" do u guys like better...?...

white- make your N not have such a savage point on the bottom and see how it looks.
aDem- try not to bite from Surgen... and make a multi-line tagg not just one line. the letters will look better... i think.

Dying to live
11-03-2008, 02:16 AM
meh havent posted in awhile
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/bbbb.jpg

cise...
11-03-2008, 02:45 AM
[/URL]

i know......[URL=http://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?image=03112008544sv4.jpg]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3131/03112008544sv4.jpg (http://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?image=03112008544sv4.jpg)
fucking suck,yeah?

Dying to live
11-03-2008, 04:26 AM
resize it mate.

wrekstyle
11-03-2008, 05:30 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF0021-1.jpg





Writers from RI pm me...

white
11-03-2008, 08:09 PM
lol you can tell anyone is new to graffiti if they have a ""bomb the system"" tag lmao

white
11-03-2008, 08:31 PM
dyin - killer fade, and i love your sig
cise - resize
wreks - on top green one bring down P bar and make your last S like your first one and do something else with the e

crits

my ATK tag need help bad basically i need help bad on everything but my ATK tag is really bad someone please help me out with it

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0007.jpg

wrekstyle
11-03-2008, 08:46 PM
lol you can tell anyone is new to graffiti if they have a ""bomb the system"" tag lmao
lol i was fuckin around writin watever for this thread...but ur hand style is good..try writin atk in capital letters a lil more stylish...that may help

cerex89
11-03-2008, 08:58 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/1030080748.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/1030080747.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/1028080828.jpg

thebaconator
11-04-2008, 08:30 PM
pesk- i like the end of the k on number one but i like the 3rd k the best

BigBlueViolence
11-04-2008, 09:02 PM
first one is my favorite for sure

IVandal420
11-04-2008, 10:00 PM
tryin out a new name any critz
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z150/Blazed-On3/konshandestee.jpg
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z150/Blazed-On3/konshande.jpg

mekosbc
11-04-2008, 10:02 PM
damn bro resize your flixz.... seriously it kills the page...

Sizzuurp
11-04-2008, 10:13 PM
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9004/sinktag1pq3.jpg (http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sinktag1pq3.jpg)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/sinktag1pq3.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img385/sinktag1pq3.jpg/1/)


sink >.< only tag i got soo far. should i work on a full alphabet. i want it to be more elaborate

BigBlueViolence
11-04-2008, 11:12 PM
you should definitely work on making those letters uniform.
being elaborate is the least of your worries
make all your shit the same size, and lose all the silly dots.

IVandal420
11-04-2008, 11:24 PM
damn bro resize your flixz.... seriously it kills the page...

it wont let me resize them so

any other tips

dj3hac
11-04-2008, 11:24 PM
It's been a while since I've been around, sorry everyone work's been insane! 30hrs a week WHILE going to school. I'm surviving though... OBAMA WON!

Here's some stuff I just threw together for an excuse to post. It's mediocre, I'm tired though and about to go to bed.

Obama = Admin of the United States.

http://www.lookpic.com/files/Picture_001.jpg
http://www.lookpic.com/files/Picture_002.jpg
http://www.lookpic.com/files/Picture_0032.jpg

dj3hac
11-04-2008, 11:28 PM
it wont let me resize them so

any other tips

Take VGA pictures, crop it in mspaint.

2 options.

A common mistake with new people is having too many straight letters or a blocky / sharp tag. try softening it up a bit then adding sharps until you are happy with it.

jester.onest
11-05-2008, 04:13 AM
*working on new tag*
meek/meeks
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image066-1.jpg


***bump***

obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MiTH] hovz
11-05-2008, 02:55 PM
meeks... idk dude, ive been having trouble with making an m, they are just homo to make, mine never look good. yours are alright, i guess keep working on it. the best i would say is the one in like the middle left. id say keep meek and then make another tag to do next to it or below it. i just think its too long to do together.

any crits on my tags. i just made some new ones up now, idk im not really liking them but i have no idea where to go. i kept them simple for the most part, like no extra things on em...

klic
11-05-2008, 04:18 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELBlueHighliterTag.jpg

fuser - make it simpler, that 3rd one looks decent

jester - looks good, i dont do many tags so i dont rreally no how to crit them

dj3 - the letters are good, just work on getting them to flow a little better

Baron
11-05-2008, 04:30 PM
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9004/sinktag1pq3.jpg (http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sinktag1pq3.jpg)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/sinktag1pq3.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img385/sinktag1pq3.jpg/1/)


sink >.< only tag i got soo far. should i work on a full alphabet. i want it to be more elaborate

Hope you're not planning on writing sink.

klic
11-05-2008, 04:33 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELBlueHighliterTag.jpg

fuser - make it simpler, that 3rd one looks decent

jester - looks good, i dont do many tags so i dont rreally no how to crit them

dj3 - the letters are good, just work on getting them to flow a little better

bottom bump

[MiTH] hovz
11-05-2008, 05:21 PM
shpel, i kinda like it. idk about the p or not. to me it seems to be a curvy tag but the p is all pointed, but for some reason it doesnt look too out of place. its right in the middle. try making one with a curved p. Also maybe try to work on different ways for the L, i know theres not much you can do with an L, but try connecting it with the rest of the tag more, it seems too detatched to me.

Keke
11-05-2008, 07:14 PM
sink, go simple
shapel- digging it

stole your name cause i was bored
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/shapeltag.jpg

JETPACK!!
11-05-2008, 10:05 PM
havent been in this thread for a bit.

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/2252/tag7ov2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/562/tag8vg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Keke
11-05-2008, 10:21 PM
no offense rasek your work is usually gold but those letters are squashed and very un structured on the first one

JETPACK!!
11-05-2008, 10:29 PM
i completely agree, the first one is older and i wasnt as familar with the style as i am now. i find its more of a marker tag. dosent look as good with paint.

The_Crying_Indian
11-05-2008, 10:32 PM
fix your s and your good to go

BigBlueViolence
11-05-2008, 11:39 PM
Rasek- not hating, but looking at your peices, I thought your handstyle would be alot better.

http://i33.tinypic.com/27zkww3.jpg

dj3hac
11-06-2008, 11:10 AM
double bump lol (bottom of page again) crits please?


if you keep bumping you wont get any crits.

Sizzuurp
11-06-2008, 01:55 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/27zkww3.jpg

The R in the first one is kinda sloppy

blunttokes
11-06-2008, 03:36 PM
sloppy ground tag after the bar.
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/9129/dscf0774ai5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

white
11-06-2008, 10:59 PM
dyin - killer fade, and i love your sig
cise - resize
wreks - on top green one bring down P bar and make your last S like your first one and do something else with the e

crits

my ATK tag need help bad basically i need help bad on everything but my ATK tag is really bad someone please help me out with it

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0007.jpg


bumpage -

RASEK - like the style but it seems to smushed together

AdRe*
11-06-2008, 11:15 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/Pic0120.jpg
Reads DAMEN the drips might make it a lil unclear
And I know I went over that nikkie.....its not my fault its the markers fault ha!
crits?

jester.onest
11-07-2008, 02:28 AM
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image066-1.jpg
sorry for another bump but it was at the bottom of the page. and i had to fix the link

blunttokes
11-07-2008, 01:37 PM
^take ur time with the tags man looks like you slopped those in 10seconds flat.... you dont get better by going so fast when your a toy. slow down take time and effort..........

that was for all 3 you above.

Queezy
11-07-2008, 03:56 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/ZM.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/ZM-1.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/Queezy08.jpg
The y kills it.

SoBmoB
11-07-2008, 04:45 PM
why am I even looking at this.

the satan is alright.
Solid city styles.

GETRAD
11-07-2008, 06:45 PM
when i got my green otr, i should get another, mad old:


http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/n1383517114_30134167_740.jpg

[MiTH] hovz
11-07-2008, 07:24 PM
getrad, i like your style, its kinda like the one ive always done, just simple and efficient. i like the R for some reason too.
Queezy.. ikd man, ZM.. im not diggin it. it seems too simplistic like anyone could slap that around, theres no distinct style to it. thats just what i think.

Crits on any of these. idk which i wanna use

klic
11-07-2008, 08:20 PM
mith, you got your handy down decently, id start working on simples now

bustinoffshotties
11-07-2008, 08:27 PM
when i got my green otr, i should get another, mad old:


http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/n1383517114_30134167_740.jpg

keep to the books for a bit.. and OTR ink sucks balls

Baron
11-07-2008, 10:32 PM
when i got my green otr, i should get another, mad old:


http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/n1383517114_30134167_740.jpg

Highlighters suck.


But seriously, what did you fill that up with? Looks really... erm.. wierd.

Whatchug0t?
11-07-2008, 10:40 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2qkpm2x.jpg

GETRAD
11-07-2008, 10:46 PM
hovz - i like #3 the best fuzer/fyzer i cant really tell, keep the letters and maybe lose the underline, just my 2 cents

GETRAD
11-07-2008, 10:48 PM
it was just the stock ink inside, its a mad old pic though, ill take a pic of a new tag w/ a diff marker

[MiTH] hovz
11-08-2008, 12:01 AM
thanks for the crits guys. ya i think i may stay with fuser (for those that know some south american history :P ). Klic what do you mean by simples? like the bars and shit or is there a different type of simple for tags? i still feel mines too baby nuts though, like ive seen guys with mad insane tags, does mine eventually work to that?

lawlcat
11-08-2008, 10:36 PM
havnet worked on my tag in a while
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00185.jpg

Dying to live
11-09-2008, 08:58 AM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Untitled-1-3.gif
shitty cam phone pic >.>

redxdrum
11-09-2008, 05:02 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/lostintheflame99/Picture-3.jpg
sobr
can i get some feed back

redxdrum
11-09-2008, 05:40 PM
Dying to live- i like it

MrDobalina
11-09-2008, 08:29 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2qkpm2x.jpg

for real? change your name man.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2081/2335780116_25ddf7f104.jpg?v=0

http://www.freightalicious.com/images/pics/erupto-writers-0010.jpg

http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-gallery/showphoto.php/photo/104132/cat/500/ppuser/1556

http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/133

http://www.freightalicious.com/writers.php?id=erupto

BAGS
11-09-2008, 09:25 PM
Sobr - lose the peace sign, work on your letters. try bringing them closer, they are too spaced apart. try writing it smaller and with a fatter tip.

whahappen?
11-09-2008, 09:42 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2qkpm2x.jpg
doppe

GETRAD
11-09-2008, 10:11 PM
new tag, how you guys liking the 't'?
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo44.jpg

Queezy
11-10-2008, 01:00 AM
All of the letters look nice but I know you can do something better with the R, it just seems like it doesn't fit.

GETRAD
11-10-2008, 02:58 PM
sobr- im not digging the line thru the s, makes it really hard to read and repetative

thanks for the feedback, working on some r's as i type

Mr yarbles
11-10-2008, 07:17 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/2lj2po5.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2hewrw1.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/ta25uu.jpg
Some tags for yall

getrad lose your sharp edges and try to make everything more rounded it'll make things flow a whole lot better

erupto your tall hands are shit I'm not gonna lie but your scripts got some nice steez to them just keep working

sosr forget everything you think you know about graffiti and start simple with simple letters no addons or nothing
We all had to do it.

lawlcats your shits on the up man keep moving

Maste
11-10-2008, 07:37 PM
http://i537.photobucket.com/albums/ff335/climbinkid/Mpink1.jpg
http://i537.photobucket.com/albums/ff335/climbinkid/MB1.jpg

Whatchug0t?
11-10-2008, 08:23 PM
for real? change your name man.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2081/2335780116_25ddf7f104.jpg?v=0

http://www.freightalicious.com/images/pics/erupto-writers-0010.jpg

http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-gallery/showphoto.php/photo/104132/cat/500/ppuser/1556

http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/133

http://www.freightalicious.com/writers.php?id=erupto


FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK.
wheres that guy reside?

nuf.rd
11-10-2008, 09:22 PM
the bay area.^^
sanfransico- oakland area
lot of frisco work too

lawlcat
11-10-2008, 10:38 PM
havnet worked on my tag in a while
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00185.jpg
new page bump

yarbles new stuff is definitely better. stay up.

Maste
11-10-2008, 11:31 PM
http://i537.photobucket.com/albums/ff335/climbinkid/Mpink1.jpg
http://i537.photobucket.com/albums/ff335/climbinkid/MB1.jpg

bummp

Fat4l_ONE
11-10-2008, 11:54 PM
the pink one is pretty good but i think i like it more just cause of the blue/black outline out it makes it stand out more.

jester.onest
11-10-2008, 11:55 PM
those mozaic ones are sick.
put on stickers?

redxdrum
11-11-2008, 10:37 AM
sosr forget everything you think you know about graffiti and start simple with simple letters no addons or nothing
We all had to do it.

naa i know shit about graff. i use to post on here alot. i just was trying out a new style and a new name and wanted some feedback.

BigBlueViolence
11-11-2008, 11:41 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00185.jpg

While we are on the subject of names,
already a homie that writes Doke, too.

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc247/dypcet/nyc/006adek.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r107/sludgemother/doke01.jpg

Zire
11-11-2008, 11:50 AM
ah well, he aint that good.

Bink1
11-11-2008, 12:18 PM
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9211/dsc04437cp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/dsc04437cp4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img204/dsc04437cp4.jpg/1/)

crits?

youKNOW
11-11-2008, 12:26 PM
that crown is unnatural

Bink1
11-11-2008, 12:35 PM
well im not trying to drawn super duper 3d natural crown in tag :) , its just simple thing ...

Mr yarbles
11-11-2008, 12:57 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2ykjjwg.jpg
Never do crowns.

Whatchug0t?
11-11-2008, 01:07 PM
the bay area.^^
sanfransico- oakland area
lot of frisco work too

well i think if im on the east coast itsss alll gooood.

Soma*sic.
11-11-2008, 03:12 PM
hey im a total toy but i just wanted to put my "tag" up to see if its an alright start and what i can change about it :D

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q30/starky90/DSC00275.jpg

i consider this one to be the 'best' of the four:
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q30/starky90/DSC00274.jpg

Black Flag
11-11-2008, 03:52 PM
Soma, no offense, but that S is really whack, it could look like a C, L, or a weird question mark.

Soma*sic.
11-11-2008, 03:55 PM
ha yeh i know i tried to get it all to be concentrated inyo a single point but im not too good at drawing any tips?

scoot
11-11-2008, 05:22 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2cdagp1.jpg

havent posted in awhile

exitus
11-11-2008, 07:05 PM
k idk if i wana change my name cuz im at bording school and i dont wana get nabed for garffiti.

should i stay with exitus or go to "end"
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/7425/1111081726mc8.jpg

Mr yarbles
11-11-2008, 07:11 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/140w2mo.jpg
Changed my a a bit

Exitus it dosn't look like you've improved at all.

exitus
11-11-2008, 07:26 PM
haha i kinda stoped for a while, well i wasnt really asking for crits i was asking what was the better name

Wick_
11-11-2008, 10:23 PM
Exitus - there's an END where I live but that's probably far from you anyway.
Mr yarbles - It is lookin good man! better than the first one, I like it

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/2720/5002xf5.th.jpg (http://img50.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5002xf5.jpg)http://img50.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
crits?

BigBlueViolence
11-11-2008, 11:58 PM
There is dope ass ENDER in ohio
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/6021/p1010034zg7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3241/2997077845_088bc38819.jpg

Soma*sic.
11-12-2008, 04:35 AM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q30/starky90/DSC00275.jpg


http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q30/starky90/DSC00274.jpg


bump for crits :)

exitus
11-12-2008, 06:49 AM
thanks guys, i live in ohio so im sticking with exitus
looks like coma, fix the s

dj3hac
11-12-2008, 11:50 AM
There is dope ass ENDER in ohio
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/6021/p1010034zg7.jpg



We've got an Ender in 902 (Nova Scotia, Canada)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TSJScB_PBY&feature=related

Wick_
11-12-2008, 03:51 PM
Soma - I thought it was coma at first too, so jsut fix the s and keep practicin.

Here is my start point of filling my notebook:

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/6.jpg

All I have is a cell phone to take pics with right now.

FLIP FLOP
11-12-2008, 07:43 PM
soma- looks good except for the s should look more like just a normal s (maybe with an extension on top if you want) to make it flow better
wick- try not connecting the w and the i.

ErrorOner...
11-13-2008, 03:28 AM
wick - it looks pretty good if you were writing UNEK! thats what i see when i look at it but then when i try and read wick it looks toy, no beef.
my new tag that looks dope imo. crits please...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/1019082158a.jpg
ps. i've cleaned it up a lot since this photo so i know it looks sketchy...

Soma*sic.
11-13-2008, 06:02 AM
Thanks for the crits guys i'll figure out a new 'S' and then post it to see what you think

Infoe
11-13-2008, 06:10 AM
Insidessss;
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/4873/picture2xn9.png
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/8175/picture3ia7.png

Bink1
11-13-2008, 09:37 AM
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/2977/dsc04444sk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/dsc04444sk9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img353/dsc04444sk9.jpg/1/)
some of my tagz ...

Kofin
11-13-2008, 03:41 PM
Yes, i know they're on stickers, but it's the only pics I got.
Any constructive criticism is appreciated.

Kofin
11-13-2008, 03:43 PM
some of my tagz ...
I like all of em except the top right one. It kinda gets confusing.

ignorance is bliss
11-13-2008, 03:46 PM
yo i saw a jace throwup on a freight in my town kelowna b.c. canada like a week ago

AdRe*
11-13-2008, 08:58 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/Pic0147.jpg

Wick_
11-13-2008, 10:05 PM
ErrorOner - Just looks a bit sketched like you said but other than that it's good.
Infoe - Good as always hah.
Bink - These ones are lookin good too, I like the middle one the best and lose the crown in the top one.
Snarl - First one looks better because it's not so squished, other than that I don't know. Good.
Damen - hm, for some reason I don't really like this one, I don't know why, maybe jsut the style its in. No offence.

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/7002.jpg
Sorry for bad pic, maybe I need a real camera :p

C-Lurk
11-13-2008, 10:15 PM
The underline doesn't look good in any of them. I like 3 overall the most, but its pretty simple.

knightsafe
11-14-2008, 10:45 AM
Been Ghost a While...
http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v374/194/52/307000039/n307000039_9420_949.jpg

Kofin
11-14-2008, 02:31 PM
Thanks Wick. I used to write an gangster-esque style with KOFIN, the straight lines worked well (see below pic). If I could get an example of a good "S", maybe i could expand my style... what do you guys think?
Sorry for the bad line quality, written on a card table, cushy surface messes me up. You can see how i fit the lines together, tho...

Infoe
11-14-2008, 06:50 PM
Take a look at SNARL's website.. Might have a good S...
http://www.snarlcity.com/index1.htm

Bump this

Insidessss;
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/4873/picture2xn9.png
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/8175/picture3ia7.png

+ "Wish I Had Style"
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/390/image00138bt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

C-Lurk
11-14-2008, 06:52 PM
Ironically, the Wish I Had Style tag kills your actual tag.

lawlcat
11-14-2008, 10:17 PM
bored with cardboard.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG00209.jpg

Infoe
11-14-2008, 11:06 PM
Ironically, the Wish I Had Style tag kills your actual tag.

Care to explain why?
There's a difference also with writing on paper, taking my time, then sitting on a train going to work in the morning..

H1TBYNUMB3RS
11-15-2008, 02:56 AM
lol-cat, pretty cool, keep on sketching your hands coming its just not individual yet. write pages and pages, and that goes to all of you vermin vandals!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3270/3031715242_99dbd5461e.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3190/3030861365_c12622ec54.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3185/3031698196_eaeff68f89.jpg?v=0

wone121
11-15-2008, 01:55 PM
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/graffiti010.jpg



wone 254 fo life

Infoe
11-16-2008, 12:12 AM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7523/image00213kk2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bink1
11-16-2008, 05:30 AM
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6931/dsc04447nv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/dsc04447nv1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img255/dsc04447nv1.jpg/1/)

Tagz im thinking of using.

Bink-my name
FTC-(Fuck the Cops)

H1TBYNUMB3RS
11-16-2008, 01:01 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3270/3031715242_99dbd5461e.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3190/3030861365_c12622ec54.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3185/3031698196_eaeff68f89.jpg?v=0
uh crits?
and wone it pretty good keep sketching pages and pages.
infoe work on letter flow and keep hittin papers
bink its not bad, prey good flow but the names aren't good

Bink1
11-16-2008, 02:30 PM
HITBYNUMBERS your tag rocks ... can ya do a BINK tag in that wildstyle way , coz im trying but looks ugly still..