Toy Tagz..only

[Infoe]

Ironically, the Wish I Had Style tag kills your actual tag.

Care to explain why?
There's a difference also with writing on paper, taking my time, then sitting on a train going to work in the morning..

[H1TBYNUMB3RS]

lol-cat, pretty cool, keep on sketching your hands coming its just not individual yet. write pages and pages, and that goes to all of you vermin vandals!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3270/3031715242_99dbd5461e.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3190/3030861365_c12622ec54.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3185/3031698196_eaeff68f89.jpg?v=0

[wone121]

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/graffiti010.jpg



wone 254 fo life

[Infoe]

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7523/image00213kk2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Bink1]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6931/dsc04447nv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/dsc04447nv1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img255/dsc04447nv1.jpg/1/)

Tagz im thinking of using.

Bink-my name
FTC-(Fuck the Cops)

[H1TBYNUMB3RS]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3270/3031715242_99dbd5461e.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3190/3030861365_c12622ec54.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3185/3031698196_eaeff68f89.jpg?v=0
uh crits?
and wone it pretty good keep sketching pages and pages.
infoe work on letter flow and keep hittin papers
bink its not bad, prey good flow but the names aren't good

[Bink1]

HITBYNUMBERS your tag rocks ... can ya do a BINK tag in that wildstyle way , coz im trying but looks ugly still..

[Baron]

So you want him to do your name so you can copy it and act like you know what you're doing for nothing in return?

[Bink1]

well i want do understand how to do that shit...

[Baron]

Then practice? Like how everyone tends to do it.

[Lsd]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0004.jpg some shiiit.

[Dose.onek]

http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp304/forum_jiblet/1226566481-1.jpg

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2003.jpg

[H1TBYNUMB3RS]

well i want do understand how to do that shit...
ive had trouble getting something past simple
letters up until like a half month ago and im still a
huge beginner compared to lots of writers.
Handstyles and tags just come with time so write every
day and sketch like an odd ball.

edit: unsuccessful, cool flaires and color,
ive done handstyles with the same color its dope,
just work on cleaning up the bottom hand so its more clean,
maad letters though

[Lsd]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Flurone06.jpg Not me but i saw it in some random shit stop.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/sic33roof.jpg A friend.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/sic33door.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/reskoner2.jpgsuper old handstyle by Reskoner.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Testone.jpgTest with a dope hand.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Slunkmop.jpg and one of my mop tags.
I'll post more of mine later.

[ober]

I've been hesitant to post because I have yet to write anything I'm particularly proud of but improvement is what this thread is for so, here I go.

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6861/tagwy9.png

I am not fond of it. Not sure what to do with the o. Usually do something slightly different but, awkward letter to begin with.

[Epoc]

hmmm. seems so many write resk....including me.

ober- do straight plain letters, often with a little style plain stuff looks a lot better than arrows and jizz.

[7thIncision]

Ober - listen to Epoc, he knows what he's saying. go MAD simple steeze.
then you get better and better.
Yay! :D

[Keke]

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2991/loljkpq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/loljkpq1.jpg/1/w208.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img521/loljkpq1.jpg/1/)
CRITZ PLEASE

[TASR]

What does it say?

[ober]

What does it say?

I believe it says Ring ONE.

Keke, seems to me like you're doing what I have been doing. My advice is what I was given, do simples.

Three cheers for pronunciation:
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/2872/oberhb9.png

Am I on the right track?

[Keke]

just kidding on the last tag ,
it said king one lol

real stuff

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/7713/img00074wa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/img00074wa1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img167/img00074wa1.jpg/1/)

[Amore]

keke-top two are better..try to keep your letters all the same size

[Epoc]

I believe it says Ring ONE.

Keke, seems to me like you're doing what I have been doing. My advice is what I was given, do simples.

Three cheers for pronunciation:
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/2872/oberhb9.png

Am I on the right track?


Much better! If I were you I'd even lose the accent things (line and 2 dots). Then just keep working it.

[pedobear]

Bink1 old bean.
do hate to burst your bubble and all that but i know of at least five binks in Scotland and america. consider adding a 5 or a 6 to your tag?

[WoeInfinite]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/lamehands.jpg
tall hand help?
mine are lameeee and i want to develop that style, cuz its dopeeeee

[Evasion Of Invasion]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture364.jpg

[loco]

thats some nice tags

[BigBlueViolence]

Woer- When working on tall hands, it's best to (at least at first) to keep your letters real simple, to help them flow
http://i35.tinypic.com/el4cx5.jpg

[Queezy]

White Out Tags
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyVendingMachine2.jpg
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyVendingMachine.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

thanks big blue...
im tryin to work on it..
hows this...
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/4tallhands.jpg
yeahh the E looks alot like a B actually...sigh.

[Masta Blasta]

Hey Crits please. its been along time and ive been thinking about getting back into it, Chose the name book, cause im a bookworm. Next is a Throwie. Help is widely accepted.

[barbadosone]

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/2977/dsc04444sk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/dsc04444sk9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img353/dsc04444sk9.jpg/1/)
some of my tagz ...

nice tags, like the various style's

[Audious]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6106/tagsmuv7.jpg

Haven't actually started spraying yet, keeping it in the book for now. Any (constructive) criticism would be appreciated. I apologize for the shitty cell pic.

The caption on the sticker says "Lectori Salutem", or "Greetings Reader" in latin.

[jester.onest]

Audious, you have to down-size it if you want anyone to be able to see it. and about crits- you have to give them to get them.

[Audious]

That better? Sorry, I have a 24" monitor and just kind of forget sometimes :p

As far as giving criticism, I just started writing that stuff like... 5 days ago, lol. I'm in no position to be giving criticism.

[jester.onest]

Even though you are only new, you can still see something that looks not so good, and if people thing you are wrong, then they can go fuck themselves. :)

The drawings look good, but start off making them more simple. Letter progression is your friend. :)

Anyway, welcome to BS.

[DontBeSAME]

http://i35.tinypic.com/9lek8y.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/2i0ufk0.jpg

what handy should i use?

[XskeletorX]

I like the hand in the first flick Same

[ober]

Same:

I guess the drip is a personal preference but, I'm not big on it.
The second one, the letter form is pretty wack. The way the letters are overlapped and distorted, they can be misinterpreted.

ober:

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5803/oberhandqd2.png

[synps]

audio- wrong thread post that shit in toy blackbooks
same- first handys good loose the clouds and the drips
ober- close the bottom of your o

red meanstreak and shitty cellphone camera pics that I kept getting in my fingers in:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/hahaha003.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/hahaha002.jpg

[Ink me]

Hey. Just looking for some advice. My tags in yellow.

http://i35.tinypic.com/dpias9.jpg

[enlis_one]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6106/tagsmuv7.jpg

Haven't actually started spraying yet, keeping it in the book for now. Any (constructive) criticism would be appreciated. I apologize for the shitty cell pic.

The caption on the sticker says "Lectori Salutem", or "Greetings Reader" in latin.

dude i like ur letters nice style juss try to make em a lil thicker and try a few diff filler styles yee digg

[MëZ ™]

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa296/Mezoroni/Graf/Picture003.jpg

[ober]

MeZ, drop the arrows! It has no flow because the letters look so isolated...

[BigBlueViolence]

Mez, work less on making letters that look like graffiti,
and work more on making letters that flow together.

Ober, I don't really dig it.
It flows, but you warp some of you letters to get it to flow.
Try and keep the letters proportionate.

[Baron]

dude i like ur letters nice style juss try to make em a lil thicker and try a few diff filler styles yee digg

What the hell are you talking about? That piece has neither flow nor structure. This is a tag thread and there isn't even a tag in the picture, let alone a hand style! The kid needs to start back from the basics.

[Lsd]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6GUIKxXX0o a quick vid with a pentel white http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VEgcW1cLvik and with a black kiwi mop (fucked up my "E").

[Ink me]

Hey. Just looking for some advice. My tags in yellow.

http://i35.tinypic.com/dpias9.jpg

Bump

[BigBlueViolence]

I think you should lose all of your kinks at shit at the end of your letters.
Use a seperate stroke for the line in your A.
The quotations and O dot are unnecessary in my opinion, also.

[BAGS]

^... and write your name bigger.

[-Flaw-]

Ive JUST started, so...its not too developed. I bought some nice markers last week but Im waiting to open them so I dont disgrace my name before I even get started! Any comments/tips/ideas would help.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3061/3060841216_afdc744b80.jpg?v=0

Sorry- its a cellphone

[jester.onest]

umm. Make it more simple. I can't even read it.

[-Flaw-]

It seems like every time I make it more simple it ends up looking like Mez from a few posts up...

Ill keep trying

[skeet-skeet]

http://i512.photobucket.com/albums/t326/skeet-skeet_/peesk.jpg

crits yo?

[BOLTS-OMK]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v456/Bonusballer/SSPX0099.jpg

[jester.onest]

Make it more simple bolts. None of the letters match, the B is megafucked, Speech marks=toy and what's up with the dot in the O?

[BOLTS-OMK]

Make it more simple bolts. None of the letters match, the B is megafucked, Speech marks=toy and what's up with the dot in the O?

Cool, thanks for the crit. I'll work on something simpler right.. meow and post it up.

[-Flaw-]

umm. Make it more simple. I can't even read it.

A'it -
Simpler. Yes. Better??? You tell me.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3225/3060085755_b9880a6246.jpg?v=1227683554

[BOLTS-OMK]

Much simpler. Even I (ubertoy) can read it right way.

[Ink me]

Heres another try. Took out my kinks and added a regular A. Any better? Let me know.

http://i35.tinypic.com/zmnndf.jpg

[BOLTS-OMK]

My tag is so gross right now.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v456/Bonusballer/DSC_0019.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

go way more simpler, man.

http://i38.tinypic.com/23jr229.png

[smooth_nuts]

i've never been to great and handstlyes BUT im trying to improve on that
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1186.jpg
...what im fuckign with right now

[BigBlueViolence]

I'd just close the D, make the O more round,
I'd personally lose the line in the O, too.
The E is sweet, though

[smooth_nuts]

yeah.
i mean to close the d,it's just when i do it quick i fuck it up :/

[klic]

My tag is so gross right now.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v456/Bonusballer/DSC_0019.jpg

lol the "fucking t" crap looks nicer than your actual tag, try using those letters for now

[BOLTS-OMK]

lol the "fucking t" crap looks nicer than your actual tag, try using those letters for now


haha, my thoughts exactly. I'll try that out when I get home. headin to a friends for a bit nao.

[jester.onest]

Heres another try. Took out my kinks and added a regular A. Any better? Let me know.

http://i35.tinypic.com/zmnndf.jpg


That is really nice. The A is fine for now. Once you develop a more defined style the letters will just roll out of your pen.

[Tzu]

any tips on what i should do with this tag? new to tagging

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/Untitled.jpg

was to lazy to use my camera to take picture

[Facedorateur]

Make it connect more, right now, your ''u'' is just out there, makeit part of the tag

[Tzu]

Not much change but any better?

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/Untitled-1.jpg

[Black Flag]

Not much change but any better?

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/Untitled-1.jpg

Make your letters closer to the same size. And don't make the bottom bar of your Z look like an underline for your tag.

[Tzu]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/Untitled-4.jpg

[blunttokes]

for fun an for tzu
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/7959/tzuno1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)





12brews down 12more to go

[mosezone]

flaw-make the letters the same size, and definately lose the L/A connection thing
aekos-maybe make all the letters the same size except the S. idk, just keep messing around with it, it's definately going in the right direction
bolts-honestly, i'd start completely over with simple ass letters
dope-make the D one piece, and make the O round. other than that, it's pretty nice
tzu-siiiiiiimple letters.

just a few flicks from my phone
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__0927080929-00.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__1127081521-00.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__20081127191500.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__20081127191559.jpg

[Popatance]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EiycRervJ8Q

My handstyle..

[BigBlueViolence]

Damn maoe,
I had no clue how to pronounce your name until you stuck that Y in there,
and now I feel stupid.

Gez- I think it was dope, until you added the oner.
Then it went to hell with all the add-ons.
I'd stick to just the Gez.

Happy Turkey Day, ******s.

http://i37.tinypic.com/2eg9yz9.png

Kind of let myself go.

[Tzu]

this is what ive gotten out of implementing the suggestions andy better from original

Beforehttp://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/Untitled.jpg



After http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/Untitled-5.jpg

[jester.onest]

Dude, still way too complex. Get rid of the weird "' thing and the quote marks, they are MEGA TOY. the underline and arrow are completely unneeded. you really need to make it more simple and try DRAWING ON PAPER.

[BigBlueViolence]

Happy Turkey Day, ******s.

http://i37.tinypic.com/2eg9yz9.png

Kind of let myself go.
Krump


Tzu- That U has potential, but those Ts and Zs are seriously hurting

[Tzu]

Simpler fixed the Z and T not sure if there any better though

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/28-11-08_0127.jpg



This is one of my old tags came out pretty cool with the advertisement
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/09-04-08_1912.jpg

[jester.onest]

Dude, how can the Remen be sooo good, but the Tsu be sooo toy?

Stick to writing Remen (if that is your work.)

[Dying to live]

haha

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/34835oz.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2m3rdl4.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/sfxeg9.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2dvl9tx.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/141kz6q.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/10ephqc.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/27wsxm0.jpg
Don't use mops when it's about to rain. :/

THat remen tag would look good with a little bit of steez here and there but that tsu tag is broken.

[Tzu]

i just stoped tagging it couse i got bored of it, its suposed to say "demon" just messed up the O , lol think i should jsut tag "remen? lol

[Philly Fresh]

ey snow 2 skate u in a crew?

[Tzu]

Thats a little more what its supposed to look like
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/28-11-08_1144.jpg

[emaf816]

whoa cursive..


it's like welcome to third grade all over again

[Black Flag]

Tzu....

You can't just do print with cursive attachments, your E's and your O's are exactly the same.

[smooth_nuts]

cursive?
where the fuck do you people live where that would be considered cursive?!

[jester.onest]

Dude thatDemon is sick. Black Flag is right though, the O looks like an E.

Maybe you should write Remen?

Emaf, what the hell are you talking about? The style is good and is NOTHING LIKE A 3RD GRADER.

[Tzu]

maybe ima mess around with it try and fix the O if not itl become remen haha

[jester.onest]

:) Sounds good mate. Just promise me... You will never write Tsu like that again, K?

[coh508]

my first piece ever what do you thinkhttp://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=155&pictureid=1191

[Bazer]

coh what are you doin man? haha.. you're truly new to this aren't you? this thread is for handstyles.

[coh508]

yea kinda

[Bazer]

check this out dude.

http://web.slais.ucl.ac.uk/2004/p017/p017ysi/pages/dictionary.html

[coh508]

i am new at this but i mean go through the last few pages and compare mine to most of the stuff there i mean i really dont think that it is that bad i guess it deff. not even close to alot of people but i didnt think it was THAT toy

[coh508]

oh well i guess its not a piece but can i atleast have decent throw up

[coh508]

or a blockbuster

[Bazer]

you dont sketch?

[coh508]

yeah i do i even got a scholarship to the boston school of fine arts for cartooning but i guess i am really not a good graff artist

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/34835oz.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2m3rdl4.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/sfxeg9.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2dvl9tx.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/141kz6q.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/10ephqc.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/27wsxm0.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/5wa61u.jpg
Don't use mops when it's about to rain. :/

THat remen tag would look good with a little bit of steez here and there but that tsu tag is broken.

Just bumpin for some feedback.

coh take it to the bombs thread.

demen work on getting your tters closr and fix your n

[Bazer]

yeah i do i even got a scholarship to the boston school of fine arts for cartooning but i guess i am really not a good graff artist
nobody is good when they start man. that's why everybody draws there pieces on papers for a year or two before they even start painting.

[coh508]

yeah im not mad i can take the crit i actually appreciate good crit like what you guys are doing but when ak47 came out and was like "it sucks" that was not cool

[Demon42]

So i fixed the O and the N and got the letters closer il post a pic tommoro, an ideas on what i can add to spice it up a lil bit like an underline or something

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/Pic0165-2.jpg
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/Pic0166-2.jpg
Bored with this huge ass paper haha!!!!
Demon dope ass D!!! Not sure if you should one line the whole thing!!!!
u have a hardcore ass name, maybe try to go in the opposite direction with sum steeze!!!would look good cuz its totally out of the norm...
COH not feelin the huge block letters...and this is tags only hence the forum name Toy Tagz.only.....
Isn't it harder to sketch characters isn't it all consist of all shapes put together......the only thing w/graff is that we use shapes mostly closely associated with bars to create a letter......idk but I got a friend too that is iight with piecing but is the shit w/characters

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2026.jpg

[Black Flag]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2026.jpg

What does the part inside the circle say?

[unsuccsessfull]

zoner...

[Mr yarbles]

I can see it now
Spread everything out a bit and don't give so much space to your n

[jersOneTIC]

some shit from today...
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/4536/10660059er0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
[/URL]

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/3647/22287786fk1.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/img65/10660059er0.jpg/1/)
[URL="http://g.imageshack.us/img65/22287786fk1.jpg/1/"]

[Ink me]

I have been messing around with new names.....mostly because of me ruining my other by being toy and laying it on some stuff around town. But here is my attempt at a new one, which will not be seen on streets for awhile.
http://i35.tinypic.com/10zz2ae.jpg
Tell me what you think

[Baron]

Nothing really flows, your T's look like H's your two A's are different sizes same goes for your T's again. Your K looks like an I and an S. Your S does not look like it belongs in there at all looks out of place. Your R is weird looking too with the curved in leg. Start again with simple letters and make sure the spacing stays the same, make the piece flow, there is no set tutorial to tell you how to flow your own name it just takes time and practice.

[Darkeist]

ink me - try to make it flow more.
jers - thats fresh

crits on the only underlined thing in there.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081129_4.jpg

[Baron]

Jers- Looks really nice, try using a marker that doesn't streak so much
Darkiest- I'm digging the R's but your tilted S is a little annoying and I'm not a fan of over lapping letters in tags, but thats a personal preferance, keep it up
Unsuccessfull- I could not read that, try writing horizontal and your R looks like a flamboyant K, some of it looks like a can issue

[Darkeist]

Thanks man.

[-=aCe_101=-]

tell me what you guys think of my tag im still pretty toy haha bgut i think its decent http://i451.photobucket.com/albums/qq232/aCe_LoL/Picture31.jpg

[Baron]

Yo no me gusta. Das ist sehr gros. All the extensions and little doo-dads that you think are "cool" are sucking ass like liposuction. First off I have a problem with your name, the S is an abomination, the add ons on hte C are pointless the R looks like it was beat over the head with the ugly stick, why the hell are all the letters capitalized except for the E's? Whats going on with the extensions on the E's? The M has an arrow tumor and it looks like this tag was done blindfolded. Get rid of the quotations, get rid of the crown or star at the top, change your name, get rid of yhe arrows get rid of the extensions and start from the begining.

[Mr yarbles]

Yo no me gusta. Das ist sehr gros. All the extensions and little doo-dads that you think are "cool" are sucking ass like liposuction. First off I have a problem with your name, the S is an abomination, the add ons on hte C are pointless the R looks like it was beat over the head with the ugly stick, why the hell are all the letters capitalized except for the E's? Whats going on with the extensions on the E's? The M has an arrow tumor and it looks like this tag was done blindfolded. Get rid of the quotations, get rid of the crown or star at the top, change your name, get rid of yhe arrows get rid of the extensions and start from the begining.

lol
But seriously baron said it perfectly quit what you thin is graffiti and start simple
Also why the hell are your letters so damn shakey?
Do your shit fast

[-=aCe_101=-]

i did start frim the beggining then added on but the letters are bite from real graff artists... so i dont see how your diddin the R and shit when its an exact copy of a big writters letters....lol i just bite them and put a tag together til i develope something...but instead of just sittin there like a dumbass critisizing it why dont you give me some tips to make it better?

[-=aCe_101=-]

i dont see whats wrong with it really...

[-=aCe_101=-]

sorry for the dam tripple post but can someone make me a "screem" tag that i can bite off of then to get an idea of what to do? thanks..

[Mr yarbles]

laaaawwwwwl kid don't bite
and if you do don't admit to it
Biting in graffiti is baddd
I did it when I started and it gets you nowhere
I went on for a bout a year with letters I never made and all I did was steez shitout and nothing flowed
Start simple stay simple for a long ass time
It'll get a hell of lot further
You ever notice why real graffii writers have good tags?
Cuz their shit flows together nice you cant just take their letter and expect it t look the same
That and every writers got a certain flow to their letters that you just can't mimick

[-=aCe_101=-]

so basically focus on flow?

[Darkeist]

so basically focus on flow?

Yes, also if you dont already know. If there were pictures posted up you'd need to give crits to receive them.

[Mr yarbles]

Some shit I busted out for fun
http://i36.tinypic.com/1znrh1i.jpg

For comparison:
When I started goin simple
http://i37.tinypic.com/125mmaq.jpg
maybe 2-3 months ago
http://i37.tinypic.com/no9eom.jpg

Damn I feel embaressed to show these again

Begining of summer I think
http://i35.tinypic.com/2m49d88.jpg
Middle of summer maybe
http://i34.tinypic.com/f1e71u.jpg

With aekz I only focused on steezy ass letters, and not flow or anything.
Now look at the skaer and aesk ags everythings nice and simple and the letters flow well, it's all things you will figure out when you start writing your name alot
Start simple stay simpl things will prgress a whole ot faster
Don't bite just focus on your simples.

[Epoc]

Simple is the way to roll, even if doo-das and extensions are added by killer writers I personally dont find they add anything to the tag. I'd prefer well structure plain letters any day.

[noose]

just started tagging recently, did this the other day.

really simple. feedback? lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v457/JcX174/1227903736193-1.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

good start if you ask me...make the N more of an N though..rather than a hump..
and idk, for just starting, its good.
even..clean..simple..
good job, you get 5 gold stars.
:)

[mosezone]

flaw-make the letters the same size, and definately lose the L/A connection thing
aekos-maybe make all the letters the same size except the S. idk, just keep messing around with it, it's definately going in the right direction
bolts-honestly, i'd start completely over with simple ass letters
dope-make the D one piece, and make the O round. other than that, it's pretty nice
tzu-siiiiiiimple letters.

just a few flicks from my phone
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__0927080929-00.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__1127081521-00.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__20081127191500.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/CID__20081127191559.jpg

bump for crits

[Ink me]

Heres another guys. Im just going to keep posting stuff up for feedback. Tried some funky stuff with this one. I think it turned out alright but Im new so tell me what you think.
http://i34.tinypic.com/4kzjp2.jpg

Mosezone - Im digging the split streaker but not so much the zig zag arrow underneath. I think the "Y" gives it more substance too. The one on the phone is pretty smooth.

[jester.onest]

abstrakd- make it more simple and make the letters the same size. Curly S is a nono, same with the thing on the bottom of the T. Also get rid of the 2 lines on the D.

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/Pic0168.jpg

[jester.onest]

The T and E overlap each other and make it hard to read.
other than that--nice.

[LeaksOne]

just started tagging recently, did this the other day.

really simple. feedback? lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v457/JcX174/1227903736193-1.jpg

i have to say when i was scrollin down i saw those famous words "i jus started what do you think" i was a lil scared to look but when i saw this its pretty good jus dont start adfdin arrows an crazy shit all over. well done an like someone else said jus fix your N a lil bit

[Queezy]

Noose - Great start, one of the only people i've seen start simple for their first tag. Anyways, try an uppercase N and keep the rest of those letters going cause it looks decent.

[Facedorateur]

Noose, i love it, its clean

Heres mine, (been practicing on stickas)

http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/748/sn851136mu9.jpg

(sorry for tha crappy pic)

[Ink me]

^ Does is say NSIF?

Here are more tries. Sorry for being shaky the dry erase is slippery.
http://i34.tinypic.com/d45c7.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/287qhp3.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/wi0j7c.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2mplt11.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2v8ip1s.jpg
Ehh. Yah I know its spelled different in some.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i35.tinypic.com/28itees.jpg

abstrakd don't ae your lettrs s edgy make them smoth round and flowing
Push yourletters in moe and eliminate alot of the dead space abstrad is kida a hard nme to write to

noose try something new with te e other than that you're definatelly on the righ track evryoe should take note of it do wha noose is doing you can eergo wrong with simples

maoe I think the red yellow strek looks disgsting ahah but your hands are solid

Asif go simpl like lot bro noarrowsno wierd exteny shit just straight up iples like noose

rooster mke your o's the same size as the rest of the letters

Sorr for the typos my compute all fucked up and it freezs and don't type all the ltters.
Damn viruses.

[LeaksOne]

yarbles ive always felt your shit even before the name change
ink me you got the right idea. keep it goin

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff036.jpg
goin simpler an less edgy.
crits?

[Mr yarbles]

leaks it's looking pretty good I like that a but te k its way to wide and the l should be pushed in more the tag just has too much dead space, but with a little work itll look good your tag has poential

[LeaksOne]

yea i noticed that dead space between the L an E thats my only problem with this name but ill tweak the k an keep the a. thanks for the crit

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_002-1.jpg

leaks - keep working on it, focus on flow and watch out for dead space

yarbles - looks fresh, not rreally a great flick though, it says skape right?

abstrakt - not a great name in my opinion, same deal as leaks, flow dead space blah blah blah

asif - im not feeling the arrow, make it a lil simpler

[Darkeist]

sorry for the shakiness
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081202_1.jpg

Shpel - you need to work on the L mostly. But so far you made it flow pretty well.

Leaks - Tighten it up, like yarbles said squish the letters in more.

Yarbles - I always think your handys are really fresh.

Abstrackt - Try to make it flow more, make the letters not so edgy

[[MiTH] hovz]

shpel - pretty good, try just working with some different styles, idk its been the same thing since ive started on here, it looks like you have this one down, just try to do something with the L.

seror - keep working on it like that and eventually, youll start to make some funk with the letters and itll look better. Once you get used to writing em youll see shit that you can tweak and make flow better, that was what i used to be like

leaks - try to put some flow into it, like someone else said, there is alot of dead space in it, and a weird space between the e and a that looks akward

mr yarbles - its probably the porn huh? haha. yours is looking pretty dope, i like the style of it.


this first pic of me when i was a baby nuts with this tag, i just wanted to see if im progressing in the right direction with flow and my hand and shit. its #3 in the pic. the second pic is of where it is now. the third is just another modenr tag. crits?

[Name12345]

Ok, new to this whole thing... figured I'd start off with the basics and try to get a tag going. Been having a hard time. I'm liking the word Sketch but it just seems way to popular (even though I haven't seen it yet... just the way it sounds) so I'm going to start using Fume. But I can't get the F down, and that's whats screwing up the rest IMO...

http://wimg.co.uk/NQZJwq.jpg

Any ideas for fixing it up?

[[MiTH] hovz]

name- start with more simple styles with no letter connections and shit. just letters, all the same size. and just keep writing that name in a book over and over and soon youll see you can tweak stuff because you are so used to it. youll see youll change letters and angles and all that. once your hand is comfortable with the tag and letters itll be easier to get flow into it and itll look better. just stick with one name, and keep writing it down.

[Bink1]

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4270/dsc04506no1.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/dsc04506no1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img516/dsc04506no1.jpg/1/)

two letter and TAG

[Lsd]

Just some shit.. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0005-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0004-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0003.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0002-1.jpg Crits?

[Bink1]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/8846/dsc04508wu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/dsc04508wu5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img509/dsc04508wu5.jpg/1/)

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2327/dsc04509dp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/dsc04509dp6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img389/dsc04509dp6.jpg/1/)

trying a wildstyle tag... says TEKZ

[noose]

Thanks for all the feedback! Took some of it and tried to make the N a lil different :p
I know it's nothing special yet, but am I going in the right direction?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v457/JcX174/1228352761368.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v457/JcX174/1228354921382.jpg

My two cents, the Pentel Outliner I used makes the tag look 10x times better lol.
On a side note tho, I tried using the outliner on a wall, and it doesn't come out the same (only the silver comes out, no purple[or blue, I'm color blind =/ ]). What markers can I use that does the same effect on walls and signs and etc?

[Name12345]

My stuff still looks like shit to me...
I tried going simpler and going straight to almost basic letters, and I'm sticking with "Sezd". what do you think now?

http://wimg.co.uk/ARYh7o.jpg

When I check out everyone elses stuff, it looks pretty good. I just want to get a nice tag going so I can stick with it and practice the shit out of it then I'll be good to move onto throwups.

[klic]

does nobody know how to give crits anymore?

[BAGS]

Sphel I have been trying to write your name and it's really hard. I think you should switch up your E, i think it kind of disrupts the flow of your name. the SPH combo is tough man. Ever consider a name switch? lol. Also I wouldn't connect the H and P, doesn't really look right. I don't know man, it's really a tough name to get some steez too.


SEZD, lose that corny ass shit on your D and write a nomral D. It doesnt look half bad besides that lame ass shit on the D, lol.




My two cents, the Pentel Outliner I used makes the tag look 10x times better lol.
On a side note tho, I tried using the outliner on a wall, and it doesn't come out the same (only the silver comes out, no purple[or blue, I'm color blind =/ ]). What markers can I use that does the same effect on walls and signs and etc?

I was feeling your first tag. I like your N now, but make all your letters the same size. And are you seriously gonna outline your tag? That shit is corny. I guess its alright for stickers and shit but definitely not on a wall and shit. Might as well paint a throw, it would take forever to outline a tag. lol. Basically, go back to your first tag with your new N.

[exitus]

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/9171/pandaov7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/pandaov7.jpg/1/w547.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img384/pandaov7.jpg/1/)

sorry no camera

[noose]

I was feeling your first tag. I like your N now, but make all your letters the same size. And are you seriously gonna outline your tag? That shit is corny. I guess its alright for stickers and shit but definitely not on a wall and shit. Might as well paint a throw, it would take forever to outline a tag. lol. Basically, go back to your first tag with your new N.

Hm, i was really feelin how the S and N was bigger.

but nah, def would not outline my tag(if you mean as in taking another marker and redoing it lol), i was just saying, if there was a paint marker that gave the two tone color outline effect that's similiar to the marker i was using to make that other tag.

anyways, took your advice, tried it out and...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v457/JcX174/1228368980170.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v457/JcX174/1228369030449.jpg

peep the Rain and Whoa tag btw, thinking bout doing a name change since too many people know me as NooSe in my area.

[BigBlueViolence]

Don't bring your N down so much on the right side,
and the R on the rain ones look a little off around the top.

[BAGS]

I kinda like the WHOA tag the best. Plus I like the name. I would get rid of the question mark and quotes and all that stuff. The S on your new Noose looks like it could need some work. It looks choppy. Other than that I think you got a lot of potential. Mess around with that WHOA tag more, I'm curious lol.

[dont=play=ketchup]

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/6479/003ov3.jpg

[Wallace]

no flow whatsoever on the past 2 pages other than yarbs=/

had to change names a little while ago, just getting used to this one. i enjoy seeing it around the city though

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1094/img00034ej7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[exitus]

tags lol, go to blackbook

[Bink1]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/8846/dsc04508wu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/dsc04508wu5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img509/dsc04508wu5.jpg/1/)

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2327/dsc04509dp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/dsc04509dp6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img389/dsc04509dp6.jpg/1/)

trying a wildstyle tag... says TEKZ

any crits?:confused:

[klic]

dude, stop crying about nor getting any crits, i dont see you giving any

same with you ketchup

[Wallace]

its a terrible attempt at a one liner

[klic]

i took your guys advice and changed some stuff up, sorry about the shitty webcam flick

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000212.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000213.jpg

tekz - go simpler, dont do one liners

ketchup - take that to the blackbook thread, i cant even see the tag lol

wallace - good flow, what does it say, soso? i cant read the letters after that

[BAGS]

SoSoDef? lol. That's kinda funny. I think it looks pretty decent though. I don't really like the crosses and extra stuff but the letters look ok.

Bink/Tek- Sorry man, I think it looks horrible. Your TE looks like a B, your K looks like a KI, so that makes your Z look bad. I would erase all of that and just write it out normally. I wasn't really a big fan of your Bink tags but they were better than Tekz.

Shpel- Try making your H a little wider, all the letters are wide and your H looks really thin. My favorite tag is the top one in the second picture, minus the L. I like the way your S looks on all of them though, I think improving that letter alone makes it better but it still needs work. I just think it's a hard ass name to write. Does it stand for something dope thats why you're keeping it? lol.


Will post up soon..

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/mad2.jpg


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/mad1.jpg

[Bink1]

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/3259/dsc04552el7.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/dsc04552el7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img111/dsc04552el7.jpg/1/)

givin another try ..

[BAGS]

the TE looks better, although it still needs work. KZ still looks bad man. Don't do a onliner just write it normally. Lose all that extra shit man, it makes it look super toy. I do like that N though.

[Bink1]

ahh sure...

[aleph8890]

Noose... I really dig your style but even the word is original IMO, ive never seen it.. I have a really hard time with tags and handstyles but your progression is dope. The whoa tag is tight too...

Abstrakd those are ill... I like the smaller ones on the side where you letters interlock... its dope cuz its not to complicated or busy... All i can say is on the biggies, work on the flow between the B ad the S


http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/4897/img0270fn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/img0270fn8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img512/img0270fn8.jpg/1/)

I really dont know how to do handstyles... any crits would help.. thanks

[Bink1]

RECK - its dope. what marker u usin?

[aleph8890]

Bink1... The handy's with a KRINK and the crew stamp is with a faber castell PITT artist fine tip

[klic]

SoSoDef? lol. That's kinda funny. I think it looks pretty decent though. I don't really like the crosses and extra stuff but the letters look ok.

Bink/Tek- Sorry man, I think it looks horrible. Your TE looks like a B, your K looks like a KI, so that makes your Z look bad. I would erase all of that and just write it out normally. I wasn't really a big fan of your Bink tags but they were better than Tekz.

Shpel- Try making your H a little wider, all the letters are wide and your H looks really thin. My favorite tag is the top one in the second picture, minus the L. I like the way your S looks on all of them though, I think improving that letter alone makes it better but it still needs work. I just think it's a hard ass name to write. Does it stand for something dope thats why you're keeping it? lol.


Will post up soon..

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/mad2.jpg


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/mad1.jpg

lol yah i got sosodef out of that to... yah i need to make my h wider. shpel doesnt stand for anything, i just liked the letters and its kind of like im mispelling spell which i like and thanks for the crit

you got good flow on those mad tags but the letters arnt that great, keep working on them and it will come

[BAGS]

Yeah, I just started writing Mad yesterday. My girl was texting me asking me why i was mad and i wasn't, so i wrote Mad? on my paper and thats what happened. lol.

How can I make the letters look better without losing my flow?

[Wallace]

just try gradually adding more personal style to the letters. they flow for the most part right now, just need more style

[dont=play=ketchup]

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/950/003hi5.jpg

[jester.onest]

dont=play=ketchup!

WRONG THREAD=FAIL.

GO TO THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD.

[Demon42]

So i got the letters a lil closer and changed up some stuff

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/05-12-08_0324.jpg (the nib was still a lil dry so it came out messed up)

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/05-12-08_0322.jpg

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/05-12-08_1605.jpg

[jester.onest]

Yeah lol I still liked the ones when they were more spaced out. They had more flow.

[Demon42]

yea i might stick with the spaced out one i just cant get my O to look like an O when i space it out come out looking like my E

[BAGS]

just try gradually adding more personal style to the letters. they flow for the most part right now, just need more style


Alright man thanks a lot. I'll post up in a couple days I guess.

[aleph8890]

A new one... Similar structure but a little more flair

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8125/img0271gm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/img0271gm7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img222/img0271gm7.jpg/1/)


Crits?

[Demon42]

Personaly i liked ur first RECK better

[BAGS]

Yeah I did too. Lose the squiggle line under it. What kind of marker are you using? looks dope.

Demon- I would try not to make it a one liner. Your N isn't defined at all. Try writing it normally.


I feel like a broken record.

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyu.jpg

crits and someone please help with letters

[noose]

Reck - I'm feeling the tag. not sure on hot to give crit, but i'm feeling it, period. lol

[BigBlueViolence]

Noyu- 1. Your name makes me laugh
2. It would look a lot more dope if the U wasn't so jagged, and maybe if the O wasn't so close to the N.

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Untitled-4.png

[Mr yarbles]

http://i33.tinypic.com/30ic4ds.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/ic74hv.jpg
Just postin no need to crit.

akel that's a fresh ass tag

noyu push your letters in closer it just dosn't flow well.

reck make it less edgy

[Dying to live]

http://i33.tinypic.com/30ic4ds.jpg


cool photo n nice tag

[Bink1]

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/5981/dsc04582hr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/dsc04582hr6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img110/dsc04582hr6.jpg/1/)

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5161/dsc04583ge5.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/dsc04583ge5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img146/dsc04583ge5.jpg/1/)

new onez , simpler and not one linerz..

[ShaolinNy]

Can someone please atempt a handstlye for Sneak?ive been trying but cant figure out anything decent


Thanks

[BAGS]

keep practicing. Nobody is just gonna give you a handstyle to bite from. Just start out by writing it out and keep doing it. I'm telling you man it will come to you. It just takes time, patience and practice. Look around in the Tags thread and try to get ideas of how you want your letters to look and add your own steez to it. Post up what you got, I'll try to help you out from there but I don't think anybody is gonna give you a tag. Whats the point in writing somebody else's style of YOUR name?

[graffdabusup]

Noyu- 1. Your name makes me laugh
2. It would look a lot more dope if the U wasn't so jagged, and maybe if the O wasn't so close to the N.

is my name making you laugh a good thing or what lol

[ShaolinNy]

keep practicing. Nobody is just gonna give you a handstyle to bite from. Just start out by writing it out and keep doing it. I'm telling you man it will come to you. It just takes time, patience and practice. Look around in the Tags thread and try to get ideas of how you want your letters to look and add your own steez to it. Post up what you got, I'll try to help you out from there but I don't think anybody is gonna give you a tag. Whats the point in writing somebody else's style of YOUR name?

im not asking for some one else to write my name just some help...Reason im asking for is ive been writing a while now and i cannot figure out a handstyle that even looks half way decent i dont want anything crazy just a decent handsltyle and i can come up with one...Can u help?

heres how ive been writing it and how bad it is

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo03/48/24/00cadc7f3786.jpeg
https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo26/c0/f9/c23ccea15d18.jpeg
https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo28/86/ba/57886d669fb8.jpg

[Jakal]

hey
if you really want help
dont get it from the internet
get it froma friend

and just advice, your name should be something you yourself come up with, not something that someone else comes up with

[ShaolinNy]

hey
if you really want help
dont get it from the internet
get it froma friend

and just advice, your name should be something you yourself come up with, not something that someone else comes up with

umm if your talkin to me i really only have like one freind that does graff so yeah and who said i didnt come up with my name,wered u pull that from?

[Dying to live]

is my name making you laugh a good thing or what lol
its because its a popular saying on a website which makes him laugh i would say..

[ShaolinNy]

im not asking for some one else to write my name just some help...Reason im asking for is ive been writing a while now and i cannot figure out a handstyle that even looks half way decent i dont want anything crazy just a decent handsltyle and i can come up with one...Can u help?

heres how ive been writing it and how bad it is

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo03/48/24/00cadc7f3786.jpeg
https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo26/c0/f9/c23ccea15d18.jpeg
https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo28/86/ba/57886d669fb8.jpg



Can some one help me come up with a decent handstlye/one liner plz

[MARTYRaz]

^^^^just keep at it...i been writing for 3 years and changed my name 3 times till i found the letters i liked and was comfortable w writing everyday...sneak is kinda a hard word to write...maybe try changing your name to find letters that flow w eachother...i can almost guarantee nobody is going to hand u a handy to call ur own...then again y do u write graff if u dnt wanna take the time to master YOUR NAME????graff is all about progessive and dedication....just do some research....read up on a few things about flow and style... and look at ur keyboard for letters that somewat flow with eachother....ull get it eventually...

[Demon42]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/06-12-08_1740.jpg spread it out a lil more N is more defined any better? gonna try normal letters without the 1 liner tommoro

[graffdabusup]

its because its a popular saying on a website which makes him laugh i would say..

which website?

[Demon42]

bump ^^^^^^^^^ crits?

[MARTYRaz]

try not to write ur letters together demon....make them more legible

[BigBlueViolence]

which website?

Yeah, funny is a good thing.
Around my way dudes have names like Butout and Lobster.
So I dig humorous names.

[Bink1]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m96/Demon2200/06-12-08_1740.jpg spread it out a lil more N is more defined any better? gonna try normal letters without the 1 liner tommoro

bump

[graffdabusup]

Yeah, funny is a good thing.
Around my way dudes have names like Butout and Lobster.
So I dig humorous names.

thanks bro.

[exitus]

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9864/dsc0122bp1.jpg
bottom one...
i used to write the top one expt not conected i put it there for comparison but ive been practicing the bottom one

[BAGS]

It just looks like cursive to me.

[WoeInfinite]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/1207081434.jpg

[exitus]

i like the woe but wtf heart r u a girl lol

[Mr yarbles]

Wow you're a faggot.

Woe you've improved so much since I last saw your tags just make sure everything is on the same level like imagine an invisible line that you can't cross

exitus we've told you many times what to do but you never listen.

[exitus]

you have lol i dont really remeber... what was it again
and im just saying that woe has this like brutal image with like spawn and shit and then he or she puts a heart by his/her tag

[Mr yarbles]

Justgo simple man don;t connect lettes just do upprcase letters simply

http://i34.tinypic.com/e7cbxs.jpg

[exitus]

k, thanks man, will do
nice tag but i think somethings fucked up with your marker id grab a new one

[Scheme*119]

http://i35.tinypic.com/jpd2xh.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/2ni8hle.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2rnc3ty.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/3088vhu.jpg
any suggestions for me yarbles?

[exitus]

well ive got my anda lookn real nice but im stumped on the p. anyone want a handie exchange so its not just a throw out, im toy but still

[Mr yarbles]

k, thanks man, will do
nice tag but i think somethings fucked up with your marker id grab a new one

It's a streak
I need to figure out how to use it :/

haha didn't know I was the go to guy

Make your e as big as the other letters makes it look uneven
A trick to get your letters to look right and level is when your practicing make a line everytime before and write your letters make sure your letters get close to the lne without going under and make sure nothing is too high above
Were you're at now just keep practicing with thoseletters and you'll improve

[Scheme*119]

good looks bro, will do

[exitus]

http://i36.tinypic.com/wr1jyo.jpg
no camera, is this better? critz ples

[Mr yarbles]

It's getting there but no wierd letters make your p normal size and don't overlap your lettes do a simpler a and round out your d

[Scheme*119]

space out your letters a bit and dont bring that p down like that, also, might want to work on the d, once you fix it up a little bit you should have a nice little simple tag going for you, then just take it from there.

[WoeInfinite]

Wow you're a faggot.

Woe you've improved so much since I last saw your tags just make sure everything is on the same level like imagine an invisible line that you can't cross

exitus we've told you many times what to do but you never listen.

im a faggot?
thanks for the crit though...i was sittin when i tagged it so thats why its crooked haha.
uhh and exitus, yep im a dude..brutal..not so much..but not gay either haha, i just rock hearts like you guys rock quotes or an underline, or star or halo..idk
its my steez...and shit, if the cops think im a girl...the better for me no?
<3

and swer, im feelin your tags.
what marker is that/

[Scheme*119]

i think that was an otr.60, im too lazy to go upstairs and check right now:D

and panda, something i whipped up for you real quick
http://i33.tinypic.com/xkoe84.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

tight.
yeah that blue one i did was an otr.
theyre alright..nibs kinda suck sometimes.
yeah panda, space your shit out like that^

[Scheme*119]

yeah but on the upside theyre replacable, the one i used for panda was a otr.050 theyre not usually streaky like that, that one is just about dead

[WoeInfinite]

yeah my mini flowpen nib is like that..and the blue one i used in that picture is streaky usually..
shrug.
i like mops..gotta invest in some more.

[Scheme*119]

go for one with a mohair nib, you wouldnt believe how long those things can last you, theyre like the timberlands of nibs

[noxi]

Justgo simple man don;t connect lettes just do upprcase letters simply

http://i34.tinypic.com/e7cbxs.jpg

use the edges for streaks.

[Amore]

quickie
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w288/colton308/flick001.jpg

[jester.onest]

Sole, the letters are nice and simple, but get rid of the underline and quote marks.


some of mine:
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image109.jpg
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image107.jpg
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image106.jpg

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/psedit.jpg
mmm baby nice n slow
amore loose the " " ' s

[smikoer]

AKEL; i like it, though my personal taste likes a rounder e?
error; lots of R's.. maybe mix 'em up?

trying to oneline
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6563/breysr1kq7.jpg
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/5618/breysr2kl9.jpg
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8862/breysr3nd1.jpg

[Dying to live]

that last R is sex

[Mr yarbles]

im a faggot?
thanks for the crit though...i was sittin when i tagged it so thats why its crooked haha.
uhh and exitus, yep im a dude..brutal..not so much..but not gay either haha, i just rock hearts like you guys rock quotes or an underline, or star or halo..idk
its my steez...and shit, if the cops think im a girl...the better for me no?
<3

and swer, im feelin your tags.
what marker is that/

No you're not a faggot hah I was talking to the other kid for calling you out on hearts

[exitus]

LOL my bad
Thanks a billion for the tips it's looking real good now

[Stonk]

akel really good..montana?
smikeor--i cant tell what some of those letters are..make it a little more legible.
skaer- dope tag..i really like that..

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3033/3061555419_fed47a1f80.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3065/2979725410_68783cb0d9.jpg?v=0
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01675.jpg?t=1228765239
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01677.jpg?t=1228765298

really bored

[YNGLNS]

Stonk - The bottom left "tride" is nice.

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000215.jpg

[Scheme*119]

nice and simple, just make sure all your letters are the same size, it looks like the e and l are falling off
edit; dont let your "s touch your letters

[EST2007]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000215.jpg

just messing around
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/SP_A0683.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

get off snaps balls

[Scheme*119]

psh, no one was on em to begin with. oooooooh

[B.S. POLICE]

ooohhhhhhhhh!!!


nah i was just kidding me and est are chill

[Scheme*119]

haha word word, my attempt at a one liner
http://i34.tinypic.com/2uemczn.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/xmivbn.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2ag5bw0.jpg
Ignore my buddy spine

sewr try starting your s at the the bottom instead of the top

shpel the ones with the lowr case s look better

tride sick flares sick tag.

jester good looks keep

[Darkeist]

Yarbles - your shits always fresh. I love yo S.
Shpel - The flick you quoted was better
Sewr - Not much flow in the letters

sorry for the shakes
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081202_1.jpgwhat

[Scheme*119]

Sewr - Not much flow in the letters


do you mean the one liner or my regular hand?