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Mr yarbles
12-21-2008, 08:47 PM
hahaha sounds retarted
They're extending my school hours whole fifteen minutes so I get to stay in each class 2 minutes more now. lame.

WoeInfinite
12-21-2008, 08:48 PM
they did that to me my sophomore year..we go in 5 minutes later, and get out 10 later...which didnt do anything but keep me there 10 minutes later...
anyway, im bored...quick handy exchange for all this talk?

Mr yarbles
12-21-2008, 08:50 PM
Word I'm down

WoeInfinite
12-21-2008, 08:52 PM
sweet, i got rapist for ya.
haha
uhh wanna do a Grieves and a Woe?

Mr yarbles
12-21-2008, 09:00 PM
God these are disgusting give me a few more days and I'll give you something better
http://i43.tinypic.com/httij6.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2uz2rlz.jpg

WoeInfinite
12-21-2008, 09:03 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/1221082156.jpg
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/1221082201.jpg
haha i suck worse dude.
haha rapistismonest.

Mr yarbles
12-21-2008, 09:06 PM
I hella dig those tags in the bottom flick and damn I wish I could still do cursive haha

WoeInfinite
12-21-2008, 09:07 PM
hahah yeah last time i wrote in cursive was 3rd grade, i forget what half the alphabet looks like haha
i like your E's

k'n1ve
12-22-2008, 12:11 AM
New tag from crits advice... Yarbles your shit is tight you got sick styles bro

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00490.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-22-2008, 02:21 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/1221080038.jpg
bah..

such sick styles woe and yarbles..
knive take away the arrow at the bottom and aswell the "s, less extreme on the i and it should be sick

ShhImACop
12-22-2008, 03:43 AM
eor/cor? - if its a c, lose the thing on the top of it in the bottom picture, but i think you just messed up your e?

yeah man, its an E i just was drunk and made my lines a Liiiitle too tight.

Bink1
12-22-2008, 03:59 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/5836/dsc04758ge7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/dsc04758ge7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img152/dsc04758ge7.jpg/1/)

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9424/dsc04759sx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/dsc04759sx7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img152/dsc04759sx7.jpg/1/)

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8912/dsc04760km6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/dsc04760km6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img152/dsc04760km6.jpg/1/)

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3741/dsc04761xo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/dsc04761xo1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img518/dsc04761xo1.jpg/1/)
homemade mop +homemade ink + wet surface = FAIL

rapist- doped.
knive-looks tight , maybe make the K same size as others, that leg is much too long i think.

WoeInfinite
12-22-2008, 08:03 AM
haha youre gettin there tens.
i bet you annihilated your mop on that rusty door though..

oene, youve improved since i first saw you.

R_O_A_R_K
12-22-2008, 09:53 AM
roark Go back to teh last page of what I showed and make the leg of the r go down instead of straight then down it'll look much better.
You mean the part that hangs down from the loop on the R? Also what do you mean by go down?

Roark-Try to blend your letters together now
That means have them kinda overlap right?

Sorry I keep asking so many questions, I probably sound like a supertoy or something.

Mr yarbles
12-22-2008, 10:07 AM
hah nah it's all good at least your listening

I mean after the cicle par of your r the leg goes outwards then down take out the outward part nd just makeit go straight down

R_O_A_R_K
12-22-2008, 11:31 AM
OK, curve it down. Got it :D

klic
12-22-2008, 12:32 PM
some tags from a while ago, i suck with paint

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0685.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0681.jpg
one for jaskal
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0684.jpg

tens - the first two are the best, im digging the cursive... not feeling the philly style at all though

oene - youve improved a lot but id lose the curve on the bottom of your R

edit: some handies on paper
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0703.jpg

Bink1
12-23-2008, 04:54 AM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6171/dsc04766bx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/dsc04766bx8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img528/dsc04766bx8.jpg/1/)


shpel-looks good with hand , but when with can looks like every next letter is going smaller. and why not in one line? maybe do a samller tags at first so u can feel the can.

mtown
12-23-2008, 11:02 AM
stick with the secondfrom right

shake n bake
12-23-2008, 04:27 PM
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/1664/graffpics029px5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/7098/graffpics030ly5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
not my best..kinda rushed

Ink me
12-23-2008, 04:37 PM
Still messing with names and styles.

http://i39.tinypic.com/j60ao3.jpg

Shpel- I like the pen stuff, but the spray looks forced.
Shake N Bake- I like the top tag without the "sun" halo thing and stars.

iPwnF00lz
12-23-2008, 07:07 PM
Ink - I like, maybe simpling up the c and t would make it look cleaner though.

I have to work on my hand style, I haven't practiced in forever and now I am worse than ever all over again. Help
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_1223081955.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-23-2008, 09:58 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/boestags.jpg
thinking of changing my name..this is simple and can be worked on =D


flux: new f man, ur contrasting letter types
Ink: maybe simpler?
shake: maybe take off the add ons..
tens: i like 2nd and third on the left side, just make the middle of ur e more visible
shpel: looks good on paper, maybe a fatter cap when painting?

klic
12-23-2008, 10:26 PM
i cant, i have to deal with stock caps cuz i live in the middle of nowhere and i cant order shit online without the rents finding out

BigBlueViolence
12-23-2008, 10:30 PM
A lot of Gold/silver paint have calligraphy caps on them, find one of those.

Baszma
12-23-2008, 11:51 PM
There's an entire line of ACE hardware spray cans with calligraphy caps. It's called like Premium Enamel shit or something. idk. and I'm too lazy to walk downstairs and look at some of my cans.

iPwnF00lz
12-24-2008, 12:12 AM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/1224080108.jpg
Thinking about changing my name to rype because I dig the letters a lot and after more practice it would flow pretty well.
Opinions?

Baszma
12-24-2008, 12:31 AM
That's a tight name, no doubt.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-24-2008, 01:39 AM
crits^ =D

shake n bake
12-24-2008, 02:52 AM
ink - the C looks a little stretched
pwn - the sideways bottom right one is fresh, so is the bottom one in the middle the Xs on the one above it dosent work though
tens - the third one on the left is tight, espically the S..dunno what to say about it =S
boes - third one down is nice, i think your Es look better like that.

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3049/graffpicshy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please..

things2
12-24-2008, 06:30 AM
Message to all toys:get a simple tag down then work on your pieces and bomb because 1. If you cant get a tag down its gunna get harder with bombs and pieces 2.theres no ponit geting a comleacted tag that cant be read if the public only have a glance at it



-sike-f.n.k.crew-

Ink me
12-24-2008, 11:11 AM
[http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9975/graffec4.th.jpg (http://img113.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffec4.jpg) wacha think?

Before you come preach....maybe you should work on simples yourself? As for crits.....I think your "i" is upside down and your "k" is faded out by the E. The top of the "k" looks pretty sketchy too. Just dropping some advice because I really took yours to heart.

iPwnF00lz
12-24-2008, 12:24 PM
That's a tight name, no doubt.
Thanks, I'm going to keep this one for good.


pwn - the sideways bottom right one is fresh, so is the bottom one in the middle the Xs on the one above it dosent work though

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3049/graffpicshy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please..

Thanks for the crits, your top left one, bottom right one, and one right below the top left are all ill. I like the simplicity, as long as you keep it simple and clean like that it will look nice. Maybe even take off the star because the one below the top left is probably my favorite.

'TieR'
12-24-2008, 12:35 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/2usu4qw.jpg
nothing special
just a quick one

what4joke...
12-24-2008, 12:57 PM
fresh flares ^

'TieR'
12-24-2008, 02:09 PM
nice one man

Mr yarbles
12-24-2008, 07:57 PM
That's a damn good handle just lose the arrows

http://i41.tinypic.com/ieean5.jpg

'TieR'
12-24-2008, 08:32 PM
il try one without the arrows and get a flick up asap

joker954
12-25-2008, 01:47 AM
jus my shit now

k'n1ve
12-25-2008, 01:59 AM
Tier- looks dope, clean it up a little, arrows a little sketchy but if you make 'em flow better might be sick..

Joker- Take your time the shit looks rushed- look at tags and see how other writers tweak and flow letters

k'n1ve
12-25-2008, 02:08 AM
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00492.jpg

reppin my girl

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00502.jpg

joker954
12-26-2008, 12:52 AM
thx bro for advice
ur shit looks nice

k'n1ve
12-26-2008, 01:58 AM
yeah man just gotta study it to know it...

shake n bake
12-26-2008, 05:05 AM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/5458/graffpics051vp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/8774/graffpics053qx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
kinda high when i did those..

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
12-26-2008, 12:34 PM
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9105/1224081820vk6.jpg

BAGS
12-26-2008, 06:26 PM
Knive - I like it, But I would work on your K, I don't really like it that much. I think that Bub is nice though, maybe you should write that lol. Good job though.

Yarbles- Go back to your old S, i liked that one so much more.


Cross Em Out- What's that say? SEBR? I like it, I'm not really fond of the R or the squiggly arrow, keep it up though.



New name...I was writing Mad but apparently there is a dude up in Philly writing it so...I'm not sure how I feel about these though...

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture011.jpg

BigBlueViolence
12-26-2008, 07:42 PM
Dope start Bags, you should smoothen out your R and O, though.

Pivit
12-26-2008, 08:18 PM
Heres a shitty one I did, I used a Sharpie Magnum.

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/4840/008pa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I write the word King because I used to call myself KingPivit. Just shortened it to Pivit and I tag King.

"Bi2aR"
12-26-2008, 08:58 PM
don't write king.....

bak
12-26-2008, 09:39 PM
yo yarbles where you from?

BAGS
12-26-2008, 10:09 PM
Dope start Bags, you should smoothen out your R and O, though.

Thanks. Yeah I wasn't feeling my R and O that much either. Hopefully this looks a little better..



http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture012.jpg

Bink1
12-27-2008, 05:34 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/338/dsc04784bc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/dsc04784bc5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img262/dsc04784bc5.jpg/1/)

some goldies. :D

tier- dope flairs,lose one arrow and it will look better i think.
knive-dont like the I everything else looks tight
sebr- love it
maro- its nice , i like your style
shake-letter same size and dont put on letter on other looks dumb
and king - dont write king,and start from simple letters ,it looks wack right now.

Mr yarbles
12-27-2008, 09:27 AM
yo yarbles where you from?

Chandler

http://i40.tinypic.com/16hq4wx.jpg

Darkeist
12-27-2008, 10:44 AM
Rapist - i really like that hand, looks fresh
bink - the tall one at the bottom looks good.
Bags - your getting there, loooking good,

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081227_1.jpg
sorry its so shitty. i couldnt get it to send to my email. so i had to take a picture with my webcam of a picture.

MARTYRaz
12-27-2008, 07:16 PM
not bad...

k'n1ve
12-27-2008, 10:19 PM
king you got too much shit goin on, it isnt smooth or flow, keep it simple/ dont write king/

Bink- that philly is comin along bro looks pretty sick

BAGS
12-27-2008, 10:42 PM
Seror - I'm liking it. Maybe fix your first R a little bit.

You know I be killin' them WaWa bathrooms...


I think my R is too big...
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture017-1.jpg


I like this one a little better. First time using a Meanstreak too. I kinda like it.

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture018-1.jpg

blunttokes
12-28-2008, 12:24 AM
Rapist - i really like that hand, looks fresh
bink - the tall one at the bottom looks good.
Bags - your getting there, loooking good,

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081227_1.jpg
sorry its so shitty. i couldnt get it to send to my email. so i had to take a picture with my webcam of a picture.


never seen someone write a word as close as mine....... i write CROR ive had ppl pronounce it like searor or kuhror but CROR
CROHR

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2681/graffitipics966iy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

iPwnF00lz
12-28-2008, 01:39 AM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_1228080211.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_1228080213.jpg
Crits? I can't really tell because im pretty low but I think the tail on the r is shitty from what i can tell.

Genghis Tron.
12-28-2008, 02:01 AM
You have alot of pilots..fucking christ man how much did those cost you

gcrolla
12-28-2008, 12:03 PM
Seror- Pretty cool, not feeling your R though
Maro- Looks good
Cror- First R and O don't really flow with the last R
Rype- Give me those markers :p

iPwnF00lz
12-28-2008, 12:46 PM
Haha to be honest I got them as a gift from my friend's parents. He writes in the books and they got him a huge marker collection and gave me those ones because he has plenty of them.

Darkeist
12-28-2008, 04:46 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/008.jpg

crolla - stick with say, it flows alot better, your I, and K in the second handies dont flow with the Rest, but you've got your S's down good.
Rype - i wouldnt have the back of the R curl around behind it like that, make the E more proportional.

SNAP!
12-28-2008, 05:09 PM
Just to show some progression... oldest to newest

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2117/2333792539_960ebe9d5c_d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3137/2977927399_5bf6b96296_o_d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/3143075024_500df3fafd_b_d.jpg

even the newest is kinda sloppy...just dont have any recent flicks

R_O_A_R_K
12-28-2008, 05:13 PM
Trying something new out. Saw something like this driving back down from Cincinnati. I liked it so I wanted to see what my name looked like with this style, and I'm kinda digging it. Still working on making the letters the same size but I think I got the flow pretty good here.
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/58/l_afdfa623b2d144219735758eacfb53b9.jpg

I like the second from the left at the bottom left corner. New silver sharpie for Christmas :) .

gcrolla
12-28-2008, 05:40 PM
Roark- Tight R, the rest is kind of just simple though.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-28-2008, 06:04 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/bluetag.jpg

Darkeist
12-28-2008, 06:18 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081228.jpg

oener - got good flow, the R kinda throws it off though.
say - lookin good, just spice it up a little bit to look more, eye catching i guess.
roark - fix your R's for them to look normal, make your O not so tear drop looking. It doenst really flow much

Uglybetty
12-28-2008, 06:37 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3288/3133816656_1e887c6d47_b.jpg
flares, yeyuh. (im the blue)
Seror, likin that simple steez man
Snap, i thought ya middle one was the best to be honest
oener your on the right track, just experiment ya can never do enough tags on paper

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-28-2008, 06:41 PM
lol..what does that mean...

SNAP!
12-28-2008, 06:51 PM
that means its not that great.... fill up a fucking lined page note book writing that over and over till the notebook is like a novel. then post again

Uglybetty
12-28-2008, 07:29 PM
fill up a fucking lined page note book writing that over and over till the notebook is like a novel.
thats the one

mekosbc
12-28-2008, 08:06 PM
Is there any one with good philly style that can help me out on it... If so pm me...

Mr yarbles
12-28-2008, 11:23 PM
Go out and observe a shit load of tall hands and script
It's gonna be hard to make a philly without learning in person

joker954
12-29-2008, 12:39 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k143/tycj10/get-attachment-4.jpg
workin on it
any good?

Genghis Tron.
12-29-2008, 12:47 AM
start simpler WAY simpler..

joker954
12-29-2008, 12:59 AM
kk

iPwnF00lz
12-29-2008, 01:00 AM
Start as simple as the font on your keyboard first man.

Darkeist
12-29-2008, 01:34 AM
Daze - as said before, start simple, keyboard letters.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081229_1.jpg
i know the simple S's on the side of the page are wack. Ignore them.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081228.jpg

bak
12-29-2008, 02:01 AM
Chandler

]

cali?

Bink1
12-29-2008, 07:15 AM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/101/dsc06172vl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/dsc06172vl2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img212/dsc06172vl2.jpg/1/)

fucked up philly with character.


Seror, nice shit
Snap, i love the last one , looks dope keep it up
oener oener your doing great love your tags, flows well
daze-dont write daze coz that name is raped in all the countries over world, do sumtin original.and keyboard letters.your trying to make it look complicated as shit , but it looks awful to be honest, too many arrows tho.

Pivit
12-29-2008, 09:51 AM
I worked on my tags a little, they both still suck tho.

Heres one that says "King Pivit":

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3107/tags001bs3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


and one that says "Pivit" (a name I'm probably going to stick with):

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7915/tags002qn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bleh.bleh.bleh
12-29-2008, 10:02 AM
I highly doubt you're a king.

Pivit
12-29-2008, 10:11 AM
I highly doubt you're a king.

I'm sticking with the name Pivit for that exact reason.

bleh.bleh.bleh
12-29-2008, 10:19 AM
To become king? You're not a king at the moment so don't put it. Also go simpler and slowly add style to it. A the moment it looks like PIVII. I also don't like the pointedness of it.

SNAP!
12-29-2008, 10:31 AM
anyone told to go simpler, fill up a note book of lined paper writing it the way you'd normaly write. style develops...

remos
12-29-2008, 01:18 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/estohtag.jpg

Mr yarbles
12-29-2008, 01:27 PM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/101/dsc06172vl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/dsc06172vl2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img212/dsc06172vl2.jpg/1/)

fucked up philly with character.


Seror, nice shit
Snap, i love the last one , looks dope keep it up
oener oener your doing great love your tags, flows well
daze-dont write daze coz that name is raped in all the countries over world, do sumtin original.and keyboard letters.your trying to make it look complicated as shit , but it looks awful to be honest, too many arrows tho.

Sorry to break to you buddy but that aint philly.
The letter stucture you have rght now is absolutely terrible
YOu can't just throw together a few hard to read letters and a crown n expect it to be a wicket
Go to the philly thread if you don't believe me they'll tell what's up.

Once again not trying to be a dick cs you've always been cool to me just letting you know

BAGS
12-29-2008, 01:37 PM
^yeah you're E and S look basically the same. and why is the top of the T and the bottom of it connected? it doesn't even look like a real letter.


I think everybody on this whole page has to go WAY simpler except for Seror. I think you should fix your R's by the way.



Sorry for the huge ass pictures...


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture033.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture032.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture031.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture029.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture028.jpg

Mr yarbles
12-29-2008, 01:45 PM
you're o just kinda looks tacked on at the end
Also go taller
Make your m conect to the bttom of your a and then connect to your r
Most tall hands letters appear that the connect at the bottoms.
aso try to make your o to arrow thing one line

YOur last pick where the a and the r meet at the bottom is what I'm talkng about your letters are a little to spread out right now


and everyone attempting philly wickets LISTEN TO ME you WILL NOT be able to d anything philly until you do your research and ndersad the lettering
and you WONT be able to do wickets without learning script and tall hands

WoeInfinite
12-29-2008, 02:59 PM
you tell em yarbles.
haha.
lost heat..
im too cold to do anything or id scribble some shit and post.
maybe later.

BAGS
12-29-2008, 03:50 PM
you're o just kinda looks tacked on at the end
Also go taller
Make your m conect to the bttom of your a and then connect to your r
Most tall hands letters appear that the connect at the bottoms.
aso try to make your o to arrow thing one line

YOur last pick where the a and the r meet at the bottom is what I'm talkng about your letters are a little to spread out right now



Yeah I know exactly what you're talking about. I have a problem with spacing my letters out too much. I guess just more practice writing it. I agree with my O...like I said though I guess the more I write it the smoother it'll feel. Thanks for the crits.

iPwnF00lz
12-29-2008, 05:34 PM
and everyone attempting philly wickets LISTEN TO ME you WILL NOT be able to d anything philly until you do your research and ndersad the lettering
and you WONT be able to do wickets without learning script and tall hands

Exactly.

Culture_Shock
12-29-2008, 08:46 PM
Maro I like your shit the way it is.
it might look nice if you went a little taller, or brought things in a little tighter, but don't connect that shit. I like the tags hanging off the lefts of your letters and it'd look shitty if you connected them.

and im sorry if you were using a sharpie meanstreak...

NiL
12-29-2008, 09:42 PM
Vandalllll

Shit sucks on a moving bus.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/Lawl1-1.jpg

Bored cunt on the bus
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/Lawl.jpg

And a random penis in the toilets :) @ School
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/Lawl2-1.jpg

I aint been on in agers so I feel I should post some pics of me vandalising :)

muddyluv
12-29-2008, 11:08 PM
okay this was a quick use of krink mop on a night where we were just gettin the name out.b4 i get crits like check the new to graff thread i wanna make it known that this was done just to put the name out.it aint great but hey its on a frickin ups sign on a main street.where plenty were walkin n driving.so holla at the gxc crew.

Darkeist
12-29-2008, 11:11 PM
Yeah, but no one likes to look at bad stuff. Take the arrow off the c, dont make the bottom of the g like that. Make it flow more.

GXC4eva
12-29-2008, 11:14 PM
Yeah, but no one likes to look at bad stuff. Take the arrow off the c, dont make the bottom of the g like that. Make it flow more.

I hear ya. appreciate it man

muddyluv
12-29-2008, 11:19 PM
my boy did that one.just tryin to get known.u'll see better very soon.

WoeInfinite
12-29-2008, 11:25 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/1229081700.jpg
yeah d00dz im s00000 ph1lly
=.='

BAGS
12-30-2008, 12:07 AM
Maro I like your shit the way it is.
it might look nice if you went a little taller, or brought things in a little tighter, but don't connect that shit. I like the tags hanging off the lefts of your letters and it'd look shitty if you connected them.

and im sorry if you were using a sharpie meanstreak..


Lol. yeah I'm feeling my tag now but I think it could use some tweaking. I think its decent enough to get up now and I've been seeing SO many spots that I want to hit, so I figured I'd hit some bathrooms and dressing rooms and small shit like that first.

And yes, I was using a sharpie meanstreak..first time using a streak at all. You wanna hook me up with something better? =)


And for talking....WOE, i like that shit but pleassssse lose that funky arrow lol. Just make it straight cuz.

WoeInfinite
12-30-2008, 12:12 AM
hahaha, i was just tryin to make fun of the philly tall hand shit..haha, i never rock arrows in my tags, but thanks dude.

BAGS
12-30-2008, 12:17 AM
Yeah I realized that after I posted and saw what you wrote under photo. I'm not really a big fan of the "wickets''. I don't know if it's just me and me being a "toy" but that shit is illegible as hell. I can't read any of it. I like the Philly letters that look more like mine (not to sound cocky or anything). But I like tags that are legible and shit. Like YNOT, MOST and all those MSG cats. Their shit is so basic but so ill.


I really should be getting to bed.... =(

k'n1ve
12-30-2008, 01:07 AM
okay this was a quick use of krink mop on a night where we were just gettin the name out.b4 i get crits like check the new to graff thread i wanna make it known that this was done just to put the name out.it aint great but hey its on a frickin ups sign on a main street.where plenty were walkin n driving.so holla at the gxc crew.


work on your hand style and if your gonna use a mop lets see some drippys

NuT
12-30-2008, 11:25 AM
just throwin my piece up sayin wassup. give me some feedback

k'n1ve
12-30-2008, 12:38 PM
looks like some skribble and a circle...

Darkeist
12-30-2008, 02:49 PM
agreed with knive

just focus on the handies, i was doing the haps thing for a friend, i know its wack
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081229_4.jpg

NuT
12-30-2008, 03:07 PM
More like this then?

Mr yarbles
12-30-2008, 03:21 PM
God no

BAGS
12-30-2008, 03:38 PM
Yo Yarbles you wanna do an exchanged with me? I know this is the wrong thread but nobody looks at the other thread.

Mr yarbles
12-30-2008, 03:40 PM
Sure give me a bit

Mr yarbles
12-30-2008, 04:20 PM
Some one liners I decided to fuck with
http://i40.tinypic.com/5w4ch.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/a3la9h.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2dqo9p2.jpg

I'll pass by later wih some stuff that's not wack :/

Uglybetty
12-30-2008, 04:33 PM
Mr Yarbles, that looks sick, sorry, i struggle crittin styles that i dont really see / cant do myself
Nut, new to graff thread.
seror i like the hand, a good simple hand, im not sayin start chuckin arrows here and there or anythin but start experimentin with it you know, just keep thinkin of different ways you could change the letters
whatever im shit at crits
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/8971/nobackgroundjf7.png (http://img72.imageshack.us/my.php?image=nobackgroundjf7.png)
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/nobackgroundjf7.png/1/w716.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img72/nobackgroundjf7.png/1/)
Dont worry it was done by hand, i just used a scanner for the first time and pissed around a bit in photoshop hah, im down for a handy exchange with anyone.

BAGS
12-30-2008, 05:57 PM
Yarbees - I think you shouldn't make the loops so obvious you know? There is a ton going on with the O! haha.

Exchanges are fun though. I like trying out different names.... Even though I think my Rapist hands are weak...oh well.

Trying out my new Deco's =)


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture038.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture037.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture036.jpg

Uglybetty
12-30-2008, 06:01 PM
Mr Yarbles, that looks sick, sorry, i struggle crittin styles that i dont really see / cant do myself
Nut, new to graff thread.
seror i like the hand, a good simple hand, im not sayin start chuckin arrows here and there or anythin but start experimentin with it you know, just keep thinkin of different ways you could change the letters
whatever im shit at crits
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/8971/nobackgroundjf7.png (http://img72.imageshack.us/my.php?image=nobackgroundjf7.png)
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/nobackgroundjf7.png/1/w716.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img72/nobackgroundjf7.png/1/)
Dont worry it was done by hand, i just used a scanner for the first time and pissed around a bit in photoshop hah, im down for a handy exchange with anyone.

Bump from the bottom
That green rapist hand at the very top was the nicest imo, maybe make the T flow with it a bit more, but meh, it looks nice

mrkurto
12-30-2008, 06:04 PM
agree about the GREEN RAPIST.
nasty name ha

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3253/3147419010_6378de3e6e.jpg

Uglybetty
12-30-2008, 06:13 PM
kurto, drop the arrow and the dots and the exclamation mark (or just do a straight one)
and maybe the underline
nice and clean tag though

iThrow
12-30-2008, 06:19 PM
ballin kurto tag - maybe instead of the exclamation mark add the three dots to the other side
http://i40.tinypic.com/2hdqpfq.jpg
sorry about the sizing

BAGS
12-30-2008, 06:33 PM
Yeah I think the one you guys are talking about is the best too. I like my S the best. It was hard for me to flow the IST.


Kurto, it's funky. I'd lose the exclamation point though.


Woe, Shpel and Tens... you don't have to write anything back I was just writing different names for shits and giggles...


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture040.jpg

Uglybetty
12-30-2008, 06:49 PM
sers drop the dots and dont make the leg of your R flick up at the end, pretty nice though
bags try gettin something funky on the go inside your O, it just looks too plain at the moment compared to the rest.
anyone got any crits for me?

BAGS
12-30-2008, 06:58 PM
Sometimes I put an arrow thru my O, but to be honest I don't really like shit inside O's and stuff. I like just plain tags. I do agree that it does looked latched on..but I think over time it will develop.


Betty, I can't even read your tag. I'm seeing a VA....?

Uglybetty
12-30-2008, 07:03 PM
yeh i know what you mean,
VANEZ

BAGS
12-30-2008, 07:15 PM
Now I see it. How about you make your Z a little more legible. On the second tag make it even with the rest of the tag. I like how you're letters get bigger on the second one but the Z throws it off. I'd work on the first tag as well.


Sers - How about fixing your S's ya know? I think it would help the tag a lot.

mrkurto
12-30-2008, 07:17 PM
dope thanks for the crits.
i went a little nuts on my "doo-dads"

SERS that is cleannnnn

who is writing TENS?
there's already a TENS and he's pretty big..

BAGS
12-30-2008, 07:19 PM
Some dude Bink...go back a few pages and you'll see it.


EDIT- I'm trying out a new really basic style. I kinda like it. What do you guys think.


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture043.jpg

GXC4eva
12-30-2008, 10:30 PM
Bags the new one is alright, I really like the WOE u did.
hey im workin on my handstyle. What do u guys think of it. CRITS PLEASE.
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q82/AMuells/Snapshot_20081230.jpg

GETRAD
12-31-2008, 03:02 PM
maro- pretty dope, maybe lose the quote marks on the end if anything
mew- good job starting simple, but you def need a new m and w, the e is ok

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo98.jpg

Mr yarbles
12-31-2008, 03:17 PM
good shit getrad
http://i40.tinypic.com/2a0c6s2.jpg

lifer
12-31-2008, 03:35 PM
Some one liners I decided to fuck with

http://i40.tinypic.com/5w4ch.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/a3la9h.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2dqo9p2.jpg

thoose are pretty dope non-stops if i seen them rocking i would say GOOD SHIT

lifer
12-31-2008, 03:42 PM
You got one of the best hands in here buddy (in my opinon)

Mr yarbles
12-31-2008, 03:45 PM
Thanks man
I got mad ADD so I work on my hands the most
I do throwie everyonce in a while and the occasional piece but I can never stay focused after the second letter.
hands have just always been my thing

ErrorOner...
12-31-2008, 04:40 PM
same here yarbs i got the extra H in that shit too lol. hands are my thing but thankfully i got my throwie down before getting distracted...

Mr yarbles
12-31-2008, 04:46 PM
hah word I go a god throw I guess and I'm workin on it right now
but I'll probably get ored o drawin throws ina week or so

TRY'N
01-01-2009, 01:13 AM
yea mr yarbles your hands are dope.

and i gotta say, your sig is mad cute. is that kitten yours?

bak
01-01-2009, 02:04 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/12-31-08_2354.jpg

QueTwo
01-01-2009, 03:40 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/3129972707_991c3c60b3.jpg

Tigerstyle
01-01-2009, 04:03 AM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r191/STEIGERCHILD/Picture009.jpg

respERATION
01-01-2009, 05:04 AM
que-just get like a note book and a sharpies or biro and fill it up with hundreds of normal tags with nothing on
tigerstyle-drop the line underneath and i like it

lyrics for practise http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0053.jpghttp://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0047.jpg

Bink1
01-01-2009, 05:51 AM
dope thanks for the crits.
i went a little nuts on my "doo-dads"

SERS that is cleannnnn

who is writing TENS?
there's already a TENS and he's pretty big..

big? where?

never heard about him and if he is from US then i dont care.

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6821/dsc06178hi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/dsc06178hi3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img508/dsc06178hi3.jpg/1/)

FelLin
01-01-2009, 07:14 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00077.jpg

Wallace
01-01-2009, 11:57 AM
bak- i like it
yosh- my handwriting has more style than that
que- sloppy and almost too simple
resp- cant read half of it
tens- not a bad base, work off of that
fellin lol- go extremely simpler, looks terrible right now

Mr yarbles
01-01-2009, 12:35 PM
big? where?

never heard about him and if he is from US then i dont care.

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6821/dsc06178hi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/dsc06178hi3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img508/dsc06178hi3.jpg/1/)

Good hand it's got potential
Everybody on this page take notes off tens dudes going simple and it looks good
All of you should be doing this.
Esecially you fellin

and no it's not my cat to whoever asked hah

FelLin
01-01-2009, 12:39 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00081.jpg
any inprovement

TRY'N
01-01-2009, 01:00 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00081.jpg
any inprovement

not really.... don't do arrows right now. anywhere.

k'n1ve
01-02-2009, 01:45 AM
Bak- I like your style bro..
Tens- Lookin good sweet and simple
Fellin- Gettin ahead of yourself, lose the extra shit and work on your hand, less spacing between letters, esp. lose the curls on the f and N
Tiger- got a good base to build on

IlikePie
01-02-2009, 02:47 AM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1230885733.jpg
Botched the first S :(

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1230885985.jpg
Sodomy!

shayk
01-02-2009, 07:30 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00085.jpg
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00084.jpg
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00083.jpg
crits?

SEF123
01-02-2009, 07:40 AM
Is SEF a good tag?

shayk
01-02-2009, 08:22 AM
go to the new to graffiti start hear thread and read the second post i think

okibi
01-02-2009, 01:18 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/0kibi/P1023517.jpg

New (old) name, crits?

k'n1ve
01-02-2009, 01:47 PM
pie- go simpler not as much add ons
shayke- good base, the only letter with any style is your s though
okibi- looks pretty good

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00507.jpg

IlikePie
01-02-2009, 02:04 PM
Add ons? Where???

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-02-2009, 02:09 PM
knive looks good just space out hte n from the i(just a little) cause from first glance it looks like ther connect to make a N

shayk
01-02-2009, 03:48 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00088.jpg

k'n1ve
01-02-2009, 06:48 PM
pie- i mean like the swirls, and connections you have

Thanks Tea drinker, your right man i didnt notice that..

shayk
01-03-2009, 07:12 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00090.jpg
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00091.jpg
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00092.jpga fue i did last night

mrkurto
01-03-2009, 03:16 PM
really not feelin' those.

the first photos you posted were better.
the only thing i didn't like was the S extension.

BAGS
01-03-2009, 03:43 PM
Yeah i really wouldn't write that shit in public yet...

ErrorOner...
01-03-2009, 03:53 PM
straight up wait a long time before you hit the streets with that shit. look at other people's shit and then look at yours...doesn't look up to standards does it? practice makes perfect.

okibi
01-03-2009, 09:12 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/0kibi/P1033518.jpg

Crits?

ErrorOner...
01-03-2009, 09:47 PM
nice and simple. it would look good next to some crazy handstyle on a door for sure.

okibi
01-03-2009, 10:36 PM
nice and simple. it would look good next to some crazy handstyle on a door for sure.

Respect. Anything I should change or work on?

.HATESONE.
01-03-2009, 11:46 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture397.jpg

no one gave me crits on the blackbook so i thought id go here.....


crits crits crits?????? would be apreciated.whatever.

WoeInfinite
01-03-2009, 11:50 PM
i can just bareeeellllyyyy make that out bro.
start simpler with it.
the H is fine.
the E..isnt.
and neither it the T, dont connect it.
:)

.HATESONE.
01-03-2009, 11:53 PM
really? i kinda like the e.gotta fix that t though thats for sure.thanks tho...

WoeInfinite
01-03-2009, 11:54 PM
no prob.
idk, kinda hard for me to tell it was an E at first.

shayk
01-04-2009, 01:15 AM
In reply to my post i live in a hick town where like 20 people is the population so I wouldint rilly say it was in public and it was more of an ink test for a mop I made I added more paint thinner and dot 3 and its way better now but that's besides the point ill work on it tho

Bink1
01-04-2009, 10:13 AM
In reply to my post i live in a hick town where like 20 people is the population so I wouldint rilly say it was in public and it was more of an ink test for a mop I made I added more paint thinner and dot 3 and its way better now but that's besides the point ill work on it tho

HAHAH

dot3 dont make ink better,it just make a ghost tag if your shit gets buffed! and how can u add paint thinner for ink? it must be paint .. your fuked up with chemistry. i was too :D u should check chemistry thread.

shayk
01-04-2009, 10:40 AM
paint is what i ment to say but yea ill check that out

shayk
01-04-2009, 11:12 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00102.jpg

i feal like this one is alot better i went simple

what4joke...
01-04-2009, 12:02 PM
lol, take off the ( . . . ) and yes, its better then b4. keep working on it

TRY'N
01-04-2009, 01:00 PM
shayk-- a lot better but keep working with it. and yes, take off the ...

what4joke...
01-04-2009, 01:09 PM
and you will change your name, everybody does.. so don't get hooked in any ruts as along the lines of style, cause if it looks like shit and ur stuck, all your hands will look like shit untill you break free, no matter what name you got.

Mr yarbles
01-04-2009, 01:18 PM
word I
ive gone from tesone to maik to aikr to maikrt to aekz to aesk to aeks then to scare and now rapist all becuase my hand got stuck and it didn't look good
You'll end up changing your anme once you realize there's no where you can go with those words and you need to change it get a fresh start with letters your better with

shayk
01-04-2009, 04:27 PM
i think im gona try wrighting up an alfabet and choseing a name from there

shayk
01-04-2009, 05:56 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00103.jpgwhat do you guys think of this one

.HATESONE.
01-04-2009, 05:57 PM
how long have you been writin?

shayk
01-04-2009, 05:59 PM
like a week

.HATESONE.
01-04-2009, 07:11 PM
oh youll do ok then.youve got hella time just keep practicing.

shayk
01-04-2009, 07:17 PM
yea im trying to get in as many battles as i can so i can learn all the aspects of wrighting
idk i like being pushed by some one better than me and i dont care if i get laughed at in the start

Amore
01-04-2009, 09:31 PM
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w288/colton308/sketchyCpics001.jpg
some quickss..crits

Slikkk
01-04-2009, 10:16 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/qpjfbq.jpg
new at this...
crits?

TRY'N
01-05-2009, 01:55 AM
i started messing with a one-line type tag style and did this
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0105090218-1.jpg

and this is the one that's usually my regular tag
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0105090218a-1.jpg

ErrorOner...
01-05-2009, 03:23 AM
wow tryn that shit is much nicer to look at than your old tag...somebody's been practicin.
flick for talkin...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0105090339.jpg

TRY'N
01-05-2009, 05:33 AM
wow tryn that shit is much nicer to look at than your old tag...somebody's been practicin.
flick for talkin...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0105090339.jpg
thank you:D

any more crits would be appreciated. especially on the second. it does't really flow and stuff, so i know it's not that great

erroroner-- looks dope from here, i wanna see a close up

shayk
01-05-2009, 06:51 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00105.jpg
sry i keep posting thes pieces of shit but im trying to improve... and its not going well haha

NouveauP
01-05-2009, 11:24 AM
Shayk, start off slow. Just get a wedge marker, or even a pencil and sketch "SHAYK" just like that. Copy a few fonts and then slowly start to add your own style to it. You have to crawl before you walk.

shayk
01-05-2009, 02:12 PM
i know you guys are gona say dont paint that shit in public and start simple but i feal so restricted on papper and it always turns out curvey when i do it fast http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00108.jpg

TRY'N
01-05-2009, 02:28 PM
i know you guys are gona say dont paint that shit in public and start simple but i feal so restricted on papper and it always turns out curvey when i do it fast http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00108.jpg

yes, don't do that in public, paper is practice and you need practice.. but it's obviously too late. i don't get it. you wants crits and everything and people tell you go simpler and start out slow and you don't listen.

go simplerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

ErrorOner...
01-05-2009, 02:47 PM
write your name like a keyboard does. SHAYK or pick a simpler name at first... i started with Bitr1 and then decided scrap is better. just practice making EACH letter look nice and simple. but flow at the same time. actually dont even worry about flow yet just make each letter look good.

ErrorOner...
01-05-2009, 02:52 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/qpjfbq.jpg
new at this...
crits?

try making your arrows more pointy and less rooftop-like. lol here's an example:
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0105091549.jpg

SNAP!
01-05-2009, 02:54 PM
funny..i use to/sometimes still write skrap ^

take lined paper...use 2 lines at a time writing it normally how you would, and it develops..
it takes time.
"graffiti is the art of progression" remember this quote for as long as you write

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-05-2009, 02:57 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/bluetag-1.jpg
Try'n- first one pure dope, second one not so much
shayk- u probally hear this alot but .. SIMPLE! best way to start, ur first one looks like its cursive writing, second one... i duno...

Masta T
01-05-2009, 03:02 PM
so heres my tag ikno its not good but crits would b greatly appriciated havent been writing to long a couple months n i kinda forget a tag is prolly one of the single most important aspects of writing n getn ur name out n shit so any help would b great =D

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/009-1.jpg

bak
01-05-2009, 03:40 PM
dont worry about the accesories but more on the letters themselfs

Den1
01-05-2009, 05:49 PM
http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0534.jpg

dont mind anything in the green its all just mess ups just crits on the blue one please
-thanks

MARTYRaz
01-05-2009, 08:24 PM
wat letter is the first cuz thers no connection if its a D and the N? lookslike a backwards U...start at the basics...DEN

Stussy
01-05-2009, 09:03 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/qpjfbq.jpg
new at this...
crits?
bump...
looks good... nice and simple... keep working on it...

Mr yarbles
01-05-2009, 09:39 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/14iz78n.jpg
Eh

That vamp tag is lookin pretty damn good bro

and oene you're looking good too
I jsut don't feel that r :/

TRY'N
01-05-2009, 09:58 PM
rapist -- still a dope hand style

slikkk-- looks cool, kep it up

den-- you should define the D more and i'm not really feelin the quotes how one's on the bottom and the other's on the top. if you wnt them you should put them both on top imo. keep it up and stay simple for now, it should develop nicely.

and thanks for those who gave me crits and stuff. i wasn't always feeling the old tag on the bottom cuz it kinda flowed up until the N and then got ruined. ima keep working on more.

Amore
01-05-2009, 11:18 PM
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w288/colton308/sketchyCpics001.jpg
some quickss..crits

.

shayk
01-06-2009, 12:27 AM
I try but I can't wright like a computer I've writein in cursive sence like 3rd grade

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-06-2009, 02:30 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/14iz78n.jpg
Eh



I jsut don't feel that r :/

oh... we will make u feel the r...

and aswell dope, best part the e on one =D

what4joke...
01-06-2009, 04:18 PM
new style, test. crits? (normally im more flow. but a guy was driving right down the street and i had to finish in one pull or it'd suck more... so i did it fast.)
http://i39.tinypic.com/2uxw7ys.jpg

H3TT1NG3R
01-06-2009, 04:23 PM
^not bad, i would cut the extension on teh back of the R, dont make the l connect to the k, and your good, the e could use soem work tho, just cut off the leg, so it stops right where the top of the e starts

what4joke...
01-06-2009, 04:25 PM
yea, i usaually do, the nib got stuck on something rough. i was thinking an old wheat paste. and thanks

ESKids
01-06-2009, 06:02 PM
http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/chaaaa.jpg





^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^that says tech one but i usually just write tech

BAGS
01-06-2009, 06:04 PM
Rapist keep that S. it's dope.

newbornsek
01-06-2009, 06:52 PM
yo tech man the letters are all pretty good but i would say that the style just seems pretty played out. all the arrows and shit, just keep playing with it and it will look doper.

here somes of my shit, iv been working on my handies latly
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00857.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00855.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00856.jpg

any crits?

newbornsek
01-06-2009, 07:03 PM
heres some more
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00858.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00859.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00860.jpg

BAGS
01-06-2009, 07:20 PM
Foarme? - I like that shit man. Keep it up dude. Maybe write your name a little bigger though you know? Other than that man I'm digging it.


Tech - Don't do that extension with your E coming across the T, looks lame. Too many unnecessary arrows too.


Relik - Meh. It looks decent I guess, it's just not my style. too off balance IMO.


Sole - Keep working on it. Work on your S the most. I wouldn't write on stickers yet either.


Vam - I like it. Keep working with it.


Den- Go simpler dude. Looks like you are trying too hard.





Trying a taller style, fixed up my R and O a little. I think they flow more...

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture063.jpg

hardwares
01-06-2009, 07:24 PM
newbornsek-- i like the last green ones. like the new A, the other one blew balls. do something with your F, it doesnt really flow with the rest of your tag.

bags-- dope shit.

ESKids
01-06-2009, 07:52 PM
a different style .......... i'll post a pic of the other tag after i mess with it a little thanks guys


http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/100_0332-1.jpg

BAGS
01-06-2009, 08:05 PM
there is a whole page full of tags to crit, so don't expect to receive anything if you aren't gonna crit the other guys before you....

klic
01-06-2009, 08:35 PM
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture063.jpg

chess life? hahaha

shitty webcam flick, crits
edit: i just realized that you cant make it out at all lol
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000228.jpg

maro - i like how you have the line coming up on the left of your letters to give them more flow but i think they might look better if they were shorter

foarme - E looks dope, work ron your other letters some more

rapist - looks good, i think it would look better if the t was the same size as the other letters

give crits to get them

ESKids
01-06-2009, 08:42 PM
http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/100_0335.jpg






http://i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq161/eskids/100_0334.jpg

sacwacko
01-06-2009, 08:43 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/graff.jpg

BAGS
01-06-2009, 08:55 PM
chess life? hahaha

Lol, yeah, this month's issue. I've been playing for about 7 years now. I was captain of the team back in highschool ;)


RZA was featured in this month's issue...I thought that was pretty neat.

http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture065.jpg
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture066.jpg

klic
01-06-2009, 09:20 PM
wuChess haha thats awesome,

thought id bump something old thats actually visable

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0703.jpg

Den1
01-06-2009, 09:39 PM
ESK- ur techone is a little bunched up but still fresh

sacwacko- i like ur long narrow tags at the bottom but i dont think the lowercase n flows with that style but that could just be me

klic- i like it overall

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0542.jpg
crits please i tried keeping it a little more simple

simpk
01-06-2009, 10:00 PM
changed my user name, still the same person though.

http://i44.tinypic.com/2ajx1fk.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/21mettv.jpg

didn't really change much, i think i fixed the arrow.
anything else, maybe with the p?

and i'm not a bro, im a girl. but thanks. =]

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 10:05 PM
Is it amp?
It's pretty dope, I would just say make sure your P is it's own letter, not just an extension of the M.
Don't take offense to the word bro, that's just silly.

Bags- You progressed fast.
You've got solid letters, now just make your lines solid, they're pretty shaky.

simpk
01-06-2009, 10:06 PM
and as far as crits go

sacwaco-may not be super good at graff, but i am a painter, i would tone it down on all the arrows and extensions, but thats just me.

eskids-looks good, maybe a little more proportional though

simpk
01-06-2009, 10:08 PM
its VAMP

yea thats what i was tihnking, not sure how though

no offense, just getting it out there =]

simpk
01-06-2009, 10:10 PM
and thanks.

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 10:15 PM
Vamp- You should really get your V out there, dude(ette?)
Try to get some flow going too,
you look like you've got the keyboard letters down.
Free your mind.

simpk
01-06-2009, 10:18 PM
yeah, i just dont know where to start, i like the one i have but obviously need to expand
you can call me dude.

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 10:27 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/27wr6ew.jpg

Just, like, study different generic styles,
find the one you like the most,
keep practicing that until you get good at it,
then start adding your own shit to it.

Game Ova 07
01-06-2009, 10:45 PM
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/neo.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/Revived1/neo1.jpg
sorry about the lighting i know it sucks
crits?

shayk
01-06-2009, 10:53 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00109.jpg
if no one likes this one im gona stop posting and come back when i get some ill shit

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 10:54 PM
Well, it's looking better that your other shit,
but I wouldn't say that I like it.

TRY'N
01-06-2009, 11:00 PM
yeaaa.. shayk it's simpler which is good but i'm not feeling it either. maybe try doing all capital letters? or all lowercase? cuz right now your S is bigger than the rest of the letters and it kinda messes up the flow. and don't worry about loops and shit right now like what you have on the top left of the Y. keep practicing.

ErrorOner...
01-06-2009, 11:21 PM
yo bigblue do you think you could give the name scrap a try in that letter style of yours?
i have no idea where to start in making my name like that...maybe im too stoned...
btw the second arrow looks the best, vamp. good job, keep it up.

.HATESONE.
01-06-2009, 11:38 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3815/picture406ql1.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

what yall think?

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 12:04 AM
dope,
The E comes back a little too far on the Hate, though.

simpk
01-07-2009, 02:58 PM
thanks man, bigblueviolence or whatever your name is.
i'm gonna work on some stuff and post something later.

Scheme*119
01-07-2009, 03:00 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2lxwevt.jpg
my entry for the 2009 handstyle clusterfuck, reads, nosferatu

.HATESONE.
01-07-2009, 03:18 PM
at first i thought you had that sittin on your toilet and i was thinking did he do that takin a shit or...but its obvioulsy not a toilet and my point is,well i odnt really have one but yeah its nice...damn i shoulda got down on that battle.i got nothin to do.at all.

Scheme*119
01-07-2009, 03:23 PM
haha nah bro, i was doing some laundry at the time and just threw that down while i was waiting for my clothes to dry

shayk
01-07-2009, 03:45 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00110.jpg
so i lied im back with out any thig ill

Scheme*119
01-07-2009, 03:48 PM
bring up the head of your s

BAGS
01-07-2009, 03:50 PM
Bags- You progressed fast.
You've got solid letters, now just make your lines solid, they're pretty shaky.

Thanks BigBlue. Yeah I work with a guy in his 30's that used to write back when he was a teenager and he mentors me and tells me when my shit's wack and stuff. He's a lot of help but I like to think I'm progressing because of all the god damn work I'm putting in.

Scheme*119
01-07-2009, 03:53 PM
word, you and tens are definatly moving fucking fast

LeaksOne
01-07-2009, 03:53 PM
shayk keep at it. your gettin there
scheme that tight but some of your letters are rounded an some are blocky

SCROLL DOWN FOR PICTURE TO CRIT
crits?

BAGS
01-07-2009, 03:57 PM
You should move your K closer together but I think you already know that. I would also shorten up the top part of the K.

Worms
01-07-2009, 04:01 PM
leaks bring in your k lol
shayk i wouldnt drop the y below the other letters
nosferatu looks ill best of luck i was gona enter but i replied to late
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/039.jpg

LeaksOne
01-07-2009, 04:02 PM
yea i noticed that when i posted it that my KS was far from the rest but what to you mean about shortenin the K?

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff046.jpg
crit this one cuz that K is botherin me

Scheme*119
01-07-2009, 04:06 PM
nosferatu looks ill best of luck i was gona enter but i replied to late
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/039.jpg

thanks man, lovin the philly steez, the two on top are fire

Genghis Tron.
01-07-2009, 04:08 PM
http://i551.photobucket.com/albums/ii452/Kesoww/woske003.jpg
Leaks, your k is getting better but it still stands out too much

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-07-2009, 04:08 PM
leaks find a different L, or make it shorter, and move the S over but that stuff happens letter overlapping so its good keep it up :)

tron u writing wosek?