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weakfingers
01-28-2009, 06:44 PM
Stussy- The only problem I can see is if your using a fat nibbed mop or fat marker your lines are to close together



http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9778.jpg


Bring
Up
My
Post

Any Crits?

a4w.dinak
01-28-2009, 06:47 PM
(pharm 1) thats dope, i like the spot too.

Ink me
01-28-2009, 06:57 PM
Weakfingers- Does it say Skwint? You need to work on some letter structure......That "K" is killing me. Along with the "W". In all honesty you should throw that tag out all together and start on something good. And hopefully you didnt put it out on the street....

flowtag
01-28-2009, 08:19 PM
okay question here. I'm really toy so am i still expected to give crits? Its not that i dont want to its just that i dont wanna screw up someone else's tag cuz im a toy...

klic
01-28-2009, 09:33 PM
flow - yes you are, just because your really toy doesnt mean that you dont have an idea of what looks good and what looks like crap

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-5.jpg
i hit the same thing up last week and when i returned it was buffed, so i guess that means sharpie fine tips = shit haha
anyways, it turned out pretty bad but it was my first time using the marker

skwint - bring the letters closer together, work on giving them some flow

mike - good editing, not really feeling the arrow for the I

rayz - basically what smooth said, dont connect them all at the bottom, i wouldnt have guessed that was a z and dont make the bottom right bar of your R come up again

crits please

smooth_nuts
01-28-2009, 09:58 PM
noose-go simple,no quotes no underlines,just your normal handwriting..
stussy-doesnt look philly at all,just the word ramo tall with an arrow :/
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3490/3234233199_5142b213e8.jpg
not what i write,just felt like writing my first name,and liked the outcome,umm,yeah...
bump,not an arrow,just made the top bar come to a point like an arrow,what evers...

Mr yarbles
01-28-2009, 10:31 PM
Not bad pretty good
I kinda don't like your e but it's good
If people hate on your m tell them to shut their fucking mouths
You have my permission :)
Oh and I like the arrow I
I pull that every once in a while

oh and shpel your a good cat I can tell you took my crits to heart bro good job
It looks waaaaaaaay better now

Just work on your s a little more theres some dead space there and make your h just a liiiiiiiiiittle bit wider

Computers broke so I wont be postin flicks for at least 2 weeks
I'll try and get in here to help you guys out I'm always down to help somebody

Just remember fools give crits to get them

mekosbc
01-28-2009, 10:32 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/anoerpen-1.jpg

im no tryin to start beef or any thing... im guessing your changin to name to ANOER??? when i writer noer...just dont bite... yah digg?
from what i see you have potential......

smooth_nuts
01-28-2009, 10:33 PM
haha,word yarbles.

Eeyore.
01-29-2009, 02:59 AM
yeah smooth nuts.. i mean its not great... but to tell you the truth it is better than half the shit people here post. keep it up.

respERATION
01-29-2009, 06:12 AM
two of yesterdays action:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/28-01-09_1333.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/28-01-09_2029.jpg

klic
01-29-2009, 11:47 AM
Weakfingers- Does it say Skwint? You need to work on some letter structure......That "K" is killing me. Along with the "W". In all honesty you should throw that tag out all together and start on something good. And hopefully you didnt put it out on the street....

it clearly says skwint, but yah, stick to paper for now skwint

and smooth, im not really feeling the top part of your I then haha, it would just look better with a single line I without the stuff on the top and bottom

sewby - i actually kind of like it, its different

give crits to get them guys

branez
01-29-2009, 12:26 PM
nice man nice.. your gonna get the honorary beef from car2n haha.. www.faze-one.deviantart.com/gallery theres lots of my art work..cause im to lazy tp post it..

that makes me sad. i had my heart set on 'hero.' woe is me.

MARTYRaz
01-29-2009, 12:45 PM
resp i would stik to the paper for a min b4 hittin the streets....just my 2 cents....klic i like seeing ur progression...keep it up...maybe invest in new markers....i agree with yarbles as well

LeaksOne
01-29-2009, 02:16 PM
resp your e looks funny to me
shpel keeps workin on that tag

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff052.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff050.jpg

new name. crits??

Zase
01-29-2009, 02:59 PM
i need some help
wich one looks best?
i can do hundereds of taggs but i wanna stick to for a while
i love one liners but i want yalls opinnion
http://i39.tinypic.com/208uom8.jpg
this is the one i like the most and i think imma stick to this one :
http://i41.tinypic.com/14d0qb6.jpg
its not really slick but that is why i wanna stick to one for a while
so it wil get some flow without pushing it

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-29-2009, 04:18 PM
im no tryin to start beef or any thing... im guessing your changin to name to ANOER??? when i writer noer...just dont bite... yah digg?
from what i see you have potential......

word, i dont bite :p and i havent seen anyof your posts lately :(

WoeInfinite
01-29-2009, 06:21 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0129091352.jpg
stupid E

BAGS
01-29-2009, 08:05 PM
Shpel fix your S. Try to make it in more of an 8 shape you know what I'm saying? lol. Other than that I think your other letters look pretty good. Lose the quotes though, I think it'd look much better.

Woe is that you're fucking closest? haha

.HATESONE.
01-29-2009, 08:07 PM
hey woe is that the new krylons? the 360 caps? just curious how they work out or is that just a transversal...

Gyse
01-29-2009, 09:26 PM
Woe- I don't know, I've never been a fan of the cursive kinda style... I don't even like Hell's shit though... Maybe try a capital E and bring it closer so it touches the O.

Zase- I like it, not sure what you could change. Your capital E's don't look like they work for you, so I'd keep the lower case. The tag with the star to the left of it in the first pic on the bottom left is the best looking in my opinion. Adding that kinda hook thing on the end of the e looks nice. Good work.

Grate- Nice G in the first pic. The R looks good too, but I'm not feeling the connection to the A. Not a big deal though. The T needs a little work, and the E looks best in the second pic, but it would be better if it came above the T. The purple one definitely looks best though.

Resp- A combination of the first R, first E, second S, and second P would look best; but you might wanna try making a new S and P. Maybe make the top curve of the S touch the top 2 lateral lines of your E, if you know what I mean.

WoeInfinite
01-29-2009, 09:55 PM
yeah its 360 cap. i hate em..
and its not my closet haha, its some run down ass shed next to the tracks

Mr yarbles
01-29-2009, 10:16 PM
Fuckin a woe you're gonna have to wait a few weeks for that exchange I keep promiisin computers in the shop and ish
I'll make up for it with some streeties :)

zase my man good shit

Graff J up
01-29-2009, 10:26 PM
Just mine tell me what you think ;)

WoeInfinite
01-29-2009, 10:38 PM
haha its cool bro, ill hook you up too.

PirateMLifnen
01-29-2009, 10:39 PM
I honestly can't tell what I'm looking at?
Wzea?

Well, I'd lose the underlines and the stars and whatever other accents you've got going on there.
I'd try to work on a more complete letter style first, each letter has it's own style to it, so it's weird to look at.
The curl on the end of your A or R is distracting, I'd lose that.
And, a lot of it is that none of your letters are the same font/style, but you've got to get some flow to your letters. The Z to the e is rough..

Graff J up
01-29-2009, 10:52 PM
haha its " JZEK" ill try to work on it

Steelc
01-29-2009, 10:57 PM
Just mine tell me what you think ;)
Not bad. I think you got the right idea. Just keep working on your own style. They all have something I like, but they all have something I don't like too..:p

Graff J up
01-29-2009, 11:03 PM
oh okay lol im trying to tho it just gets frustrating lol but yea right now i went all the way back from the beggining: that im working on my letter structure

klic
01-29-2009, 11:10 PM
these are pretty shitty, did them pretty quick and tried to take your guys advice

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-6.jpg

jzek - how the hell is that a J? work on that and try and give it some flow

woe - yah dont use those shitty caps

zase - just try writing it without the one for now, and dont exaggerate your s so much that it looks like an 8

grates - dope shit, start getting that up, you might want to work on your G some

resp - doesnt look like you have much control with a marker, id stick to paper for a little bit

crits...

Graff J up
01-29-2009, 11:18 PM
iuno man im tryin to figure some good tags n tried to make it look crazy but yeah ill try to post some new ones out tommorow or somethin

Masta T
01-30-2009, 10:23 AM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/002.jpg
zase - feeln tht shit
Shpel- man ur style come a long wa likn it

klic
01-30-2009, 02:19 PM
thanks, i wouldnt dot your I if i were you, and lose some of the attachments

mekosbc
01-30-2009, 04:14 PM
word, i dont bite :p and i havent seen anyof your posts lately :(


yeah i kno dude my camera is being a funkin jew lol and wont work....

Graff J up
01-30-2009, 04:44 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8230/p1000566hm1.jpg

my bad im tryin to post a pic up but it wont let me but i got it now :P

Mr yarbles
01-30-2009, 05:03 PM
USe the edit button next time

Whatever your first letter is I can't read it I don't know if it says vizek vzek or something completely different your e is alright but your k is terrible and broken along with some of your other letters
Start simple you'll get alot farther faster.

haha and I see you writin gesus's name on the back
haha ;)

Graff J up
01-30-2009, 05:10 PM
... its A J!! lol haha okay n yeah since my name is jesus i like gesus cause some people like to write my name GEEsus lol

Steelc
01-30-2009, 05:38 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8230/p1000566hm1.jpg

my bad im tryin to post a pic up but it wont let me but i got it now :P

Actually I kinda like it. Keep working on that and I bet it will look really good. I like the JZE but not the K on the bottom left corner one in gold. I think the K in the top right one in black is better.

Culture_Shock
01-30-2009, 09:51 PM
jzek im diggin it. your ek looks nice, but that j needs some work...

smooth_nuts
01-30-2009, 10:04 PM
yeah i kno dude my camera is being a funkin jew lol and wont work....

if it doesnt work,wouldnt that make it a black man?or a mexican?
haha,nah

anyway,another hand with my first name :/
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/e-hand.jpg
shpel-the ones with out the addones look WAY better

ErrorOner...
01-30-2009, 10:06 PM
heres a flick of my gk in a correction pen...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0126091132.jpg

PirateMLifnen
01-31-2009, 12:00 AM
JZEK: Much better looking. I like the ZEK in the top right, in black. But I think you're J needs a little more work. Just to make it stand out a little more. But I like that concept.

smooth/MIKE: I like that M more than the other one you posted. And the I looks cleaner. I like it.

SCRAP: Looks awesome man. I really like your SC though, nice flow.

I've changed my tag, so I'm still trying to get it set before I post anything up. I'll get something up soon for some crits.

Steelc
01-31-2009, 03:11 PM
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo52/TheRogue_1/Pic_0086-1.jpg
Some kinda crappy handstyles. Just working on quickness now I guess.

http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo52/TheRogue_1/Pic_0087-1.jpg
REALLY crappy. Don't like it but maybe you guys can give me some crits and advice.

http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo52/TheRogue_1/Pic_0085-1-2.jpg
Sloppy but I'm working on quickness right now. It took me 7-8 minutes for everything to do this. If you pay attention The R actually becomes the E and the Y (with an extension). Got a random inspiration for this one.

Mr yarbles
01-31-2009, 03:41 PM
They're all terrible who cares if its quick
Quickness is a skill that will come along with time
Right now work on simples

Steelc
01-31-2009, 03:43 PM
They're all terrible who cares if its quick
Quickness is a skill that will come along with time
Right now work on simples
Oh oops. Guess I was thinking the opposite way. Ya you're right I guess.

Stussy
01-31-2009, 04:21 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2jdhvv9.jpg
crits?

smooth- thats dope, but you K kinda looks like an R..
Scrap- its nice and simple.. looks good, keep workin on it

Black Flag
01-31-2009, 04:26 PM
Oh oops. Guess I was thinking the opposite way. Ya you're right I guess.

Read this thread, like 2 or 3 times over:

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-31-2009, 07:05 PM
rayz- make sure u dont over lap ur r and a and the yz dont fit in man

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/baha.jpg

i hate r's...

respERATION
01-31-2009, 07:54 PM
tea-fancy a cuppa? ahahahaha....but seriously...the bottom right bar of the r is too big and curvy and maybe take off that tab bit?

my handy sucks:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/31-01-09_1802.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 08:09 PM
just like your face bitch!
haha,nah,jay kays and all that shizzle

stussy-r's close at the top,which my k doesnt do nubberson...

respERATION
01-31-2009, 08:27 PM
thats what i said top your mother BEEZY


hahaha but on the real....crits?

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 08:32 PM
so your a dyke and you fuck dead people o.O

mad creepy...


but anyway:
resp-your s is to big and squarish
amep-make the rigth lef on your r straight
rayz-loose the arrow,try not to make your a loop into your r and make the ya the same size as the other letters not hooked under them ya know?
the little hook thing on the back of your z seems a bit random too.

respERATION
01-31-2009, 08:45 PM
nothing wrong with a bit of necrofeeellllyaaaaahhhhhh ;)

btw,you suck penis :P

and i'll bear that in mind :)

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 08:46 PM
pffft,your just mad i get more dick then you...
edit*and yes,there is something very wrong with it.

respERATION
01-31-2009, 08:54 PM
your mother is fat.;)

i used to be a pooosssseerrrrrrr:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Tags/12-10-08_1848.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 08:57 PM
you still are resp,your still are :p

...and my mothers not fat >:[
god stoopit whore and your typings and markers thinkings she can gr@ff1t1z like real u5 r3@l ni66@z,why cant you be more like this chick!
http://www.videobeta.net/gifs/8350.gif
haha
oh,and bump
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/e-hand.jpg

respERATION
01-31-2009, 09:03 PM
...because my IQ is higher than a potato...

psshhhh .... d0n't 1337 5p34k 70 m3 f00',1 g07 5k33lz!

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 09:08 PM
but i like potatos :(

respERATION
01-31-2009, 09:14 PM
oh so do i.so,do,i ;)

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 09:17 PM
word.

...i'm stil mad at you for taking your period out on me and making fun of my mother though :(

respERATION
01-31-2009, 09:22 PM
but....you started it? :(


i'm not on my period? .......

ahahaha, tell your mother i said sorry

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 09:24 PM
i know i started it but i said jay kays :(


...and my moms dead so saying sorrys are gonna be a little hard :/

respERATION
01-31-2009, 09:29 PM
i did a wink.....that means i don;t really mean it...like this

you suck ;)

and uhmmm,well she wouldn't have been offended in the first place then?

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 09:48 PM
i said im stoopit hoe... ;)

I CAN DO'S IT TOO!!!

anyway,flcisk for all the talkity talkings
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3372/3180745259_43e7593d82.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-31-2009, 10:04 PM
thats a repost!

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 10:08 PM
i said im stoopit hoe... ;)

I CAN DO'S IT TOO!!!

anyway,flcisk for all the talkity talkings
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3372/3180745259_43e7593d82.jpg
please ingore the "if i ruled the world" thing

so,still better then me and resp talking about her period and my mother...

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-31-2009, 10:13 PM
lol i was just kidding around man :P
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/baha.jpg

smooth_nuts
01-31-2009, 10:14 PM
havent you learned anything from mine and resps useless banter,YOU HAVE TO PUT A WINK IF YOU'R KIDDING,IT'S THE LAW IN THESE PARTS!

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-31-2009, 10:15 PM
wooopps... i can see im on the wrong side of town;)

Deadmoose
02-01-2009, 01:57 AM
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/deadmoose/tag.jpg


what ya think?

pharm1
02-01-2009, 03:35 AM
i'm not trying to be mean but
wtf is that

respERATION
02-01-2009, 05:49 AM
duhhhhhhh obviously he is trying to get his 2 year old brother into teh gwwaaeefftiizzzz

and smooth:nigguhs better know when we using those winks ;)

Deadmoose
02-01-2009, 10:53 AM
i'm not trying to be mean but
wtf is that

it's a J

'TieR'
02-01-2009, 07:18 PM
i dont get it

Ink me
02-01-2009, 08:56 PM
J with some quotes......

dozea
02-01-2009, 10:07 PM
Gh ridefna...fo life

Deadmoose
02-01-2009, 10:52 PM
its just a J

its much quicker that way

Mr yarbles
02-01-2009, 11:17 PM
Too bad it's fucking terrible
Is that really what you think graffiti is?

Deadmoose
02-01-2009, 11:19 PM
lol i love you people

its just an idea.

how about you say something that even pretends to be constructive

ShaolinNy
02-02-2009, 12:14 AM
lol i love you people

its just an idea.

how about you say something that even pretends to be constructive

I can agree that people tend to be dicks sometimes on this forum but thats just a bunch of green lines lmao

Deadmoose
02-02-2009, 01:10 AM
lol its really not haha.

so how about telling me ideas to improve it

sevenohsavage
02-02-2009, 01:13 AM
lol its really not haha.

so how about telling me ideas to improve it

Learn your alphabet first.

Deadmoose
02-02-2009, 01:33 AM
Learn your alphabet first.

I actually did do that. haha. I wrote out the whole alphabet three times

aXis888x
02-02-2009, 03:29 AM
im new to posting, been creeping about for a while though.

http://static.flickr.com/3101/3247104866_9f1baf2d8e_d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/29435416@N00/3247104866/)

http://static.flickr.com/3378/3246279129_4325618936_d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/29435416@N00/3246279129/)

http://static.flickr.com/3308/3247105026_494ca61675_d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/29435416@N00/3247105026/)

http://static.flickr.com/3268/3246279169_7f3f20a64f_d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/29435416@N00/3246279169/)

http://static.flickr.com/3314/3247105068_9239e8330c_d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/29435416@N00/3247105068/)

tips suggestions?

'TieR'
02-02-2009, 08:37 AM
part from the fact that theyre more simple's than tags(apart fromt the first one) they aint too bad. i like the bottom one on the 4th flick.
how long u been writing?

aXis888x
02-02-2009, 10:44 AM
most of my stuff is pretty simple and geometric, im not too good at really wild letterforms yet. ive been sketching off and on for a year, finally moved to a city where i can spary so i started spraying ad really practicing last week.

'TieR'
02-02-2009, 06:34 PM
ahh sick man
i live in a small town in the uk haha.
so not much of a scene round me.

GETRAD
02-03-2009, 11:38 PM
didnt see any pics to crit...
http://11.media.tumblr.com/Ic5sx1v1hjg9winv7szdKWTfo1_400.jpg
http://22.media.tumblr.com/Ic5sx1v1hjg9tv536TbgTJoTo1_400.jpg
my boy psy:
http://12.media.tumblr.com/Ic5sx1v1hjg9ux02O8wNT6ajo1_400.jpg
frozen ass sakuras

k'n1ve
02-04-2009, 02:03 AM
getrad- you got a good hand, i think the A and G need some work on the throw though...
no one else to crit...
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSCF0263.jpg
crits!

519*Stylez
02-04-2009, 02:11 AM
getrad- you got a good hand, i think the A and G need some work on the throw though...
no one else to crit...
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSCF0263.jpg
crits!

All your letters except the E are pretty plain and boring.
as for the cross over the I im not quite sure why you have that...
makes it look more like a T

Culture_Shock
02-04-2009, 11:29 AM
getrad- like the first one, psyduck ftw
knive- don't listen to 519 it sounds like hes pulling crits out his ass...

Mr yarbles
02-04-2009, 05:48 PM
Word

lose youre retarted k extension though and your i would look pretty fucking bunk if it had it's own bottom bar instead of the k's it just looks gross same with your e
Actually your e is the most hurt letter I think
Wait nevermind I see it's uppercase now haha good job it actually looks good
Just lose the k extensions

BigBlueViolence
02-04-2009, 07:53 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/8wb3ox.jpg

graffdabusup
02-04-2009, 09:01 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/mone.jpg

unsuccsessfull
02-05-2009, 12:11 AM
i dont flick much
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_0500.jpg

ErrorOner...
02-05-2009, 12:22 AM
screwed up this upside-down handy cuz i forgot to juice the nib in my altered state..
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0007.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0004.jpg

JETPACK!!
02-05-2009, 12:48 AM
mad potential homie, check your C. it looks like an O. put more flow into ya S. i like the whole upside tag idea. fresh. keep it up. i wanna see you mad up this summer homie. we'll be all dope an tag shit juiced

TartArt
02-05-2009, 01:01 AM
I dunno what happened but i posted a nice long mesage about everyones shit and i had some picks and its not on here anymore. but i write tribute .

http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.17c459c57b.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?17c459c57b.jpg)

http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.188c7f0fbc.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?188c7f0fbc.jpg)

Error: your ballin son.. i can't operate when im fucked up so i know how that is, the bottom one is nice,
busup: is that two nns or m? Its nice,simple and clean
Bigblu: i love the top one the a is sick it has a lot going on im down wiht that
Kn1ve: like busup you got the simple clean going for ya but the i or 1 is a little off? maybe try to make some crazy shit happen with that line, some people that do shit like that are that earsnot guy, he has an extension that circles his tag to make it look like an ear sometimes, and auger does crazy shit with extensions hopelfully that will help.
Montar: PAINT THAT SHIT .. FUCK YA

My old name: onechild
http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.640ca5e935.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?640ca5e935.jpg)

http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.9ffae9f4a7.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?9ffae9f4a7.jpg)

k'n1ve
02-05-2009, 04:44 PM
hey thanks yarbles, cultureshock, and Tartart, yeah its a wierd combo of letters to write, but im startin to pull it together. tart i cant really see your pics or i would give em' a crit make them bigger and ill return the favor bro.

Ink me
02-05-2009, 05:00 PM
Another pic of handy. Crits?
http://i42.tinypic.com/xf2q03.jpg

Im headed out right now. I will try to leave some crits later.

Ink me
02-05-2009, 08:50 PM
Getrad- I like the handstyle alot.
Knive- Long extension on the K. Horizontal bar across I makes it look like a T.
Big Blue- Letters flow good.
Graffda- Is the extension off the E supposed to be another letter?
Scrap- Looks cool.

PirateMLifnen
02-05-2009, 09:30 PM
GETRAD: I like the style, but I don't like the halo.
Knive: Your I looks like a T, and your K. Other than that, you've got some nice flow.
EARN: I don't know if I can really crit that tag, cause I'm not sure if I get that style..
Graff / MORE?: I was wondering about the extension off of the E as well. Your M is fantastic. I don't like the extension off the E though. Unless that's supposed to be another letter, then you need to define that letter a bit more.
unsuccsessfull: I can't read it, although I like what I believe to be an E.
SCRAP: I like it, although I don't like stars.. Great flow though.
POET: I like your E, and I like the T but I think it might look better in line with the P and O.

And lastly, me:
http://i42.tinypic.com/30c2i4g.jpg
I just made a mop, and I tried it out, but wasn't able to take any pictures of it. But it looks so much nicer, much more fluid.
So I just did this really quick..
Crits?

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-05-2009, 09:44 PM
scrap- loving those drips... dope
chile- nice and simple.. maybe make a capital e
poet- like last time ur t is too plain
graffda- if it says mone then good, if it says more move ur e over cause ur r looks a n
knive- love it just not feeling the crunched e
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tag.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tag2.jpg
crits?

Ink me
02-05-2009, 09:49 PM
The instant I change up my T it is going to be " thats T has no flow"

Tea- Lose the extension on the R.
Chile- Nice simples

PirateMLifnen
02-05-2009, 10:27 PM
Tea: I think stick with the capital A. I feel that more than the a. That and the extension on the R.

TartArt
02-06-2009, 01:15 AM
hey thanks yarbles, cultureshock, and Tartart, yeah its a wierd combo of letters to write, but im startin to pull it together. tart i cant really see your pics or i would give em' a crit make them bigger and ill return the favor bro.

u just have to click on them thats it no worries though

k'n1ve
02-06-2009, 02:55 AM
Tart- my bad man didnt know you had to ckick 'em well definetly likin the new name better maybe lose the kocked up R leg, so you can bring in the I more, also dont know bout the swirly E but im not sure...
Poet- looks pretty descent just keep workin and more style will come up as you write it more
Chile- WAY simple... good to start there
TeaDrinker- Im feelin the bottom one boi!

BigBlueViolence
02-06-2009, 12:25 PM
EARN: I don't know if I can really crit that tag, cause I'm not sure if I get that style..

I'm not sure I understand what you're saying.
What do you mean you don't get it?

Culture_Shock
02-06-2009, 12:57 PM
dont tell the guy that his letters are too plain, that'll give him carte blanche when he comes back with something totally whacked out and shitty...
let him rock something simple, and the style will emerge naturally.

Dessik
02-06-2009, 02:36 PM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/33/l_9c3c85bb4fe2405a836b7f2f3606f5e8.jpg so what cha thinks?

capy
02-06-2009, 03:27 PM
does anyone feel free to make some examples for ma tag cause i don't now shit with it
name's capy

Black Flag
02-06-2009, 03:39 PM
does anyone feel free to make some examples for ma tag cause i don't now shit with it
name's capy

No, stop being a lazy fuck. Go bench some trains, go around your area for local work, or watch some videos like Style Wars, Dirty Handz, Reefer Madness, etc anything thing you can get your real or virtual hands on.

Don't bite though.

capy
02-06-2009, 03:47 PM
No, stop being a lazy fuck. Go bench some trains, go around your area for local work, or watch some videos like Style Wars, Dirty Handz, Reefer Madness, etc anything thing you can get your real or virtual hands on.

Don't bite though.

i'm no biter or a lazy fuck i just want to see what others could make of my name because i have like over 100000 different tags and they all weren't that great i just wanted to see some examples to get started... if that's biting .... btw i live in a small town i got not even a small tag here as far as i now i'm the only writer in ma town.........

klic
02-06-2009, 04:13 PM
dessik - it looks like absolute shit, just make the letters look like actual letters, and lose the music notes or whatever those are

edit: haha realized that those pictures didnt come out at all, heres some old ones then

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-2.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/5.jpg

Dessik
02-06-2009, 04:26 PM
what do you mean by that? make them look like actual letters, what am i writing here, plutonian?

Dessik
02-06-2009, 04:30 PM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/29/l_d3788879882149599c699be6bb0da65d.jpg

Masta T
02-06-2009, 05:27 PM
ok so its all one line now an i dont dot the eyes anymore either but if u think i shoukld jus let me kno

shpel like ur tag bro nice job tearn tht bathroom up haha

critz?



http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/004.jpg

MARTYRaz
02-06-2009, 08:40 PM
loose that arrow shit on the s....loose the underline.....i like the bottom e...i really dont like that i...make up ur mind if u want a capital i or lowercase i...the k could look better...

TartArt
02-07-2009, 03:21 AM
Klick,,,, im pretty addicted to tagging mirrors I don't know why haha

Bink1
02-07-2009, 04:28 AM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/29/l_d3788879882149599c699be6bb0da65d.jpg

this looks like big pile of bullcrap.

ErrorOner...
02-07-2009, 07:12 AM
if someone would like to help me...i can't find a good style for writin FU..i want to see what everyone comes up with for those two letters cuz i cant seem to do it.

NouveauP
02-07-2009, 11:15 AM
A new hand I'm working on. Crits? Improvements?
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/han1.jpg

piff
02-07-2009, 07:32 PM
Hey, new to writing any crits?

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff345/jackmackay/Photo66.jpg

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff345/jackmackay/Photo67.jpg

Just sketching with a pencil, ill get more pictures of my shit later. had to take the picture on my macbook sorry about the mirror image. Anything i can do to make it better, any suggestions.

ErrorOner...
02-07-2009, 08:14 PM
i always burn spliffs at this baseball "dugout" and when i blaze i like catching tags like a mad man while im there...and all over everything within its perimeter..hahah
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0024.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0025.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0026-1.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0035.jpg
my R kinda went into my C...lack of room maybe?? just trying to make excuses for it being a bad one...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0032.jpg
on the top of the bleachers...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0029.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0033.jpg
>>>>>> Fondling Underagers <<<<<<...............xD
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0034.jpg

unsuccsessfull
02-07-2009, 09:16 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00193.jpg

ErrorOner...
02-07-2009, 09:36 PM
fuckin end of page!...BUMP
dope flairing zoner! nice handy overall, really...

i always burn spliffs at this baseball "dugout" and when i blaze i like catching tags like a mad man while im there...and all over everything within its perimeter..hahah
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0024.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0025.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0026-1.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0035.jpg
my R kinda went into my C...lack of room maybe?? just trying to make excuses for it being a bad one...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0032.jpg
on the top of the bleachers...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0029.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0033.jpg
>>>>>> Fondling Underagers <<<<<<...............xD
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0034.jpg

Facedorateur
02-07-2009, 09:40 PM
Just lose the crown.

Zarb
02-07-2009, 11:54 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/tag.jpg

ErrorOner...
02-08-2009, 01:49 AM
give crits to get crits nigguh!

respERATION
02-08-2009, 01:34 PM
zoner-D:.....i think i'm in love
scrap- i'm likeing your tags felxibility (like in different directions and what not)....

i suck....
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/08-02-09_1318.jpg

ErrorOner...
02-08-2009, 02:23 PM
^i dont even think that looks THAT bad just fix your E. it looks like you are going slow and that cause the lines to look sketchy...

respERATION
02-08-2009, 02:35 PM
i was on a bus....but yeah E's are not my dtrong point in hands

NouveauP
02-08-2009, 06:29 PM
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/han1.jpg
Bump For no Crits
SCRAP- I'm digging your hand, and yes, lose the crown. The one by the OMNI bucket is my favorite. Really solid.
ZONER- Need no crits from me. You have it figured out.
Zarb- don't worry about drops yet. Just get those lines clean.
RESP- Get your lines clean.

unsuccsessfull
02-08-2009, 06:31 PM
resp i like the s
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2281.jpg
just another for talking

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-08-2009, 10:19 PM
zoner- its dope no dought, but i dont feel the r at the end :(
scrap- looks good,but the crown which has already been said lol..
nouveau- simple
resp- simple
zarb- simple
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tag.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tag2.jpg
badabump...

NouveauP
02-08-2009, 11:11 PM
Simple what? It's simple or go simple?

Anyway to Zoner- the R is my favorite part. So I dunno.

whahappen?
02-08-2009, 11:13 PM
fuckin end of page!...BUMP
dope flairing zoner! nice handy overall, really...
youre such a fucking loser
tagging playgrounds
yea dog mad rep with them 6 year olds, forreal
and youre fucking wack

.HATESONE.
02-08-2009, 11:17 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00193.jpg

bump.this shit is beautiful.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-08-2009, 11:20 PM
Simple what? It's simple or go simple?

Anyway to Zoner- the R is my favorite part. So I dunno.

go simpler..

k'n1ve
02-09-2009, 01:45 AM
youre such a fucking loser
tagging playgrounds
yea dog mad rep with them 6 year olds, forreal
and youre fucking wack

hahahahahahahaha.... thats some funny shit bro!

zoner looks dope bro

piff
02-09-2009, 03:10 AM
unsuccessful-nice flaring but i cant really make out the r
scrap-like how some of your writing is spread out and others its squished together.
resp-fix the E
zarb- kinda hard to read

piff
02-09-2009, 03:13 AM
Hey, new to writing any crits?

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff345/jackmackay/Photo66.jpg

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff345/jackmackay/Photo67.jpg

Just sketching with a pencil, ill get more pictures of my shit later. had to take the picture on my macbook sorry about the mirror image. Anything i can do to make it better, any suggestions.

What you guys think?

seia
02-09-2009, 03:34 AM
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/7674/pharmgoldencb3.png
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/381/009222vu3.png
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/865/1001019ap2.png
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5789/009333kg1.png

piff
02-09-2009, 04:02 AM
Really clean man.

ErrorOner...
02-09-2009, 04:16 AM
youre such a fucking loser
tagging playgrounds
yea dog mad rep with them 6 year olds, forreal
and youre fucking wack

you're the fuckin loser, i just blaze in this park often so i happen to use it as my canvas why do you have a problem with that?? you're probably a 6 year-old so maybe you'll see that shit at least.

hater.

seia
02-09-2009, 11:02 AM
thanks piff

BigBlueViolence
02-09-2009, 12:21 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/8wb3ox.jpg

Pharm, Zoner- Dope shit.

Resp- Take your time, dude(ette?).
You can tell that you're rushing that shit.
Go slower, make sure everything is going where it needs to.
A couple seconds can make all the difference.
On a style note, I think that the curves at the tops of the letters are real unnecessary.
Keeping the tops of the letters straight won't take away from the style, it'll just make it cleaner.
http://i40.tinypic.com/2d6m5mx.jpg
Catch my drift?

respERATION
02-09-2009, 01:35 PM
dudeette yes :)

and yeah.....iun the two years i've been writing no matter how much i practise them i can never get my hands down :/



but at least i'm trying

seia
02-09-2009, 03:38 PM
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/2839/1001030dr2.png

WoeInfinite
02-09-2009, 04:33 PM
i like it, but make your R like this
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0209091631.jpg

no loop.

WoeInfinite
02-09-2009, 04:38 PM
lazyyy tags....
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0209091636.jpg

seia
02-09-2009, 05:38 PM
sweet

[phenom5]
02-09-2009, 06:15 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/dc7uyc.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/f2rmo6.jpg

what4joke...
02-09-2009, 07:02 PM
kinda cool lol.

WikedRequiem
02-09-2009, 07:59 PM
i got alot to work on, but this is some of the things that i have been experimenting. any input on style or what i should look for when i write?

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-09-2009, 09:43 PM
REq- its different.. i duno :P
phen- more simple.. looks like u smooshed everything together
woe- u still write woe?
pharm- just the r :)
BigBlue- i think im suppost to comment the earn? umm.. its good maybe dont curve ur r at the top? iduno
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/pinktag.jpg
crits :P

seia
02-09-2009, 10:14 PM
god, that R is a habbit
but im gonna work on it, thanks

WikedRequiem
02-09-2009, 10:20 PM
thatguywhodrinkstea- different bad or good? idk, that a is too far away from the grouping

heres one i just did, still workin on it
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g180/street_skater069/graffiti/S4010023.jpg


It needs something..............what is it?

seia
02-09-2009, 10:41 PM
i'm likeing the chisel tip mayne

seia
02-09-2009, 10:46 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/8wb3ox.jpg

i'm loving this tag style

smooth_nuts
02-09-2009, 10:55 PM
earn,you should hook your boy up with a handy like that first one!

seia
02-09-2009, 11:02 PM
is this r better?
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/8786/rbetterlt1.jpg

WoeInfinite
02-09-2009, 11:29 PM
yeah better, keep tweakin it.
and yeah im still writing woe. wanna write grieves, but i suck dildos.

anoe - fresh n simple, i like that e
insane(?) - dope..maybe a little TOOOO chisel tipped, spread the letters out a liiiittle more haha.
Earn - fresh bro.

esnet1r
02-09-2009, 11:46 PM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6387/scannedimage2rf6.jpg

(http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scannedimage2rf6.jpg)

WikedRequiem
02-10-2009, 12:04 AM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6387/scannedimage2rf6.jpg

(http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scannedimage2rf6.jpg)

wow, impressive. very intricate

heres another one just messin around

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-10-2009, 12:22 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/pinktag.jpg
badabump! xD

seia
02-10-2009, 12:35 AM
esnet1r, readable or not, fucking ill

gunsofbrooklyn
02-10-2009, 12:47 AM
any tips for writing marz? hard as fuck.. especially writing the letter m

BigBlueViolence
02-10-2009, 10:34 AM
earn,you should hook your boy up with a handy like that first one!
http://i44.tinypic.com/fyjq12.jpg

I got you, smoothie.

klic
02-10-2009, 04:44 PM
around, on the bus and stuff
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/4-4.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/5-2.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/3-4.jpg
^just realized you cant see this one at all (its below the R K)
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-8.jpg

wiked - that looks alot like a skin that was on here not long ago

anoe - try an uppercase A

woe - nice stuff, on the graves on, id make your A look more like it does on the keyboard and less square like

Mr yarbles
02-10-2009, 09:53 PM
Earn I'm just not feelin that philly styles
Looks too lose and hangy and shit
Go look at a bunch of tall hands and short hands then try again

That and phillies have the most flow out of alot of shit but you need to figure out your connections from letter to letter and never make one bigger than the other
Notice how most them philly's look like they got an invisible line under it
Go for that kind flow

That and that d is too small and the p is too crunched in witht he other letters

WikedRequiem
02-10-2009, 10:01 PM
around, on the bus and stuff

wiked - that looks alot like a skin that was on here not long ago

anoe - try an uppercase A

woe - nice stuff, on the graves on, id make your A look more like it does on the keyboard and less square like

Correction, it says skiz.

klic
02-10-2009, 10:08 PM
^ i guess i assumed it was a sideways N lol cuz the first three letters are so similar

BigBlueViolence
02-10-2009, 10:10 PM
Earn I'm just not feelin that philly styles
Looks too lose and hangy and shit
Go look at a bunch of tall hands and short hands then try again

That and phillies have the most flow out of alot of shit but you need to figure out your connections from letter to letter and never make one bigger than the other
Notice how most them philly's look like they got an invisible line under it
Go for that kind flow

That and that d is too small and the p is too crunched in witht he other letters
I wasn't going for a philly style duder,
I'm not even from PA.
I feel you on the tiny D, though

klic
02-10-2009, 10:16 PM
^check your inbox, i finally remembered about that handstyle exchange

smooth_nuts
02-10-2009, 10:24 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/fyjq12.jpg

I got you, smoothie.
word thanks "duder"

...couple from the othernight :/
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/PC290006.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/PC290007.jpg
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/PC290009-1.jpg
i love my meanstreaks but.the lables a fucking liar!
shits dont write on wet surfaces worth a damn :(

BigBlueViolence
02-10-2009, 10:29 PM
Hey man, it isn't my fault adding -er to every word makes it at least twice as good

smooth_nuts
02-10-2009, 10:31 PM
pppft,-est is the bestest,dudest...




wordest.

WikedRequiem
02-10-2009, 11:07 PM
^ Hahahaest. totallest.

ErrorOner...
02-11-2009, 01:13 AM
a new A im tryin out...need a new handy for my new pilot! any suggestions to add to the flava?
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0045.jpg

Bink1
02-11-2009, 01:17 PM
shpel- i like you simplicity.
dope-middle one is the best, but its dope overall
scrap-this new R is tight,maybe use the old A was much better.
anoe-uppercase a would work better

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5811/dsc06399bc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/dsc06399bc6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img167/dsc06399bc6.jpg/1/)
waah they tried to buff this shit.

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1608/dsc06407vq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/dsc06407vq6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img156/dsc06407vq6.jpg/1/)
yay a philly. what u think?

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2728/dsc06408sk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/dsc06408sk9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img140/dsc06408sk9.jpg/1/)
just some shitty one.

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/6010/dsc06405tc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/dsc06405tc5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img300/dsc06405tc5.jpg/1/)
and another philly.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-11-2009, 04:39 PM
blink- ur philly...>.<.. but ur other tags are shapping up
scrap- new page/clean page hard to see lol...?
dope- strange places to put tags man, i duno they look soso but its prob cause of the surface
shpel- not feeling the paint stick ones man, but ur other one looks good
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/upperpink.jpg
upper case :D

Bink1
02-11-2009, 04:56 PM
thats what im talking about.

skull-e
02-11-2009, 06:20 PM
Is that the philly style that enem does it that movie.... infamy i think.

Mr yarbles
02-11-2009, 06:38 PM
Philly is mostly universal
YOu have to learn the old to create something new
Philly is one of the only palces where you should bite

ANd earn hah It just looked philly
I think that style would look coins in you didn't loop it so much or tried to make a one or two liner

also tep that mop flick either ont he bottom or top is mad nice really dig that style
YOu got a good hand for mops
To be honest your mop shit looks 10X better then your philly stuff

anoe looks good
You add and an l to the the end like it says anal...
Haha idk it might be funny

smooth_nuts
02-11-2009, 06:44 PM
dope- strange places to put tags man, i duno they look soso but its prob

poles and alley way gutters?
yeah,i've never ever seen anyone write on those befroe,soooooooooooo strange....haha

skull-e
02-11-2009, 06:47 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture86.jpg

Lookin' good anoe

klic
02-11-2009, 08:26 PM
shpel- not feeling the paint stick ones man, but ur other one looks good


that looks better, maybe try a lowercase e, uppercase e's look better on there on, but i find lowercase ones look better with other letters if you know what i mean... and its a 13 year old markal paintstick that i found in my basement, so its a dryed up old piece of shit anyway

been working on my handstyle
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/9.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/6-1.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/3-5.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/5-3.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/10.jpg
^shitty spot at a lawtons

tasr - stick with the uppercase R, and lose the swirls on the top of your T

anoe - read what i said above

tep - the simple stuffs good, i dont know much about philly style but that doesnt look great (not that i could do any better), id give some advice but i dont know much about them

dope - nice simple letters, maybe try something a little more complex and advance your style a little

crits?

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-11-2009, 08:28 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/upperpink.jpg
upper case :D u said upper case here it is -.-

unsuccsessfull
02-11-2009, 09:33 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/002-1-1.jpg

klic
02-11-2009, 09:50 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/upperpink.jpg
upper case :D u said upper case here it is -.-

i said uppercase A and lowercase E, try rounding out the top of your A a little

Bink1
02-12-2009, 10:17 AM
Is that the philly style that enem does it that movie.... infamy i think.

yeh i tried to do sumtin like that , didnt succed at all :D

i will keep mop taggin then i think.

Bink1
02-12-2009, 12:39 PM
tasr-that bottom one tag is sweet.
shpel-that first shpel oner is tight
anoe-real stuff,put in on street, do some addons.
zoner-fuking ill shit, yes. :D

flicks for talkin ..


http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/1696/dsc06394fc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/dsc06394fc8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img104/dsc06394fc8.jpg/1/)

i kinda like this one :D

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8475/dsc06339km8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/dsc06339km8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img230/dsc06339km8.jpg/1/)

fuked up on it coz this was high place, couldnt reach it to tag well.

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/7358/dsc06389gb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/dsc06389gb1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img230/dsc06389gb1.jpg/1/)

yes R''s leg is ugly.

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9489/dsc06390en1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/dsc06390en1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/dsc06390en1.jpg/1/)

another one.

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/3726/dsc06401am0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/dsc06401am0.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img266/dsc06401am0.jpg/1/)

boo to buffers.

CRIMSON
02-12-2009, 08:36 PM
yeah new name been out of the game for soo long now.

Zarb
02-12-2009, 08:52 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0212092004a.jpg

skull-e
02-12-2009, 09:34 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture89.jpg

BigBlueViolence
02-12-2009, 11:02 PM
^ dope,
now get it on a mailbox.

Mr yarbles
02-12-2009, 11:38 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2mx52yh.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/ri6cnk.jpg

Tep its getting there

Tea don't listen to that fool that e is bangin

klic
02-13-2009, 02:08 AM
Tea don't listen to that fool that e is bangin

i never said it wasnt good, i said that a lowercase e would probably fit in and flow better with the other letters (take tep for example, it looks a lot better with the lowercase e) , but whatever, you probably have a better idea than myself

tep - id work on your r some, try and get something going with that bottom right leg

ErrorOner...
02-13-2009, 04:06 AM
some new steez im tryin'...from now on you can call me, scrap TWO!
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0048.jpg
not much to crit 'cept tasr...good job man you've come a long way! and rapist you already posted that in tags tags tags so you don't need crits.

'TieR'
02-13-2009, 09:00 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/002-1-1.jpg

just yes
full stop

Black Flag
02-13-2009, 01:39 PM
some new steez im tryin'...from now on you can call me, scrap TWO!
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0048.jpg
not much to crit 'cept tasr...good job man you've come a long way! and rapist you already posted that in tags tags tags so you don't need crits.

Looking good, I just would not have known that was a 2 unless you told me, but even that is not a big deal. Maybe just a tad more definition between yours As and Rs would not hurt either.

provinT13
02-13-2009, 01:47 PM
My first tag ever. Yes I know i'm a toy so I tried to make it nice and simple. Once again this is my first attempt at anything grafiti related. So call me a toy, yea no shit that's why i'm in the toy forum.

So flaming aside what could I work on? Just keep praticing a basic alphabet?

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0769.jpg

bak
02-13-2009, 01:55 PM
yarb the circle kills it

WoeInfinite
02-13-2009, 02:43 PM
provin - even mmore simple, like use your hand writing...all capitals, or all lowercase...practice it slow, and even out the letters, like their size.
yarbles - always lookin good

provinT13
02-13-2009, 03:11 PM
Thanks for the tip woe

nuf.rd
02-13-2009, 03:14 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/353dsef.jpg
nuge-nudge

Bink1
02-13-2009, 03:27 PM
nuge- i dont like the thing that u do millions of tags in one spot , but most of em are tight :D so keep em comin .

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6369/dsc06411vi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/dsc06411vi8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img167/dsc06411vi8.jpg/1/)

tryin out sumtin new. i know it looks like peper , fuked up on that T :D

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/7420/dsc06412ys1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/dsc06412ys1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img187/dsc06412ys1.jpg/1/)

and a old simple one.

nuf.rd
02-13-2009, 03:39 PM
yeah i feel it.come up with a different T and you'd be set with that.
http://i39.tinypic.com/3461h1f.jpg

peacebomb
02-13-2009, 04:10 PM
All lookin good i cant really crit hand styles cause i dont have a great one.

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/soopthrowie002.jpg

iPwnF00lz
02-13-2009, 07:43 PM
That last flick you posted is the best of all the style nudge, nice and clean.

joker954
02-14-2009, 12:16 AM
ayyy i need ur guys help tell me which one looks better
#1http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k143/tycj10/get-attachment-1.jpg
#2http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k143/tycj10/get-attachment-8.jpg
or go more simple??
thx

Genghis Tron.
02-14-2009, 12:19 AM
More simple..
What kind of word is GRFL? Theres no vowels or w.e

joker954
02-14-2009, 12:22 AM
o ok and its jus my crew im wit

k'n1ve
02-14-2009, 01:41 AM
more simple... drop the halo, or if you do it make it look right cuz yours is all cabakai... you dont have to bend every bar in every letter.

provinT13
02-14-2009, 03:38 AM
My first tag ever with a can. Yes I know it's super toy that's why I did it in my garage on a piece of cardboard hahah. And yes I had to go over the bottom of the E a few times

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0770.jpg

BigBlueViolence
02-14-2009, 03:45 AM
Do not connect letters, homie

respERATION
02-14-2009, 08:17 AM
about 5% of this weeks action
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/09-02-09_1039.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/09-02-09_1650.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/09-02-09_1656.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/11-02-09_1332.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/13-02-09_1425.jpg

Each
02-14-2009, 10:27 AM
steel tip krink marker. s is real fucked up.
http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj212/BlaekOne/groas.jpg

klic
02-14-2009, 01:29 PM
ayyy i need ur guys help tell me which one looks better
#1http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k143/tycj10/get-attachment-1.jpg
#2http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k143/tycj10/get-attachment-8.jpg
or go more simple??
thx

second one, neither are great, no offence but its a shitty name to begin with

resp - stick to paper for now, and work on making your stuff more legible

Bink1
02-14-2009, 01:32 PM
crits:
soop-dont do the dollar thing
grfl-the last one is normal just drop ALL the addons and level the letters.
ftek-as violence said dont connect letters and level em up.
resp-3rd one is nice. i got rlly similar marker :D
each-drips as shit, never used steel tips.do the letter bigger so drips dont cover your letters up

all my previous shit was done with homemade mop and ink ,now i got some hardcore colors marker :D with some dope color.
check it.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8543/dsc06414gn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/dsc06414gn1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img171/dsc06414gn1.jpg/1/)

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/4527/dsc06416ti6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/dsc06416ti6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img294/dsc06416ti6.jpg/1/)

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2319/dsc06417am1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/dsc06417am1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img262/dsc06417am1.jpg/1/)

Each
02-14-2009, 03:03 PM
i know the drips are bad. i just squeezed it a little to much. but i didnt have much space to use, thats why they werent big

resp- seems like you were either trippin total shit doing that those tags or you were just REAL nervous. hands was shaky.
tep- the foot thing on your r doesnt seem to fit, or it just doent fit to me. but the one that looks like peper, almost like you tried to make the first e capital and changed your mind

Bink1
02-14-2009, 03:07 PM
i know the drips are bad. i just squeezed it a little to much. but i didnt have much space to use, thats why they werent big

tep- the foot thing on your r doesnt seem to fit, or it just doent fit to me. but the one that looks like peper, almost like you tried to make the first e capital and changed your mind

well i find this R's leg most suitable for my tag. and why do u think i wanted the e capital? i didnt rlly :D i got more tags like these gonna get some flicks tomorrow. :eek:

Each
02-14-2009, 03:18 PM
well the right drop thing on the t could be the spine of the e, then you made the middle line and then was like "fuck capital"

provinT13
02-14-2009, 03:33 PM
Something I just did, I like the e's, but something seems like it needs to change about the k

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0771.jpg

Bink1
02-14-2009, 03:35 PM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6731/dsc06420oq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/dsc06420oq0.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img339/dsc06420oq0.jpg/1/)

this is how its supoased to look.

Each
02-14-2009, 03:36 PM
etek- make all the letters flow more, not jerky and shit, like youe e's. little e's are one line, you make them 3

tep- now it kinda looks like an n with aa line over it. but thats just how i kinda see it. but it looks pretty good

provinT13
02-14-2009, 04:46 PM
Bink1 What marker did you use for that?

Bink1
02-14-2009, 05:10 PM
crits:
soop-dont do the dollar thing
grfl-the last one is normal just drop ALL the addons and level the letters.
ftek-as violence said dont connect letters and level em up.
resp-3rd one is nice. i got rlly similar marker :D
each-drips as shit, never used steel tips.do the letter bigger so drips dont cover your letters up

all my previous shit was done with homemade mop and ink ,now i got some hardcore colors marker :D with some dope color.
check it.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8543/dsc06414gn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/dsc06414gn1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img171/dsc06414gn1.jpg/1/)

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/4527/dsc06416ti6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/dsc06416ti6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img294/dsc06416ti6.jpg/1/)

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2319/dsc06417am1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/dsc06417am1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img262/dsc06417am1.jpg/1/)

bump for more crits.


and i used artline multipen 3.0

clockwork
02-14-2009, 07:39 PM
Tep the tag is fresh man. I dig the simple stuff so much. Clean and clear. Stick with that one for a minute or two I say. You can get somewhere with that over time.

None of that, "I wonder if thats TEP?"

lol you know what I mean.

provinT13
02-15-2009, 02:56 AM
First time ever writing my tag anywhere, and they're on cold frosty metal in places no one would ever see. I know there is no sence gettin up with really toy tags, but I needed to get a feel of some can control and the mops I made.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0772.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0773.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0776.jpg

k'n1ve
02-15-2009, 03:36 AM
teper- your pullin that new name together looks sick...
etek- way to keep it simple, try not to space out your letters so much though...

respERATION
02-15-2009, 09:00 AM
bink-i used a motolow pp250 or something like that?
each-nah i was on a bus,busses round here shake like a fat assed woman running
and other guy tbph i think it;s ledgible....

Hobs.416
02-15-2009, 12:03 PM
etek-try and have more flow, your letters are good, but too basic. and your t on your third tag's a little fucked

provinT13
02-15-2009, 03:53 PM
...
etek- way to keep it simple, try not to space out your letters so much though...

By the space do you mean the space between each letter or in the letters themselves


etek-try and have more flow, your letters are good, but too basic. and your t on your third tag's a little fucked

Flow like in the handstyle? Can you give me a good example?

Thanks for the comments too, I just expected pure flaming instead of real advice.

Black Flag
02-15-2009, 05:15 PM
By the space do you mean the space between each letter or in the letters themselves



Flow like in the handstyle? Can you give me a good example?

Thanks for the comments too, I just expected pure flaming instead of real advice.

He means the space between letters. Flow is different from style. Flow is hard to describe, its kind of like how well your style is executed. Having good flow in hand styles is the thing that makes your tag look natural, without having to completely change your style.

provinT13
02-15-2009, 05:32 PM
Alright I see what you guys mean. Not style but execution. Yea I did them all real fast since it was my first time out and I was a little paranoid. By the way is your name for black flag the band?

ErrorOner...
02-16-2009, 12:28 PM
new handy...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0057.jpg

provinT13
02-16-2009, 02:23 PM
Ok so how is this for closer letters with a bit more flow

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0789.jpg

no.regrets
02-16-2009, 02:36 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/Tator22/Picture231-1.jpg

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 03:58 PM
Ok so how is this for closer letters with a bit more flow

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0789.jpg

its better than your others, practice with different size markers, and how quick you can do the tag, because that's key

WoeInfinite
02-16-2009, 04:34 PM
...no its not..youre just starting.
practice slow.
get it clean, and just how you like it. you want YOUR tag to be the cooolest thing youve ever seen.
so get it how you want it, take as much time as you want practicing. stay off the streets uintil youve got what you like.

Mr yarbles
02-16-2009, 04:53 PM
Listen to woe...

http://i32.tinypic.com/cqh4h.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/x6egkn.jpg
and holy balls look what I found in the alphabet thread
What was I thinking!?

provinT13
02-16-2009, 04:55 PM
You guys see the streaks in the second e and the k, is that from not pushing hard enough or moving the mop too fast or what? I really like the second e, the t and the k in that tag, they are nice bold and simple so I really wanna work on it and stick with it.

Mr yarbles
02-16-2009, 04:57 PM
Not hard enough or too fast
Or your nib isn't juiced all te way
You might be runnin outta ink
Squeeze with both ya hands.

provinT13
02-16-2009, 05:03 PM
No way, squeezin with both hands will make the dam thing explode haha, and there is plenty of ink, I used a kiwi mop with some ghetto krink I made, 2/3 black rusto and 1/3 thinner. And by jucing do you mean like getting all the ink on the nib? I thought I did that by tappin the 2 dots by the first e.

Ex50one
02-16-2009, 08:08 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5048&stc=1&d=1234833529
Comments?

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 08:11 PM
I thought I did that by tappin the 2 dots by the first e.

you thought wrong

nuf.rd
02-16-2009, 10:11 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2upty5d.jpg
can i get some crits on the one on the right
sorry for the big size

provinT13
02-16-2009, 10:29 PM
you thought wrong

...k then how do you juice the nib???...