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denaaa
02-26-2009, 06:10 PM
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/denawberyl.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/crewhandy.jpg

somee critsss

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
02-26-2009, 07:05 PM
got a bunch of stickers from the UPS, i guess having a friend there is good?http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0226091959.jpg?t=1235696660

what4joke...
02-26-2009, 07:11 PM
take out the ! and make it a little bit more legible

Mr yarbles
02-26-2009, 07:49 PM
Stop fucking asking for crits unless you've given crits to those below you.

Syke1FTP
02-26-2009, 08:14 PM
you mean above you?
but aight goober thas alright....the line at the bottoms off though
sass listen to joke
and denna you really needa clean it up but othe then that its fine

klic
02-26-2009, 08:53 PM
you mean above you?


alot of people have the newest posts at the top and oldest at the bottom, but thats not the point, people just need to start giving crits if they want to get any back

some shit from today
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag1.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag2.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag3.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag4.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag5.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag6.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag7.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag8.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag9.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag10.jpg

danb - make your n normal, lose the exclamation mark, dont make it so jagged

denas - looks pretty good but too rushed, start giving crits if you want do get them

jameb - same deal.. im not feeling your B/R, what ever that last letter is

citie - make all your letters the same size

expo - not feeling it, round your letters out some and make them not so jagged

zase - looks fresh, cant really think of what you could do to make it better sorry homie

sike - way to much extra crap

bak
02-26-2009, 09:13 PM
Thanks, and will do, I sort of added some sense then but I still need something more to add for style. I like the G you went for, just make it so it doesn't go through itself, but at the same time add the line in so we don't think its a c either, and making the m straight would help alot in my opinion.. Oh and why the #7?

thanks 4 the 2 cents umm the 7 is random and everyone always adds 1 so i went with 7 =]

oh and sanek lose the "" and arrows im feeling it better without them

klic
02-26-2009, 09:20 PM
^ alright ill lose the quotes, and do you mean the underline because i dont have one arrow in all of those

bak
02-26-2009, 09:23 PM
lol srry i i thought i seen one in there but keep the underline its decent

Shamy
02-26-2009, 09:35 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/4711/p00163.jpg (http://img10.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00163.jpg)
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/p00163.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img10/p00163.jpg/1/)
The h came out a lil weird crits plz? i dont give crits because i dont know anything. so dont bother me about it xD

iPwnF00lz
02-26-2009, 10:00 PM
Sanek I'm liking those man, what the hell are those things that you hit with the blue foam? haha
I like the A you do in the second picture down that was done on the blue, the one above that is more pointed isn't as good as the curved ones in my opinion.
Shamy - go into the new to graffiti thread.

BigBlueViolence
02-26-2009, 10:02 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/20561bb.jpg

Crits?
Exchanges?

bump

moonboots
02-27-2009, 12:05 AM
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/3312502463_9d592b7a61.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/3312503401_6b039687d1.jpg

ErrorOner...
02-27-2009, 01:35 AM
saw these blank signs and saw such a waste of space...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0102.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0101.jpg

klic
02-27-2009, 04:14 PM
shamy - you still have to give crits.. nobody cares if you dont know anything, you still have an idea of what looks good and what looks like shit


Sanek I'm liking those man, what the hell are those things that you hit with the blue foam? haha
I like the A you do in the second picture down that was done on the blue, the one above that is more pointed isn't as good as the curved ones in my opinion.

the things with the blue foam are chairlifts at the ski hill haha.. and i was trying to make my A roinded but my hands were fucking freezing lol, but thanks anyways

Queezy
02-28-2009, 03:38 AM
Error, keep you letters closer to the same size, and work on the A if you cleaned your tag up it would look fresh.
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyScribe.jpg

Queezy
02-28-2009, 03:39 AM
Fucking photobucket is gay, and wont post it the way I rotated it... Bullshit.

iPwnF00lz
02-28-2009, 11:12 AM
Fucking photobucket is gay, and wont post it the way I rotated it... Bullshit.

Rotate it through your computer not with photobucket, if you rotate it on your computer and then save it and upload it to photobucket it will work.

Queezy
02-28-2009, 11:17 AM
nevermind haha, last night it wasn't rotated but... the picture speaks for itself

klic
02-28-2009, 11:28 AM
i thought smooth was in charge of the throwie battles?

expozay
02-28-2009, 10:40 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3458/3317567293_7a148bd61b_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3315/3318390714_2868ba633a.jpg

Icons
03-01-2009, 01:02 AM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/7154/picture008s.jpg

my tag sucks :(

provinT13
03-01-2009, 02:31 AM
Icons make the I even with the rest of if, and i'm not really feelin the thingy hangin off the N, other then that it's actually pretty nice for a good simple tag

crits?

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0822.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0823.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0824.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0825.jpg

Smore
03-01-2009, 05:11 AM
saw these blank signs and saw such a waste of space...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0102.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0101.jpg

I like 'em

What marker were u using?

Icons
03-01-2009, 05:35 AM
saw these blank signs and saw such a waste of space...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0102.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0101.jpg

nice man..

...is that snow? lol

klic
03-01-2009, 10:31 AM
nice man..

...is that snow? lol

yes... that would be snow

Bink1
03-01-2009, 11:30 AM
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1298/dsc06511c.jpg (http://img26.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06511c.jpg)
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/dsc06511c.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img26/dsc06511c.jpg/1/)

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/46/dsc06512.jpg (http://img24.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06512.jpg)
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/dsc06512.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img24/dsc06512.jpg/1/)

flicks for talkin'. :D

oxiclean
03-01-2009, 11:50 AM
Your E's look kinda like p's in those 2 pics..

provinT13
03-01-2009, 12:28 PM
crits?

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0822.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0823.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0824.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0825.jpg
Bink- extend the bottom of your e's

Bump for crits

expozay
03-01-2009, 01:21 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3458/3317567293_7a148bd61b_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3315/3318390714_2868ba633a.jpg

crits?

provinT13
03-01-2009, 01:25 PM
expozay I think loosing the quotes would make it better. What marker are you using?

expozay
03-01-2009, 01:38 PM
its called garden craft. i stole from micheals.

shayk
03-01-2009, 10:47 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00158.jpg

ANDRO
03-02-2009, 08:50 AM
this electrical box was covered by other writers until about a month ago it got buffed.

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6324/dsc0369.jpg

im trying to do a handstyle that flows nicely, and is simple. all theses were done while wasted lol. and i know im a toy, thats why im in the toy forum..

Bink1
03-02-2009, 10:02 AM
the big orange one is nice , keep it.

respERATION
03-02-2009, 11:01 AM
todays action:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1042.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1047.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1049.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1454.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1457.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1458.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1510.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/02-03-09_1542.jpg

Scheme*119
03-02-2009, 11:04 AM
why do you post those if you dont take crits?

respERATION
03-02-2009, 11:19 AM
i have taken crits? :( any ideas what i can do with the mother fucking R and P?

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 11:23 AM
you should just scrap the whole thing and go back to the drawing board.thats my opinion...

Bink1
03-02-2009, 11:33 AM
i keep my P's and R's simple . like the whole tag :D

shayk
03-02-2009, 12:33 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00162.jpg

new name.... i think

provinT13
03-02-2009, 01:11 PM
Resp- Is the second one done in crayon or a mean streak? Either way did you guys hit a bump or something lol, just scrap the whole style.

denaaa
03-02-2009, 01:39 PM
respp- its a little to messy butt i could see what your trying to do
shayk-take of those lines and stars and make the d more the shape of the tag and it could look good

critt my shit plz dont look at that throwiiee its maddd uglyy
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/dethrowiii.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/denastag.jpg
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/denasscrewhandstyllee.jpg

provinT13
03-02-2009, 02:24 PM
^^ looks nice keep it up.

expozay
03-02-2009, 04:10 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3539/3324116122_cd8d02a9d1_m.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 04:28 PM
don't underline the handstyle with a letter, dude

provinT13
03-02-2009, 04:29 PM
expozay loose the turd hangin off the o, or shorten it up, and I agree with BigBlueViolence

Any crits for my stuff up top?

denaaa
03-02-2009, 04:37 PM
yaa expoz take alll the crap away from the tagg like the " markss and whatever and dont underline with the e lol it should look a little better after that andd any critss for my stufff upp topppp

expozay
03-02-2009, 04:54 PM
dena shit looks real good dude.

klic
03-02-2009, 05:56 PM
***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #2***
Word: Whatever you write.
Deadline: Friday, March 6, 2009 (10PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic) with whatever you write as the subject.
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

lets try and get more entries that last week, all you have to do is send me a handstyle of what you write, thats it.

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKHandstyle5.jpg

expo - make it simpler, round it out so its not so jagged

denas - nice stuff, i dont like how you connected your e to your n in the first one, looks fresh overall though

dramun - lose the stars and shit

resp - i agree 100% with what scheme said, everything you post looks exactly the same because you dont bother to listen to what people have to say. looks shaky as hell, you have to wait until the bus stops as someone said earlier haha.. the only one that looks good in my opinion is the third one from the bottom

andro - looks pretty good, some people might mistake it for AMRO

skayk/lbc - make all the letters the same size and lose all the wack extra stuff

etek - its looking a lot better, i still think you should stick to paper for a little longer, and id consider changing your name if i were you, not a great word and the letters are pretty bad

tepar - looks good, nice spots.. keep all your letters the same size

scrap - looks good other than your P. loose the thing inside of it and dont make the loop of your P so big

conz - like i said for expo, dont make your letters so jagged, keep your letters the same size, fill up pages full of tags and stick to paper for now, it will come

queezy - its decent, make the bottom part of your E's rounded like the top part

yoir - try an uppercase Y

somebody give me some crits

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 06:32 PM
DENA... fix your n in your tag, I know N's are hard to flow, but I like the lowercase one you did, just not the uppercase one. For me, it's too hard to mistake for another letter. because you space it out a bit more than any of your other letters.
Your B's or R's(I hope that's a B)... could be mistaken for the other. Don't get to crazy with your over steezing your handstyle, especially where it doesn't need steezing, because you have a good handy :P

SANEK
Try making your k in a different way. with a straight bar, or make the extension(if you want it to go out like that) curl or something. Because a straight arched line like that doesn't look so hot. Little bit of dead space... try doing nonstops.. than go back to your normal tag, and see if you have less dead space, or try not picking up the pen far from the paper, as to try to keep the letters closer.

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 06:35 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2emcryd.jpg

done for the last battle.

Sanek- your shit is straight, but, personally, I'd try to keep progressing.
It's too plain for me.

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 06:42 PM
oi, true. I think you should add some FLAVA.
I like simple handies but when most people say that... they mean, simple letters, with nice flow ;]
You have to find a right balance.

expozay
03-02-2009, 06:52 PM
sanek looks good i agree with sallybsk tho kind of plain. add some style.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3369/3324488722_7e0ed0e013_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3327/3324488718_37e0c3c3fa_m.jpg

best?

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 06:53 PM
the first pic is definitely your best, but don't curve the X

denaaa
03-02-2009, 07:01 PM
ya expo its getting niceer i like the first onee i find x's are mad hardd

expozay
03-02-2009, 07:10 PM
ya expo its getting niceer i like the first onee i find x's are mad hardd
thanks dena.
yea ive been having mad trouble figuring my x out.

any one got any x suggestions?

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 07:13 PM
just do a plain ass X until you work your style out right.

Worms
03-02-2009, 07:15 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-10.jpg

Capo Izi
03-02-2009, 07:20 PM
Just tryin to develop...


Kaporegime...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/26/l_75db525566e44da7ba934ea0c0f754ab.jpg

klic
03-02-2009, 07:21 PM
SANEK
Try making your k in a different way. with a straight bar, or make the extension(if you want it to go out like that) curl or something. Because a straight arched line like that doesn't look so hot. Little bit of dead space... try doing nonstops.. than go back to your normal tag, and see if you have less dead space, or try not picking up the pen far from the paper, as to try to keep the letters closer.

really, i thought my k was what made my tag but i guess not.. ill give it a shot a post some flicks after ive done a page or two full of em like you guys suggested

Gezra
03-02-2009, 07:26 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kJOBobIeb4A

Not toy, But I dont want to post in the main blackbook topic :P

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 07:26 PM
lmao is that a joke? huge fucking name.
not much to do, and shitty quality, but uhmmm it flows, but to be honest, you're trying too hard for the cursive style. I don't know. it looks like you took your time, and that K is out of place, compared to the rest.


SORE
I'm digging that silver one.
My local hero like 3 years back was a kid named SOR... I think I met him once, but I loved his throwies, than after he got caught, I think he stopped writing, well that's what everyone says. BUT YOU KNOWwwwweeez

Gezra
03-02-2009, 07:27 PM
lmao is that a joke? huge fucking name.
not much to do, and shitty quality, but uhmmm it flows, but to be honest, you're trying too hard for the cursive style. I don't know. it looks like you took your time, and that K is out of place, compared to the rest.


SORE
I'm digging that silver one.
My local hero like 3 years back was a kid named SOR... I think I met him once, but I loved his throwies, than after he got caught, I think he stopped writing, well that's what everyone says. BUT YOU KNOWwwwweeez

How do you like mine dude?

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 07:28 PM
Nah dude, its still toy.
you're actual handstyle isn't bad, but all of your other letters need work.

klic
03-02-2009, 07:29 PM
kind of plain. add some style.

It's too plain for me.

I think you should add some FLAVA.

i must have been told this a hundred times.. what exactly do you guys mean by adding some style?

Worms
03-02-2009, 07:32 PM
tweak it out bend the leters in diff ways throw ur flava into it *****

klic
03-02-2009, 07:32 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kJOBobIeb4A

Not toy, But I dont want to post in the main blackbook topic :P

no, that definately is toy

Gezra
03-02-2009, 07:33 PM
no, that definately is toy

What you can do any better? Wow, your the first one out of all my viewers that told me that was toy. No way dude.

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 07:35 PM
thats becuase youtubers are dick riders...but not on the good ol bombinscience.haha.were all huge douchebags.

Capo Izi
03-02-2009, 07:37 PM
lmao is that a joke? huge fucking name.
not much to do, and shitty quality, but uhmmm it flows, but to be honest, you're trying too hard for the cursive style. I don't know. it looks like you took your time, and that K is out of place, compared to the rest.


Is that about mine?

that is just my full name, my throws are Kapo, and I rarely do a Kaporegime simple or piece.

I like that cursive kinda style.....most of my letters are one long line. And take my time as in working on it as my style developing, or just to do that one sketch? Cause I can pop those out in like 5 seconds.

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 07:38 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2emcryd.jpg

bump

gez, homie, don't let internet fame get to your head.
it doesn't mean shit.

Worms
03-02-2009, 07:38 PM
youtube viewers r idiots

iPwnF00lz
03-02-2009, 07:44 PM
What you can do any better? Wow, your the first one out of all my viewers that told me that was toy. No way dude.

Uh, yeah way dude. Get out of here if you think you are all that like your attitude is pointing to.

Mr yarbles
03-02-2009, 07:46 PM
i must have been told this a hundred times.. what exactly do you guys mean by adding some style?

Eh you'll figure it out
It's nothing something you can force
Just keep doing what you're doing
Eventually you're tag will start to flow and you'll feel comfortable with more advanced letters and styles and whtever

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 07:46 PM
gezra ive seen all your vids homie.your shit is generic as shit man.and as for your writes theres more work to be done haha.

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 07:48 PM
GEZ
work on your 'R'
It has nice flow, sometimes you overlap, but nice letter size and no dead space.
Make your letters more consistent, that's all I can say, I mean they look good, just sometimes you look like you want to pull of different steezes. Just try to think of what you're going to do.
Do you know what oner means? Do you want a crew?

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=oner

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 07:51 PM
Is that about mine?

that is just my full name, my throws are Kapo, and I rarely do a Kaporegime simple or piece.

I like that cursive kinda style.....most of my letters are one long line. And take my time as in working on it as my style developing, or just to do that one sketch? Cause I can pop those out in like 5 seconds.

it looks like you're doing calligraphy, not graffiti, just try to flow more like a graffiti artist. Make your letters a bit taller. not standard, like extend one extension at the end, play around with shit. I meant it looks like you took your time on the tag, I don't know, just me :p

PirateMLifnen
03-02-2009, 07:52 PM
Sanek: Very clean, and good simple tag. I like the N on the very bottom tag the most. I don't like the extension on the K though.
I'd lose the extension and rework the K, and add some style to the E.

BigBlue: I like the fact that you've got a definitive style to your tag, but I personally don't like the jagged tags..

Expo: In the second image, I like the top and bottom tags the most.
I like the E and P in the top, and I like the other E, and the O in the bottom. But it's a little plain. I think you out to stick with the X in the 3rd tag, just a plain one until you can get some more distinct style to the other letters.

Sore: I don't like that extension on the first R. I like the top left tag the most, but if it had just a little more flow to it. I like the S's, R's and E's...

Kaporegime: I like the style, it looks like it's got some nice flow to it. I'd like to see it in a thicker ink, like a marker or highlighter though, cause the details don't stand out.

Me:
http://i40.tinypic.com/2cypr1e.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/33ygpj6.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/kbq5a9.jpg

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 07:54 PM
LOSE the extension on the L going back up. Lose the dead space. Give your H some flavor, Give your I some flavor, C AND E are horrible. HIT THE BOOOOKS.

Capo Izi
03-02-2009, 08:00 PM
it looks like you're doing calligraphy, not graffiti, just try to flow more like a graffiti artist. Make your letters a bit taller. not standard, like extend one extension at the end, play around with shit. I meant it looks like you took your time on the tag, I don't know, just me :p

Don't get me wrong I get what you're saying, I'll develop it more....but have you see like Philly hands? They run all together in a cursive like form (with killer style, which I definitely don't have yet)....well yeah they influence me ALOT....so yeah. Thanks for the crit though.

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 08:02 PM
yea... I actually have a philly style. Though I'm from the west coast. I'll show you it sometime(my camera is broken). but also remember, their letters are STRETCHED length wise as(as in vertically, up and down), try to do a tag freehand from the wrist. It'll come out naturally.

Capo Izi
03-02-2009, 08:09 PM
yeah I can do mine more vertical, I just think it looks better more horizontal....I'll do one up....But what do you mean freehand with the wrist?

sallybsk
03-02-2009, 08:11 PM
it's all in the wrist junior. once you think you're getting better, try not to force stuff.
FLOWWW. it's different with a can and pen obviously, but still in the wrist.

skull-e
03-02-2009, 08:14 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00046.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00105.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00085.jpg

Capo Izi
03-02-2009, 08:30 PM
it's all in the wrist junior. once you think you're getting better, try not to force stuff.
FLOWWW. it's different with a can and pen obviously, but still in the wrist.


aight, I try to do that, I don't force it man.....but yeah thanks.

klic
03-02-2009, 09:02 PM
What you can do any better? Wow, your the first one out of all my viewers that told me that was toy. No way dude.

i have a hard time believing that, seeing as five people called you a toy in the last hour. i dont recall saying that i shouldnt be posting in the toy forum orr saying that i have a better handstyle than you.. your handstyle isnt even that bad, youve just got to stop thinking your the shit and accept that it belongs in the toy forum

n8galicia
03-02-2009, 09:58 PM
heres my tag, its a bit blurry. i changed my name from "sektor", i wasnt quite feelin the name
<br>
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g238/n8galicia/DSCF0207.jpg
<br>
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g238/n8galicia/DSCF0208.jpg

WoeInfinite
03-02-2009, 11:04 PM
less little bullshit around it my dude.
clean up the S and get rid of that bar on the H.
basically, just write it, thennn slowly bend one letter at a time.
youre starting great though, better than other bullshit ive seen on here..

.HATESONE.
03-03-2009, 08:27 AM
less little bullshit around it my dude.
clean up the S and get rid of that bar on the H.
basically, just write it, thennn slowly bend one letter at a time.
youre starting great though, better than other bullshit ive seen on here..

wtf are you talking about those writes are so fr-fr-fresh niggha,like woah.serious they be givin twist a run for his money IMHO.

that shit is mega dope.







super duper dopedope.







it is pleasurable.









ive taken this too far







and i dont care.



this is so pointless.

skull-e
03-03-2009, 09:54 AM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00046.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00105.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00085.jpg

bump for mutha fuckin crits

BigBlueViolence
03-03-2009, 10:21 AM
I don't like your oneliners
but I reeeally like that other one

Eack
03-03-2009, 10:46 AM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3746/img0046m.jpg
skull-e i like the yellow one
n8glacia = back to basics

BigBlueViolence
03-03-2009, 10:48 AM
Eack- (the yellow one isn't tasr's)
Slow down, homie.
you can tell you rush, makes it look retarded.

denaaa
03-03-2009, 12:00 PM
tasr that greenish one is dirrrtyy i dont like the r though but it still looks good

sallybsk
03-03-2009, 04:45 PM
I actually enjoy his one liners, and other tag. they make me a fancypants kittenkat.

skull-e
03-03-2009, 06:56 PM
funny youd mentioon my one liners, I got a flick of one today:
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00141.jpg

Erase:Seperate your letters a bit, if you're gonna put an arrow at the tip of your E, make it go out furtherand make it one motion like this:
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture98.jpg

sallybsk
03-03-2009, 07:36 PM
hot shiiet.
well... looks cold actually, that sucks, at least your paint works :p

.HATESONE.
03-03-2009, 08:08 PM
funny youd mentioon my one liners, I got a flick of one today:
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00141.jpg


tazr-i think this would look dope but i cant really make out the t dude.but the rest of the letters are sick man.

PirateMLifnen
03-03-2009, 08:22 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2cypr1e.jpg


Bump... I've made the bottom bar of my C straight, not curved. And dropped the extension on the L.
But bump for more crits.

klic
03-03-2009, 09:51 PM
worked on it a little more, listened to the crits, and this is what i came up with

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKHandstyle6.jpg
not all that different, i basically just curved the bottom right leg of the k

chile - too much dead space between your L and E

tazr - like hate said, work on your t, and im not feeling the circle around it but i know a lot of other people like it so its up to you lol

erase - i have the exact same ae jeans lol.. but id stick to paper for now if i were you, your letters need some work

crash - get rid of all the extra shit, bring your h closer to your other letters

provinT13
03-03-2009, 09:59 PM
[B]klic[B] Don't like the 4th or 6th N. 4th the stem is too long, 6th the arch is too high, but other then that they're great

I got a bit of inspiration from cruzin the forums

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/IMAGE_071.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/IMAGE_072.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/IMAGE_073.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/IMAGE_075.jpg

All crits appreciated.

klic
03-03-2009, 10:30 PM
^the third ones the best

coldpizza
03-03-2009, 10:44 PM
agreed. third ones the best.

sallybsk
03-03-2009, 11:07 PM
ERASE... don't try downers yet, or one liners, though it does look like it has some flow, it just looks like you got fucking down syndrome at the end of your tag, not like a downer. Your individual letters have potential. that is all.

ETEK. your Ks are shit.
The middle one is the only one where it looks decent.
I'm really NOT liking your Es, especially when you don't leave a space in them. and when you make your Es two different styles, it just looks fucking stupid. Writers enjoy consistency, you should join the club, visual consistency also stimulates the eye, and is pretty to look at. I'd show you an example in my tag, but I don't has camera functional right now, so later.
Try making your T capital. it is usually easier to flow and more fun to write, because your T just looks like normal handwriting at the moment.

provinT13
03-03-2009, 11:16 PM
^^^ there is no space because they were done with a deco, and I don't make them 2 different styles on purpose it's just a mixture of the paint and my toy ass hand LOL but I'll take the advice thank you

sallybsk
03-03-2009, 11:39 PM
I was talking about the last tag :P
if you like capital E's try them throughout the whole thing then.

WikedRequiem
03-04-2009, 02:42 AM
Provin-Stick to the books
klic-Lookin good
skull-e- i like the one liner

This is a pic of my table, Focus on the black and orange tagz

sallybsk
03-04-2009, 04:03 AM
lose the crown, lose it lose it loooooose it.
make your Es more consistent.
Leave out those quotes hanging 2feet above your tag. and those gay ass arrows on both sides.
(I'm looking at the orange one btw,z0+ifs9fa)
I'm reading "REKE" am i rite? I really don't like the style, and I don't think you're pulling it off anyways. Your R is just rubbish. DONT DO THOSE GAY FUCKING ARROWS AND LOSE THE CROWN. sorry, I like typing in caps sometimes, and dancing, and sleeping.

provinT13
03-04-2009, 10:51 AM
I was talking about the last tag :P
if you like capital E's try them throughout the whole thing then.

ugh I don't really like capitals, but that's because I suck at em, I have no ideas when it comes to capital E's. But I do think my tag should be like my regular name and start with a capital.

*edit*

ahhhh do you mean visual consistency by keeping the same e's in the tag like lowercase as apposed to lower case and uppercase?

provinT13
03-04-2009, 12:45 PM
I sanded down the nibs on my kiwi mops, omg they write soooooo smooth, so I tried a tag on some plywood in my backyard

What should I do with the last leg on the K?

The t looks like I stopped here but that's a knot/hole in the wood

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0835.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0834.jpg

*edit* just got my bombingscience shipment too

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0837.jpg

woozie
03-04-2009, 04:34 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8238/sake.jpg (http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sake.jpg)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/sake.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img232/sake.jpg/1/)

denaaa
03-04-2009, 05:13 PM
etek-slow it down and make it simpler
woozie -that better not say sake

woozie
03-04-2009, 05:53 PM
why what is wrong with that

skull-e
03-04-2009, 08:07 PM
Only this:
http://images.google.ca/imgres?imgurl=http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3120/2585405712_6f959f658c_o.jpg&imgrefurl=http://flickr.com/photos/77717671%40N00/2585405712/&usg=__a0mAlE-AE4tG5mNwdPgx40XtNnc=&h=527&w=702&sz=111&hl=en&start=5&um=1&tbnid=NQdJUfmRCNSMAM:&tbnh=105&tbnw=140&prev=/images%3Fq%3DSAKE%2Bgraff%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26cli ent%3Dfirefox-a%26rls%3Dorg.mozilla:en-US:official%26sa%3DG

provinT13
03-04-2009, 10:22 PM
Woozie- change that K

bump for more crits for my stuff

MaTtBoY
03-05-2009, 01:39 AM
Just some different variations of my tag. Crits appreciated:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v361/MaTtBoy/tags.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v361/MaTtBoy/tags2.jpg

provinT13
03-05-2009, 03:04 PM
^^ middle one and bottom one on second page are the only good ones. Your letters just don't seem to be the same size or share any structure, idk lol

IlikePie
03-05-2009, 05:27 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1236295294.jpg
I don't expect anything back seeing as I'm just warming up right now.

IlikePie
03-05-2009, 05:43 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1236296374.jpg
Hit Skinz. I'm so bored.

IlikePie
03-05-2009, 05:52 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1236297062.jpg

Last one. I'm gonna go and masturbate.

skull-e
03-05-2009, 08:49 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture101.jpg

i<3pie: Lovin those Ks

Sake: I hope you've already picked a new name

bak
03-05-2009, 08:57 PM
no no...no try again

oxiclean
03-05-2009, 08:57 PM
Awesome like usual tazr

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
03-05-2009, 09:01 PM
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0305092158.jpg?t=1236308443
ideas, crits, tell me im not wasting my time?

Mr yarbles
03-05-2009, 09:14 PM
Awesome like usual tazr

Not really

I like your other stuff better.

oxiclean
03-05-2009, 09:18 PM
Yeah.
I just took a second look at it and it kind of sucks.

klic
03-05-2009, 09:27 PM
just a reminder that the deadline for the weekly toy handstyle battle is tommorow.. i should have a lot more entries than what i do now because all you have to do is send me a flick of your tag (it has to be what you write)

some of todays action, edit: some of them are hard to see cuz my phone takes horrible pictures in dark places, and that one with the markal is hella ugly

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag19.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag18.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag17.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag11.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag16.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag15.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag14.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag13.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag12.jpg

crits...

sassasauras - neither, make the letters a lot simpler, your forcing them too much

tasr - it looks alright, your A is horrible and your R isnt great.. go back to this kind of style, probably the best tasr tag ive seen from you

ilikepie - thanks for the handy, what do you write? ill do you up one

wondr - round out your letters some, keep them all in line

sake - work on giving it some flow, just looks like 4 random letters put together

etek - your improving fast dude, i really think you should consider changing names, theres not too much you can do with those letters

oxiclean
03-05-2009, 09:32 PM
whats the last one on sanek?

klic
03-05-2009, 09:54 PM
whats the last one on sanek?

chairlift

provinT13
03-05-2009, 10:32 PM
etek - your improving fast dude, i really think you should consider changing names, theres not too much you can do with those letters

thanks man, I appreciate it, really, but I love the letters, plus I can't think of a worthwhile name to change to, but i'll keep thinking.


no no...no try again

agree

IlikePie
03-05-2009, 11:20 PM
ilikepie - thanks for the handy, what do you write? ill do you up one


I write Rab. You don't have to, I don't expect anything back, I just come in here every once in a while and do some peoples names so I can still say that I keep my handy up. :P

n8galicia
03-06-2009, 01:18 AM
i hope this in an improvement. ive simplified it alot so, let me know what you think


http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g238/n8galicia/DSCF0209-1.jpg

provinT13
03-06-2009, 01:31 AM
klic what about changing to eten instead of etek

N8glicia- loose the thing before the R and many rash isn't the best sounding name lol like diaper rash. Other then that it's pretty good

n8galicia
03-06-2009, 02:25 AM
lol its crash. its supposed to be a C haha. do you think the letters are too close?

what_a_toy
03-06-2009, 02:33 AM
lol its crash. its supposed to be a C haha. do you think the letters are too close?

yeah and dont use fineliner to tag.. its easier to start off with textas and stuff. and dont be so rushy or edgy on your tags, slow down and make it more smooth.. if you get what im trying to say...

klic
03-06-2009, 05:09 AM
klic what about changing to eten instead of etek

N8glicia- loose the thing before the R and many rash isn't the best sounding name lol like diaper rash. Other then that it's pretty good

i think etek would still be better, its the ETE combination that sucks to write.. maybe try something like ASEK, ATEK, STEK, i dont know man its up to you, if you like etek and how it writes you should stick to it

crash - your C looks like an E, lose the extension on it

skull-e
03-06-2009, 06:53 AM
Can't even read em, do a simp first, then try and make it more technical

provinT13
03-06-2009, 08:38 AM
i think etek would still be better, its the ETE combination that sucks to write.. maybe try something like ASEK, ATEK, STEK, i dont know man its up to you, if you like etek and how it writes you should stick to it


ugh now you got me liking eten, see you had me awake until 3 in the am thinking about changing my name, and I change and you no like, sheesh lol :D

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0840.jpg

I think i'll stick with etek since i've already gotten up and have lots of sticker slaps already made.

skull-e
03-06-2009, 10:20 AM
Not really

I like your other stuff better.

I was really blitzed,

and I wanted to try something new, I really like my spiral tho >.>

Bink1
03-06-2009, 11:38 AM
eten your tags are akward. i would go more simpler than that.

provinT13
03-06-2009, 11:43 AM
what makes them awkward? Spacing, structure? I'm sticking with etek btw, and those tags were done at 3 a.m, in the dark, using my cellphone as a light and an old yellow sharpie lol.

Bink1
03-06-2009, 12:05 PM
first of all the E's, they are to edgy, right leg of N or K whatever u got.dont do it.cut it a bit. and that underline - no.

why dont u try keyboard letters.

skull-e
03-06-2009, 12:18 PM
keyboard letters are the way to go

provinT13
03-06-2009, 12:55 PM
alright thank's for the tips guys, ill work on it (oh and the underline, yea I know, my book was sitting on my lap lol, so I started writing off my leg and fucked it up.)

What about these e's. The second one seems to say "ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" like the fonz

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0837.jpg

expozay
03-06-2009, 03:39 PM
dude im lovin it the name and the tag.

klic
03-06-2009, 04:12 PM
etek thats better but id make the top of your e's like a full semicircle if you know what i mean, oh and what about ENEK?

provinT13
03-06-2009, 10:57 PM
Yes I know what you mean by semi cemicircle I'll try it and thanks for the coment expo

Wallace
03-06-2009, 11:08 PM
etek is a rough word for a handy, i tried it out just now
and you also play paintball, way to cop the name from a shitty gun

Wallace
03-06-2009, 11:19 PM
hit every name i saw from the past couple pages, didnt modify any at all they are all first shot.
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8233/img00221.jpg (http://img17.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00221.jpg)

..romero..
03-07-2009, 01:38 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/kbeq2w.jpg

IM BORED.

provinT13
03-07-2009, 01:05 PM
etek is a rough word for a handy, i tried it out just now
and you also play paintball, way to cop the name from a shitty gun

haha you right, the ego, but I had the name before the gun came out so....but I don't play pb anymore.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/0_IMAGE_089.jpg

I'm sticking with it for now, maby i'll change later

graffdabusup
03-07-2009, 04:25 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/lolol.jpg

Bink1
03-07-2009, 06:24 PM
smooth and simple mone. very nice :)

graffdabusup
03-07-2009, 06:28 PM
thanks bro..

klic
03-07-2009, 06:40 PM
***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #3***
Word: Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger
Deadline: Friday, March 13, 2009 (6PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic).
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

etek - basically what i said about your e's last time, and i find it too drippy, and your k is ginormous compared to your other letters

mone - looks good, try and make it more complex next time

any crits on mine?

sallybsk
03-07-2009, 07:31 PM
sanek it's starting to look better
the flowww at least
I really dislike that streak tag.
MY advice now... now that you think you have an Okay handy, try a different steez.
I've had so many handies it's amazing. but i used to be like a super duper tag star. So I tried to rock every steez.
Shit's just fun because you'll maybe find some new letters that you like more.

etek too shaky, drips don't even look good.
learn to use your mop, squeeze on the bottom the most, or don't even squeeze that much. waaaay to shaky.

ANDRO
03-07-2009, 08:26 PM
some handstyles..

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/8975/dsc0058k.jpg

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3674/dsc0044w.jpg

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9956/dsc0019t.jpg

homemade ink in this last picture.. it stuck well on the door but looks like shit on that concrete.

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8575/dsc0002c.jpg

crits please!

bak
03-07-2009, 10:28 PM
andro i no like the orange tag but the rest look pretty good not bad
the drips look strange tho
going simple now!
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/03-07-09_1324.jpg

provinT13
03-07-2009, 10:38 PM
etek - basically what i said about your e's last time, and i find it too drippy, and your k is ginormous compared to your other letters

Ah I just noticed that, i'll work on it thanks




etek too shaky, drips don't even look good.
learn to use your mop, squeeze on the bottom the most, or don't even squeeze that much. waaaay to shaky.


Yea it was my first time using the k-60, but I don't remember shaking, the drips did turn out strange though.

Mone Looks great, like klic said, make it a bit more complex

romero I agree with you

Wallace
03-07-2009, 10:50 PM
lol i never get crits, and alwayyss give them

bak
03-07-2009, 10:53 PM
which one is ur hand?? theres hella shit on ur pic

provinT13
03-08-2009, 11:31 AM
Wallace I like the way you spaced the letters in mine, but I can't really give ya crits because well I suck lol

Try to ignore the streaks

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0845.jpg

ANDRO
03-08-2009, 03:46 PM
trying to take the advice that everyone gives and keep it simple.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3056/dsc0064upo.jpg

the O is fucked up from the texture on the wall..

now crit this shit please !

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 04:56 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/JUSTIN008.jpg

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 04:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff003.jpg

provinT13
03-08-2009, 05:21 PM
ANDRO I'd say make the edges of your letters more distinguishable, they all look combined, as if every single letter is leading into the other, really just the n, d, and r. Just my 2 cents.

DirtyDozen520
03-08-2009, 05:22 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02919.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02920.jpg

New name, AGES

provinT13
03-08-2009, 08:24 PM
DirtyDozen520 Don't connect the A and the G. Bottom pic is bad, letters seem out of proportion, top is a bit better.

Reap
03-08-2009, 09:18 PM
never, that is a fucking ace handstyle.

ages, that a pretty nice style, i love that e and s, but work on the a and g and give a lil flava to dem.

here is my f'n toy tag. lol
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6374/sdc11258.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sdc11258.jpg)

provinT13
03-08-2009, 10:18 PM
Loose the arrows and make the p less like an e or r

bak
03-08-2009, 10:30 PM
ages? i only see the ges no a?

reap go simple..r

new style
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/03-08-09_1950.jpg

shayk
03-08-2009, 10:41 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00158.jpg

crits?

provinT13
03-08-2009, 10:46 PM
L doesn't flow, connect the spine of the B to the rest of it.

Jonny Go Steady
03-09-2009, 12:36 AM
Second practice throwie in garage. Critique?

provinT13
03-09-2009, 12:52 AM
Keep your letters the same size and width. I'd rethink the k and the r, the legs are what need work.

graffdabusup
03-09-2009, 05:58 AM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/delucks.jpg
i dont write deluxe

seia
03-09-2009, 07:20 AM
that tag is nice
besides for the crown

Mr yarbles
03-09-2009, 11:19 AM
Nah, he deserves the crown.

But seriously that aint no crown

http://i42.tinypic.com/15k6d5.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2w2m25i.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/f4hds1.jpg

Daytime steeeeez

Bink1
03-09-2009, 12:19 PM
that tag is nice
besides for the crown

that is not a crown.

and rapist that shit is dope :D love the first one.

some of my shit.


http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/2606/dsc06531.jpg (http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06531.jpg)

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/2328/dsc06529.jpg (http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06529.jpg)

Mr yarbles
03-09-2009, 12:38 PM
Good improvement man that one ont he orange looks nice

capy
03-09-2009, 03:03 PM
i'm thinking to change my name into sek donno if it's taken
here's some really quick shit
http://i688.photobucket.com/albums/vv247/kingz_07/DSC000572.jpg

provinT13
03-09-2009, 04:00 PM
Mr. yarbles those are all sick as hell

bink1 Besides the streaks I like the second one more than the first. The orange box one doesn't seem to have enough flow, idk, yea it's nice, basic and block, but there is something about it that's getting to me lol. Still good though.

woozie
03-09-2009, 07:15 PM
capy give some space between the s and e and fix the s and k

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 07:18 PM
rapist always got hot shit
bink your progress is impressive.
sek....... probably not
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff056.jpg
crits??

H3TT1NG3R
03-09-2009, 07:34 PM
i'm thinking to change my name into sek donno if it's taken
here's some really quick shit
http://i688.photobucket.com/albums/vv247/kingz_07/DSC000572.jpg

get that shit outta here!

klic
03-09-2009, 07:41 PM
some recent stuff, most of its brutal

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag25.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag26.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag20.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag21.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag22.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag23.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag24.jpg

grate - your letters look good, they just dont flow together

sek - your s needs a lot of work

tepr - looks good, watch out for the dead space between your P and R

yarbles - looks sick as always, kinda shaky on the last one though

krev - wrong thread

Mr yarbles
03-09-2009, 10:20 PM
Word it was ona bus at a wierd angle haha
But it don't matter anymore
Gotta change my name and shit
and I'm layin low for a bit so don't expect many flicks from me for a solid month or two

Anyways
That shit deff looks better just work on keeping all your letters touching that invisible line on the bottom and not letting them drop below
and make your s just a liiiittle bit less pudgy

Jonny Go Steady
03-10-2009, 01:20 AM
rapist- shit is ill. props on the name.

tepr- indeed the orange one is nice. simple always seems to work.

skull-e
03-10-2009, 07:08 AM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00046.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00056.jpg

klic: if you're gonna use stars, make them one motion and make then go up and in, not like a tent.

Bink1
03-10-2009, 09:09 AM
thanks for the crits guys.

sanek - why dont u get some nice marker , or make a mop and try to do your tag with it. looks like u have been doing your shit with some permanent markers , dunno.

tasr - whitish is nice, dont like circled tags at all, but your is kinda good. :D
with my blueish mtn hc marker. whichs ink run out :( last tags. wiht it.

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2969/dsc06527.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06527.jpg)

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8305/dsc06526.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06526.jpg)

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/6933/dsc06528.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06528.jpg)
(that other one isnt mine at all, its some toyedone from the block.)

Bink1
03-10-2009, 09:10 AM
thanks for the crits guys.

sanek - why dont u get some nice marker , or make a mop and try to do your tag with it. looks like u have been doing your shit with some permanent markers , dunno.

tasr - whitish is nice, dont like circled tags at all, but your is kinda good. :D
with my blueish mtn hc marker. whichs ink run out :( last tags. wiht it.

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2969/dsc06527.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06527.jpg)

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8305/dsc06526.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06526.jpg)

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/6933/dsc06528.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06528.jpg)
(that other one isnt mine at all, its some toyedone from the block.)

GETRAD
03-10-2009, 09:12 AM
sanek- get some new markers and some new spots, the tags not bad tho

tazr- keep it up

one of my favorite tags iv done (in the blue):
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/sc00bedfc0.jpg

Mr yarbles
03-10-2009, 11:00 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/n2nayf.jpg

Noger

Not that i'm uh ever going to get back into graffiti or anything... ;)

getrad mayne lose that wierd underline

and teper I know you feel you gotta do that thing and the end of the r
Trust I do too sometimes
But don't

provinT13
03-10-2009, 11:46 AM
sanek- get some new markers and some new spots, the tags not bad tho

tazr- keep it up

one of my favorite tags iv done (in the blue):
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/sc00bedfc0.jpg

Where is the blue tag?

Bink1- Still lovin teper mixed with that blue mtn, i'm gonna have to pick one of those up, where did ya get it?

capy
03-10-2009, 01:06 PM
get that shit outta here!
yo man i know that shit is the wackest of the wackest
i just posted it so i could take tha name it was'nt supposed to be good
that's why it says really quick shit

provinT13
03-10-2009, 03:04 PM
It is toy forum so this is the worst, might as well keep it lol

klic1- love the last one, but the rest of the pics are not so great haha, the pic quality I mean.

crits would be nice on this one, thanks.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/etenred.jpg

I know the second e sucks, idk wtf I did to make it that bad

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/etenk-71.jpg

joker954
03-10-2009, 03:27 PM
nice improvement etek

LeaksOne
03-10-2009, 03:41 PM
etek why dont you round your e's? i straight line in front of them throws it all off for me an the black one looks like it says etel 7

Zase
03-10-2009, 04:48 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/b3wmiq.jpg

provinT13
03-10-2009, 04:55 PM
etek why dont you round your e's? i straight line in front of them throws it all off for me an the black one looks like it says etel 7

idk man, and yes the black one sucked, ill get a flick of some round e's


nice improvement etek

thank you

more crits?

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0854.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-10-2009, 05:05 PM
hold up, is it Eten or Etek?

oxiclean
03-10-2009, 05:14 PM
I think he switched from etek to eten

provinT13
03-10-2009, 05:17 PM
^^ yes I switched

I liked the n's more then k's and eten has a much bigger personal meaning.

Germer
03-10-2009, 06:07 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00056.jpg

klic: if you're gonna use stars, make them one motion and make then go up and in, not like a tent.

classy spot.

shayk
03-11-2009, 12:54 AM
hell yea that is a nice spot

i taged the back of a photo booth today so every one who gets there pix taken there my tag is right behind them

DirtyDozen520
03-11-2009, 09:17 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02955.jpg
I need work on the A, right?

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02956.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02957.jpg

Bink1
03-11-2009, 09:35 AM
u have to work on simple letters. dont try to hit a style now.

sallybsk
03-11-2009, 10:05 AM
try just cumming in your hand, then smearing that on the paper.
but for reals, make your letters less pointy, and without that half curve on the bottom of the letters that all gangsters and toys like to do.

TheWaddler
03-11-2009, 11:02 AM
hey, i've just started writin and i've got two names i like: jist and jace. i just wanted to no if they are already taken before i post any flix.

provinT13
03-11-2009, 11:07 AM
hell yea that is a nice spot

i taged the back of a photo booth today so every one who gets there pix taken there my tag is right behind them
:D

DirtyDozen520 more simple

Mr yarbles
03-11-2009, 11:15 AM
hey, i've just started writin and i've got two names i like: jist and jace. i just wanted to no if they are already taken before i post any flix.


Don't wront jace.
and jist sounds like jizzed
In case you're afraid o people making fun of your name

TheWaddler
03-11-2009, 11:17 AM
Don't wront jace.
and jist sounds like jizzed
In case you're afraid o people making fun of your name

y can't i write jace? and jist is like "get the jist". i ain't bothered anywho.

Mr yarbles
03-11-2009, 11:19 AM
Jase is a freight legend

TheWaddler
03-11-2009, 11:21 AM
Jase is a freight legend

aite, fair enuf. im not too keen on jist tho but im rubbish at tinkin up names. can someone tink of one wid a j in it.

WoeInfinite
03-11-2009, 12:30 PM
jibbbbbbber
haha
less talking more pics.
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/0210090009.jpg
old for talkin.

provinT13
03-11-2009, 01:10 PM
too long for my taste.

WoeInfinite
03-11-2009, 01:42 PM
idk, i like tall hands.
theyve grown on me.

provinT13
03-11-2009, 02:00 PM
I like some, but it seems too tall, to each their own I guess.

HRbN
03-11-2009, 02:01 PM
^^ yes I switched

I liked the n's more then k's and eten has a much bigger personal meaning.


cause your a fat kid? just playin write whatever suites you

provinT13
03-11-2009, 02:02 PM
^^^ hahah that's not even close to the reason. It's kinda like "i'm being eaten" by some stuff goin on right now, stuff that will be sticking with me forever.

Wallace
03-11-2009, 02:10 PM
Ages- go simpler, last one would be the best to start off of
grieves- not a fan of the circle, the tag itself isnt bad. keep at it. would look better if all of your letters ended at the same spot at the bottom
zase- looking good, youve got a nice flow

provinT13
03-11-2009, 02:16 PM
idk man, and yes the black one sucked, ill get a flick of some round e's



thank you

more crits?

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0854.jpg

bump for any crits?

Germer
03-11-2009, 03:53 PM
ya we dont want you to slowly start telling us about your personal life, because we really dont care. this is a graffiti forum.

WHAT??
03-11-2009, 03:56 PM
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1976/img1845c.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6131/img1846d.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5066/img1848f.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1831/img1849.jpg

ProvenT13- i cant tell if its etek or eteh, but either way, fix the last letter a bit. dope marker though.

Woe- long hands aren't my thing, but they are pretty good.

Ages- the 3rd one is the best.

mario man
03-11-2009, 03:57 PM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1301/tag5frdig.th.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag5frdig.jpg)
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/6335/tag1frdig.th.jpg (http://img401.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag1frdig.jpg)
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/363/tag2frdig.th.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag2frdig.jpg)
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/2868/tag3frdig.th.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag3frdig.jpg)
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/6679/tag4frdig.th.jpg (http://img22.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag4frdig.jpg)
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4533/tag6w.th.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag6w.jpg)

Any suggestions? Witch one is best?

I don't like my 'P' any suggestions to a new one?

sorry for so many fotos

Black Flag
03-11-2009, 04:03 PM
Just in case you didn't know, fap (fapping) is internet talk for jerking off.

I don't care what you write personally, just letting you know what connotations the word has.

WHAT??
03-11-2009, 04:10 PM
^ haha i noticed that. I was gonna let him figure it out for himself.

graffdabusup
03-11-2009, 04:36 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/steeze.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/steeze2.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/dutchmasters.jpg

WoeInfinite
03-11-2009, 04:46 PM
freshhh

Zase
03-11-2009, 06:34 PM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1301/tag5frdig.th.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag5frdig.jpg)
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/6335/tag1frdig.th.jpg (http://img401.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag1frdig.jpg)
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/363/tag2frdig.th.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag2frdig.jpg)
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/2868/tag3frdig.th.jpg (http://img9.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag3frdig.jpg)
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/6679/tag4frdig.th.jpg (http://img22.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag4frdig.jpg)
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4533/tag6w.th.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tag6w.jpg)

Any suggestions? Witch one is best?

I don't like my 'P' any suggestions to a new one?

sorry for so many fotos

really really really start doing 1 liners cuzz 3 letter name with good oppertunety or what ever that shit is spelled
if ya do 1 liners and preactise them
flow will come for itself and u be doing 3 1 liners just as fast as 1 loose letter taggie

oxiclean
03-11-2009, 06:37 PM
Lol @the guy writing fap.

skull-e
03-11-2009, 07:05 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/PhonePictures048.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/PhonePictures055.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/PhonePictures056.jpg

FAP: fapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapafap...aaaaaahhh
graffdabusup: Loveing the dutch master handy, too sexy.

oxiclean
03-11-2009, 07:34 PM
Sexy tazr, sexy.

skull-e
03-11-2009, 07:39 PM
re you coming onto me?

graffdabusup
03-11-2009, 07:39 PM
tazr.... your shit is clean as fuhhhhhh love the style...exchange?

oxiclean
03-11-2009, 07:39 PM
I'm coming on to your handstyles.

skull-e
03-11-2009, 08:06 PM
yeah, sure, handy exchange?

graffdabusup
03-11-2009, 08:17 PM
yezzah!

WHAT??
03-11-2009, 08:39 PM
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1976/img1845c.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6131/img1846d.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5066/img1848f.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1831/img1849.jpg

WHAT??
03-11-2009, 08:40 PM
^ crits greatly appreciated!!

skull-e
03-11-2009, 08:40 PM
What do you write again?

graffdabusup
03-11-2009, 08:44 PM
check yo pms lol

klic
03-11-2009, 08:49 PM
edit: haha probably the last set of pics of the chairlifts since its getting warmer out

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag27.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag28.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag29.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag30.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag31.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag32.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag33.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag34.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag35.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag36.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag37.jpg

tazr - love the first one, cant really tell thats a Z on the second one

fap - do all uppercase letters, keep them the same size

mone - looks fresh, the bottom one on the first pic is the best mone tag

what - use IMG code, and stick to paper for now

eten - it would look so much better if there was a different letter in place of the T (for the tenth time haha but its up to you)

woe - i wanna see you do a handstyle that isnt philly or cursive

skull-e
03-11-2009, 09:02 PM
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1976/img1845c.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6131/img1846d.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5066/img1848f.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1831/img1849.jpg

Give crits to get them the fuck back, jesus.

graffdabusup
03-11-2009, 09:10 PM
skull i sent the exchange pics through pm

Genghis Tron.
03-11-2009, 09:21 PM
http://i551.photobucket.com/albums/ii452/Kesoww/handsteezer002.jpg

Tazr! REALLY diggin' your shit bro.

klic
03-11-2009, 10:17 PM
edit: haha probably the last set of pics of the chairlifts since its getting warmer out

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag27.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag28.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag29.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag30.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag31.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag32.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag33.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag34.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag35.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag36.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SANEKTag37.jpg

tazr - love the first one, cant really tell thats a Z on the second one

fap - do all uppercase letters, keep them the same size

mone - looks fresh, the bottom one on the first pic is the best mone tag

what - use IMG code, and stick to paper for now

eten - it would look so much better if there was a different letter in place of the T (for the tenth time haha but its up to you)

woe - i wanna see you do a handstyle that isnt philly or cursive

bottom bump

lusek - looks good, make your L smaller

provinT13
03-11-2009, 10:30 PM
Klic how many times I gotta tell you lol. I'm gonna work on it for a little it doesn't really matter much what I write now I'm just tryng to get a basic handstyle.

klic
03-11-2009, 10:33 PM
Klic how many times I gotta tell you lol. I'm gonna work on it for a little it doesn't really matter much what I write now I'm just tryng to get a basic handstyle.

i know man, it just bothers me though lol