Tags

[klic]

Klic how many times I gotta tell you lol. I'm gonna work on it for a little it doesn't really matter much what I write now I'm just tryng to get a basic handstyle.

i know man, it just bothers me though lol

[Apocalypse]

Sanek-not bad for getting up, but it still needs a little mroe jazz, or style or flow to it....it's a good basic tag tho..

Lusek-eh not bad, do something diff with the l and the E

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/18/l_9a2e502facd3454a944eb230fd53d66a.jpg

Crits?

[DirtyDozen520]

Warrior-looks kinda messy at the "WA"..but its alright in my opinion

IS THIS:http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02959.jpg

Better than

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02957.jpg

Btw, can i get some real good crits on the 'A" and how to make it betteR?

[Save and Kill]

Warrior-The w and a do seem alittle off and i'm not sure about the cross thing at the bottom, but pretty good
Ages- I like the second one better and on the A maybe have the crossline come out the sides?

[Apocalypse]

^yes top is better, more clean, and do a lower case A....much more variety of shapes and style variations than upper case.

[provinT13]

Genghis Like the first, but you gotta kill the space in the kwt.

DirtyDozen520 I like the second one, try to keep your letters the same size and height, they seem to slant down to the right.

[DirtyDozen520]

ok i sorta ran outa paper so im guna use my stickerssss from now on
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02961.jpg
I tried makin that top left part of the "A" and the "S" go into each other sorta, you know?

you think that has some potential?

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/1126/cimg0463j.jpg

[Save and Kill]

Ages- that looks better than both the ones you posted earlier
dont like the little dashes above the A and S

Cross Em Out- not the best. work on it more

[provinT13]

DirtyDozen520 It seems like you're getting a bit ahead of yourself. Have you looked around a bit to get some ideas to work with? Your a seems to be dominating all the other letters in size.

Cross em out Don't like all the dots of paint at every corner.

[Mr yarbles]

At first glance cross's looked like complete fucking shit
But after I examined it more it's dope haha

[provinT13]

Left one is better

[Mr yarbles]

that sebr is also a one liner...

[bak]

ages - keep tryin man

seat hit
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/03-11-09_1704.jpg

[Icons]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/5454/tagz.jpg

bak, take out that little scribble under your tag. leave the bar and it'll be dope.

[skull-e]

Icons: Loose the arrow, lose the little bar after your z and make your C less of a used staple.
Bak: get a better picture, sorry I can't read it =/
CrossEmout: I reaaaaaally dig the handstyle on the left.
D12: I lie where you're going with your handy, now just practice making it whole movements so it's not so shaky.

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/PhonePictures048.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/PhonePictures055.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/PhonePictures056.jpg

FAP: fapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapafap...aaaaaahhh
graffdabusup: Loveing the dutch master handy, too sexy.

top O the page crit bump

[Bink1]

tazr wanna handsteez exchange?

flicks for talkin ..

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6191/dsc06525p.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06525p.jpg)


http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/1543/dsc06524.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06524.jpg)

[Zase]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2n0vqck.jpg[QUOTE=Seaz;415260]http://i42.tinypic.com/104rxnm.jpg

[Reap]

zaseone- i love the 2nd pic it looks pretty tight dude

Teper- nice, simple, clean.

conz- that is pretty sick maybe add some quotation marks? dunno, looks great already

what you guys think?
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7131/sdc11266k.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sdc11266k.jpg)

[sallybsk]

reap.
that is fucking horrible.
and if that's supposed to look like an R... it doesn't xD and the random curly thing coming off the last letter... really bad.
I READ IT AS.
BEAE. because if that's supposed to say reap... just think of normal letters man. don't have to pull off some crazy shit.

tazr, that first tag is soooo clean. what marker did you use? I usually never ask people... but daaaamn. your a is a bit sloppy at times though.

zase... good letters. but I don't like how it's like random as some letters are bigger and some are smaller. I think you're trying to pull off the style where it's biggest in the middle... am i rite? well. like a pyramid or arrow or whatnot. but idk, sometimes you don't get it. so it just looks like some letters are bigger and some are not.

GRIM! you're improving... like I can see it. I don't like how you bent your 'I'... I know it's hard to stylize an I... try doing it from the bottom of the I up. so you write the I like a flare or something. it won't be completely straight probably. but it won't be bent like yours... thus giving it some style. And i meant write it like you were flaring. but with a marker, so i'm not saying to try to flare.

[WHAT??]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/901/img1903d.th.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1903d.jpg)

Reap- i cant tell what the last letter is, fix it up a little bit. lose the quotation marks too.

Bink- bottom picture's dope. where was the top picture taken?

Tazr- fresh tags.

[sallybsk]

era.... i don't like pointy letters. ugh. I don't know why anyone does. try curving things man. it's just not good. to be honest. tags are basically FLOW... so make sure your shit flows.

[klic]

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #3***
Word: Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger
Deadline: Friday, March 13, 2009 (6PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic).
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

the deadline is tommorow and i only have two entries so far so do it up

and you write the whole thing (you dont just pick one word), just thought id clear that up because a lot of people have been asking me lately

era - try an uppercase A

[Bink1]

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/901/img1903d.th.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1903d.jpg)

Reap- i cant tell what the last letter is, fix it up a little bit. lose the quotation marks too.

Bink- bottom picture's dope. where was the top picture taken?

Tazr- fresh tags.

top picture is a tag on a billboard. :D

[Kester]

there you go
http://www.zix.co.il/images/1089935085.jpg (http://zix.co.il)

[oxiclean]

changing my name soon.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/Picture3-1.png

[oxiclean]

Oops forgot to give crits.
Tazr-Love it, the top one bugs me though, the a on it.
Tep-like it simple.
Zase-its pretty good but the s bugs me
reap-looks like it says beae
Era-don't like the pointyness.
kest-i like it but the s is kinda weird.

[sallybsk]

decent flow oxi.
try making something besides a downer :p
and if you're going to do a downer, underline it, going down, like the tag. the straight underline annoys me.
but letters are pretty good, flow is pretty good. I think I like the capital E better, but E is definitely the weakest letter.

[oxiclean]

I don't know what a downer is.

[sallybsk]

downer. where each letter is lower than the next.
I've also heard people call when you just write your name vertically(from top to bottom) in a skinny place, like a street light, a downer.
but as you can see, each of your letters starts lower than the next.

[oxiclean]

Oh, i see.

[skull-e]

tazr, that first tag is soooo clean. what marker did you use? I usually never ask people... but daaaamn. your a is a bit sloppy at times though.



pentel shite mothafucka

[Apocalypse]

Trying out some new stuff..

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/34/l_bdaa5cfcb2ea408ea54b1e27bb3bb001.jpg

or

this is hard to read, but I'm trying to get like a complex style down...
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/55/l_2a728ca355454f119d4aec94b215136d.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Complex is not what you need to be doing
Not now not ever

[Apocalypse]

Complex is not what you need to be doing
Not now not ever


Actually you're totally wrong, if I want a complex style I'll have one thanks?

I can do simple stuff, I had a really good tag with my old name, but I had to change my name due to 5-0 shit, now I want to get more complex....my old tag was already calligraphy like....so really, you don't understand, if you don't like it tell me how to fix, if not, screw off. This "don't ever do shit, cause your toy" is fucking stupid and should end.

[klic]

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #4***
Word: Immaculate
Deadline: Friday, March 20, 2009 (5PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic).
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

lets try and get more entries than last weeks.

changed my name to janek, went to "my wall" lol to practice my handstyle cuz i have horrible can control

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag7.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag8.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag9.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag1.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag10.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag11.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag13.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag14.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag15.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag16.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag2.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag3.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag4.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag5.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag6.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag12.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag17.jpg

apocalypse - dont go starting shit here, atleast post something simple and then we'll see if you can go more complex or not

reap - keep all of your letters the same size, lose the swirl on the bottom of your p, get rid of all the attachments, round out your letters, dont make them so sharp

zase - looks good, id keep all your letters the same size on the second one if i were you

teper - try and do something with your r to make it more complex, i.e. extend the bottom leg of it and loop it around or something

iconz - stick to paper for now, dont make your letters so jagged

[TaggitUp]

just got into taggin. a couple ideas i've been working on with a sharpie:

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb153/yoshiii27/DSC00806.jpg
Wsabi
Tokio (messed up the T)
Soshi
Wasabi
Sooshi

crits please? which are good, which aren't? suggestions? thx

[Wallace]

^^ none are good, go simple


Actually you're totally wrong, if I want a complex style I'll have one thanks?

I can do simple stuff, I had a really good tag with my old name, but I had to change my name due to 5-0 shit, now I want to get more complex....my old tag was already calligraphy like....so really, you don't understand, if you don't like it tell me how to fix, if not, screw off. This "don't ever do shit, cause your toy" is fucking stupid and should end.

lol youre going nowhere with that ego and attitude. from the looks of what youve done, you havent been in the game that long...

immaculate, entry for the toy battle
only did it once, didnt tweak it at all. sloppy as fuck
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2259/img00231p.jpg (http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00231p.jpg)

[Apocalypse]

apocalypse - dont go starting shit here, atleast post something simple and then we'll see if you can go more complex or not


I have, and people said it was good and move on, in this name. And in my old name lots of peeps liked it, it wasn't on this account though. So now I'm moving on.

[Mr yarbles]

Actually you're totally wrong, if I want a complex style I'll have one thanks?

I can do simple stuff, I had a really good tag with my old name, but I had to change my name due to 5-0 shit, now I want to get more complex....my old tag was already calligraphy like....so really, you don't understand, if you don't like it tell me how to fix, if not, screw off. This "don't ever do shit, cause your toy" is fucking stupid and should end.

Don't fucking talk to me you flaming fucking homo
I got cop problems too I aint change my fucking name
Don't be talking down to people who burn the fuck out of you
DOn't be telling me I'm wrong you're the one with a fucking broken hand
I was being nice but now I aint
Go out and get ragged like the fucking toy you are

I'm pretty fucking sure I know a whole lot more shit then you do

[Apocalypse]

Don't fucking talk to me you flaming fucking homo
I got cop problems too I aint change my fucking name
Don't be talking down to people who burn the fuck out of you
DOn't be telling me I'm wrong you're the one with a fucking broken hand
I was being nice but now I aint
Go out and get ragged like the fucking toy you are

I'm pretty fucking sure I know a whole lot more shit then you do


oh really do you? because you've been drawing longer that gives you the full fucking right to tear and rag? Bullshit.

And if you got ragged and written statement against you and your name is on file, and they see any shit I end up in juvy, yeah sure like I'd keep my name. Why the hell be stupid owe a couple grand, go to juvy, and get a stupid record cause I didn't change my name, that doesn't make sense at all.


lol youre going nowhere with that ego and attitude. from the looks of what youve done, you havent been in the game that long...

beside the one tag, have you seen any of my stuff? I've been in about 2 years, only about 1 year on the streets.

[Mr yarbles]

My name is on file you stupid mother fucker
and where I live and all that shit

and yeah I been writing longer than you I'm better than you so uh yeah that does give me the right to try and help your stupid ass out

and if you've been in for two years that's fucking sad
I been in for a year and a half and I burn the shit out of you
I could do a tag with a broken arm blindfolded while drunk and still do better than your sorry ass excuse for a tag

oh and if you don't believe me maybe we should do a little comparison
http://i42.tinypic.com/2w2m25i.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/n2nayf.jpg

Against this

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/34/l_bdaa5cfcb2ea408ea54b1e27bb3bb001.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/55/l_2a728ca355454f119d4aec94b215136d.jpg

[Apocalypse]

2 years on and off, but either way tell me all the shit you want, some progress faster than others, its what happens in the end that matters.

And good your names on file, well a)I'm most likely in a smaller town, and b)have fun in juvy.

[Mr yarbles]

all you're doin is actin like a bitch
Like you scared of juvie
Are you kidding me
How does fucking prison sound you idiot
You're gonna get caught at some fucking point

[asiam]

i thought juvy was for kids..hm.

[sallybsk]

lol apocalypse that shit is wack, don't start beef.
and for "complex" styles... wow.
you should be writing long enough to know how to pull off "complex" shit in handies.
COMPLEX HOW?
Philly style?
LA STEEZ?
COMPLEX... THAT'S FUCKING VAGUE.
Develop each letter first dumb fuck
and rapist rapes you, give up. In that comparison, easily. his hand > yours

[sallybsk]

oh and serious crits
taggitup
this is not tagging, none of us are taggers, if you consider yourself a "tagger", please get the fuck out. This is graffiti, tags are a handstyle, normal writing with style.
Go to the new to graff thread. look at some flix. read some shit.
it's quite horrid, don't do complex shit. or try to I should say.

[Mr yarbles]

My handle isn't even complex it's got mad ass simple letters
WHy can't kids understand that
Wildstyle bullshit tags get you nowhere

[Apocalypse]

all you're doin is actin like a bitch
Like you scared of juvie
Are you kidding me
How does fucking prison sound you idiot
You're gonna get caught at some fucking point

umm neither sound great, do you WANT to go or something?

Why the hell would I want to go....

...and no there is a high chance, but with luck and SMARTS you won't necessarily go....


btw my old name...

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/24/l_5702ee4ca3a445ae84ba60049fafb858.jpg

[..romero..]

apocalypse stfu.rapist burns you....


both of yall need to post pictuuuuuures.not bicker back and forth


but yeah id take whatever advice he gave you.idk what he told you but whatever.and for 2 years it doesnt look like you were doin much of anything in that time period ive been writing less than you and my shit burns yours haha.ill post up in a minute probably but idk why im getting into this fight but i got time to kill so bring it on bitches hahahah.

[sallybsk]

My handle isn't even complex it's got mad ass simple letters
WHy can't kids understand that
Wildstyle bullshit tags get you nowhere

i knoww
I was talking to apocalypse.

[Wallace]

My handle isn't even complex it's got mad ass simple letters
WHy can't kids understand that
Wildstyle bullshit tags get you nowhere

so true

everyone should just ignore apaco, he has no logic and is not the most intelligent

[bak]

man ya *****s need to chill real talk braggin about gettin caught is like braggin about how dumb u can be

a hand is pretty but thowies burners pieces > kills all tags

[Apocalypse]

i knoww
I was talking to apocalypse.


All I wanna say is last week you even said my old tag was good and had nice flow....

[Wallace]

congratulations one person at the same level as you complimented you

new page bump because of all this drama


immaculate, entry for the toy battle
only did it once, didnt tweak it at all. sloppy as fuck
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2259/img00231p.jpg (http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00231p.jpg)

[TaggitUp]

oh and serious crits
taggitup
this is not tagging, none of us are taggers, if you consider yourself a "tagger", please get the fuck out. This is graffiti, tags are a handstyle, normal writing with style.
Go to the new to graff thread. look at some flix. read some shit.
it's quite horrid, don't do complex shit. or try to I should say.

alright...thanks man

[provinT13]

Actually you're totally wrong, if I want a complex style I'll have one thanks?

I can do simple stuff, I had a really good tag with my old name, but I had to change my name due to 5-0 shit, now I want to get more complex....my old tag was already calligraphy like....so really, you don't understand, if you don't like it tell me how to fix, if not, screw off. This "don't ever do shit, cause your toy" is fucking stupid and should end.

You post here you get crits, if you don't like them then get the fuck out. And if you were good with your old name, i'm guessing you'd have a decent alphabet, so your new name wouldn't be to hard with your old style.....

[provinT13]

just got into taggin. a couple ideas i've been working on with a sharpie:


Please go here http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

And like previously stated, we're writers.

[TaggitUp]

so is the tagz tagz tagz thread considered tagging, or they too are also writers, just on a higher level?.. thanks for the crit sally, i'll go simpler. i checked out that link, but it mainly focuses on 3d stuff which i'm not really trying to learn yet. I just want to learn more about this 'writing.'

[klic]

so is the tagz tagz tagz thread considered tagging, or they too are also writers, just on a higher level?.. thanks for the crit sally, i'll go simpler. i checked out that link, but it mainly focuses on 3d stuff which i'm not really trying to learn yet. I just want to learn more about this 'writing.'

dont call it "tagging" call it writing.. taggings the stupid gay word that toys and the media use to describe graffiti

here you should read this, just some basic graffiti terminology to get you familiar with what were talking about http://www.puregraffiti.com/glossary.html , i dont know where the second half went though

and somebody crit my shit or im gonna flip a bitch lol

[BigBlueViolence]

The words burner and blockbuster make me lol.

[provinT13]

so is the tagz tagz tagz thread considered tagging, or they too are also writers, just on a higher level?.. thanks for the crit sally, i'll go simpler. i checked out that link, but it mainly focuses on 3d stuff which i'm not really trying to learn yet. I just want to learn more about this 'writing.'

Read the first post by koper, about the rules, industry, and style of writing, because you don't seem to have much knowledge (no offense)

And second, it's never called tagging, it's writing. Tags tags tags is just a thread dedicated to picures of tags. They are tags, but when you do them you're writing, not tagging.

[Bink1]

janek , im not rlly into looping my R's leg , it would look horrible in my simple steez.

[provinT13]

I made an angry face outta my tag

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0858.jpg

oh and I added a little tiny c for a nose to the bottom and left of the t but that was after the pic

[Hyphy]

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/7144/img008viz.jpg

crits?

[sallybsk]

is that first letter supposed to be an R?
or a Z?
and then a "ead"?
looooks bad.
I can't even see your individual letters, and the ones I do see, are mediocre at best. It has no flow, just looks like you were in a rush, or are in kindergarten. Just really don't like that style. Slow it down, don't write slanted, and maybe stretch your letters vertically. because your letters keep seeming to go wide too much.

[what4joke...]

whats it say... if ur first letter is an R modify that shit!!! i'll up some handies later.. MAYBE. my KAKE handie is pretty shweet... lol no

[walkingcarpet]

Whatcha think?
Yeah I know it's not great but I'm kinda proud it didn't turn out THAT horrible haha.

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/CarpetThrow2-1.jpg

I don't put the arrow on the T much but this is the only one I scanned so yeah

[Hyphy]

Carpet - The only letter I like is the "A". Everything else needs work in my opinion.

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4931/img011x.jpg


"Agro". Crits?

[ASTAR.DWSP]

The words burner and blockbuster make me lol.

this made me lol..

"But filling in your bomb makes you .001 less of a toy! So, go out and fill in those throwies!"

[klic]

agro - try an uppercase G and loose the big ol attachment on it

carpet - give crits from now on if you want to get them, make all your letters the same size, dont put an arrow on your t, do a lowercase e

provin - wtf lol

somebody crit mine or im gonna shit a brick or maybe just bump it again lol

[ASTAR.DWSP]

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #4***
Word: Immaculate
Deadline: Friday, March 20, 2009 (5PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic).
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

lets try and get more entries than last weeks.

changed my name to janek, went to "my wall" lol to practice my handstyle cuz i have horrible can control

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag7.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag8.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag9.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag1.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag10.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag11.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag13.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag14.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag15.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag16.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag2.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag3.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag4.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag5.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag6.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag12.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag17.jpg

apocalypse - dont go starting shit here, atleast post something simple and then we'll see if you can go more complex or not

reap - keep all of your letters the same size, lose the swirl on the bottom of your p, get rid of all the attachments, round out your letters, dont make them so sharp

zase - looks good, id keep all your letters the same size on the second one if i were you

teper - try and do something with your r to make it more complex, i.e. extend the bottom leg of it and loop it around or something

iconz - stick to paper for now, dont make your letters so jagged

a little plain for my taste.. and try the swril on the K the other way so it goes up not down.. i will show you what i mean in a min here..

[klic]

yea i what you mean with the swirl, have it going counterclockwise not clockwise, and start it at the bottom not the top

[ASTAR.DWSP]

like this janek.. (just a few quick shit handies..) PS srry its in highlighter its all i have in reach..

http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q291/Tokie420/Picture.jpg

[provinT13]

provin - wtf lol

Lol is that good or bad?
Klic- All I can say is make sure the back of the J is defined against the a

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0858.jpg

bump for crits on just the letters or the whole thing.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

get a highliter if you have nothing else.. at least they have chissel tips.. and keep tryen.

[Hyphy]

provinT13 - Looks weird IMO. Try using a thicker marker.

Which one should I work with?

Agro
Kona
Reach

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8576/tagsx.png

More of "Reach"

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3800/reach.png

[ASTAR.DWSP]

none.. there all bunk words.. write.... lolercoaster...

venks theres a word im sure no one has

[JasK]

provinT13 - Looks weird IMO. Try using a thicker marker.

Which one should I work with?

Agro
Kona
Reach

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8576/tagsx.png

More of "Reach"

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3800/reach.png

It's just like, regular handwriting. Nothing really "graffiti" about it. =\
http://wimg.co.uk/6ewz75.png

[Hyphy]

Jask - The vertical ones are shit. For the ones on the left, take out the quotation marks and that blob in front of the "J" and you got yourself a clean tag.

BTW, mine were supposed to be simples...

[ASTAR.DWSP]

Jask - The vertical ones are shit. For the ones on the left, take out the quotation marks and that blob in front of the "J" and you got yourself a clean tag.

BTW, mine were supposed to be simples...

i agree with hyphy the quotes need to go and so does the star in front of the j needs to be gone.

[expozay]

jask i agree with hyphy and astar. looks tight except for the star.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3116/3356646345_028ab587d3_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3454/3356646341_4afcaa3a1f_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3663/3356646335_06ba29b6cc_m.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Lol is that good or bad?
Klic- All I can say is make sure the back of the J is defined against the a

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0858.jpg

bump for crits on just the letters or the whole thing.

You're trying to hard
Grab yourself a pen if you like thin shit

oh and klic dude you know better than to write ja !?

[ASTAR.DWSP]

jask i agree with hyphy and astar. looks tight except for the star.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3116/3356646345_028ab587d3_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3454/3356646341_4afcaa3a1f_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3663/3356646335_06ba29b6cc_m.jpg

round the top of your E.. and that would be a deece. simp. handy..

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237147645.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237147554.jpg

Boredom ensues....

[ASTAR.DWSP]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237147645.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237147554.jpg

Boredom ensues....

that O is fucking hideous..

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237149570.jpg

[IlikePie]

that O is fucking hideous..

I'm just fucking around. I could never figure out a decent O for that style. Whatever.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

I'm just fucking around. I could never figure out a decent O for that style. Whatever.

just use a regular O then.. lol

[IlikePie]

That's crazy.... Maybe just crazy enough to work!

[Hyphy]

jask i agree with hyphy and astar. looks tight except for the star.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3116/3356646345_028ab587d3_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3454/3356646341_4afcaa3a1f_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3663/3356646335_06ba29b6cc_m.jpg

Try capitalizing the "e" and take out that line at the bottom.

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3800/reach.png

Bump. Crits?

[provinT13]

expozay If the second pic was where the first one was with those drips, i'd be nice and clean

Hyphy I can't say much other then I like the bold ones more, they just all seem to be too simple.

[Sizzuurp]

expo second ones hot fix the e
hyphy, mad boring, there almost too simple

[Hyphy]

Yeh, It's just my "base" tag. Any tips on adding some swag to it?

[Mr yarbles]

You guys need to stop telling people it's too plain
Then they take it the wrong way and turn their tags to shit
Style will grow into it
You can't just expect them to force steez into their hand

STeez comes with time and practice

[Hyphy]

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2784/reach2.png

Messed around with the "E", "A", and "H" and added a star...Reaching for the stars. Get it? =P

[provinT13]

Just because I say it looks plain doesn't mean i'm telling him to try and go wild on it. But who cares, onto the crits

Hyphy That's better, still simple, but enough to make it a decent simple tag.

[Lost.1.]

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2784/reach2.png

Messed around with the "E", "A", and "H" and added a star...Reaching for the stars. Get it? =P

Too simple i dont like it that much, its like how i write my notes for bio 30 or some shit ah sorry man.

ill post mine up some time soon.

[sallybsk]

it's whatever he digs man, i've seen way worse handies, at least he's not over steezing it like most toys.

[ANDRO]

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7637/dsc0124y.jpg

[Genghis Tron.]

steezin, specially that R.

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0227.jpg

just a quick one. wanted to see what people think of it.


andro- im really liking it.

[bak]

reach not bad simple tho

andro what did u write with??

foer r is not good

plain and tall
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/03-15-09_1654.jpg

[bak]

srry double post

[Five Sixx Ace]

bak, i usally dont make it that far down, if i even do the sweepback.

[klic]

You're trying to hard
Grab yourself a pen if you like thin shit

oh and klic dude you know better than to write ja !?

haha i knew somebody was going to say something about that, there wasnt enough room to write the whole thing

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237175731.jpg

[provinT13]

Five sixx ace I think if you made your letters the same size it would look better

[provinT13]

Andro what did you write with? I like the a, d, r, and both o's

Trying some new stuff

"God damn kids!!!"

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0863.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0865.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0866.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0867.jpg

[bak]

foer drop the "" and try simple keyboard letters and if u du upper case letters make them all upper case same for lower case

[Wallace]

etek.
your new k, is not a k... its an n

stay away from faces, dont really fit in tags

[provinT13]

yes it's an n... I changed.

[ANDRO]

i used a thick black uniball ben for that andooner tag

and provint13 - im not sure why you changed the k to an n but i think the k is a better looking letter to finish it off with. it has more potential for better style i think. and i would drop the line under the tag, it just doesnt fit and makes it too cluttered.

[Bink1]

eten drop the addons and level the letters .

[ASTAR.DWSP]

yes it's an n... I changed.

nice to see you got a marker :) pens and pencils dont work for tags :P

[BigBlueViolence]

I care disagree
http://i42.tinypic.com/140vneo.jpg

[ASTAR.DWSP]

I care disagree
http://i42.tinypic.com/140vneo.jpg

but that would look like 20x better with a marker :P

[sallybsk]

ETEN man
you haven't changed much, idk it seems like you don't take crits. ahaha
your shit looks like exactly the same :P
don't do the squiggly line out of the E. or the Curly one.
that's a no no to the last two pictures.
here's some more specifics:
I think that E is the best letter(not saying much), that T sucks, it's so out of place looking, try a capital T.
again try a capital N... because your lowercase N like that just doesn't look good. I don't like how straight everything is(especially in the N). it's got no flow, and that's what you need in a tag. Try your E in caps, because in my opinion they're easier to flow and steez.

[provinT13]

sallybsk I guess I just haven't thought the crits were good idk, but thaks for the tips, and yes I can agree it seems like I haven't tried to change anything, but after work i'll hit the books and put all your tips to the test

Astar I have plenty of markers lol. I used a pencil because it was all I had sitting next to the computer.

[JasK]

EARN?
That E is awesome.

[provinT13]

Messing around with a new name, but i'm guessing there is already a mes

These letters seem to flow better then eten

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0872.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0873.jpg

[expozay]

provin- i really like the name etek i think u should stick with that.
big blue-im feelin that shit for some reason.

been trying out expose as opposed to expo i like how it looks better.
also kind of been feelin the name emik so tried it out too.
crits?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3594/3361106074_b68f59306e_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3644/3361106086_97ca6c52a9_m.jpg

[IKT]

Ex : the X and the S are clean; the e makes me feel funny..;)

Give me some Crits

[IKT]

Redness

[ASTAR.DWSP]

expo.. still not digen the E..

[sallybsk]

nmbre
new to graff thread.
read up
go simpler.
fill a notebook with your handy, come talk to me. It'll still look bad, but you'll get better and have new ideas.

[JasK]

Messing around with a new name, but i'm guessing there is already a mes

These letters seem to flow better then eten

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0872.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0873.jpg

It looks pretty plain, just like real letters or whatever. Or is that what you're aiming for?

http://wimg.co.uk/o7cjQ0.png

[provinT13]

expo Love the first one, espically the x, don't like the second

IKT What is it supposed to say? Nmbre?

Jask Yes i'm trying to keep it simple since i'm still toy

I think you need to go more simple, the only one that is decent is the bottom left.

[oxiclean]

Provin- It might just be me, but those s's look like g's.

[RAHK]

MES- Iguess it's good if your only going to do those letters.
EXPO - I love it, were you using the wrong side of the marker near the end though , because it look like it lost some thickness.
JASK- Slow down , take your time work on some letters.


Here mine. Crits please.

http://i39.tinypic.com/2qi8hp4.png

[expozay]

rahk im feelin that shit.

jask work on all ur letters just looks like u wrote it as fast as u could.

[JasK]

MES- Iguess it's good if your only going to do those letters.
EXPO - I love it, were you using the wrong side of the marker near the end though , because it look like it lost some thickness.
JASK- Slow down , take your time work on some letters.


Here mine. Crits please.

http://i39.tinypic.com/2qi8hp4.png

Those dots are sick. The long style + straight lines are great.

http://wimg.co.uk/zInQE9.png

[ASTAR.DWSP]

those dots are sick. The long style + straight lines are great.

http://wimg.co.uk/zinqe9.png

omfg waste of dhl stickers!!! Send all your stickers to me!

[expozay]

jask waste of slaps....

[ASTAR.DWSP]

jask waste of slaps....

i know hey.. i want some of those stickers so bad.. and he just wasted 2 of them :(

[Mr yarbles]

Jask wack

rahk wack

mgs alright but your s is awful

expose not so great
Get a different name I know you're gonna be like but this name means something and I have ups
But it dosn't matter
No one knows of you right now so I'd say change your name
It'll help in the long run

oh yeah and chisel tips hide hurting handstyles
If you can rock something good with a pen you can rock it with anything.
Pens help you get more control with your letters

[expozay]

actually name doesnt mean anything at all just starting expo randomly one day adn then added the se on the other day for a change.

been trying out emik too lately.

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237175731.jpg

Bump.

[RAHK]

Raby - I would prefer to see it horizonattaly but meh. Y is a little all over the place. If you look at it individual. But it looks even worse when you got the other letters plain then you got that. But try screwin' around with other letters get some style.

Also , if you look back at my tag, I know you ain't suppose to put quotes because makes you sound all cool. But are my dots ight? Like I don't want to sound cocky.

[DirtyDozen520]

speakin of changin name, i need to drop 'ages' and get a new name.
i didnt think a g would be so hard when i though of the name

[TaggitUp]

im trying to find a name that sticks

mime
artic
skabr
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb153/yoshiii27/0316091921_0001.jpg
crits?

[EGO31]

Raby- thought that Y was a D.
clean it up

[sallybsk]

graffiti is not arrows
try keeping your letters the same size.
and lose all unnecessary extensions

[klic]

Those dots are sick. The long style + straight lines are great.

http://wimg.co.uk/zInQE9.png

are those the dhl express stickers?

and provin, dont listen to whoever said eteks a better name

[expozay]

just wondering why the change from sanek to janek?

[bak]

reach not bad simple tho

andro what did u write with??

foer r is not good

plain and tall
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/03-15-09_1654.jpg

page bump

sally crit my ugly hands

[provinT13]

TaggitUp Kill the arrows, you're trying to get ahead of yourself, stay simple

Expozay I respectfully disagree with mr. yarbles :) I like the name and love that first tag, espically the x.

Jask GO SIMPLE!!! And please don't pratice on stickers, grab a book, and fill it page after page of your hand, one after the other, until you can start to tweak it. Did you check out the new to graff thread? Click Here (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185)
IlikePie The z doesn't flow at all, I actually think it's fuckin ugly

Klic Finally we agree :p Mes sounds better, flows better, and has the same personal meaning as eten.

Bump for constructive crits

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0872.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0874.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0873.jpg

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0242.jpg

fixed it up, dont mind otis at the bottom thats just my buddy.

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0246.jpg

testing out my new otr h2b.

provin- im liking it, it looks good.

[provinT13]

Five Sixx Ace Not really liking the E. Move the E and the R closer together and closer to the O

[IlikePie]

That's not a Z, just a 3. Someone was driving up right when I did it so I was like, ahhhh!
Just something for my buddy Diver, 'cuz we were just talking about hands.
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237261504.jpg

I guess I'll crit....

Taggitup- Stop trying so hard. Hands come in time.
Jask- I remember being at that point where I knew kind of what I wanted, but I didn't know how to do it. Just keep writing on every piece of blank paper you get, keep practicing.
Bak- I'm a fan of that style, I'm working on learning how to do that kinda thing myself.
Mes- Don't practice with such a big marker. It makes everything you do look sloppy, just use a highlighter. I remember getting my first fat ass pilot marker, and I just wrote on anything I could fit my name on. Don't do that, you're just wasting ink. Your S is definitely the weakest part of your name. 3 letter names are hard to get a flow going, maybe try something with 4 letters, it's easier that way.
Foer- You're just trying too hard. Just keep working I guess.

And all of you guys who don't know where to start. Start with your normal handwriting. If you can make it look stylish, then you have a nice start for a good handstyle. It doesn't have to be flashy, just give it some funk. You know? I'll do your names if you want, 'cuz I don't have much to do with my time ever :P Just ask.

[Zase]

http://i43.tinypic.com/qxrjbk.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/9lix79.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/72cc3r.jpg

[..romero..]

zase...your s looks like an 8 dude.and your z like a 2.haha.you dont practice your writes often enough im guessing.your pieces are straight tho.

[..romero..]

ILIKEPIE(metoo:)) i think you should work on making the letters the same size instead of rocking it like that.you know the way the e is.also take the hook off the i.

JASK.dont waste slaps.get a eraseboard like me and practice on that.you will thank me.no need to waste a forest of paper ya dig??

FOER.make the e simpler.it doesnt fit with the letters.

MES.you stuff is a mess.especially that s homeboy.i say dont have it pointed at the bottom and just do like a regular s.i know i suck at crits but fuck it.


http://i40.tinypic.com/wb4774.jpg

a new name im thinkin bout rockin.says 4sake.as in forsaken.what yall think? should i use it or not.i know its kinda crappy now but i think i can fuck with it and it will turn out good.


any crits? theyed be appreciated.

[Save and Kill]

i dont know about using a 4 in it but hey if you can do it then do it!
damn i was seriously just thinking about trying to write sake. xD but you blow me outa the water sooooo
as for a crit i dont like the mass of swirls on the bottom

[..romero..]

yeah the swirls...their kinda my thing haha.hella peeps already write sake but i know of none that write 4sake or 4saken.so HAHA 1up for mero.

[Save and Kill]

maybe just one less swirl??? hahah over all its pretty clean looking to me

[Zase]

just doing ma 1 liner tang

[IlikePie]

That's not a Z, just a 3. Someone was driving up right when I did it so I was like, ahhhh!
Just something for my buddy Diver, 'cuz we were just talking about hands.
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/1237261504.jpg

I guess I'll crit....

Taggitup- Stop trying so hard. Hands come in time.
Jask- I remember being at that point where I knew kind of what I wanted, but I didn't know how to do it. Just keep writing on every piece of blank paper you get, keep practicing.
Bak- I'm a fan of that style, I'm working on learning how to do that kinda thing myself.
Mes- Don't practice with such a big marker. It makes everything you do look sloppy, just use a highlighter. I remember getting my first fat ass pilot marker, and I just wrote on anything I could fit my name on. Don't do that, you're just wasting ink. Your S is definitely the weakest part of your name. 3 letter names are hard to get a flow going, maybe try something with 4 letters, it's easier that way.
Foer- You're just trying too hard. Just keep working I guess.

And all of you guys who don't know where to start. Start with your normal handwriting. If you can make it look stylish, then you have a nice start for a good handstyle. It doesn't have to be flashy, just give it some funk. You know? I'll do your names if you want, 'cuz I don't have much to do with my time ever :P Just ask.

Too swirly for my taste 4Sake. And try not to get your letters to overlap.

[RetroLikeWhoa13]

4Sake-add an "N" to the end to make it known that that is what you write for the time being, and then when people catch on, shorten it.
change up the 'k' it looks like an 'R'

[Hyphy]

4Sake - I'm not really feelin the swirls at the bottom...

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3309/reach7.png

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9628/reach4.png

More of my simple mediocre shit =P.

[n8galicia]

hey could someone do a an example tag for crash or krash. i need some inspiration, thanks haha

[BigBlueViolence]

I'd rather not.

Reach- I'm feeling it, but I think you should just make the A and H regular, don't connect the dash to the leg.

[klic]

just wondering why the change from sanek to janek?

because theres a guy on here whos been writing sanek for almost a year and burns the shit out of me

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle2.jpg

reach - dope, nice and simple, my kinda style, the star thing needs some work

diver - make your e bigger, and im not really feeling how you connected your V to your R

[..romero..]

reach.connect the e so that it is a lower case instead of an uppercase.it would look alot better then i think.

janek.hmmmm.i like the last one.the k looks better.i dont like how on the other ones it kinda swings out or whatever.where its all straight.keep the last k man...




something a bit new for yall.love the s myself but what do yall think?

http://i44.tinypic.com/dzjujq.jpg


give me teh crits plllllllleeeeeez!! :D

[provinT13]

Your s looks way too much like a 5. I do like the second E though, maby a tiny bit smaller to go with the other letters, size wise.

[IlikePie]

I'm diggin the S, try making the top horizontal line shorter though.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

because theres a guy on here whos been writing sanek for almost a year and burns the shit out of me

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle2.jpg

reach - dope, nice and simple, my kinda style, the star thing needs some work

diver - make your e bigger, and im not really feeling how you connected your V to your R

YES SOMEONE TOOK MY ADVICE! thats totally a first haha.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

reach.connect the e so that it is a lower case instead of an uppercase.it would look alot better then i think.

janek.hmmmm.i like the last one.the k looks better.i dont like how on the other ones it kinda swings out or whatever.where its all straight.keep the last k man...




something a bit new for yall.love the s myself but what do yall think?

http://i44.tinypic.com/dzjujq.jpg


give me teh crits plllllllleeeeeez!! :D

that K was my idea :D and your shit is so fucking w.. wicked..

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3638/3364827938_578bfbbb96.jpg

kind of fucked up couldnt see shit.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

nice hit man.. the hospital? :P

[Mr yarbles]

YES SOMEONE TOOK MY ADVICE! thats totally a first haha.

hah klic always takes advice
He's gonna get somewhere

anyway the second one is good
the middle on out of the three

really not much else I can say but keep at it

sake your tags good but don't write sake
There a sake in 5m who kills it
and sake is such a whored out name at this point
and no offense but 4sake just sounds really gay
Like no no I don't write sake I write 4sake !
you know.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

hah klic always takes advice
He's gonna get somewhere

anyway the second one is good
the middle on out of the three

really not much else I can say but keep at it

sake your tags good but don't write sake
There a sake in 5m who kills it
and sake is such a whored out name at this point
and no offense but 4sake just sounds really gay
Like no no I don't write sake I write 4sake !
you know.

i take any crits ppl give me as well.. but there are a few writers in town that just hate..

[Rave22]

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6060/photo0022y.jpg

[DoMakeSayThink]

you cant really read the V man, it looks a little crowded

[DoMakeSayThink]

and klic im liking that tag, looks clean man

[DoMakeSayThink]

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/cors.jpg

[provinT13]

Rave I agree with think, the v is getting smushed

DoMakeSayThink Not liking the R. If it's a capitol where is the leg? If it's lower case I think the big part sticking up should go.

[..romero..]

hah klic always takes advice
He's gonna get somewhere

anyway the second one is good
the middle on out of the three

really not much else I can say but keep at it

sake your tags good but don't write sake
There a sake in 5m who kills it
and sake is such a whored out name at this point
and no offense but 4sake just sounds really gay
Like no no I don't write sake I write 4sake !
you know.
i feel you on sake being whored out but idk i like 4saken.but i was also thinkin about sene.or sener but i dont know man.ive been bouncin from one name to the next.tryna find somethin with s in it.i loove s's.maybe seas.we will see.haha.

[klic]

DoMakeSayThink Not liking the R. If it's a capitol where is the leg? If it's lower case I think the big part sticking up should go.

im pretty sure it just says COR and its just a capital R, not a lowercase r and and s (if thats whats confusing you)

[DoMakeSayThink]

no dude it is lower case R and S i gotta clean that shit up but i cant think of any ideas right now

[BigBlueViolence]

I think you should add another O to your name.

[DoMakeSayThink]

yeah? like corso?

[Bink1]

cors- dude your tag is real good, level the letters and fuckin write it. love the white on black.

[BigBlueViolence]

yeah? like corso?
No, like coors.
It'd be funny.

http://www.flyinhawaiianproductions.com/articles/Coors/CoorsLight_.jpg

[DoMakeSayThink]

haha fuck that i dont even like coors, and thanks bink think i should keep it a lower case R or change it to upper case

[klic]

no dude it is lower case R and S i gotta clean that shit up but i cant think of any ideas right now

yea change it to an uppercase for sure, and make it look exactly how your 'rs' looks now because it looks like a good uppercase R haha, and keep all your letters the same size, and start giving crits

rave - give some crits if you want to get any

expose - same deal

4saken - im actually not feeling the S, and i think a lowercase e would look better, uppercase E's kinda ruin the flow of it

[sallybsk]

aaaaye, for all you toys, remember, flares don't make a tag. (cors reminds me of this, but cors isn't that bad, just the R...) BUT REMEMBER. I see people who have decent handies, but when they get a can they just want to flare.... it's like, calm down.

klic, that shits too clean. try a oneliner, cursive, and make it as big and sloppy as you can. pleaseee. I just want to see you make something that doesn't look so plain.

4sake
really don't like that S, just not digging it. Or that A... keep your E like the second one.

[provinT13]

^^ I can kinda agree with the crits on klic. You put up the same tag, it's simple, and crazy clean, but some spice would be nice.

[klic]

alright, ill try and do something ridiculous lol

[WHAT??]

Which one is better?
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4104/img1903g.th.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1903g.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7383/img1932y.th.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1932y.jpg)

DoMakeSayThink- fix the R, it looks a little like COPS.
Rave-slow down a little, it looks too rushed. Fix the V.
Klic-fresh.

[Black Flag]

Which one is better?
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4104/img1903g.th.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1903g.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7383/img1932y.th.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1932y.jpg)

DoMakeSayThink- fix the R, it looks a little like COPS.
Rave-slow down a little, it looks too rushed. Fix the V.
Klic-fresh.

Your top one, but it still needs a lot of work. Nothing works better for handstyle then just plain repetition.

[Bink1]

i think uppercase r would ruin cors tag. he should roll with that lowercs for a moment.

[expozay]

cors i think that shit is dope.
klic same as wen u used to write sanek just now u write a j. its clean just boring.
4sake only like the second e.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3625/3366204714_1980e08b06_m.jpg

trying to try new things change my letters up a bit and shit.
tried the dash in the o dont like it.

[DoMakeSayThink]

what??- stick with the lower case E, and the R in the first one is good dude just fix that A... not really feelin the second one though

expozay- the bottom line of the E going through the X makes it kinda look like another E hanging down and the P and O are too big

[IlikePie]

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6060/photo0022y.jpg

I read "Rape"

[Hyphy]

Era - Roll with the top one bro. The extension from the "a" looks sort of weird though.
Expo - Scrap that. Your other shit was waaay doper.

Bumpin my shit...

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3309/reach7.png

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9628/reach4.png

I practiced a little on the bathroom stall when I was taking a dump at school =P. It's pretty dope when it's on a wall in my opinion. I'll try to gets some pics...

[snackmachine]

my usual handstyle.
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/057.jpg
crits anyone?

[DirtyDozen520]

Reach, i like it, its nice and simple

snackmachine; theres too much stuff goin on, make it simple..i dnt even know what the first letter is..


And heres mine..
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02975.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02976.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02978.jpg
Just thought of that name kuz i couldnt get the hang of my old name 'ages'..
so yea, crits?

[WoeInfinite]

^^ i used to write bane for a little bit.
i love B's and E's

[DirtyDozen520]

some crits?

[WoeInfinite]

its alright.
pretty generic, but i like a more wicked look to em.
theyre even and not sloppy though.
:D

[DirtyDozen520]

Yea, im guna try to add some style to the other letters like i did with the B

[klic]

you guys wanted me to try some sloppy cursive shit so here goes..
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle3.jpg

and from this morning
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag18.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag19.jpg

bane - keep your B similar to what you have in the second picture but dont extend the top and bottom of it any farther than what you have now.. round out the top of your A so its not at a point like it is now.. your n's good enough, you might want to try a lowercase.. keep the lowercase e, but round out the bottom of it instead of having a 90degree angle like you do there

ster(?) - give crits if you want to get them from now on, but since your new.. cut most of the extensions, dont turn your S into a dollar sign, bring your R closer to your E and lose the arrow on the end of it

reach - already critted it on the last page, looks good but your C could use a little work

[KnoxIn]

hey i gotta question and i think i know the answer but not sure, ok so i have seen videos and shit of writers and when they are taggin sometimes they like step on the can to make a dent in it ya know? is that just to build the pressure if you have a low pressure can???

[Mr yarbles]

that cursive at the very bottom is cool

[TaggitUp]

crits please:

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb153/yoshiii27/DSC00813.jpg

dont mind the quotes if they kinda messed it up

[provinT13]

Ugh i'm fucking pissed off so these all probably suck. Shit they would have sucked either way I hate being a toy :(

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0894.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0895.jpg

[Save and Kill]

Mes- the one on the book ain't bad except for the thin part on the M, but overall i like it

[expozay]

fiasco is my hamsters name.
mes i kinda like the first one best ive seen from you. keep practicing.

[provinT13]

yea I went too big on the krink

thanks expo i'll keep at it.

[DoMakeSayThink]

reach- i like that tag man, simple and clean, looks dope

klic- i like the other tag over the cursive, it has more style in my opinion man

fyasco- your letters seem to.... angly? i dunno it needs more flow dude, try writing faster?

Mes- that tag has potential just keep working on it,figure out an S to stick with

[Kios2]

Im still trying to work on my tag
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7843/camdataphoto104.jpg

[snackmachine]

provinT13- the one on the cover of the book is tight.

klic- most of them look straight. keep it up.

[..romero..]

mes.looking better keep practicin

ster.lose the arrow on the r and the lines in the s.

fiasko and bane.keep practicin.to plain.and lose that s man(fiasko)

janek.idk dude,to plain for me.but i like the first k on the cursive on alot better than the other one you were rocking

kids.kios.idk what it says.practice practice practice

i fucked up soooo bad.somewhere.but im not gonna point it out haha.i want yall to find it.
http://i40.tinypic.com/2crlpo3.jpg


what do you guys think?i think i found a good name for me.and i dont give a fuck if anyone writes it so yah.fuck those guys.


crits? seriously when you see how bad i fucked up....youll just know.

[oxiclean]

The second one down is so hot.

[provinT13]

Hyphy you tag is nice, clean, and solid, but it needs more flare, a bit more flow and style

romero Is it the last one? I agree with oxiclean

[..romero..]

god i hope so...

[GETRAD]

romero- thats sick keep it up

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo235.jpg

[provinT13]

^^ sexy

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0898.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0897.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee302/inass13/Picture001-3.jpg?t=1237447403

[bomb tha world]

ive been trying to find a name that fits me and this is what ive come too..tis not dat great but...yeaa...crits pleasee? :confused:

[JackieChanRollin]

getrad- im digging the handie, just try to make your D a little smaller to match the rest of your letters

bomb tha world- you probably dont wanna write spek
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=2443
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=3614

[klic]

spek - round it out, dont make it so pointy, just keep filling up pages full of handstyles

getrad - dope stuff, love your style

edit: mes - keep your S normal like your other letters and add then add an underline

[Shamy]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2634/p00180.th.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00180.jpg)

crits? look at the top one. the bottom one looks a bit weird..

[Wallace]

getrad that shits dope, put it up

[DirtyDozen520]

Slie-Uhmm work on the e and i'd take off the star

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02980.jpg
crits please

[Shamy]

bane that's looking good. hears a better one xD

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/534/p00181.th.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00181.jpg)

[DirtyDozen520]

yea thats better. I dnt really know what other crits to give aha

here are some more..i really need some crits aha
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02981.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02982.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02983.jpg

[expozay]

i feel like alot of ppl write bane...

[DirtyDozen520]

ya prolly, im still thinkin of names..before i start gettin up..kuz after that..i dnt wana change names

[exitus]

well be carefull because your first name will prob get a lot of heat from being a toy so youll need to change.

[*NGONE*]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/5816/0319092335x.jpg
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8237/0319092336.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/584/0319092337.jpg

feedback??

[Publik Enemy#7]

bane- liking the style, just keep at it all forms of graff develop over time.
Nage-same but Im not a fan of the 2nd one.

here are a few from yesterday
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1237496141.jpg
I need to work on my A a little
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1237496446.jpg
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1237523728.jpg
accidently side busted binge there didnt notice it until I got the flik, thought it was funny as hell that my arrow pointed to his

[ASTAR.DWSP]

thats a dope oneliner :O

[skwidboy]

i suck...

http://i40.tinypic.com/2vnnmly.jpg

[Publik Enemy#7]

Astar- it better be getting dope Ive been working on this type of onliner since a little befor X-mas i think, just switched to this name less than a month ago so Ive had to tweak things, Ill be working on the a right now.

ive been trying to find a name that fits me and this is what ive come too..tis not dat great but...yeaa...crits pleasee? :confused:

dont use spek, hes a dead king, R.I.P.

[expozay]

areyu that oneliner is fresh as fuck.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3462/3369958885_16e00407a9_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3455/3369960249_e4f3544f94_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3599/3370783806_ea1d9671a9_m.jpg

emik or expo? im kind of feeling emik but i cant decide.

[BigBlueViolence]

Emik looks a LOT fucking better, but I wouldn't do the E and M together if you aren't doing a onliner

[expozay]

thanks dude. i was thinking the same i think im definitely going to go with emik.

know of anyone who already writes that?

[provinT13]

I know an emit but not a emik, and I agree it looks better. What did you write with and what paint?

[expozay]

racked a garden craft marker from micheals yesterday and just used what was in it.

its a pretty decent marker. im gunna make some ghetto krink to put in it just need to get some paint thinner.

[provinT13]

I can never find the garden crafts. Was it in the pottery section?

[expozay]

yea there in the pottery section.
theres also another marker there its the same thing but its in the wood working section its just called something else.

[provinT13]

ah only good looking marker i've got was the zig 2 way glue pen, other then that I go there for decos.

[expozay]

yea i tried to rack some decos yesterday but they didnt have any.

[Mr yarbles]

zig posterman
Zig woddcraft markers
Zig garden craft markers
They're all bassically the same

[WoeInfinite]

http://i40.tinypic.com/f4hds1.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2w2m25i.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/15k6d5.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1430/2335k.jpg
i didnt know you were on 12oz?

[exitus]

woe you continue to be such an inspiration to me, great job. what music do u listen to?

[Mr yarbles]

Every once in a while yeah
I post everything on bs first though