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Loki X Sho
01-22-2010, 03:04 PM
I thought it would be cool, if their are any poets..to share.
I write daily and I love reading what others have to say as well.
Reading someone's poetry is like solving a puzzle...
I can see it all and its beautiful..
But my guts are baking on a planchette.
I can balance on this hill outside..
and watch my insides perish.
I can see the afterlife,
I can see what was before...
But I can't see myself anymore.
My hands are on the glass,
and I'm begging to be free...
I need an exit wound...
someone put a bullet hole in me,
So I can crawl out,
bloody and used...
and so I can make a quick recovery,
from my soul being abused.
Sound just echoes.
Treble hits so hard...
like knives on skin,
getting buried deep within.
Maybe I can grasp the blade,
and escape when the last wound is made.
OPIEtheADDICT
02-03-2010, 11:21 PM
who writes poetry? i just fill up journals with the same name over and over and over and over and over again. its like poetry... except is dont rhyme, its one word, its rarely black and white, and o yea, real *****s do it.
Thrice
02-03-2010, 11:53 PM
Basically anything that douche bag Edgar Allen Poe said, he stole all my material.
irockyourass
02-04-2010, 07:38 AM
ahh... poetry, my long lost love. i used to write almost every day but somehow lost my inspiration along the way and havent written anything worth reading in quite a few years. i'll post some of my older shit, i could probably take up about 10 pages with all my shit so i'll only post a few for now till some other people start contributing too. but most of my shit was written at least 5 or 6 years ago. anyways here's a few.
lets dance our bad dreams away:
so last night
we had our nightmares
and we danced them all away
as i held you
and my hands began to shake
we swayed with the rhythem
waiting for our hearts to break
and then i awoke
to my suprise
you were standing
before my eyes
and you said 'i love you'
now all my worries are gone
so lets dance our nightmares away
cause its the only way i know
that you are here to stay
and that in the morning
i will wake to my suprise
i will find you standing before my eyes
and i'll say i love you
and mean it more than you know
and this will last
even when the cold winds blow
untitled haiku:
nothing gold can stay
even the white snow will grey
after a few days
eyeheartewe:
rolling down the hills of green
feeling drunk and dizzy
laughing till your neck breaks
and my stomach starts to ache
our cheeks are on fire
and i tell you i hate you
but you know that i'm a liar
its love
walking down the beach
kicking water and sand
getting eachother soaking wet
i try to grab your hand
but you run away
dodging jellyfish and shells
and you make me carry you like a baby
its love
so thank you for being there when i needed someone
and thank you for being there when i needed some fun
and thank you for being there when i needed some love
and thanks for not stopping when i said i had enough
tough luck kid, it'll never happen:
its like being dizzy
when i hold her i spin
and when i see her coming
the butterflies begin
they tear at my stomach
i nearly feel sick
but its all that i live for
i feel the flames start to lick
at my heart and warm me inside
then the clouds break wide open
and the ice storm comes back
how could she like me
with all the features i lack
cause she's beautiful and strong
i'm plain and i'm shot
how could she ever feel the same
when she's everything i'm not
falling out of love has never felt so good:
seeing you smile used to make my day
but those days seem to be fading away
now i count the moments we're together
waiting till the storm passes
waiting for some warmer weather
cause you're love is like a snowstorm
i thought that i was stuck
my wheels just kept on spinning
they'll melt the ice with luck
now they're finding traction
and i am finding action
with someone else
and i'm falling out of love
with you
falling out of your arms
into someone new
making you smile used to be my goal
now i've given up and fallen down the hole
but there's someone who is waiting
for me at the bottom
its me and i am whole
your love was like a snowstorm
and i thought that i was stuck
but i kept my tires spinning
and melted the ice with luck
now they've found some traction
and i have found some action
with someone else
and i've fallen out of love
with you
and i've fallen from your arms
into someone new
the fall took longer than it should
but fall is warmer than the winter
and falling never felt so good
There once was a man from Nantucket
Whose dick was so long he could suck it.
And he said with a grin
As he wiped off his chin,
"If my ear were a cunt, I would fuck it."
Loki X Sho
02-04-2010, 09:46 AM
lmao...well I'm glad this got approved.
RealNiggasDoRealThings
02-04-2010, 04:18 PM
There once was a man from Nantucket
Whose dick was so long he could suck it.
And he said with a grin
As he wiped off his chin,
"If my ear were a cunt, I would fuck it."
Hahahaha!
Holes in our shoes,
Holes in our clothes,
Holes in our minds,
Holes in our hearts,
Holes.
Apse One
10-21-2011, 10:07 AM
If I were to charge you
Than "love" it wouldn't be
So that's why I decided
To paint your wall for free
=)
PETER
10-21-2011, 11:21 AM
I am horrible at poetry and english in general.... so forgive me.
Suffering symptoms of adornment.
a little reliefe from the torment of emotion related stress.
I'm starting to wonder if I should have taken of my love proof vest.
Willingness to make eye contact replaced the desire to shy back
I find myself putting on colors insted of camoflaging myself in earth tones and black
making my self notice
I am who I present
where I've been
what I've done
and the ones I've loved
my most precious things are those I've esperienced
Every memory is golden
even if they are tarnished.
I don't show myself as perfectly varnished
The scratches go well beyond the surface.
my words are far more than simple lip service
Everything serves a perpouse
I still don't know mine and
once felt worthless
Hope and optimism have since
filled my half empty cup
much like when I was a young pup.
It feels good to come out of my hiding spot
get out of the musty stench of my prematurely
planned resting plot
Life is Beautifl. You are Beautifl
Thanks for remiding me I can be usefull
For this I love you
whip2thebrain
03-30-2012, 11:59 AM
I revilitize my mind, breathe
until i capsize divine, what i need
is to be the shine, is to see the sign,
that what im doing is right, but right now,
what i'm doing is write, the things that people don't always find right
that was a spontanous one, messy
Are you guys fucking gay?
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HipsterPunks
03-30-2012, 03:00 PM
This might be the worst thread i've ever seen, go back to your livejournals
This might be the worst thread i've ever seen, go back to your livejournals
I bet Venom was the one who okay'd it.
subcyde
03-30-2012, 07:02 PM
Say, we can go where we want to.
A place where they will never find.
And we can act like we come from out of this world.
Leave the real one far behind.
We can dance.
We can go where we want to.
A place where they will never find.
And we can act like we come from out of this world.
Leave the real one far behind.
We can dance.
We can go when we want to.
Night is young and so am I.
And we can dress real neat
from our hands to our feet
and surprise you with a victory cry.
Say, we can act if we want to.
If we don't nobody will.
And you can act real rude,
and totally remove and I can act like an imbecile.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Everything's under control.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Doin it pole to pole.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Everybody look at your hands.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Everybody's takin' the chance.
Safety Dance.
Oh, Safety Dance.
Yes, Safety Dance.
We can dance if we want to.
We've got all your life, and mine.
As long as we abuse it,
Never gonna lose it.
Everything will work out right.
We can dance if we want to.
We can leave your friends behind.
Cause' your friend don't dance,
and if they don't dance, well they're
no friends of mine.
I say, we can dance.
We can dance.
Everything's under control.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Doin it pole to pole.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Everybody look at your hands.
We can dance.
We can dance.
Everybody's takin' the chance.
Dance.
Safety Dance.
Yes Safety Dance.
Safety Dance.
Let's Safety Dance.
Yes, Safety Dance.
Safety Dance.
Let's Safety Dance.
Safety Dance...
Safety Dance...
Safety Dance...
Safety Dance!
wow, i never knew those lyrics were so gay, until now
thx subcy always looking out
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