dank: straighter, and fatter DAK: Make the top of your D like all the other letters. and lose the little nipple on the bottom of your K
your m and o are ginormous oxi, i wouldnt write sneaz because that sneak guys just gonna bite all your letters haha pakt - looks good except for your T
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0326091803.jpg Dank- Ya dont try to make it go down right now keep it straight Dak- I think that will look really nice once you clean up the A Reach- Just fix that R Skwint- like it all Brent- Way to sloppy clean it up Eskimo- Looks pretty straight except your M and O are too big for your other letters
zarb that b hurts so bad just fix that and keep it movin. dak listen to skull e IAS that i looks like an o quckie mugs
Izoe - Use the I from the bottom left throw with the z and e from the top right throw and i'll flow better... I fucked the y and shold've either extended the top of the z farther to the right or put a line from the y going down next to the, rather than leaving it open and looking humongous and awkward... whatever View attachment 462906 View attachment 462907
queezy.nice spot mugr.your m doesnt look like an m dude.make it more pronounced daylo.what markers are thos?jus curius and your letters get smaller as the go it seems. skwint.your s looks waaay better than the last time i saw it. i totally didnt do it.its a friend of mine.swear but you should totally crit it anyways.
Dope shit bro. Only thing I would suggest is to try and see how it looks like with a lowercase "e". ---------------------------- [Broken External Image]:http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7140/reach39.png
Lookin' good izoe, keep it up and keep experimenting. Sorry reach I'm not great with R's either so... Ya. Does that say SenserOneOtc? I don't know the style just seems kinda boring for me.. sorry
Eh 1st sketch this week..BS i did it more like yours like you said..Crits plz? Queezy-I like your shit..Its dope! reach-keep workin fix your letters up like the R izoe-I thinkt he 1st I would look good on the 2nd throw
i dont get why people dont like those sakura permapaques, theres so dope for sketching, i racked about 20 of them from the dollar store a couple weeks ago
Thanks Romero, Oh and Klic, The marker wasent used for that sketch, I just had it on my desk but they are really good markers, there really opaque and the metallic colours are so nice! The white is half decent. Queezy- I like the Q and the throw looks good, Are those faces in you're E? Sense- Try to do it floating, I used to only draw on the bottom of the page but its looking really consistent and it looks like the letter height rises slightly. Kjay- I like your S alot. Hyphy- I like in the second one how the R , E and C have the same shape at the bottom. There is something about a throw with same letter shape that I just love. ShaolinNY- Youve progressed so much, It looks good. Expozay, My homeboy writes EMEK, Not to sound like a dick or mean but yeah its sounds the same and im NOT saying stop writing EMIK. Im just bringing it up. Me and a friend where just messing around in class with some stupid names in class. Crit that shit! [Broken External Image]:http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0574.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC02276.jpg
weakfingers - Haha that shit's griiiiiiiiimeeey! -------------------------- New name I've been sleepin on for awhile. "Zen". Crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7882/zen.png
hahahaha thanks man i try. but yeah i do write emek, and sometimes on occasion like to write emec or emic or emik or whatever i feel like... and sometimes i do write DICK... haha ^^ [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5046/dsc07894.jpg
Thanks, the Q and Y are the letters I fucked on this throw, both too big in proportion to the other letters. And the E's are kind of faces they just doesn't have eyes haha.