Wise- Your I is too thick on the first one, and I'd fix the W on the 2nd, also maybe make your E a little thinner, keep it up, I like the fills and your getting shit down I need help making this flow better, I am thinking about lowering the first leg on the M a tad, but I don't/can't decide whether to make the T longer, Whether to stretch the Base of the T out beyond the E or to make them flow together... idk I also cant decide to make the K taller or what... take a look and see if you can think of anything that would help
i would honestly just move the m closer and try to connect the letters where they overlap, it might look better after its coloured with shadow and shit too, just try something like that
that m is dope, try makin the e's with bars instead of curves and the ends not so long, make the t bigger both like your were saying and taller, make the spine of the k straighter, let the top kick connect, swing the bottom one out more and try to make symmetrical with the m. also dont be afraid to overlap, thats where flow gets to build. keep sketchin man, your progressin quick
damn man i didnt see that shit!!!! Haha im sooo gonna try to paint that if you dont mind but ill change it a lil bit lol then ill shout you out on it!! That shit is siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccckk!!! And ill post a hoer up that ill sketch out
meko- likin the frozen looking outline with the icicles or whatever you wanna call em wise- top peice is nicer, but good work on both, id test out making ur i fatter on top instead of bottom metek- thats a nice little start of a sketch u got there, the last one, id get rid of the dot before the T though
hoer that meko is dope rayz that mouth in the A is a+. cyto move that m closer to the etek let it overlap a bit crits on this? just trying a different style
Maybe just make the z straight at the top also? I like it anywayz dude.Sick shit! A simple I did today... No I'm not writing Alpha, it just happened to be the word I used.
metek- good bars, i like the first piece on this page better, the E's in your second one are a little too round, mess with the flow.. Piece89- nice simp.. Rayz- i can dig that.. look up a guy that writes T-rex out of chicago.. i saw one of his freights and looked him up.. hes a killer on the streets too.. similar styles id check it if i were you.. Izoe- the second piece is something to be reconed with.. pretty stellar.. i like everything about it.. especially the o.. the connection coming out of the o is dope.. milk boxx- i really feel your E.. thats a style of e ive been working with too.. cut out the extensions on the n and e.. they are a bit too much.. but work off of that E, its the strongest letter.. Hoer- last but not least.. you own strait letters.. your style is where it needs to be.. do some freights or something so i can bench some of your work rollin through.. this is gunna be the last thing on this page, so get ready for a bump... a new one and a few older ones i need crits on to develop the style.. View attachment 484942 View attachment 484943 View attachment 484944 View attachment 484945 View attachment 484946 seriously give me crits..
snew, well put "Just give it time", you're on the right path bro just try to separate the letters a little bit and see how that works out. **** anyone wanna do an exchange?
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ever the first one is flat out terrible, which is why i dont understand how the second one is so decent. definitely keep going with that style. keep playing with the letters until you get your structure exactly how you like it and then fuck with the swirls and shit coming off it.
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