use the same angles for now, but make all ur letters barred, liek none of taht wavy ass shit, do straight bars
don't be a faggot fice, i like your shit but don't act like it's a burden for you to type a crit. anyway, i like yours, maybe make the leg of the F a little longer at the bottom, and make the bottom I extension a little smaller. anyways, i did this outline in sharpie then brought it into photoshop. for a friend, i spent a solid 2 minutes coloring it. [Broken External Image]:http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphoto..._265637560818_708730818_3579695_5817820_n.jpg
I'm still toy, but maybe my opinion will be useful. Erease the pencil before painting it. I don't like some of the extensions, simpler could be better. Make the "e" simpler too, it will look better according to the othe letters. I like the "Fic", just get ride of some of the useless extensions. Try coloring it better, don't do that "style" yet, and add some 3D or drop shadow. That's what I think. PS Sorry if my english is not so good, I'm from Mexico. Self1~
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cyto your shit looks clean i like it crits? im not really done with it just somethin im working on now.
im not sure if you were trying to correct his spelling of "your"...i hope not because he spelled it right.
ISORE-Your letters need more definition they look like blobs, and that word reflects your art... It will be shortly, but hand tags arnt everything. JS