for a battle

 

sech thats hella nice letters are clean evenly spaced like how you threw the simples in wit the more elaberate letters

 

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Crits?

 

gat it looks decent id say just straighten it out and get your letters all the same size the i is hella small compared to the GR&M and if your gonna go lowercase with a letter might as well do all the letters lowercase

 

chad that shit looks on point,go paint that

 

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Hey i'm new to the site and really loving some of the stuff i have seen here. This is my second piece I have done in my blackbook. Have alot more recent ones but I dont have a camera right now thanks to the ocean. Sorry about the picture quality, its alot brighter in person. Just looking for some crits/tips for improving, dont hold back im not scurred.

 

Chad: That shit's wack!!
Halt's too
Grim: Make the I and M the same size like GnR.
Tea: Overdid it with cracks, too many myb? Don't know, doesn't flow imo. Nice pen control 4 a 2nd one, though.

 

Couple more, again sorry about the shitty quality its from a older iPhone. Nothing to wild yet, just trying to keep it simple.


any comments appreciated, like i said i am fairly new to this shit so looking for some help

 

yea man, i kinda thought the same after i thought it was done. was my first time experimenting with them tho so I was fairly happy with it. thanks for the crits tho bro

 

this is my first, really dont like it but figured i would throw it up anyways. these are a week or two old, i have some newer ones that I will throw up in the next couple days. like i said any input/crits are really appreciated

 

stop what your doing now and go simple.

 

Tea- that first junt was a whole lot fresher than what you just put out. Fuck that actually.

But I have no room to speak.
Can't fuck with word flows so I tried to do a single letter. I like it but can I get some crits?
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W for no reason

 

thought the first few were pretty simple, ill see what I can do to make it a little "simpler". You talking colors or just letter spacing and shape??

 

Sorry

 

karl, stop with the aroows on your letters. i was referring to the last picture.

aek the W itself is nice but that arrow is terribly unneccessary.

 

bump for crits
-EVERYTHING LEAKS SAID

 

Lol ravecat do you actually think chad and halt's stuff is whack??

 

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