I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.
Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho, Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars, Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet! Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill, Wgone : smashing it there dude! And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
forget all the little triangle shit, dunno what it says though..id suggest start over again or make from that letters evenly bars n see where it gets you..
Yah it was just a 'final rough draft' if you know what I mean. I threw the points on there just to see what they'd look like. It says FRITE, btw. So you're saying keep the letter formation just try making the bars even width throughout?
Use the bar width of your F and make all ur letters sit straight. Dont worry about them blending in just yet, go for more of a slit overlap of each letter. Also scrap that E and lengthen ur R's right leg.
Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space. I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^
I'll try out the suggestions for sure. But REDEYES, don't you think if I slim up the 'T' it'll totally kill it's form, especially the center bar?
No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.
I think that looks pretty fine for now. I would just elaborate on it for now and see how it goes. [EDIT] Wait, no. That "E" is bugging me a lot, I would make it more level with the other letters.
dangeri i like it but inbetween every letter there is a space except the R and U maybe try to more of an outline around the u on the left side so it fit perfect with all the other letters? it looks pretty legit anyways
Niiiiice. I like the style in this one. The "H" bugs me a bit, but it's not that bad. Also, the "Z" looks like it's missing some 3D.
Actually lookin at at close, the Z has too much 3d lol Work on making your letter structure better, that's where style really comes from, not shitty add-ons like drips and connections. Thanks for the crits yall, final version. The E is a little fat and the 3d on the N is too skinny.