SOL not criting due to it being a quick sketch, i feel like any crit i have are things that you would otherwise not do were it not just a quick sketch
i like it but for some reason the top extension on the A looks weird to me...good shit though keep it up
okay well I haven't been sketching .. so to fill up for all the jabbering I do on all the threads I'll post some doodles I did today in class. First is abstract, sortof, you can make out the letters though somewhat. Second is not that great, was a quick one, I know the A is retarded, need to work on that. As for crits, I'd like suggestions as to how to fix the A in the second one. Oh and I know the middle extension on the M in the second one is retarded as well. Basically shitty pix for talkin. View attachment 612784 View attachment 612785 edit: A probably would have worked well with triangular bottom instead of rectangular and I like the S though.
just did this tonihght 3d sucks but im drunk so it aint no thang rib lets throw battle and good shit skeletor i liek your style [Broken External Image]:http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00293-20110902-0001.jpg?t=1314939765
@ ewl nice flick .. thats good work .. i think the A is the only problem .. like lizard sayed .. to me it looks like u might have been tryin to fill empty space. next time just just make it the same as the rest the tops of the letters . jut my opinion .. good work cuore . i like them sketchs but maby drop extetions on last one
@Mues i like that your doing straights, thats definetly the best way to improve, but i wouldnt use such sketchy lines.... And after you can rock a perfect simple start using cutbacks on your letters @Cuore I cant even tell what the first one sais, its a total mess... The second one is a bit better, but the third letter is way to sloppy... Also dont use those little floating bits, they look really toy (imo) heres some shitty shit...
trying something new..jerm,germ lmk what ya think, its been a while since iv drawn anything FIRST hand style(if u can even call it that lol) with that name
McSatan feel free to crit dude. All are welcome haha and Boar 1, that top half of you B on the top sketch is iffy. Too big it feels too disproportionate. And Cuore I'll try and space my letters a bit differently! And on that second piece you posted, I think the top of the S is a little small. It looks off. And I really like the E but that top left extension type thing kinda sticks out a little too much. Flick for talking...quick pen freestyle in classsssss
we did a simp and throw exchange, and I didnt do the the simp till yesterday... all shit View attachment 612825 View attachment 612826 View attachment 612827
i'll get yours up soon. yo yo yo.. Here is your free throw. View attachment 612828 and while I'm at it, and cuz the other one was quite shitty, View attachment 612829