takeiteasy - go simpler some of those extentions look weird like on the bottom of the a and bottom of the sand that line that goes through the back just looks random, and maybe just make regular e's. go simpler is the moral haha
Beko- Dude when i said dont outline each individual bar i mean like dont outline the whole bar when your doing the black. Dont outline where the bars meet

 

takeit - that is fresh as hell stick wit same concept but fit it on the page better maybe

 

what?^ im not saying that the piece is horrible but i wouldnt say fresh as hell hahaha

 

dude what the hell... is that a pencil blocking the pic on the left side?! retake the pic or somn

Edit: yeaa an that is true Fresh as hell is some next shit .... lol

 

no thats a finger hahaha and its not like your missing much. dont have the book its in so i cant retake one

 

BEKO -Cleanliness and effort were 2 things i didnt put in but this is just to show you what to do with your oultine

 

Thanks for the crits fellas. Did you mean lower case e's? I agree with the bar in the background. I was supposed to take it out but accidentally started outlining it so I kept it. Color choice and 3D look ok?

 

yeah i wouldnt worry about colors too much for now but looks good to me. and i dont use 3d so im the last person to ask for that haha sorry. Nah for the E's i mean regular ones like the e i just typed not like that 3 looking thing. just simple for now.But thats a good point if you start out with capital letters make em all capital, and same for lower case it just helps with the flow usually. but im your piece you did it all capital

 

bumping for crits

 

I like the kunt piece but idk if this is just me or if i cant tell good style but it seems your bars have way too many kinks in them in the other pieces. Idk maybe its fine, but through my eyes it looks weird

 

I prefer the Nark piece. It's just a little cluttered between the A and R. The kunt piece is good, I like the style but it seems a bit all over the place. I would like to see it with a full size U just for reference.

 

Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

 

All the letters are pretty weak. Define your A more, and work on how to fully understand bars in letters.

 

unfinished because i am so cool

 

schools productive as fuck for me lol.

 

AESO love those straights

Picture 109 by SkateJunt, on Flickr

 

Some work is old, some not.

 

forget this.

 

Crits please! something im doing for the gf. whatcha think! all new letters besides the E and O


VVVVVV TBS- i really like all of those!! the only thing i dont like is the squigly line in the A and the color choices of the 3rd one! but other than that i like em mate!