cred, don't get stuck on connections. to be honest you aren't really there yet, doesn't mean you can try it but you shouldn't be doing them on every piece, nah mean? also you should of leaned the top of the E to the left i like that one more than your others though, because you didn't do unnecessary extension on the left leg of the R, looks a lot better. keep it up, man fuck you rib.... i realize.
Dope dank, really like that dog haha. Reminds me of the dog from Tom and Jerry, except more brown. And MN Nice that's nicer then usual, although I don't like the T covering the Y so much. Flick for talkin, crits are always welcome. Fucked up the M on the first one and the N on the second :/
I was trying to take suggestions from a pic a posted a couple days ago. tried a little more letter definition. I know my shading is messed in places. the second pic is an 'S' I want to incorporate into it..feel like it has more style.
@Asis13 That stuffs pretty good bro, loving the shading, don't see so much of that ah.. Good stuff keep it up =) Some feedback? Thanks in advance.. Says "Sketch" But kinda stuffed up the k... Trying to get into characters, so all crits welcome, just keep in mind, it my first character.
@shearz - thanks dude. ill keep posting pics as i update. i like your style but the letters need more spacing i think. sweet character idea but im lost on whats happening with happening with that can and the face/ mask look a little outta shape. but i dig where its goin
Thanks guys. I'll be working on this style a bit and post something up again by the end of the week. Djing tonight!!! Droppin' some DNB. Super stoked.
hoooly shit man.... why do u post here? lol thats at LEAST intermediate, wouldnt get deleted from the big boy thread either.... ur shit always has a clean concept and i can tell its well executed...
the S is a little tough to make out. looks like a Z with some feather lookin' extentions coming off the E. Beyond that it's tight.
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Neus - this looks like nothing read the new to graff thread and do bars and think of bar consistancy. Maybe check out some tuts about 3D would be also a good idea