^naw. that piece is pretty ugly, imo. not hating. the letters don't work. the bar widths are all over the place. none of the extensions work at all. it looks pretty random. the handstyle is good. but the only thing that's looking good is the color in the 3d. if you concentrated on bars for a bit i'm sure you could bang out something real nice.
^ my concepts are well established, and my flow is superior. Everything works in my piece. Beauty is not a criteria for anything. As to my extensions, they give speed to the piece, something most slowpokes cant keep up with. Lets not even mention it takes a week to collect 4 other entries, and none of them apart from Dreams passes the average mark. When i saw toy pieces get votes, I knew what this forum was about. Let's see what you can do. Do me a little Kurse sketch. You think its cool to talk and not have anything to back yourself up ?
Ok mildstyles. I'm just a soldier battling, doing my part. And i never said i was the best, but i do think i got the best flow on this one, which is just my point of view. Kered, my constructive criticism is I recommend doing highlights with a small tip pen. That will make it sharper and will force you to work on refinement. Then, you have the ideas, its just the execution lacks sharpness. You know when to go skinny and when to fatten up, Its just the joints (where it changes from skinny to fat) lack strength. Thats what i would say for a start...I would also say you're jumping ahead of yourself by doing this style. But once you get the sharpness down and use a finer pen since you got the ideas, its just a question of time before it all clicks into place.
Stylegeek, you just went full Kanye West, don't ever go full Kanye West. All jokes aside, your piece is alright, I think a superior piece, inspires others to start graffiti like the pic below, that shit is superior and fucking inspiring.
Arose kills every piece, I would take his advice instead of ignoring it like some sort of toy. Your colors are good, but your lettering needs work
Kered GMV; crits as you asked for would be to sharpen it up as per stylegeek's advice and maybe draw it bigger? will give you more room for 'doo dads'. Nice work by dreams too. And Stylegeek, i like what your doing, but i think its just a bit too wild and not all fighting for the same team. eg in the second piece you posted, most of y letters flow is going top right and your R and E are dancing to a different song going bottom right. the letters are fine by themselves per say, but the piece doesnt flow like dreams of Kered's does. Nice colours too.
I'd say the k in mild styles piece is better than any other letter in any other total piece up there so he gmv
Lol man Riding on that kind of high horse will get you no where dude. when your head is that high in the sky the only direction to go is down. but i'm not going to try and say your piece is not the best one out there all i got to say is Eggo check yourself son