Type: Posts; User: GpersKreepers
KAZE GMV, that B is tight, dopeness all round, L's aint an easy thing to end with
i give him proper crits because he listens, and trust us with the whole keyboard letters thing, its almost like magic!!
willis - looking good man, only thing im finding odd is that the e's lean forward and the AS leans back, it makes an odd dip between the S and E ,
primitiveplus - fresh simp man, personally i...
safe boys, thanks for the crits,
willis, thats the direction you need to go man, defo, i really like the the 'top loop' of the first e and the 'under-bar' of the second, mash them together and...
ordie and kirg start looking at all of willis' stuff, thats what you should be aiming at,
gasr looking iller and ill,
in progress, not sure what i want to do with the S, dont like the penciled...
so i went with a no pencil rule on this one, so its outlined and filled in the same colour, then over with a black fine line, 3d with the fine line then thicker black outline, SLOPPY SLOP SLOP!!!!
please tell me you do actually use a pencil CDawg, if not i'll cut my hands off
VOTE - Ratzy
couldn't believe i was the first to say that, haha
imma drop a crap in a few hours, ha
i think you should keep this for a while, defo worth keeping
bdsm-not feeling what your doing there, bar widths are all over the place, and dont use that ruler
Dvizzle-keep em coming man, start having a bit of a play now, try tall skinny/short wide letters,...
mild GM to tha Vizzle
dont ask just do it
werm- not sure why you'e made the M so big, but i dig the style, the R is odd though,
gophe - the second one is ill, but the snatch is sloppy, the 2nd loop of the S is far too thick, that n is bad...
painted with water colours, fucked it up
i think he's done a jesr?, thats what the tag looks like anyway,
only thing i suggest to you kaze, is to keep an eye when doing that line of the D that you bring it up and round rather than...
looks dope, desr? if so i like the lower case R, but your 3d is bad, also id say either make the top of the D more like the others, if not then maybe lower case the E to break up the trend its...
i say toopski
Cred-dope ish man, hope you'll be back on regular sketching soon!
kroe- rate that alot, lovin your character style too
semper-it looks good, but in all honestly your structure needs work, the S is...
just saying, you shouldn't do cracks and 3d detail and call it a throw, simple bubble/bubblegum letters for now, like this.....