Piece Battle Thread.

[toopski]

Z3BRA

just coz its a bit diff style still needs work but looks better then the others in my opinion, tho i like the style of TBS's as well

[Tempo718]

ya dude TBS super good entry bro. that was close between sam an u

[RedEyes]

New word!!!!!

[Z3BRA]

New word evras

[TBS]

i'm ok with that..

[Auras]

Phat2!!

[Auras]

EVRAS it iyz, I'll prolly be on this manyana

[Frogz]

needa finish up mine then color

[toopski]

if i get time ill do smth

[-NiSe-]

Working on it

[mace2200]

Phat2 that bride one sweet

[-NiSe-]

I'm getting a little better, crits PLEASE i really want to get better.. keep movin'. Anything constructive will do.

[Tempo718]

[ClelandBhoy]

Horrific first attempt but can only get better.

[kingz131]

goood

['Crook']

Can someone give me crits on my piece ?

[Phat 2]

crook. you still refuse to go simple. when we say simple, we mean even simpler than this, yes... even simpler, it CAN happen. you might not like it, but you're not gonna get anywhere if you continue with what you're doing now.
you have to start at the very bottom and work your way up. you can't even start at the second step of the ladder if you haven't mastered the first.
these are my crits for you, and will always be, until you get better. you're definitely not ready to take on the streets boy.
here's what you need to start with (and this goes for everone else who's being told to go simple):






notice how they got the simplest letters ever, and the steeziest flow, and the least crazy coloring going on. that's how you properly burn. and believe it or not, these cats also started at the bottom and worked their way up to where they are right now.
now
I'm not being mean, but please stop texting/whatsapp'ing me on my cell asking for crits. if these people here wanna give you crits, they will. but when they see that you're not listening to anything they say, they'll just give up on you like a flat skank!

['Crook']

I can do these simple letters , i'm tiered of writing simple letters ... but i will !
Anw i'm sorry for bothering you i promis i'll never text you again asking for crits before you see my progress here !!
Sorry again !

[Phat 2]

you might not like it. but you gotta put up with it and move up very slowly. dont get ahead of yourself. just add ONE small new detail to every new letter you do and sooner or later these details will come to form and change your whole letter up.
not sure this makes sense to you but i couldnt find the way to explain it.
but in general, you need to give it a rest lil buddy, just take it easy. we're all eager to progress, but only some of us will progress in the right direction, make sure you're one of us by doing what we do: being patient.
no one said it was guan be easy or that it'll happen over night. keep that in mind.

edit. here's my entry:

["PHYSH"]

thought i'd try this piece battle thing..............