Piece Battle Thread.

**Phat 2** · 12-08-2010 05:12 AM

theyre legit crits.
you also got 3D mistakes there money
I'll post something later hopefully if I found the time

and I see nose2 started a trend to put that shadow under the two border edges in the tags

**lord_plankton** · 12-08-2010 05:27 AM

Originally Posted by ian

^^^^ nice one mone, as always. Really like the stars, crown, halo thing, and the dot on the i. i know im not really one to crit but ther top bit of the K might have looked a bit better if it was a little bigger, and the E seems a little squished behind everything. don't know if those are legit crits or just my opinion but yeah lol

crowning your shit is never a good thing if your not really a king. my opinion.
i like how you tried to mirror B n R, the e is the weak point, way too squished ( you like squishin your e´s?), i dont like the long nose, you seem to though. all in all okay.

**MoganOne** · 12-08-2010 11:20 AM

The long nose on the E also goes with the R's intersection

**ian** · 12-08-2010 04:08 PM

just a question mone, how come you never color your pieces? Everything i've seen you color ends up looking even better

**ian** · 12-09-2010 12:11 AM

spent a lot of time on this one. i like the B, E, and I, not so happy with the K or the R. legit crits are much appreciated, i know i may have jumped ahead of myself a little on this one, but don't just tell me "go back to simps that sucks"

**AcrsK** · 12-09-2010 02:22 AM

You are improving quick, ian. I like the fill you did with the letters and you're catching on a bit with style. My suggestion is to do back graphics to make it pop more. Also the R looks a little bit like a B.

**Phat 2** · 12-09-2010 06:24 AM

no ian, you're on the right path, and I'm not gonna tell you to go back to simps just to give you hell or anything, but you really SHOULD stick to simps for a while until you get all your bars straight, this piece shows that you got the ideas in mind, but you still don't have the perfect knowledge of how to apply your bars. so keep doing straight letters with little or no bending until you master that style, and then move on up to this stuff... but props on the effort man.
watch your bar consistency

**ian** · 12-09-2010 08:40 AM

word. im down for simps its just that the keyboard letters get a little boring after a while lol, thought id try out something else for this one. AcrsK, by back graphics you mean just like pictures in the background? I was too lazy to do 3d for this one, it took long enough as is. thanks for the comments, much appreciated

**AcrsK** · 12-09-2010 11:58 AM

This was a quickie, nothing too impressive. Have too many other art projects going on to really care about this battle. But still always want do a submission to keep up.

**ian** · 12-09-2010 01:15 PM

nice except this is supposed to be single color lol. thats the most graffiti-ish thing ive seen from you though, although your other stuff is really unique