two quick bombs, the writers names, and here are the contestants: [Broken External Image]:http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1038/25110513105cf.jpg alive^^ [Broken External Image]:http://www.markholdaway.com/tim/images/skerjthrow.jpg skeri^^ constructive critism for both, is of course, apprieciated, thank you for your time, ALIVE & SKERI
i voted skeri, but im not quite sure if thats an i at the end... kinda looks like a messed up a or somethin?
there is no need for insults this is a toy battle you were a toy once as well and i am confident that you drew some things worse then ours
Alive no sweat bro just work on your smoothness with the lines, dont make it jagged looking. Other then that I'm quite fond of your letter structure.
fuck you shine - i seem to remember your entry in the METRO battle ending with at least 3 "SHINE SUCKS" threads being created and i even attempted to stand up for you asshole
um to the first guy make up your own letters before you put out shit..everyone can do basic stuff like that to the second guy there way too complicated make em flow better
don't put crosses instead of points. never use that again. the a first of all, draw the line in the letter further down attack to the l a _ so you got an L the point on the i is to oval, make sure its nice round the 'v', horrible, make it look like a 'v' and not like a 'u' the 'e' worst of all, the shape looks shit its a mad looking face just make it look like an 'e' or 'E' what you got to remember: -no crosses anymore instead of points -the purple outline color: use a tiny marker or something because its like colored by a 3 year old kid -start making your letters look like the one on the board your typing on -DON'T make your letters become flat on the bottom if you draw in the middle of your paper, do them bubble to if you try bubble letters this is what i corrected but its way not perfected did it on ms paint but this should be better: [Broken External Image]:http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7524/alive8qx.jpg also: remember to keep your letters the same size, next to eachother and no shadow if you don't got the skills for it try making your letters look "acceptable" if you have any other problems you could pm me or something
well I decided to see how I would write Alive and this is how it turned out. Constructive criticism please Sorry if its out there, I was listening to Daft Punk when I did it [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/4541/graffiti1003small5mq.jpg
speq your like my friend he insists on joining everything even though it looks like shit ( not saying yours does ). listen to the other guyz on the forum start simple without joining things but i gotta respect anyone who does something in purple mmm purple:wub: :wub: :wub: