no.

 

i voted skeri, but im not quite sure if thats an i at the end... kinda looks like a messed up a or somethin?

 

deletedeletedeletedeletedeletedelete.

 

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alive fo sho

 

there is no need for insults
this is a toy battle
you were a toy once as well and i am confident that you drew some things worse then ours

 

fula still draws sutff worse than that

 

pmsl :lol:

 

Alive no sweat bro just work on your smoothness with the lines, dont make it jagged looking. Other then that I'm quite fond of your letter structure.

 

null

 

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fuck you shine - i seem to remember your entry in the METRO battle ending with at least 3 "SHINE SUCKS" threads being created
and i even attempted to stand up for you

asshole

 

um to the first guy make up your own letters before you put out shit..everyone can do basic stuff like that

to the second guy there way too complicated
make em flow better

 

don't put crosses instead of points. never use that again.
the a first of all, draw the line in the letter further down
attack to the l a _ so you got an L
the point on the i is to oval, make sure its nice round
the 'v', horrible, make it look like a 'v' and not like a 'u'
the 'e' worst of all, the shape looks shit its a mad looking face just make it look like an 'e' or 'E'

what you got to remember:
-no crosses anymore instead of points
-the purple outline color: use a tiny marker or something because its like colored by a 3 year old kid
-start making your letters look like the one on the board your typing on
-DON'T make your letters become flat on the bottom if you draw in the middle of your paper, do them bubble to if you try bubble letters

this is what i corrected but its way not perfected did it on ms paint but this should be better:
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also: remember to keep your letters the same size, next to eachother and no shadow if you don't got the skills for it
try making your letters look "acceptable"

if you have any other problems you could pm me or something

 

alive's is better
keep in mind what ^^ said and keep practicing

 

well I decided to see how I would write Alive and this is how it turned out. Constructive criticism please Sorry if its out there, I was listening to Daft Punk when I did it
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speq your like my friend he insists on joining everything even though it looks like shit ( not saying yours does ). listen to the other guyz on the forum start simple without joining things but i gotta respect anyone who does something in purple



mmm purple:wub: :wub: :wub:

 

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