mippi- i pretty much agree with mert. the bear lookin one with the spike hands, thats def my favorite, very dope. generally i dig that style of cartoon but less hello kitty-esque
nose- thats a tight quickie, its like early 1900's abstract painting and shit haha
and mert- for something as grimey as it is its pretty fuckin crisp. i like it dude
forgot..
fuckthefame- that first ones my fayverit its is really dope, overall that style is super fresh
If i improve this character a bit do you think it would be okay to put this up somewhere? don't want to look like more of a toy than what i am haha dont mind my shitty tag
Last edited by pointman; 01-21-2011 at 09:25 AM.
my two characters. Crits please.
practice just practice, what do you expect?? they are simple n simply not cool( doesnt mean that simple cant be cool though)...practice!
merta, i feel like the inner throat could use some darker shading and is placed kinda wrong referrring to the neck!
Originally Posted by Dirty Doug
i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is
my char
SvC - dont be afraid to think outside the box a little more with that. its got the structure but its lacking style
pointman - that shit belongs on the streets ASAP. stickers ftw. change up the lines on the cheek and possibly get rid of the hanging teeth imo
Merta - ...colors are out of this world. pothead was a nice touch haha
Mippi - it'd be dope to see some merta style influenced in your work. those chars look fun as hell tho
Bliz - just keep at it. ideas show up after you been drawing for a while
Nose - bump
That looks dope Youth wad is dat character?
just an eye with a top hat
been meaning to put more time into my chars
mertas stuff is giving me inspiration
Just a quick sketch
Last edited by pointman; 01-23-2011 at 07:31 PM.
plankton-haha your right idk how i missed that
fuckthefame-feelin the eye
pointman, bliz, svc-showing progression..everyone sucks for a while youll be posting some fly pages in a bit if you keep at it
@Mippi Don't listen to those other guys. The bear blows. Everything else is PHENOMENAL. well the green thing is alright. but everything else...!
Very original style.
so many things went wrong when i was filling this bitch, thats why i peppered the dark blue with blue spots, fuck octopuses. crits?
Ribcage I'm liking the octopus, would be cool if you used this in a piece and had it shooting ink like a forcefield around the lettering.. maybe that's just me haha could change up the colours though not really liking them.
Crits on this guy dont worry about the gun/ hand it was a experiment, im going to attempt to do this with paint this week probably ..skinny caps FTW
I dont like the colors either, the head was originally pink but the person its for dont like pink so i went over it with orange
what good whats new?? oh he means you fuckie fuck...
i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is
almost pulled it off plankton
im awful at characters....
another quick pencil drawing lines are a bit hectic but i will try do a clean one in pen.
Crits please, am i going in the right direction with these? i actually like this one lol
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