Shroomsh, definitely.

 

Only letter i liked on this was the D worst word ever, plus i had no insiration :/

 

Shoomz gmv, more structured letters and since this is just BP outlines the letters are deff what matter the most. Also he had a cleaner look and I like to see that. But that's not to say extincts peice is totaly out of wack by any means, I just think out of the two shoomz catchatches my eye more, nice work from both of you! Keep it up

 

I think for both there is room for improvement.