Rib took it on structure, form, and flow. Skiz the theme is on point. Letters are lacking a little imo.
yeah i gotta agree... ribs does have some nice flow to his lol well done sir. im still proud of mine tho, i think this is one of the best i have personally done. lol. even tho its so plain i think im startin to get the bar widths fairly consistent and stuff, now i just gotta add some nice flow to mine lol