retro gets my vote, really diggin that shit dude
then bugs cuz he always is killin it
i couldnt see osbers =(

 

Man its a jpg too

 

bugs gmv, dope style

gj all entries though this was a really good one

 

Stoke got my vote, wild shit man.
Great pieces from everyone, will try and drop crits if y'all want.
Bugs, your piece is dope, reminds me of Setik-one, search him up on flikr, cool stuff

 

What's up BS, had to give this one to Retro, what's the next battle word gonna be?

 

Scma gmv. Great Job everyone!

 

I believe the next word is MR.LATE
Just pm Zoup your entry soon, before Nov. 23rd

 

I was stuck between Scma and Bugs. Bugs gmv.

Sregor, Dude that looks really cool, the Sea creatures are awesome!


Can you see now?

 

yea i can see it now =b

 

I didn't got time for this one
Great to see so many entries, good job!! My favourites are bugs, sage and stoke. I also like zoup's, I think this one is one of the best I've seen from you
Anyways, this time sage gmv

 

Good turn out this time.

@Late: Thats a cool style. A little more detail and it'll make a big difference. Keep at it.

@Sregor: Thats some cool stuff there. Keep at it. Once you get that down you'll be on some dope shit.

@Retro: That K looks outta place. A 3D would of made that look a lot better. Keep at it.

@Zenith: Keep practicing, bro.

@SCMA: Cool shit, bro. That E looks a little big , other then that keep doing the damn thing.

@Stoke: Letter structure could be better but keep at it. That yellow outline makes it hard to make out the letters. Also the the O and the K are too hard to make out.

@Osber: Trippy stuff like always. Keep at it.

@Zoup: That came out clean, bro. It's getting better. Keep practicing and progress will continue.

It was kinda hard to decide but for overall letter structure I gotta go with Retro on this one.
Good job to everyone and let's keep these battles alive!

 

Hey a fried of mine showed me this and asked what I thought. I didn't know which was his so I made sure to pick them all apart. Here's some crit! (He asked me to post this, I was harsh because I didn't think anyone would see it.)

okay well first i'm gonna pick them all apart
then choose one
Mr. Late needs to finish the piece. It looks like draft 1
Gamsa went too abstract, can't tell it's even a word anymore
Retro's letting his guidelines show like a motherfucker damn son get an eraser
Zenith can't draw a straight line
I'll come back to Bugs it's hard to find fault
Scma almost has the too abstract problem. the accent lines could do more to distinguish the letters
they seem random
they probably are
Stoke, OMFG RAINBOW SO BRIGHT OMFG DUDE
Lol you could find a better canvas in just about ANY dumpster there osber. put the pencils and paper away and pick up a can of paint
and Zoupe chose either the wrong medium or the wrong canvas cuz that shit is not compatible
also too much tron
I think I call bugs winner. his shit's tight. it's grandiose, but properly defined to still be legible. and he knows his materials.

taking a second lap through. i like gamsa's whimsy. and Retro has a nice feel to it. It's like getting eloctrocuted. And Scma has a really sinister feel and I dig it.

 

Haha not that you'll see this probaly but the lines in the middle are how i was going to do the fill but I have commitment problems

 

Haha my sketched bars are showing because its a pen freestyle yo, just added a filter to tone them down abit

 

Bugz for sure. just plain clean style. good entries tho. i like stoke and scma too